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Suck

By Yuko Asho

Chapter 6

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I shuddered as a another headache thrust itself onto me, like some pony trying to fuck my brain through my ears, and my connection with Dashie returned. Seriously, ow. Being an earth pony, I didn't know much about magic, but I figured it wasn't supposed to hurt like that. Maybe that's what a TV felt when a station signed off? Wouldn't surprise me, honestly: millions of ponies leaving their sets on when they went to bed, the Equestrian National Anthem playing, and then millions of TVs needing aspirin, or whatever TVs used when they got headaches. Tube aches?

But hey, at least Dashie was back, and... Apparently here in Appleloosa! How did that happen? Don't get me wrong, my little Dashie was fast, but no pony could be that fast! Hm, she was in front of the saloon, too! My tail suddenly shot up into the air. I had to get to Dashie before she found some stallion to play with!

Thankfully, I had a few shortcuts memorized from when I went there earlier this morning to get the last of the cum I needed for my cake. Hey, I needed to do something after Dashie broke Starscream's cock! Running through back alleys and over rooftops, I fought the urge to sing as I closed in on the saloon. I didn't want Dashie to know I was there before I tackle-hugged her!

Finally, I was standing atop a bank right across from the saloon, and there was Dashie right in front of the saloon doors! Her wings looked weird, but Dashie was Dashie, no matter what! I jumped off the bank, ignoring the screams of terrified passers by as I leaped through the air.

“Dashie!” I landed atop her and wrapped my fore-hooves around her neck nice and tight.

“P-Pinkie!?” Dashie cried out in surprise as we tumbled into the saloon. Apparently there was some kind of mares-only event going on, because I didn't see any stallions in the saloon today. Weird, I could have sworn that's what it meant when my tail shot into the air like that. No matter, I had my Dashie!

The two of us pushed ourselves up to our hooves, my gorgeous sky-blue lover stretching her wings and groaning. It was then that I saw something wrong with her wings – her feathers were gone! In their place, leathery membranes extended out, kind of like Luna's guard stallions.

Dashie seemed to notice my staring, at least if her suddenly closing her wings and looking down was any indication. Something was wrong. I could tell because my ears were pointing in opposite directions. “Dashie?” I trotted up close to her and nuzzled her face softly. “You all right?”

Dashie sighed and slumped her shoulders. “Yeah, I kinda wanted to tell you about this later.” She forced a smile and gazed at me. That's when I noticed something else. Her eyes, formerly a gorgeous red, were now gold. Again, I was reminded of Luna's guard. Not that they weren't pretty too, oh no! It was just a bit of a shock to see was all.

I thought back to before I lost my link with Dashie last night. Those guard ponies seemed to think Dashie was a good fit for the guard. Then they threw her into that door. I pursed my lips and lifted an eyebrow at Dashie. “So, you've joined the Lunar Guard?” I could see Dashie stiffening up at my question. Maybe she'd forgotten I could see what she was doing for most of last night?

“Um, yeah, about that...” Dashie looked around sheepishly, as if trying to think of something to say. Of course, even without our connection, I could tell she was having trouble coming up with something. “Well, you saw everything, didn't you?”

I nodded. Then I shook my head. Then I nodded yet again. And then I shook my head again. Oh, I was going to need to say something, wasn't I? “Well, I saw you getting fucked by all those handsome stallions, but then they threw you into that creepy black door and I got a really, really, really bad headache and I lost my link with you, and then the morning came and I got another headache and you were here so I came over here and found you, and then I tackled you and saw your weird eyes and wings, which are still pretty cool, but I figured something happened when I lost sight of you, and-”

Dashie's hoof suddenly thrusting into my mouth was a surprise. Was I rambling again? It didn't feel like I was rambling. Whatever the case, here I was with a celeste hoof in my mouth and a room full of mares staring at the two of us. Yep, just another day in the life of Pinkie Pie!

“I'll talk to you about it later,” she told me sternly, her eyes narrowing. “For now, what are you doing here? We're not even close to Ponyville!”

I fluttered my eyelashes cutely and nuzzled her face again. I wasn't sure why, but she sure smelled really nice! Maybe she was finally wearing perfume? “Oh, that!” Giggling, I led her back out of the saloon, hopping gaily as she trotted behind me. “I just had to get some ingredients for something super-dee-duper I'm baking for you when your sentence is up!”

My left foreleg twitched a bit. Dashie was skeptical about me again! “Really?” she asked darkly. “What could you possibly get here that you couldn't get in Ponyville?”

If there was anything I could count on, it was Dashie trying to get me to spoil the surprise! She was so impatient! “Now come on, Dashie, you know I can't say that! It'd spoil the surprise!” Giggling softly, I continued to bounce along like the happy Pinkie I was!

I got a cute laugh in that sexy, raspy voice of hers in reply. Guess she was giving up for now. Good thing too, I'd hate to have to explain to her how there weren't any tickets for the Wonderbolts show here, and then she'd really know what I was doing, and then there'd be no point. I wanted to surprise her!

There went my tail again. This time it was twirling around like a propeller. “Anyway,” I chirped, “We really should get to Ponyville! I'll go on ahead so I can get started on the surprise!”

“Uh, sure Pinkie.” She sounded confused by what I was saying. Not that it was unusual, of course. Most ponies didn't quite follow what I was saying or doing half the time. Really, they should pay more attention. Ah well, such was my life.

I turned back around to kiss Dashie full on the lips. Oh, she was so cute, blushing like that! With that, I hopped off toward the hotel. Had to get my “special” cup to take back to Ponyville after all! While I did that, I wondered how Fluttershy was holding up. Hopefully she didn't get a bad headache last night too!

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I let out a deep moan as Fluttershy bucked her hips back and forth, thrusting the two cocks I'd given her as deep into me as she could. A fast learner, that one. It hadn't been that long ago that the yellow pony would hide whenever I suggested reversing our roles, but now she mounted me eagerly, rutting with all the force she could muster. It didn't hurt that I'd given her cocks that would have put the mightiest of stallions to shame.

“H-How am I doing, M-mistress?” she whispered into my ear as she drove the two massive cocks into my twat and ass, burying them to the hilt.

I let out another deep, throaty moan and nodded. “V-Very good, my Fluttershy!” I exclaimed between gasps. I wasn't lying, either. It seemed that being on the receiving end so frequently had given her some insight on how to give. She pumped her hips in and out, fucking me nice and hard while nibbling gently on my ear, bathing it with her hot, quivering tongue. Yes, Fluttershy was the perfect lover, and I would never accept losing her.

I wasn't a dead fish either, of course. I bucked my hips back against her, timing my movements with hers so she could bury her dicks to the hilt in my quivering holes, which were squeezing and clenching wildly around the throbbing, swelling members.

Oh, this was beyond divine! I would have to have Fluttershy on top more often. Perhaps I could have her fuck Tia, get my uptight sister to lighten up and have some fun.

Well, that would be for later. For now, I simply enjoyed the ride, groaning and panting huskily as Fluttershy drove into me. I was pleased with how aggressive she was now; it seemed she was comfortable with intimacy again. The treatment sessions had done their job, and I was reaping the benefit!

I was truly lucky to have a mare like Fluttershy as mine. Oh, it was rocky at first, but as we got to know each other, we just clicked. It was like she was the piece of the puzzle that completed me, and I was the piece to complete her.

And she was so horny too! Yes, she had difficulty with other ponies, but she was very comfortable in the deepest parts of the Everfree Forest, getting her kicks from the sort of monsters that would make other ponies wet themselves in terror. She was still frightened of dragons, but that made sense given their size. Well, there were still plenty of creatures for us both to have fun with in those times we had to be apart.

I let out a loud, piercing cry as Fluttershy slammed hard into me, the two cocks hitting the spot deep in each hole that drove me wild. Again and again, she thrust into me, hitting the spots again and again, as if she were able to target them. My moans grew louder with each attack, filling her cabin with the sounds of my lust.

Then it came. Or rather, we came. At once, my nerves caught fire as Fluttershy's rods erupted, filling me to the brim in hot, sticky seed. The two of us moaned and cried out in bliss as we shared this fleeting moment of white-hot ecstasy. I trembled beneath her, mewling and moaning, my orgasm slowly faded as she continued to pump me full of cum.

Finally, she was spent, and slumped over me, leaving the two massive dicks inside me, my holes squeezing them for the last drops of semen I could extract. “Fluttershy,” I moaned softly, “you were perfect.”

I felt her soft lips nervously kissing my withers, as if afraid she might break me. “Thank you, Mistress,” she replied softly.

As I felt her weight resting on me, my mind turned back toward my recent acquisition of Rainbow Dash. I'd given that one eternal life, both as a love slave and as one of my guards, though that meant having to make a new body for her. Fluttershy, though, I couldn't bare to make suffer even for the microsecond it takes to destroy a mortal body. That, and she was incredibly hot as she was now! No body I gave her could possibly be as gorgeous as the one she sported now. No, I had another idea for my lover.

“Fluttershy?” My voice was gentle, as it always was when I made a proposal to her. I would never wish to scare her.

“Yes, Mistress?” I could hear it in her voice; she was frightened, yet trusting as always.

“You know that Rainbow Dash is one of my guards now, yes?” I felt her rub my back with the side of her face as she nodded, then continued. “We've been together a while now, and I thought...”

“That you'd make me a guard?” she offered. “Oh no! I'd be a terrible guard!” She shivered against me, forcing me to chuckle at the thought. Indeed, she was too timid, and hated the thought of violence far too much to be an effective guard.

“No,” I replied softly. “I want to give you something better.”

Silence. The quickening of her heartbeat. She was hanging on my every word, though whether from excitement or dread I couldn't tell.

“I wish to make you mine,” I told her. “Yours is the most beautiful body and soul I've ever had the pleasure to be with, and I couldn't possibly bear the thought of losing you.”

Still, no reply. I bit my lip nervously. It was something I had grown used to with Fluttershy. She was easy to scare, so I had to be calm and cool. I had to make sure she understood that I would never harm her. I would suffer another banishment to the moon, to Tartarus, if it meant her happiness and safety. For all my effort though, she still stiffened up a bit every time I tried to discuss something important.

Taking a deep breath, I laid my heart bare. “I wish to make you my love slave,” I told her, my voice barely above a whisper. “Not both love slave and guard like Rainbow, but my favored. I wish to have you forever, as you are, beneath me.”

Another moment of silence, then a kiss along my neck, at the base of my mane. Then, that sweet, gorgeous voice, so gentle and warm, like a cup of fresh lemon tea in the morning. “I thought I already was,” she whispered as if it were the most obvious thing in the world.

I couldn't help but grin. Fluttershy was truly a miracle. Still, I felt it necessary to make sure she understood. “You know,” I began, “once we conduct the ritual needed, there's no going back.”

Once more, I felt her nodding as she rested her head against my back. “That's fine,” she assured me. “I don't think I could ever love any pony else the way I love you. I'm yours, Princess... Mistress Luna. I want to be yours forever.”

Exhaling a breath I didn't even know I was holding, I smiled warmly. She would make a good slave, and an even better wife. With a simple flick of my magical powers, I dispelled the twin cocks between Fluttershy's legs, once more making her a pure mare. “Dismount me then, Fluttershy, and face the door.”

She slid off me and stood on all four hooves, smiling warmly at me as she passed by. Even now, it amazed me that she bore no ill will toward me after the terrible pain visited upon her by the severing of her link with Rainbow Dash. It may have been temporary, but it had been an unbelievable pain that all who had been linked for Rainbow's sentence had felt. At least I'd be able to shield her from any future pains now.

Turning to face the door, Fluttershy hiked her ass up into the air. That would help with the ritual, of course, but it also gave me a good view of how wet she was. I had to fight to resist the urge to eat her out right then and there, if only so I could do what had to be done.

With my power, I reached deep into Tartarus, looking for just the right demon to do the job. There! Not too far from the chamber I'd converted Rainbow in was a forest much like the Everfree, and within, an incubus pony was dismounting a mare, having finished using her for his own lust. He would be perfect. With a tug of my power, I pulled him into this world, right behind Fluttershy. He was a large one, nearly as big as Tia, with a dark blue coat and mane. A cluster of fleshy, pink tentacles sprouted from his barrel, the lot of them nearly as thick as the giant member jutting out between his hind legs, permanently aroused. His cutie mark, a stallion dominating a mare, left no doubt as to his purpose. He was the most powerful of Tartarus' incubi, and would thus be perfect for Fluttershy's conversion.

“This one submits completely to the darkness!” I decreed in the Royal Canterlot Voice, pointing at Fluttershy as I spoke. “We have seen her soul, and it is the purest essence of lust! Tear her forever from the light, that she may spend eternity as my slut!”

“It shall be done!” barked the incubus formally, gazing intently at the sun-colored mare who would soon be my favorite for all eternity. He walked slowly toward Fluttershy, inhaling deeply, enjoying her scent. The tentacles under him began tor grow and reach slowly for Fluttershy, as if driven mad by the smell of her lust.

I could hear Fluttershy breathing in deeply as well, enjoying the musty scent that had suddenly overpowered the room. She seemed calm, fearless even, radiating confidence as the demonic stallion approached her. I couldn't help but smile, knowing that she trusted me completely, even to the point of giving up mortal life.

With nothing else to do, I simply sat on my haunches. This was going to be quite the show.

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I whimpered softly as I felt the strange pony mounting me from behind. What he looked like, I had no idea, but he was a stallion, judging by the smell of him, and his weight suggested he was a bit larger than any pony I'd ever met, even Mistress Luna. My heart was beating steadily in my chest as I waited, completely relaxed. I could feel Luna's eyes as they gazed at me and my otherworldly partner, as if poised to strike should he begin to pose a threat. I was safe and secure, and soon, I would forever be Luna's, in body as well as soul.

My whimpering turned into a loud, lustful moan as I felt him slide his large, heavy cock into my tight, dripping wet pussy. Crying out lustfully, I stiffened underneath him, my cunt tightening around him, clenching like a fist around his hard, throbbing shaft. Then, I felt them. Four more flexible tendrils, nearly as thick as the cock that buried itself deep inside me, were caressing my sides, back and barrel, brushing along my body like feathers, teasing me, winding me up slowly. I continued to whimper and pant, more like a dog than a pony, as I felt the gentle stroking of the tendrils all over my body. They were thou thorough in their exploration, caressing my legs, my flanks, the cutie mark on each side, even where my legs linked up with my barrel. I could feel myself growing wetter as excitement rushed through my body, every fiber of me screaming for that huge cock to start moving. But it stayed completely still, buried inside me as the four tentacles caressed whatever they could find.

Two more tentacles reached out, running through my mane like a lover's hooves, caressing my head and reaching down to my cheeks and muzzle. I closed my eyes and let out another sigh as the six tendrils continued to caress me, coaxing more and more juices out of my tightly clenched pussy, the scent of our arousal mixing in the air as I shuddered beneath him. I opened my mouth to ask for more, but nothing came out but another moan, my body betraying me as the long, writhing phalli continued to touch me everywhere. Even with how sopping wet and ready I was, however, the stallion didn't seem satisfied. Two mouths latched onto my teats and pressed tightly, beginning to suck eagerly at my throbbing nipples. The additional stimulation between my legs was starting to drive me mad, and I howled out my desire as my body began to ache, pleading for release.

“T... Take me...” My voice quivered, and I struggled to speak loud enough for both him and Mistress Luna to hear. “Please...”

Instead of beginning to move, the creature seemed fit to tease me more. The six tentacles that had been caressing my body all sprouted tongues, the lot of them licking my body and face, leaving trails of saliva that carried the smell and heat of male lust. “Our Mistress tells me you wish to become one of us.” The creature didn't speak aloud, but rather into my mind, his words boring into my head forcefully. I simply nodded weakly, barely able to think straight, let alone speak.

I felt another tongue pressing against my plot hole, slipping in tauntingly, and let out another lustful cry. The other tongues were moving slowly along my body, tickling and teasing, searching for the most sensitive parts of my body, as though I were an instrument to be played. Again, I heard his voice in my head, felt it tearing through my own thoughts. “Do you seek power, little slut?” he asked. “Perhaps riches and privilege as a plaything for the upper classes? Do you seek to be the object of mares and stallions' desire? To wield sex as a sword-stallion wields a weapon? Why do you shun Elysium and embrace darkness everlasting?”

I screwed my eyes shut as his words echoed through my brain, trying to form a complete sentence through my moans and cries of lust. “I... I seek none of that...”

The tongue in my plot hole slipped deeper, parting the flesh as it explored my depths. His cock began to vibrate wildly, and the mouths sucking my teats intensified, smaller tendrils tugging at my nipples. “Then what is it you seek, little cunt?” His voice echoed in my head, carrying with it not judgment, but rather curiosity. “There are few who turn away from the light, lest they seek something from our Mistress. Tell me what you seek, and I shall give you eternity beneath our Lady's hooves.”

With those words, my mind cleared. The answer to his query was obvious, and I spoke without hesitation. “L-Luna,” I stammered. “I seek only to please my Mistress, for her joy is what gives me meaning. I... I love her.”

For a moment, the creature was silent, leaving me to moan and whine in ecstasy as the tongues and mouths and vibrating cock kept me on edge, my thoughts again clouding up. I was so close to cumming right then and there, but the phalli in and around me seemed to know when to slow down, how to keep me in a perpetual state of near-climax while holding me back. My body was throbbing, aching with need as I was worked over, leaving me to wonder if he simply planned to break my mind through sheer erotic torture.

Then, I felt it. He began to move his hips, slowly pulling out, then pushing back in, establishing a steady rhythm. I heard his voice inside my head once more, no longer the stern, booming tone of an inquisitor, but warm and friendly, as if welcoming a family member home. “Your words are true, slut. You need speak no more, for your love of our Mistress shines from within you. You are to be her favored for all eternity, cunt. All but she shall kneel before you within the darkness.” With that, the tongue in my asshole again reformed, becoming a cock once more and drilling itself deep inside me, vibrating wildly like the cock buried inside my pussy. Finally, he began to fuck me in earnest, the cock in my ass slipping out as the one in my pussy thrust in and vice versa, never leaving me completely empty, stoking the fire that burned deep inside me.

“Y-yes!” I cried out with desire as the two cocks fucked me hard and fast, their piston-like movements sending jolts of pleasure through my body. As I was taken, the tongues around my body continued to lap at me, licking every piece of me that wasn't being used. All, that is, save for one. One of them parked itself in front of my face, the tongue receding, replaced by an eye that stared deep into mine. Looking into the eye, I knew what it wanted. I opened my mouth nice and wide, letting it have free reign. It peered into my mouth for a moment, as though curious about it, before the eye reformed itself into a flared cock-head and the whole thing lunged deep down my throat. Now I was being pummeled all three ways, every single cock slamming into me in a practiced rhythm, the ones in my throat and ass thrusting in as the one in my pussy retreated, retreating as the one in my pussy trusted in, again and again. I could feel the heat building inside me; for a moment, I thought I was going to catch fire!

Thankfully, that didn't happen. Instead, I felt a wave of ecstasy rush over me as I was finally granted the orgasm I had been denied so long. It was the most intense I'd ever had, my every nerve throbbing with pleasure as I became so, so light-headed. It was beyond description, for neither the highest highs nor the lowest lows could compare to the pleasure I was feeling right now. At once, the trio of cocks inside me began to swell. I wrapped my lips as tight as I could around the one in my mouth, careful not to bite as I sucked as hard as I could. Instead of semen, though, what shot into my tight, quivering holes was pure energy, as if the dark magic that had made this strange pony were flooding my body. Suddenly, the world around me vanished, leaving me in a dark vortex of nothing. The creature was gone, as were all his cocks and tongues and mouths. All that was there in the sea of everlasting black was an angel of cobalt blue, with soft blue eyes and a crescent moon cutie mark.

“It is done,” Luna said softly. “You are no longer the pony you once were, Fluttershy.” She closed the distance between us, then put her lips on mine, kissing me softly before continuing. “You are a succubus now, and my favored love slave.”

As I saw Luna beaming before me, I couldn't help but smile back. For once, I was unashamed, and didn't care if every pony in the world knew what had happened. I was Luna's, now and forever. Still, there were a couple of things on my mind. “Um... Do you have a lot of love slaves, Mistress? Y-you don't have to answer if you don't want.”

Luna simply nodded. “Oh yes, my Fluttershy,” she replied happily. “Millions of them. I keep them locked away in a special plane of Tartarus.” Chuckling softly, she winked at me and stuck her tongue out. “They're your love slaves as well, now. You are my favorite, and none but I stand above you.”

The thought of dominating other ponies sent a deep blush on my face, and I hid behind my long, pink mane. I was making strides in my assertiveness every day, but that... Oh dear. As if sensing my discomfort, Luna wrapped her fore-hooves around me in a tight embrace.

“That's what I love about you, Fluttershy!” she exclaimed. “So humble. Worry not. I wouldn't wish you to lord over the others anyway. Just be yourself; they'll know to respect you and treat you the way you wish.”

The two of us simply stayed there, pecking each other on the lips for a moment. Closing my eyes, I saw Rainbow Dash making her way to the Ponyville market. I couldn't help but grin. “You're not going to lock Rainbow Dash away, are you?”

“Goodness no!” Luna replied. “I would not deny her the skies any more than I would deny you the animals. To take such basic pleasures from the two of you would be cruel. No, she will live in the mortal realm as long as she desires. But for now, let us watch. This is the last day of her sentence, and I can feel her lust even here.”

The two of us shared a kiss as we closed our eyes, simply enjoying each other's company as we let the show play out. It looked like Rainbow's last day under Celestia's spell was going to be very interesting. And raunchy. Very, very raunchy.

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