Tangled Twirax version
Chapter 4: The chase and finding the tower
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Thorax and the two stallion thugs were running away from the royal guards from the kingdom and they were running in a forest but then Thorax stopped near a tree trying to catch his breath after running and he has the satchel wrapped on him then he noticed something sticked on the tree and it was two wanted papers one has him on it and one has the two thugs on it.
Then he grabbed the wanted paper with his face on it and said "No, no no. This is bad, this is very very bad, this is really bad. They just can't get my muzzle right" Said Thorax showing them the paper with a worried look on his face.
"Who cares?" Asked one of the thugs.
"Well it's easy for you to say" Said Thorax looking at the other paper with the two stallion pony thugs "You guys look amazing" He continued them he heard something behind him and he saw five royal guards and a horse.
Then Thorax and the three thugs ran deeper into the forest but then they ran into a dead end.
"Alright, okay. Give me a boost and I'll pull you up" Thorax said to them.
"Give us the satchel first" Said one of the thugs extending the hoof for him to give him the satchel.
"What? I just... I can't believe that after all we've been through together, you don't trust me" Said Thorax.
Then the two thugs gave him and annoyed look.
"Ouch" Said Thorax as he gave him the satchel with the crown in it.
Then Thorax climbed on the two thugs and he got to the top "Now help us up pretty boy" Said the thug extending his hoof out to him.
"Sorry my hooves are full" Said Thorax showing them the satchel that he just took from the thug then he ran away.
"What?" Said the thug searching the satchel anywhere on him but it was really stolen by him "Thorax!"
Then Thorax made a right turn and kept running and the five royal guards and the horse kept chasing him.
"Retrieve that satchel with any force" Said the royal guard leader.
"Yes sir" Said the other guards as they aimed they're bow guns at him and fired but Thorax managed to dodge them by sliding under a tree making the arrows hit the tree.
Thorax was running in the forest dodging arrows and jumping over trees. The other guards couldn't make it over the other tree but a royal guard and a horse managed to jump over it.
"We got him now Maximus" Said the royal guard as he and Maximus ran quicker.
Then Thorax jumped and grabbed a vine and he swinged and kicked the guard off his horse then Thorax sat on the horse "Heeyah!"
When Maximus saw Thorax sitting on his back he immediately stopped and turned around and glared at him "Heeyah! Come on flea-bag, forward"
Then Maximus saw the satchel and he tried to grab it with his mouth but Thorax pulled it away from him "No. No. Stop it" Maximus managed to grab the satchel and Thorax tried to push him head away but then they accidentally threw it on a tree branch which lead down to a long fall.
Thorax and Maximus ran to grab the satchel but Maximus got ahead of Thorax so he grabbed his front hoof and made him fall, but then Maximus grabbed Thoraxes back hoof and made him fall when he got ahead of him.
Then they got to the tree branch and Thorax climbed over Maximus but he was clinging on the bottom of the tree branch, Maximus tried to step on his hooves to make him fall and Thorax just kept crawling on the tree branch away from him then he grabbed the satchel "Haha"
But then there was a creaking noise and when they looked behind them the tree branch was cracking then it broke and they fell to the ground, then the tree branch got smacked by a rock on the hill which caused the branch to split in half and making them split up then they fell to the ground.
When Maximus fell on the ground he spat some leaves out of his mouth and stood up and began looking for Thorax by sniffing.
Thorax was hiding behind a rock and when he saw Maximus walking away he immediately turned but he accidentally hit some leaf vines which created some noises and attracted Maximus so he immediately hid behind the tree vines and Maximus went to see if Thorax was there but he saw nothing so he turned away and resumed his search.
When Thorax walked out of the cave he saw a tall and beautiful tower but then he heard Maximus behind him so he immediately used arrows to climb the tower.
Once he was in there he closed the tower doors and sighed in relief. Then he took the satchel off him and looked at the crown in it.
"Alone at last"
Then Thorax was smacked in the back of his head by Twilight with a frying pan knocking him out.
"Ahhhh" Yelled Twilight as she hid behind a manikin.
Then she approached the stallion changeling while pushing the manikin and used her frying pan to poke him but he didn't respond which made Twilight worried then she looked at Spike but he just shrugged cause he doesn't knows who he is.
Then Twilight tilted his head a little with her frying pan and looked at Spike and he assumed that he was a monster.
Then she checked his teeth and she noticed that he wasn't a bad guy and began inspecting him suddenly his eyes shot open, when Twilight noticed that she immediately knocked him out with her frying pan again.
Twilight then wrapped her hair around the stallion changeling and dragged him to the closet, once she got there she opened the closet and tried to put him in there but she failed the first time, the second time she threw him in there with her hair and she succeeded but she got her hair stuck and she sighed in annoyance, the third time she managed to put him in there but he fell on her, the fourth time she used a broom stick to put him in there, then she placed a chair at the handle of the closet and she managed to lock him in there.
"Okay okay I got a pony in my closet. I've got a pony in my closet I've got a pony in my closet! Too weak to handle myself out there huh mother? Well tell that to my frying pan" As she spinner it around and accidentally hit herself with it in the head.
Then Twilight noticed something shiny in the satchel and when she took it out she noticed that it was a round shiny object, she put it on her hoof and looked at Spike but he shook his head, then she looked through the crystals but Spike shook his head again, after that she placed the crown on her head and she looked in the mirror and Spike had wide eyes but he still shook his head.
"Twilight! Let down your hair"
Next Chapter: You are not leaving this tower ever and interrogation Estimated time remaining: 47 MinutesAuthor's Notes:
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