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Return of the changeling's (re-edit) (MS)

by Kulbit Havoc

Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Strange new world

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Chapter 1 Strange new world

Authors note.

The reason the dislikes are high is because i forgot to label this as the first step in my OC's adventure in canterlot. So Ive put in the title the word (MS) this stands for Main Story.

p.s Grammar and Punctuation is not used much...Coz it confuses me..Coz im a A+ science student not a writer...But im giving it ago....And im not really enjoying my time on fimfiction..as much as I thought.

That is all. Now read the fic if you wan't.


Rainbow Dash was resting on a cloud as the sun shined down on her as she tossed and turned uncomfortably on what she might call the roughest cloud in all equestria as she did this something caught her eye something rather unexpected an enormous hurricane with a purple center Rainbow Dash was looking at the purple center as she got a better look at it she noticed something bright falling from it. Was it scootaloo trying to perform a sonic rainboom? Was it a comet falling from the sky? Rainbow Dash couldn't figure what the object was before it hit the ground with an earth shaking crash even though she was in the sky she felt the shockwave from the objects impact underneath but for now that didn’t matter for now her only concern was the hurricane.

When she had looked out her window Luna had happened to notice a burning object streaking its way across the sky she orders some of her men to go out and retrieve the flaming object.

"What do you want us to do when we retrieve it princess?" asked one of Luna’s higher ranking guard's.

"Bring it to the equestrian mountain military experimental facility then he will fly into my arms." she answered with a small smirk on her face.

(4 hour's later)

The air was thick with smoke as the royal guards surrounded the burning ruins of what some ponies would call a giant metal cocoon, but this was more than a cocoon it had a strange language engraved around the body work, the guard commander told his men to take the cocoon back to the lab and run experiments on it a couple of days went by as the scientists decipher the cocoon and the strange language turned out to be an encrypted message saying

‘This is your only hope of survival’

"Why does it have a message like that engraved on it?" One of the scientists asked.

"How could a giant lump of junk like this be our only survival?" The guard commander shot back.

( But at 11:35pm things take a weird change )

One of the security officers trots into find that the cocoon is shattered into pieces seeing this he goes over to investigate, As he walks down the three sets of stairs, to the lab, suddenly the lights switch off only to be replaced with a dim red light from the generators, as the guard got to the last set of stairs he hears the sound of a pair of wings flair up behind him.

The officer turns round to see who it was as he points his glowing horn in the direction of where he last heard the sound, at first he sees nothing until he turns around to be greeted by a alicorn with soul piercing red draconic eyes and pitch black stripes across his body and his coat an ashen grey with wings that from afar looked metallic but were actually covered by armor that blended well with his wings whose feathers had an a special reflective quality to them rarely seen on an equine his mane was a dark black color with three purple stripes in it while his tail was much the same except the purple branched off into several different directions, The security officer falls to the floor in horror as this strange alicorn slowly comes closer and closer. The officer backs away as the alicorn trots toward him until he is backed into a corner unable get anywhere else the officer watch's in fear as the alicorn gets really close, The security officer puts his hooves over his eyes he hears what he thinks his final words he'll ever hear were.

"What the fuck are you doing?" the alicorn asks a with a confused look on his face.

The officer takes one of his hoofs off his eye's the unknown pony is holding out one of his hoof toward the officer. "Let me introduce myself my name is Raw Havoc what's your's," the alicorn asks.

"S-ss-silver glaze," the officer answers back.

Rawhavoc looks back at Silver glaze and trys to start a conversation

"hey Silver glaze is it, can you tell where I am by any chance?" he asks hopefully.

"You're in the equestrian mountain military experimental facility," Silver glaze answers after he gets up from the floor.

"Is there anyway out of here by any chance?" Rawhavoc asks.

Silver glaze silently points up at a vent on the roof. Havoc looking up at the vent says "Hmm....it looks wide enough".

Havoc takes to the sky towards the vent ramming into it with his horn trying to get it off until Silver glaze shouts out to Havoc.

"You can always take of the vent off with magic you know that's what the horn is used for." Silver said trying to keep a straight face.

“I knew that,” Havoc said looking down at Silver Glaze.

after a bit of struggling Havoc finally takes off the vent he then throws it to the ground "See ya later." Havoc said with a small wave he then rocket's through the vent shaft out of the building breaking the sound barrier into his new home of Canterlot. Next Chapter: Chapter 2 Havoc meet's Luna Estimated time remaining: 18 Minutes

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