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Rainbow Dash performs a Sonic Rainboom at the Young Fliers Competition to save Rarity.
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Rainbow Dash performs a Sonic Rainboom at the Young Fliers Competition to save Rarity & the Wonderbolts

This is taken from S01E16 - The Sonic Rainboom, however I wanted to write it from Dash's point of view and describe what she was feeling at the time. Sorry for the lame title, but it's late at night for me, and I'm tired :(

Just a tester story with two main purposes

1) To tame whatever writing skills I can muster using any constructive criticism I can get

2) Learn how to portray thoughts in a more orderly fashion. Currently I'm using italics, but personally I think it's a little messy.

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Slice of Life

1,932 words: Estimated 8 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. The Lone Chapter [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 17th, 2012
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Published Sep 17th, 2012

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