Five Nights for Anon-A-Miss
Chapter 2: Night 1 Rewrite (Sunset)
Previous Chapter Next ChapterSunset was standing in the bathroom alone her eyes bloodshot, her friends had turned her. She was well and truly alone, she was angry and bitter. She wanted this Anon-A-Miss to pay for all it had done, for how much it had hurt her.
Three girls, one was tall with blue skin and ice cold hair, the second was short and stout his red skin clashing with his green hair. The third had a pretty average build with green hair and lightning blue skin. They entered the bathroom and pushed into the wall. Her eyes widened “Storm Wind, Snowfall, Nature Fury why are you here?”
Storm Wind pulled out a blunt axe “I’m sure you remember my sister, Cozy Glow! You had bullied her for years, she has not been seen since!”
Snowfall growled as he pulled out his own axe “You are the reason my father lost his job, my family is barely able to scrape by because of you!
Nature Fury’s glared caused her blood to freeze “My family was in the middle of an important court case to save our family forest! Because you spread rumours about how my family was stealing money to fund the case. We lost both our home and forest.”
They all growled “Prepare to die Anon-A-Miss.” Sunset screamed in agony as they slowly hacked away at her arms and legs. Snowfall then slammed the axe into Sunset’s gut as she fell to the floor, the three left hiding their axes in their jackets.
Sunset felt the blood pouring out of her wounds as she laid on the ground, Sunset was laying there when she heard voices. She looked forward to see three girls entering the bathroom, Sunset chuckled darkly “So Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom and Scootaloo you see the consequence of your actions now don’t you. You three are murderers as much as the people who actually did this.”
Sunset felt her vision started to turn dark only for something for an ominous red light to brighten the area, she turned around to see her demon form standing there in it’s full glory. Sunset screamed “What are you doing here, demon?!”
The demon rolled it’s eyes “The Elements of Harmony can’t kill remember, I’m still in here. The fact is we are dying but there is a way to bring us back, there is a strange power in this world that allows one to live on but for us to use we have to work together.”
Sunset growled “Why should I trust you?!”
The demon frowned “If you want to live you don’t have much of a choice. Also my name is Venta, it is better than demon.”
Sunset sighed “Fine but no killing. Those three brats maybe the one behind my suffering but killing them will make me worse than I was in my darkest days.”
Venta smiled as she gently placed her demonic claw on Sunset’s hand “I have no intention of killing but we can scare them a bit right.”
Sunset grinned as their hands began to glow with power as their souls intertwined “Of course!”
Sunset’s eyes opened glowing with golden light as her body began to writhe as this power flared through her body, her wounds healing as her body grew larger and larger. Internally her bones began to turn to metal, then two mechanical arms tore out of her sides as flesh began to cover then before an elastic like metal formed over the top of the flesh becoming like skin. Her face morphed as multiple small eyes with black sclera formed, her hands developed into claws and her metallic teeth sharpened to points, the three girls ran from the room as she roared two demonic wings flaring out “YOU WIIL PAY BRATS!”
Venta giggled in her head (That was fun.)
Sunset then sat down leaning against the wall “Indeed.” She then looked at her arms. They all had claws at the end but two were red like her demon form while two were orange like her normal tone. Her hair was the same, she sighed as she saw her demon wings “It appears I am a demon again.”
Venta frowned (This is unexpected, I was expecting it to just bring us back. Not do this.)
Sunset yawned “We can discuss that later, I’m really tired. Do you mind if I take a nap for a while?”
Venta nodded “Go ahead, I’ll be right here when you awake.”
At the end of the day after all the students Celestia was walking toward the bathroom where Sunset was with a mechanic by her side. There had been multiple complaints of several students that the machine had been watching them closely, the mechanic frowned “Principal, what is so odd about this machine?’
Celestia frowned “I don’t know but several students have issued a formal complaint about it watching them. I hoe you can give me some insight.”
The mechanic frowned “Well that is certainly strange.” The two entered the bathroom, and their eyes widened as they saw Sunset resting “This thing reminds of those old Freddy Fazbear bots, the one they moved around. I will need to poke this one a bit.”
He placed his tool kit down and pulled out a screwdriver, as soon as he stuck the screwdriver into Sunset’s mouth she screamed in pin her upper body smashing through the second floor. She rubbed the back of her head “Oops.” She lowered herself down pulling out the screwdriver, a little bit of blood dripping down her face. She healed the small wound with a click of her claws and handed him the terrified mechanic the screwdriver. He took the screwdriver and screamed running out the building, Sunset turned to Celestia “I’m sorry Principal Celestia, I was not expecting the pain.”
Celestia’s eyes widened “Sunset is that you?!”
Sunset nodded “Yes, three students almost succeeded in murdering me b….”
Celestia’s voice boomed “WHAT! WE MUST INFORM THE…”
Sunset frowned as she placed a claw over her mouth “They came after me because of what I did during my darker days. I hurt all of them in different ways and we have no evidence other than my words, besides we have more pressing problems than Storm Wind, Snowfall and Nature Fury. Anon-A-Miss must be brought down.”
Celestia grimaced “You’re right there is nothing we can do about it but it doesn't mean I have like it.” She then shook her head “As for Anon-A-Miss, the only suspect at the moment is you and I’m certain that you would not do that. You were many things during those days, always able to keep me and Luna off your trails. This is too blatant and obvious for you.”
Sunset nodded “It is Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle.”
Celestia slumped “Do you have any proof?”
Sunset frowned “Other than the fact that one of Applejack’s family secrets was leaked and the fact that photos on my phone were posted onto the page when only my fri..“ she paused for a few moments before continuing “the girls and Sweetie Belle were at Rarity’s place.”
Celestia sighed “There is not much I can do without concrete evidence. In truth you have entirely convince me it’s them. It could have been one of the other girls trying to frame you.”
Sunset sighed “That is true, how about this we’ll keep an eye on all eight of them. It has to be one of them.”
Celestia smiled “Thanks for helping me out Sunset” she then frowned “Are you staying here, because you are going to disrupt students during the day?”
Sunset smiled as she clicked her claws and turned completely invisible “Magic is quite useful.”
Celestia sighed “Fine, I’ll inform my sister but don’t cause any trouble while no-one is here.”
Sunset nodded with a smile, later that night three armed criminals had just robbed a nearby bank. They had broken into the school carrying huge bags of money “We’ll hide here for the time being.” They set themselves up in an empty classroom, one was polishing his Ak-47 while the other was laying back on a chair with his shotgun. The third was twirling one of his six shooters.
The one with the Ak-47 frowned “Drama, I’ll be back I need to use the toilet.”
Drama nodded “Very well Shift, we’re safe here so I don’t that will be a problem.” Shift hummed as he walked through the dark hallways unaware that multiple cyan eyes were watching him. He placed his Ak-47 next to the door as he went to the toilet, as he came out of the stall he saw Sunset’s huge form glaring at him. Before he react a massive punch knocked him out.
Five minutes after Shift left the man next to Drama frowned as heard the sound of steps“I heard something, I’ll check it out.”
Drama rolled his eyes “Whatever Fauna, it’s probably nothing.”
Fauna exited the room and walked down the hallway his shotgun in his hand, he turned around to be face to face with Sunset. He fired his shotgun at her face, the slug just bounced of her face. She growled as she delivered a weak punch “Nighty, Night!”
Dram was caught by surprise as Sunset entered the classroom and knocked him out. The next morning all three criminals were found tied up inside the police station with the stolen money by the Police Captain Shining Armour.
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I hope this chapter better explains what happened then the original. The original is staying up for the sake I don't want to lose the comments on the page.