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OBJECTION!!!!! Spike's Sacrifice was completely Unnecessary

by Mpony1

Chapter 4: The Meeting (Part 2)

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The Meeting (Part 2)

"What.......THE FUCK........WAS THAT!!!!!!" Smolder yelled in fury.

“Indeed,” Said Rarity in anger. “just what the HELL! Do you think you're doing kissing our Drake like that? You, you hussy!”

Raven wasn't at all bothered nor flinch at the sudden outbursts as it was to be expected after all and she knew she had a lot of explaining to do on her part. Though everyone's eyes were lock on to her. It was the burning fury in the eyes of Spike’s herdmates that she was focus on. For every one of them glared at Raven, who just sat there with a smug grin.

“Your Drake? What ever do you mean? Raven asked in mock confusion. “I was just giving my sweet little Purple bear a kiss. No different than what the rest of you did earlier.”

Rainbow spoke. “Except our kisses are sweet and tender. You were just sucking the hell out of his FACE!”

“And for your information! He IS our Drake. All 12 of us.” Rarity said. She was absolutely furious and disgusted at what she saw Raven do to sweet, innocent, Spikey Wikey. ”I can't believe what you just did to him in front of us all you no good skank. Why If I wasn't a lady,” Rarity sits up and put up her dukes.

“I WOULD COME OVER THERE AND SHOW THAT THESE HOOVES AREN'T AS DAINTY AS EVERYONE THINKS THEY ARE!”

Everyone was surprised to see Rarity act that way. It wasn't a surprise for Twilight, Rainbow, and of course Garble. Back when they all first met. But it's still surprising to see Rarity, willing to resort to violence. Even as a last resort.

Raven adjusted her glasses. “It's not like this was the first time we shared such a hot kiss. Purple bear and I have done this many times.” She said with a mischievous grin.

“What the hay is that supposed to mean?” AJ asked. “I thought you two were just friends?”

“It means exactly what you think it means, Applejack?” Raven smirk. “You 12 didn't think you were the only ones, Purple Bear secretly admired, did you?”

Now that really caught the other herdmates by surprise. As they all stared at the glasses wearing Unicorn in shock.

“That’s riiight!” Raven sang. She then used her magic to pull the still frozen in shock, Spike. Closer to her and hug him tight in her forelegs. “I’m Spike’s 13th Admire.”

All 12 herdmates jaws drop after hearing that. For they didn't know anything about Spike loving Raven, for he never told them. Which only made them question if Raven is telling the truth or not. Kiss or no kiss.

“YOU'RE LYING!” Yelled Rarity.

“Spike never said anything about a 13th admire.” Said Smolder. “He would have told us if he did.”

“Which means you just forced yourself on him. Like some no-good harlot!” Exclaimed Rarity.

Raven raised an eyebrow at that. It hurt that Rarity would accuse her of doing such a thing but doesn't hold it against her. For she was just looking out for her mate. Nothing more. Plus, it's not hers or any of the girl's fault for not knowing about her and Spike’s relationship. After all she was the one who told him to keep it secret and now, she's the one who has to prove it to them.

Raven lets go of Spike and sat him back down on the table. She then adjusted her glasses and sighed. “I admit. It wounds me that you would think that I would do such a thing Ms. Rarity. But I don't blame you. My actions earlier leave little room to say differently without some kind of proof and for that I am sorry but do understand that I am not that kind of pony and would never think of doing such a thing to anyone without their consent.”

Rarity calmed herself down after hearing Raven’s apology and explanation. She hated herself for letting her emotions get the better of her. While Raven remained calm and collected. Now she just feels just awful.

Rarity clears her throat. “Well! I to apologize for my rudeness as well as the things I said Ms. Inkwell. I jumped to conclusions and offended you greatly. Again, I am sorry.”

Raven waves a dismissive hoof. “All water under the bridge. As I said before I can't blame you. “I knew things would come to this. Long before I spoke to the princesses about Discord. So, I came prepared.” Raven said as she uses her magic to pick something up, but not reveal what it is just yet. “As I mentioned earlier. Thanks to my glasses, I’ve been seeing Spike as well as his parents since the funeral and by the way he would constantly visit. There was a high chance he would be here today.” Raven took a quick glance at the still frozen in shock dragon, sitting before her. “As you can see, I was right.” Raven raised up the item she held in her magic. “And here's evidence to prove that I am, in fact Spike’s 13th admirer,

Raven toss the evidence in question towards Rarity. Who caught it in her magic and held it up for all to see?

She along with her fellow herd mates. Eyes widen in shock, for when they saw the item in questioned and instantly recognize it the second they saw it.

“That’s right girls. That envelope is the exact same brand, Spike been using to secretly deliver love letters to everyone of his secret admirers.” Raven said with a smirk.

Fluttershy spoke. “Then you were telling the truth?”

Raven nodded. “Indeed, I was. I been getting letters around the same time you all were, and Purple Bear confess to me not long after he was fully healed, after his incident when you all found out he was the secret admirer and then confess to you all.” Raven let out a sweet sigh as she remembered the day Spike first confess to her and shared the story with everyone. “It was three months ago. Once he was fully healed from his injuries from when you all found out he was the secret admirer. He came to Canterlot to confess to me like he did for all of you........Except I kind of spoiled the surprise by telling him that I already knew he was my secret admirer all along.”

“Wait!? You knew Spike was your secret admirer before he confess?” Asked Scootaloo.

Raven nodded. “Yep, I did! Though I admit. I didn't know right off the bat. But I did do a little investigating. Emphasis on the word *little* because Purple Bear is terrible at covering his tracks. It didn't take much to figure out that the letters were being sent to me from Ponyville and the second I figured that out, I knew It either had to be him or Twilight.”

That caught Twilight by surprise. “You suspected me of being your secret admirer?”

“Of course! You and Spike are the only ones I really know in Ponyville and I usually only visit to do business with Mayor Mare and few times just for fun. Like coming to town every Nightmare Night. So, I never spend enough time there for anyone to get to know me enough, let alone know my address. I have been visiting Ponyville a lot more after Purple Bear and I started dating.” Raven chuckled. “I remembered all our fond memories. Like when he introduced me to his fake dad.”

Memory (Raven meets Sludge)

Raven laugh. “Haha, I knew he couldn't possibly be Purple Bear’s real father. Especially after hearing that bogus story about how he lost Spike’s egg, HA! That made my day. So good on you Smolder for helping expose that faker.

“Oh, umm, thanks! It was no big deal really.” Said Smolder.

Raven sighed. “I would have done it myself, but I had a train to catch and was needed back to Canterlot after I finish my business with Mayor Mare and only had just enough spare time for a quick meeting.” Raven shrugged. “Although it is rather funny that both he and Spike do have one thing in common. They're both terrible at covering their tracks when it comes to trying to throw people off their trail, both couldn't hide a secret of their own to save their lives. Which is why they were both so easy to expose.”

“And how the hay was Spike easy to expose?” Asked Rainbow.

Raven gave Rainbow a quizzical look. “Seriously!? How the hay did you guys not figure it out? Like I said, Purple Bear is terrible at covering his tracks. He left behind clues that made it obvious it was him. For me it was as simple as just finding the shop where he bought the envelopes and speaking to the owner and I know all about your visit to the same shop, Rainbow Dash. Purple bear told me about your investigation into the matter and even with the evidence and clues you had before you. You idiots still couldn't see how obvious that Spike was the admirer the whole time.”

“Oh yeah, then how about you prove to us, how exactly we could have known?” Asked Smolder.

Raven grin at that. “Alright Ms. Smolder. I’ll explain to you all, exactly how easy you could of figure out that Mr. The Dragon was the secret admirer, and it won't take much effort, no need to bring my “A” game into this.”

That got the crowd confused.

“Your “A” game!? What that's supposed to mean?” Asked Smolder.

Raven adjusted her glasses. “That’s not important right now.” Raven look at the others with a sinister look. “But you will learn about it eventually.” Celestia gulp at that, for only she knew the full extent to what Raven is talking about. “Now from what I was told, Rainbow Dash was the one the who found the shop that sold the exact envelopes, is that correct Ms. Dash?”

Rainbow nodded.

“Can you repeat everything you said when you told the others what you learned?”

Rainbow took a moment to remember that day and what she said. “I walked into a shop, and I saw that the store was selling the same kind of envelopes and letters that we've been getting," Rainbow explained. "I went to the clerk and explained to him what the situation was, and he told me that someone usually stops by there to pick up cards and occasionally gifts for all of us. When I asked him what the creature looked like, he told me that it was a boy, but couldn't tell what species he was because of what he always wore when he came in there. The clerk claimed that the dude was short but had the ability to fly. He wore a tan trench coat, a grey top hat, and red-rimmed sunglasses. The clerk also said that he stops in there once a week. The last time he stopped by there was the day before."

"And I remember saying that neither of us don't know anyone who looks like that," Applejack said.

The other 11 herdmates nodded, agreeing with the cowpony mare, until.

That sudden outburst scared the hell out of everyone in the room. The only one unphased by it was Celestia. After all its a common occurrence that happens during trials and still to this day she doesn't know why.

“Mother of Luna, what the hell was that?” Yelled Rainbow.

Raven just ignored her and focus her attention on Applejack.

(Raven)

“I’m afraid you’re wrong Ms. Apple. At least somewhat.”

Applejack raised an eyebrow at that. “What the hay do you mean, ah was wrong? I never seen anyone dress like that before.”

(Raven)

“As I said, you're somewhat right. For its true that a lot of you never seen anyone dress like that,

but Seven of you did!”

That exclamation surprised everyone.

Raven continues. “And I’m not going tell you who these seven are. I’ll show you who they are as well as show exactly when they seen a creature dress up in the exact outfit, Ms. Dash described.”

“How are you going to do that?” Asked Ocellus.

“With a simple memory spell, I know. All I need is Mr. The Dragon, cooperation!”

Spike, who been sitting there on the table in front of Raven was shock to hear Raven point him out. Not knowing how he could help.

“You need my help?” Spike asked.

Raven nodded. “That’s correct! I need you to remember two certain events. When you do, I’ll cast the spell and two memory screens will appear above you, for all of us to see,” Raven adjust her glasses. “And with the memories coming straight from you, will be enough evidence to prove my claim. Evidence is everything in the court of law after all.”

“Court of law!?” Rainbow said with confusion. “Since when the hay did this meeting turn into a trial?”

Raven smirk. “It's not but think of it as a tiny demonstration to the real trial to come.”

That got everyone confused. Besides Spike and the princesses, the rest of the group aren't aware of the full details of Discord’s trial yet and the only one who knows more about Raven previous job, as well as seen her in action is, Celestia. The Sun Princess quickly thought about, Silver Wing from earlier. She remembered how scared he was and how difficult it was for him, just to say Raven’s name. Signs she recognized the instant she saw them. Raven clearly had some kind of debate with the Pegasus guard and like many other debates before, leaves the recipient in a sorry state afterwards. Though it doesn't seem as though Raven haves no intention of going all out with this little skirmish. Celestia still feel scared for the others when Raven starts getting serious.

Raven turns her attention to Spike. “Alright, Mr. The Dragon, as I mentioned earlier, I need you to remember two certain events in your past.”

“Ok!” Spike doesn't know why Raven started calling him “Mr. The Dragon” but he didn't really mind.

“First think back to the day when you first met Thorax? Specifically, the train ride to the crystal empire.”

Spike nodded, closed his eyes, and thought back to that day. The second he remembered the train ride, his eyes shot open at the memory, he wanted to say something but before he could, he was hit in the forehead by beam, shot from Raven’s horn and a big screen appeared above him.

“Very good, Spike! Now I need you to remember the day you started to molt, more specifically when you were sitting on the bridge, in front of the Friendship school main entrance.”

It wasn't that long ago when Spike experience, dragon molting. So, the memory was still pretty clear. His eyes widen in shock at the memory and once again he felt another beam hit his forehead, and a second screen appeared above him.

“There, all done! Now all there's left to do is watch them.” Raven said gesturing to the screens. “Now pay close attention everyone and you will see the seven creatures that clearly saw someone wearing a tan trench coat, a grey top hat, and red-rimmed sunglasses.”

Spike wanted to speak out, but before he could, Raven’s horn glowed, and the first screen began to play.

After the video ended, Raven used her magic to make the first screen disappear. Leaving only the second one.

“Now for the second memory.” Without missing a beat, Raven started the second memory.

(Focus on the first 56 seconds of the video then skip to 1:50 mark and stop when Spike burn his clothes or watch the whole thing if you want. I don't give a buck:ajbemused:)

After the last 3 creatures were shown. Raven immediately got rid of the screen, she then adjusted her glasses with a satisfying smirk, as she stared at the shock faces of the five herdmates. Who clearly just realized their own folly?

“Not only did these seven see someone dressed up in this disguise.” Raven grin. “They also knew right away that it was Spike wearing that outfit.” Raven chuckled. “With that said and with the clear evidence provided that proves without a doubt that five out of the original twelve herd members did in fact see someone that fit 99% of the store clerk description of the creature visiting his shop.

(Raven)

Then why didn't Twilight, Starlight, Rarity, Pinkie or Smolder speak up about it,


WHEN THEY EACH SAW SPIKE WEARING THE SAME EXACT OUTFIT, THAT RAINBOW DESCRIBED TO THEM!”

That accusation hit the five in question as if a strong sudden gust of wind from nowhere, blew at them as an attempt to knock them over.

The five couldn't deny Raven’s claim. When they each saw the memory of them seeing Spike wearing a tan trench coat, a grey top hat, and red-rimmed sunglasses. They to remembered the same exact day they each saw him in that outfit.

Raven continues.

(Raven)

“The clerk claimed that the guy was short but had the ability to fly. He wore a tan trench coat, a grey top hat, and red-rimmed sunglasses. The only difference between the Spike in the memory and the Spike now is that he didn't have his wings yet, but that doesn't excuse anything since you all know he can fly now. Hell, the second memory literally takes place on the day he does gets his wings. So I’ll ask again, Twilight, Starlight, Rarity, Pinkie, and Smolder. Why didn't any of you say anything?”

The five in questioned took quick glances at each other before rubbing the back of their heads nervously. Despite not discussing it, they each said the exact same thing as they gave Raven their answer.

“I guess we forgot!”

Raven left eye twitch. “You forgot!? That's the best reason you can come up with?”

Twilight spoke. “Me and Starlight only saw Spike in that outfit once and that was two years ago.”

“And although it was more recent. I can understand both Ms. Pie and Ms. Smolder reasoning for forgetting for they didn't see him wearing it for that long, but Ms. Rarity did! The memory showing her proves as much.” Raven sighed. “Whatever! If you five want to say you forgot, that’s fine by me, because there's two more far better ways that helps in proving that Spike was the secret admirer. Without a doubt.”

“And what exactly are these ways you speak of?” Asked Rainbow.

“Let's start with the simple one, shall we.... Princess Luna!” Raven calls out.

“Yes!”

“You're a smart mare, yes?”

Luna raised an eyebrow. “I’m pretty intelligent in my own right!”

“Then tell me,” Raven’s horn glows and a large still image of Spike and Rarity appears in the center of the room for all to see.

“Do you know who that is, standing in front of Ms. Rarity?”

“It’s Spike!” Luna answers.

Raven raised a questioning eyebrow. “Are you sure?”

“Of course, I’m sure!”

“How exactly? He’s wearing a disguise. Not only that, but I don't think you seen Spike as many times as everyone else here in this room.”

“Is that a trick question? Even with that outfit on, I seen Spike more than enough times to recognize his obvious feature, that are clearly sticking out.” Luna elaborates. “His purple scales and tail are a dead giveaway.”

“So, what you're saying is that despite the few times you seen Mr. The Dragon. You can still recognize him instantly when he’s wearing that get up?”

“Of course! His body not even pony shape and he’s standing on two legs, instead of four.” Luna explained. “Heck, anybody who knows Spike for a long period of time could instantly tell that's him. As I said earlier there are many important features sticking out of his disguise that clearly doesn't resembles a pony’s. One look from anyone who knows him would recognize him in a heartbeat.”

Raven adjusted her glasses. “Is what you just said is true, Princess Luna......Then why didn't Twilight or any of the twelve herd members recognize Spike when they saw him entering and leaving the shop they were staking out?”

That question caught Luna as well as the other herdmates off guard. For none of them knew the answer.

“As you mentioned. Mr. The Dragon disguise wasn't a good one at all. Way too many of his own unique features were sticking out like a sore hoof. Completely unmissable. We even saw that Twilight, Starlight, Rarity, Pinkie, and Smolder. Each recognize Spike the instant they saw him in that outfit,no problem, but for some reason they or any of their fellow herdmates didn't recognize him at all the last time he was wearing it!?” Slams one hoof on table. “There’s no way that’s possible, unless.”Raven turns her attention to Spike. “Mr. The Dragon!?”

“Y-yes, Raven!”

“Did you by any chance, had your disguise magically enchanted, so nobody can recognize you while wearing it? And be honest, please.”

Spike; still sitting on the table in front of Raven. Look down in distraught and shook his head. “No!” He answers.

Raven raised an eyebrow. “No!? So, you didn't do anything to it, didn't asked another unicorn or Zecora or even your homies, Discord and Thorax, to work their magic on it?”

Spike just shook his head.

“So, what you're saying, is that instead of dawning a completely brand new and more, better disguise. Maybe one that can hide your all your obvious features from sticking out. You instead decided to wear the same exact outfit, which some of your friends have seen you in before as well as KNEW it was you wearing it and if they could tell then anypony in ponyville could as well and I can prove it.” Using her magic. Raven lifted a piece a paper from the stacks and gave it to Spike.

Holding it, Spike look at sheet. Their is a picture of him in his disguise, attached to the top of the sheet via paperclip. Lifting up so he can properly read the title. Which said,

WHO’S THAT CREATURE?

And underneath that are a list of names and beside each one them is a long list of the word *Spike* being repeated over and over again.

Raven speaks. “A couple weeks ago. I paid Ponyville a visit and set up a little booth in the market area.” Raven adjusts her glasses. “I would asked anypony passing by to simply guess who this creature is, write down their name and answer, and as you can clearly see there are a hundred names on that list and each one answered, Spike.”

The room was silent. Nobody said a word.

Raven continues. “I also learned that the shop you would always go to, to buy your envelopes and gifts. Had just opened its doors. A little over three months before you were finally exposed as the secret admirer.”

“Three months!” Ocellus exclaims. “But that’s how long, Smolder and the others been getting their letters.”

Raven nodded. “That’s correct and with the store being brand new at the time. The owner was also new to Ponyville and had just moved there.”

Ocellus gasped. “Which would explain his vague description of Spike.”

"Well, he was a rather short fellow, but he did have the ability to fly. He wore a tan trench coat, a grey hat, and red-rimmed sunglasses," the clerk relayed. "He actually comes by my store to pick up the same envelopes. He also gets several bouquets of roses and heart-shaped boxes of chocolate. He's very polite and kind, but at the same time is quiet and tries to blend in with his surroundings. He usually comes by once a week."

-Store owner.

“He was new in town and didn't know who Spike is. So he must of thought he was a pony and never once in the three months he visited his store, did the owner look too closely to notice that Spike wasn't even pony shape and walk on two legs instead of four.” Ocellus explained.

Raven nodded. “You are correct Ms. Ocellus. That stallion was indeed new in town at the time and didn't know Spike, let alone seen him without his disguise. It may be a small town but Ponyville isn't that small. But,” Raven leans up against the table, resting her chin on one hoof and waving the other. Smirking as she does so.

“There's still one major problem that needs discussing!”

“And what’s that?” Ocellus asked.

Raven sat up straight, levitated a sheet of paper from her stacks, up to herself, and began tapping on it lightly as she read it.

“Note how often Spike would visit this shop. It is said that he would go there once a week to buy the same things and he has been doing this for three months straight.” Raven set the paper down on the table. “Taking that into consideration. Spike has made himself that owners best customer.” Raven smirk. “And with how often he sees him come and go.” Raven raised an eyebrow. “Even if he never put together that Spike isn't a pony, he would still notice. One extremely distinct feature about him.....Do you know what that is?”

Ocellus eyes widen at the realization that entered her mind. *BANG* “HIS WINGS!” she yelled after slamming her hooves on the table.

Raven nodded. “That's right, his wings. Sure, his tail is also one, but to him that could have been anything, but the wings can't be faked so easily like that.”

“Because Spike use his wings to fly. The owner even said so himself.”

"Well, he was a rather short fellow, but he did have the ability to fly.

Raven horn glowed and a image of Rainbow Dash in her old Gala dress appeared.

“Note in this image that you can see the holes where Ms. Dash wings poke through. This is the same for all clothing for winged creatures so they can still fly.” Raven makes another image appear. This time its Fluttershy in her Mare do well costume.

“And yes, I'm very well aware of Ms. Rarity’s smart thinking to cover up Ms. Shy wings. So, their color doesn't stick out or else Rainbow might, no, would easily recognize them for she and Fluttershy have been friends since foalhood.” Raven glanced over at Twilight giving her a stare. Twilight noticed the way she was looking at her and tried to shift her own gaze to look at anything else but Raven. It was obvious that Twilight knew exactly what Raven was trying to say and she was too ashamed to admit her own folly. But Raven will get to that in due time.

“What the hay are you getting at?” Asked Rainbow.

“She's saying that the shop owner had to of seen Spike’s wings when he flies.” Ocellus explains.

Raven nodded. “That's correct, but! We have to take into account exactly when he was able to see Spike fly. It can't be after he leaves the shop. The front door is made of solid wood. So he can't see him take off outside.”

“Which means Spike would be flying around the store.” Ocellus shakes her head. “But that isn't the case, is it?”

Raven nods. “That's right. As I said earlier. I’ve been to that store myself. The items Spike would buy were not beyond his reach. He didn't need to fly.” Raven smirk. “But there is one moment where he would.”

“And that would be?” Rarity asked.

Raven turned her sights to Pinkie Pie. “Ms. Pie!”

“Yes, Raven!”

“At Sugarcube corner. You deal with kid customers, right?”

“Yeppers, all the time!”

“So, tell me how exactly do they give you money. When they pay for their order. What I mean is how do each member of the three pony races make their exchange with you?”

“Well for earth pony foals. I would reach down and take their bits, the same goes for unicorns, unless they know how to use their magic, and for pegesi, they would just fly up to me.”

“And that's exactly what you did, isn't Spike?” Ocellus asked. “I bet the counter was a little too high for you. So, you simply fly up to the owner's level to make the exchange.”

Spike nodded.

“And I bet you don't cover your wings with anything, neither?” Asked Raven. “You admitted that you didn't ask for magical help with your disguise, that includes non-magical. Which means you didn't ask for anyone's help.”

“That makes sense. You can’t just cover your wings any old way. It will interfere with your flying. Which is what Rarity took into account when she made Fluttershy’s, Mare-do-well costume. We saw how she made sure to use material that was aerodynamic and measured her wings so they would fit perfectly in the wing slots.”

“And seeing how Spike was able to fly really fast when some of you were chasing him. Only helps cement this argument.” Raven adjusts her glasses. “I think it's about time we wrap this up. First off. I would like to point out Ms. Dash poor investigation skills.”

“And what’s that supposed to mean?” Yelled Rainbow.

“What I mean is that you should have asked the store owner for more details about the admirer.” Raven answered. “As I mentioned earlier. I to visit that shop and spoke with him and he told me the exact same thing, he told you. I was already sure it was Spike but just to be safe. I asked him did he notice anything else about this mysterious customer that stands out. He pointed out two.” Raven grins. “Can you guess what those are?”

“His wings and tail.” Ocellus answers.

“That's correct. Remember what Princess Luna said earlier. When I showed her that image of Spike?”

(Flashback)


“Do you know who that is, standing in front of Ms. Rarity?”

“It’s Spike!” Luna answers.

Raven raised a questioning eyebrow. “Are you sure?”

“Of course, I’m sure!”

“How exactly? He’s wearing a disguise. Not only that, but I don't think you seen Spike as many times as everyone else here in this room.”

“Is that a trick question? Even with that outfit on, I that dragon more than enough times to recognize his obvious features, that are clearly sticking out.” Luna elaborates. “His purple scales and tail are a dead giveaway.”

“So, what you're saying is that despite the few times you seen Mr. The Dragon. You can still recognize him instantly when he’s wearing that get up?”

“Of course! His body not even pony shape and he’s standing on two legs, instead of four.” Luna explained. “Heck, anybody who knows Spike for a long period of time could instantly tell that's him. As I said earlier there are many important features sticking out of his disguise that clearly doesn't resembles a pony’s. One look from anyone who knows him, would recognize him in a heartbeat.”

“And she was right. For seven of you, seen Spike in his disguise and recognize him immediately.” (Raven points a hoof out.) “The memories prove as much.” She explained. Causing five out of the seven to cringe at her words. (Raven slams a hoof on the table.) *BANG* “So in conclusion. Spikes disguise wasn't even a good one. Those who known him for a very long time could easily tell it was him. (Raven levitated her list of names) “I have this list of ponies. Who were able to guest that the disguised figure was Spike.” (She set the list down) “Luna was able to recognize him despite not seeing him as much because she can clearly see the obvious traits to his features sticking out for anyone to see. His wings were also out on open display as he was flying away from those who were chasing him. I mean what pony have wings like that. And don’t you dare say bat pony because there’s no way a bat pony would know all 13 of us. So, I find it weird how those most closes to him, didn't recognize him at all. Especially you.....Princess Twilight.”

Everyone in the room turned to the mare in question. Who just sat there sweating nervously?

“Care to explain how you, who have known Spike since the day he was born. Didn't recognize him when he was wearing a stupid disguise, that couldn't even hide his most recognizable features.”

Twilight opens her mouth to speak but said nothing. She just doesn't know why she didn't recognize Spike. The same is said for the other herd members. They didn't know either. Except one of them had an idea as to why but chose to stay quiet about it.

Raven let out a deep sigh. “So, none of you have anything to say?” silence was her only response. “That's fine! For there is still one last thing to go over and this one would have told you that Spike was the secret admirer, without having to investigate where the letters were being bought. In other words. You could have figured it out right from the very start. After all Spike practically pointed himself out to you.”

“And what is it, this time?” Rainbow asked annoyingly.

“I’ll just cut straight to the chase.” Raven pointed a hoof at a creature sitting across from her. “She's the reason that proves that Spike was the admirer.” Everyone turned their heads to the one in question. It was none other than.


”GABBY!?”

“Me!?”

“Yes you. You're literally the only one among the herd that clearly points out that Spike is definitely the admirer.”

“And how exactly?” asked Smolder.

“Simple! Who else besides Spike did she give her address to, that lives in Ponyville?”

Gabby thought about that and came to a shocking revelation. “No one! I only gave Spike my address when we decided to. Become pen-pals.”

“Which means he’s the only one who could send letters to Gabby. Unless he gave her address to someone else. Which we know is definitely not the case. But back then you didn't, and he was the one who pointed Gabby out, remember.”

"Anyway, getting back on track here," Rainbow said. "I want whoever keeps doing this revealed so we can get to the bottom of why they're all so infatuated with us, and maybe we can take them on a date or two with all of us. It's not just the seven of us, either. Scootaloo is also talking to me about how she keeps getting love letters and gifts as well. The gifts are usually her favorite snacks or candy. She's flattered someone would do this to show that they love her, but she, as well as the other Crusaders, have their eyes on someone else."

"Sweetie Belle was also talking about getting the same things, Rainbow," Rarity said.

"Same with Apple Bloom," Applejack added.

"Smolder came to me with the same topic just yesterday," Twilight added. "She said that although she's flattered as well with all the kind words, she already has her eyes set on someone else too, but she didn't say who it was."

"My pen-pal Gabby has also written me saying how she's gotten love letters similar to yours," Spike put in.

“Another clue was that the admirer also buys the crusaders favorite candies.”

Scootaloo is also talking to me about how she keeps getting love letters and gifts as well. The gifts are usually her favorite snacks or candy. She's flattered someone would do this to show that they love her, but she, as well as the other Crusaders, have their eyes on someone else."

"Sweetie Belle was also talking about getting the same things, Rainbow," Rarity said.

"Same with Apple Bloom," Applejack added.

“Combine that with the knowledge of the ones receiving these letters and gifts.”

FRIENDSHIP CASTLE, MAP ROOM. 12:30 P.M.

"Another one," Twilight grumbled as she threw the envelope on the table.

The thing she was referring to was one of the many love letters she had been receiving over the last three months. It wasn't just her either. Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Starlight Glimmer, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Smolder, and even Gabby had gotten all kinds of love letters and love poems from an unknown person proclaiming how much they loved all of them. Occasionally, they were all given small gifts such as a bouquet of flowers or a box of chocolates or, in Smolder's case, a pile of her favorite gemstones.

“Then it's obvious that the admirer would have to be someone who knows you all.” Raven grin. “And Gabby being an admirer easily solves the mystery instantly.”

“How?” Asked Smolder.

Ocellus gasp. As she just remembered something Smolder told her about the letters. The realization caused her blurt out.

”THE LETTERS DIDN'T HAVE AN ADDRESS. THAT OR THEY WERE FAKE!”

Raven nodded. “Exactly!”

“Wait! I’m confused.” Said Starlight. “It's true the letters didn't have an address. But how does that prove why Gabby is the one that tells us that Spike was the admirer?”

“Seriously Starlight!” Ocellus says in disbelief. “Think about it. Spike can't send Gabby a letter by mail using a fake address or none at all.”

Raven speaks. “If he did use a fake address. Then wouldn't Gabby try and hunt down her admire by following the address. She is a postal worker after all.”

Ocellus speaks. “And the address would have to be real. If you're going to mail them through the post office. You can’t mail anything from an address that doesn't exist.”

Raven continues. “And using other people addresses is a big no, no.”

Ocellus continues. “Which is of course why Spike delivers the letters himself. He knows where you all live, In Ponyville.”

Raven speaks. “But Gabby lives far away in Griffonstone. So, what would be the best way for him to send an unmark letter to her?”

It didn't take long for the 12 herdmates to figure out the answer to that question. As their eyes widen at the realization.

Twilight speaks. “He would just do it the same way he always sends letters to Princess Celestia......His magic fire breath.”

“Exactly!” Raven said proudly. “The same would go for me as well. Every other week I would find a love letter and gift outside my door.” Raven turns to Gabby. “I’m guessing the same is for you.”

Gabby nodded.

“So in conclusion. If you all had questioned Spike. Seeing how he’s the only one you know who haves Gabby’s address and even speak to Gabby herself. You would of came to the solution that Spike was the one sending the letters. Just as I did.” Raven shakes her head disappointingly. “Which Is why I am very disappointed in you, Twilight Sparkle.”

“W-what did I do?”

“You didn't conduct a proper investigation. Like you did seven years ago.” Raven exclaimed.

“What investigation?”

Raven horn glowed and a image of a cake appeared. “Remember the Marzipan Mascarpone Meringue Madness—or as Pinkie nicknamed it, MMMM."
Y

Another image appeared, replacing the last one.


“The large cake that Mr. and Mrs. Cake made for the National Dessert Competition here in Canterlot. The same cake Pinkie was in charge of and responsible for its transport.

Y

Another image appeared.

“The same cake that Mr. and Mrs. Cake put hours upon hours of their lives into making and was absolutely worried that it would have gotten ruined during the walk to the train. After all, transporting a cake as big as that is always the most stressful part.”
Y

Raven glared at Twilight. “Do you remember now?”

Twilight nodded. “Yes!”

Raven relaxed and adjusted her glasses. “Then you also remembered what happened to the cake.” Raven replace the previous image with a new one. “After all it was you who discovered that someone had token multiple bites out of the it.”

Image change.

“And it was YOU who conducted a proper investigation. By having Pinkie retrace her steps, which led you to clues that help solve the case and reveal that three of your asshole friends were the culprits.”
Y

Raven shakes her head in disappointment. “So why didn't you do the same thing when trying to figure out who the secret admirer is. I was able to do it so I know that you are capable of doing the same.” Raven slams her hoof on the table. “So, explain to me why you didn't investigate properly, Detective!”

Twilight just sat there nervously in silence for a bit. Trying to think of something to say. “W-well.......I-I........You see-”

Twilight was interrupted by none other than Rainbow Dash. Who had shot up from her seat and glared at Raven angrily?

“Mother of Faust, Rainbow! Can ya’ll scream any louder?” Said Applejack.

“Sorry!” Rainbow said to her friend. Before turning her attention back to Raven. “Anyway, did you just call me, Rarity, and Fluttershy a bunch of assholes, you son of a bitch!?”

Raven also shot up from her seat and met the cyan pegasus glare with her own. “Yes, Rainbow. I did. You three are a bunch of assholes for what you did to that cake.” Raven points at RD. “You're supposed to be the element of loyalty. Yet you betrayed your friend trust by sneaking behind her back to eat some of it.”

Rainbow didn't have a retort to that. For she knew, Raven was right.

Raven continues. “Rarity, you were completely selfish. Sneaking a bite of the cake is one thing. It is another when that cake is so important to somepony else.”

Rarity bowed her head in shame.

“And Fluttershy, you were nothing but a big dumb meanie.”

Fluttershy couldn't help but cry at that. Fortunately, Discord was there to comfort her.

“Raven!” Pinkie spoke. Getting the unicorn attention. “It was my fault for making MMMM sound so tasty in the first place and I forgiven them for what they did.” Pinkie’s words were able to raise her three friend's spirits. “Also,” Pinkie got up from her seat, hop over the table, walk to the center towards the image of Twilight and slap it, causing it to rapidly cycle through multiple more images like a game show wheel and after a bit of waiting. She stop it with a hoof. Showing the exact image, she was looking for.

Raven just sat there staring with her mouth agape. She was completely speechless. Sure she heard about Pinkie Pie’s crazy antics and the random, out of nowhere, things she could do. But to actually she her do it was a different story entirely. “H-how did you-”

“I’m just going to stop you right there, Raven.” Said Twilight. “Don't even bother trying to question it. I tried that once and it nearly drove me insane.”

“Her Pinkie sense!” Raven guess.

Twilight nodded. “Its best just to go along with it and accept it. Trust me!” Twilight added.

Raven just nodded in understanding. Pinkie Pie had returned to her seat while the two were talking.

“So, what is it you're trying to point out with this image, Ms. Pie.”

“As you can see. After the other bakers ate each other desserts. I got the big idea to combine what was left into the cake you see now. Winning first prize for all of us.”

All Pinkie friends acknowledge her explanation.

“So in the end, everything turned out great.” Said Twilight.

“Is that so!” Raven said with a wicked grin. “Because I doubt that’s the whole story.”

“What in tarnation are getting at this time.” argued Applejack. “What more could there be?”

Raven chuckled. “Have you forgotten who the rightful creators of MMMM, are?”

“Of course not! Mr. and Mrs. Cake made it.” Applejack answered.

“Exactly! MMMM, was their cake that they made and entered into the contest. Pinkie Pie job was to only to assure its safe arrival to Canterlot. It was not her place to decide what to do with it after it got ruined. It was not her cake. It was Mr. and Mrs. Cake......uh, cake.” Raven shook her head at that. “Sure, the other bakers had every right to decide what to do with their own desserts, but Mr. and Mrs. Cake didn't.” Raven shrug. “True you did win first place, but it was a conjoined victory and no doubt, Pinkie Pie. You would have to tell them everything about what happened. After all, MMMM, didn't win the contest, hell it didn't even get entered.” Raven was the only one to notice the panicking looks on Pinkie’s, Rainbow’s, Rarity’s, and Fluttershy’s faces. They tried to remain calm, but it was hard not to after hearing Raven’s words. “So, one could only guess how Mr. and Mrs. Cake took it when they learned the truth about what happened to MMMM!”

“I’m sure The Cakes forgave Rainbow, Rarity, and Fluttershy!” Spike suggested.

Raven sigh. “Oh, my sweet little naive, purple bear. I’m afraid that’s not the case.”

“What makes you so sure?” asked Applejack.

“Well, the fact that you and Twilight were never told. Is one thing.” Said Raven.

Twilight and AJ took a quick confused glance at one another before looking back at Raven. “The thought never crossed my mind, but I agree with Spike. They must have forgiven them.”

“Oh, they did. Just not off the bat and I’ll show you why.” Raven turned to look at AJ. “Hey, Applejack, do you remember having your brother carry that heavy cake?”

AJ raised an eyebrow as she thought about that day. “Yeah, what about-” *ZAP* Applejack was interrupted by Raven shooting a bean at her forehead. The image Pinkie brought up was replace by a memory video. “What in tarnation!”

“Relax you’ll be fine. I just wanted you guys to see for yourselves. Exactly why The Cakes couldn't forgive those three so easily. Let's watch.” With that said. Raven started the memory.

After the memory finished. Raven made the screen disappear. Leaving the center of the room void of any images or screens, once more.

“Now, let's recall what was said. When they started transporting the cake.”

Pinkie Pie: Alrighty then, Big Mac! To the train depot! That's it, Big Mac, nice and slow. This is precious cargo you're carrying.

Mr. Cake: Yes, it took months of planning and testing.

Mrs. Cake: I would hate for it to–

Big McIntosh: [grunts]

Mr. Cake and Mrs. Cake: Fall!

“Mr. Cake said it took months of planning and testing. They spent so much time and money into making that cake absolutely perfect for the contest. Which is why they were so worried about it being ruined after all that work, they put into it.” Raven adjust her glasses. “I don't think the other bakers put as much effort into their desserts as The Cakes did. Which is why they were cool with each other eating their work and combining it together to make a whole new dish. I mean seriously it was a baking contest. So, what happens to all the entries after a winner is decided?”

“They get shared and eaten by everypony.” Pinkie sadly answers.

“That's right. All entries winners and losers alike are shared and eaten by the public. We wouldn't want the food to go to waste. It's common knowledge that was going happen. So, all you three had to do,” Raven glared at the three culprits. “Was simply waited till the contest was over and you would have gotten your share, no problem. But noooooo! You had to get fucking greedy and for what!? Because Pinkie Pie talked about how delicious the cake was...

“That’s no excuse and you three know it. You knew that cake was for a contest, you knew how important it was for it to get to Canterlot unscathed, you even help carry it to the train station. But despite all that you still decided to sneak a bite and not just one but multiple. Completely ruining it and destroying any chance of The Cakes winning the contest and I. DON'T. GIVE A. DAMN that Pinkie’s idea help everyone win. What would you do if the other bakers didn't eat each others dishes? Oh that right NOTHING!!! You can't enter a half eaten dessert into the contest. So you would have no choice but to return back to Ponyville and tell Mr.and Mrs. Cake the bad news and do any of you, in. This. Room truly believe that those two who put months of planning, work, effort, money, tears and sweat into making that cake would not be absolutely furious that all there hard work was completely WASTED!!!!”

Silence.

“WELL!?”

Still silent.

“So you all can see that there’s no way The Cakes could just forgive those three for what they have done and there was no way they could of gotten away with it. Even if Pinkie decided to lie for them. Events like The National Dessert Competition are always place in the newspaper and The Equestrian Newspaper works extremely fast. So The Cakes would of gotten the paper before you six got back to town.” Raven smirk. “No different from when the five of you tried to stop Rarity from reading the article about her shop grand opening in Manehatten.”

That made the mane six cringe at that. More so for Pinkie and the three culprits.

“Pictures of all desserts and their bakers would be taken and listed in the paper. With the winner being at the top and that picture contained Pinkie; who was representing The Cakes. And the other three bakers. Since it was the four of you who made that conjoined dessert together and since the news of the event was in every local news paper. The Cakes would of saw that their cake wasn't on the list. At least not in the way that it should of been.

Seeing how it was apart of an conjoined dish. So of course they would want to know what happened to MMMM, and why did they win first prize in a shared victory with a cake they had no part in making. With that said, how about you stop trying to protect those three, Pinkie Pie and tell us what happened when The Cakes learned the truth.”

Everyone’s attention turned to Pinkie, Rarity, Rainbow, and Fluttershy. All four look incredibly distraught.

“Girls!” Twilight called out. Getting the four mares attention. “I can't deny what Raven said about The Cakes hard work going to waste because of what the three of you did. I understand that they would be mad. But their cake was apart of the conjoined entry that won first place, so their hard work wasn't completely wasted. So they must of still forgave you....right!”

Rarity let out a deep sigh before speaking. “No, darling. They didn't.”

The news shocked Twilight. “But why?”

“Because we stupidly ruined their cake and wasted all their hard work.” Rainbow answered.

“But they still won first place, seeing how their cake was still apart of the conjoin one.” Applejack added.

Fluttershy shook her head. “That's no excuse at all. That was just pure dumb luck that was only possible because the other bakers ate one another desserts.”

Pinkie continues. “And if they haven't. MMMM, couldn't be entered into the contest.....Which was the first thing they asked me when they had read the article in the paper about the contest. Wanting to know why their cake wasn't on the list as well as how I won the contest under their name with three other bakers for a cake they had no part in making.”

“What did you tell them?” Asked Twilight.

“The truth, darling!” Rarity Answered. “The four of us told them everything. From Pinkie’s description of the cake, to how three of us took a bite out of it, Yours and Pinkie’s investigations, figuring out that we were the culprits, as well as Pinkie’s idea to combine the desserts, and once we were done explaining.” Rarity rub the back of her head nervously.

“They were.......less than pleased.” Fluttershy finished.


(SugarCube Corner, 7 years ago)

”YOU DID WHHHAAATTT!!!!!!”
”YOU DID WHHHAAATTT!!!!!!”

The loud roaring voices of the married couple shook the dessert looking building. Thanks to the extreme shock of being told about the fate of their precious cake.

Rarity, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash were standing bunch up together, shivering in fear under the righteous fury of the two bakers. Pinkie Pie was also there, hiding behind the front counter. Never have she seen her bosses so angry but given the circumstance of the situation. They have every right to be.

She and her friends knew they would have to tell them about what happened to MMMM, it was,

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Pinkie wanted to be there by the girl's side when they confess. But they said that she had done nothing wrong, and they should be the ones to tell The Cakes the truth. Which was exactly what they did as Pinkie sat in the sidelines, watching as
told The Cakes everything that happened. Pinkie of course pop in to talk about the investigation but could do no more than sit there as The Cakes chewed out her friends.

“YOU THREE ATE OUR CAKE?” Mrs. Cake asked in anger.

“N-not the whole thing, darling.” Rarity said with a shaky voice. “I only meant to take a little, lady-like bite.” Rainbow and Fluttershy nodded.

The Cake’s scowled at the fashionista exclamation, before Mr. Cake reach into his apron pocket and pulled out a photo and showed it to the three. “Does THIS look like a lady-like bite to you?”

The three mare’s looks at the photo. Confuse as to why the picture even exist in the first place. They then turned to Pinkie for answers and she said. “What!? You should always take photos of the crime scene. So, you can review the evidence later.”

The three culprits turned their attention back to the bakers. When Mrs. Cake spoke. Now holding the photo as she looks at it. “It looks more like you each took one giant bite out of it or quick and fast multiple ones.” She said before putting the photo away.

Rarity chuckled nervously. “Well, I did say *meant to*, darling. Pinkie Pie just made it sound so delectable.

:yay:So tasty.

:rainbowwild:And boy was it!

:yay:And it was so good.

:rainbowwild:Yeah, I just dove right in!

:fluttershysad:But I'm really really sorry.

:raritydespair:Terribly sorry.

:rainbowhuh:Sorry, Mr. and Mrs. Cake.

Each girl bowed their heads as they apologize. Feeling horrible for what they have done and hope that The Cakes could forgive them.

The Cakes look at one another and nodded in silent agreement before turning back to the three mare’s.

After a few moments of silence. Mr. Cake spoke. “I’m glad to hear how much you three liked it.”

“And took responsibility to come to us to confess and apologize.” Said Mrs. Cake.

The girls raised their heads to look at the bakers. With hope in their eyes. The Cakes sounded like they were going to forgive them. But that hope instantly died the second the married bakers scowled angrily at them.

“But you three are here by BANNED from our shop, effective immediately.” Mr. Cake announced angrily.

“Now GET OUT and never come back!” Yelled Mrs. Cake.

Silence. Pure uncomfortable, agonizing, silence. Time had seemed to have stopped in that moment as the reality of the situation began to settle in.

Pinkie Pie, who have been watching from behind the front counter. Was absolutely horrified at her boss's decision. Throughout her years of working here. She had never seen nor heard of The Cakes banning anyone from their shop. It was just unheard of. But then again, no pony had ever done anything to make them anywhere near angry enough to warrant such a punishment, until now. So, it's not like the pink earth pony doesn't understand why her bosses are banning her friends. She just wishes it didn't happen.

As for the three mare’s. They were to absolutely horrified at The Cakes decision to ban them from SugarCube Corner.

Fluttershy couldn't help but start crying at the terrible news. Rarity; also feeling just as sad. Still tried to comfort her friend by patting her on the back. As for Rainbow Dash. She just stood there, flabbergasted for a bit before speaking.

“BANNED!? Why are you banning us? We said we’re sorry!”

“What!? You thought we were just going to instantly forgive you. Just because you felt really bad for what you did and apologize.” Said Mrs. Cake. “I don't know what fantasy world you three think you're in, but this is the real world.”

“You didn't think you could just pull such an idiotic stunt like that and get away with it by simply feeling remorse and apologize. Without facing any consequences for your actions did you.” Mr. Cake added.

Pinkie Pie spoke up. “I-I did!” she said nervously. “After they were found out and confess. I forgave them after they apologize.

“I understand why you did, deary. After all they are your friends, and you don't want to get mad at them.” Mrs. Cake explained.

“But I'm afraid that’s not going to cut it. Not one bit.” Said Mr. Cake. He then turned his attention back at the three mare’s “The National Dessert Competition was no mere baking contest.

“It also serves as a way for bakers to show off their baking skills and advertise their goods.” Mrs. Cake added. “The competition is like a steppingstone for aspiring chefs to present their own new, and originally made desserts to the world.”

“Mulia Mild, Gustave le Grand, and Donut Joe are just three known chefs. Each with their own restaurant. Just like everyone else who entered the contest.” Mr. Cake added. “Like Chiffon said. The contest is a way for chefs to show off their baking skills. By presenting something new and original. The Marzipan Mascarpone Meringue Madness was Chiffon
and I gift to the world. We didn't make it by following some recipe in a cookbook.”

“Carrot and I are the sole original creators of that cake.” Chiffon added. “Everything about it was 100% original. It took months of planning and testing to make. It was our most pride and greatest achievement, and we were looking forward to hearing the results about it and what everyone thinks.”

“But the only ones who got to taste it in its original form. Were you three!” Carrot said angrily. Pointing at the three mare’s. “Not only that but no one really got a chance to eat the conjoined cake because Pinkie Pie ate the whole thing in one gulp.”

“Which was smart of her to do. Because it saved us a whole lot of trouble.” Said Chiffon.
That got the three mare’s confused.

“What exactly do you mean by that?” Asked Rainbow.

Chiffon turns to Pinkie. “Pinkie Pie! Would you care to explain?”

Pinkie let out a sigh. “I didn't just eat the whole cake because I was just being silly. I did it so no one; except Celestia. Would eat any of it.”

That got the three mare’s confused.

“But why, darling?” Rarity asked.

“Because it won first place and the prize wasn't just a shiny blue ribbon, but to also have your creation recipe put in the cookbook of the world's most greatest dishes and their chefs. That alone, combined with winning the contest as well as the publicity, would bring a large boom in sales for victors' restaurant. But because the dessert was just a last minute thrown together creation. Mulia, Gustave, Joe, and I,

Knew we couldn't accept the final award that came with first place. It was a decision we made right after we finished preparing the conjoined cake. Because there's no way we can put what was just thrown together like that in the world's greatest cookbook. It would be extremely difficult for anyone to make from pure scratch. Considering just how much baking you have to do. Just to make one cake.” Pinkie shook her head in frustration. ”And it was not like we can form an alliance to run a shop together. That's just too much trouble and would mean that some of us would have to move just to live closer to each other. So, we agreed to not accept the main prize if we won, and I agreed to stop others from eating it, by eating the whole thing myself. I even told Celestia about the real reason I did that. Since she was the only other pony who ate the piece Twilight gave to her.

It was better this way and when the next competition comes. We’ll just try again in presenting our own desserts like we originally were supposed to....without another mishap like that again.” Pinkie finish.

Carrot spoke. “So, in other words. You three not only ruined our cake but destroyed our chance at getting some good publicity. If we had won. SugarCube Corner would be booming with customers far and wide. Wanting to try our cake.”

Chiffon continues. “And the money we would have made. Would of help us a great deal. We were going to use the money to buy new equipment, remodel the shop a bit, like giving the babies their own bedrooms for when they get older.”

“But we can kiss those plans goodbye, for now. Sure, there always the next competition but that doesn't help with the next big thing you three wasted for us.” Carrot finish.

“And what’s that?” Fluttershy asked.

”Money!”
”Money!”

That caught the three off guard. For none of them expected that as answer. At least more so for Rainbow and Fluttershy. Less so for Rarity. For she fully understands exactly what the cakes were getting at and it only made feel even worse for what she had done. She nor her two friends really didn't think things through before instantly giving into temptation.

“...If I may dare ask...about how much?” asked Rarity, staring in shock.

Carrot taps his chin as he thought about it. “hmmm, Considering the months of testing. When making the prototypes, which means we had to buy multiple fresh ingredients, some which had to be delivered, like the Marzipan, Mascarpone, and Meringue, so that includes delivery cost. All leading up to buying everything we needed for the actual cake itself......I say about 3000 bits at the least.”

(Pinkie breaks the fourth wall to deliver a message)
:pinkiegasp:3000 bits. Yeah, I don't think that’s completely accurate. Clearly just a random number chosen, but I get what the writer of this story trying to do here. :pinkiesmile: He’s not a math wiz and he’s trying to get out the fact that The Cakes spent months planning and testing when they started working on the cake. It makes sense that they would make prototype versions. Seeing what works and what doesn't before making the real one. It is an original never before been made cake after all. So, the final product would cost a lot less to make. :pinkiehappy: Anyway, just breaking the 4th wall to deliver this message to you guys. Because the author doesn't want to have to deal with it in the comments. Sorry for interrupting and back to the story.

The three mare’s jaws drop after hearing what The Cakes had spent to make MMMM.

“It cost that much just to make one cake?” Said Rainbow.

“No, darling. It cost that much to make multiple test versions including the final product.” Rarity explained.

Chiffon nodded. “Though most of the ingredients we got here in Ponyville. The three main ingredients we needed were delivered and it wasn't cheap either. That cake was made with the most freshest ingredients. Truly our most expensive work.”

“But not anywhere near as much if you are just making one cake. The most expensive thing we would have to buy are the Marzipan, Mascarpone, and Meringue but that wouldn't be so bad in the long run. But it was when we needed enough to make the protypes. That’s the reason why the price is as high as it is.” Carrot explained.

“And I know you two,” Chiffon points to Rainbow and Fluttershy. “Have some knowledge on this because you're both friends with Rarity who knows all about spending money to make money. After all are businesses shares that similarity. She needs to buy the things she needs to make her dresses just as Carrot and I need to buy what we need make our goods.”

“So, none of that crossed any of your minds when you decided to eat our cake?” Asked Carrot.

Silence.

“Or the fact the that you could of have your share if you had just been patient?” Said Chiffon. “I mean for crying out loud it was a BAKING CONTEST! What do you think happens to the food after the event is over?”

“It gets shared and eaten by the public!” Rarity sadly answers.

“EXACTLY!” Chiffon bellowed. “But despite knowing about the importance of the cake, and that it was going to a contest where at the end. You three would have gotten your share, without any issue. You still chose to eat it and the only excuse you have is that Pinkie spoke about how delicious it was. Well, that’s no excuse at all and don't even bother bringing up that the other bakers did the same to each other. Cause I. Don't. Care about them eating each other desserts. That's their issue to work out. I’m still wondering why you three decided to eat our cake. Knowing full well of its importance.”

Fluttershy tries to speak up. “W-we’re sor-”

“NO, YOU'RE NOT!” Chiffon yelled. interrupting the shy mare. who only coward in fear at the very angry baker mare? “You three aren't sorry for eating our cake. you're sorry that you got caught! After all, if you really were sorry. You would of confess the second the bite marks were discovered. But instead, you each kept quiet about it. Hoping the truth never gets revealed. Even if that means that someone else take the fall.” Chiffon shakes her head in disgust. “You three are a disgrace to the elements you represent. You BETRAYED:rainbowderp: our trust, were completely SHELFISH:raritydespair:, and were absolutely CRUEL:fluttershbad:

Chiffon’s words hit the three mare’s hard. They felt even more worse than they were at the start, but Chiffon wasn't done yet.

“All the hard work, Carrot and I did was all for nothing. All those months of planning, testing, effort, money, tears and sweat that went into making that cake was COMPLETELY WASTED thanks to you three and all because you couldn't keep your greedy hooves to yourselves, and you think a simple apology would make up for all that? So let's say if you Rainbow. Spent months perfecting a new stunt for The Best Young Flyer competition. One that would guarantee your victory and spending the day with the Wonderbolts. But Carrot and I came in and purposely did something that we knew was wrong but did it anyway. Ruining your stunt at the last minute causing you to lose. Thus, making all your hard work a big waste of time. If we came and apologize. Would you happily accept it at a drop of a hat?”

“No!” Rainbow said sadly. “I would be absolutely furious.”

“And what about you Rarity!” Carrot asked the unicorn. “Could you easily forgive us if we ruined a very special dress you made for very super important client?”

“No!”

“Then you three know the full weight of what you did to us and why we banned you from our shop.” Chiffon said sternly. The three mare’s, solemnly nodded. “Good, and let this be a lesson for you three, Actions haves Consequences and you must always face them head on instead trying to run away from them. Cause if you don't, one day they will catch up to you. One way or another.” The three mare’s just nodded to acknowledge their understanding. “Then that's all we have to say. You three may show yourselves out.”

With that said. Rainbow, Fluttershy, Rarity looks at one another. Seeing the guilty and sad looks upon each other faces but there was also something else. Determination. They remembered what Mrs. Cake about taking responsibility for your actions and she’s right. They want to do the right thing and fix the mess they created by doing just that. After their silent conversation. The three agreed to apologize to The Cakes again. For real this time. With newfound spirit. The three culprits stood firm with strong determination.

“Why are you three just standing there?” Asked Chiffon. “We told you to leave!”

We know...” said Rainbow Dash, giving a guilty sigh. “Look... what we did was bad...”

“Yes, it was,” Mrs. Cake said.

“And we're sorry...” Rarity added, lowering her head.

“We really are! For real this time.” Fluttershy added.

“As you mentioned earlier, I'd be just as mad if somepony wrecked a big stunt that I spent months planning for the biggest flying contest in Equestria...I'd be more than upset, I'd be furious...but can we please just make it up to you somehow?” asked Rainbow Dash, with an unusual seriousness about her. “...I'm a lot of things...but I hate the idea of betraying somepony... For something I did, and I want to make up for it.”

“As do I!” Said Rarity.

“Me too!” Said Fluttershy.

Rainbow speaks. “You said that ponies should take responsibility for their actions and face the consequences. The three of us want to do just that and are willing to do whatever you say as punishment in order to have our ban lifted.” Rainbow bowed her head. “Please, let us make up for our mistake and prove to you both how sorry we are.”

Pinkie Pie speaks. Getting her bosses attentions. “Please, Mr. are Mrs. Cake!” She pleaded. “Can you please give my friends a chance to make up for what they did?”

The two married bakers looked over to the trio, seeing the guilty and apologetic looks on their faces. This time they can truly see that they now understand the depth of what they did and genuinely wants to make up for eating their precious cake. The Cakes turned aside and whispered to each other. The three ponies waited nervously for an answer. After what felt like an eternity. The Cakes finish their discussion, turned to face the three, and gave their answer.

“Alright, if you want to make it up to us, you're going to be working your flanks off,” Mrs. Cake replied. “If you do, we will lift the ban. You three will spend the next few months cleaning up the shop from top to bottom, inside and out, and helping out if we need you to. Working off what you took from us and the work you wasted, deal?”

:rainbowderp:”Deal!”
:fluttershysad:”Deal!”

“...Do I have to wear a hair net?” Rarity asked with a bit of hesitation in her tone.

“If we need you to,” Mr. Cake replied sternly.

“...I suppose I had that coming.” Rarity sighed. :raritydespair:”Deal!”


(Present day, The Meeting Room)

“And so, for three months. We became temporary unpaid employees of SugarCube Corner.” Rarity explained. “We had to clean whatever needs cleaning. Like the kitchen, which we did together. Before splitting up to clean the basement, the attic, and” Rarity shudders. “The ovens, those greasy, grimy ovens. I desperately needed a shower after that.”


“Fluttershy did the attic. While I did the basement.” Said Rainbow. “We both finished around the same time and was told to wash the outside of the building.

“And we also help out with customers and orders. When we were needed.” Said Fluttershy.

“Long story short. The Cakes meant it when they said that we were going to work our flanks off. But it was the price we had to pay for ruining their cake.” Said Rainbow.

“Which they awarded each of us a small one for doing such a good job in helping them out so much during our sentence.” Said Fluttershy.

“The delicious fruits of our labor.” Rarity added. “Still. I learned my lesson.” Rainbow and Fluttershy both nodded in agreement. “What the three of us did was wrong in more ways than one. We knew it was and we chose to do it anyway. We were cruel, we betrayed the trust of our friends, for our own selfish reasons, and were willing to sit back and let others take the blame for what we did. And when we were found out. We actually believed that by simply apologizing and feeling remorse for something we purposely chose to do. Will get us off the hook just like that.....Of course not. What were we thinking! I know forgiving others for their mistakes is what we do. Take Starlight for example.” Rarity gestures to the Mare in question. “We didn't punish her because we learned about her backstory. Which told us why she became a cult leader and wanted to mess up the past. There was a reason why she did the things she did, a reason why it led her down such a dark path. She just needed someone to help guide her down the right path and show her a better way.”

Rarity shook her head in disappointment. “But that doesn't explain why Rainbow, Fluttershy, and I did what we did. We don't have some traumatic back story that explains why we chose to eat that cake. No excuse at all. We knew what we did and why we did it. So, it only makes absolute sense for the three of to be punish for what we did because we had no clear way to say otherwise.”

***

As Rarity was giving her speech. Everyone in the room paid close attention to her. They just listen to her go on as she spoke about actions and consequences. Which some in the room even agreed with her, due to their own mistakes of the past. But things were more different for Princess Celestia. For she had been giving Rarity’s speech. Far more attention than normal. So far nobody else notice it, nobody else could see the true meaning behind the story the trio told, or Rarity’s speech. On the surface it doesn't look like anything out the ordinary was going on. But the sun princess knew better. After all she have seen this trick before.

Celestia shifted her gaze towards Raven. Who just sat there in her chair doing nothing special except listening to Rarity? Raven quickly noticed Celestia looking right at her and shifted her own eyes. So, their gazes met. They just silently stared at each other for what felt like an eternity.

”Raven, you didn't!?” Celestia thought worriedly.

As if she was able to hear the Sun monarch's thoughts. A deviously big smile began to form on Raven’s face. Celestia’s eyes widen in horror at the confirmation of herself being right and it was in that moment Celestia knew. Discord was fuck.

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