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A Carrot for Miss Fluttershy

by Bad Horse

Chapter 2: Act II: In which too much importance is attached to a carrot

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Act II: In which too much importance is attached to a carrot

INTERIOR APPLE FAMILY HOUSE - DAY

                                   APPLE BLOOM

          Morning, Applejack.  I'm gonna go find Sweetie Belle and

          Scootaloo.

                                   APPLEJACK

          Why're you always playing with them two?  Why ain’t you

          got no earth pony friends?

                                   APPLE BLOOM

                   (sadly)

          I guess you're right.  They're probably tired of me.

EXTERIOR APPLE FAMILY HOUSE - DAY

Apple Bloom walks out of the house.  Big MacIntosh is outside, sniffing the ground.

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          Ground's dry.

                                   APPLE BLOOM

          That's nice.

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          No it ain't.  It was supposed to rain last night.

                                   APPLE BLOOM

          That's nice.

                   (beat)

          If you see Scootaloo an' Sweetie Belle - tell 'em - tell 'em

          they can play with somepony else today.  I won't mind.

Apple Bloom walks O.S, still in a funk.  Big MacIntosh watches her go, then heads off in the opposite direction.

EXT. ROAD TO PONYVILLE - DAY

Big MacIntosh walks down the road towards Ponyville.  Scootaloo scoots in the other direction, pulling Sweetie Belle along in her wagon.

                                   SCOOTALOO

                   (halting)

          Big MacIntosh!  Where's Apple Bloom?

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          She said you can play with somepony else today.

                                   SWEETIE BELLE

          Not her too!

                                   SCOOTALOO

          It's still okay if we hang out with you, right?

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          Yup.

Scootaloo turns the wagon around.  All three head for town.

EXT. FLUTTERSHY'S COTTAGE - DAY

Big MacIntosh knocks on the door with one hoof.  ANGEL rushes into the frame and attacks Big Mac, kicking Mac's hooves with his hindfeet and then biting them.  Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle retreat from the door.

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          That tickles!

                                   FLUTTERSHY (O.S., BEHIND DOOR)

          Please... I don't want to upset anypony.  I can't help having

          wings.

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          But Miss Fluttershy.  Your wings are right purty.

Scootaloo mimes gagging.  Fluttershy opens the top half of the door.

                                   FLUTTERSHY

          Big MacIntosh!

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          Miss Fluttershy, I wondered if you could round up some rain

          for our apple trees.  The regular rainponies forgot.

                                   FLUTTERSHY

          I've never done that... but I'll try.  Angel, be nice.

                   (to Big MacIntosh)

          He's upset because I couldn't get him his carrot today.

                   (beat)

          Something's changed.  A lot of ponies are angry.

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          About there bein' no carrots?

                                   FLUTTERSHY

          Oh, there were plenty of carrots.  They wouldn't sell me any.

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

                   (beat)

          Who wouldn't sell you a carrot?

                                   FLUTTERSHY

          Hay Seed.

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

                   (stamps one hindleg)

          I'll get you your carrot, Miss Fluttershy.

                                   FLUTTERSHY

          Oh... you don't have to do that.

Angel jumps up on the door ledge and glares at her.

                                   FLUTTERSHY (CONT'D)

          I mean, thank you.

Big MacIntosh, Scootaloo, & Sweetie Belle exit.

EXT. HAY SEED'S - DAY

Big MacIntosh, Scootaloo, & Sweetie Belle approach a vegetable stand that appears to have been hastily barricaded.  Big MacIntosh knocks on a piece of fence that is serving as a door.

                                   HAY SEED (O.S., BEHIND DOOR)

          What's the password?

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          Password for what?

                                   HAY SEED

          Password so I know you ain't one-a them flyin' or magicin'

          ponies!

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

                   (snorts once)

                   (to Scootaloo & Sweetie Belle)

          You kids go across the street.

                                   SCOOTALOO

                   (turning and walking away)

                   (to Sweetie)

          He's ashamed of us!

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

                   (to the door)

          Stand back.

                                   HAY SEED

          That ain't the pass...

In one fluid movement, Big MacIntosh spins around, plants his forelegs where his hindlegs were a moment ago, and smashes the barricade into fragments with one kick, revealing a startled Hay Seed and racks of vegetables.

                                   HAY SEED (CONT'D)

          What'd you do that for?!

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          Didn't know the password.

                                   HAY SEED

          What d'ya want?

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          A carrot for Miss Fluttershy.

                                   HAY SEED

          Oh?  Well, I'm all outta carrots!

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          What are those?

                                   HAY SEED

          Them carrots is been sold!

Hay Seed and Big Mac glare at each other.  Big Mac turns and leaves.

TRACKING BIG MACINTOSH, SCOOTALOO, SWEETIE BELLE

                                   SCOOTALOO

          That was cool!

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          If I'd kept cool, I'd have Miss Fluttershy's carrot.

                                   SWEETIE BELLE

          The Cakes make carrot cake.  Maybe they have carrots!

EXT. SUGARCUBE CORNER - DAY

MR. and MRS. CAKE, with POUND CAKE & PUMPKIN CAKE in a stroller, are outside the bakery.  Luggage sits in the street next to them.  The bakery door has a CLOSED sign.

                                   MR. CAKE

          I'm sorry, Pinkie.  Ponyville's not safe for our little Cakes

          anymore.

                                   MRS. CAKE

          I heard somepony said that pegasi eat earth ponies.

                                   MR. CAKE

          I heard somepony said unicorns help them do it.

                                   PINKIE PIE

          I'm sure that pony didn't mean cute baby ponies!

                                   MR. CAKE

          You can't reason with people like that, Pinkie.

Big MacIntosh, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle walk up.

                                   SWEETIE BELLE

          Mr. & Mrs. Cake!  Have you got any carrots?

                                   MR. CAKE

          I'm sorry, kids.  I'm all out.

Pinkie follows the Cakes offstage, still pleading.

TRACKING BIG MACINTOSH - PONYVILLE, MAIN ST.

Big MacIntosh takes a few steps down the street, then stops, realizing he doesn't know where he's going.

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          I can't go back without a carrot.

Big MacIntosh sits down in the middle of the street.

                                   SCOOTALOO

          You're attaching way too much importance to this carrot.

                                   SWEETIE BELLE

          Scootaloo!  Sometimes you're as thick as...

DERPY HOOVES hurries on-stage, pursued by a COLT and a FILLY.

                                   FILLY AND COLT

          Derpy derpy derpy!

Big M. gives the colt and filly one look and they hurry off.

                                   SCOOTALOO

          Were they teasing you because you're a pegasus?

                                   DERPY

          Naw.

                   (her ears flick down)

          They always do that.

                   (to Big MacIntosh)

          Why're you sitting in the street?

                                   SWEETIE BELLE

          He's mad because Farmer Seed won't sell him a carrot for

          Fluttershy because she's a pegasus!

Scootaloo pushes with her helmet against Big Mac's side, trying and failing to budge him.

                                   SWEETIE BELLE (CONT'D)

          It's so romantic!

                                   DERPY

          You're just gonna sit there?

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          A pony can sit.

                                   DERPY

          Because Hay Seed won't sell carrots to pegasus ponies?

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          Yup.

                                   DERPY

                   (beat)

          Will that help?

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          Nope.

After a long pause, Derpy sits down beside Big MacIntosh.

                                   BIG MACINTOSH (CONT'D)

          Go home, Derpy.

                                   DERPY

          A pony can sit.

Fluttershy flies on-stage, dripping wet, eyes darting about anxiously.

                                   FLUTTERSHY

          Big MacIntosh!  I was worried...

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          I didn't get your carrot, Miss Fluttershy.

An EARTH PONY WORKER pulling a wagon of hay enters.

                                   WORKER

          Hey!  Get outta the way!

                                   FLUTTERSHY

          I'm so sorry, we were just --

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          Nope.

                                   DERPY

          Nope.

                                   WORKER

                   (to Big MacIntosh)

          What are you doin' with these ponies anyway?

          You ashamed of your own kind?

His words shock and frighten Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo.  They huddle close to Big MacIntosh and sit down as well.

                                   BIG MACINTOSH

          You go home, Miss Fluttershy.  All of you, go home.

                                   DERPY

          Nope.

                                   SCOOTALOO

          Nope.

                                   SWEETIE BELLE

          Nope.

                                   FLUTTERSHY

          N... no.

INT. LIBRARY - DAY

Twilight puts a few more books into a pair of saddlebags she has on.  Spike carries a suitcase.

                                   TWILIGHT

          It's just until things calm down.

                                   SPIKE

          How will they calm down if all the calm people leave?

                                   TWILIGHT

          I'm irritating them just by my presence, Spike.

                                   SPIKE

          How is that new?

Twilight and Spike exit out the front door.

EXT. LIBRARY - DAY

                                   TWILIGHT

          Let's stop by and check on the others on our way.

                                   SPIKE

          I think we can skip Sweet Apple Acres.

                                   TWILIGHT

          It is pretty far out of the way...  You think Pinkie is at

          Sugarcube Corner?

Walking towards the center of town, Twilight and Spike stumble into a surreal scene outside Sugarcube Corner:  Ponies of all kinds sit in the street, blocking it.  Angry ponies on both ends of the street are shouting at them, including the sign-carriers.

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