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Return of the changeling's (re-edit) (MS)

by Kulbit Havoc

Chapter 6: Chapter 6 King vs warrior

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Chapter 6 King vs warrior

As they were aproching canterlot the black pegasis asked. "So what's you're name?".

The machine reply's. "Well in my pony form they call me Havoc, and in this form they call me Thorn. Now since I told you my name you tell me you're name".

The black pegasi reply's. "Atomic Vortex but my friend's call me Atom,"

Havoc reply's. "Well I'm not you're friend"

Havoc's, jet form start's to fall out the sky Atom, has his hoof's over his eye's thinking their going to die in a crash Havoc, notice's Atom's facial expression and exclaim's. "Uuuuuugh im just decreasing altitude".

Atom, take's his hoove's off his eye's.

Atom, notice's the main six running across a bridge in canterlot from a stampede of black creature's. Havoc, notice's it to and exclaim's. "Time for some close air support!".

Havoc, fire's two projectiles that exploded on impact causing mass damage

"You got them". Said Atom, who was now plastered to the jet's seat. Havoc, reply's. "That was just the appetizer here come's the main course"

Havoc, open's a flap revealing a multi-barrel gun on his jet's fusalarge. Atom, notice's it and ask's. "What is that?".

Havoc, reply's back. "It's my favorite gadget... The caox cannon this gatling gun can fire 1,200 75caliber incindary round's in 12 second's".

Atom, in curiosity reply's. "What do incindary round's do?".

Havoc, reply's. "They explode and burn on impact with solid materials a.k.a those moving black thing's on the ground"

Havoc, fire's his caox cannon at the black creature's causing fire and smoke and shrapnel at one point making it impossible to see what he was firing at.

The smoke and shrapnel clear's the six dazed pony's look up. Rainbow Dash remembered the flying machine that attacked the pegasi,. But now it saved them. The flying machine turned vertical at the side of the bridge.

Opening the cockpit window a orange coated and blonde mane'd pony jumped on the side of the machine tilting it sideway's Atom, shout's. "Apple Jack get off the side of the jet you're throwing him off balance"

Apple Jack reply's. "Get of the thing that attacked you and tried to kill you"

Atom, exclaim's.  "He did'ent attack us we attacked him. And don't call him a flying machine he is a jet".

Atom, say's. "Havoc, let me introduce to you to my friend's this is Apple Jack she's my main mare and the rest are Rainbow Dash , Fluttershy , Rarity , Twilight and Pinkie Pie".

Havoc, stay's quiet and ask's. "Does anyone know were Luna is?"

Twilight reply's. "The last time I saw her. She was keeping changeling's off our back's I think she's still at the church".

Havoc, run's off the side of the bridge and turn's into his jet form speeding off toward the church.

GET YOUR POP CORN AND SODA BECAUSE HERE'S THE FINAL BATTLE OF THE STORY.

"You can't defeat the king of the changeling's!! hahaha". he said taking of into the air.

Luna trapped in a corner next to her almost dead sister shout's. "AS LONG AS I HAVE BREATH IN MY LUNG'S MAGIC IN MY HORN FLIGHT IN MY WING'S I WILL NOT STOP FIGHTING!!!!"

The changeling king laugh's and power's up his horn for the final blow. "This is the end of line". As he walk's over to Luna ready to kill her a window shattering roar pierced the room the stained glass window's are destroyed. After the roar came a silence. The king of the changeling's backed up against the church door's two minute's passed. The king of the changeling's walked back over to Luna. His horn glowing ready to kill.

Then a loud explosen destroy's the front of the church yet another silence came into the room. The king of the changeling's is now getting scared. And is now backed up agaist the church door's yet again and shout's out. "COME OUT AND FACE ME COWERED!!".

A familiar voice said "Ill be obliged to". Luna look's around to find out were the voice had came from. And then all of a sudden the sound of cracking and falling concrete followed by a dust cloud coming from the center of the church hall. Luna can see the outer line of a alicorn. "Havoc," Luna said with a smile of relef. The dust clear's. Havoc, see's the king of the changeling's for the first time. Havoc, exclaim's. "You are one ugly muthafucker"

The king of the changeling's trie's to open the church door's. He notice's there jammed on the other side Havoc, say's. "You like killing mare's do you?. Well then time to pay for what you do!!" Havoc shouted with rage in his eye's.

The changeling king turn's around and fire's a green beam. Havoc fire's off a purple beam. The two beam's collide causing a shockwave to rip the church apart. As the church was crumbling around Luna she noticed that Havoc's, beam was getting shorter. The king's beam reach'es Havoc's, horn. The green beam explode's. Making Havoc, fly back and crash through a church piller with a thud and snap.

Luna see's that Havoc, is down and pouring blood from his head and rib's. Luna stand's up and fire's a beam across the room toward the king. The king of the changeling's see's it and deflect's it at Celestia.... It hit's her. Luna hear's her sister's scream's of agony. The king fire's another beam at Luna.... It hit's Luna causing her to fly back into a stone wall.

Havoc, closed his eye's. Something said to him. "Do it for yourself ..... Do it for what you love" Havoc, opened his eye's they were now replaced with a orange glow. Luna looking in agony mutter's "he's changeing". Havoc's, leg's are replaced with long metal chicken bent leg's. And his arm's replaced by big long metal spindaly arm's with long bent finger's. His chest replaced by rocket launcher's and a jet cockpit. And his shoulders replaced by jet intake's. And his pegasus wing's are replaced by long thin fighter jet wing's with jet engine's on them.

The change was complete Havoc, has now become Thorn. Luna was hurt and scared. She's never seen a alicorn this powerful before. Thorn shout's. "YOUR ALL MINE YOU WORTHLESS PEICE OF SHIT!!!!".

The changling king is up for another round and fires another beam. Thorn dodge's. the beam missing Thorn. Generating a shockwave that break's mountain's. the two warrior's are locked into a battle of strengh and superiority. Havoc transform's into his jet form. And then suddenly a extream burst of flame's and air mixed together causing a shockwave making Havoc's jet form rocket toward the king. Havoc hit's the king with the nose of his jet form. Havoc fire's his caox cannon at the roof of the church blowing a hole through it. Luna follow's to give Havoc surpport if he need's it. Luna land's on the roof she can't see anything through the fire and smoke. Luna hear's a roar of thunder rocket past her. Then a crack and snap sounded behind her. Luna turn's around only to see Havoc coming toward her. Mysterious light's fire out of Havoc's jet fusearlarge. Luna run's for cover behind a huge slab of concrete. And the a roar of a explosen cracked the church roof. Luna look's to see if everything is finished. She peak's her head around the corner of the concrete slab. Only to quickly move her head behind the slab. The king is thrown against the wall really hard. Luna look's into the blaze of fire and smoke again. She see's a out line of a gigantic robot. the smoke clear's only to show Havoc in his robot form looking in her direaction. Sundenly Luna is taken histage by the king. "If you want to kill me you're going to have to kill you're first love" said the king of the changeling's with a smirk on his face. Havoc raise's his arm revealing a gatling gun. "Havoc.... please...no" Luna said with fear in her eye's. The barrel's on Havoc's gun start to spin. "HAVOC!!!!!...PLEASE!!!!!....NO!!!!!" Luna shouted once more. The ground start's to crack.

"What the....". The ground give's way under the king and Luna. They both fall to the ground beneth them with a thud. The sound of metal hitting the ground get's closer as the king and Luna lay the with no help. The out line of Havoc's robot form apper's in the smoke. Suddenly a loud crack of gun fire echo's through the church hall. Luna looked to her left there layed the king of the changeling's dead from the bullet Havoc shot at him. Luna then break's free of the rubble covering her.

Now the battle was won. Havoc turn's back into his alicorn form and take's some step's forward. Then he fall's to his knee's and then falling to the floor lost to the darkness. Luna run's over to Havoc with tear's in her eye's

(18 hour's later)

Havoc, find's himself In a room he look's down he has his hand's back. He remove's the cover's on the bed. He notice's he is back in his human form.

Luna walk's in. "So I see you're awake".

Havoc, turn's around turning back into his alicorn form.

Luna give's a light giggle and say's. "Come on you're going to miss you're welcoming ceremony".

Havoc, and Luna walk out of the room together. Side by side.

(Before the welcoming ceremony started)

AS THE SUN SET AND THE MOON RISIED. I LOOKED AT THE SETTING SUN AND ATOM. STANDING NEXT TO ME. AND IT REMINDED ME OF WHAT I GAINED I AND I LOOKED BACK INTO THE SKY. AND THE STAR'S ARE COMING OUT AND I LOOKED BACK AT ATOM, AND I MISSED HAVING FRIEND'S BY MY SIDE. AND FOR LUNA MY HEART REMAIN'S WITH HER IVE NEVER FELT LOVE NORE ANY EFFECTION LIKE THIS FOR ANYTHING BUT NOW THAT I HAVE ATOM BY MY SIDE AND LUNA TO LOVE AND PROTECT. I THINK I CAN HANDLE ANYTHING THE WORLD THROW'S AT ME

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