Changes For The Better
by MasterBrony Forever
First published

This is my first Fan-Fic ever!! Hope you enjoy it.
Canceled: I wanted to come back and fix this, but their is really no way of saving this story after so many changes in how I write, who my OC is. This hasn't been touched in years. I may come back but until then it is dead.
Another fan-fiction about a human in Equestria, only thing is; he was born here as Celestia's older brother. He has been brought back home before he meet his untimely death. A human born from a Alicorn mother, and is Prince of Equestria. Yet he runs into Vinyl, Octavia, and a teenage Discord and all there lives are changed. Want to find out more? Then read on if you so chose to.
Arriving Home
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 1:
Arriving Home
It was a calm summer afternoon in mid-June when I was walking down to the public Library to grab some research material from a summer report on the history of human life on Earth. The heat was unbearable that day so I took my time so not to over exert myself and pass out on the side walk. I was listening to my new iPhone 4S, which I had just gotten earlier that month as a gift to myself for making through another annoying year of high school. I had it loud enough so I wouldn't hear anything, and that’s just the way I like it. It would allow me to drift off into a world I had only dreamed of going to, Equestria, a land ruled by animated ponies, and other mythical creatures that I had only read about in books.
Little did I know that trip to the library would change my life forever.
I had gotten to the library no problem; took what I needed and then some extra books for entertainment’s sake and was heading for home. Yet not too far behind me was a high speed car chase and it was heading in the same direction I was going. But my music was turned up so high I couldn't hear the gun fire, sirens, and finally the tire screeches as the one of the cars drove straight toward me. At some point someone got my attention and told me to turn around and see the red Mustang GT Cobra head right for me...
Time slowed as my life, though short lived, flashed before my eyes. A tear rolled down my cheek as I remembered all the mean things I have said and done to people I would see every day that were just joking around and trying to be friendly. I had been such a jerk; no, I had been evil to them and now I would never get to make it up to them. That's when something touched my shoulder, and a beautiful, silky voice whispered something into my ear.
"It is not your time to go yet, I still need you alive, young one. I can save you and all that you have to do is say so and come with me to Equestria."
The voice was familiar but I didn't have time to put too much thought into it, I just nodded while my face was drenched in tears. Then at that very moment a blinding light of pure white flashed from behind me. Next thing I knew, I was above what would have been the place of my demise. It took me a moment but I realized I was on the back of a being I have only seen on TV and in my dreams.
The goddess herself, Princess Celestia.
I looked down at her gorgeous flowing multi-colored mane; I reached to feel it but pulled back for fear of disrespect for someone or somepony who could move the sun of her own will. I looked back behind me and saw her white wings flapping effortlessly as she carried both mine and her own body weight. Then I faced forward only to realize we were leaving Earth’s atmosphere and heading for the sun, I looked at the Alicorn with a look of terror on my face.
"Wait, Princess, I can't ..." I tried to finish, but my source of oxygen had dissipated as we left the exosphere.
I held my breath as long as I could but I couldn't take it anymore. I gasped for breath, and realized I was breathing just fine. I looked toward the Alicorn's horn and saw a bright yellow ball of energy.
"I know, young one, so I cast a spell to help you breath just as easy I as do. Now relax." She said with a reassuring smile on her beautiful face.
I started to sweat at the sight of the sweet smile, and also because we were nearing the sun. The Princess quickened her wing speed and she leaned her head down to where her horns faced directly at the core; we were then engulfed in flames, and I blacked out.
The power of the Princess' magic was too much for my mere human body to handle. When I had awakened, I was in a large bed covered with a red sheet and in the middle was Celestia's cutie mark, a bright golden sun. The room was huge and looked like it did in the show, animated.
I looked around some more before I realized something else was in the bed with me. When I reached over, I felt something smooth and extremely curved and rounded. I looked to see and found that I was in bed with a somepony and not a something. It took another look and realized what part of her my hand had wondered to; it was her flank. I pulled back and jumped out of bed but fell to the floor because my legs were not fully awake yet. I backed up to see Celestia with a look of confusion on her face.
I pulled myself back onto my feet still looking at the Princess in her eyes trying to push what I did into the back of my mind. It was a failed attempt and my face started to blush but because of my skin color you wouldn't be able to tell if I was or not but I could, but my face heating up.
"Um..." I tried to think of something to say as the Princess worked her way out of the bed and fixing it with her magic, "I am so sorry, Princess."
And I bowed while I was on my knees, it was the only thing I could think to say and do. Hoping she would send me to the dungeon or worst of the entire moon for touching her flank.
She was still confused for what I was apologizing for then she thought it over, and blushed but just slightly as she knew I had felt up her flank. She then regains her regal composure and walked over to me and used her magic to stand me up.
"There is no need to apologize, young one; it was me who brought you to my chambers to rest with you." She said with a slight blush on her cheeks.
My face had grown hotter at this, "Why would you want me a mere human to sleep in your chambers with you?"
Celestia's face was an even deeper red and turned her head to look away but still not moving her body as she said, "It gets kind of lonely in this large room. And it is nice to have my brother back to nuzzle with at night."
"Brother? Wait what?"
She didn't answer; she turned and walk towards her balcony, not giving me a chance to reply or ask questions pertaining to the matter of why she saved me or needed me alive. Instead she just slowly walked over to her balcony and looked down on the busy city of Canterlot and motioned a hoof for me to come stand next to her. Then I stepped on to the balcony with her I was about the same height of six feet minus her horn.
As soon I stepped onto the balcony, I noticed a gathering of ponies below us stare up at us in amazement, a few whispering things that made me blush again.
"What is that in the Princess' chambers?"
"Are you thinking what I am thinking?"
"Well I never thought the Princess would be into something like that."
"I guess we have a new Prince."
"What is that thing?"
At that I slowly backed off the balcony back into the chambers. Celestia followed soon after saying something, I hoped it was something to dispel those rumors already floating around. I sat on the edge bed, questions buzzing though my head and Celestia knew this.
"I can help you answer all of those questions if you need me to." She said with a knowing look on her face.
I looked at her in shock, "Okay," I started, "First did you read my thoughts? And second can you not do it again without my consent?"
"Yes and I will try." She said winking at me.
"Okay, I think. Anyway why am I here? How did you get us here? Why was I asleep, and for how long? And why would you save me? And..."
Before I could finish my machine gun fire of questions, she put a hoof over my mouth and whispered in my ear with motherly tone, "I will answer all of your questions over breakfast. And after you freshen up, I will have a bath drawn up for you, and some new clothes."
She then pointed down to my clothes that were singed and almost burned to ashes. She then called in a servant to get my bath started and have somepony cast up some clothes for a human. My once white shoes were now turned black; my light blue jeans had been torched and torn in some areas, and my shirt was almost completely gone. Which made me look so dumb because I didn’t notice any of this earlier?
I stood up from the bed and gave weak smile, "Maybe that would be a good idea; which way to the..." I was interrupted by a servant pony that had walked into the room.
She had a slight blush seeing me practically shirtless, and so close to Celestia, "I am so sorry I didn't mean to interrupt anything." She said starting to blackout of the room.
I stopped her before she could back up out the door. She was about half the height of Celestia, she was about a solid three feet in height I knelt down and said with all the kindness I could muster up, "No, you are just fine. Now what did you have to say?"
I smiled and patted her on the head, which was a habit I had adopted. I would do it to anyone shorter then myself.
She blushed as I patted her on her short cut red mane, "Thank you, Sir," she bowed, "I just want to let you know your bath and clothes are ready, if you would just follow me."
"Okay," I said as I waved to Celestia and followed the little yellow pony done the grand hall.
The hall was a mile high, and stone pillars on both sides, evenly spread out. A land pony, or unicorn guard between them, is moving only to get a good look at me, for they have never seen a human come out of the Princess' chambers. Not only that, they saluted as I passed as if I was the Princess herself. Above them patrolling that mile high ceiling were all Pegasus colts, they did the same. The ground was pure marble, I could hear not only my own footsteps but also the footsteps of the little servant pony right in front of me wearing a maid outfit. The site of the little mare's plot wiggling back and forth under that skirt and it was too cute, and a slight turn on.
So I tried to think about something else other than the little mare, such as what did the Princess want with a human? Why was I in Equestria? Why was I being treated like royalty? As I contemplated all the questions and mysteries of the world, we had arrived a large golden door were there were two land pony guards waiting at the entrance hold spears in one hoof, and they crossed in front of the door, but when I stepped forward with the servant pony, whom I now called Red. They moved their spears and the doors opened up and I walked in.
The bathroom was about half the size of the princess' slumber chambers. Which means the bathroom was too large for its own good. The tub was a clean white and filled with hot, bubbly water. The steam of the room was thick but I could see my way to the tub as the door closed behind me.
I took off my shoes, or what was left of them, and threw them in a waste basket nearby. I put my glasses on the sink; surprisingly they weren't melted, probably thanks to Celestia's magic when we flew into the sun. I was undoing the melted button on my pants then pulling them down when I heard two high pitched grunts from the other end of the room. I stopped when my pants were at my ankles to see the source of the sound. I turned to see Red and another pony that looked to be her twin except she was a unicorn. I pulled my pants back up as fast as I could.
"What are you two going in here?" I asked force but backing away.
The unicorn giggled, "Why we are here to bathe with you, also to help in any way we can."
"Red is this true?" I asked the land pony.
Red replied with a very high blush on her face, "Yes sir. It is tradition that any royal male is to be accomplice by servants to do his bidding that including..." she trailed off.
The unicorn picked up she left off, "Pleasure. We can pleasure you if you wish."
By the way they acted they were twins but polar opposites. The unicorn was a blunt, straight forward and didn't hold anything back. Red was shy, quiet and can be embarrassed by the smallest thing.
"I don't think I will need your serveries..." I said flatly as I took in everything I had just heard.
But before I could complete my sentence I was lifted into the air by a red glow off which had come the magic of Red's twin. Before I knew it, my pants had disappeared and I was fully undressed. Next thing I knew I was forced into the bubbly water. I tried to get out to tell them both to leave but they were already undressed and getting in with me. I sighed and decided to ignore them and try to relax.
After about thirty seconds of this Red's sister got bored and whispered into my ear her name, "Kat."
Afterwards she nibbled my ear and licked it, sending a wave of pleasure throughout my body; she was behind me so I couldn't see what she was going to do next, but she grabbed a bar of soap with her magic and started to scrub my back. I allowed her to do so because it wasn't too bad. At the same time Red was grabbing a bar with her hooves and pressed it against my chest and started to scrub. I had felt sorry for her; I could tell this was uncomfortable for the little timid thing.
"You can leave if you wish." I told her.
"No I would like to stay if it is all the same with you." She whispered back with a heavy blush as she started to wash lower on my front; I grabbed her hoof and looked in her lovely sliver eyes.
I opened my mouth to speak but I was at a loss for words looking into her eyes; they were amazing and it was as if she looked into my soul. I let go of her hooves. The next thing I knew, a bucket of scolding hot water was dumped on my back, rinsing all of the soap on my body. I cringed until my body had returned to its normal temperature. The bucket was being held in the air by a magical field by Kat herself.
She then dropped the bucket on the side of the tub before jumping in between me and Red. She had begun to drain the water out of tub revealing all of our soaking wet bodies. When the tub was completely empty of everything except Kat, Red, and myself. Kat then pushed me onto my back and used her magic to bind me to the tub.
"Time for the pleasure!"
The Truth: Part 1
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 2:
The Truth: Part 1
I had been chained to the bottom of the tub, where I laid wet and exposed at the mercy of a sex crazed mare.
"Wow, I have seen many colts in my day, but I have never had a human before." Kat declared.
Red had fallen back on her haunches after Kat jumped in-between us; all she could see now was her sister's plot swaying back and forth in front of her. Her face went red at the site of her sister's slit. She bent in toward the glistening lips of her sister's pussy and licked long and slow, making sure she got a taste of every bit of he sister's marehood.
Kat moaned in raw ecstasy as Red began to eat her out; at the sight of this lesbian twinsets my erection only grow harder and slightly in size. Kat eyed my cock longingly to have it in her, all the way in. After a few seconds of taking in the pure bliss of her sister's tongue driving her crazy, she took her tongue and licked the full length.
Sending me into a frenzy as I tried to pull myself out of this unwanted situation. Even though I had thought of doing this for a while. On Earth I was a clopper, but being forced into this wasn't what I wanted for my first time ever. She continued to lick from the base of my penis to the tip, giving me a tsunami of pleasure throughout my body, eventually getting me to moan in delight. Before Kat provided my first blowjob, Red who was still eating out her sister, but began to slowly move her hooves down between her haunches to rub her marehood for the very first time.
As she touched her her slit she realized it was wet and getting hotter by the second. As she brushed her hoofs against her pussy she moaned into her sister, making Kat wetter, if that was at all possible at this point. She pulled pulled away from my cock for second to take in the utter bliss of her sisters tongue.
The sister went about taking care of each other and completely not paying me any mind, which means I could try to pull free from my bonds. It was a useless struggle, I was still just a mere human with no way of escaping a magical bond. I was stopped by a hoof landing on my chest, Kat stared in to my eyes with the lustful hunger of a beast.
"What do do you think you are trying to do?" Kat scolded.
"Trying to get away form you." I screamed.
She licked me chest and worked her way down.
"S-S-STOP!!!" I managed to get out between the moans, panting, and grunts.
"Why should we?" Kat questioned, about to wrap her lips around my length.
"Because..." I tried to come up with a reason I didn't want to be in a threesome with two mares who were ready and willing.
While she was moaning in delight of her sisters tongue, her horn flickered and gave off some magical discharge which was a sign she was going to reach her peak, and soon. Yet there was an advantage to this discharge as well; it had weakened the spell she had cast to keep me bound to the bottom of the tub, this gave me a chance to pull free.
"Wait where are you going sir?” Red had asked pulling away from Kat. Kat whimpered, for she was just seconds away from a deeply needed orgasm.
I jumped out of the bath and got dressed faster than I ever had done before.
I grabbed my glasses and ran, no, sprinted out of the over sized doors, screaming, "Freedom!!"
* * * *
I was still in a state of shock from what almost happened in the bathroom just an hour before. I tried to force it to the back of my mind. I had not had time to check out my newly tailored clothes. Them being a pair of black jeans, a white t-shirt with a X across it made buy crimson red claw marks. And on the sides of my jeans had on the hips and picture of a yin and yang symbol with cross swords across them. Yet somethings was different about the swords were made of diamond. As I wandered around the castle each hallway amazed me; each one being just as grand as the last. I had walked into Celestia’s chambers to see if she was still there; she wasn't, but before I walked out and closed the oversized double doors, I noticed something laying in the corner of the room.
I walked over to find it was my backpack I had been carrying before Celestial saved me from what would have been untimely death. I cringed at the thought of what could've happened if I hadn't been brought heretic thought it over: I was brought here by an alicorn princess, somepony who I thought I never would have seen in my life let alone on Earth.
My attention was drawn back to my bag because of a small, insignificant light emanating from the front pocket of my bag. I reached in to find my iPhone; I inspected it for any damage, not that it would matter, but somehow it was still intacted. I pulled up my contacts and tried to call my friend; it did nothing, which in of itself was a sign that I wouldn't have any contact with home. I slid it back into the pocket, and started going through all the books I had from the library for my summer report. They were all still intact but somehow my clothes had almost been turned to ashes.
"Son of a..." before the profanity could escape my mouth, a guard walked into the room.
He turned in my direction and bowed; something I still hadn't gotten used to. He trotted up to me with a piece of parchment in his mouth, I reached my hand to take the paper. When I had gotten a hold of it, the guard started to bow again but this time I was quick to stop him.
"Please don't." I said, putting my hand up.
He ceased mid-bow and saluted instead, then turned and trotted out the door. I still didn't enjoy the saluting much either, but I let that one go. I looked down at the small piece of parchment, it was rolled up and it had a red ribbon with a golden seal on it. I opened it to see a note addressed to, who I think was me...
Dear Brother,
Please make your way to the feasting hall for breakfast. I will answer all of your questions then, and I hope you are ready for the answers you are about to receive.
From,
Tia
Again, there was Celestia calling me brother. This opened up a whole new world of questions I needed answered. I pondered and arranged all the questions I would ask as I walked through the halls of the castle trying to find my way to the feasting hall; I had brought my bag just to keep track of stuff. I walked around aimlessly, not having the slightest idea where I was going, for I was still new to the castle grounds. The size didn't help me learn my way around any faster.
"Sir," A guard called out as he walked up to me.
He looked like all the others, a buff white stallion with gold plated armor. I stopped in my tracks to hear what he had to say, but again because of my height I would need to kneel down to hear what he had to say.
"What do you want?" I asked.
"If you are looking for the feasting hall, follow me."
"How did you know I was looking for that?" I gave him a suspicious look.
"Princess Celestial told me you were lost. So she sent me to find you and lead you to the feasting hall."
I face palmed myself; she had been reading my thoughts yet again. So I shrugged and allowed the guard to lead the way. It was silent as we walked up the several flights of stairs to the upper levels of the castle; it felt like there were a million stairs, and my legs were about to give out any minute. Luckily, we had made it before I collapsed. He pointed to the door that I was supposed to go through and trotted away. The doors were not as grand as the ones to Celestia’s room but still way too large for their own good.
I pushed the doors aside to see a long table with a white cloth draped across it. On that cloth were mountains of food, most of it food I had never seen or was going to eat in my life, such as many different grasses and flowers. I walked around the table looking at the spread made for a vegetarian until I found the one non-plant life related food; eggs and toast.
My mouth started to water at the site of them, the eggs were scrambled with, what I hoped was, salt and pepper, and had the perfect amount of cheese melted on top. The toast was an excellent golden brown, the same tint of my skin. I inhaled the aroma deeply; my stomach growled at me for teasing it so.
"You can sit down and have your fill if you want."
I walked toward the head of the table to see Celestia and Luna giggling at the expression on my face. I composed myself as fast as possible and bowed my head to the two who deserved it, but again I was lifted up from my bow. Yet this time was pulled to the head of the table by a dark blue aurora surrounding me; it was Luna. She sat me down in the seat in front with her magic and smiled.
"Haven't we been over this already," Celestia joked with a light smile on her face, "You don't have to bow treating us like superiors all the time?"
"You two deserve it though," I said, "You raise the sun, and bring the warm day. While Luna brings the moon and the beautiful crisp night."
These sisters had blushed at this praise like it was new to them. There was a strange silence that seemed to last forever, until a familiar voice broke the silence.
"Well look who we have here. It is nice to have you back." The voice said.
I looked toward the ceiling to see a mirror image of the table below it; I nearly fell back out of my chair at the sight of this. With a second look I saw a one of the reasons Equestrian almost came to an end, Discord.
Yet something was very different about him, he looked just a tad bit smaller and younger than he had when I saw him on the show. His beard was gone except for a small tip of it showing that it had just started growing in. He had a full head of hair; a shiny silvery-white color and he had a small blue crooked unicorn horn poking out on the left side of his head and on the right was a buck's antler. He had a slight smile on his face though; he looked nicer than he had an even seemed shy.
He flew down and came face to face with me; I got a good look at his eyes but pulled away as fast I could so not to be turned to stone. For he had the eyes of a cockatrice; a creature that not only could be found in equestrian but was a mythical beast in our books back on Earth. Just one look into its eyes and it would turn you to stone; I knew this and looked away as fast I could.
"H-H-Hi." Discord whispered into my ear. He was shy, very shy.
I turned my face to meet his and was surprised I wasn't turned to stone; I met his gaze and to find it sincere and caring. I was mesmerized by the look he had given me, the whole world around had started to fade and it was just me and him looking eye to eye.
But the salience was shattered when I realized I had just crashed to the floor. I sat-up and rubbed the back of my head for it was in some slight pain; Discord was obviously blaming himself for my pain.
"Oh-no, I am so sorry," Discord said has he landed next to me and used his snake like body to wrap round my tours and pull me up off the ground. He whimpered and kept on apologizing and he nearly broke down crying.
"There is no need to be sorry; you just startled me a little."
"I-I-I know, but I am still so sorry." He frowned, then he flew out of the room as fast as his bat and Pegasus wings could carry him.
"No wait..." but he was gone, "Don't go. Was that Discord?"
"Yes it was," Celestia answered, "He has gone through a few changes since he was turned to stone. But that we can explain later; we should enjoy our meal then I shall explain all that has happened."
* * * *
"That was better than I had expected, for animated food." I said, slumping in my chair.
I had eaten more than my fair share of eggs and toast; it made up for the lack of human food. While our dishes were being taken away from the table. Celestia wiped off a rose petal from her upper lip. Once she had done this, she looked to me waiting for me to ask all the questions I had thought about up to that point.
I composed myself and began, "Is this all real, or some highly elaborate joke?"
She just smiled and looked to Luna, who had gotten up from her chair and walked over to me, "Does this feel real?"
She planted a light kiss on my cheek, which in turn made me blush and shrink back down in my chair. I had turned red enough you could see it even with the shade of brown my skin was. She giggled and trotted back around to the opposite side of the table.
I pulled myself back up, "Yes, that was very real."
I gathered my wits, "Okay, next thing, or rather a few things. Why would you save me back on Earth? Why would you bring me here? Why have I been treated like I was royalty since I have gotten here?"
Celestia put a hoof up to silence me, "How about I just explain everything at once. Would that be easier?"
"Please do." I sighed with relief.
"Well, I saved you back on Earth because it wasn't your time to die. And I brought you here to Equestrian because you belong here., with us. And before I say this next thing you better brace yourself; you have been treated like royalty because you are. You are my eldest brother..."
I had stood up from my chair at this point. I looked at the alicorn with a look of shock and horror. It as if everything I had known had just come crashing down around me. I backed away from her slowly as if she were a monster preparing to pounce on me for the kill. She got up from her seat and started walking toward me. I turned and ran as fast I could; I knew this was a useless effort trying to out run a goddess, but I was in such shock I couldn't think straight.
"Wait brother listen, I can prove it."
"No, don't call me that! You lie!" I screamed as I busted out of the feasting hall.
Celestia and Luna galloped after me, using their wings to gain all the momentum they could get. It didn't take long for them to catch up to me. I was so desperate to run away, I did what I never hoped I would have to do. I ran for the nearest window and kicked it; the glass shattered and I jumped out, yet my mind had finally caught up to me.
My eyes grew to the point that the only part you would able to see was the pupil.
I just jumped out of a window, I thought to myself, a smirked at the though, I was saved on Earth to die in the place of my dreams. My life was horrible on Earth anyway; family driving off the deep-end, and now this dream has become a nightmare.
I smiled as tears spilled from my eyes. I fell head first for the solid concrete. Celestia had to use her magic to gain more speed to catch up. She wasn't going to make it in time to save me again; I was going to die, and there wasn't anything anyone or anypony could do to save me.
The Truth: Part 2
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 3:
The Truth: Part 2
As I cascaded down to my death I closed my eyes, waiting for hard and unforgiving concrete sidewalk to end my life. That's when I was greeted by another angelic voice which spoke to me.
"My child, why do you do this?"
Next thing I knew I was in a white room; the walls, ceiling, and floor were all a pure solid white, and it was void of anything living or non-living. I was standing on what I hoped was the floor and also felt like the middle of the room. I was shocked, but after the last twenty-four hours, well, nothing surprised me anymore.
I started to walk, hoping I would find something, like a way out. As I moved about the room, it seemed to get bigger; it felt as if it had no end to it. I turned to check if I was walking in the correct direction, which was a useless effort. The way the room was made nobody would have any sense of direction, but something was, off, when I turned around. I saw two crimson red leather chairs, and in between was a small round coffee table.
"Have a seat." It was the same voice as before, it was beautiful, soft, and had a motherly tone to it.
I was still skeptical about listening to it, and yet I trusted it, I felt like I have known it all my life. It compelled me to move forwards and take a sit in one of the chairs. I looked to the other chair not seeing anyone or anything there. While all my attention was drawn to the other leather seat there was a small clinking sound. It had emanated from the once empty coffee table next to me; when I looked down at the table their were two cups of hot tea that had materialized. My head jerked back out of pure surprise.
"Is anybody here?" I asked the void, looking around for the source of the tea. Getting the answer I expected, nothing.
I looked back to the once empty chair next to me and saw something, well, somepony next to me, it as another Alicorn. Her coat and wings were an off-white, and not the pure bright white of the room or Celestia. Her mane was a deep shade of red, which perfectly complemented her sapphire blue eyes. She smiled at me, she had that look as if she has known me all her life.
At this point I was once again in a state of utter shock and amazement, (so much for not being surprised anymore) for I knew who this Alicorn so happen to be. I did a double-take to make sure I wasn't imaging this being before me. She had gotten up from her chair and trotted in front of me, and I was able to get a look at her cutie mark; it was a quill pen dipped in a ink well. This was a sure sign as what to she was.
"L-L-Lauren Faust?!?!?" I shuttered, out of both confusion and excitement. My mind was sent into a tailspin, as I tried to gather my thoughts to form a coherent sentence.
"Yes, I am. But you may call me, mother."
My mind had stopped working all together; just when I thought my life couldn't get any weirder; Lauren Faust was claiming to be my mother."
"B-B-But," I swallowed hard, "How can that be possible? Everything that has happened, how could you be my mother?"
"Let me explain." She cleared her throat, "It was many years ago, Equestria and the rest of this world had already existed. I had begun to form it into the amazing landscape it is today. I had gone to Earth to share this new world, but seeing how dark and corrupt that planet is. I made the connection of the world but in a small way that you enjoyed watching." She had stopped to look back at me with a small glint in her eyes.
"You mean," I paused for what felt like an eternity, "That the show I love and know, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, was made so you could connect this world with Earth?"
"Why yes. That world was too far gone to see the light this world had to offer. But just before that I had you," She pointed to me with a hoof, "I had given birth to you and was proud to call you my son. You were just as strong as me and your father, who is no longer with us today."
I could tell that this was hard for her to say. Tears welled up in her eyes; she was on the brink of becoming Niagara Falls, but she pulled herself together so as not to look weak in front of me.
"Okay then, if all you say is true, who was my 'father' then?" I asked with not so much as a hint of being even remotely convinced. She frowned and stood up from her chair and trotted over to me.
I pulled back not sure what she was going to do me. She walked toward me, her horn started to glow and give off some heat and energy. She leaned toward me and gave me a big wet surprise; a kiss. My eyes widened at the touch of her lips to mine; this was my first kiss ever in my entire life. It had felt better then I had hoped, and my eyes closed as I leaned into the kiss and enjoyed the subtle taste of sugar, spice, and everything nice.
We stayed like this for a few moments, and then there was an explosion of light. When it faded I realized the passionate kiss I was immersed in just moments ago had been broken. When I looked around all there was was the sky, and when I looked below me, I was above a forest. My mind caught up to me at this point; I looked around to find out where I was.
I was standing in the clouds above a very erotic scene in the forest. It was Lauren, who seemed to be highly excited with the smell pheromones in the air, and with what looked like...
"A DRAGON?" I screamed, but instantly regretted it as my hand rushed to covered my mouth. I prayed to, well... we'll just say Celestia, that I was not heard for fear of being torn to shreds by the dragon.
But he didn't seem to notice me at all; so I yelled to test if it was true, if they couldn't hear me at, they couldn't. I had nowhere else to go, that and I was held stationary by some invisible force, so I decided to stay and watch the scene below play out. It was very strange to start with but I quickly understood why; the dragon was being backed into a corner by Lauren, which was somewhat of a shock, but the dragon seemed to be in fear of his life rather than the other way around.
Lauren cast a spell similar to the one Kat had cast on me, henceforth chaining him to the forest floor. She then hopped on top of him and positioned herself in a way that her wet sex was right above where the dragons member would be. She licked her lips and started to grind against him furiously, and started to moan. After a moment of just plain derp-syndrome I made sense of what was taking place before; Lauren was in heat, and she was about to mount a full grown dragon.
The clouds started to speed by me as the scene below started to fade into nothingness; I was moved to a new scene. It looked to be a hospital room; with a gurney, ultra sound, and medical drugs scattered around the room. As I took a closer look, I nocticed Laurn laying in the gurney, sweating with tears rolling down her cheeks. She held in her forearms a small mass, it was alive for it wiggled around and moved the blanket exposing two little black fore-hooves that reached out for its mother.
I took me a moment to realize but next to the bed was a dragon, the very same from the unneeded unwanted forest scene. He wore a proud smile on his face as he looked toward the Alicorn baring his first and only child.
"What should we name him?" Larun asked the dragon.
The dragon scratched the back of his head as he pondered over the name of the born foal, until he was finally struck with an idea. He leaned down and wrapped his arms and tail around his new family, then he stated, "Draco. That shall be his name."
"I think that's a fine name." Lauren nuzzling her new born as the new foal. It yawned and nuzzled into Lauren's chest, feeling the warmth of her coat and hearing the sound of her heart allowing him to sleep.
And for the second time the clouds sped passed me as I moved on to the next scene, but instead of stopping and watching it I just keep moving. The scene flying into my mind, as memories, Celestia and Luna being born by Lauren from of the sun and the moon. Using magic to give them shape, form, life; and infusing her DNA thus making them her daughters and the Draco's sisters.
I watched as the young foal from before grow up. He had gained a mare like facial structure, but his body grew match the body type of a Alicorn; so,he had his mother body. I could tell these were his thoughts and memories, one of the worst being the death of his father. That's when it all came together, one last memory crash into me. Draco had died, but the way he had died had caught me off guard, he has threatened to destroy Equestria and Lauren, Celestia, and Luna rose up to fight against him.
The battle had raged on for years between Draco and his family. Draco had the upper hand, for he was stronger thanks to the power granted to him by his father when he was conceived. He held the power of a dragon and a Alicorn, forming a potent mixture of raw magic and strength. But in a last ditch effort they subdued him, but in the end it cost Celestia and Luna a brother. And worst of all it cost Lauren her first, last, and only son.
* * * *
My eyes opened; I was still cascading down towards Canterlot(this was a long ass fall) and Celestia was still trailing behind in hopes by some miracle she could save me. She had shouted something to me when see noticed me looking at her, but I heard nothing.
But I could read lips well enough to know she screamed, "Draco!!!! I won't lose you again!!!!!"
It was then I felt searing pain at my shoulder blades. I screamed in pain as the skin over that part of my body tore open, blood began poring out, but just as quickly as it had started; it stopped. A set of bones jolted out of the torn flesh, they resembled the bone structure of Pegasus wings. They were soon fallowed by a thin layer of muscle, nerves, and skin. They didn't stay this way much longer, because soon after they were fallowed by feathers that were so black they made Nightmare Moon look like Celestia. A silvery-white pattern lining every individual feather.
"Fly my son," a voice called to me, who I quickly recognized as Lauren, "Fly! Become the Prince of Equestria!"
I looked back down toward the ground seeing only a few feet away. I had no idea how to control the wings save for flying, but a long slumbering instinct took hold. As I was only one foot away from a very unwanted mess I angled my wings, and with one large pump; I stopped. My wings beat in a way that keep my upside down by keep my from giving the concrete a kiss goodnight.
With yet another pulse of my wings I set myself back up toward Celestia. I meet with her as she flew to me still at high speeds but had slowed to the point were I could grab hold of her waist and pull closer to me as I flew us back to the castle. She was in shock at the sight of my newly formed wings, she whimpered and buried her face in my chest, and began to sob gently.
"I-I-I...am so sorry... for everything... I have... put you through..." She forced out through the sobs, tears dripping on to my shirt tight for comfort.
I kept flying still in shock over all pieces that had formed together in my mind. I looked down to her, and smiled, "No, it was my fault, I over reacted. It was just too much for my mortal mind to take, but now I see..."
She looked up to me with tear the sign of more tears building up in her eyes. She had somehow managed to form a look of slight confusion on her face, but that disappeared as I kissed the base of he horn with brotherly love.
Then I whispered into her ears which had been laid back, "Mother," at the sound of this her ears perked right up, "mother has shown me the truth. She has shown me my passed, It..." I paused, "It is still difficult for me to full understand everything but I do have one thing to say about all of this."
She leaned in closer, eager to hear my words.
"I am back. Your brother..."
At this point she had become a utter neck as a girn was born onto her face and tears of joy welled up in her eyes. She cuddled back into my chest and just went for the ride; I had somehow gotten the upper body strength to carry her back to the castle.
"Yes Celestia, your brother, Draco, is back."
Not another word was said as I flew us up to the broken window. My life had changed a lot over the last twenty-four hours, but it was only going to change more, and all those changes are going to be Changes for the Better.
Transformation
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
I would like to thank Thomas R for Pre-Reading and Editing!
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 3:
Transformation
I had flown myself and Celestia up to the broken stained glass window; as we drew closer to it we could hear the panic from royal guards who had gathered after I broke the window. Celestia giggled at the sound of her guards frantically running around, not knowing what to do. When I reached the window I floated outside for a few moments, allowing the guards to move back in awe. Because of the sun directly behind me all they could see was my silhouette.
The guards backed away as I made my way through the window. I landed and tried to let go of Celestia, but she had other plans. She held on to me not wanting to let me go, nuzzling into my chest, but after noticing the guards were still staring, she pulled away and blushed in embarrassment.
She dismissed the guards, turned back to me and smiled, "Brother...You have your memory back." She began to tear up again, "Now, " She began clopping her hooves together, "we shall throw a party in celebration of your return."
"I don't think that would be need..." I was stopped as my wings began to retract instantly back to my body. I unleashed a blood curdling scream which brought Celestia to my side, as she watched my eyes widen to the size of dinner plates.
Then, I cried blood. My eyes began to glow deep sinister red, as I continued to bleed my eyes out. But all went silent as I collapsed to the ground, the last thing I heard was Celestia screaming "DRACO!?!," and everything going red.
* * * *
Now let's go down to PonyVille.
* * * *
"Come on Tavi, you're gonna make me late!" A white unicorn with a dark blue mane with light blue neon streaks said.
"Vinyl I have practice tomorrow, I need to be well rested," a gray earth replied tossing here black mane back to clear her vision. She clawed at the ground trying to get a grip on anything.
Vinyl Scratch, local DJ for PonyVille, and Octavia a Bass player for the Royal Canterlot Symphony, had been strolling through the streets late that night, or rather, Vinyl was walking while dragging Octavia late at night, with the help from her magic. Vinyl and Octavia were close friends, even though nopony knew why, they were complete opposites. Vinyl was loud, rude, messy, and was the definition of a tom-colt. Though she never showed any emotion what-so-ever. Octavia was quiet, polite, clean, and a acted like a normal mare. Whatever brought these two together, well, nopony ever knew.
That night Vinyl had to get to work at a club just outside of PonyVille, and she had brought Octavia to give her a taste of her night life. "Come Tavi, I went to that dumb Orchestra Concert with you last week, so the least you could do is come to one of my gigs," and maybe a bit of revenge as well.
"Hey, I took you so you could experience some relaxing music instead of those annoying...what were they called again?" She tapped her chin as she thought.
"Wubs?" Vinyl answered.
"Yes... that 'wubs'."
"Well those 'wubs' are what keep food on the table. You forget you only perform and get paid a few times a year when there is a huge event in Canterlot."
She sighed, she hated when Vinyl was right. So she quite struggling and just let Vinyl drag her to the club.
When they arrived they were at a rather plan building, which would have looked abandoned if it wasn't for the extremely large, bright green neon sign, which simply was an 'X'. Not only that but the line into the club wrapped around the building, and several surrounding it. Octavia state of shock at the sight of her very first club, Vinyl was still wearing that blank expression she was known for while not behind the mixing table. Her purple sunglasses hid any reaction she might of had, she hardly ever removed them so nopony could read her.
As Vinyl walked to the entrance, two of the biggest stallions Octavia had ever seen moved aside to let her in, Octavia followed suit. When she entered all she could hear was the music with the volume cranked up to the point if they could cause your ears to bleed if you were to close to the speakers. All she could see were all young mares and colts dancing, and jumping around without fear in the world. Everpony's mane and coat were glistening with sweat from the constant movement and closed spaces.
Bright strobe lights had been the only source of light, otherwise she wouldn't able to see her own hoof in front of her own face.
"AMAZING ISN'T IT?" Vinyl shouted over the music.
Octavia reeled back bumping into a colt who was making-out with some random ass mare near a pillar, but they were way too into each other to notice. She had totally forgotten Vinyl was with her.
"VINYL! THIS PLACE IS OUT OF CONTROL!" She shouted back.
"THAT'S THE POINT! OH, AND WHILE WE'RE HERE DON'T CALL ME VINYL. CALL ME BY MY STAGE NAME, DJ-PON3!"
Octavia gave her a quizzical look, but nodded in agreement, for she couldn't scream for fear of voice lose. At this, Vinyl worked her way to the stage, after pointing Octavia to the bar. Vinyl then jumped on stage and stopped the music, and grabbed the microphone and held it to the speaker creating an ear shattering noise to get everpony's attention toward the stage,
Once she was satisfied with the disruption she had caused she pulled the mic away to make her announcement.
"WUB-A-DUB-DUB MOTHABUCKERS! THAT RIGHT EVERYPONY, THE ONE, THE ONLY DJ-PON3 IS HERE!!!!"
The crowd went from dead silence to a roaring waves of cheers, whistling, and pony's clopping there hooves together. Octavia had made it to the bar at this point and had a cup of water, to remain sober and remain pure for that future special somepony. She looked back toward the stage as she saw Vinyl wheel out her own special equipment and pull out two records fresh and ready for the scratching table.
"NOW LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED!"
Another wave of cheers were given, but were quickly drowned out by the sudden explosion of sound waves. Octavia had covered her ears to start with so that her eyes drums wouldn't shatter, the music was unbearable but she adjusted to the volume. She sat there for hours as Vinyl performed song after song after song. Octavia had gone through over a gallon of water, which wasn't keeping her awake which is what she need to be right now.
Multiple colts had already tried to take advantage of her thinking that all the glasses we from drinks, and the fact she keep dozing off for a few short seconds didn't help much either. But thankfully the bar tender was a mare unicorn who had kept the bastards off, because she could tell Octavia wasn't used to this kind of scene.
"Thanks," was the only thing she was able to spit out at this point. The bartender only smiled and gave her a shot glass filled with something golden. When she drunk it she was instantly awake, and aware of her senses had sharpened slightly.
A few more hours passed before Vinyl had ended her performance, she had been drenched in sweet from the heat of the strobe lights focused on her. Her mane was even more matted, if that was even in the slightest bit possible, but she still had the same expressionless look. She had somehow managed to keep her shades intact, but the same couldn't be said for the dozens of broken records.
"Okay now that you are done can we go home now?" Octavia questioned.
"No not yet there is one more thing I have to do, then I can get my bits and we can leave." Vinyl replied with a hint of regret and fear in her voice.
"Vinyl... is everything... alright?
"Yeah, this is an average day for me. I will be back."
Octavia wasn't the slightest bet convinced, but she knew better than to continue to argue with her, Vinyl was stubborn when it came down to certain topics. This happened to be one of those topics.
Vinyl walked her way to the back door which lead to an alleyway. Swaying her hips far more than any mare should have, which had gathered the attention of four rather drunk stallions. As she exited out the back door four stallions followed, Octavia could tell this could be trouble, she rushed through the crowd and made it to the door in time to here the shattering of glass and a muffled cry. Then a bright flash of light, meaning a spell had been cast.
"Gag the whore!" A stallion said.
"You like it don't you...uuurrppp...you little slut." Another one said with drunken gusto.
Octavia ran to door peaked out to see an unholy sight taking place before her. Vinyl, her best friend in all of Equestria; was getting raped.
Fury over took her, and with one swift buck Octavia had knocked the door off which collided with one of Vinyl's attackers smashing him to the brick wall opposite. Vinyl looked up from the ground with her glasses slightly cracked, motioning for her that she should run before it was too late. It was already too late, as Octavia registered what Vinyl's signal, she was then pushed against a nearby dumpster and held in place by a one of drunk stallions.
"Well...hic...look what we...uurrrppp...have here boys. A new toy."
Octavia struggled, but she knew it was useless, but she kept fighting hoping to Celestia she could break free and get help. But it didn't take long for the stallions to gag her, yet right before she had been gagged she screamed with all she had. The club music was still so loud that no one could hear her, she began to cry, for she knew she was going to be making out of this alleyway in a body-bag.
* * * *
Back to Canterlot Castle
An hour earlier
* * * *
"D-D-Draco. Wake up." A voice whispered into my ear.
My eyes snapped open to see Discord smiling and wearing a Nurses cap; lucky for me his body would allow him to wear a full nurses out-fit. But he still had a slight blush on his face, he was just a tad bit embarrassed wearing it. I smiled back and patted him on the head, which caused him to blush even more furiously, as his tail wagging side to side in joy.
"Hey Discord." I said cheerfully, patting him on the head.
It was night so I guessed I passed out or something after landing inside the castle with Celestia. I looked around the room, it wasn't Celestia's room for she was nowhere to be seen. It could have been Luna's room, because of how dark some of the furniture was, but there was an equal amount of while furniture as well, as I looked down to my sheets I saw a Yin-Yang symbol embroidered into the sheets. Upon further inspection I realized the entire room was made to look like same way.
I looked back up at Discord who was sitting at the foot of the bed still staring at me with a slight blush. As I reached to scratch the back of my head, instead of feeling my hand it was a hoof. My brain had stopped all together, I tore the blanket off my body to see a pony's body in place of my own.
I jump out of the bed and on to my hind legs and began to stubble around the room, I was having another freak out, as I remembered a pony can't keep balanced that well on their hind legs. I was about to crash to the floor until discord used his serpent like body to wrap around me for the second time and force me back on to the bed.
"S-s-s-stop! Please!"
I looked into his cockatrice eyes and my body went limp from the worrying gaze he was giving me. I had scared him, apparently this younger Discord was just as fragile as Fluttershy. I stopped my struggle took a deep breath and calmed down.
"Okay Discord, I'm calm now. So can you get off of me please."
Discord wiped his eyes, nodded and climbed off and sat next to me on the bed, his reptile and horse feet dangling off the side. I inspected my body further while Discord just watched. I got on all four hooves, which felt strange yet natural, and trotted over to a near-by vanity to get a look at my face.
What caught my attention first was how good my eye sight had gotten, I could always see in the dark but now it seemed as bright as day, so I didn't stubble over anything on my way there. As I examined myself I realized I had a unicorn horn as well as my wings from earlier, I was an alicorn, height and all. My mane was a wild out of random style that just sat on top of my head; it didn't flow like my sisters did, which I was thankful for.
I turned around to take a look at my tail; it was just as black as my mane but had some silvery white streaks in it, and it looked like three different size scythes were jetting out from above my plot; I was Draco, I was a prince, I was me again. I looked back to mirror to get a better look at my eyes.
"Well, now I see one thing father had given me," for I had the eyes of a dragon, which would explain the enhanced vision. My left eye was emerald green, while the other was a deep purple, the difference was interesting but not something I would dwell on. They were extremely large too, I didn't think they could get any bigger.
This caused me giggle to myself thinking about all the Fan-Fiction writers out there, and how they always say, 'their eyes grew to the size of dinner plates', when they were already that large to began with.
"You remember everything don't you?" Discord asked.
"Yes I do. And it feels great to be back home! But one thing is still puzzling me, how did I change in an alicorn? I was a human last time I remembered."
"When you arrived back with Celestia after jumping out the window your wings retracted back into your body," Discord began explain what happened. "You screamed, and your eyes started glowing red and bleeding... then you collapsed."
I shivered at the thought of my eyes bleeding, "Well that must have been terrifying to see," I said as I worked my way over to the balcony.
"It was, but then as Celestia tossed you on to her back and rushed down to royal doctors hoping they could do anything to help. But before she could arrive there, the bleeding had stopped and your body began to change."
I was at the looking out at the amazing land of Equestria. The land I had been part of many years ago, I smiled, as Discord flew over to my side. All was peaceful and quiet during Luna's wondrous night, I reached into my newly reformed memories, reliving everything piece by piece, but that didn't last much longer.
My ears twitched as a high frequency squeal hit my ear drum. Looked toward a small town in the distance where I believed it to be coming from. I looked to Discord who had heard the squeal as well and was cowering behind me.
"What was that?"
"I-I-I don't know but it doesn't sound good."
My spine trembled as the sound rang through my head again. It sounded like somepony was being attacked.
I stepped onto the balcony ledge and prepped my wings for flight, even with all my memory back I still have no clue on how to control them. Discord slithered about my neck and meet me face to face.
"Y-y-you don't plan on going out there do you?"
"Discord," I stated forcefully, "somepony is in trouble. And it is my duty as Draco, The Prince of Equestria, to help anypony who needs it."
Discord didn't argue, but instead just snaked around my neck even more then he already was.
"Well if you're going...then I am going with you."
"Thanks Discord. Now let's go!" I announced as I jumped out the window.
Still having no idea how to control the wings I closed my eyes and tried to tap back into the memories of my passed life.
****
"Come on young Draco. You can do it." A rough patchy voice said.
"But father, it's so high. What if I can't do it?" This was more high pitched, that of a foal, me to precise.
"You can Draco, and if not I will be here to catch you." The deep voice spoke to me again.
I looked down from the balcony on which I stood to see my father. He was large and black with a silver underbelly flying around as if her were swimming in a pool. He looked up to me with deep purple eyes, that spoke nothing but words of encouragement.
****
It was a simple heartfelt moment with me and my mother and father. I had translated the old English they spoke into, what I consider now-a-days, normal English.
****
"Draco, if you couldn't do it then why would you have wings." I looked up to see my mother standing beside me smiling. The bright warm sun making her look even more magnificent.
My father was flying belly up at this point. Arms at the ready to catch me if my wings weren't strong enough to support me.
"O-o-okay, I-I-I will try."
I jumped onto the ledge of my balcony an looked down on to my father. My short wings stood at the ready, I closed my eyes a leaped forward. I flapped my little wings with all my might; when I opened my eyes I was flying. I so happy with my accomplishment I forgot to keep flapping, but luckily my father was right below to catch me.
"Amazing work my boy," my father said, tossing me up and down as we flew back to mother.
"Yes amazing work Draco!" My mother said to us as we landed my her side.
I jumped out of my father's grasp and began to jump with joy. My parents stood watching me, their little pride and joy, their personal ray of sunshine.
"Come on for a family hug. How about we shall celebrate your first flight?" My father and mother held out their fore arm motioning for me to join in.
Without hesitation I jumped up in the family hug. Mother nuzzling me closely, and father hugging us both; his wings and tail encased us, showing that no matter what, he would never let any harm come to his family.
****
With this strong feeling burning in my heart I pumped my wings one time, and I had full control over my extra appendages. Discord holding on for dear life as I flew us toward the sound of the noise at a break-neck pace.
As we closed in on the small village, I was puzzled, "Did that sound really come from here?"
"It might have, why?" Discord asked.
I shook my head, "But that doesn't make any sense, why would a squeal of terror be coming from Ponyville?"
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Author Notes: I would again like to thank Thomas R for Pre-Reading and Editing!
And here is my OC, or Draco from my DeviantART: Draco
Rescue: Part 1
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
I would like to thank Thomas R for Pre-Reading and Editing!
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 5:
Rescue: Part 1
As I flew toward Ponyville, I questioned why a sound of horror would be coming from a place as peaceful as this. Discord and I continued looking for the source of the sound. We flew over multiple land marks that I recognized from the show: the Library, Sugar Cube Corner, Carousel Boutique, and Town Hall. I would have stopped to ask if anypony had heard anything, but before I could attempt a landing, another site caught my eye.
"Hey, Discord?"
"Yes, Draco?" he said, still looking, "What is it?"
"When did Ponyville get night clubs?"
Discord just gave me a puzzled look before turning in the direction I was facing. I saw his jaw hit the ground, he was in utter shock at the bright neon sign in the distance. It read simply 'X' in bright neon green, and was located right at the edge of Ponyville.
I don't know why, but something was telling me that the source of the noise we had heard earlier was coming from there. I began to steer myself that way. As we closed in Discord wrapped around my neck and held himself closer for comfort. I felt the warmth his body was giving off, it was relaxing, but I still had to focused on the task at hand, well, at hoof.
As we closed in we could hear the sound of the bass of the clubs music. I began to bang my head along with the music as I flew my way towards the club. Discord was covering his ears, he was obviously not very fond of the volume. He could only bare it for so long, with a quick snap of his eagle claw he shrunk and buried himself into my mane. I giggled at the feel of the serpent like deity moving atop my head.
"What is that noise?" Discord yelled through my mane.
"I don't know what you call it here, but on my planet it would be called 'Dub Step', it's a type of music." I replied.
We landed on top of the building, luckily without gathering the attention of anypony in the line outside of the club. I looked around, my mind was telling me this is where I had to be to find the source of the screech.
"Draco," Discord said popping out of my mane, "why have we stopped?"
"I think this is..." I began, but the sound of glass shattering grabbed my attention.
I galloped to the edge of one side of the building and peeked over the side to see what was the noise was. But what I saw instead, shocked and angered me.
What I was seeing, was two mares being beaten and used my four highly intoxicated stallion. But what was even more off was that only one of the mares was being used as a sex toy, while the other was just being beaten next to a dumpster by one of the stallions. The mare that was being used was one that I noticed from the show, a background pony, but one I thought was best pony nonetheless, Vinyl Scratch. The one being beaten was on a equal level of importance to me as the other, Octavia.
"Draco? What are you...?" Discord started protruding from my mane, but was at a loss for words seeing the scene below. He covered his mouth with his lion paw as he gasped.
If I took a closer look I would have noticed that Vinyl and the four unnamed stallions had genitalia, while Octavia on the other hoof has, well, as she looked in the show, no genitalia at all. (You people know what I mean)
But my mind was raging, and I wasn't able to see this little detail. My heart rate began to quicken at a unnatural rate, yet my blood was running cold. I stumbled back from the side of the roof, and landed on my back, planting my hooves against my head as a sharp pain ran like a mad mare on my brain. Discord, being the timid worry wart that he had become, instantly grew back to normal size and began trying to help me.
"Discord...s-s-stay...b-b-back!"
But Discord, even with his shyness, didn't listen. He was worried about my well being, so he wrapped himself around me, and nuzzled into my chest whimpering. My body continued to thrash around, before settling down, unmoving.
A dark energy coursed through my veins, and my teeth sharpened to a deadly point, which fit into the crevasses between one another perfectly. My once soft coat was quickly replaced with a thin layer of clear scales. Discord felt this and inspected my body as the slow and subtle changes took place. My eyes snapped open, they had changed to a crimson red from the once emerald green and purple they once were.
"Draco?" Discord was still clinging to me as if his life depended on it. He was scared by what he was seeing, and the dark presence that had appeared in the air around us.
Without warning, I shot into the air. The once clear night sky became a hell as storm clouds began to form around, thunder crashed and lightning lit up the sky around me. Discord held tight, but was whimpering like there was no tomorrow. I looked up to the clouds with a murderous gaze, and inhaled deeply before letting out an earth shattering banshee screech.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!"
Which didn't go unnoticed by the civilians below. The young colts and mares waiting to get inside the club began to run, screaming for their homes. Even the bouncers tried their best not to be freaked out over what they had just heard. The club inside was still lively, my hollowing screech must have just sound like it was part of the music.
The dark powers that pulsated through my veins began seeping from my body, it was overflowing. The energy clung to the closest thing that it could, which happened to be Discord. His arms let go of my body, before he started thrashing around, as my power was sent from me to him. But the energy just went in and unlocked his power, his Draconequs power, his Periculum had been unlocked.
His body began to settle from his wild thrashing state arms slumping down to the sides of his body. I still floated there putting my hooves to my temples, shaking my head as the power was still too much, it had been too long since I last let loose like this. While I tried to gain my composure, I was unaware of the changes that happened to Discord. His thick healthy hair that sat atop his head had moved down to his chin, bring back his full beard. His body grew to its original size and mass; his snagle tooth jetted out of his mouth. His misshapen unicorn horn and antler grew as well.
Once he was done with his change, I was done with my pain in the plot headache. We floated there, as our bodies adjusted to this increase in every ability we had. The storm clouds still surrounded us, the evil scene below had kept on going as if nothing had happened, but a flash of lightening and a clap of thunder broke us out of our trances.
In one swift motion I sent myself hurdling towards the alley way. We weren't in our, well, usual state of mind for the time. All we thought of was the different ways to kill four heavily wasted stallions without making too much of a mess. As we moved we mentally agreed that, if there wasn't a blood bath, it wouldn't be any fun.
* * * *
"H-h-help..." Octavia forced out before she was thrown into the wall yet again.
The stallion who had performed this deed walked up with a broken glass in hoof, "No...hic...pony can...bleach...you," It was clear he was done beating her around and was prepared to have the same sick and twisted 'fun' the other three were having with Vinyl.
He pulled her up off the ground and was ready to drag her over to Vinyl to perform the spell on her, until...
Crunch...Splat.
His head decorated the ally wall with blood and brain matter. Octavia was still cowering in fear, for the stallions hoof still held onto her hair but didn't stay that way as his headless body fell limp on the gravel next to her. The blood that ran down the wall found its way into her mane, she passed out from the amount of bloodshed she had lost during the assault. The other three stallions looked at what had just transpired. One second he was there, the next, his skull was completed obliterated.
They looked for what could have done this, but stumbled around doing so. Until one of them spotted something standing at the end of the alleyway, it looked to be two figures, one a rather large pony, and the other, a snake like being constricting around the ponies neck. All that was easily visible was their silhouette, mine to be precise.
I moved slowly, until I stepped into their vision.The stallions grabbed the nearest weapon they could find in their drunken state, this would actually make things more fun. Vinyl was unaware of what was taking place behind her, she was still tied up and bent over a trash can. But she had been so wore down and used, she couldn't stay awake for long, she blacked out. And it was better that she did, more of the wall was about be painted red.
Rescue: Part 2
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
I would like to thank Thomas R for Pre-Reading and Editing!
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 6:
Rescue: Part 2
As I walked into view of the wasted stallions, the blood and brain matter from the dead stallion covered my right hoof and part of my face. I was smirking with delight as I raised my hoof to my mouth and slowly began to lick the blood clean off. Discord began to follow suit in after his slithered down my neck and around my forearm, and began to help in the clean-up my little mess.
After my hoof was clean, I began to move forward again. One of the stallions began to charge at me, well what I thought was at me, he was still swaying side to side. He held a wooden plank in his hooves, which meant he was standing on his hind legs, which made it even more difficult to run. When he reached me he swung at me with all he could, but in a flash Discord's lion paw blocked and shattered the wooden plank.
Discord grabbed the stallion by the face and dragged him along as we moved closer to the others, "You really shouldn't have tried to do that." Discord's voice had a deep overlay to his normal voice as he spoke to the stallion his grasps.
"Please let me go!" The drunk was now sober enough to think rationally.
"As you wish."
He was sent flying through the air into a dumpster head first, knock unconscious, but not dead, well at least not yet. The next two weren't sober yet, so they tried to attack my sides but I snapped my wings open. Close lining the both of them.
"You guys are no fun," Discord said pouting and crossing his arms.
I remand silent, never opened my mouth to speak, not even once. Even though I little control of my own action, the goal remained the same; rescue Vinyl and Octavia.
Discord looked down to me, and I looked up to him. We had a mutual understanding that we they weren't even in our league. So we shouldn't waste out time here. Discord lifted all the stallions up with his Periculum, his golden yellow energy encased around there bodies. He placed directly in my sight's facing the exit of the ally way.
"Would like to do the honors Draco?" Discord asked.
I simply smirked and inhaled deeply, allowing my Draconic insides to the work. And with that exhale a blaze of black and red fire on the remain stallions. They screamed and howled in agony and pain as the fire consumed them. After a few seconds I closed my muzzle cutting the flames off, and Discord released the burning corpse as they fell limp and unmoving to the ground. They were gone, and never to be heard from again.
Not seconds after the fire in the ally way had receded had a sharp pain jetted through our heads. I fell back onto my haunches as my hooves rushed to the sides of my head in pain. Discord had done the same our bodies thrashed around as we heard a voice...
"Your bodies is too weak to handle the power you have awoken. I have rested dormant in you for this long I can wait just a little bit long," the voice said mockingly. "You have used to much energy far to soon and far to quickly. But don't you fret little Draco, our time to rule this Kingdom will come."
The voice faded into nothing, yet we still thrashed around as our bodies changed. Discord shrunk down in size; his beard fell off his chin and his snow white hair returned to it rightful place atop his head. His antler and unicorn horn got changed back to a shorter length as well. He collapsed with his lower body still collided around my torso.
My change was more drastic and pain full. My body contorted, limbs snapped into a position, skin and torn off as new skin replaced it. Bones shrunk and grew, moved location inside my body. My horn reversed itself into my skull causing me to scream in pain. At the end of it all, I was human again, the first change was practicably painless. This one was different, it was more painful because it was a forced transformation.
Vinyl, Octavia, Discord, and myself laid there in that ally way for what seemed like an eternity; it had only been an hour. My body was still in a great deal of pain but I had to force my self up, I knew what I had done but it was still like a blur. I pulled myself up off the ground and limped over to Vinyl and Octavia. I inspected myself on along the way, I was covered in my own blood from the forced transformation.
I looked back up to Vinyl and Octavia, "V-V-Vinyl. . .Oc-tavia," I stumbled and fell to my knees, "I..." ...cough...splatter... I looked down to see I had coughed up some dark red blood.
I was in pretty bad shape, but I had reached Vinyl and Octavia. I pulled Discord's upper body up from dragging across the ground and pulled Vinyl and Octavia into my embrace. I had to get them some help, we were all losing blood and losing it fast.
I forced my wings out of my spine, screaming in pain by the amount of the energy it was taking, energy that I didn't have. I lifted them all and began to flap my wings as best I could. I went as fast as my broken and weakened body would allow. I closed in on the castle, my wings failing me even more then before.
"Tia..." Was the last thing I said as my wings just retracted.
I lost my grip on the mares and the Draconequs. We went crashing in through one of the windows of the castle. Luckily it was Celestia's bed chamber window. Celestia shot up as he heard the glass break, time slowed for here she saw myself, Vinyl, Octavia, and Discord come in.
"Tia...help..." Was all I could get as we flew the window. We skid across the floor and came to a halt, blood in our wake. Celestia jumped out of her bed and galloped over to our bodies.
"GUARDS!! GET HELP!!!" Celestia shouted in the Royal Canterlot Voice. Something she hasn't done in years.
The Decency Spell
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
I would like to thank Thomas R for Pre-Reading and Editing!
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 7:
The Decency Spell
"Young Prince Draco, you have seen only a fraction of your true power. Being the son of not only an Alicorn, but a Dragon as well," a voice spoke to me, "This give a unprecedented amount of magical energy and power."
I couldn't move, I couldn't speak, all I could do was listen as I floated in the dark void of my psyche.
"We will use this power to take back what was rightfully ours to began with, but until that time, I will remain dormant. You must learn how to use your power yet again, your human body can barely contain this power. Even your Alicorn form is currently to weak to handle it, you have gone to long without using your powers."
It was then a bright flash of light began to shine into the void. I then gained control over my body and worked my way toward the light. I began to hear a voice coming from the light as I neared it.
"Once you are ready we shall both watch the fall of the Equestrian Empire..."
It was the final thing the voice spoke as it faded into the darkness of the void.
* * * *
My eyes opened slowly and my vision returned. Everything was one big blur to start out with, but I could tell right away that I was in an all white room. My hearing return almost instantly as a steady beeping was going off. I looked to my right to see a heart monitor, it was slow, likely because I was weak and had been in rest.
I inspected the room further as I noticed more and more of the objects occupying the room. It was easy to realize I was in a hospital. I had tubes and wires connected to my body keeping track of everything possible. I looked at the door to see it had a window next to it that lead to an office like set-up and waiting room.
Upon closer inspection, I noticed that Celestia was pacing back and forth in front of my door, by the look on her muzzle, she was horrified. But being the Princess she couldn't show signs of weakness to her subjects. As looked at her she glanced back in, seeing that I was awake, her eyes began to water, and a smile made itself known.
She wasted no time practically bursting through the door and rushing to me and wrapping me in a hug. A doctor and a handful of nurses galloped in soon after, they began checking all my vitals and taking notes as Celestia nuzzled into my chest, minding her horn of course, as she broke down crying, thanking Faust that I was okay.
Eventually all the commotion settled down, "Draco, I am so glad you are alright," she spoke.
"Celestia...that...hurts....," I forced out as she hugged the life out of me.
Celestia registered what I had said and released me, allowing me air and less pain. She then moved to the sides as the doctor continued to examine me. After a few minutes the doctor left me and Celestia alone to talk.
I tried to sit up and talk, "Tia...ugh...," I cringed and held my chest in pain.
She noticed my pain and held me in place so I wouldn't move, "Don't try to move brother. You body has reached its limits, so please take it easy."
"Where am I?" I forced out.
"You are in the Canterlot Royal Hospital. This hospital is where Luna, myself, and anypony else of royalty come to be treated. We have only the best of doctors and nurse on the staff."
I nodded and she helped me lie back down as she moved closer next to the hospital bed. I had a billion questions to ask, but I could tell she was reading my mind so I wouldn't have to strain myself while talking. She nodded to me, this simple gesture saying that she would answer my questions, seeing as that I won't be moving for a while.
"How about we start with this? The young mares that you brought back are doing just fine, as is Discord. They are in rooms not too far from here, and from what your memory is telling me, that unicorn had the ability to break one of the most powerful and longest lasting spells placed over all of Equestria."
I tilted my head to side in confusion. I had a lot of my memory back but not all of it, so there were still a lot of things I still didn't know.
Celestia took note of my confusion, "Sorry, I thought you had gotten all your memory. But a long time ago after Luna and I were born, mother had put a spell over all of Equestria and anywhere else within the reach of our world."
"It was, and is simply called 'The Decency Spell'. It is used so that a pony..." She stopped mid-sentence as she blushed at what she was about to say. 'I cannot believe I am having this conversation with my brother,' she thought to herself.
"Well..." I forced out trying to move the conversation forward.
"Well...um...it is a spell that hides..." Celestia was trying to find the proper words to continue, "it...hides...all...the...extra bits." She motioned toward the area between her flanks.
After this it took me only a second to comprehend what she was trying to say. I looked away, as I could feel a heavy blush wash across my face. 'Why am I having this conversation with my sister?,' I thought to myself.
After about a moment of awkward silence she continued, "Yes...well...mother cast the spell for so as to not have everypony trotting about with their 'private parts on display'"
There was another awkward silence that followed after that, but this one lasted much longer then the last. We avoid eye contact for a while, making thing slightly less weird, but I was in Equestria with magical talking ponies. No to mention I was one at some point in the past, and am now part one now.
"No one knows of the spell, only the royal family knows of it existence. And because of its strength and magnitude, only Alicorns have the power and the knowledge to either stop it or recast it at any given time. But over the many millennia it has been around, a few unicorns have been born with the ability to break the spell."
"And Vinyl is one of those rare unicorns?" I forced the question trying to get myself back to sitting up. Celestia was about to tell me to lie back down, but I held my hand up signaling to her that I was fine.
She moved back and continued on, "It would seem that way, yes. An unfortunately, she has been using it in ways that you have already witnessed. What I cannot find out is why she would use it the way she did," Celestia looked out the nearby window and he pondered this.
'Why...why would she use it the way she did?' I thought to myself.
For the next few next hours or so Celestia explained that she sent out guards to secure and clean up the ally way that she had found thanks to my memories, "There will be no trace of anypony ever being there, and anypony who even caught a glimpse of you have had that portion of their memory wiped by Luna."
I sighed, "I can't believe I killed. Never in my life would I have thought I would end something's life the way I did."
Celestia moved to the side of my bed and pulled me into an loving sisterly embrace. "Don't worry about it Draco, you weren't yourself. And you did save those mares, it is what any Prince should do for the innocents of his kingdom."
"Thanks, Tia," I hugged her back.
After a few moments she let me lie back down, "Okay Draco, when you are all healed up we can discuss the Grand Galloping Gala where we shall make your presence known to all of Equestria and beyond."
I tilted my head again in slight confusion, "What do you mean by that?"
"Well, as far as all of Equestria knows, you never existed. After you were banished all those years ago, we erased you from history and the minds of all our subjects. So, until this Grand Galloping Gala, you will remain in the Castle. All the guards and servants have been sworn to secrecy."
"Okay dosen't seem so bad. How long until the next Gala?" I asked, if it wasn't too far off I could wait until then.
"A year." Celestia answered simply.
I was still too tired for me to yell so I did what I could, "A year! I have to be stuck in this castle for a year until the Gala!"
"Calm down, you don't want to strain yourself in your current state," Celestia said in a soothing tone.
I closed my eyes and took deep breathes to calm myself down, "Okay, so I am not going to be allowed outside of the castle walls until the next Gala. There, we shall announce my return to the throne."
"Correct, and until that point, we shall find you a way to change between your human form and your Alicorn form. Also, since you seem to have flying down, we can focus on teaching you how to harness you magical energy."
I nodded in understanding but my mind wandered to Vinyl, Octavia and Discord. Celestia told him they were fine, but I had to know for myself.
* * * *
"Why? What was that I saw last night? What was happening to Vinyl? It doesn't matter she was being hurt."
These were some of the thoughts that wondered a gray mares head as she lay in a coma from the night before.
"Never before had I experienced such terror and fear," a tear dripped down her face, "I could have been killed. WHY would she put herself through that?"
* * * *
"Why? No other night had gone like this. It was the same every time: use the spell, pleasure the guy, get the bits, wipe what I could of his memory, and get out."
Now we hear those thoughts of the young, snow white mare. She was in a room next to her friends, she thought of what had gone wrong.
"These stallion were more aggressive than any other. WHY did I have to bring Octavia with me? She could have been killed. We could have been killed."
* * * *
"For all I know, I could be dead right now."
The unicorn and the earth pony thought in unison.
* * * *
Discord lay on his hospital bed fully awake staring at the ceiling. Celestia had come in earlier to check on him with Luna. Luna had stayed and talked to Discord about what had happened the night before. He cried at the fact he had taken part in ending somepony's life.
He had cried for hours until he had no more tears to shed. As he stared at the ceiling for hours after that, until eventually his eye lids gave way. He fell into a dream of nothing but a dark room, and at the end was just a speck of light.
He moved closer he could see a figure standing there with a hoof held out to him. It was the size and shape of an
alicorn, with features that strongly resembled Draco's. As he neared there was no doubt in his mind that it was Draco with a warm smile on his face.
"Come on Discord. Everypony else might not have fully forgiven you for what you had done in the past, but I am here to change everything. I will stay by your side and make everything better."
New tears had formed on Discord face. He ran to Draco and the light and jumped into his embrace.
On the outside Discord had a small smile on his lips, and tears streaming down his face.
Author's Notes:
This chapter was typed so that story can slow down from it speedy pace from earlier.
The Voice & Vinyl Awakes
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
I would like to thank Thomas R for Pre-Reading and Editing!
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 8:
The Voices
It has been a total of about a week since Vinyl, Octavia, Discord and myself were admitted into the Canterlot Royal Hospital. Celestia had told me that my Alicorn powers and Discord's Periculum would help us heal faster than normal. Vinyl would only be there about another few days, being a unicorn also helps healing speed. Though Octavia, being a simple earth pony, would remain much longer than any of us.
The day I was given the okay to leave, I was given a new set of clothes. It was surprising how Celestia was able to have clothes made for a human, even though I was the first human to ever enter Equestria. And how they got my measurement right, I would have to question later.
'I was out for a good while a few days ago, so that would have been as good a time as any to get my measurements,' I thought.
After I was dressed, I walked over to a mirror in the nearby bathroom. I inspected the clothes I was given and was quite pleased with what I wore, simple and completely me. A pair of dark blue jeans, and a black t-shirt with white stripes across the front. I was given a pair of plan white shocks, along with a pair of snow white gym shoes with black laces.
Once I was done getting dressed and confirming some final details with the doctors, I didn't have anything better to do so I visited the others in their rooms. Discord's was the closest so I decided to visit him first, but when I looked into his room he wasn't there.
"Oh...Hello your Highness," A voice spoke up from behind me.
I turned to see a brown unicorn stallion in a lab coat. He wore a stethoscope around his neck, and a pair of glasses. He bowed before standing up and straightening his glasses. This was the doctor who was in charge of treatment of me, Discord, Vinyl and Octavia.
"Please, just call me Draco," I had decided to go by my original name; instead of my name given it to me on earth.
"Why thank you, your Highn...erm...I mean Draco," he craned his head to look at the bed behind me, "If you are looking for Sir Discord, he was released yesterday."
"Oh," I rubbed the back of my head. 'I wonder where he could be,' I thought to myself.
"I am sorry Sir. If you want I can send for him if you wish," he said.
"No, that's fine. I am sure I will run into him sooner or later, but until then can you point me to the rooms of the other two mares that were admitted here the same time I was?" I asked looking clueless on how to find my way to them.
"Ah, you mean," He levitated a clipboard from a nearby desk to himself, "Miss Scratch, and Miss Octavia. They are down the hall here and to right."
I looked in the direction he was motioning in, "Thank you."
He bowed before stepping aside allowing me to pass, "Your welcome...Draco."
I decided it was useless to get everypony in the castle to stop bowing every time I walked by, so I gave up on that endeavor. As I walked down the hall, none of the nurses or other patients seemed to be surprised to see a human walking around. Then I remembered what Tia had told me one of the days I was trapped in my hospital room.
* * * *
"I have notified ever guard, servant, nurse, and doctor about your presence here. So as not to avoid scaring anypony, remember, we need to keep you low profile."
* * * *
It would make sense for her to do something like this, the last thing that was need was an all out panic attack.
It only took a few minutes to locate Vinyl and Octavia's rooms. They were right next to each other and the only thing that separated them was a thin white curtain. I walked into Vinyl's room first, a nurse was in there checking on all the equipment.
Once she heard me enter she turned toward me and bowed, "Your Highness. How may I be of assistance?"
I just sighed, I wasn't even going to tell her to just call me Draco. On the way to my destination I go the same response out of all the other nurses and doctors, and gave up about half there.
"Is she alright?" I asked sitting on a small stool next to the hospital bed.
The room was similar to all the others, white walls and curtains, a single window for all my sister's wonderful morning sun to shine in. The columns, and corners of the room were trimmed with a gold lining. Medical tools on a cart, a heart monitor keeping a steady and normal beeping. And a lot of other equipment, I had no idea what they could be, all I knew is that they were helping Vinyl.
"She is stable, and is healing at the normal rate for a unicorn. She hasn't woken yet, but at this rate she should in as soon as a few hours." She gave me a reassuring smile.
She was telling the truth, for Vinyl's wounds had almost completely healed. ‘Tia was right, unicorns do heal fast.’
I looked over at the curtain, "Is there a mare by the name of Octavia in that room?"
"Why, yes, there is your Highness. She is not fairing so well."
At this I stood up and went to the curtain and tossed it aside. Octavia was revealed in an almost horrific state, she was covered head to hoof in bandages. Tubes and wire of all shorts were connected to machines that were keeping her alive. I have never before seen somepony in such a fragile state.
"Sir I think it is best..." She started but I instantly cut her off.
"Please just leave us, I need to be alone with them," I said in dark undertone.
She nodded and bowed, leaving me alone with the two mares that meant the most to me. For what reason they meant so such to me, I still have yet to figure out. Ever since I had laid eyes on these two, I was instantly drawn to them. They were all I could think about when the show would come to mind, I felt some deep inner connection with them.
I sat there, with the only sound I could hear were the different heart monitors giving off their own separate beeps. One was normal and strong, the other slow and weak. She was on the edge, and I was chained down, unable to do anything to help her.
'You can help her,' a voice echoed.
I looked around to find its origin, but saw that no other pony had come into the room.
'Oh, you won't be able to see me, Prince Draco. I am in your head, or at this junction I am a part of you. And have been for quite sometime.'
'What do you want?' I thought, getting to the voice. It was the same voice I had heard before.
'What I want? Well, what I want isn't obtainable at this point in time. But what matters is what you want, I can give you just a small amount of your power to heal this mare. It will give you some experience for when your full Draconic powers return, but it will only be a small amount. Giving you too much in this state would tear this weak body of your to shreds,' the voice explained.
Before I could respond a sharp pain jetted through my cerebellum. I clenched my temples as the pain became unbearable. Yet as fast as it had arrived it had left, and I could feel the presence of a new energy coursing through my veins. I moved close to Octavia's bed, and positioned my hands over her body. A midnight black energy became slightly visible around my hands, and small tendrils of magic worked their way down to Octavia.
They moved over her body, slowly working across her. Closing wounds, and removing the bandages. The heart monitor next to the bed began change pace, it was stabilizing to a steady heart beat.
'I can only get her farther away from the edge, not save her completely...' the voice said as the magic ceased and dispersed into nothing.
I looked over Octavia once again, she was in better condition, but not by much. As long as she could survive, that is what mattered. I sat back down in between the two rooms, all was silent again expect the constant beeping of the heart monitors.
'Where did that voice come from?' I asked myself.
* * * *
After a few hours of thought and trying to recall where that voice had come from, I left the Hospital and wandered the castle. It was still quite the site to behold, large marble columns lining the halls. The lovely decor, all having some representation of the Royal family, rather it be Celestia, Luna, even Cadence.
No matter what hall I walked down there were rows guards every few yards. As I walked by they either bowed or saluted, I paid that no mind. I wandered the halls for only a short while before I came to a door just as grand as all the others. I looked to the top of the door; there was a Yin & Yang Symbol with two crossed swords, that looked to be made of Dragon scales.
"Oh, I see you have found your old room."
I turned to see Celestia walking up behind with a pleasant smile.
"This is my old room?" I asked.
"Yes it is," Celestia said, opening the door with her magic. It was dark inside, but she motioned for me to step inside.
As I stepped inside, Celestia ignited all the candles in the room with her magic. The room came to life as she opened the curtains letting the sun shine in. There were several marble columns around the edges of the room. In the far corner of the room near the large stain glass window was a desk with a few papers scatter across it.
There also a handful of book shelves against the walls; all covered in dust and cobwebs. Near the very center of the room was a large bed covered in rubble which caused me to look to the ceiling noticing a giant hole.
"That would explain where all this stone and debris came from."
There was a fire place not too far from the bed. All that remained in it were the ashes of the last fire burned there.
"Looks like it hasn't been touched in a while." I stated.
"I was meaning to have it cleaned while you were being treated. Until this place is back to its original state, we have many other rooms you would stay in for the time being."
"Oh, I am sure you do. I don't even think I have seen even half of the castle yet and I have already passed by so many empty rooms."
"Ah, yes, many of those rooms are for when delegates, ambassadors, and others of that nature come to Canterlot for an extended period of time. Even for when they are here for the Gala."
"Interesting," I stated as I further inspected my old room.
"I shall have some workers come and fix this place up."
"Thanks Tia," I said and felt a sudden embrace.
"Your welcome, and I am glad to have you back, brother." She said as she hugged me.
After a few moments we left the room. Tia made her way to talk to the workers and have the plans and everything else needed to start reconstruction of the older part of Canterlot Castle. I followed along because otherwise I would have gotten completely lost, and I had nothing better to do. My training wasn't suppose to start until the following week anyways.
* * * *
"Where am I?" Vinyl said in a gurgled tone.
She looked around her room and came to the conclusion she was in a hospital. Upon further inspection of the regal decor and the amount of equipment, she realized she wasn't in just any hospital.
"Oh, you are awake. His Majesty seemed very worried about you, he will be happy to know you are awake," A nurse said trotting into the room.
"W-what?" Vinyl was still confused and a little dazed from her injuries, not to mention she had medicine being pumped into her for about a week.
"How about you lay back down. In about an hour or two I will return and see if you are well enough to be let go," The nurse said with a smile.
Vinyl just let her head drop back into the pillow. She had little to no memory of how she got here what she had done to get her. She could remember one thing, and that was...
"Octavia!" Vinyl said as she shot back up.
The nurse turned around with a startled expression a little shock by the sudden outburst. "Miss Octavia is fine. She is right there, now please lay down and get some rest." The nurse had pointed to open curtain which Vinyl had failed to notice.
"..."Vinyl was rendered speechless by what she saw. Octavia was still in pretty bad shape, and Vinyl could only blame herself. Tears began to well up behind her magenta eyes, she forced them back before laying back down and staring at the ceiling. Her once sad expression went blank, like it was when she had her shades.
* * * *
Two hours went by and Vinyl was still staring at the ceiling. The nurse walked into the room, "Miss Vinyl, you have been given okay to leave if you wish do so."
Vinyl sat back up and was greeted by a floating pillow. On it was a pair of shades that looked exactly like hers. She had not notice she hadn't had her shades, she could had some of her memory back, or at least what she cared to remember, her shades were broken and lost.
'So where did these come from?' Vinyl questioned herself.
After a moment or two of pondering she took the shades in her magic, she felt a pulse in her head and dropped the shades back onto the pillow.
"Miss Scratch, you may have to lay off the magic for a short while. You were in a coma for a week; your magic will not be at full strength for a while," The nurse told her.
Vinyl nodded, rubbing the sides of her head. After a few seconds the pain subsided and she took the shades in her hooves instead and placed them on her muzzle and made her way out of the bed. She and the nurse worked their way to the desk; Vinyl signed a few papers, which was made more difficult without magic, and was given some pain killers for her headaches. She was thinking about what she should do now.
She was a good ways away from Ponyville, and her friend was still in a coma. She was thinking about these things as two guards in golden armor walked up behind her. She turned and looked up at the guards, not much taller than she was maybe by a few inches.
"Miss Scratch?" One of younger looking guard asked making direct eye contact, and not showing any emotion as he was trained to.
"Depends on who's asking," Vinyl replied not backing down.
"We have orders to escort you to you temporary chambers here in the Castle," the other spoke stepping forward.
She was taken aback by what she had just heard, 'Wait, somepony has a chamber for me?' She nodded and agreed to follow them, out of the hospital, and took one last look back at Octavia before following the guards to 'her chamber'.
Farther into Decency & Vinyl's Fear
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
I would like to thank Thomas R for Pre-Reading and Editing!
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 9:
Farther into Decency & Vinyl's Fear
I followed Celestia throughout the expansive halls of the castle as we made our way to, what will be, my temporary personal chamber as my old room was being repaired. I had some more questions and Tia was glad to answer them.
"Tia," I started, "Is there anything else I should know about 'The Decency Spell'?"
"Well, yes, there are a few details I happened to leave out," Celestia answered.
"Like what?" I asked as we turned and made our way up a flight of stairs.
"It can not only be broken by The Royal Family, and unicorns such as Vinyl. There's one other factor, or thing, that can break the spell. And it takes place during what you would call, the 'off seasons' of the show."
‘Well that tells me that Celestia knows her world is just a show back on Earth, that makes things easier I guess,’ I thought to myself.
"What happens during the off seasons?"
We had come to a stop near a balcony on our way up the cascading stairs. There were two chairs and a small end table set-up like they were waiting for us. Celestia motioned for me to sit down, I did so and she soon followed suit. She called in a maid who was carrying a silver platter, incredibly designed, simple, yet elegant. On this platter were two tea cups, a pot, a small bowl of sugar, and some cream.
I was never one for things such as this, but decided to give it a try. Celestia floated the platter onto the table, thanked the maid and gave her the rest of the day off. She then proceeded to pour tea in both cups and gave herself about two sugarcubes. I tasted the tea before adding anything to it, it was extremely hard to force myself not to spit it up. I instantly added 4 sugar and just a dash of cream to it and tasted it, it had improved greatly.
"Now what were you saying about the off season?" I inquired.
Celestia took another sip of tea before answering, "Mother has failed to answer this question when I asked her about it all those years ago. But, the spell can be broken by a mare in heat."
I spit out was tea I had in my mouth instantly. Celestia looked over to me and began to patting my back as I coughed. After a moment, I gained control again, and relaxed back in my set.
"Sorry Tia, it just, shocked me is all."
"I can tell," Celestia said giggling, "Anyway, all the mares and other female creatures in Equestria seem to go into heat around the same time. During this time, The Decency Spell on them is broken, and because of the musk of a mare in heat it causes the spell on the colts, stallions, and other male creatures to break as well."
"Wait, then if every female in Equestria is in heat, and everyone else is aroused, how is it there aren't millions of females getting pregnant?"
"Well we do have spell in places to prevent the breaking of the Decency Spell. And if a couple want to have a foal they useally consault with myself or Luna first. Like the Cakes for example."
I sat there as I thought about the information I was just fed. "Well that cleared some thing up."
Celestia just nodded and sipped her tea again "Anyways," Celestia jumped into a cheerful mood, "We should continue to make our way to you temporary personal Quarters."
"Yeah we should, what was this random stop for anyways? We could have kept going and talked when we reached my room."
"I just thought it would be good to just sit down and talk for a while. Remember, you have been gone for thousands of years, I missed talking to you," Celestia said as she nuzzled my neck, minding her horn.
This caused me to have a slight smile spread across my face. ‘She is my true family, she loves and cares for me like family should. Much better then my 'family' back on Earth.’
We made our way down the intricate hallways and finally made it to my temporary room. It was just slightly smaller than my original room, but still eccentric with the design and layout nonetheless.
"This will be your temporary quarters until your old room is repaired." Celestia said as I toured the room.
"Thanks," I sat on the edge of the bed and laid down feeling the smooth silk fabric of the bed sheets.
Celestia smiled, "You're welcome, dear brother. I shall allow you to rest, we shall have supper in a few hours."
Celestia made her way to the door but I had to stop her, "Wait, Tia, I have one more question."
"And what would that be?"
"What will I do about clothing? It might be fine to walk around in your birthday suit if you are a pony, but I am still use to having clothes on. And I am still human."
"Oh, yes, I am having the royal tailor work on some outfits for you. We got your measurement while you were out cold in the hospital, hope you don't mind."
‘I was correct then,’ I thought to myself.
"Okay. Make sure that you just have her leave them outside my door when she is done with them. I will get them after I rest a little bit more."
"Remember, supper will be in a few hours," Celestia said before walking out the door.
As she left and closed the door with her magic, I could here just a fragment of a conversation she had started with one of the guards.
"When they awake, escort them to their chambers..." Was all I could hear until the door shut completely.
* * * *
Vinyl's thoughts wandered back to Octavia and that night. From what she could remember, she and Octavia were as good as dead, nopony could have saved them. Yet somepony did, and she didn't know who they were. She pondered this on the inside while keeping a straight, unemotional face on the outside. It would last long until she broke down.
"Here we are Miss Scratch," The older guard said flatly.
The three now stood in front of a door, which Vinyl could only assume to be her sleeping quarters. They stood aside and open the door for her to enter. She walked in and looked around, it was much nicer than what she was use to.
"If there is anything you may require, don't hesitate to ask one of the maids," the younger guard said before they both closed the door and marched away.
Once she was sure she was alone, she walked over to the furthest and darkest corner of the room...
She fell to the ground and burst into tears. She sobbed as hard as her body would allow. She shivered and held herself as all that entered her mind were the events of that night. Never before has she experienced such horror in her life, the beatings, the use of her body in such profound ways. She knew she had given her body up like that for bits in the past, but none were as brutal as this.
It was all she knew, her mother was forced into the same thing, after her father abandoned them. Her mother would be gone every night and come back every morning just to sleep all day. She didn't know what her mother had done, or why she always tired, why she would hear her mother crying herself to sleep when she came home. When she was old enough and learned everything that was going on, her mother died.
This left her on her own on the streets of Manehatten, where she learned of the spell her mother knew. Everything her mother had done, she had started to do a few years later, only by natural instinct was he able to know what to do. She was homeless at this point and selling her body for bits.
"Octavia was somepony who took me in," Vinyl whimpered to herself, "I never told what I did for bits outside of my music."
‘Why would you do this Vinyl?’
Vinyl heard that voice and looked around for its origin.
‘WHY?’
It was Octavia's voice, "Octavia...I...am...sorry. I don't even know why I did it...please you have to forgive me." Vinyl forced all of that out through her heavy breathing sobs.
‘No, I can never forgive you Vinyl...I don't want anything to do with you. When I am released from the Hospital, stay out of my life!’
Vinyl wanted to die right there. She just couldn't live without her best friend. After what had happened to Octavia, it was her fault. Vinyl heard those last few words repeat over and over again, ‘Stay out of my life!’
Vinyl eventually worked her way onto the bed, and cried herself to sleep. All the rest of the day were just nightmares, with no sign of them stopping.
Discord Helps Octavia & Draco at Feasting Hall
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
I would like to thank Thomas R for Pre-Reading and Editing!
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 10:
Discord Helps Octavia & Draco at Feasting Hall
Discord was sitting on the roof of Canterlot Castle. He had been released from the hospital a few hours ago. When he went to go check on Draco, he was still resting, so he wandered the castle aimlessly as he tried to keep his mind off of what happened a week ago. He had remembered everything the instant he awoke, and he was horrified. Not even before his return had he done something so evil, he would always just play around like everything was a game.
While he wandered, he had somehow ended up on the roof of the castle. He looked out over the vast expanse of the castle grounds, and down on the bustling city of Canterlot. He was reformed in a way, but lots of ponies still didn't trust him, so he remained inside the castle most of the time. As his eyes wandered he realized he was on the roof across the hospital.
'I Thought I had gone to the other end of the castle by how long I was flying around,' Discord thought.
Discord took a closer look and recognized somepony in one of the rooms. A grey earth pony, with a frazzled black mane, laying in a hospital bed. He flew to the window to get a closer look. The window was slightly ajar and the room was empty of all except the mare. He quickly slithered into the window, down the wall, and to the foot of the bed.
"Octavia," Discord read off a chart he noticed at the foot of the bed.
He looked back to the mare in front of him, she had showed no signs of waking. She was in sorry state, and Discord couldn't help but feel sorry for the poor earth pony. She didn't have any magical qualities that could have helped speed the healing process any faster, she was lucky to even be alive after all that had happened.
Discord moved to the side of the bed so he could see her face. She looked peaceful, upset, and terrified at the same time. Discord kneeled and used his claw to move her mane back so it framed her face.
Then he looked to his claw as he pulled it away, 'I may not have my full power but I know I can do something to help her.'
He moved so that he sat on the edge of the bed, and with a very careful and slow movements, he moved Octavia so that he was cradling her upper half. He lifted his eagle claw to her forehead. As he did so, he sparked it with his golden yellow periculum. He took a deep breathe and lightly touched her forehead. The spark sent a golden glow across Octavia's body, which had gone unnoticed by the hospital staff.
She remained unmoving, Discord felt he had failed. He hugged Octavia before laying her back down, and making his way to the window. He looked to the heart monitor before leaving, she was alive that much was certain, but until she came to...she was a lifeless body with a heart beat. As he floated out the window he looked back one last time, ‘I can't give up one her yet. From what happened, Draco seems to really care about her, and for some reason now I do as well.'
* * * *
I just sat on the edge of my bed wondering what to do. I stayed this way for what felt like hours, but was really just forty-five minutes. During this time a maid had delivered my backpack, which I had with me when Celestia brought me here.
I rummaged through it and found my iPhone and my DJ headphones. Lucky for me I still had quite a bit of battery power in it, I decided to use it only for music. It would save battery until I could find a way to charge it. It was good to be able to listen to my music again, it relaxed me, even at its incredibly high volume.
I scrolled through the handful of songs and music I had. A good portion of it was Dubstep or Electronic music, and if it wasn't that it was My Little Pony ether from the song from the show or music from Brony musicians back on earth. Either way I had music I truly enjoyed on my iPhone.
I lay on my bed just relaxing to my music for hours. I had somehow drifted to sleep of to sleep, dreaming about how my life was going to be, now that I am in Equestria. Since I am a prince it should be relatively easy, but that is only because as of now I have no responsibilities, and once my presence is known I will have documents to read over and sign. I would have to meet with all foreign dignitaries, and nopony knows how well those are going to go. I wasn’t really good with politics on earth, and now I was going to have to be in the center of it.
I sighed deeply and sat up from my bed. I looked out the window to see that it would be about time to make my way down to the Feasting Hall. I made my way to the doors to be greeted by a pair of guards just outside.
“Sir,” they said in unison and saluted.
“Um...” I was at a lost for words. I didn’t suspect for them to be out here waiting for me, “Can you take me to the Feasting Hall?”
“Why of course your highness,” one of the guards said.
They both saluted and marched off as I followed behind. These weren’t celestial guards like the ones I have seen. These were obviously lunar guards, which were easy to tell from their armor and dark features. There armor was a combination of colors ranging from a dark blue to a deep violet. The design was majestic, and a perfect representation of the night’s beauty, it was curved in some areas and lead to sharp points. And in the center of their chest were crystals in the shape of reptilian eyes.
One was a pegasus, and instead of normal feathered wings, he possessed bat like wings. Most likely their armor changes their wings for when they are on duty, Luna must have enchanted them or something.
It took a while longer to get to the Feasting Hall then before. But once I was there I was given a fair share of foods I could eat. Most of which were salads, and desserts, which balanced out each other. Celestia told me I could’ve asked for some meat, they do need to have food for dignitaries from the Griffin Kingdom when they came to the castle.
“I will remember that next time, Tia,” I told her.
We chatted for a while longer before Luna had to raise the moon. They had answered many questions for me, about what I would be doing once I officially took power. The entire reason they had broken the Decency Spell for Red and Kat, and explained everything about it to me.
“Why would you even consider that?” I ranted.
“Luna thought it would be a funny prank, I just thought it would relieve some stress,” Celestia defended.
“So having me raped would be a good prank and relieve stress? Just forget about it, at least I got out in time before it went any farther than it did,” I said.
Celestia’s horn flashed for an instant, “Its okay, I wiped their memories of the incident, and recast the Decency Spell.”
“Thanks Tia,” I yawned as made my way to the door of the feasting hall, “I am going to rest now.”
“Alright then, you can rest for the week to do as you please before we began your magic training. Not to mention you being educated on the history of Equestria that you missed, and any other political things,” Celestia said.
“Can’t wait,” I said not even bothering to hide the sarcasm in my tone.
Celestia stuck her tongue out in the childish way with a small smile behind it, I returned the gesture before departing and making my way to my room. First thing in the morning I would go visit Vinyl and Octavia. I still had yet to know if either of them have awaken, but that would have to wait until the next day.
New Life Start
Changes For The Better
By: MasterBrony Forever
I would like to thank Thomas R for Pre-Reading and Editing!
DISCLAIMER: This is a non-profit fanbased work of prose. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is the property of Hasbro, and the reinvention of the lovely Lauren Faust. No copyright infringement is intended, please support the official release.
Chapter 11:
New Life Start
The sun rose and I awoke just at the right time, it wasn’t too early, and it wasn’t too late. I felt completely different then I had when waking up back on Earth, it felt right. I went into the bathroom, which had been quickly modified to be more fitting for a human.
I turned on the water and made it as hot as my body before stepping in. I let the water run down my body, washing away any troubles and doubts I had about my old life. For today marked the start of a new beginning to my life, a new chapter that has been long awaited. I stepped out of the shower and wrapped a towel around my waist and looked in the mirror.
I had put on my glasses after getting out of the shower, but something was off. My glasses weren't improving my vision like they should have been doing. Instead they blurred everything, I removed them to wash them in the sink, but I noticed that my vision had improved.
‘It is because of the draconic blood you have,’ the voice was back.
“You! What are doing here?!” I asked the voice in my head, thinking it was in the room with me this time.
‘Just giving you some answers. You eyesight has been greatly enhanced since you have awoken your powers, young Prince.’ The voice said giving a slight snicker as it faded again.
“What the hell is with this voice?” I questioned myself.
That could be answered later, so I pushed it out of my mind and continued on. I walked from the shower into my room to find several sets of clothes just beside my door. They had a note attached to them as well...
Brother,
Here are some more clothes for you. Go down to the Feasting Hall and you will be tended to properly. Luna and myself have our duties to attend to so you may not see us until supper. Have the day to do as you please, just remember to stay inside the castle.
Love,
Tia
I looked down at the clothes and back to the note. Then I realized I truly had nothing to do until my training began the following week.
“I could always get a head start on the books,” I said to myself, then chuckled, “I am starting to act like Twilight would.”
I gathered up the clothes and put them away in the dresser in the far end of room. I had been given a custom pair of shoes to wear after I had left the Hospital the other day.
I got dressed in a simple red t-shirt with black lines going down the sides. A pair of light blue jeans and my black and electric blue shoes. I was escorted down to the Feasting Hall and was waited on hand and hoof as my food was brought in front of me. I tried to tell them to stop, but they just refused to let me do anything on my own.
“That’s going to have to change sooner a later,” I said to myself.
Once I was given a moment alone, I enjoyed my food thinking about Octavia’s condition.
* * * *
Vinly was curled in the far corner of her room, sobbing. Her sobbing was dry for she had no more tears to give after crying in her sleep the night before. She held a pillow close to her, her shades were on the nightstand next to the bed.
All that came to mind was that night. The night, she tried so hard to forget everything about that night. Yet it always came back with a vengeance, getting worse and worse each time. Yet something at the back of her mind always came into view before the nightmares ended, a tall dark figure came in, killing off the stallions.
'Who was that?' She thought to herself.
* * * *
After I had finished my meal, I made my way to the hospital to check on Octavia. I was greeted by everypony I walked by, I either gave them a nod or said hello in response. It didn’t take as long as I would have thought to locate the hospital again, but it seemed like more of my memory was returning. Before I knew it I had made it to my destination.
Octavia hadn't been faring any better since the day before. She still lay there broken and unconscious. I sat by her side praying that she would be okay. It took me a short while before I looked over into Vinyls room and saw it was empty.
“She must have been released,” I said to myself.
I had no idea where she could have been taken. Had she gone back to Ponyville or if Celestia kept them here for questioning, buck if I know.
But this is how the week went on: Discord would travel to the hospital to try and heal Octavia the same way he had the first time around, but it showed little to no process of helping. Vinyl remained locked in her chambers by choice only opening the door to receive food, water, clean towels, and other things of that nature. I relaxed for most of the week, reading the books on the many shelves in the room. Nothing factual, so fiction for the most part. And whenever I got the chance to, I would visit Octavia.
This routine became rather boring by the end of the week, but that wouldn’t last much longer as my magic training was to begin.
* * * *
It was a brand new day, a Monday to be precise. I would have never liked waking up on a Monday, but since I was in the land I have always wanted to be in, it didn’t bother me.
I took a shower, got dressed, and went to the Feasting Hall and consumed my morning meal. Just as I was finishing up, I was handed a letter from on of the servants. I opened it was from Celestia saying to meet her in the training room a few floor down. There were escorts waiting for me outside of the Feasting Hall.
As we made our way down to the training room they escorted me to in front of the door before they bowed and left. When I opened the door, I was greeted by what looked to be an exact replica of the throne room. One difference though...it was completely empty, except for the few places that looked like they could be used for...
“Think fast,” A voice said, coming from the other side of the room. Just then a bolt of energy was sent my way. I barely had the time to react as it hit me square in the chest, sending me flying back into a stone pillar. When I looked up to see my attacker, it was none other than Celestia herself.
“What the buck?!” I shouted. standing up and looking at my chest to see the bolt of energy had caught fire to my shirt. I tore it off as fast as I could and saw scorch marks on my chest.
“To start your training, we must get you in physical shape.” She said walking up to me and jabbing at my slightly rounded stomach.
“I am sure there would have been a better way then almost blasting a hole in me!” I retorted.
“After watching you for so many years on earth, this seemed like the only way to get you to work out.” She said, “Even when you told your guardians on earth you were going to get fit you didn’t follow through.”
“So you had to threaten my life?!?”
“If it gets you to jog, run, or sprint, then yes.” She said with a slightly evil smirk.
“Oh buck!” I said as I was shot at with bolt after bolt a magic energy.
"What have I gotten myself into?” I said as ran around the room avoiding anything Celestia thought my way.
Author's Notes:
Sorry it took me so long to post this, my editor was extreamly busy. Also it may be a while before I post or even start work on another chapter.
I am having the dreaded writers block, so if anypony has any ideas of how to deal with this let me know. Or if you have a way to spark your creativity for writing share it with me. I will gladly give it a try.
I have grown as a writer and realized how bad this story is. I may re-write once I am completely done but for now I will leave the chapters I have have posted here the way they are. You can tell the difference in my writing skills if you read my Spike story 'The Rise of Spike the Dragon'. I consider it better written than this one.
Anyways sorry again, and please help me to get my inspiration back for this story. I know many of you like and I want to keep it going for all of you!