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The Dragons of Metal, Sun, and Thunder

by Keshaunthesilverwolf

Chapter 53: Power Ponies and the Phantom Thieves

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Power Ponies and the Phantom Thieves

A few weeks have past since Stygian has come to library after our heroes have gone castle crawling.

After that the cutie mark crusaders were tasked to walk the flag for the Neo Equestrian Games. Then we did another training session with everyone. Then our heroes meet Daring Do the explorer and helped her out with an adventure, and some other things with her enemy now boyfriend Ahuizotl.

Now we see Spike reading something let's see what it is. Right now.

(Intro but Stygian is in the end pose in his shadow form)

Pov: Keshaun
Tuesday, June 17, 11:57 am

Everyone is at the castle doing some fixing up for Celestia, Daybreaker, Nightmare Moon, and Luna as a gift.

Right now I'm dealing with some of the doors. Caleb and Justice were helping out as well, mainly by holding the doors in place.

"Hey guys. Want some help?" Spike asked walking towards us.

"Naw. We got this. If we need any help I call you on your D-GEAR." I said hitting a nail on the head with hammer for the doors.

"Why don't you read that Power Ponies comic somewhere quiet. Don't you want to see how it ends." Justice said as he accidentally hit his thumb.

"We'll be fine. Just think of it as taking a small break. We'll come get you for lunch." Caleb said healing Justice's hand.

"Hey can someone hand me a power drill?" Michael asked.

"I got it." Keshia said handing him the drill.

(Intermission brought by a chibi Keshaun, Caleb, Justice, the mane six, Spike, Gilda, Data, Garbelle, Chrysalis, Stygian, Keshia, Michael, Marcus, Alice, Keith, Yuki, Ash, Flare, and Tora cleaning the castle of the four sisters.)

"Spike! Where are you dude? We're about eat. Dad made burgers." I said as Justice, Caleb, Twilight, Rarity, Pinkie, Rainbow, Applejack, and Fluttershy are following behind looking for Spike.

""Take a closer look to join the adventure in this book"?" Spike said confused reading the book. All of a sudden a bright flash appeared in the library as I run towards it.

As I enter the room I see the comic book Spike got is actually a portal. And it was sucking Spike in.

"Spike!" Twilight yelled running towards him trying to pull him out.

"Twilight!" Justice yelled trying to pull her and Spike out as it just them in as rest of us began to be sucked in as well.

Then the comic book closed with Pinkie entering last showing the cover.

Power Ponies and The Phantom Thieves in United Heroes.

I begin to open my in pain to see an unfamiliar sight. It looks like a city that I'm not familiar with.

"Is this Maretropolis?" Spike asked getting up.

I see that he's wearing a black mask. A pointless red cape and blue boots.

"Someone wanna tell me what the hay is goin' on?" Applejack asked.

I look to see to see the girls wearing superheroine suits.


(Imagine them anthro)

"Whoa." I said surprised by the get-ups.

"You should see you self." Pinkie said holding a mirror showing me in my phantom thief attire.

I also look over to see Justice and Caleb theirs.

"Holy new personas, ponies! You're the... Masked Matter-Horn! Fili-Second! Zapp! R-Radiance! Mistress Mare-velous! Saddle Rager! You're the... Power Ponies!" Spike said as an explosion came from below.

As we move towards the wall in front of us. I took out some binoculars. I saw an adult earth pony mare with hair that could be use as tentacles. She has dark purple fur and is wearing a redish suit. She is also holding a black ball with electricity jumping off of it.

"I'm guessing that's the Mane-iac?" I asked Spike as he nods.

"Power Ponies! [laughs] How kind of you to join us!" The Mane-iac said before laughing.

"Did she just call us... Power Ponies?" Applejack asked.

"You're the... the superheroes from my comic book! It somehow zapped us all in here!" Spike said surprised by this.

"I can tell." I said sarcastically.

"So you guys zap us back out!" Rainbow said fiddling with the necklace.

"Sorry Dash, but this is a cursed book. We have to fight the Mane-iac to get out of here." Caleb said pulling out a rapier.

"Now you're speaking my language." Justice said pulling out a Great sword.

"Then let's go." I said jumping down.

"Oh Phantom Thieves. I see you have join for the mane event." The Mane-iac said laughing.

"Glad to see you're doing your thing as well tenta-follicles." I said pointing Yamato at her.

"Still holding on to that old nickname huh? Oh well you three aren't the mane reason I'm here for. I'm here for the electro-orb. And I intend to take it." The Mane-iac said before attacking us with her hair.

(You can this at anytime)

Caleb, Justice and I dodged out of the way the attack as I pull off my mask seeing that it works here.

"King Frost! Ice Age!" I yelled as a giant bronze laiden Jack Frost appeared and summoned a huge ice pillar that falls on top of some of the Mane-iac's hair. Only for the hair to move out of the way.

"Mada! Blazing Hell." Caleb yelled unleashing a field of fire that burned some parts of her hair.

All of a lasso passes us as tries to catch the Mane-iac. Only for her to dodge it as catches a street light. As Applejack is caught in the rope and street light.

"AJ!" Caleb yelled running towards her trying to untie it.

"You know, I'm beginning to enjoy this." The Mane-iac said chuckling.

While she was distracted I kick her in the face causing some blood to come out. She breaks out of the shock and wipes the blood and begins to growl.

All of the sudden a tornado forms as Rainbow holds her lighting bolt necklace.

"Lightning, not a tornado!" Spike yelled holding onto the wall of the apartment building we were on.

"Spike! Girls!" I yelled running towards them as the Mane-iac wraps her hair around me.

"Go ahead Spark. Keep struggling. It'll be fun to break your bones." The Mane-iac said before cackling.

"Wow Mane-iac. I didn't know you were into the kinky stuff. But I'm not that kinda guy. Vishnu! Vacuum Wave!" I yelled as my mask fall off as a yellow skined, four armed, adult man summons a gigantic tornado blowing Rainbow's away as the girls and Spike land a few feet from us on fancy purple seatting wear. The seatting wear disappears in a puff of smoke.

"Raphael! Swords Dance!" Justice yelled ripping his mask off summoning an archangel. The archangel summons four swords as they cut me free from the Mane-iac's hair.

"No! My mane! You monsters! I'll get you for this! In the true mane battle!" The Mane-iac yelled running away with the electro orb.

"Don't even think it!" Justice said running after her as I stop him.

"What the fuck Keshaun? Why did you stop me?" Justice asked.

"Because she's heading to her lair. We have to think smart, not hard. So that's why I stopped you. So we can go as a team." I said putting my hand on his shoulder.

"Fine. But I get to go guns blazing when we find her." Justice said pouting.

"Okay dude." I said smiling and letting go of his shoulder.

"Ha gay!" Rainbow said as Justice and I glare at her with the force to a kill someone.

"I'll be quiet." Rainbow said nervously.

"So I wanna get caught up. Lemme get this straight: We've been sucked into some kind of comic-book world?" Applejack asked looking around.

"Technically, it's called Maretropolis. And if we wanna get back to Ponyville, I think we have to stop the Mane-iac from using her doomsday device to destroy it!" Spike said.

"Sounds straight forward and simple. There's got to be a catch." I said sounding pretentious.

"There isn't one. We just need to beat the Mane-iac and we can't get out of here." Spike said as we nod.

"Okay well it's kind of a good thing. Cause you and the girls have super powers." Justice said as Spike looked down.

"Not all of us." Spike said saddened.

"Wait Him Drum doesn't have powers?" I asked.

"Nope. Never has and never will." Spike said saddened as I gave him a hug.

"Good thing you aren't him. You're Spike the Dragon. And you are better than him." I said smiling as Spike perked up.

"So where's the Mane-iac's lair?" Twilight asked.

"Follow me. I know where it is." Spike as he trips on his cape.

"Here. You don't need this." I said getting rid of his cape and giving him his phantom thief attire.

We then begin to jump from roof to roof. As we make our way to the Mane-iac's lair.

After a bit of jumping from roofs. We made to the Mane-iac's lair. As we saw it was a hair products factory.

"There it is." Spike said as we stopped at a wearhouse a few feet away from the factory.

"Is that a... shampoo factory?" Applejack asked seeing the broken sign.

"Well, she used to be the owner of one. This must be that factory." I said grabbing my binoculars.

"All right here's the plan. Rarity, Keshaun and I will-" Twilight said as she was interrupted by a charging Justice, and Rainbow.

"Banzai!" Justice yelled punching one of the henchmen.

"So much for "element of surprise"." Twilight said not surprised.

"It's Justice and Rainbow. The element of surprise is almost foreign to them." I said making a joke.

We then jump down from the roof as we look at the henchmen. There are 50 male earth, pegasus, and unicorn stallions with long hair. They were pretty muscular. And seem to be pretty flamboyant.

"Time to Power Pony up!" Applejack said as Caleb whistles.

"Nice one. Anyway time to take some hearts!" I said getting into fighting position.

(You can end this at anytime)

I rush at one of the pegasus stallions. I then kick him in the side then hit him with the trip. Scratching his face. Causing his face to bleed a bit. He then throws a punch witch I move to the right to dodge. I cut his arm off as his screams in pain. I then kick him in the throat causing it to lose some air as he passes out from the pain.

I look to see Justice surrounded by 10 earth stallions. Justice stomps a on the ground. Causing the stallions surrounded Justice to be launch into the air.

"Seiten Taisei! Maziodyne!" Justice yelled as multiple bolts of lightning strike the stallions.

"Seth! Heat Riser!" Caleb yelled as a black dragon appears and boosts everyone's attack, speed, and defense.


"Yoshitsune! Hassou Tobi!" I yelled as a man in Chinese armor with two swords appears and attacks the henchmen as the fall from pain.

"Bahamut! Megidolaon!" Spike yelled as I teleported everyone away from the explosion except the henchmen as the girls except for Twilight, Rainbow, and Rarity look in shock.

"Spike caused that?!" Pinkie asked surprised by that.

"Yep. And that persona isn't even at it's strongest." I said looking at it.

I teleport everyone back as all of sudden a beam is fired at him as I block it. After that I felt like I couldn't move.

"Keshaun!" Pinkie and Fluttershy yelled scared.

"Don't worry I'm fine. I just can't move." I said able to move my mouth and eyes.

"Don't get hit by that beam. Whatever it's called." Justice said as everyone move away from me.

"Well then. It's seems I have a gift from the phantom thieves. The leader himself. Well isn't this a hair raising event." The Mane-iac said laughing.

"You really better material." I said trying to move.

"Don't bother the hair spray day of doom stops you in place. So try to get comfy. Cause I have a city to conquer." The Mane-iac said dragging me.

"Steel!" Justice said using my codename.

After that Justice was sprayed by the hair spray ray of doom. Followed by Caleb, Pinkie, Twilight, Rainbow, Applejack, Rarity, and Fluttershy.

After that we were brought inside the building and were put inside a cage.

"Well shit." I said sounding like PewDiePie.

Switch of Pov:Spike

After crawling through a air vent. I tried to look at a way to get everyone out of the cage. I also saw a giant blow-dryer, that was her doomsday device.

"Congratulations, Power Ponies and Phantom Thieves! You shall live just long enough to see me fire... the instrument of your destruction! Once the Electro-Orb has powered it up completely, this cannon will amplify the power of my mane one million times, expelling an energy blast that will cause everypony in Maretropolis's mane to grow wild! You will be my weapon's first victims, and there is nopony who can save you from this fate!" The Mane-iac said laughing crazily.

"Ahem. I don't mean to interrupt, but aren't you forgetting about someone?" Fluttershy and Keshaun asked.

"Hum Drum? Little guy? No superpowers whatsoever? He's utterly useless!"the Mane-iac said as a timer went off as the hair spray ray of doom sprayed the girls and guys as they were frozen again.

"Maybe in your eyes. But Hum Drum is apart of the Power Ponies for a reason. No matter how many ponies say he's useless. He's a great ally to them. And to anyone who seems justice." Keshaun said.

"I see dementia must be a side-effect of prolonged exposure to the Hairspray Ray of Doom." The Mane-iac said before starting her evil speech.

I grabbed a piece of a tarp and hooked it to a chain with a hook. Then I hooked the other part to the tarp. Then I chained a large crate and pushed it off as most of the henchmen were caught by it.

"What the hell?" A henchman asked as the timer went off.

"Ziodyne!" I yelled shocking the henchman as he knocks the hair spray ray of doom as it sprays the rest that weren't caught in the tarp.

"Nice one dude!" Justice said as the feeling in their bodies return to them.

"Izanagi! Cross slash!" Keshaun yelled creating a cross from Twi slashs that destroyed the cage from the inside.

"Get them you fools!" The Mane-iac yelled at the rest of her henchmen that weren't frozen.

"Thanatos! Door of Hades!" Keshaun yelled as a humanoid creature with coffins for wings holding a sword appeared. The creature summons seven silver lines as they surrounded a few of the henchmen then explode.

Then Twilight made the slippery as she used a freeze ray. Then Pinkie using her super speed tags a bunch of henchmen as Rainbow and Rarity attack them with lighting and victorian era antiques. Then Applejack using her lasso that's connected to her mind captures the henchmen.

I then saw Fluttershy heading for the door in fear.

"Fluttershy, we need you! You have to power up!" I said punching a lone henchmen.

"I'm sorry, it's just that nothing is making me mad." Fluttershy said as a Firefly land by her as an idea went off in my head.

"Hey Fluttershy! Did you know that the Mane-iac once blew up a zoo just for fun? Did you also know that the Mane-iac killed her own pet rabbit and many other animals for the suits she wears. She also kill baby bunny, two puppies and a whole litter of kittens for the suit she's wearing right now." I said as saw Fluttershy looked pissed.

"You did What?! How could you that to not only a harmless little Firefly but also an entire zoo, a bunch of bunnies, puppies, kitties, and other animals? Really?! Well you're just a great, big, meanie!" Fluttershy said anger and hater slurred in her voice.

"There! I said it! What makes you think you're so special?! Like the rules of common courtesy don't apply to you?!" Fluttershy said getting bigger as her voice deepens.

"Why don't you pick on somepony your own size?!" Fluttershy said transforming into a 15 foot behemoth of anger and muscles. As she just roars making everyone stop in their place.

The Mane-iac fires a beam from her doomsday device as Fluttershy just deflects it with her pecs. She then begins to smash the machine apart with fury and gusto.

"Okay I'm hard." Keshaun nonchalantly as he punches a henchman into the ground.

"TMI dude." Justice said as Fluttershy looks bashfully and blushes a little spitting out a piece of metal that stabs a henchman.

"My mane! My maaaaaane!" The Mane-iac said laughing like a certain clown.

"Once again the day is-" I said we were teleported back to the ruins.

"Hey we're back." Keshaun said looking around.

"Seems time didn't move while we were in there." Caleb said thinking of a theory.

"Maybe." Justice said scratching his chin as his stomach growled.

"I guess we can worry about that later. Let's eat." Keshaun said as we head to throne room to eat.

(Outro sequence)
(Post credit scene:
With the author.

I look at the calendar to see the day.

"Well can't do the bat's episode. Still isn't October. Well time to skip that one until October." I said bored.

"Now what to do. I think I need to do that girl thing as soon as possible. And the next chapter sounds great." I said smiling looking at my comments.)


Author's Note

Hey everyone this is Keshaunthesilverwolf here with chapter 53. I been drilled to the teeth with homework. (Witch I did now.) So sorry there weren't that many chapters. Also I hope you all are excited for this next one. In fact here's a sneak peak.

"Cain is that you?" Keshaun asked surprised by the Deer's figure.

"Yep. Like the new me?" Cain asked laughing a little.

That's all you getting. Hope you all have fun with the comments. And see you all soon. From a howl at the Moon from the silver wolf see you all soon and have a great day or night.

Next Chapter: Queen... Cain? Cain's transformation Estimated time remaining: 4 Hours
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