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A General Destiny

by Escalator

Chapter 7: Chapter 1 Mare who what? [Remastered]

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Chapter 1 Mare who what? [Remastered]

"Everything terrible to even be thought of.. "

"Thought of.."

"Thought of

It was a message.. A message to Celestia's mind that sooner or later she will be facing the biggest threat
known to all of ponykind and she knew it..

For ages Celestia had faced enemies powerful even sickening to the point of execution such as Sombra
who ruled a entire empire who then earned him a spot of most evilest. And even more dark was
when he cursed the entire imperial city to disappear and now it's a crater for now that is as it's foretold
that it may return but so would the possibility of King Sombra.. Then there was Tirek he was evil
as well as he attempted to start some type of open land war against Equestria while sucking the magic
out of his enemies. Clearly he was sickening to the point where he was banished to the worst place possible
and that was Tartarus.. And there's Discord. So.. Yea he was a bit ignorant than a threat but still a threat
as he broke the fabric of magic and even started some famines if not staged wars in the continent and other
continents and he clearly had to be stopped but when they did stoned him he returned back only to be again
defeated by the elements of Harmony from her student and her friends.

Wait! That was it! If she sent James to Ponyville with some strings to pull to have atleast a Headquarters
be established somewhere then maybe just maybe that Twilight could maybe keep a eye on him
until Celestia can plan out a strategy.

It was fullproof and she hopped for joy and immediately got out of her bed at five in the morning.


Meanwhile James was asleep wondering why the sisters were inside his head and why was his
computer flashing.

Immediately he got up when he saw that his portable computer was flashing that says
"New message" he grabbed his computer which shows to be a holographic transmission as a form of
a human stretched out to the front of his bed.

"Ah Hello Grand General glad to finally meet mate! My name is General Crickey and as you may know
I am a Australian so don't insult me though I doubt you would because I heard you were nice to others back in
war and so that's fine and dandy And well lemme answer why my name is Crickey as you see it was a perfect
day. WELL THAT'S WHAT I DAMN WISHED! NO! INSTEAD I GET MY DAMN NAME FROM MY MOTHERS YELLS OUT
SHE GOT IT WHEN SHE SAW A DAMN FOOKING SPIDER AND SAID! "HOLY SHITE IT'S A SPEDIR!"
AND THEN WHEN SHE WAS ASKED WHAT TO NAME THE BABY SHE YELLED CRICKEY! CRICKEY FOR DAMN SAKES!! AND THEN EVERYDAY IN SCHOOL I GET CALLED BY THE TEACHER SAYING! *Imitates female voice* "Crickey would you like to answer what 5 +1 is?" ASKED THE FOOKING TEACHER! DAMN CUNT GOT MY CLASSMATES LAUGHING! LAUGHING! WELL WHO'S LAUGHING NOW YOU CHEEKY LITTLE CUNTS I OUGHTA-" "Ok that's enough General Crickey I'll take it from here" "I WANT A RENAME!!!"

"Sorry General he just been assigned.. Anyways it's me General Shaq so I just got word from
scientist that is now trying to commit a suicide pact.. After hearing too much themes of My little pony.. Yikes..
Anyways so recently events the president is still awaiting go ahead to deliver M1 garands to the ESDF.
While that, you are now on Episode 8! Yea.. Mysterious Mare do well."

"Mysterious Mare who what? Also what? I should be at the Crystal empire
episode?" Asked James.

"Yea weird I know but that's pony culture not our planet not our deal (And not our universe).
So anyways the scientist have predicted that the rebuilding orbs will be finished by within a week and soon
after they'll disappear entirely as if they were never there."

"Well that's reassuring." Relieved James.

"Yep so nothing to worry about there. Next you got orders from the Expedition council (EC) they
want you in Ponyville where most of the action is known to take place and also.."

"Also?" Asked James.

"Yea.. We also received orders from a new division that was formed upon your disappearance..
They call themselves the Time police.. Apparently whatever this mad dictator had made clearly
just made the world a complicated place.." Worried Shaq

"Time police?? What hell? And what order?" Said James.

"It's simple.. Do not get involved.." Said Shaq

"WHAT! But then are you saying I'm a time criminal?" Panicked James

"Woah woah easy don't worry they already cleared you on the saving guards part but they said
not to get involved with any more time changing events." Informed Shaq

"And if I was forced to get involved?" Asked James.

"Well then. You be fine because we can't do nothing about it nor the Time police. Hell it said in
time rules if forced by higher being then its fine." Assured Shaq

"So is that it?" Asked James.

"Yea" Said Shaq.

"Cool, despite this whole 1984 bullcrap, cya" Said James.

"Cya." Responded Shaq.

As Shaq hanged up James immediately started packing his things as he grabbed his saddle bags,
with his imprinted cutie mark, he placed the death tool weapons inside along with the computer
before a knock was heard on his room door.

"Come in!" Answered James.

What came in was Princess Celestia along with two pegasus guards as James turned before being
relieved.

"Greetings Commander." Said Celestia

"Princess Celestia. What may I help you?" Asked James.

"After meeting with Cadence, Luna and Shining we agreed to establish a Headquarter in Ponyville
since a lot has happened over there we thought that security may be needed," Celestia Lied but continued.
"I have arranged lands to be purchase upon your choice there is a lot of unused land
and I thought to have maybe one of those acres be put to used."

"Well that's actually very nice I was thinking about Ponyville and how I heard it's a good place to start out
at this time of age." Said James

"Indeed" Chuckled Celestia.

"Well I am already finished packing I might as well get on out and to my assigned area." Said James

"Actually Commander you will have help as well." Informed Celestia

"Really! From who? Twilight Sparkle? Shining?" Excited James

"Blueblood." Answered Celestia

"Blueblood? Meh I mean he is a general with a little.. Experience? But I might as well help myself." Approved James. (Ish)

"Then Blueblood it is then. Oh and there's a rumor of a new hero in Ponyville that I am now fan of called Mare do well. if you meet this Mare can you get a autograph for me?
I like the work of what the mysterious do well had done in ponyville." Said Celestia looking towards a corner.

"Uhh yea sure.. Well I'll let you know when I found the perfect land via mail, Au a' voir."
Said James

"So long. And good luck."

As James left Celestia with the two guards Luna was going passed him.

"I hope you good luck Mr. James." Said Luna.

"I hope so too." Responded James.

James continued down the hall as he met Blueblood and continued down to the front of the castle
where Luna was a bit concerned on Celestia's Idea of sending James to Ponyville.

"Are you sure this is the solution?" Asked Luna.

"It has to Lulu we have to hope if it's no pony like Twilight, I know she can succeed if this anomaly
tried to get out of James then Twilight and her friends will."

"And if they failed?" Asked Luna.

"Then.. We may have to resort to armament.." Worried Celestia
The two sisters turned as they both looked at the same window of the main 6 defeating
Nightmare moon with the bottom with the two sisters united.
It was as if it was made to remind anyone that Luna was once a villian herself.
And Luna could think of that day as the day of her freedom from evil. And soon Equestria will even have
the same thought soon..


Meanwhile in James mind


"Ah man am I drunk." Said Aldreich as he is at the brink of passing out

"Say the *Hiccup* Same Y know u aim't have bad." Said the Drunkened Soldier

"Want to get married? No homo" Said Arthir. Who is also drunk.

"Hell nah I hate that how about a hung ut?" Said Soldier

"Yap."

And so Soldier and Arthir drunkenly embraced each other while forgetting what a hug is so instead they slapped their heads together, while this Aldreich was just stiff and Jirech just walked into the bar.

"Hey Aldreich do you know where Doctor is?" Asked Jirech.

"No clue probably doing his usual sciencey stuff do you know
Arthir?" Asked Aldreich.

"Ladi da di da dia *PLUMP!*" Soldier and Arthir have now passed out
on the floor..

"Well.. I guess I'll keep looking around then." Said Jirech as he exited the bar.

Jirech walked around for a good while trying to look for the Doctor. He checked his room,
checked the bar just now and his lab just as he was getting concerned he bumped into the doctor.

"Oh there you are I- Wait what is that?" Asked Jirech

The Doctor ran (Err Roll cus wheel chair) off dropping something that looked like a note pad full of stuff.

Jirech picked it up and was weirded out of what it read.

-Find Alicorn Amulet.

-Destroy suspect.

-Destroy list.

- Find Suspect

"The hey is a Alicorn Amulet? And what suspect?" He said to himself.

Jirech sees the list he was now concerned.. What is the Doctor doing and who is suspect? And most
importantly why does he want a Alicorn Amulet or whatever that is?
It was cleared something was off with the Doctor but it was mostly clear that he seemed.. Sus-

"Hey!" Yelled Aldreich down the hall as he walked towards Jirech.

"Oh hey Aldreich." Greeted Jirech. "What are you doing here?"

"Well I got bored from pretending to be drunk though I think Arthir and Soldier are literal drunks.."

"Oh.. Wait how could you pretend to be drunk?" Jirech asks.

"One word. A hobby, I do it to get out of parties of well.. Like that." Aldreich pointed as two
doofuses who were just at each others throats now walking out the bar room,
singing 'I'm fucking Drunk' while exiting the bar. Before they fell to the floor again.

"Ok.. That checks out to be agreeable." Jirech responded.

"So what's this?" Asked Aldreich

"I don't know but I think I'm gonna give it to Doctor right away though not good to keep others
valuables."

"Good idea welp I think imma go pretend to hit the hay now so cya." Said Aldreich

"Bye." Said Jirech.

Jirech left Aldreich as he had known about the Doctors randomness all of a sudden but It's clear
he is trying to protect those from the real threat.. Aldreich was already told by the Doctor since
Luna and Celestia left when he was told one of them were prime suspects of a growing threat that's
soon to arise and Aldreich didn't like that one bit. But the list he peeked at was a bit overkill..
And a Alicorn Amulet? That's a bit extreme.. Also he wonders what the hell is a Alicorn amulet.

But anyways as he looked down the hall way Jirech went to the Doctors room to drop off the note
pad and Aldreich smirked.

"Tomorrow is another day." He said to himself.

--------------------------------------------------Ponyville-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

The train arrived to Ponyville as James and Blueblood stepped off the train James
exhaled in all the fresh air of adventure that awaited him in Ponyville as he grabbed his bag Blueblood
apparently has a entire cargo baggage full of stuff.

"Didn't need all that you know?" Said James.

"A colt can a bring a piece of his home can he?" Said Blueblood

"Ehh Whatever.. You consider a piece of home I say touché. But uhh
we have to find a room first before we can establish a Base of operations." Suggested James.

"Of course Mr. James, just hopefully you got the right mind to choose a perfect land amount.
Rather, instead of.. Mud." Blueblood scoffed.

"Oh please, it'll be easy as cake." James joked.

"Whatever you say..." Blueblood ignored, focusing on getting his stuff together.

As he and him stepped off the train with his saddle bags on his side and Blueblood with.. His entire home..
He now starts his search looking around before he hears a women scream of fear. And then yelling.

"MY BABY!" Yelled a pink mother as the foal stroller rolls down the hill.

Immediately James started leaping to the rescue from military instincts before the baby was saved
by Rainbow dash. While that was good he found himself sliding off the cliff before he was now in complete
free fall to the ground as a crowd that gathered gasped.

"AHHH!" Screamed James as he was falling to his sudden death.

That was then when Rainbow dash quickly returned the baby to the mother and then in a quick pace caught him by the tail and landed him gently on the ground as Blueblood quickly went down the cliff side towards James.

"Are you alright?" Asked Blueblood.

"Embarrassment 100.."

"What?" Blueblood asked

" I mean.. Yea I'm Fine, Thanks." Said James in a slow traumatized tone.

"Your welcome." Said Rainbow dash.

"Well if it ain't Rainbow dash."

"You must be James nice to see you again in my turf."

"Yea. Thanks for rescuing me I was wondering if y-"

"Its my specialty if you excuse me I got adoring to do with my fans!"

"Know were land is..."

And so Rainbow dash did her stunts in front of a crowd of ponies showing off her moves. James grabbed his hat
from the ground and placed it on him and walked on to find the perfect land before running into Twilight.

"Oh it's you!" Said Twilight.

"Well if it isn't Twilight Sparkle I remember you from the castle. Of course if you remembered me from the
castle." James shrugged.

"Well of course silly I always remember everypony I met even if I tend to almost forget."
Responded Twilight.

"I'm sure it's fine so uh. I was sent here by Celestia to find land that was arranged, is it
possible you know where I can find it?" Asked James.

"Well considering if Rainbow dash can watch over the town I be glad to. Follow me."

"Applejack can you watch Rainbow dash? Just in case.." Asked Twilight

"Sure can do Twi just show him the way and I'll do the rest." Responded Applejack

Twilight, James, and Blueblood left the site of Rainbow dash as they went to the back of the peaceful
and yet quiet town of Ponyville finding a disclosed and HUGE piece of land in which immediately
James fell in love with it. Even kissing it and almost hired a priest before he almost forgot.
That he had to get the land bought first.

"Ok that's it right there that's the beauty where's that messenger!" Said James.

"Are you sure you want that land? It runs into the Everfree forest you know?"
Concerned Twilight.

"Even more perfect. You know for training and stuff." Replied James.

The royal guard messenger arrives as Blueblood orders him to write down.

"We have found the land and now we will wait for the crew to start construction on the new headquarters."

The messenger wrote it down and sent it to Celestia and in a instant construction ponies arrived to the area
and starts the foundation as they made a stable dirt road and placed the crane on it as they immediately
started the construction.

"Well that was fast." Said James.

"So I guess while they work I suggest that you get to know this place." Suggested Blueblood.

"I'll oversee things while you tour the town." Continued Blueblood

"Alright, of course if Twilight is fine with that?" Answered James

"I would be more happy to show you around and since you are new you will most likely
going too see pinkie."

"MOST LIKELY?! YOU MEAN ARE!" Shouted pinkie as she stick her head out of Twilights tail

"Oh no" Said the two.

And Immediately Pinkie pie starts giving him the party treatment.. How fun.....

Pinkie then starts going wild.

"WHATS THIS WHATS THAT! WHATS IN YOUR EAR!"

"In my wa-"

Pinkie climbed on James back as she looked inside and said

"HELLO!"

And she gets a response.

"Hi" Said a certain young Wielder.

Pinkie got off of James as Twilight dusted him off a little she assured him.

"Don't worry she's normal when she gets to. Wait huh?"

James and Pinkie pie goes conga as the two went cha cha cha Twilight shrugged and followed them while showing
James around the town.


Meanwhile in James mind


As Jirech finally found Doctors room after searching he knocked on the Doctors door before it
creepily opened revealing the Doctor.

The Doctor seemed stressed on working but Jirech clearly sees the Doctor needs a break.

"Hey Doc are you alright?"

"AGH! DON'T SCARE ME VERDAMMT!"

The Doctor breaths slowly before regaining his breath and then got back to working on whatever
he was working on.

"If you are here to bring back my notepad set it on my side."

Jirech looks around the room and already he was scared for the Doc and if not over work him while they are emotion keepers he believes that they deserve a break for once and so he wasn't gonna tolerate the Doctors inability to respond clearly the Doctor needs a break either he likes it or not.

"You know what? No instead how about YOU! Take a break for once."

"Excuse me? Do you not realize what I am working here?"

"Maybe not.. BUT ATLEAST I WOULD TAKE A BREAK ONCE IN A WHILE!!" Shouted Jirech.

"Maybe you need to learn who's room your in. Now GET OUT!" Commanded Doctor

The Doctor rushed Jirech out of his room as Jirech was pushed towards the exit of his room
as the Doctor Exclaimed.

"AND STAY OUT!" And then shut his door.

"Alright.. If that's how you want to play it.. Then that case I'll just bring the entire house
down.."


One song about Ponyville later


James and Pinkie parted ways when they arrived to the bakery shop in ponyville James sat down
as the waitress came to his table.

"What would you like today good sir?" She asked.

"Coffee would do, and maybe a chocolate cake while your at it." James ordered.

"Coming up." Mrs. Cake smiled as she trotted to her husband Mr. Cake.

After the order Twilight also left him as she told him

"I'll be right back."

"Alright." James replied sitting on the chair.

James clearly don't know what was about that but clearly this was familiar. But couldn't put his..
Well hoof on it as some would say if they were a pony.

Anyways as he sat Blue blood came into the shop with a aggravated face of defeat and sat down across
from him.

"So how is the construction going?" Asked James.

"Ruined..." Responded Blueblood

"What?" Asked James

"Apparently one of the crane switches malfunctioned and the whole building collapse luckily two
heroes were present during that time. Especially the mysterious one the called. 'Mare do well"

"Mare do well? Huh weirdly enough Princess Celestia wants a autograph of that one."
Joked James.

"Well they said she was coming by and-"

Blueblood turned as the door opened entering the main ponies and the little dragon entering the
bakery as they looked happy except for Rainbow dash.

The six girls started a conversation about how great Mare do well was and how she repaired a dam
and saved those workers.

Wait a minute did they say workers? She was on the construction area! Dammit he missed his
opportunity. Oh well maybe next time but it is interesting that Mare do well had been doing these
saves and what's weird is that Celestia knows her? Anyways he hears Rainbow dash yelled out
something about proving something something. And off she went.

"Well... That was off." Said James.

"Well its Ponyville everything is off from what I was told from aunt Luna." Said Blueblood.
Stuffing his face with the chocolate cake that was just been placed between the two by Mrs. Cake.

"Well it wouldn't surprise me either way but of course it's that or-"

The bell rings as a mysterious figure entered the bakery as the two peeped as the girls saw Mare do well
as Mare do well revealed her hood.

"What.. Pinkie pie?" Surprised James. As he drinked his cup of coffee.

"Yep very off anyways." Blueblood goes back to his now served Coffee and cake sips.


"Well... Explains how Celestia is a fan." Said James.

"Well if she wanted a autograph then ask the 'do wells' will you?" Suggested Blueblood.

"Meh alright here goes nothing."

As James got up with his eyes closed because he is pretending not to know who Mare do well is
as he also learned blindness skill he walked to the Main 5 when they were a bit surprised
as Twilight almost forgot she'd put him in here but he grabbed a sheet of paper with a essay on it
written by Celestia.

"Autograph?" Asked James.

"Why do you have your eyes closed?" Asked Twilight as she was now dressed in Mare do wells outfit.

"What can I not know the identity of the Mysterious do well?" James said dramatically.

Twilight and the other 4 smiled as they signed a autograph for James and quickly went off
to teach Rainbow dash the lesson about not showing off to others and actually be grateful for the attention
of recognition and not showing yourself off and stuff. (LETS GET BACK TO THE POINT!)

As the five out of the six left outside for a thank you parade. James sat back down and drinked
his coffee while mailing out the signed paper to Celestia.

He also drew out a blueprint for the construction workers during mailing as he drew in a style of the
US Base with a cylinder roof, a tent, target practice room, a huge building for the high command and recruits,
and a training course separate from the one he had done.
Blueblood was now eyeing this new blueprint to be perfect.

"Soon this will be revolutionary and-"

In a interruption the girls came back inside from the thank parade as it was clear it tooked
James a literal five hours to create the blueprint. But he didn't know.

"Your back already? Must be the shortest parade."

"What do you mean? It was five hours." Said Applejack.

"Yep I kept a counter on it too." Said Blueblood.

"Oh.. Must have been in my zone.. Soo while I am here what did I miss?" Asked James.

The six girls smirked at each other as Twilight said.

"You have a lot to know from today."


Author's Note

So yea the first episode of Arc Period the adventures of James will be based on important episodes this is not much important but I do like to express that James will be operating in important episodes. Also I may have gotten things mixed up with timeline wise.

(But that'll sort itself out hehehehe)

Next Chapter: Chapter 2 Operation crystal [Remastered] Estimated time remaining: 7 Hours, 39 Minutes
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