Knights of Equestria - Book 1: War of Eternal Night (New Version)

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A vampiric goddess from a thousand year old legend returns from her imprisonment to seek revenge on those who wronged her and finish what she started. Will the power of seven mares be enough to defeat her? Or will they be her next bloody victims?

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Very Important Note: This story is a brand new version of the old one that has been recently deleted, while this one is a remake. Some things will be different, while others will be kept the same, and maybe even have a mix between them both.

One thousand years ago, on the three thousandth year of the three thousandth day of the coronation of the Royal Immortal Pony Sisters, Queen Luna Nightwalker instigated a revolt against her older sister, Queen Celestia Daybringer. Overwhelmed by the hatred that their subjects threw at her for ruling the very darkness they feared, she let the inner demons inside her loose on those who caused her pain. It then gave way to an all out war between the Lunar and Solar Queen, which soon ended in the latter banishing the former to the Moon she raised. Thus putting an end to what was labeled as the bloodiest war in Equestrian history. With the Dark Queen and her minions all gone, and her followers eliminated, the mare was left in the past. Fading into an infamous legend that that was soon forgotten in the centuries to come.

Or was she?

On the thousandth day of the thousandth year of her banishment, the stars aided the Dark Queen in her escape from her beautiful Moon, allowing her to make her way back home. Once she returned, the mare wasted no time on planning her revolution once again, intent on finishing what she started a whole millennium ago. Unbeknownst to her, the world she once knew had changed, so much so that she is completely unprepared for the retaliation that is soon to throw itself at her. All of which will come in the form of seven powerful mares with a bond that will grow ever stronger by the end of their adventurous night. Will this bond be enough to help them overthrow the Dark Queen and save their land from her tyranny, darkness, and horror? Or will they be her first bloody victims in her folkloric world of Eternal Night?

Warning: Rated T for serious animal violence, brutal fight scenes and mild sexual themes, mainly for comical relief, along with some references throughout the story. This will also contains a ridiculous amount of OP'd characters with powers that seem like it should take longer to achieve, so if that's not what you're looking for, feel free to leave.

Other Character tags include: Celestia, Trixie, Shining Armor, Spearhead, Granny Smith, Spike, Derpy, Dinky, Cloud Kicker, Blossomforth, and Amethyst.

Extra Blue Tags: Comedy and Random

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