The Dragons of Metal, Sun, and Thunder
Chapter 84: I don’t know what to do
Previous ChapterIt’s been a few days to a few weeks since Gilda defeated in and killed Hyde for the title of master of wind. Ever since then it has been rather calming. Greta even decided to move in with everyone. Though ponies were a bit distant from Gilda. It would make sense. The fight between the two did send homes flying. Not many of the once small town turned bustling and growing city happy with the consequences of the fight.
Honestly the ponies that lived in ponyvile before Alice, Ash, Burner, Caleb, Chrysalis, Eris, Gilda, Justice, Kalista, Keith, Keshaun, Keshia, Marcus, Michael, Spike, Twilight, Yuki and the slugs moved to ponyvile have been happy about the protection they bring. But they’re also thinking about how they have brought much chaos to this city, the rest of the world, and way beyond it….
(P.O.V: Gilda.)
I wake up with a yawn as I sit up and stretch my arms and wings. Rubbing my arms as I try to get out of my bed. Only to see that Greta was sleeping in my bed, her arms wrapped around my toned waist as I blushed. She was still asleep and was purring in her while she was wrapped around me.
I wanted to move but couldn’t because of Greta still sleeping peacefully. So I started to think….
(Change of P.O.V: The real Keshaun)
I was looking at my computer screen trying to write this chapter. But the words just wouldn’t come out. The more I stared at the screen the more nothing would come to my mind as to further the story. Is this what having writers block is like? Is my mind so… stagnant as for what to do with this story…
Hello everyone. This Keshaunthesilverwolf. I would like to say. I had a lot of fun writing this fimfic but. I think it’s time it gets remade. This crossover fox was a passion project that was supposed to show people future card buddyfight. But I… I overfilled this story with way too many things. The slugs from slugterra, the Rick counsel from Rick and Morty, and many more things. All of the extra characters I’ve been adding have made the story feel even more bloated than it should. I shouldn’t have done that. I should’ve just stuck with Keshaun, Justice, Caleb, Spike, Gilda, the mane six, and the princesses. I shouldn’t have overfilled the story trying to add more to it.
I think… I think I’m gonna put this on the shelf and remake it. I know a lot of people love this fic but I messed up. It’s overfilling with content and at the same time missing content. Or maybe it’s something else. Sorry to throw this out there. I really did like making this story, I truly did but I think it’s time to try again.
Yeah. That’s literally it. This story needs to be remade, or maybe I need to make a new story entirely. I’m sorry this had to be made but it had to be. My mind is saying. This fic isn’t it.
So to reiterate, The Dragons of Metal, Sun, and Thunder is gonna be cancelled and remade. I know I said I would be making more chapters of this. I decided that this might be better. I don’t like lying or taking back my word but this is all I can do. But don’t worry I will be making the remake soon. On top of that I’m gonna make another crossover fic. Maybe a digimon/mlp one or maybe a Mlp/kamen rider crossfic. Mainly just to space out the TDMST chapters possibly. I hope you all don’t mind this decision of mine. And with that. From a howl from the silver moon. See you all for the next chapter and have a great day, night, or afternoon.