Tangled Twirax version
Chapter 8: Trouble at the dam
Previous Chapter Next ChapterAfter the song Gretel came back into the snuggling duckling and said "I found the guards."
Then they all turned around and Thorax pulled Twilight and they hid underneath the counter.
Once the stallion royal guards came in they pushed Gretel out of the way and said "Where's Thorax? Where is he?" As he and his men began looking around.
"I know he's in here somewhere. Find him, turn the place upside down if you have to!" Said the guard slamming his hoof on the counter where Thorax, Twilight and Spike hid.
When the leader of the royal guards was gone, Thorax took a peek and saw the two other thugs that he worked with in hoof cuffs and he immediately hid back under the counter.
Then the hook hoofed thug placed his hook near them and they looked at him and he pointed to the right. Then he opened a secret passage in the restaurant.
"Go. Live your dream."
"I will." Said Thorax.
"Your dream stinks. I was talking to her."
"Thanks for everything." Said Twilight as she and Thorax went into the underground passage.
"I believe this is the stallion your looking for." Said the thug holding a short stallion.
"You got me."
"Sir there's not sign of Thorax." Said one of his men.
Then they heard a noise from outside and when the door opened they saw Maximus "Maximus."
Then Maximus began sneaking around the restaurant and pushed some thugs out of his way.
"What is he doing?" Asked a royal guard but his leader covered his mouth with his hoof.
Then Maximus pointed at a lever on the counter but the guards were confused. Maximus sighed in annoyance and pushed the lever revealing a secret passage.
"A passage. Come on men let's go." Said the Royal guard leader as he and his men began going into the secret passage "Corman, make sure those stallions don't get away."
When the royal guard heard his captain he glared at the two stallions and pointed his weapon at them, but then the eye patched stallion head-butted him and used his weapon to uncuff him and his friend.
"We'll go get the crown." Said the other thug as he and his friend walked into the secret passage as well.
Mother Gothel was looking at the two thugs and the secret passage from outside the window.
Then the small stallion thug came out of the snuggling duckling while singing "I've got a dream, I got a dream. I-" then the small stallion took notice of mother Gothel "Ohhh, somepony get me a glass. Because I just found me a tall drink of water."
Gothel laughed and said "Oh stop it, you big lug." Then she pointed her knife at his nose "Where does that tunnel lead out?"
"Knife." Said the stallion nervously.
Thorax and Twilight were walking in the tunnel and Thorax was lighting their way with a small lantern.
"Well I gotta say,I didn't know you have that in you back there, that was really impressive." Said Thorax.
"I know!" Twilight yelled, then she walked and acted normally and said "I know"
Twilight then looked at him and asked "So Thorax. Where are you from?"
"Whoa, whoa sorry Twilight I don't do back stories. However I'm becoming very interested in yours, now I know I'm not suppose to mention the hair."
"Nope."
"Or the mother."
"Ah ah." As she shook her head.
"Frankly I'm too scared to ask about the dragon"
"His name is Spike"
"Here's my question though. If you want to see the lanterns so badly, why haven't you gone before?"
Twilight then froze on that question "Uh hehe, well." Twilight was going to reply to him but a rock hit her on the head and when they looked down the floor began shaking.
Then they heard some noises behind them "Uh Thorax?" Said Twilight as she turned around and saw some stallions in armour chasing them.
"Thorax!" Yelled the captain of the royal guard.
"Run!" Said Thorax as he and Twilight ran to the exit of the tunnel and Twilight had to carry her hair while running.
Once they were out there was a cliff and then two thugs came from the other side down below them.
"Who's that?" Twilight asked.
"They don't like me." Thorax simply replied to her.
Then they turned around and the royal guards came out of the tunnel as well.
"Who's that?" Twilight asked again.
"They don't like me either." Thorax replied to her again.
Then Twilight saw a horse coming out of the tunnel as well.
"Who's that?" Twilight asked again.
"Let's just assume for the moment that everypony here doesn't like me." Thorax replied to her simply again.
"Here." Said Twilight giving her frying pan to Thorax.
Twilight used her hair to grab a wood above the cliff and swinged to the other side.
"Hehehe" laughed a guard and when Thorax turned around he saw the royal guard captain unsheathing his sword "I've waited a long time for this"
Then Thorax ducked the captain's sword and smacked him with the frying pan and he was knocked out, then he countered the other guard with the pan and knocked him out as well and the last two guards got smacked so hard that they immediately got knocked out.
"Oh mama I have got to get me one of these." Said Thorax rotating the frying pan.
Then a sword was pointed at him and Thorax aimed his frying pan at whoever was going to fight him and he saw Maximus holding a sword in his mouth and they began fighting.
"You should know that this is the strangest this I have ever done." Said Thorax then Maximus disarmed him and the frying pan fell on the ground underneath him.
"How about two out of three?" Asked Thorax and Maximus aimed his sword at him.
"Thorax!" Said Twilight throwing her hair and grabbed Thorax's hoof with it then he swinged down.
When Twilight was helping Thorax she noticed the two other thugs "Thorax look out!"
Twilight then pulled her hair up a little and the two thugs missed him and he laughed at them "Ha you should see your faces cause you look-" said Thorax as he was cut off when he crashed into a wood supporter of the dam "Ridiculous" he finished.
Twilight looked at Thorax with a painful expressions at him. But then she saw the horse kicking a wood with his hooves and created a path to get to them.
"Come on Twilight jump!" Said Thorax.
Twilight then jumped and was able to dodge Maximises bite in time.
When Twilight swinged to the ground she saw the two thugs after her so she immediately ran away and Thorax slid down the dam but then it collapsed when he got on the ground and the dam broke and it released tons of water.
The water hit the guards, thugs and Maximus and Thorax and Twilight managed to make it into a cave in time before a giant rock collapsed on them.
Once they were in they had a huge problem the cave was flooding.
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Hope all of you will enjoy my new story I love it so far.
Also everyone I edited the title and some parts of this chapter hope it will be good.