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My Brave Pony: Starfleet Magic Season 1 (Rewrite)

by Zipp Storm

Chapter 16: Epoligue: Reforming Begins

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During the celebration, Sapphire was promoted to Senior Lieutenant due to her bravery and for defeating the Chaos Guardian by herself. Sapphire now had Sienna and Mako in the throne room alone for their first day of reforming. “Now you, two I’ here to teach you about friendship and to reform you into our society.” Sapphire said.

Mako looked a little shy and his sister confronted him. “Are you sure about this?” Sienna asked. “Yes, by the time I’m through, you’ll know friendship like the back of your hand.”

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6q6-IcL2pdQ

(Sapphire)

The more you know how things are done

The more confident you'll be

There's more to a life than just having fun

And there's no better teacher than me

Sapphire!

Sienna: Oh, I see!

Sapphire: When I'm finished with you

You'll start to be reformed

Listen to me when I say

Once you learn the friendship way

You'll start to be reformed

(Mako and Sienna)

Reformed

(Sapphire)

No need to wait another day

To be part of our friendship way

The perfect clothes

A color all the rage but still unique

Now lose the dirt

Try a style more fantastique

Here's what we'll do:

A pedicure and a deep frizz

We’ll wash your hair, Hey is this gold in here, Really Sienna?

Too curly, too blue

Too retro, too new

Too Twilight, too Lightning

We'll find one, don’t be worrin

Choose which one to be and be it

Picture you to see and see it

I'm the girl to guarantee it

You'll fit right in

My plan, my friend design

Your friends will thrill to find

The new yous that’s friend divine

Yeah, you're gonna—

(Mako and Sienna)

Yeah we’re gonna

(All)

Be reformed

(Mako)

Reformed

(Sapphire)

Listen to me when I say

Once you learn the friendship way

(Both)

You'll/I'll start to be reformed

(Sapphire)

Right in

(Mako and Sienna)

We’re not waste another day

To be part of your friendship...

(All)

Way

(Mako and Sienna)

We not waste another day to

(All)

Fit... right... in!

Lightning and the others watched the whole thing on the palace’s cameras and were… amazed.

“Huh? Guess she does have a knack for this.” Rainbow said.

“I told y’all. Never doubt my girl.” Uglydog said.

Even their majesties had to agree with Uglydog. The future looked bright for Mako and Sienna thanks to Sapphire. A week later, after some much cleaning up and restoration, all was beautiful and gleaming again. New trees were planted, grass was laid out, all the damages cleared away, and it was time to celebrate victory.

A big party was held in New Canterlot, “EVERYBODY PARTAE!” Pinkie Pie hollered as she threw confetti all around.

There was music, dancing, and pretty much all the usual things at a gathering that huge. Abra Kadabra and Trixie were even performing a cool magic show for some of the spectators.

Many of the friends were all out on the terrace with their majesties and enjoying the festivities from there.

Shining Light and Flurry Heart were sitting in a shared playpen, and holding hands together like they were really dancing.

“Awww… that’s so sweet.” said Starla.

“I don’t think we need to wonder anymore.” agreed Cadance.

“Easy now, girls…” said Lightning “Don’t plan the wedding just yet.”

“Yeah,” agreed Shining Armor “I don’t think marriage before the terrible twos is a good idea either.”

Everyone still thought it was sweet.

Grand Ruler couldn’t but ask Celestia for the umpteenth time, “Are you alright, dear?”

His wife rolled her eyes, “For the thousandth time, yes. Now stop asking.” she said playfully. She wasn’t as distraught over her mother anymore, keeping the fragment of her mother's horn in a safe place-- a box under her and her husband’s bed.

Suddenly, a big shiny red ball rolled up to them, and their children rushed out calling for their parents to come play with them, and the family ran off together.

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