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Tangled Twirax version

by Timothy1509

Chapter 14: Thorax rescues Twilight and the end

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Thorax was riding on Maximus in the forest and Maximus was running as fast as he could so that he can get Thorax to the tower to save Twilight.

Once they arrived at the tower, Thorax got off of Maximus and called for Twilight.

"Twilight."

*No response*

"Twilight, let down your hair." Thorax called for her again the second time but again he didn't get a response.

Then Thorax began climbing the tower but when he looked up he saw Twilight's purple hair being thrown down to him and he began climbing it and he made it in the tower.

"Twilight, I thought I'd never see you again." Said Thorax but when he looked in front of him he saw Twilight in cuffs and she had her mouth covered.

Twilight was telling him something but then it was too late, Gothel stabbed Thorax in the chest from behind making him "Arrgghh." And fall on the ground.

"Thorax!" Twilight muffled.

"Now look what you've done, Twilight. Oh don't worry dear, our secret will die with him." Said Gothel walking past Thorax and to Twilight.

"And as for us." Said Gothel as she grabbed the chains on Twilight and dragged her to the secret exit of the tower. "We are going where nopony will ever find you, again." Said Gothel dragging Twilight.

When Spike saw Gothel dragging Twilight he ran up to Gothel and grabbed her coat by his mouth.

When Gothel saw the dragon grabbing her she kicked him to the wall.

"Twilight, really. Enough already. Stop fighting me."

Then Twilight broke free of her mother's grip and dropped to the floor and her mouth was uncovered.

"No! I won't stop for every minute of the rest of my life. I will fight, I will never stop trying to get away from you." Said Twilight panting "But, if you let me save him. I will go with you." She told her.

"No. No, Twilight." Said Thorax on the floor in pain, his bleeding was getting worse.

"I'll never run, I'll never try to escape. Just let me heal him, and you and I will be together, forever, just like you want. Everything will be the way it was. I promise. Just like you want, just... Let... Me heal him." Said Twilight.

Then Gothel released Twilight and tied Thorax in chains so that he couldn't follow them.

"In case you get any ideas about following us." Gothel whispered to him as she walked away then Twilight ran up to him.

"Tho-Thorax!" Said Twilight but then he heard him cough in pain and Twilight looked at his chest and saw him bleeding which shocked her.

"Oh, I'm so sorry. Everything is going to be okay. I promise, you have to trust me." Said Twilight grabbing her hair and putting it on Thorax's wound.

"No... I can't let you do this." Said Thorax in pain.

"And I can't let you die." She told him.

"But if you do this.-"

"Shhh." As she touched his cheek.

"Then you... Will die."

"Hey. It's gonna be okay." Said Twilight trying to comfort him.

Then Twilight tried to sing but Thorax said "Twilight wait." Said Thorax reaching her hair and he cut it with a broken glass from the mirror.

"Thorax, What?" Said Twilight as her hair lost it's glowing and it was just purple and short.

"No!" Gothel yelled.

Then Twilight looked at the rest of her hair and saw that it lost it's glowing.

"No. No!" Yelled Gothel grabbing the non-glowing hair.

"What have you done? What have you done!" Said Gothel then she look in the broken mirror and saw her old again "No! No!" Yelled Gothel covering her face with her hood and backing away to the exit of the tower.

Then Spike grabbed Twilight's hair and she tripped backwards and fell to the ground.

When Twilight saw Gothel gone she turned to Thorax with a worried face.

"No, no, no, no, Thorax." Said Twilight but she heard Thorax cough in pain. "Oh. look at me, look at me, I'm right here. Don't go, stay with me, Thorax." Said Twilight placing his hoof on her head.

"Flower gleam and glow, let your power shine. Make the clock reverse, bring back what once was mine."

"Twilight." Thorax called her.

"What?" Asked Twilight with tears in her eyes.

"You were my new dream." He said slowly and quietly.

Twilight cried and said "And you were mine."

Then Thorax closed his eyes and lost his consciousness.

Twilight looked at Thorax sadly with tears in her eyes and began singing hoping that she can bring Thorax back to life.

Twilight Sparkle: Heal what has been hurt. Change the fate's design. Save what has been lost. Bring back what once was mine. What once was mine.

Then Twilight began crying and her tear fell on Thorax's cheek, then the tear on his cheek began glowing a bright purple colour and when Twilight opened her eyes she saw the purple glow on his bleeding chest and there was also a symbol of a flower on his chest then the glowing on his chest disappeared.

When Twilight checked Thorax's chest she saw him healed then he looked at him and saw that he was waking up.

"Twilight"

Twilight gasped and said "Thorax."

"Did I ever tell you, I've got a thing for brunettes?"

Then Twilight gasped in happiness and hugged him And he hugged back "Thorax."

Then they kissed each other.

In the kingdom

A stallion royal guard ran into the king and queen's room and told them that their daughter had returned which made them shocked.

Then they ran to the castle' s exit doors and they looked at each other and hoped that it was their daughter.

Once they opened the doors they saw a purple alicorn mare and a green changeling.

When the alicorn mare and the green channeling turned around they saw the king and queen. Then the queen walked up to the mare with short purple hair and checked her, she then touched her cheeks and it was her daughter, she cried in happiness and she hugged her and she hugged back. Then Twilight looked at her dad and he also smiled happily and hugged them and Thorax watched the three of them happily.

Then the queen extended her hoof out to Thorax, when he grabbed it she pulled him in and all of them hugged each other.

"Well you could imagine what happened next. The kingdom rejoiced. For the lost princess had returned. The party lasted an entire week. And, honestly I don't remember. Most of it. Dreams came true all over the place. That guy went on to become the most famous concert pianist in the world, if you can believe it. And, this guy, well he eventually found true love. As for this guy, well, I assume he's happy. He never told me other-wise. Thanks to Maximus, crime in the kingdom disappeared almost over night. As did most of the apples. Spike? Never changed. At last Twilight was home and she finally had a real family. She was a princess worth waiting for. Beloved by all, she led her kingdom with all the Grace and wisdom that her parents did before her. And as for me, well. I started going by Thorax again. Stopped theiving, and basically turned it all around. But I know what the big question is. Did Twilight and I ever get married? Well I'm pleased to tell you. That after years, and years, and years of asking, and asking, and asking. I finally said yes." Said Thorax.

"Thorax." Said Twilight.

"Alright, I asked her." Said Thorax.

"And we're living happily ever after." Said Twilight.

"Yes we are." Said Thorax.

The End

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zGKOrndQARw

Author's Notes:

There we have it everyone, my new story has ended I hope all of you enjoyed it.

And also I do not own the video it belongs to its rightful owner.

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