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Tangled Twirax version

by Timothy1509

Chapter 10: Twilight and Thorax meets Maximus and kingdom dance

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The next day

Thorax and Twilight were sleeping very comfortably in the forest but then a water drop fell on Thorax he woke up a little and he slept again but a second drop of water fell on his face again and then he opened his eyes and saw Maximus, he was really wet from the waterflow.

"Well I hope your here to apologize." Thorax simply replied and drifted back to sleep.

"Ahhhh! No, No, No, Put me down."

When Twilight and Spike heard Thorax screaming they saw him being dragged away by a horse.

Then Twilight ran up to Thorax and tried to pull him away from the horse "Give me, him." Twilight said to the horse but he shook his head.

Then the two of them pulled with their full strengths and Twilight got Thorax back and Maximus had Thorax's boot in his mouth.

Maximus ran up to Thorax again but Twilight stopped him by saying "Whoa. Whoa. Whoa. Whoa. Easy boy, easy, calm down. Easy." Said Twilight and he calmed down "That's it." When Maximus looked on top of the alicorn's head he saw a dragon and he also told him to calm down.

"Now sit. Sit" said Twilight and he listened to her and sat.

"Now drop the boot." Said Twilight but he refused "Drop it." Then he dropped the boot.

"Aww, you are such a good boy. Yes you are. Your all tired from chasing the bad stallion all over the place?" Twilight asked and he nodded.

"Excuse me?" Said Thora feeling a little offended.

"Nopony appreciates you do they? Do they?" Twilight asked and he snorted sadly.

"Oh come on he's a bad horse." Said Thorax.

"Oh he's nothing but a big sweetheart." Said Twilight and Maximus nuzzled her"Isn't that right ? Maximus?" Said Twilight looking at the name on his collar.

"You've got to be kidding me." Said Thorax and he earned a glare from him.

"Look today is kinda the biggest day of my life. And the thing is, I need you not to get him arrested." Said Twilight helping Thorax up.

When Maximus heard that he refused by snorting angrily "Just for twenty-four hours and then you can chase each other to your hearts content. Okay."

Then Thorax sighed in annoyance and extended his hoof out to him to shake, when Maximus saw his hoof he turned away because he dislikes him "And it's also my birthday. Just so you know." Twilight said.

When Maximus heard that he sighed in defeat and looked at Thorax and they shook hooves.

Then Twilight moved in between them and went to the kingdom and when she was away from them Maximus punched him in the chest which made him"Oof." And fell on the ground and Maximus smiled proud of himself from doing that.

Once Twilight, Thorax and Maximus were in the kingdom, Twilight was amazed at how beautiful it was while they were walking on a bridge to the kingdom but when they reached the middle of the bridge Thorax saw another wanted paper of him on the bridge so he grabbed it off the bridge and crumbled it into a ball which made Maximus glare at him.

When Thorax saw Maximus glaring at him he shoved the paper into his mouth and he laughed at him but then he spat the paper out at his face and he laughed at him then they began fighting but they were stopped when Spike looked at them.

Once Twilight was in the kingdom she looked around the place but she found it hard for her to get through because of her long hair and Thorax immediately picked it up and tried to look for a solution, then he saw four fillies doing their hair and Thorax whistled to them. When the four fillies saw the stallion changeling holding a mare's long hair they gasped and began doing it while she was sitting down.

When Thorax, Maximus and Spike were waiting for Twilight there were royal guards passing by and Thorax hid behind a wall.

Then he looked at Twilight and saw that her hair was done and it was shorter and she had flowers on them "Oh thank you." Said Twilight spinning around.

Thorax looked at Twilight and smiled and Maximus came near his face and smiled at him because he thinks that he is in love with her, when Thorax saw Maximuses smiling face he pushed his face away and he laughed.

Then they began shopping and Twilight saw a wall with a painting of a stallion, a mare and a filly and a filly placed a flower in front of the wall "It's for the lost princess." She said.

When Twilight looked at the baby filly in the painting she saw that she was purple alicorn pony and she looked just like her.

When Twilight was looking at the painting she heard some music, when Thorax finished buying some grocery in the store she saw Twilight dancing to the music that the three stallions were playing.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XYfySVrQxto

She then danced with a young colt and many other ponies, Thorax, Spike and Maximus were looking at her dancing with the ponies and they were smiling and Twilight asked him to join her and the ponies but he refused then Maximus pushed him to them, Thorax then glared at him from doing that but the ponies danced with him and and Maximus was laughing.

Then they bought a purple flag with a sun symbol on it, and went back to dancing, Twilight and Thorax tried to reach out for each other but other ponies got them so they resumed dancing.

Then they began drawing and they bought some cupcakes to eat and went to the library to read a book and danced in town again.

During the dance Thorax was looking for Twilight but then the dance came to an end and Thorax and Twilight held each other and everypony began cheering.

"To the boats." Said a stallion.

Once Thorax, Twilight and Spike got onto a boat, Thorax began rowing them to the lantern show but Thorax turned to Maximus and said "Hey Max." Said Thorax throwing him a bag of apples, when Maximus saw the apples he glared at him for a second "What? I bought them." Said Thorax as he kept rowing. When Maximus heard that he smiled and began eating the apples "Most of them."

"Where are we going?" Twilight asked.

"Well, best day of your life. I figured you should have a decent seat." Said Thorax as he lowered Spike behind him.

Once Thorax rowed to a perfect location for the lanterns show they began looking at the kingdom and Twilight had a worried look "You okay?" Thorax asked looking at her.

"I'm terrified." She told him.

"Why?"

"I've been looking out the window for eighteen years. Dreaming about what it might feel like when those lights rise in the sky. What if it's not everything I've dreamed it would be?" She asked him.

"It will be." Thorax told her.

"And what if it is? What do I do then?" She asked him again looking at him.

"Well that's the good part I guess. You get to go find a new dream."

When Twilight heard that she smiled at him and they looked at the kingdom and waited for the lanterns.

Author's Notes:

Another chapter finished and the next one will be great as well hope all of you will enjoy it.

Also I do not own the song it belongs to it's rightful owner.

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