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A new World

by Orthoros
Story has been removed from Fimfiction.net
Some dude gets yanked into equestria, read long description lol
19 Dislikes, 425 Views

!!!WARNING!!!WARNING!!!WARNING!!!
Proceed at your own risk, it is highly recommended to protect your eyes from laying eyes upon the words in this piece of fiction! If you do anyway, it is recommended to rinse your eyes with bleach and commence with a class two brain reboot.
Proceed at your own risk.
!!!WARNING!!!WARNING!!!WARNING!!!

With the warning out of the way, what is this?
This, is my very first attempt at writing a story from back in 2012. It's... not good, to say the least. At the time of posting, it was torn apart by the few brave souls who read it, but there was also some constructive criticism involved, which helped me tremendously down the line.

I eventually deleted this out of shame, not wanting this story to stain my rep so to speak. But now, I think it's funny how bad it is, and I though I'd bring it back to serve as an example for aspiring writers.

Nobody is good at what they do when they start out, and this is proof. I hope that somebody sees how garbage this is, and maybe gets the courage to write something themselves.

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1,074 words: Estimated 5 Minutes to read: [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. Prologue(and the only chapter, ever) [Cache] Nov 10th, 2021
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Published Nov 10th, 2021

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