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Luster Dawn: New Days of the Magic of Friendship

by SamSwordsman123
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Twilight wants to break the curse of immortality to pass with her friends. But first she must find a Successor to take her place. Can she do it or does Equestria need her to stay? What tests await candidate Luster Dawn as an ancient villain returns?
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"I would rather share one lifetime with you, than face all the ages of this world alone." Arwen, Lord of the Rings.

All chapters edited onced again on 12/11/23. May do more later.

This story is a rewritten and combined version of Luster Dawn Friendship Successor and Passing On Together. A fix fic for anyone who didn't like the finale which apparently broke the promise by Meghan McCarthy that Twilight would not outlive her friends. But the truth is that its up to us whether she does or not, Jim Miller said they don't know how long everyone lives including Twilight. That means they are leaving it up to us to decide for ourselves. The way I saw the finale there was a curse breaker option. It appeared to me that Twilight was training a successor in Luster Dawn so that she can give up her immortality. Great tests await Luster as the real Grogar returns and sets up a plan to conquer Equestria.

The main story in the Successor Verse. Sad label for the loss of loved ones and death in general. But also happy and fun times, and a bittersweet ending.

Authors Notes: This story uses a theory I developed gathering info through the mlp wiki rather than the widely believed theory that immortality is the ability of alicorns.

If you believe immortality is a gift you are entitled to your opinion, but please do not try to convince me of such. I'm trying to give people who don't want Twilight to suffer the curse of immortality an alternative.

Edited by Huk, Azurakeres, and ClownPrinceofCrime.

Teen
Complete
Adventure
Slice of Life
Sad
Death

126,109 words: Estimated 8 Hours, 25 Minutes to read: [Cache]

26 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: A Sun Dies and Another is Born [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    5,448
  2. Chapter 2: A Parent's Role [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    5,518
  3. Chapter 3: Enter a New Enemy [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    6,465
  4. Chapter 4: Feelings and Farewells [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    5,731
  5. Chapter 5: Crystal Field Trip [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    6,879
  6. Chapter 6: Back to Ponyville [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    6,822
  7. Chapter 7: Bucking Over Luster [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    4,051
  8. Chapter 8: Festival of Monsters [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    5,896
  9. Chapter 9: Moving Out [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    5,049
  10. Chapter 10: Dates and Departures [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    4,324
  11. Chapter 11: Captured in the Crystal Empire [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    6,026
  12. Chapter 12: The Fall of Ponyville [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    3,817
  13. Chapter 13: Lucky Dawn [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    6,186
  14. Chapter 14: Recovery [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    3,903
  15. Chapter 15: River On Fire [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    4,707
  16. Chapter 16 Run Chrysalis Run [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    4,014
  17. Chapter 17 Colt Campout [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    4,261
  18. Chapter 18 Galloping Gala [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    4,563
  19. Chapter 19 Target Dawn [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    3,247
  20. Chapter 20 The Return of Grogar [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    3,479
  21. Chapter 21 Attack On Ponyville [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    4,465
  22. Chapter 22 Crystal Catastrophe [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    4,074
  23. Chapter 23 Battle of the Castle of the Two Sisters [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    5,275
  24. Chapter 24 The Father of Monsters [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    4,581
  25. Chapter 25 Dawn of a New Ruler [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    4,133
  26. Chapter 26 Passing On Together [Cache] Jul 18th, 2020
    3,195
Published Jul 18th, 2020
Last Update Dec 11th, 2023

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