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Music and Magic

by armid

Chapter 5: A great music.

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A great music.

We were practicing in the Apple Farm after school. We took this one twice as serious as last time. We also decided to add some decoration, too. I was wondering . " How can we make sure this is perfect and what Flaming Star wants?" On top of that I felt that our perfurmance hadn't changed! Practicing sure wasn't the answer; we were missing something , but I didn't know what.

I checked to see if we were doing something wrong ,but nothing! Every single ruse and fall was correct, every note was correct , we were singing duo and solo all right. I just couldn't put my finger on what the problem was. And it wasn't just me . I could sense that others weren’t satisfied with their work ,either . That sure wasn’t a good start.

The next day I decided to ask Steely Armor about Flaming Star, since they were besties after all. I could tell he was worried for his friend's situation and I think I would have been too if my best friend wasn’t alright. I started the conversation with few sentences and then I asked about Flaming Star.

" His fine, they said he'll be realesed by tomorrow afternoon! "

"That sounds good....and Bad!"

"What do you mean?"

I decided to explain the problem to him. "Uh , well, we were trying to prepare ourselves to perfurm the song he gave us for him as a present . But for some reason it's not coming out the way we want it, it's just not good enough. And now we don't have enough time. "

He stayed silent for a few seconds and then he gave me the answer that I was looking for: " You see, Flame always says that ' A great song doesn't come from our mind or words, but it comes from our heart and soul, and those gives it feeling and with it you can colour your lyrics through the tube!"

I was stunned when I heard his words, then I told myself "THAT'S IT!" The reasone why our performance wasn’t improving was because we weren’t giving it our feelings, we were just playing the music and singing.

I thanked Steely Armor and ran up to the music room where the girls were, and I told them the problem. I knew they would be exited by hearing it, too. So we started the practice.

Just when we reached the chorus I could sense it, I could sense the improvement and magic. We all started to pony up. It's was actually quite some time since we ponied up while playing music.


Author's Note

Make sure to cheek out other chapters too.

Special thanks to my editor Daniel Drazen.

Here is my email address [email protected]

If you ever wanted to contact me.

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