The Master of a Rotten Vale

by BlankBrony

First published 18th of October, 2019

[Displaced] A high school boy went to a comic con as the freakin' Vaal Hazak, got awkward with the merchant and get transported to equestria because of it. First time fic.

[Displaced] A high school boy named Jhon went to a comic con as the freakin' Vaal Hazak, got awkward with the merchant and get transported to equestria because of it. First time fic.

After getting sent to Equestria [Timeline : Before Discord's rule], in a place unknown but familiar to him in one of the most isolated place in the Everfree Forest. A Vale, a Rotting Vale and instantly become it's master by controlling the miasma and dead corpses laying around. After some chapters the Main timeline will kick in.

Rated Teen because it may contain "details" (In a gore sense of course, no clop because with a rotting dragon? No, i don't think it's posible unless very very specific fetish) but overall not too gore.

Contain some gramar fails because I'm bad and may get cancelled after one month because i maybe won't have the energy to finish it (I'm too lazy to do whatever there is in a good fic that makes it a good fic, also because I'm doing it just for fun).

Image Source. I do not own the cover image.

Edit : All the chapters after 'The Lair of the Beast (part 2)' will be edited by Crimson Arrow.

Monster Hunter World is owned by CapCom. (Please don't end me)

Prologue

Huh, I guess that's what i get for leaving my confort zone... Welp, here goes the story

"Dude you have to come to the convention"

"Yea, you can't just stay locked in your home forever!"

Said the two best friend i have, well, the best friend i made for obligatory education.
"I don't know, I'm too lazy to do anything I am not obliged to do, you two know this better that anyone."

I said with the most and i mean the most lazy way I could possibly think anything can do.
"Man your lucky you go on a trip to the US while we stay stuck in Tahiti, and what do you plan to do? Stay locked again..."

Said Kahai, the most shameless human i encountered in my life, the man litteraly said to his crush "Hey are you in heat?" in the most innocent and unknowing way of saying something.

"Besides you have to go on one of the conventions going on over there, I swear if you take a picture of a maid cosplay i'll do anything you want like a slave, I mean, maids are hot"
He continued with the last thing he said quietly enough for me to hear. This dude i swear...

"Yea and don't forget to get me some naruto stuff, especially some of sasuke's" Daniel told me. These two otaku's, i am one too but i stoped lately, and besides naruto was not really my style, Overlord on the other hand...

"Yea no, I'll go as Vaal Hazak because I'm a Monster Hunter Wolrld boi." I said getting daggers from the two.
"Uh huh, welp good luck trying to make a costume of those weird dragon/dinosaurs things, I bet you'll trip over your tail" Kahai smirk at me.
"At least I won't fail like you did with your crush" I replied snorting.
"Yeah that was so dumb!" Daniel laughted.
"Welp here's my ride, cya" Gotta get some materials and tutorials to make this zombie dragon a perfect score.

A month later

"Ok, flesh dangling (A/N yea i don't know)from every sides of my costume. Check." Well it's not really flesh, just some trick i got from tutorials. After a long check and re-check the details i got one thing out. "Sharp mangled claws.... Uncheck"" Shoot I gotta go now!"

After arriving at the con, i was struck and crushed because the entire place was filled with people that could populate the entire city of my home Island... Tahiti. Damn i already miss home and my mom is chilling at some places... i don't even care because why should I take the fun that my mom have?

Anyway looking around, I was still crushed and overwhelm by the sheer number of cosplayer here.
Then a maid came to me and said.

"Oh that's Vaal Hazak! It's pretty good!" She said with a tone that could rival Pinkie Pie's. Then i realize. Why do I have the feeling that I just R.I.P myself? Nevermind i wouldn't even be suprised that The Pinkie Pie could have influence in, well anywhere really. I tought still having shivers for comparing Pinkie Pie's crazyness and overpowered overwhelming and ..... Well over-anything really to some random maid attitude.

"Yea thank's, your outfit's good too, i know one friend who would rush over you to do who know what" I replied smiling after thinking about good old Kahai.

She blushed a little but not too much from embarasment. Huh, i go out 1 month and I already make a girl blush, i guess Daniel was right about me being some Anime main charachter/dense/harem boi.

"W-well, it's nothing really, my friends always tell me to go out of my confort zone and enjoy a convention""They also to!d me that maid outfit are perfect to go so i followed"

Well how familiar. Is this some love at first sight drama/romance i got into? Nope not with me, I am a Proud and Humble lazer and soldier of the almighty "Lazy" god. Not some drama playboy anime main character.

"Well it was nice to meet you, goodbye" I said in a neutral and almost monotone way.

"Yeah.. you too..." She said a little down. Geez if these two knew what i did to a girl while just talking they will laugh so hard the earth will shake.

Then i saw a lonely merchant in the corner over there, well you can't really see it, just read it. I went to him and immediatly said.

"How much for the rotten Vaal Hazak claws?"
He looked at me and stared for the longest time someone stare at me. It got do awkward that after the next.. hour? Day? Month? Year? Decade? I don't even know so much it was long for me. Then he said.

"Alright, you go over pony-land with these. That's the price and because you seem so entouthiastic about getting those while making me and you awkward and almost in an ever ending loop of timeless stares. It's free and considered paid so Bye!"

I just stayed there and said "Wut" and blacked out.

Author's Notes:
Hey guys, that's it. My first ever fic made and while displaced are quite outdated (for me at least) it's fun and good. Hope you enjoy and i don't really mind critics, nevermind i want those to see what i have to do better. Sorry if in the future I don't follow these. As it may seem i am repeating myself. I'm lazy and may just don't look to the commentary section.
'Till next chapter!

Arrival

I swear. No I won't I will just be angry at the merchant for getting me out of my world without being able to say goodbye to familly and friends. Now what?

"I should probably freak out because I'm surrounded by corpses with a suprisingly not bad smell" I said with a screechy and weird voice, like it sounds like a whistle and a growl at the same time. Still processing my current situation. If I was like 2 years younger my statement would probably be true.

"Weird feeling over every corner of my being, corpses laying litteraly everywhere, all of them being unknown or broken in so many pieces it's a miracle it still exists" I said analyzing my wherabout. Good thing my little isolation left me a little emotionless because otherwise, I know I would freak out like hell.

"Yep, I'm Vaal Hazak alright in what seems like the Rotten Vale, but something is out..." I look around and see that it's pretty similar to the place you encounter first time Vaal Hazak. Looking out of the area there's not the other place that normally is out of My lair, it's like i'm in a canyon with vines everywhere.

"So that means I'm in a forest, or under one" The way to the surface and possibly the forest is a path of bones.. seriously, why bones? I know it's supposed to be the Rotten Vale but this?

"Wow, pretty In charcter, welp first before moving out is to train with this body, I remember that the miasma everywhere is in a symbiotic relationship with Vaal Hazak, um, me I mean so I should probably train to know how to control it" Because I'm apparantly in Equestria and probably in the Everfree forest from what I heard the merchant say before sending me here. But where in the timeline?

"Huh, pink sky and clouds outside the forest? Definitly Discord but when? Maybe before or after his defeated. I will look after it later, I need to familiarize with the area" I said and proceed to meditate, something pretty good to do to calm down.
After I don't know how long, I sense the miasma swirling around me. Then I remember one of the action of the Vaal Hazak in-game was to breath in so much miasma it leaks out of it's body. So I did just that and breath In. And then I felt like I ate a chocolate cake. I'm so full I was nearly going to sleep.

"Huh so does the Vaal Hazak use the miasma to sustain? Surely not, by the way I never got to look at myself" I said while looking at a conveniently Glavenus tail-blade that is conveniently sharpened to use it as a mirror.

"Huh I look like a basic Vaal Hazak but with Blue eyes unlike the yellow in-game and on the costume, And I have a white dot as a pupil? How weird." Looking at my zombie/dragon/corpse body, It seems like I have some little fungus sticking around like the BlackVeil Vaal Hazak but much smaller and fit in the flesh, unlike the Big bulge that it is supposed to be like in-game.

"So the fungus and miasma together? I like it" I said meditating to control the fungus.

After a while I learned that the fungus and it's spore work like the miasma, but it's more controlled and more virulant, like a disease. I played with it for a while then I had an idea.

"If I can control miasma and fungus, does that mean I can control the things infected by it? No maybe not but maybe yes, after all, I'm like a subspecies of the original and another subspecies Vaal Hazak. I think I'll try" I said with a mad grin on my already and always grinning face, or muzzle? Wich have 2 jaws like in the game.

After concentrating and controlling the fungus to go in everypart of a random corpse. Wich is a flying wyvern that I don't remember the name of... It started to move, like it's getting up.

"Dude this is awsome, I can control the dead!!!!" "Nevermind I'm controlling their corpses but still !!" I exclaimed, too happy of my accomplishement.

After calming down I realise the corpse was in the same state as mine. Rotting, dangling flesh, and some missing members with miasma leaking out of everywhere on it.

It's a weird feeling, it's like I have new members on my corpse like additionnal nerves and muscle. So I move my non-existant new muscle, and at the same time the corpse moved it's wings, well what's left of them.. I tried another imaginary new muscle then it's remaining claw moved. It's sooo cool !!!

After what feels like a decade of playing the puppetmaster, I stoped when I sense two things move outside of my lair moving to somewhere I sensed a large pressure, it's like if I were in the place with the pressure, I would be crushed.
But the two other pressure were light and completly non-existant

"Hmm the pressure I sense from something must be their life force or magic power" " So if I'm assuming right that the two being moving near the vale are Celestia and Luna, and that the other MUCH more powerful pressure is the Tree of Harmony, then I'm likely to be at the time when Discord was turned to stone a millenia before the show timeline"

"It looks like I'm going to be out of the Vale for a while" Sounds fun...

Author's Notes:
Here's the arrival of little Jhon, well BIG Jhon. It looks like he have to explore the forest and at the same time lookout for the Celestial sisters.
Also the life force/magic sensing ability is a fan made skill that is not in-game. And the mini Rotten Vale is situated near the Tree of Harmony well, 1Km away at least wich is under the canyon that is under the castle of the Twin sisters.
'Till next chapter!!

Exploring

And here I go again leaving my new confort zone...

Walking... Trotting..? Whatever. Up the bone stairs is not as bad as I tought. In the contrary it's relaxing, the crushing of bones beneath your claws, the occasional sound of flesh being flatted. I can get use to it for a little trot!

Anyways, as I leave my conforting zone *cough?*, how weird, my cough sounds like I got punch In the back to get stuck food out of my throat. Whatever nobody cares.

So as I was leaving I felt the pressure getting more powerful, so I nearly tumble because of it and the big corpse in front of me. Now that I look at it it's... Green? No way.

"A Deviljho? Dead? With the corpse in complete state and unscratched?" I was certain I was fan-girling hardcore at this point.

Let me explain, in the series Monster Hunter, there's always an apex predator in some area, but with the deviljho added in Monster Hunter third of the name, it's all crumbling.

In short, the Deviljho is the apex among apex, for normal wyvern at least, and because it is just that, it's power is on par with Elder Dragons, wich are Natural Disaster walking/trotting, wich I am. I repeat. NATURAL DISASTER. So if I am the Elder Dragon of death or something like this. This thing wich is not even classified as an Elder Dragon is "The Disaster Of Every Food Chain Of Every Ecological System". Or in short "The World Eater".

This thing is a beast. And there's one laying dead in front of me with a perfect corpse. So I was fan-girling.

Using my OP necromencer power, I reanimated it, it stood up to a widly 5 meters in heigh and 8 meters long. This is so big, maybe bigger than me. Wich is true.

"I'm so gonna make you my bodyguard and this little guy here-" pointing at the little flying wyvern hovering around "-my assassin or observation unit" I said with a wicked and almost royal face, metaphorically because it's a shame to have a muzzle bounded to be forever bones and flesh.

Now trying to not being tired of supporting all this muscle mass over there, because it's not for show the "World Eater" thing, and he gained that title by litterally eating anything with flesh, and to be able to do so he had to have A BIG BIIIIIG metabolism, and of course because of that ridiculous metabolism he had to eat anything from the weakest of the food chain to the top boss of it to just survive so much it's body need food to sustain this enormous musculature.

"Boy I really like this A.I miasma/fungus I have" yea, while I've been playing with flying ninja over there, I learned that I could just order the miasma/fungus to do things In case of, or In order to. Well you get it, like a program. So I Programmed little dude here to just fly around me in a radius between 10 meters to 500 meters wide like a patrol, and if it spotted a living, well anything that emanate pressure to send a cloud of fungus over me to Report then after that it patrols again to see if more being are coming so he reports again, the numbers of the beings in the radius depends on the size of the cloud. In case of suprise attack or enemy reinforcement.

Now for the Deviljho, or Jho. I programmed it to roar and rush over anything that emanate pressure and that said pressure is increasing. That's in case somepony or thing try to do unwanted spell on me, and if i say "Eat it" while pointing at whatever I want, well let's just say R.I.P to the poor thing, and if there are multiples target, I say "Eat Them" and so he goes on a rampage inside little boy patrol radius and killing anything besides me, little dude and if it happens, my guests...
Of course they both stop when I say so, and remain following me.

"I'm so gonna act as a king, wich I am because I'm supposed to be the Elder Dragon that resides in the Rotten Vale, so worth it!" I exclaimed while mentally jumping around. Of course I take measures while leaving my territory, it's foolish to go to unknown places without taking measures. I learned from a game and I will not die again because of it. IRL none the less.

Anyways, now I'm out of the Vale and looking around I see the shadow of the Castle of the two sisters in front of the entrance and loads of trees, like it's a wall of trees, you can't even make the difference between the trees and their shadows. And when I look at the castle it's behind of more trees. It's night time, of course...

"This forest I swear, hmm?" I look at the big miasma/fungus going to me, so I guess little guy reported, by the size of it, I have twenty things around me plus the three I keep sensing at the Castle.

Looking to my left I see green eyes full of hunger and bloodlust, a pack of timberwolves.

Looking to my right I see the shadow of wings and a stinger like tails, a pack of manticores.

"Welp, sooner or later, I knew I was going to run into you guys" Then I look over to Jho and said "Eat Them".

The World Eater in action, how interesting. Jho never went too far from me, I guess his A.I got some sort of sentience? Because I'm pretty sure I programmed it to Rush and not to stay on guard. Altought after some time they all roared in unisson, quite the melody, of course Jho's roar was the strongest, not even engaged with some of the timberwolves that some of them exploded from the sheer force of the roar, some trees even fell down onto some manticores, killing them instantly.

"I knew Jho's roar was powerful but this? I wonder how in the game you didnt die instantly after the 'Battle intro roar' pops in. Wait I'm not even a Vaal Hazak of the game, does this mean this Jho is another subspecies? I don't really care right now because it's too much fun watching it killing anything for me"

After the roar some of the timberwolves and manticores fled and the ones staying looked like the eldest or wealthiest or even the Alphas of them. The wolves then proceed to jump on the living dead World Eater, wich failed with some getting crushed by Jho's feets, some getting mangeled between Jho's countless fangs, and some just flew to the trees and exploded by the force Jho's movement are making.

"So OP, just Jho moving is killing, no DESTROYING them!" I exclaimed wondering how was I able to control it so easily? Am I That powerful? My tought were interrupted by the manticores roaring again and jumping like the wolves but instead of a mouth wide open, tails straight forward like spears.

"Huh bad choice, it will only serve angering him. R.I.P poor overgrown hybrid dragon/cats"

After being stung by the poisoned tails of the manticores that manage to avoid and resists Jho's overwhelming strenght, he stoped moving, gulping the chunk of timber in he's mouth.
He then looked at the manticores, who were shocked to see Jho still standing with like 3 tails inside him right now. Then Jho roared again, with he's muscle glowing blood red growing and tearing some of the wounds old not-zombie Jho made in his life, then I realize.

Is it me or is it like he full on reanimated? Because I'm pretty sure the fungus A.I can't do muscle grow like a normal Jho.

And oh so alive I felt from he's outburst, while I'm contemp!ating the possibility that I have reanimated a Deviljho and it's working for me on it's own volution, he proceeded to decapitate the remaining manticores that didn't die from the roar, blood and flesh flying everywhere.

Why can't I feel the fungus inside of him? Does he have this much rage to come really come back to life and overpowering my fungus to kill just manticores? Damn, if I knew...

An hour later...

"Alright that's it for now let's see... Shoot, Celestia and Luna left" I said frustrated that I didn't got to meet both of them, I look to Jho and.... He's wound are healing? With fungus leaking of of them?

"Healing fungus? That's OP, I may say OP everytime I see a new skill but this deserves just that. OP as hell."

After his wound healed he went to me, with he's muscle 'deflating' and becoming green again and proceeded just as programmed. He fol!ows me again.

"Damn, I have a so docile but so violent dog on my leesh. So OP" yea I'm never gonna stop saying that.

After walking around the forest I finally arrive at the exit.

"I didn't even notice but Jho is a living military, he have just the right color of scales to blend in the forest, and when I look at the trees... I'm as tall as them. So OP wait no it's not, I'm easily noticable" I said while looking around at the chaotic land, then I saw a hill with a throne on it.

"That's so gonna be Discord" I said while preparing to slither around to get c!oser, I don't even know how I would do that. Then I remember that Jho and little dude are still fol!owing me, so I ordered Jho to stay here and wait for me, while avoiding anything that come close. I kept little dude and told him to keep down and to not be spotted and sending me miasma to alert me of ponies coming my direction.

Then I slithered over to Discord behind an upside down rubicks house. Don't question Discord's chaos.

I saw the scene from Season 4 flashback but something is different, Discord is charging something in his claw with a wide grin of his face, I knew he was planning something while the sisters charged up the Elements.

"You two are too late!" He exclaimed while moving he's charging claw to the still charging sisters.

Then I stepped in to the sides so I can't be seen by Discord, I knew later he would take he's revenge on the one that stopped his plan of total succession, so I make sure he doesn't see me.

After I got in I did the basic miasma breath to him, it's like I condensed the miasma to make it nearly solid, then launch it in a laser like breath.

When it strucked him, he fell unconscious and I made sure to let the miasma stay around him to cloud his vision in case he wasn't unconscious, luckly the sisters had their eyes closed to focus on the magic of the elements, at this point I was so used to the pressure of the Elements of Harmony that I didn't even notice it until it was fully charged. Wich got me nearly falling like before, when I got a hold of myself, I wished I saw another OP wyvern like before, too bad the only corpse I saw was the statue of Discord and the unconscious body of the sisters.

When I looked at them moving slightly I was in a dilema, stay or leave? Let's do this with the bonus and malus of both actions Now:

Action : Stay
Bonus : Know and Introduce to the sisters getting probably good impression for stopping Discord before he stoped them.
Malus : Getting a bad impression for appearence and unknown nature and/or motivations for their ponies
Conclusion : 69% bonus and 31% Malus

Action : Leave
Bonus : Stop the bad reflex of self defense from the sisters from seeing unknown being with the appearence of "Evil" to them
Malus : Leave the possibility to have good interaction with the sisters and possibly living in good terms with the pony society.
Conclusion : 69% bonus and 31% malus

Then it's up to emotions then....

So I left...

Author's Notes:
Finally my first three chapters done in one day, hope you enjoy it!
I bet you didn't expect this ending didn't you?
Too bad you gotta find out the Why? Next chaptet!
'Till next chapter!

Aftermath

I really should be less cowardy, at least I left some hint of my presence...

3 hours ago
Celestia POV

We were defeated by Discord chaotic magic, but after some research, we found out about six Elements with enought magic to overpower Discord's. Their last location were under our old castle in ruin.

As we went over our castle, I noticed an intoxicating smell and air, just like a rotting corpse, almost choking me. Luna had the same reaction but we wouldn't let the wildness of this uncontrollable forest defeat us so we continued on forward, flinching whenever the smell got stronger and stronger. Then we arrived at the Tree of Harmony.

"The Tree of Harmony" I said contemplating the mighty structure.

"Indeed sister, we must be faster for thou' little ponies" Luna said, everwearing the stoic attitude

"Let's hurry, I don't know how much I can take this smell and Dis-" I was interupted by a mighty roar, followed by the roars of what I remember were Timberwolves and Manticores. But the one almost muting the others was monstrous, I've never felt so hopeless and fearfull in my long life, and never by a single roar. The last time I was this shaken was the first time I faced an Ursa Major and it's roar... But this one was much more powerful, I could sense the rage and wildness of the one making this roar. It is so powerful the earth shaked beneath our hooves. Luna was trying to stay stoic but couldn't bear the power and rage of this unholy call.

After it ended the world stopped shaking, well from the roar at least, after the roar ended we could hear distanced quake and growl, then we assumed it was one of the beast of this forest combatting Timberwolves and Manticores. But realization struck me, if this beast could take on a whole pack of Timberwolves AND Manticores at the same time while shaking the earth itself with just a roar, then we are doomed if it finds us. We could take on the whole pack of Timberwolves and Manticores ourselves but we would end up heavly wounded. By the sound of the distanced fight, this beast is whimpering, no it's not him, it's the members of the Timberwolves pack because the shake and the growl never ended.

"We must take the Elements and flee, this monster will likely cross our way if we do not do that, and by the sounds of everything going on right now, i'd rather not challenge him to a fight" I said and Luna nodded.

After we got the Elements, we were galloping to get out of the forest but when we were before the Castle.... Nothing, no sound could be heard.

"We think it's safe now sis-" Luna was cutted off by another monstrous roar, much more powerful than the last, I would never have tought about fleeing for my life full of shame and fear. But this time, this monster proved to make the tought come in my head and screaming at my body to do what it says.

So we fled the forest leaving the unknown beast rampaging throught the forest and destroying the poor creatures it found in his way.

Outside the cursed forest, we were panting and near collapsing, then I said.

"Luna *pant* we have *pant* no time to*pant* think about this*pant* thing*swallows saliva*" After straightening my body I continued.

"We have a more important problem at hooves, we will look after this after Discord's defeat" then she nodded, still too tired and panting to answer with words. Then after this we went to Discord.

Present Time...

Celestia POV

I regained consciousness after the event, as I look around the land back to his former self, I wonder what happened when we were charging the Elements.

As I recall, Discord was saying something about us being too late, after that, I don't really remember because my eyes were closed to better focus on the Elements, but I swear I heard something breath in air? But then I heard a whistle and the winds going wild then it hitted something.

I looked up to see Discord statue, he was on his throne with eyes closed and what look like to be a bruise on the sides of his face. Then what I saw after shocked me, right were the bruise was, there was some kind of gas around it, it looked like it was desperetly trying to eat the bruise of Discord's face.

I approach the gas then I quickly backed away, it had the smell of the rotting that I sense in the forest. I looked behind me to see Luna with the same disgusted face. After I looked at the statue posture then at the bruise, I realised something.

"Something helped us, by throwing this disgusting gas at Discord... And by the similarities with the smell we sensed in the forest, it's probably in it" I looked at Luna, she looked back at me with a determined look then said.

"We gotta find it" Little did they know that the one they are talking about is listening to them.

"I see, then I need to hide my lair then"

Author's Notes:
Sorry that this chapter doesn't contain the reason why Jhon fled, well "fled" more like didn't reveal himself, I will explain that next chapter.
'Till next chapter!

Hide and Seek

Man I never moved around so much in my entire life...

50 years after Discord's fall

Jhon's POV

Man I knew they were gonna search for me but sending a whole battalion of BOTH Royal Guards Day/Night with 50 soldiers each is ridiculous. I was so happy I was prepared in case of that. In short I had Jho destroying the entrance and I had to breath in all the miasma that went out, and also I had to clean up all the rotting plants around my territory so they wouldn't suspect anything but man, already 50 years and she hasn't stopped.

Oh yeah about the date, I marked Discord's defeat as a pinpoint debut for my calendar, and considering that I can't have a solar system to determine the years and month, I had to improvised and got 50 years. And while I'm stuck here for a while, I won't go out of my confort zone, almost always sleeping and when I'm not, I'm just chilling with little dude and Jho.

And as for why I'm fleeing is because I'm a simple coward, when I saw the possibility of being an enemy, I couldn't bear all the possiblility incoming, there was just too much so I stayed isolated, just like home. And it seems I'm not aging. Oh look it's time for my sleep.

Celestia's POV

Why won't you come out? I've been searching for a full 50 years with two battalion of both mine's and Luna's soldiers to look after you, and they have less and less hope to find you, at least I know the layout of the forest with the daily basis patrols.

50 years and only the first few week you were active, reports saying earthquakes and the gas getting less and less present. I figured you were hiding or at least making yourself as less noticeable possible. Wich worked perfectly.

There were no sight of a monstrous beast or anything that have a roar that can shake the earth. It's so frustrating. Then when I asked if they saw any rotting environnement... Nothing...NOTHING. It's a good way to test someone patience but I will not fai-.

"Sister you need to rest, the monster and the one who is the cause of Discord's bruise is nowhere to be found, for 50 years no less, on a daily basis. But you said it yourself. Maybe they were leaving wich caused the earthquake and gas dillution so maybe it's just that." She said in a worried then convincing tone.

"*Sigh* You're right, I will end the search of these creatures but we will save our records so that maybe somepony will find them." I said in a defeated tone, and Luna nodded.

Author's Notes:
And here's the last chapter of the chain publications, I had so much inspiration.
And sorry if the reason Jhon fled was disappointing, when I wrote his decisions in the chapter 3, it was improvised because I was entranced by the scenario going on in my head, so I never really figured out Why? Myself, so because I'm lazy I went coward path.
I will rest a little till next chapter cya!!
Edit: Sorry for the little timeline fail and the end😂

The Nightmare

What a beautiful night tonight...

100 years after Discord's defeat

Jhon's POV

After they stoped searching for me, I tried to make Jho a tunnel to the outside, but failed and only made things worse by shaking the ground and making more stones and rock fall on us, I guess living inside a giant skeleton has it's benefit, I mean we were able to not be crushed by the earth up here thanks to the bones of this massive skeleton that serves as a Vale.

Anyways, we were pretty much stuck here for 50 years with nothing to do besides walking around and making the corpses dance. I guess that's what I get for not showing up to introduce myself to Celestia and Luna, and while we talk about them, I keep sensing them for the past century, but lately, they stayed at one place most of the time, meaning they probably built Canterlot by now.

Altought the last two decades, Luna's pressure got weirder and weirder, and at the same time more powerful, so I guess it's that time. "Better get out of there, I don't want to miss this!"

"Oh? What's this?" I look to the right and see.... Yellow?

"A Great Jagras? with it's pack? Oh how much I love you plot conveniences!" I exclaimed while looking into nowhere in hope to see the embodiement of this universe and hug it.

"Now let's see, in the game the Jagras pack had a nest underground so maybe they are diggers? Damn, my luck is OP"

While I'm programming the Jagras pack, I sense Celestia and Luna batteling at the Castle.

"Come on! Hurry!" I said to the Jagras, I programmed them to dig everywhere I point, that's it, I had no time to do the heavy programming yet because I already missed half the fight I think.

"Yes! Now let's go" I said to myself, because I only brought little dude with me, same program.

"Let's see how I fly if it's faster" While I didn't use my wings untill now for obvious reason, I know they are here for something, so I flapped... and flapped. Then at this point I was gonna give up. Then I sensed the miasma flowing beneath my wings, not the fungus, just the miasma.

"Wow, I'm flying up because of the miasma? So sick and...*snort* OP" I said snickering and my over-repetition of "OP".

It feels awsome, it's like fresh wind blowing under your arms wich is so nice.

"No time to chill and relax Jhon, you can do that when it's over" I said while flying over the trees, I see some timberwolves, manticores, hydras and even Ursas, both of them. All of them were trying to hide from me, some even fled.

"I guess that's how it feels like to be the apex predator of a whole forest" I mumbled still flying to the Castle.

When I landed in front of the BIG doors I letted out some miasma and little dude flying around the Castle, then I proceeded to go ninja mod.

"Now let's see now"

Meanwhile...

Celestia's POV

I regained consciousness from Nightmare Moon's suprisingly powerful beam.

"Oh Luna, what did this parasite do to you..." I mumbeled, in the verge of tears, how did I not noticed the changes? I mean I noticed it but I tought I was just tired from the search of our mysterious hero.

"The night will las FOREVER" She says, oh how I will make sure that this parasite or whatever there is inside of her will suffer.

"Luna, I will have no choice but to use them now!" I cried while charging the Elements, I'm so sorry Luna.

I then launched the powerful spell of the Elements, sending her to the moon with a rainbow like beam, a form of a mare is printed little by little on the moon. I cried while wayching it.

"Oh Luna I'm so sorry *sniff* how am I ever gonna *sniff**cough* manage the kingdom without you?" I cried, desperatly hopping all of this was just a Nightmare, then I smelled something, something rot.

"What is this?" I said while looking at the sky, I could see some kind of bird with gas all over it.

"This gas, where have I saw it before?" Then I realised.

"It's coming, no, it's already here..." I mumbeled, getting a sense of fear and excitement. While looking around, I could see the same gas getting in the castle from ever corner of the Castle.

I looked at the only corner where the shadows were the darkest, and the gas was more concentrated there than anywhere else. But it's not all, the same moment I looked at the corner, all the gas previously all around went over it and started to fly around something I could not see yet because of the still cascading tears.

Then I saw blue eyes glowing, with white little dots as pupils, around the glowing eyes was a massive body, I still couldn't make out the details because it was still a shadow, then all around the massive shadow body, the previously stone rumble around the room started to decay, like the rocks started to rot and the one closest to the shadow were starting to turn to ashes and become part of the gas.

The shadow started to come closer, I could see it now, and it was horrible. My body started to scream to run, but I was too terrified to move, then it started to speak to me and said.

"Hello there little pony."

Author's Notes:
Here's the Nightmare chapter, hope you guys enjoy it, as for the Rotten Vale, I didn't really detailed how it was, but as you may have seen it here, it's a massive skeleton of a monster, so big it serves as the Vale foundations, as for what's it's functions in the game, well, go play the game x).
'Till next chapter!

Meeting

Ahh Celestia, how long has it been?...

Celestia's POV

"Hello there little pony" It said, somehow with a conforting whistle and at the same time a terrifying growl.

Now that I could look at it, I was at the verge of gagging because of it's state.

It's a walking corpse of some unknown creature, it's whole body leaking the intoxicating gas, the rotten flesh falling but still sticking all over it, It's eyes full of nothing, pupils that can pierce the strongest fortress, and it's teeth, so much of them, and when it talk, I could see another set of those countless teeth, inside it's jaw, is another jaw, those fangs could certainly rip apart dragon scales, and it's wings, they no longer can have the fonctions of "wings" because of how much flesh is missing, allowing air, no, gas go throught them, and it's c-

"Hello? Are you okay little pony?" It, no, he said while showing me those horrible fangs.

"U-um, y-yes, yes I'm okay" I replied, a little bit taken back by he's appearence and... the fact that it called me little, which was infuriating.

"Ok, if you say so. I'm Jhon el Vaal Hazak, but you can call me Jhon, pleased to meet you." He said, even if he said it with this horrible voice, I could still sense the nobility behind it.

"I-I'm Princess C-Celestia, co-ruler o-of Equestria" But I then realised..

"W-was the co-ruler of Equestria*sniff*" I said crying in my hooves, even if this monster is here, I could not hold the tears from the fact that I killed my sister to the moon.

I then hear the sound of cracking bones and flesh getting stronger and the smell going away. He's coming towards me.

"Ah, so the mare you fought was your own sister then hm?" He questionned with a voice that carried nobless and power, while still sounding relaxing and confortable. I looked at it's eyes and nodded, unable to form words behind the tears.

"Do not worry little princess" He said still coming towards me, I knew he was gonna have me for his meal, but I didn't care, I lost my own sister, killed by my own hooves.

"Ho-how can *sniff* you be so sure?!" I snapped, trying to be intimidating to him.
"I killed her*sniff* I killed my own sister!" I said falling again in my hooves to cry. I then sensed claws crawling on my back, I'm doomed, but I can see you again sister...

But the fatal moment never came, the claws continued to crawl, no, he was conforting me.

"Do not fall to depression little princess, your sister is still alive" He said in a knowing tone. How does he know that? It's not possible.

"How do you know that, I sent my sister to the moon, leaving nothing behind. How can she be alive?!" I replied, thinking it was impossible.

"Let me tell you a prophecy"
" 'When the Night come
When the Sun's done
When the Night's gone
And the Sun is down'

'A thousands years to come
When the stars are moving
Around the Moon they go
To announce the return
Of the mare on the Moon'

"This prophecy is what you need to remember, for when the times come, you will finally see your sister again" He said while walking away.

"Wait! Don't go! I need to know what this means! Is she really alive?! Wait!" I cried, still wanting to know more. I then got on my hooves and run after him. When I got outside, I could see him looking at the sky with his wings spread high, they were massive but still in a state where he couldn't fly.

"Wait! Your wings are not in a state to fly! Let m-" I stopped, looking at him, he was starting to levitate, I could see the gas going up undet his wings. Then he flew, but before that he said something.

"Don't worry, the miasma is my friend and you are too, we will see each other when the prophecy is done. Untill a thousand years from now little princess." He said flying away in the deeper part of the forest. I was still in shock ofrom the fact that it flew thanks to the gas, no, the 'miasma' as he said. I tried to follow him but I got lost.

After a long time, I finally found my way out and said.

"Until the next millenia Jhon..."

Author's Notes:
Here's the part of the meeting. If Jhon sounds like a mastrr yoda, well you'll know why next chapter. Now that it's public I don't really mind some commentary to rectify some things from the story. I can't Pinkie Promise I will do as it says thought.
"Hey when will I be in?!"
... Not now at least.
Anyways, 'Till next chapter!

Awakening

That's a looong sleep I just did....

"*Yawwwwwwnnnnnnn (last for 10min)* Wow, that's the longest yawn I ever did in my life, I guess that's a long yawn for a long sleep. Welp better look around here... Hmm?" I said because I sense six pressure, each one being part of the pressure of the tree of Harmony.

"Already? Man time pass by so quickly, wait a minute. What did I do last time?"

1000 years ago...

"Let me tell you a prophecy"
" 'When the Night come
When the Sun's done
When the Night's gone
And the Sun is down'

'A thousands years to come
When the stars are moving
Around the Moon they go
To announce the return
Of the mare on the Moon'

"This prophecy is what you need to remember, for when the times come, you will finally see your sister again"

Present time

"Oh... Why did I act like a badass again?" I said while thinking of a reason why talking like that was a good idea.

"I know, maybe because 'First Impression must be perfect' situation was in my head this time. Yea now that I think about it, it's so me." I laughted while sensing the six pressure building up, and up, and up....

"Shoot, I'm gonna miss it.... Nevermind, I need to think about a good way to introduce but not now. Maybe with Fluttershy? I mean she's always near the forest and sometimes goes in to search for her animals. Yea that's so gonna be it! I'll go save her when some Manticore or some Timberwolves jump on her! Oh yeah!" I said excited to do some hero stuff.

"But before that, I need to check on little dude and Jho"

I looked around the Vale and, it didn't change much, besides some vines and fugus sticking around but besides that everything's normal. Then I heard stomps...

"Ohh, something big's coming!" I exclaimed, excited again to meet my first challenger in a millenia.

"Master?" Something said in a worried and with a voice constantly growling. Wait...

"Jho? Is that you?" And indeed it was him, because I saw a massive green mass nearly tackle me before I dodged.

"Master!!! You returned!!!" He said while getting up from the floor/corpses.

"What, Jho you gained sentience?" I said still shocked at the fact that Jho was just talking to me.

"Yes Master, after your return from the Castle a millenia ago, you ordered us to hide the Vale again and take care of it while you go sleeping. After a century, the miasma allowed us to be sentient, but I don't know how..." He said in a sad tone... Sad? How? Jho's supposed to be relentless! I didn't even think that 'sad' was in his dictionnary!

Anyways... Wait

"'Us'? You mean the Jagras and little dude gained sentience too?" And when I said that I was tackled by little dude from behind me and at the same time was hugged by 10 yellow lizard.

"Master!!!" Said little dude... Nevermind it sounded feminine.. So little girl? Man why didn't I check if she was female or not when I first tested my powers?

"Hey little dude. Or should I say little girl? It's good to see you too." I said gaining a blush from her... Wait a blush? How? Nevermind, she's sentient, she's a 'she' and I'm a 'he' and a 'he' apparently attractive. And when I look at her, well she's still little but she's not the mess I reanimated so long ago anymore, she's even clean, without counting the miasma flying around of course.

"Master it's good to see you. Me and my childs missed you" The big Jagras said from afar while coming closer. And she's a 'she' too. And I noticed she said that with a seductive tone that got little girl a glare to her. Not her too...

"Ah hello there, I see you and your jagras are doing well hm?" I said while pointing at the little lizard still clinging onto me. That's cute I admit, some even went on my head doing the impression of a pirate.

"Yes we are doing well. Come now little ones" She said turning around and going away. The little lizards jumped off meand followed her, some looked down with a sad face.

"Now I will go for a walk, I'll bring only little girl this time. Jho please stay here and guard the Vale"

"Yes Master" they both said in unisson, while little girl said it a bit shaking.

"Now let's go"

When we got out I noticed that only the forest changed while the Castle was in a worse state than last time.

"Now let's go, I still need to look around here" I said getting a nod from little girl.

The forest was suprisingly calm, but that's normal when I caught some timberwolves, manticores and cockatrices trying to hide. Huh I guess I was not forgotten by the wild life in here.

"I'm still the apex predator even after all these years" I said to myself.

"Of course you are master, these lower life forms all knew their places the moment you let Jho take down two whole packs of them. When they saw that you were his master they began to cower in fear, they are disgusting." She said.

How familliar, where have I heard this 'lower life form' thing? Oh right, that's the whole Overlord thing.

"Now now, no need to be harsh on them, they are creature drive by instinct, their actions are justified"I said trying to calm the strict attitude of little girl. Damn she sounds big not little.

"You are too kind master." She said in an admiring voice.

"Oh what is this?" I questionned looking near the outskirt of the forest. I could see a pony, a butter yellow one. Fluttershy, being attacked by timberwolves with a little white bunny that I assumed was Angel in front of her with a stick in his paw. How cute.

"Oh how I missed you plot convinience, I still haven't been able to hug you universe" I said, trying to let out as much seductiveness I could. This got me a sad, angry and confused look from little girl.

"I swear if I find whoever this is I'm gonna kill her"

"What was that?"

"Nothing!" She said trying to sound innocent. How cute, she didn't think I heard it.

"Oh I think that's my queue to pop in" I said looking at the poor timberwolves, yes not the poor Fluttershy. The poor timberwolves that were too focus too notice me.

"Stay hidden little girl, your Master is gonna play the hero today." I said to little girl.

"Oh I still hope I'm not too old for this, let's go!"

Author's Notes:
Yes I know you guys love cliffhangers 😁
I don't have much to say so
'Till tomorrow!

Meeting (take 2)

Meeting(take 2)

I hope I look like a badass in her eyes...

Fluttershy's POV

Oh why does it happens always to me. I was just going to search Angel in the Everfree Forest and it's normally safe near my cottage. Why then, is there a pack of Timberwolves here?

"Please don't hurt me" I said hiding behind Angel.

Oh Angel how brave of you, too stand against a whole Timberwolves pack, I wish I was as brave as you. Then one Timberwolf jumped to me.

"*Closes eyes* No...." I said closing my eyes, waiting my end... That never came?

"*Open one eye* What?.." I saw the Timberwolf in mid air freeze. Wait mid air? How? And what is this horrible smell around it? Now that I look at him, why does it look like that it have some kind of gas circling around it? And why it's eyes aren't glowing green, but a faint yellow? And h-

I was cutted out of my tought by a little whistle, or is it a growl? All around me, and when I looked at the still mid-air Timberwolf, the gas started to go away, no they are coming towards me.

"Please no, not me.." I said trying to hold back the tears as I look at gas coming towards me. But they went behind me, behind me...

"Are you allright little pony?" Something said behind me, somehow making it sound like a conforting whistle and a terrifying growl.

"Ye-yes?" I said while turning around. When I looked behind me I saw a monster, one that could make the ones in fairy tales run for their lives. It was monstruous, flesh falling from it, no him, eyes blue like the sky with pupils as white as the nothingness in it's soul, teeths, no, fangs that could tear the scales of a dragon with such ease. And it's wings, I can't help but think they can still do their work even if they look like they couldn't. But now that I look at him, I can't help but feel bad for him, what would I do if I was in his state? He look like life wouldn't allow him to die, making his whole body rot with him still alive.

"Hello? Are you okay?" He said, I could see another jaw inside he's already visible jaw. It terrifies me. But I still couldn't take away the feeling of being safe near him.

"Ye-yes..." I replied, still shocked by the state of his whole being.

"Are you gonna say anything besides 'yes'?" He said, he sounded amused.

"N-no" I said blushing, why?

"Should I remind you we're not in a situation where we can casually talk like this. There's stil a whole pack of Timberwolves."

"Oh my.." He was right, there were still a whole pack of Timberwolves growling and barking at us.

"Yes yes 'Oh my' yes, now shoo I don't want to look more like a monster that I already do in front of somepony as innocent as you" He said, the last part he looked down. The poor one, he thinks of him as a monster in every sense of the term.

"O-okay" I partially lied, I wouldn't leave him unchecked, so I hid behind a bush.

"Now that that little pony is gone, let's see if I'm still worthy of the title of 'The Master of the Rotten Vale' Now come at me you wooden dogs!" He roared, well a roar that sounded like something breathing in a huge amount of air. But somehow, it shook the ground, even making some trees fall on some of the 'wooden dogs' as he says.

Then, the ones that didn't get crushed by the falling trees, leaped on him, mouths wide open, but he didn't move, instead, he breathed in air, no, the gas all around him, then fired a beam made of them. When it made contact with the Timberwolves, they would explode, leaving behind chucks of timber surrounded by said gas. But some manage to dodge the beam and even bite him, but he didn't flinch. But he didn't move either, then the Timberwolves still clinging on him, fell on the ground, completely lifeless, and instantly started to rot, part of them falling of, some turning to ashes. And him, he stood up on his back legs and made another roar, this one much stronger than the one before. Then he fell on the ground and didn't move.

I was completly crushed and run for him, I tought he died from the bites, when I got half way from him, the gas that leaked out of him started to swirl faster and faster around he's body, then I heard a whistle, then he stood up, and looked like he tried to breath in as much as gas as possible. When he finished he stood there, then turned around to look at me.

"Is something wrong little pony?" He said and sounded completly innocent and unaware of what just happened. But then I saw the bite mark on his body, and rushed to look at them.

"Oh please don't move, you are still wo-"I stopped when I saw the bites mark close "-unded" "How?What?When?" I exclaimed, shocked that, what previously looked like mortal wounds, closed in front of me, and looked completly healed, not even leaving a scar behind.

"The how is that I'm Immortal, the What is the miasma, or the gas that always stick around me, and the When is just now" He responded to all of my questions sounding amused. It made me blush.

"You know, I'd lied if I said you weren't cute when you blush" It made me blush even more.

"Pl-please stop..." I tried to impose, to no end.

"I can't because you are cute, and that makes me want to hug you" He said, sounding like a child while coming closer to me, I backed away, not wanting to be hugged, that would make me blush even more, but then he stopped.

"No I can't, not when I'm still a monster..." He turned around, walking away deeper in the forest while looking down.

"No please don't go..." I said, but too quietly that he couldn't hear me.

"As much as I want to stay, I still need to manage my little kingdom" He said in more nobi!ity than even Princess Celestia.

"Wait, your a king?" I said, shocked again by the possibility that the one that saved me was Royalty.

"In a way yes, but if that was it, then my kingdom is a ruin compared to the one little princess rule."

"Little princess? You mean Princess Celestia? You mean you knew Princess Celestia when she was little?"

"Not really, I bet she didn't change much since the last millenia, maybe just the height"

"The last millenia?! You mean you knew her sister too?!"

"No, unfortunatly. I met the Princesses when they were in battle." He finished. I was shocked, by the fact he was a millenia's old, by the fact that he knew Princess Celestia and by the fact that he was there when Nightmare Moon was banished.

"Hmm, I see you brought back little princess little sister?" He said in a knowing matter.

"How do you know, we only brought her back yesterday." I said, shocked (again) that he knew we brought back Princess Luna.

"Oh I know many things little pony, but not your name."

"O-oh my how rude of me. Well I'm Fluttershy..."

"Well hello Fluttershy, I'm Jhon el Vaal Hazak the Master of the Rotten Vale, but you can call me Jhon, pleased to meet you" He replied with a voice carrying nobility and power, that made me squee.

"Oh, sorry that our meeting was cut short, but I need to go. Goodbye" He said extending his wings, then flew, it looks like he was controlling the wind, no, the gas, no, the miasma as he called it.

"Goodby Jhon... Oh I need to tell this to Twilight" Then I felt something bumping my head, when I looked behind me I saw angel tapping he's little foot on my back while pointing with his thumb? Behind him.

"Oh yes of course Angel, I'll feed you before that."

Author's Notes:
Here's the meeting with fluttershy and jhon.
Not much to say besides asking if you like my story so far or not.
Till next chapter!

Preparations

Oh shoot, god's POV in action this time...

God's POV (Third person's POV)

While Jhon returned to his lair, Fluttershy returned to her own 'lair', her peaceful cottage.

"Oh my... What am I gonna say to Twillight and the others?" She said in her natural angelic voice that could render the most heartless being (I think is a DevilJho for monster hunter) harmless.

'Just say you were saved by a zombie monster quadruped thingy' Angel said with his stare at Fluttershy, wich understood immediatly.

"Oh I'm not sure Angel, I don't think they'd trust me..." She said very shyly, something even a changeling couldn't resists. Speaking of changelings, one of them just died outside of her cottage inside the forest because of a heart attack.

'Really?' Said Angel throught a deadpan look.

"Um... Maybe?" She said, instantly being pushed by Angel outside the cottage.

"Ok ok I'll go tell them..." She said, looking a little mad at Angel, which was impossible for the simple fact that she can't, well she can be she won't because her heart's to pure.

"Odd, I never thought little birds could have a gas leaking from them" She said while looking at the little bird that is following her. Little did she know that this particular bird is one 'possessed' by Jhon.

Meanwhile...

Jhon's POV

"Interesting..." I said while looking throught the eyes of a little bird I 'possessed' on the way back to 'home'.

Long story short, I apparently can see throught the eyes of what the miasma 'possessed' that is not a dead corpse but a living being, while it's not in a mortal situation, I can still control it's every movement, and when I don't, it does it's thing still having the miasma in it. It's kind of like the virus in Resident Evil, or Prototype, instead of completly making the host mind mad, it's completly harmless. Also the miasma is not visible when I don't take control. I hope you didn't miss my 'catchphrase' because. This. Is. OP.

Anyways, I noticed how the miasma is visible only when I control it's movement, while when I just look throught it's eyes, it doesn't become visible. Again, this is OP.

"Oh Oh Oh! Let's see what's she gonna say to Twilight!!!" I said, fan-girling over my OP skills. But then, I became completly serious, well 'serious' looking, because I was thinking of James Bonds stuff and tried to look like some ninja, federal soldier, hitman kind of stuff. Wich failed ridiculously with my 'special body'.

"Ok stop doing weird stuff Jhon, you need to see what the main 6 will prepare with the info that you exists" I said focusing on the scene I see throught the Eye of Sauron eyes of little bird.

Ponyville

God's POV

Fluttershy was trotting throught Ponyville, a peacefull town, well, as peacefull as it can be, with all the major events happening here.

Anyways, as she was trotting throught Ponyville to the Library, she saw some stallions looking at her while blushing, that made her hide behind her mane, at least tried to, that made her look cuter than, well anything really, wich made the mentally sensible stallions faint while the toughest were trying to hide their blushes. One of them made the first step and came over her and said.

"H-h-h-h-h-(after 30 seconds of trying to say 'hey')-hey Fluttershy!" He said... To the air. Man you had One Job, when he looked around he could barely see Fluttershy's tail before getting inside the Library. He looked down going the opposite way. Poor dude, didn't even noticed when Fluttershy got away.

Anyways, back at Fluttershy, she got inside the Library, sighting in relief, not of the fact she avoided a stallion, but the fact that she avoided crushing the heart of an innocent pony. Yes yes, she's that pure, that's why she's waifu.

Anyways, after composing herself she went to look for Twilight but only founded Spike and Owlicious (I don't remember the name and I'm too lazy to look so tell me if I'm wrong), with Owl' looking at an interesting bird outside the tree in the sky flying around, while Spike was making diner in a 'manly' apron. The poor dude.

"Um, Hello Spike, have you seen Twilight? If you don't mind that is" She said shyly. Too much heart-attacks are threatening to end me, even if I'm supposed to be God's POV.

"Sorry Shy, Twilight is asleep right now, she worked too hard on the last cellular bio-enginering scale project that she started. Don't ask, I don't know what it means" Little dude, wait not, Spike said, always the chill dude when no panic days are on.

"Oh Ok... I'll come back to-" She was cutted off when a yawn was heard upstairs, and a Very unique specimen of a Twilight coming downstairs while managing to rub her eyes with her right-front hoof making her walk with only Three hooves downstair.

"Good Morning Spike 'yawn' what's for breakfast?" She said, still breaking the laws of physics, while yawning...

"Actually Twilight, it's Good evening and were having hay fries... For dinner" Spike, the ever so chill dude we all love... To use as a 'punching' bag.

"Oh hehe sorry. Oh hello Fluttershy! What are you doing here?"

Preparations (part 2)

These ponies I swear...

God's POV

"Ok Fluttershy, what do you need?" Twilight asked.

"Oh nothing really..." Fluttershy replied taking a sip from her tea cup.

"Oh okay, then what are you here for?" Asked Twilight, a bit confused.

"Oh, I just came here to tell you that I was saved by a zombie monster quadruped thingy in the Everfree Forest." Fluttershy replied casually while taking another sip.

"Oh that's nice of it!" Twilight said while she too took a sip of tea, happy to see a zombie monster quadruped thingy from the Everfree Forest save Fluttershy. Wait what?

"Wait what?" Twilight questionned, thinking that she had been hearing things.

"I said that I was saved by a zombie monster quadruped thingy in the Everfree Forest." Fluttershy reapeted, in a casual matter while gulping all of her tea.

"Oh Okay" Twilight said taking another sip, but then threw up all of the tea in her mouth, onto Spike, the poor dude.

"WHAAT!!!!" Twilight exclaimed, shocked by what she just heard.

"What?!!!" Fluttershy cried flying under the table, shaking like mad. That made the cutest cats in the Multiverse full of shame.

"Sorry Fluttershy it's nothing, I was shocked that's all but, are you sure you were saved by a zombie monster quadruped thingy?" Twilight said trying to confort the poor mare under the table.

"Yes, he litteraly look like a 'zombie monster quadruped thuingy'" She said, with a voice making it sound more like 'it's a fact' than 'it's a joke'.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH" Somepony screamed, sounding closer and closer before...

SMASH

"MONSTER? WHO? WHAT?WHEN?FLUTTERSHY?" A mare with a rainbow mane exclaimed while flying all around the Library.

"RAINBOW DASH!!! CALM DOWN AND SIT HERE!!!" Twilight ordered, no, ORDERED to the military instincts driven mare, who did as said and sitted down at the spot Twilight was pointing, next to Fluttershy.

"Now, all we know is that this monster saved Fluttershy and that it is apparently a zombie quadruped like thingy" Twilight explained.

"What? Really? Saved Fluttershy from what?" Rainbow Dash questionned.

"Oh um well, he saved me from a pack of Timberwolves..." Fluttershy responded, dropping the jaws of the two listening mares, well five of them actually.

"What the hay? A 'hole pack o' Timberwolves?" A cow mare exclaimed, barging throught the front doors. AppleJack

"Oh my, it sounds like a knight in Shining Armor (get it?) saved you from those nasty ruffians dear Fluttershy!" An annoying posh-sounding mare said from behind the cow mare.

"Um, It's a he actually, not an it. And well, he kind of like, a little, not too much, but a bit of, um how shoulf I say this?" Fluttershy tried to say something but couldn't know the words for it.

"Oh Oh!! Ummm Banana! No no He's a super awesome interdimensional being! No I know! He's something turned into another thing from another world that somehow got transported in Equestria as the thing this something became as with superduperhyper awsome powers!!!" A pink bouncing apocalypse said while coming from nowhere.

"Um, I don't think so.... Oh I know!" Fluttershy said while trying to take an imposing pose and said.

"I am Jhon el Vaal Hazak, the Master of the Rotten Vale!" Fluttershy said, trying to sound intimidating and with a low voice.

"That's what I remember him saying after he saved me before flying of deeper in the forest." Fluttershy explained trying to hide from the embarrasment of having to the this little show.

"Jhon... Jhon el Vaal Hazak.... Jhon Jhon Jhon.... Argh, I know I heard this name before!" Twilight said with deep frustration.

"Well maybe you can ask Princess Celestia? I mean he did say he knew her when she banished her sister." Fluttershy suggested, still blushing. See, that is why some people said that lolis cuteness are weapon of mass destructions, but I say Fluttershy is a weapon to end the world.

"Of Course! The Princesses! They should know! If what you say is true then The Princesses MUST know!" Twilight exclaimed bouncing around, with Pinkie Pie following her.

"Spike! Take a note to Princess Celestia!" She continued. While Spike just groaned and took a letter and a quill.

Dear Princess Celestia
This morning, Fluttershy was saved by a strange
Creature named 'Jhon el Vaal Hazak', after it, no, he saved
Fluttershy, he said that he was the Master of the Rotten Vale.
This name sounds oddly familliar to me, so that is why I request your
assistance In this matter.

Your faithful student. Twilight Sparkle.

"Ok now we wa-" Twilight was interrupted when the front door was burst open. Poor door

"Twilight! Where have you seen him?" Celestia exclaimed, shocking all of the present girls (and dude).

"P-p-p-princess Celestia! What are you doing here? And no, I didn't saw him but Fluttershy did" Twilight said, shocked by the outburst of Princess Celestia, but still managed to point at Fluttershy, who hid under the table again shaking.

"I am sorry my little ponies, but Jhon's the reason why my beloved sister returned, he told me a millenia ago that little prophecy in books." Celestia explained, shocking even more the ponies.

"W-w-what? He's the one who told the prophecy of the mare on the Moon?" Twilight exclaimed.

"Yes Twilight, he is the one who told the prophecy, that is why I must immediatly thank him for this." Celestia said, determined to find the one that brought hope in her heart.

"Sorry Princess but don't you think it's a little bit late?" Twilight said to Celestia, who then realised it was true, and she looked a little bit sad because of that, well she looked like that to me at meast, not her little ponies.

"You are right Twilight, but tomorrow morning, we will meet at Fluttershy's cottage" Celestia said while walking out of the Library.

"Ok girls, tomorrow morning at Fluttershy's" They all cheered and went out while saying their goodnights, well besides Fluttershy herself, still hiding under the table.

"Come on Fluttershy, you need to return at your cottage, you need to rest, you had a long day after all" Twilight said to the still shaking mare, then was oblige to walk her to her home. It was dark after all.

Meanwhile

Jhon's POV

"Oh man, I'll finally be able to meet the main 6 personally!!!"

Author's Notes:
Here's the last chapter before the BIG introductions.
I made it as a little bonus chapter for the day, I couldn't hold the suspense myself so I had to write it.
But because it's an early chapter published. Well the next one will be late of 1 day, just to balance out my schedule.
Till next chapter!

Meeting (take 3)

Oh man, oh Lord, oh shhhhhhhh, no swearing in here! But oh God...

Jhon's POV

Oh man oh man oh man. I said in my mind while watching at the sun going higher and higher. Well there weren't any clocks to look at when you wait impatiently at an event, so I look at the natural clock in the sky.

Anyways, to my 'subjects' I would look like a wise God of whatever because I look at the sky.

"do you think he is planning something?" little girl said to Jho quietly, while staring at me with admiration and hungry eyes.

"no I think he's just relaxing" Jho replied quietly, while looking at me like I was a legend or something.

" are you sure? He look tense to me, maybe he need to relax differently" Ana said with a seductive tone. Ana is the big jagras by the way, I would feel weird calling her 'Jagras leader' or something like that, so it's Ana. Her way of saying what she just said earned her a killer glare from little girl.

"You guys, I'll go for a little while, you stay here" I ordered, making them blush from being spotted but recomposed themselves and nodded in a military way.

"Welp, better get to Fluttershy's." I said flying to Fluttershy's cottage, while thinking about how to make The Entrance of the Century.

Meanwhile in Ponyville

God's POV

It was early in the morning, the sun was still mid-way from getting up, but Celestia was completly awake, well she normally is because she raise the sun but she was always tired, now she was smiling widely while raising the sun. Because she didn't want to miss this, she was sleeping with Twilight at the Library, even if the owner was constently trying to refuse, it was no use against The Celestia.

Anyways, while Celestia was raising the sun with a mad grin, Twilight woke up and yawn, but stopped when she saw Celestia on her balcony, recalling all yesterdays event, she quickly got up and slowly approach Celestia, who turned to look at her with her normal, motherly smile.

"Let's go" Celestia said in a stern way, still maintaining her motherly smile. To wich Twilight just nodded.

Along the way to Fluttershy's, Celestia could see a glimpse of a bird surrounded by miasma, when she noticed this then rubbed her eyes to make sure she wasn't hallucinating, and when she looked again, nothing. 'Maybe I think about it too much' she tought and shrugged off her 'hallucination'.

And meanwhile, a rare specimen of a Vaal Hazak was sweating, well mentally, because he's messenger was nearly completly caught.

Anyways, when Twilight and Celestia got to Fluttershy's, Celestia noticed that everypony was already here, all tired and some even asleep, and the only one who was wide awake was Fluttershy, who looked as enthousiastic as Celestia.

"Good morning my little ponies" Celestia said with her usual motherly voice.

"Good morning Princess" Everypony said then bowed, except Rainbow Dash and AppleJack who were sleeping on the couch.

"Now we need to go in the Everfree Forest, Jhon might still be out" Celestia said, determined to find him, this confused Twilight.

"Princess, I don't want to offend but, why are we going so early?" Twilight questionned.

"It's because Jhon is somehow capable to have him and his lair hiden, I once tried to find him for 50 years with no results." Celestia explained, looking a bit down when she thought about the time she couldn't find him.

"That is why we must go now, he might not be hiding and still be out." Celestia continued, regaining her determination. Twilight nodded understanding.

"Allright everypony let's go!" Twilight exclaimed, awakening the two sleeping mare now groaning.

"Oh come on!" Rainbow Dash complained getting up and walking outside with the others. They then walked to the outside of the Forest and prepared to enter.

"Okay my little ponies, be carefull" Celestia said gaining nods as a response.

After 10 minutes in the Forest, Celestia noticed how oddly calm the Forest was, this made her more cautious.

But then she could see chucks of woods on the ground surrounded by miasma, when she looked closer, she could see they were Timberwolves, this made her back away while everypony looked curious about the miasma, then they all heard a terrifying roar, one that shook the ground and make trees fall, this made everypony stood still, unable too move from the fear they felt at that moment.

But Celestia remembered, it was the same roar that they heard her and Luna so long ago.

"Everypony! Behind that bush!" She exclaimed while running to a conveniently placed bush big enought to hide everypony.

Then they saw a huge manticore crash in front of them, Celestia remembered that massive manticores, bigger than a normal one were called 'Alpha' and were leaders of a pack of manticores.

Then they saw a whole pack of manticores rush ti the Alpha and helped him stand up. Then they all looked at the way they were coming, growling and roaring, this made everypony confused but then they looked at the way the manticores were looking, trees were shaking with the ground, the shake was stronger and stronger then they saw something terrifying.

A gigantic monster came throught the trees, it was a dark green biped with little forearms but it had fangs that could tear throught everything in it's path, his muscle were so massive it looked like it's tearing his skin covered in countless scar leaking miasma. Wait misama? Celestia thought but was cutted.

It roared, but because it was closer, the roar threatened to bloodied the ponies poor ears. After finishing what could be describe as a magnitude 10 seism (lol joking) it rushed over the Alpha.

"Stop" a voice said, somehow whistling and growling at the same time, behind the monstruous beast, who stopped. The manticores took this opportunity to flee, but nopony was paying attention to them anymore.

"Step aside" the voice continued, and the beast did as ordered.

This submission to another being from the beast made the ponies shiver and think 'what could control such a beast?' a tought that was quickly answered by the appearence of a more terrifying beast from the deep depths of Tartarus behind the now crouching beast, it looked like a bow.

The other being was so terrifying that Rainbow Dash and AppleJack had a hard time not trying to piss themselves, while being confused of how Fluttershy wasn't fainting, an action that Rarity did on a conviniently sofa-shaped bush behind her.

It was like watching Death itself, he was massive, as tall and wide as the beast, flesh falling from every sides of his body while somehow still sticking on him, eyes as blue as the sky with pupils that could pierce throught the souls of the unfortunate one that look at them. Fangs that was sharper than the still bowing beast, wings that couldn't complete their tasks anymore as they seem to be just deformed flesh, it's back spine can be seen tearing throught it's back with fangs like bones sticking out of it's chest. And all over it's body was a gas, leaking everywhere with little fungus under the falling flesh.

"Hello Fluttershy" He said looking at Fluttershy who just smiled and said "Hello Jhon" in return.

The ponies were shocked by this, and even more when they saw another jaw inside his already one jaw when he talked. He then turned to Celestia, who stiffened her entire body by the attention she was getting.

"And hello there little Princess" He said in a noble and powerful way, yet in a gentle and conforting way at the same time. The nickname 'little princess' made Celestia blush, remembering their first meeting.

"W-w-well hello there Jhon" Celestia tried to reply calmly, but failed still flustered by her nickname.

"I see you haven't changed one bit since the last millenia, always flustered by anything I say hmm?" He said in a teasing manner that made Celestia blush even more.

This made Everypony confused.

"Um, were you and the Princess um...." Fluttershy tried to say the last part but couldn't and instead blushed, this made Celestia realise what she was meaning and she too started blushing harder.

"*snort*No sorry Fluttershy, we are not something, and besides, I look like a monster while she look too beautiful to be called an anomaly in the laws of physics." He said, looking a bit sad when he said the 'monster' part. The last sentence made Twilight ears perk up and Celestia blushed even more.

"O-oh please I am not that beautiful" Celestia said flustered, 'Why am I reacting this way? she tought when she noticed how much she was blushing.

"You'll be suprised if you paid attention to every stallion you see everyday, I'm pretty sure they're thinking of you know what whenever they see you." He said chuckling, well tried to as it sounded more like a whistle and a growl than anything really. This made Celestia think about it and it made her blush, well not harder because I don't know if that's possible at this point.

The mares on the other hand were gigling at everything he said, while the two 'trying not to piss themselves' mares were now trying not to laugh out loud, and Twilight, who was lost in her toughts trying to figure out what he was, and what's happening at the same time.

"Now I think we have a more important matter right? Please come, this forest is not worthy of royalty." He said in a more serious tone while making a small bow that made, again, Celestia blush.

"Follow me, I shall show you ladies my, ruined kingdom..." He said saddly, making Fluttershy and Celestia shocked and worried, and the other mares sad.

"Come" He said to the still bowing beast.

"And please, cut the Royalty bow, it's a little annoying, ok Jho?" He said, making the ponies confused as to why was he talking to this beast like anypony.

"Yes, Master" Jho said, making the ponies shocked, both because this beast was sentient, and that it called Jhon 'Master'.

"Now ladies please follow me" He said while walking away, and they all followed to the lair of the beast.

Author's Notes:
Here goes this chapter, yes I know, everypony was shocked, a little too much maybe but I was too lazy to think about how they would react beside being shocked.
Also I have another story so this story will have chapters less often.
Till tomorrow next time

The Lair of the Beast

Dude why am I acting like some noble and royalty while pretending to be sad near ponies?...

In the Everfree Forest

Celestia's POV

Why am I acting this way towards him? He is not even a pony, and even less alive... I think? Is he alive? Or dead?

"So little Princess, how has it been?" He asked in a casual matter, I smiled then said.

"Not much, besides that Equestria is at peace and that my sister is back thanks to you."

"Oh? I did nothing to bring her back, and you shouldn't thank me but thank your little ponies." He said whi!e pointing at Twilight and her friends with one of bis mangled claw.

"I already did and if it wasn't for you telling me that my sister would return a millenia later, they wouldn't be able to know where to look." I replied still smiling.

"And talking about that, how did you know when Night- well Princess Luna would come back?" Twilight questionned making me frown at the mention of 'Nightmare Moon' ,well part of it's mention, but it was a good question. How did he know?

"Hm, I know many things but perhaps you could say it was just a hunch" He responded casually, making us glare at him, but shrugged it off.

"We are approaching, Jho, please go tell the others I would arrive with guests" He said and ordered, 'Jho' did as said and went ahead while making the ground shake at every steps.

"Stop" Jhon said to us.

"We are being followed" He said with a growl while turning to look behind us.

Then, we saw an Ursa Minor coming out of the tree, it was twice as big as Jhon who just glare at him. They kept glaring at each other until they roared in unisson. The Ursa Minor's roar was powerful, making some of the leaves of the trees fall. But it was much much weaker than Jhon's, whose roar made the ground shake and some of the trees fall. It was so powerful we bearly heard the Ursa Minor's roar.

Then the Ursa Minor jumped on Jhon, who just stood there unmoving, but then our eyes widen when we saw the Ursa fall mid-jump, making the ground shake with a loud *THUMP*. Then it stood up and stood still, until Jhon spoke.

"Go, and make sure to not come back" He said, full of authority that rivals mine. The Ursa Minor nodded then walked off.

"Ok, It's safe now, let's go" He said, returning to his casual tone. RainBow Dash was hyperventilating, AppleJack was just shocked and kept staring at Jhon, Rarity was in her 'shining armor knight' fantasm, Pinkie Pie was... Just Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy smiled at him and Twilight looked like she was about to explode.

"Dude, That. Was. AWSWOME" Rainbow Dash exclaimed while doing 50 loop around Khon in less than 5 seconds.

"Welp, tha' is some incredible thing you did there!" AppleJack said, now admiring Jhon.

"Oh my yes! You did somethinf very heroic, nopony can stand up against Ursa Major" Rarity exclaimed, now fantazing about Jhon.

"Umm... Thank you for not hurting the poor Ursa Major, his not hurt right?" Fluttershy said while saying to last part with puppy eyes. I swear I could hear Jhon muttered about 'dying of heart attack' or something, before I could point that out I was cutted by a Pink ball shooting towards Jhon.

"OhmygodthatwassocoolyouwerelikeROARthenhewaslikeMiawbutthenhejumpedonyoubutyoudidn'tmovethenhestoppedcomingtoyouinmidairbutthenyouorderedhimtogoawayandnevercomeback *GASP* weneedtomakeyouathankyouforsavingusPARTY!!!!" Pinkie Pie said faster than anything.

"You didn't need to say what happened and thank you for the party but I don't think I look like something you should see in public."

"Awwwww, can I at least make you a party at your home?" Pinkie replied with a oittle tear threatening to leave her left eye.

"Maybe, I'll see" Jhon replied while turning away.

"Wait, before we continue, can you tell us what you did and how you did it to that Ursa Major?" Twilight said, eager to know the answer.

"First it's not an Ursa Major, it's a Minor" He said shocking everypony, except me because I know. "And second, let's just say I possessed him for a little while and third, you see this gas?" he said, making a ball of ssaid gas. "It's called miasma, it's like the gas you find near corpses, well I can control the miasma, and spores of a fungus." He said while pointing at a little fluffy bulge under his falling skin.

"Ok, but that doesn't really answer my question, you said you possessed it, what do you mean by that?" Twilight said.

"Well this miasma and fpores act like some virus, so when it infect anything, I can control the anything it infects" He said in a casual matter, that shocked us all, if he has the ability to control anything, what would he do if he was an enemy of Equestria.

"But, but, I DON'T SENSE ANY MAGICAL SIGNATURE FROM YOU!!!! HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE?!!!!!" Twilight exclaimed, no, exploded.

"Let's just say that I'm not from this world, end of the story" He said sternly while turning around and continued, leaving behind a mind blown Twilight, I can't really blame her. We passed the Castle and it seems like we are following the canyon that is under the Castle, we went down the canyon at not a particularly place and we ended up in front of a wall, we looked at him confused.

"We are here, please stand back" He said and we did so, making us more confused until the ground started to shake and the well in front of us started to crumble.

What we saw was exactly what he described his home to be, a ruin. Everywhere we look, we could see rotting corpse and miasma, we tried not to vomit at the sight, some kinds of flying bird with missing eyes or wings laying around, bit of flesh everywhere, unrecognizable things so much they were crushed, back bones of unknown things that is used as a path. Then we saw a flying kind of bird, bigger than normal ones, flying around, when it spotted us it flew straight at us, making me charged my horn to blast it, but instead, it flew straight at Jhon to do a hug.

"MASTER!!!!" it exclaimed, it sounded female.

"Hello there little girl." Jhon replied, trying to make the 'little girl' leave him. Then we saw a whole group of yellow kind of lizards jumping on him to do a hug too.

"Master, it is good to see you" Another female voice said from behind us with a seductive tone, when we looked back, we saw a bigger yellow lizard, a bit bigger than me.

"Hello Ana, please make a cave for our guests." Jhon replied, it made me wonder, why would he ask her to make a cave? She doesn't seem like a digger, but she start digging at a wall making it crumble.

"Please come, it may seem ruined but it doesn't smell at least" He said from inside, I entered and was suprised that it didn't smell awful, and it seems like Jhon is making sure that the miasma doesn't touch us, why?

"Jhon, why are you making the miasma go away? Isn't it your 'otherself' if we can say so" I questionned him, he looked at me then said.

"The miasma is indeed kind of like my 'otherself' as you said, but it is deadly when concentrated, and this whole area is oozing miasma, it would make a simple manticore crumble and die, adding it's corpse to the countless one in here"

It was shocking, the fact that this gas could kill when concentrated was terrifying, but it also made me smile that he made sure not to let it kill us.

"Well then thank you for not letting it harm us" I said while smiling at him.

"But, how can we walk throught? I don't think my little ponies can take it." I said while looking at Twilight and her friends, who nodded, well not RainBow Dash who flew proudly.

"Oh that's right, wait a second" He said while looking at the path covered by countless corpses of seemingly everything, but then, they all shook, then moved and stood up, it was terrifying, some had completly disembodied head that just floated in mid air, other were just lower parts of the body standing up. Then they all made way while bowing, it was like a whole army of death was bowing to us.

"Here, it should be ok, please don't mind them, they would be right back how they were when you will leave my little 'kingdom'" He said, reasuring Twilight and her friends, who entered and were intimidated by the size and number of living corpses bowing to us, some were still taller than me when bowing.

"Welcome to the Rotten Vale!" Jhon exclaimed, and all of the corpses cheered.

Author's Notes:
Here's the Chapter, it's part one if someone wondered.
I still got nothing to say besides that I'm getting more bored as time passes, so that may mean that at some point I would cancel the story.
I'm still not sure so don't lose hope that this story would end cancelled.
Till nect time!

The Lair of the Beast (part 2)

Home, sweet home...

Fluttershy's POV

"Welcome to The Rotten Vale!" He exclaimed and all of the moving corpse cheered, well roared.

Then we heard what sounded like a squeek from behind us, we all looked back and saw the humongous green beast named 'Jho' standing behind us, it was holding something in his mouth, he deposited it in front of Jhon, who looked amused.

It was a pony, a blue pony but we couldn't see much with all the saliva on her, then when we saw who it was, our eyes widen. It was Princess Luna, her light blue coat, her sky blue mane and tail. It was definitly her, before we could say anything we heard the beast say.

"Master, this little pony was spotted inside the patrol radius, she seemed to be spying on us, I apprehended her and brought her here, what should we do?" He said, it suprised us, Princess Luna was spying on us?

"Nothing for now, I will talk to her, return patrolling." Jhon said and Jho did as ordered, after Jho left, Jhon went to the unconscious, saliva covered Luna, we followed him to look at what he is doing, Jhon now in front of Princess Luna, seemed to be pointing at her, then she woke up brutally, panting and looking shocked.

"Hello there little Princess." Jhon said, and Princess Luna glared at him.

"Silence monster! I shan't fall for your words!" Luna exclaimed while charging her horn, then she shotted a beam at him, but he didn't move.

He got hit, but we couldn't see him as a fog of ashes rose, we all got worried and I rushed to search him and see if he was ok. I found him laying on the ground with a big scar on his face, he didn't have his eyes glow, he looked dead, well more than he already was. I started to cry, he was kind and alltought he looked scary, he isn't when you know him, he didn't even get to know Ponyville. I cried in my hooves and everypony tried to confort me while having little tears, Celestia looked furious and turned to Luna, who looked satisfied but then confused when she saw her sister's anger in her eyes.

But before Celestia could beat her, we heard a whistle, like something breathing in a huge amount of air, everypony looked around to find the source of this sound, but then I realised, I looked at Jhon's corpse, I saw it's chest rising, he's eyes started to glow again and the miasma was swirling around him again, I was so happy I started to go to him to hug him, I didn't care if I would have his flesh stick on me, I was just happy he didn't die, but then I stopped when I looked at him closer, his eyes weren't glowing in the conforting and wise blue. It was glowing yellow, not a sunshine yellow, a burning yellow.

He stood up on his back still breathing in air, this got everypony's attention, when they looked at him they backed up in fear, after a while, his scar healed and he seemed full of energy, he came back down on his four legs then looked at all of us, then Luna. He roared, rising on his two back legs and spreading his massive wings, it shook the ground, made the cave shake and some of the roof fall, after he finished, he went down and seem to crounch, but then we saw a huge amount of miasma leaking out of him, it smelled like death, we choked but then it stopped, it wasn't choking us anymore, it was choking Luna who was still coughting, after a moment she cought out blood but Jhon, no, this isn't Jhon anymore, this MONSTER was just looking at her in a satisfied look, but then he grapped his head, he growled and roared in pain before falling unconscious, with Luna too.

We all rushed to them, Celestia seemed worried sick for Luna and Jhon was just here, laying down with his yellow eyes fading away too make place to the slowly glowing blue eyes. Then he stood up brutally while making the same breathing in action, this time we all backed away with Luna, fearful to see his rampage, but then he talked.

"I-I-I-I'm sorry..." He said shaking when he noticed Luna, he started to cry, but he cried blood then turned around to run in his cave. We followed him with Luna being carried by Celestia.

"W-w-what happened? This wasn't supposed to happen! Why did I had the reaction of a normal Vaal Hazak? Why does it happens to me? It was all going smoothly until now!" He said while shaking in a blue water. We approached slowly, then I touched the blue liquid, wich was definitly not water, as it hurted me so much I screamed. Jhon heard it and turned to look at me.

"Fluttershy!" He rushed over me then pointed a claw at my burned hoof, there was miasma surrounding it, then I felt pain but it was not painful, I looked at my hoof who was completly healed with miasma sticking on it.

"Flutershy! What happened?! And You! What happened to You?!" Celestia exclaimed, while looking furiously at him, he was shaking then said.

"This liquid is acid, it is what you would say my everyday bath." He said while pointing at a little lake full of this acid, our eyes widen.

"Acid?! You are bathing on acid?!" Celestia exclaimed still looking furious. Jhon was now fully recomposed

"Yes, and what happened to me well... It seems like old instincs are surfacing..." He muttered, Celestia looked confused.

"Old instincs? What do you mean?" Celestia questionned.

"What I mean is that, I wasn't always sentient, I was like every beast in this forest, but I became sentient at one point, making my eyes blue. What you saw was me, before I gained sentience, and it seems like when I suffer a certain number of damage, I would come back as my old self." He said, it seems like he made up this story, but it holds up and explained what happened.

"Uurghh... What happened?" Luna said waking up, Celestia immediatly hugged her, who hugged backed confused by her crying sister. Then after they finished, Luna looked shocked by Jhon.

"How?! I used a mortal spell that could kill an Ursa Major!" Luna exclaimed trying to charge her horn again, wich was stopped by Celestia who scolded at her and explained what happened.

"What? I made him turn himself into his inner beast?" Luna said regretfully, knowing the pain and guilt of falling to darkness.

"Do not worry Luna, I forgive you, and besides, I would've been suprised to see you be like 'Welcome zombie monster to Equestria' while smiling like your sister always does." I said while pointing at Celestia, who blushed a little, this made Luna's gloomy expression to brighten and start to giggle.

"What? I do not smile at anything while welcoming it in my kingdom!" Celestia exclaimed at Jhon who looked amused.

"You just did it like this morning to me" he replied, this made everypony giggle and Luna laugh while Celestia blushed more.

"Hmm, I don't want to cut this short but aren't you two like royalty? Don't you have duties you lazy mares?" Jhon questionned with a scowl, this stopped both of them, who looked at each other then at me with a sheepish smile.

"Weelll, your right, we should go reassure the ponies who are maybe pannicking right now." Luna said, wich got a nod from Celestia.

"Yes, and I'm pretty sure it should be evening soon so let's go." He said while escorting the us out of the cave.

After getting out, we said our goodbyes and went to my cottage.

"Well it was certainly interesting looking at his natural habitat." Twilight said.

"Yeah! It wasn't even scary when he went beast mode" RD said, denying the fact that she was hiding behind me when 'it' happened.

"Yea yea, but he's pretty strong to pu' up with Princess Luna" AJ said.

"Oh but he is simply a gentlecolt, even thought he isn't very good looking he is gentle." Rarity said then started imaginning what would look good on Jhon.

"But I didn't get to throw him a party" Pinkie said while deflating, then she reflated just when Twilight said she could do it next time we see him.

"That's right!" Pinkie said while pulling out a bottle with miasma in it. She opened it then said.

"Hey! Can you ask to Jhony when we can see him again? I want to throw him a party!" Pinkie said, the miasma then flew out to the Everfree Forest.

"P-Pinkie, how did you do that?" I said timidly.

"Oh I asked Jhony and he said I could have this bottle with Mia in it to call him!" She said while pointing at the nownempty bottle.

"W-who's Mia?" I said.

"Oh silly! That's just the miasma I sent to ask Jhonny when we could see him again!" She responded, it confused all of us but we just went with 'Pinkie being Pinkie'.

"Well, it was certainly a long day, we should probably go sleep, see ya girls!" Twilight said whilr going out.

"Goodnight Fluttershy" they all said then went away.

I am so tired from this, so I took a shower, then I noticed that the miasma in my previously burned hoof went away.

Then I went to my bed to sleep. I hope he is ok.

Author's Notes:
Here's the new chapter.
Sorry for the late publidh but I got work to do and I didn't really know what to add in this chapter, and I also have 2 other stories sooo yeah.
Till next chapter.

Kingdom

What do I do now?

"..."
"..."
"..."
"..."

Silence, nothing but boring and uneventful silence, it's only been two days since the 'incident', beside the little letter Pinkie sent through miasma, nothing, nothing. NOTHING. I'm bored, so bored, and I am bored because I'm still just a teenager in the body of an undead dragon, even if I spent a millenia in this body, I'm still a teenager.

So what does a teenager do when he has nothing to do? Walk around.

As I was walking, I noticed that my 'staff' is a little low, and because I'm a literal king and that I can do whatever I want in my territory, I spent my time making an army, well for fun at least, there wasn't really any war in Equestria but just to be sure, because I know for a fact, that when there's sentient beings, and that there's multiple group or nation of them, there's always a chance for a war, no matter the time or the place they are. And that if there's a human, or at least, a being that has it's mentality, then war is sure to break, because I know for a fact, that on our poor little planet, there are billions of them, and that they can't even wait a century for a war to break, like literally, there's a war in every century of existence of humans.

Anyways, while I was looking around, I saw some mernos, a pterodactyl, but monster hunter sauced. I saw some dead girros with a perfectly unscratched great girros... Wait what? Girros? Dude I'm so lucky. Let me explain what are Girros, Girros are like jagras, "little" crawling lizard, but unlike them, they are black with yellow stripes and have a cobra head. And because they have a cobra head, that means paralysis, so that means I can now have my own squad of assassins. So OP. (I bet you missed it don't you?).

"Welp girros, how's it going?" I asked the walking dead corpse of a cobra head with a lizard body.

"Master, we only live to serve you" The Alpha said while doing what looks like a bow, at least it was male because if I had two Ana, then rip me.

"Yes, for now, you will patrol the area, if anything that isn't a sentient being approach the lair, kill them, if they are a sentient being, ask for their identity, if they refuse to, neutralize them and report to me, do not kill them, if they say their identity, then come to me, I will take care of them." I ordered, he nodded and went with his pack on patrol. While I had little girl and Jho patrolling, it was to annihilate any threats, and they hit it off pretty good those two, so I made them team up for the patrol.

Now, I need an army, but what kind of army? I was thinking about a Deviljho army, but that's too OP and pretty much impossible, I could make the army from the dead corpses around, but they are too damaged to even be called a corpse. what to do, hmm. I know what to have for a trump card, the Vale itself. Let me remind you people that the Vale is made of a literal skeleton, and this skeleton is the skeleton of, Dara Amadyura, or for short, Dalamadur, and for those who don't know, that's the biggest boy in the Monster Hunter series, and it's a dragon/anaconda. So a big snake, a really really big and powerful snake, which got him many titles, like 'mountain eater', his name literally means Armored Tower.

Anyways that's for the trump card, now for the army, it needs to have a General, Sergeants, Captains, Lieutenants and Soldiers. I may need Amirals too, maybe, if we end up battling in Seaquestria, maybe. Or even an air force.

Stop! Slow down! Your not in Call of Duty my boy! Your in MLP!

"Hmm, I guess I should go with the corpses then, there's not much thing and now I'm too lazy to search for members. Great! I'm bored and now I'm lazy! I'll go sleep." I said, but then I stopped when I saw something that only happens in comic books.

"Oh? Well well well, if it isn't the perfect generals I need." I said while looking at the corpses of three fellow Elder Dragons.
Ceadeus, a big whale with horns and the head of stingray and a beard. Amatsumagatsuchi, or Amatsu, the freaking incarnation of a Storm, doesn't look like anything that exists on earth sadly, and finally, Zorah Magdaros, well, I don't know how its corpse got here or how I didn't even notice it was here, I mean, I guess it was hard to know because its shell literally made the walls of the Vale, I just shrugged it of being a little volcanic activity in the lair but the freaking Zorah Magdaros was the reason lava keep spilling out of the walls? The hell?

Anyways, I got my three generals, where the latter is a little stuck but can get away without making the Vale collapse on itself thanks to the skeleton of Dalamadur, and where the former is without water, I mean, it's a big whale, and I don't know if the lake of acid could fit him in, I don't know, maybe because it's a pretty big underwater cave last time I checked the Lake, so it should be fine.

"So, um, I don't know about Zorah and Ceadeus, but, how's it going my three generals?" I asked to the weird looking thing in front of me, unlike the other 'possessed' monsters, it seems like Elder Dragons doesn't show any signs of miasma or fungus, good to know.

"Hello Master, I am fine, but it seems my colleagues aren't." Amatsu replied, because it's the literal embodiment of a Storm, it was floating in mid air with visible wind flying around him, it was like me with the miasma flowing all around my body, but his were graceful.

"Yes I know, can I please ask you to move Cea in the lake over here?" I said while pointing at my usual bathtub, which was a lake of acid.

"Of course Master." He said while lifting Cea with winds and going towards the lake. Now that that's done, what do I do with Zorah? I can order him to get out of the cave, but it would make a massive earthquake, I'm not worried about the Vale, I'm more worried about the ponies near the Forest. I then ordered a bit of miasma to go tell Twilight and Celestia to be prepared for an earthquake, well, it can't talk so I just made it so that when it came into contact with the targets, it transfers the memory of me telling them to watch out for an earthquake. Yeah, OP.

Now I just need to wait for a reply.

Third Person's POV

While Jhon was waiting and talking with his new companions, the miasma made its way to Twilight and divided itself so that another part of miasma went to Celestia.

Twilight, upon seeing the miasma coming in her way throught the window, she jumped in excitement.

"Oh! It's him it's him!" She exclaimed while jumping around, but then she stopped when she saw the miasma stop in front of her, then it touched her forehead, and then she started to hear a voice.

"Twilight, prepare yourself and the ponies for an earthquake. Tell the miasma when your finished with the preparations" I heard, I recognise the voice of Jhon because only him can make it sound like a growl and a whistle at the same time. She was still frustrated that she couldn't understand how the communication through miasma worked, but she wasn't the type to abandon.

Letting the info sink in, her eyes went wide open.

"An earthquake?! I need to tell the girls and the Princess immediately!" She exclaimed while starting to wake up Spike, but then she heard Jhon again.

"And also, don't worry, I already told Princess Celestia." He said, she was a little mad that he got to tell Celestia before her. She then proceeded to go and re-group her friends.

Meanwhile, Princess Celestia, started to see an odd looking cloud outside her castle, she just finished a boring audience with the whinny nobles complaining about not having more profits than the commoners. After looking a little closer, she recognise the cloud to be miasma, and she remembered Jhon telling them that a cloud of miasma is sign of communication. She smiled and nearly jumped in excitement, just like Twilight, but she was still in the throne room with countless guards around every corner of the palace, so she stood still.

"I will end the day court early, there's something I need to do." She said to her secretary, who nodded and proceeded to tell the rest of the staff that day court is over. Celestia went to her room and waited the miasma to come, she then saw it enter through the window and started to approach her.

"Now then, what does he need now?" She asked the miasma, it just flew towards her and touched her forehead.

"Celestia, prepare yourself and the ponies for an earthquake, I would like you to go to Ponyville and help the girls preparing as soon as you finished the preparations in Canterlot, and take Luna with you, I will show you something. Tell the miasma when you're finished." She heard in her head, she was then lost in thoughts. 'An earthquake? What does he plan to do? She thought, then proceeded to prepare the city and tell Luna about it.

"Master, what are we waiting for?" Amatsu said while enjoying a bath with me and Cea.

"We're waiting for the ponies to be prepared for the earthquake that will happen when I'll get Zorah out." I said while taking a sip of the acid, it isn't that bad, you know, it's like coke.

"Master, I sensed females sent around the Vale, are they the sent of the ponies?" Cea asked out of the acid with a bit of jealousy in her voice. 'Oh no not this again. I thought, I knew that if I lied, I'll be blasted by unreal water pressured beam.

"Yes they are, they came here not long ago to visit our lair." I said, she seemed to pout, I only noticed that she was female when she talked.

"Hmm? Oh, okay, it's time to get Zorah out." I said while going out of the lake, they nodded.

"So, I just need to wake him up? Rip me because his pretty big, not as much as Dalamadur but he's a big boy." I said to myself while sending the miasma inside it's corpse, then, it started to move, the ground shook, and what I guessed was it's head turned to me.

"Master." It said while making an earthquake, he started to shake around, I guess he was trying to get the foreign minerals out.

Then, an earthquake that was felt around all of Equestria happened.

Changeling Kingdom...

"GUARDS! WHAT IS HAPPENING!" Chrysalis yelled as she felt an earthquake, collapsing parts of the hive's walls.

"My queen! A tremendous power made the earthquake!" The guards yelled back.

Normally, Chrysalis would smile at this mention of power, but she was no fool, she knew that the being who can make the earth shake this much cannot be controlled, so she just screamed in distress from the power sent through her hive.

Dragon Lands...

"Hmm?" questioned the Dragon Lord, he looked at his land, noticing the stressed dragons, as well as the erupting volcanoes scattered around the land, but unlike the countless times they erupted, this one time showed the fear of the earth, it's blood spilling out of the countless wounds sent by the earthquakes.

"The earth is crying, shaking from this mighty power." He said, fearful himself, of course he would be, who wouldn't be?

Seaquestria...

"What is happening Celestia?" Queen novo asked while looking at the surface from her deep kingdom. Even at this depth underwater, she still felt the earth shake.

"No, it isn't our business anymore." She said while turning to her peaceful kingdom.

Ponyville...

"This isn't the kind of earthquake I was expecting." Celestia said trying to stay calm.

"THIS ISN'T AN EARTHQUAKE AT ALL!!! WHAT IS THIS!" Twilight exclaimed trying to stand up, but keeps falling everytime she managed to stand up.

Then, they all noticed something raise in the Forest, it looked like a mountain, a volcano, it was tall, maybe as tall as the mountain where Canterlot is, than, it folded, like it was standing up, but, there was a head in front of it, a big head, then it roared, and all started to shake in fear, the volcanoes from afar bursted, cracks widen the canyons of the worlds, then it stopped, and they all saw Jhon coming through the woods.

"I present you my new General, Zorah Magdaros!"

Author's Notes:
Here's the new chapter, sorry for the wait, I wanted to have the editor agree to well edit. Check him out too, he's Crimson Arrow

Monster

This is so OP...

Celestia's POV

Generals? What does he mean by that?

"What do you mean 'generals?" I asked, confused by what he was saying.

"You heard me, 'Generals', and one of them is the moving volcano you see in the Forest." He explained, I stared at him with wide eyes.

"This, thing? Is one of your generals?" I asked, I could not believe what he was telling me, a being like this 'general' that can easily make an earthquake of unimaginable magnitude is undoubtedly the strongest being in existence, and he have it as one of his generals? Wait..

"Generals? They're only seen in the military... Do you plan to betray us?" I ask now taking a fighting stance.

"Chill, no I do not, why would I do that? Moreover, if I wanted to overthrow you and your sister, then why would I even reveal to you that I have Generals now?" He said with a calm voice, it's true, but trickery is in the heart of every living being, I know one who is a master of it.

"Then, what do you plan with an army?" I asked.

"Celestia, I thought you knew." He said, I looked at him, confused by what he was trying to say.

"*sigh* Very well, I'll tell you." He said, he now looked at us with a stare that I only saw two times in his eyes, a stare that spoke of unimaginable knowledge.

"It is because war will soon come, don't misunderstand my speaking, when I say soon, I say probably, you ponies might not know besides the Alicorn, but every being, sentient and not sentient, have a tendency to battle with each other, for being with a life span of less than a hundred years might have a glimpse of this truth, but for us who lived for millenia’s, it is a fact, no matter the time, battle always threatened to rise, and it is especially true when it comes to wars." He explained with unrivaled wisness. He is right, war is always lurking, threatening to rise at any moment, even in the most peaceful of times.

"And that's why I have an army now, because I seriously don't want to give up my little heaven down there for some greedy being." He said with his usual tone.

"But! The last war that happened was a millenia ago! How can you be so sure that it will happen soon." Twilight exclaimed, I completely forgot she was here, I'm so sorry.

"Twilight, surely you of most ponies must know, that a millenia without a war is a miracle, and it's exactly why it will break soon enough, because as I said, battle always threaten to rise, I don't know if you should feel good or bad, why do I ask? Because I think you should feel good that your teacher and diarch managed to make peace for a millenia, and that you should feel bad that it's unfortunately your generation that will get a war, something no being should taste, it's nasty, nastier than sweetless cupcakes Pinkie Pie." He said in a teasing matter, he is bad, he makes dark jokes, Pinkie Pie gagged, maybe from the thought of sweetless cupcakes.

"Ok, come, let me introduce you to them." He said while walking in the forest, we followed him carefully, not because he was suspicious, because he is frightening to have a power that can control mountains.

After a while, we arrived just outside of the vale, and we found out that the moving mountain, was indeed a moving mountain, and that it acts like a turtle, with a mountain as a shell. This is getting ridiculous, a millenia ago, me and Luna were scared of this green monster that could shake the earth with just a roar and that had the strength of everypony in Equestria, but this, this rivals all of the dragon population's power, counting in the many generations that existed before.

"Jhon, you're a monster." I said bluntly to him, he just looked amused, I could sense it even through the rotting flesh hiding his emotions.

"I know, and I'm not just any kind of monster you know? I'm an Elder Dragon." He said sounding amused by what he said.

"What? Dude no way, you don't even look like a dragon!" Rainbow Dash exclaimed, it's true, he doesn't look like any dragon I've seen.

"That's because I'm not, I'm an Elder Dragon." He replied, I giggled and everypony facehoofed at his logic, it's true that his body fits the title of 'Elder', maybe even surpassing it.

"Oh hey Amatsu." He said while waving at a shadow inside the Vale, when it came out, we were all shocked, it didn't look like anything I've seen, well, everything that is related to Jhon looks like anything at all, but this being in particular was otherworldly and it even is levitating!

"Hello Master, are these the ponies you were talking about?" It asked, I was shocked again by the politeness and gentleness behind it's voice, it was like I was looking at a perfect butler.

"Yes, yes they are, and she is my courting partner." Jhon said while pointing at me, I had a blush of such intensity that even strawberries would look shameful. 'What does he think he's saying?! I thought, and I'm sure I'm not the only one thinking that because everypony froze.

"I'm joking, but I seriously don't know why you don't have a partner yet, personally, I prefer Fluttershy, maybe it's because of my animal side that it's like it." He explained to us, I was still blushing, how could I not after what he said out of the blue? 'Speaking of blue, where's Luna?

"Good evening Princess Celestia, I am Amatsumagatsuchi, the air force general of Master's army, I am pleased to meet you." The being said while doing a bow with what looks like it's left wing, now that I look at it, it has winds flowing around him, just like Jhon's miasma but more graciously. I was so taken aback by it's graciousness and politeness that I nearly fell down, but thanks to an abnormally strong wind supporting me, I didn't fell.

"Y-You control the wind?" I asked fearfully, if he is truly able to control the wind, then it's power is unimaginable, no magic can control wind with this precision and power, and now that I think about it, Jhon too is an anomaly, he can bring back the dead and cannot be killed with the strongest spell Luna learned, which could kill an Ursa Major in an instant, and this mountain that has the power to bring fear in the core of the planet itself. True monster indeed...

"Yes he can, we Elder Dragons have the power of natural disasters, it’s not surprising to see one of us control the earth or the wind, and for my case, well it's certainly not natural for the dead to be brought back in the living world." Jhon said while walking in the Vale, Ama-ts-er, whatever was his name followed him.

"Princess, are they allowed to exist in this world?" Twilight asked with her jaw dropped.

"Yeah! They're total monsters! Even worse than what we already have! And they don't even deny it!" RD exclaimed.

"I trust 'em, they didn't lie a single time after we met, so I trust 'em." AJ said while smiling.

"Um... I trust Jhon's judgement... He's always been kind to us so I trust him." Fluttershy said while blushing a little.

"Why wouldn't I trust him? His not a meany pants and he likes parties! *GASP* I didn't make him a party for nearly 2 month now!" Pinkie exclaim while hyperventilating in a bag.

"Well he certainly is a gentlecolt, he even made the filthy corpses clear our way the last time we entered his lair." Rarity said.

"He hasn't changed even after a millenia, and the him before that is the true monster of his mind, if he decided to become sentient is maybe because he didn't want to hurt the living beings anymore, it's certainly isn't a bad thing, because we all saw that when he is driven by instinct, he is a true monster." I finished and then started to follow Jhon inside his lair.

Presentations

Rise my subject! I always wanted to say that...

Jhon's POV

Rotten Vale...

An army huh? After the incident, I isolated myself in the Rotten Vale for a whole week, and what do I do just after my depression crisis? I wake three Elder Dragons. Why? I don't even know, maybe I was bored so why did I make up this highly philosophical thing like 'battles are destined to rise' or something like that, why couldn't I just say I was bored? I really should organise my head on of these days, I'm getting to old for this, literally I mean right now I'm over a millenia's old and I don't even remember most of the things that happened before that.

Anyways, there's no point in burying me in the past, right now I need to deal with the mess I made because I was bored, and because of that I'm pretty sure the MLP villains are making a move now, I really need to do something about them, it's not like I need to worry with my OP skills and abilities but still, if I end up doing nothing before season 4 finale is up, I might be killed by Tirek.

"Say Amatsu, what do we do after their visit?" I asked Amatsu, my good one day old companion, who is a cliché Sebastian butler, and I don't mind at all because it fits him well the aristocratic manners.

"It is your choice to choose the fate of our lives." He replied wisely. Throwing me all the responsibilities? Smart move, I'm glad I'm mature enough to not refuse such responsibilities. Well, at least I'm 'mature'.

Still, the way that all of the beings I 'revive' treats me is beyond me, and the fact that even Elder Dragons are affected is confusing me more. I mean, we are supposed to be the same level in strength so why do they treat me as their Masters? The other monsters I understand because they're not Elder Dragons but Elder Dragon respecting other Elder Dragon? There's only one kind of monster who deserves such treatment. 'The Fatalis'

The Fatalis is known to destroy entire Kingdoms by themselves alone, even if you manage to kill one and wear their armors, you will eventually be killed by your own armor made of Fatalis parts, that's not all, you will end up reviving the Fatalis itself. This thing is so OP and Immortal that I don't even compare to it.

In the Monster Hunter series, there's a whole classement of monsters, and the highest class is Elder Dragon, which I am. But even amongst the Elder Dragons lies another class worthy of the title of 'Legendary' or 'Mythical'. It's called the 'Black Dragons'. It consists of five Elder Dragons and their sub-species which are so powerful it is said that they could bring world destruction.

And what am I? A mere little Elder Dragon who's not even remembered after the first encounter while the Black Dragons are remembered through every generations. So yeah, I don't understand why they respect me which is why I will ask them right now.

"Say, why do you respect me so much? Don't you remember your past life?" I asked to Amatsu. He looked up at the rotten ceiling with a thoughtful expression.

"It's because you gave me another chance to live which I shouldn't have, you even gave me something that would drive me out of instinct, sentience. Because I am not supposed to live anymore and that I already fulfilled my life, I now only serve you Master." He replied while looking straight in my eyes, eyes that showed no hatred, no regret, only respect.

It still didn't make much sense because if you've fulfilled your life and that nothing is left for you to do in the world, then wouldn't you aim for eternal rest? Why doesn't he hate me for stripping him of his eternal rest? Did he really have nothing left he wanted in the living world to the point that he would meaninglessly follow the first being he sees to his second death? I was having so many questions going through my head but they were all fading away as soon as I saw the eyes of Amatsu again. These were not the eyes of a regretful or hateful soul, it was a complete soul that only had one last task before going away.

"Thank you." I said to him.

This little exchange made it so that we were already at the Acidic lake with Cea relaxing on the 'beach'. When she saw us, she quickly got back in the lake. I still can't shake the fact that she is four times my size and still manages not to take all of the space in the Rotten Vale. Zorah on the other hand seems to be sleeping as I saw his big head resting on the 'Beach'. When were side by side, Zorah's whole head is the entire length of my body, so I have a Zorah's head sized body. It's so ridiculous. Oh right, I still got guest here with me.

"Well, here we are, the one in the Lake is Cea and the big one here is Zorah, I hope you can get along well." I said to the ponies behind me while pointing at Cea who was for some reason... shy? Then at Zorah who slowly opened one eye to look at us, he was merely able to keep it for five seconds before it closed again while he did a little grunt, well a 'little' grunt that shook the Rotten Vale for a moment.

When I looked back at the ponies, I saw them with their jaws dropped and eyes wide. I must admit that it was quite amusing to see their shocked reaction. It's to be expected I mean, imagine going to your friend's house and seeing a big whale in his pool and a big flaming dinosaur on his garden both chillin like everything's normal. Then I saw Celestia coming first at me.

"Are they really under your command?" She said while looking straight in my blue eyes. I never really noticed before but her magenta eyes really suits her but back to the point, I can't say yes like that, I need a proof.

"Zorah, hotspring now." I ordered to Zorah while still staring at these beautiful eyes like a boss/tyrant. Zorah just slammed his claw at the ground wich made a powerful earthquake, then, hot water started to come out of the ground flowing directly at a pool size hole completely filling it up without a millimeter higher than the pool height.

"Nice work Zorah." I said to him which only got a grunt in response. The whole time I was staring at Celestia and saw every last bit of her reaction towards this little demonstration.

"Here you go, a five stars worth hotspring for you ladies, the earthquake must be tensing your muscles so come and relax." I said while showing them the steaming pool, it was made by Ana so it didn't have flesh lingering in, well I mean, this whole room was made by Ana so it didn't have any dead bodies besides me.

I led them to the relaxing, literally hand made hot spring and quickly got moans from each and everyone of them just from tipping one hoof in the water. If this was really this relaxing to the point of moaning, too bad I can't feel it because for me, normal baths is acid bath over there, maybe I could make a chlorine trifluoride based bath, it's like the most acidic liquid that I can remember but I don't even know how to make it. Maybe Twilight can help me with that, I'm gonna ask.

"Hey Twilight?" I said to the seemingly drugged mare, she literally had her head waving left and right.

"Hmm?" She replied still looking like she's higher than high.

"Do you know how to make chlorine trifluoride?" I asked, this got a powerful reaction because she immediately stopped, not just her but Celestia too, the others were too high to even hear anything so I just let them relax.

"How do you know this?" Celestia asked with such venom even I'm hurted.

"I just remembered that this is the most acidic substance existing, and because acid liquid is my bath, maybe the most acidic liquid is like what you're having right now." I said to her which didn't change her reaction.

"You didn't answer her question." Twilight said which surprised me. Now this wasn't supposed to happen, what was suppose to happen is that they would happily help me with a great smile on their muzzles but what I get right now is a venom so poisonous I feel bad for snakes or spiders.

"Hey, that's just knowledge I had even before I became sentient, even if you are driven by instinct you can learn things." I replied hoping that this would calm them, I couldn't just tell them that I was normally from a species from another world.

"Chlorine Trifluoride, it's a substance that was used in the assassination of the late Duke of Prance that was here for diplomatic affairs, because of his death, we're in bad relations with Prance and it's bad for us because Prance has the same or even surpasses the military forces of Equestria. The tension's been on for two centuries already." Celestia explained. This made sense as to why they were acting so serious but seriously? Chlorine Trifluoride? As an assassination? What the hell?

"The substance known as Chlorine Trifluoride is highly acidic, we don't know how it was made but the liquid itself could melt even the most durable metal we know wich is titanium, we don't even know what else it can do as we can't even take a sample of it as it would melt the recipient, there were even observation of it melting the ground before evaporating." Twilight continued. That's what I said, the most acidic liquid ever, which is what I need for my baths.

"Because of this, every information concerning this substance were erased." Celestia finished. I guess they couldn't really understand it's composition with their current technology that depends highly on magic, and the acid is not magic so too bad.

"At least we know who's our possible enemy of war." I stated wich made their eyes widen. While we were talking, I noticed that the others were already socialising with Zorah, Cea and Amatsu. It was really nice to see that but now it's starting to get late.

"Welp, I guess that's it for your little presentations." I said. When we said our goodbyes, for some reason, Fluttershy looked at me from afar, I didn't understand the reason behind that but I didn't mind because I sensed no fear nor hatred towards me. Fluttershy is after all best pony so I can't be mad or even have any negative thoughts towards her, and I learned that acid bath makes your flesh fall down so I ended up looking like a bloody skeletal dragon now, good thing that my flesh grows back after sometime. Now I just need to wait and plan things for the upcoming events.

But before that, I need to fix my habit to quickly be bored I mean I couldn't even resist a week before reviving more things. Which reminds me, where's Jho?

Meanwhile, Unknown location...

Third Person's POV

"Damn! What is this thing! The Queen didn't say that it would be this tough!" Something said throught the shadows of the night.

"It was even able to beat TWO whole battalions alone!" It continued.

"Quit whinning around! If the Queen wants something then we bring it to her!" Another being said with authority.

"Yeah but, why would she need something this dangerous?" The whinning being asked the obviously annoyed soldier. But then they both stopped in their paths when they sensed something coming towards them.

"Isn't it obvious? To crush these ponies of course!" The Queen said while grinning and laughing at the green monster in front of her. But unknown to them, a little bird saw what happened here and quickly ran past the trees towards it's master.

'I need to tell Master of this!' It thought while cutting throught the night sky...

Author's Notes:
Okay, up until now I've been writting with my own english knowledge even if it isn't my native language, not only that but I was hasty enought to not re read to be able to spot the "obvious" grammar errors. After that I got myself an Editor with this seriously useful group where I found Crimson Arrow.
And just yesterday I learned that Google Docs didn't have "Google" in it for nothing, because I didn't even realise that it spotted automatically grammar errors, not only that but before that, I didn't even know that Google Docs existed.
But now I finally found the Light when I was seriously pointed out and started to character growth myself and started to proofread AND edit all alone for the first time in my whole life ( which is not how authors are supposed to work anyway, but because I have so much free time, why not use Google Docs as an Editor AND Proofreader? ).
Also, if it's not how it's supposed to work, then I'll keep Crimson Arrow because now I seriously intend to fire him ( I will never forget you my friend.). So please inform me if I can do that because FimFic. laws is confusing me hardcore right now.

The Master of a Rotten Vale

by BlankBrony

Prologue

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Arrival

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Exploring

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Aftermath

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Hide and Seek

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The Nightmare

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Meeting

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Awakening

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Meeting (take 2)

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Preparations

Preparations (part 2)

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Meeting (take 3)

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The Lair of the Beast

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The Lair of the Beast (part 2)

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Kingdom

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Monster

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