My Brave Pony: Starfleet Magic Season 1 (Rewrite)
Chapter 3: Episode 2: Training and New Enemy
Previous Chapter Next ChapterA day had passed since Sapphire became a Cadet. She was placed in Lightning’s Unit and today was her first day of training. Lightning and Grand Ruler ordered her gather round, and things already got off on a bit of the wrong foot. “Cadet Sapphire...” Lightning said “You are both improperly dressed.” Sapphire was asked to remove necklace. She pulled it off, but it glowed and reattached itself to her. “Huh?” she removed it again and reattached itself to her. Lightning and Grand Ruler were confused.
“Let me try.” Lightning pulled the element necklace off but it glowed and reattached itself to Sapphire’s neck again! “Looks like I have to train with this on.” Sapphire claimed. Lightning and Grand Ruler looked at each other. “Guess we have to.” Lightning said. Grand Ruler nodded then he welcomed them to their first day of training and he assured them this would be no easy feat. “As I am aware you are very skilled in the arts you perform, however, I feel that compared to Starfleet you are just not powerful enough. As you saw in the previous war, your skills as they currently are were into fit enough to combat the newer, more powerful enemies we have faced. I believe that you can all pass our tests, that you can become stronger and swifter than anything you ever images, and it’s because I believe in you.
...But... do YOU believe that you can do it? Well, that’s what we’re about to find out.”
Lightning then spoke to her, “Now girls, as you know, you won’t become as strong as us original space alicorns, but you can become stronger than what you’ve ever been. Before we get into any serious training, we’ll need to test your current skills. How strong you are, how fast are.”
Sapphire nodded and they started her off at the five hundred yard dash. She started running as fast as she could and suddenly her eyes glowed and suddenly rushed across the finish line at the speed of light. “Time, Lightning?” Grand Ruler asked.
“Four point three seconds.” Lightning replied.
Sapphire, rubbing her head, looked surprised at the results. “You okay there?” Applejack asked.
“Yeah, just a small headache after that surge I felt.” Sapphire said.
“Surge?” Grand Ruler asked.
“Yeah, I was running and I suddenly felt a surge and before I knew it, I was across the finish line.”
The ponies thought that was odd but they continued with her training. Next was a test of flight. “Behold, the Hurl-a-Whirl.”
It was a machine similar to the wonderbolts Dizzitron, but instead being strapped into a disc, ponies were strapped in a large bubble like cell, and instead of being twirled in mere furious circular motions, the ride was designed to hurl, whirl, and twirl the flyer in all possible directions. "And if you scream..." Lightning teased "...It's just going to go faster and harder." The ride would launch them out, and then they were forced to recover fast and race back through an obstacle course. Touching a single obstacle or failing to complete the course in less than five seconds were marked as failure.
The girls were a bit hesitant with this. “Lightning are you sure her wings are ready? We don’t know how long she’s flown with them.” Fluttershy said.
“I understand your concerns girls, but remember this is just a training exercise. It will help her and help us see if she’s had enough experience with her wings. Don’t worry.” Grand Ruler said. Sapphire was strapped in and the devive started spinning her up, down and all around. It suddenly launched her out and it everyone’s surprised she righted herself and flew straight for the obstacle course. She skillfully flew through the course, not touching anything and she flew across the finish line.
“Three point two seconds!” Lightning exclaimed.
“Alright Sapphire.” Rainbow called. Sapphire landed in front of everyone and they all gasped. She flew through the whole course with her eyes closed!
“You had your eyes closed the whole time?!” Pinkie exclaimed.
“Yeah, when I was spinning around I felt another surge and when I was launched out I instantly closed my eyes and flew through the course.” Sapphire explained. Now, the others could see this couldn’t be a coincidence.
After that, was dancing.
“Dancing can do wonders for the battle.” Lightning said “It helps you improve your evasiveness. Remember: even the most powerful attack or weapon cannot harm you... IF... it doesn't hit you."
He demonstrated by going through one of the hard courses, which he had gone through many times. It was a simple spread divided into four parts. The objective was to hop along a series of tall small pillars overlooking a deep fall, while at the same time small, harmless darts, cannon balls, and spiked logs would come at him to try to trip him up.
He stood ready, and then began to skip, hop, side-step, and twirl gracefully through the course and didn’t get a hit a single time, impressing Sapphire.
He even gave her a little challenge.
She would all be armed with special paint guns and would try to shoot Lightning and three others as they danced along a simple flat runway.
Sapphire, amazingly watched closely and when one of the dancers landed, she fired and made contact! Even Lightning got hit! “Nice, Sapphire.” Lightning said. Sapphire smiled.
Weeks had passed and Sapphire was gradually getting better at her training. Lightning and the others were proud of her.
Then one day, Sienna, a tall woman with tan colored skin appeared in front of the gates to New Canterlot Palace. Her long silvery hair was done up in a huge and curly ponytail. She wore a black suit, a silvery skirt, with blood red and black armor, complete with shoulder pads, chest plate arm guards and knee plates. She wore tall black boots, a golden colored cape that ran down to her kneecaps. And across her eyes she wore a shiny golden mask. On her belt she carried a sword in a sheath, and a ray-gun in a holster.
By her side was a tall and rather muscular humanoid creature. He had green skin, short red hair, and was wearing black battle armor over a grey jump suit. He was threatening a family with a powerful sword. Name: Slash
Also, a little boy, with tan colored skin and dark blue hair dressed in in a dark purple suit with a black cape. Name: Mako.
And another lady. She was a red skinned humanoid alien with shoulder length brown hair. She was all dressed in a grey monk’s robe, holding a crystal ball in her hand. Name: Omnisha
A swarm of black creatures wearing golden vests and wearing silvery masks over their seemingly faceless faces called Raiders.
Sapphire was in the palace, watching from the window while the others were down there, confronting the gang. Grand Ruler stepped forth, “I am Grand Ruler Celesto; Commander-in-Chief of Starfleet and co-ruler of this planet.
My wife: Queen Celestia.
My sister-in-law: Princess Luna.”
The alien captain scoffed softly, “Well, don’t you sound important.”
The majesties looked livid, and the team felt insulted for their majesties. “Why you…!” Rainbow grumbled softly, but Artie held her back.
Slash and Omnisha snickered.
“Who are you?” asked Celestia.
The captain stood tall and proud, “I’m Sienna; Intergalactic Treasure Hunter Extraordinaire.
I work for no one in particular; I’m just out for myself and my crew.
I specialize in rare and valuable items, and for nearly two-hundred years my crew and I have dedicated our lives to pillage the galaxy of its valuables.”
“In other words, you’re nothing but a band of thieving space pirates.” jeered Buddy.
Slash threateningly pointed his sword at him, “I’d watch what I say if I were you. We can get very nasty.”
Sienna held up her hand, telling him to hush!
“What is it that you want here?” asked Luna.
Sienna sighed irritably, “I just told you, I’m a Treasure Hunter. “Trea-sure… Hunt-er” But anyway, there’s something here on this planet that I seek…
…I want The Elements of Chaos.”
The three royal ones all stiffened, while the rest of the team all looked confused. “The Elements of Chaos?” asked Fluttershy. “What in the hoot is she talkin’ about?” added Applejack.
“It is but a myth.” said Celestia “Just as The Elements of Harmony were forged from The Light of Purity, the leftover dark energy created their evil counterparts.”
“But as was said, it is merely a myth, for no such objects exist.” said Luna.
“Wrong…!” snapped Sienna “It is no myth. The Elements of Chaos are real, and they are hidden somewhere here on this planet.”
“And just how do you know of this,
And that your mind isn’t a miss?” asked Rhymey.
Sienna reached in from under her armor, “…Because I have this.”And she held up the pendant of the severed alicorn horn she wore round her neck.
Celestia took one look at that pendant, and gasped! Her eyes widened greatly. “That… it can’t be…!”
“Celestia!” cried Grand Ruler. “Sister… what is it?” asked Luna. She didn’t know who the horn belonged to, neither did Grand Ruler, but they were still both surprised that Sienna had such a thing.
“What is it?” asked Dyno. “Please tell us.” said Myte.
Celestia felt her insides quaking with disbelief, but there was no denying it, “That is a piece of horn of… of…” she paused, “…Queen Galaxia… my mother!”
Luna gasped in shock.
“What?” snapped Grand Ruler, and all the team stood puzzled and shocked out of their minds.
“But… but that is impossible!” cried Luna “I was told Mother had died while I was but an infant!”
Celestia almost felt tears coming to her eyes, for she was only no more than two years old when she last saw her mother over one-thousand years ago, and she remembered her mother’s appearance anywhere.
Sienna explained, “I found this a while back while we were raiding another planet, and everyone knows how rare and valuable the horn of a unicorn or alicorn is.”
Omnisha then stepped forth waving her hand over her crystal-ball, “I have the ability look into souls, and see into the past present and imminent future, with the help of special items, and this horn fragment confirms the story.”
Sinnea then touched the horn piece to the crystal-ball. A ray of light then shone from the ball showing a still image of Queen Galaxia, and what a sight she was to behold

She looked like a much larger version of Celestia. Her coat was white that faded into soft brown at the edges. Her mane and tail were two-toned-- peach at the starting halves, and purple at the ends-- which shimmered with glittering sparkles.
The team was just speechless! What a goddess!
“Oh, my…!” Celesto said so softly. This was the very first time he had ever seen any image of his mother-in-law, as well as Luna seeing her mother for the very first time as was too young to remember her face, but Celestia… her tears were falling now, but she didn’t cry. Her anger was starting to catch up feeling all this was an insult to her mother, “You are lying…! I don’t believe you!”
“But it’s true…” sneered Omnisha “See for yourself.” and surely enough the images shown Galaxia creating the Elements of Harmony from The Light of Purity-- a cosmic force induced through sunlight and combined with the energy the six pure elements…
Magic, Generosity, Kindness, Laughter, Loyalty and Honesty… but just as was promised, the Elements of Chaos were created by accident from the leftover, unused dark energy. Each one representing the exact opposite of the forces of harmony…
Normality, Selfishness, Hatred, Sadness, Treachery, and Deceit…!
There was a great burst from The Elements of Chaos as something dreadful seemed to occur…
…but those were all the images that could be viewed from the horn piece, like only holding one piece of a jigsaw puzzle.
“Galloping Galaxies!” cried Lightning. “It’s almost unreal!” said Starla.
Sienna and her team heard that, “Oh, it’s as real as real can be.” said Slash “With those elements in our possession, we’ll become invincible, and no one in the entire universe will stand up to us.
Sienna nodded and she glared at Celestia, “You are Glaxia’s eldest daughter. Therefore, I believe you know where the elements are hidden.”
“That’s right!” snapped Mako “Now hand them over and make it snappy!”
Celestia clenched her fists tightly “I don’t know where these elements are hidden, and even if I did I would never hand them over to the likes of you!”
Sienna was starting to lose patience, “You’re lying.”
“No, Captain… she isn’t.” said Omnisha. She was using her power to read Celestia’s mind, “She really doesn’t know where they are. We will get nothing from her.”
Sienna growled.
Sienna’s patience had run out.
“Well, I guess that means we go to Plan B after all!” hissed Slash.
“What’s Plan-B?” asked Grand Ruler.
Sienna glared at him deeply, “Since you cannot give us The Elements of Chaos, I’ll simply have to seek them out myself, even if it means breaking this planet up… bit-by-bit!”
Starla stepped forth, “We’ve heard enough out of you!” she thundered. The team all agreed, and then Grand Ruler whistled loudly for guards and other fighters to come forth. Sienna and her team were completely surrounded. “I give you this one, chance!” sneered Grand Ruler “Surrender, or face the consequences!”
Sienna bent down to her brother, “I want you to go back to the ship. This is going to get dangerous.”
“Okay Sis.” and Mako and a few of the raiders teleported off and was gone.
This gave away that she was going to get rough, so the friends all agreed, and transformed.
“STARFLEET MAGIC!!”
“HARMONY HOUR, FRIENDSHIP POWER!!”
“Dragon Power!”
Celestia and Luna touched the cutiemark symbols on the fronts of their garbs, and changed into their warrior outfits.
“ATTACK!!” shouted Grand Ruler and all the fighters rushed forth, but the second they did, Sienna, and her two minions leapt upward.
“Whoa! She’s fast!” exclaimed Rainbow.
“Where did she go?” asked Artie, and that’s when a swarm of laser blasts fired at them from above. Sparks explosions flew everywhere.
“Up there!” cried Spike, pointed up a tall, tall tree where the three villains stood. Sienna blew onto the tip of her ray-gun, “You don’t rob the galaxy of its riches without being a skilled fighter. You should’ve known that.” She the signaled for the Raiders to attack, and her army rushed forth.
The Equestrians and the other Starfleet fighters agreed to take down the raiders, while the space ponies and their majesties attacked Sienna and her crew.
“Let’s party!” shouted Pinkie, and she leapt up and over, stomping on the head of the Raiders.
“Coming through!” hollered Rainbow and she flew right through a gaggle of them, knocking them down like a bail of bowling pins
Krysta flew along, and though she was small, being as strong as three-thousand times her own weight, she flew straight at the evil creatures with the strength of a rhino.
SMASH!!
BOOT!!
POW!!
She even managed to outwit several more as they charged at her at once. Due to her small size, she was able to easily avoid them as they all jumped at her and ended up smashing into each other.
“Don’t you know a small fairy always wins against a gaggle of big blundering bozos?” she teased.
“These guys aren’t nearly so tough.” said Spike as he slashed the creatures down with his sword.
The remaining Raiders decided to step up their game, and held out swords and small pirate cannons.
“Uh, oh…!” cried Fluttershy, “I think you spoke too soon!” added Applejack.
The Gun Raiders fired shots from their cannons, forcing the fighters to leap up high into air and flutter, this helped to distract them and the others so that the other fighters below could rush in and attack.
The other Starfleet fighters knocked the swords and guns away from the Raiders, and the fighters with horns blasted the evil creatures with beams of magic, hitting the Raiders hard and vaporizing them into black dust.
“Blast ‘em!” shouted Buddy, and, multiple shots from all their horns were fired, but Sienna and Slash repelled and deflected every blast with their swords.
“Now try this…!” shouted Slash and he unleashed a rain of blasts from the tip of his blade.
The Twins held their hands together,“BOOM-BOOM ROCKETS!!”and unleashed their rockets to intercept some of the blasts and make big clouds of smoke.
“Where are they?” grumbled Sienna.
Omnisha shut her eyes tightly, placing her hand over her crystal ball, “Get ready to jump…
…NOW!!” and the trio jumped away a split second before a whole salvo of magical blasts hit them. The tree was roasted to bits, but the villains were safe.
“I don’t believe this,
Every shot was a miss!” growled Rhymey.
Omnisha snickered, “No, duh! I told you, I can see into the imminent future. I can tell every move you’ll make before you make it!”
The team all growled in frustration, “Now what do you say we step this up a little.” said Slash, “Captain… may I?”
“You may.” agreed Sienna.
Slash nodded and pulled off one of those gem-capsules from his belt.
“What is he doing?” wondered Luna.
“Jema-Nite Crusher, I summon you!” Slash declared as he threw the capsule, and unleashed a huge hulking monster, three times the size of the ponies. Its skin was all shiny, almost like real diamonds and gems, but its muscles were huge and pulsating.
“What is that?!” cried Celestia.
“A Jema-Nite!” said Grand Ruler “I’ve seen these before in my travels through space; they’re artificially created creatures, forged from gems and infused with deadly magic to bring them to life. They may not look like much, but they really are strong and tough.”
“Isn’t that nice; you all got your Jema-Nite lesson for the day.” mocked Sienna.
The team felt annoyed with her sneering, and the three royal alicorns tried to blast her again, but just like before, Omnisha predicted this allowing the trio to zip out of the way to safety.
“Where’d they go?” snapped Grand Ruler.
“Never mind that now.” said Luna, and she hinted at the monster which was snarling and growling at everyone. Sapphire saw everything. “Snowflake, go help them!” she called. The Light Fury roared and flew out the window. She blasted the monster with her plasma blasts. “Snowflake?!” Starla cried. The Monster roared at Snowflake and tried to punch her, but Snowflake dodged and fire her plasma blasts again.
Starla sprinted back and kicked it hard in the chest sending it skidding backward a bit.
“LEAF SWARM!”
“DRILL QUILL!”
Buddy and Rhymey unleashed a barrage of razor-leafs and sharp quills at the creature, stunning it softly, but hardly doing much damage.
“We need stronger attacks!” shouted Buddy.
The others all agreed, and they got out their weapons.
“STAR BOW”
“VINE WHIP”
“SUPER STAFF”
“WARD SWORD”
Dyno and Myte didn’t have any handheld weapons, and still felt no need for any as their fire powers were good enough.
The ponies all charged forth, but were suddenly intercepted by powerful blasts that hit them from above. It was Sienna and her crewmates, standing up on a rooftop. “Did you forget about us?” Sienna teased.
The ponies growled, but the three royal alicorns fluttered up to where the villains. “But we didn’t!” sneered Grand Ruler.
“Ha!” snapped Sienna “You think we’re scared of you? Remember, we have the advantage.”
Omnisha snickered as she rubbed her Crystal Ball, “I’ll be able to determine anything you try.”
Grand Ruler looked at the ladies, and they each blinked once at him, and stood their grounds.
“Let’s get ‘em!” thundered Slash, and he and his comrades leap forth.
Sapphire saw them and felt the same surge inside of her. In the blink of an eye she flew out the window and punched them back. “What?! Where did you come from?!” Sienna exclaimed.
“Sapphire, get back inside!” Celesta commanded. Sapphire growled at the villains. “Fine girly, try your best.” Onmisha challenged. “I can predict any move you try to do.” Sapphire growled and lunged at Sienna. “Sapphire, don’t!”
Sienna moved to the left to dodge but at the last second, Sapphire punched in the back making her grunt a little. “Grr… you little pest!” Sienna exclaimed. Sapphire growled and suddenly her whole body glowed brightly, catching the ponies attention below.
“What’s going on with Sapphire?” Pinkie asked.
When the glow ended, it revealed that Sapphire had shapeshifted into a Light Fury! She roared loudly and flew over to the monster. She formed a large ball of energy and blasted the Jem-Nite, completely destroying it. “Ay Carumba!” the Twins cried. “She destroyed it in one blast!”
Sapphire then turned back to the roof and snarled. She flew up there in the burst of speed and slammed into Onmish, knocking the crystal ball out of her hands. “My crystal ball!” she cried. Sapphire blasted the crystal ball, much to her horror. “NO!”
The three villains were cornered, surrounded on the roof by their majesties, Sapphire and Lightning.
While up on Sienna’s ship, Mako saw everything on the monitors. “No! Sis!” he cried “Quick! Activate the transport beam!”
The Raiders agreed and quickly dashed for their consoles.
Grand Ruler and the others prepared to capture the villains, declaring “You are under arrest for terrorism, genocide, and murder of a Starfleet officer!”
Then, just as they all shot their powers, a beam of light shot down from above, encircling the villains and shielding them from the powers.
“What?!” snapped Grand Ruler.
“A transport beam!” cried Celestia.
Lightning punched, kicked and zapped at the light, but that light was more like a tube of energy-- a force-field-- and attacking it was no use. It was almost like trying to punch through a strange alloy. Sapphire slashed at the light but nothing worked as well.
The villains got up snickering as they were carried off, back up to the ship. “Know this, Starfleet:” thundered Sienna “You’ve made rather a bad enemy of me today, but I’ll be back to strike again and I will not rest until The Elements of Chaos are mine!!”
Pinkie could only childishly blow a raspberry at her, but Sienna and her comrades were gone.
Lightning clenched his fists angrily, “I guess we all know what this means.” And everyone else agreed; the planet was plunged into another war against a new enemy.”
Sapphire changed back into her normal self but she fell unconscious on the roof.
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