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The Dragons of Metal, Sun, and Thunder

by Keshaunthesilverwolf

Chapter 44: Chaos on the side of good? Eris' redemption

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Chaos on the side of good? Eris' redemption

Two months have passed since Trixie, Twilight's rival came back to Ponyvile and had a new leaf. Ever since then Twilight has been training even harder in magic. At this point her magic is on par with most high level unicorns.

During the two months Rainbow joined the Wonderbolts in the Wonderbolts academy. Applejack hosted her family reunion in August. Spike became indebted to Applejack and killed a hundred timberwolfs.

Right now with our heroes. Celestia sent a letter saying she will be coming with a surprise for everyone. What that surprise may be. Find out today.

(The intro starts with multiple buildings rising from the ground. Then it shows Keshaun, Caleb, Justice, Data, and Spike in a black, red, and white color themed outfit for dancing. Then to the mane six in dancewear. Gilda, Garbelle, Chrysalis, Michael, Keshia, Marcus, Alice, Keith, and Yuki also in dancewear. Then to Ash, Flare, and Tora as the three jump in front of the camera

Then it shows Keshia and Michael freestyle dancing then to the mane six doing a coordinated dance. Then to Gilda, Garbelle, Spike, and Chrysalis break dancing. Then it shows multiple cloaked figures in the shadows

Then to Keshaun moonwalking infront of allot of trains then to Justice Dancing in front of allot of cars to Caleb dancing in front of a lot of silhouetted people as it zooms in on their eyes.

Then it show our heroes dancing on a stage dancing for fun as multiple stage lights surround them.

Then it shows our heroes dancing with a different character before ending with a pose.

As the screen goes dark as the title is revealed in a very bright and neon color scheme.

"The Dragons of Metal, Sun, and Thunder")

Pov: Keshaun
Time: September 4 11:27 am

I was working on a new project with Dad on a robot he wanted to make.

"Can you hand me the monkey wrench?" Michael asked extending his hand.

"Here you go Dad." I said handing him it with my tail.

"So what's this robot for?" I asked grabbing a drill.

"Nothing much, just a robot for someone." Michael said finishing the engine from the bottom.

"Guys! Mom's coming for a visit!" Spike said scaring my dad holding the letter.

"What's it for?" I asked helping Michael up.

"Not much other than 'it's a surprise'." Spike said handing me it.

"I guess we should get to where the meeting place is." Michael said wiping off the oil on his face.

"What about the project?" I asked.

"I can finish it another time. Anyway let's get going." Michael said.

(Skip brought by a chibi Keshaun, Michael, and Spike walking towards the meet up spot.)

When we got there I saw Twilight, Rainbow, Pinkie, Rarity, Keshia, Marcus, Alice, Keith, Yuki, Gilda, Garbelle, Justice and Caleb at the spot.

"Hey guys. What's up? Where's Fluttershy, Applejack, Ash, Flare, and Tora?" I asked not seeing them here.

"Ash Flare and Tora are being looked for by Chrysalis. And Fluttershy is helping Applejack with a problem at Sweet apple acres." Twilight said reading a book.

"We're just waiting on your girlfriend to get here with the surprise." Justice said playing Smash Bros with Caleb.

"Speaking of Keshaun's girlfriends. Look I got my nails done for this. Do they look good?" Pinkie asked showing me her nails as shine very brightly. They were also very reflective.

"They look great Pinkie. Really shiny." I said smiling as I was seeing my reflection in them.

"I have some sandwiches if you want something to eat." Keshia said hold a plate of sandwiches.

"Awe sweet, your mom makes awesome sandwiches." Justice said pausing the game and getting one.

"I guess we're going to wait until Celestia gets here." I said sitting down pulling out my phone to play some games.

After waiting for two hours Celestia and Daybreaker arrive on their chariot.

"Hey girls. How have you been?" I asked as the two princesses hugged me.

"We've been fine. The nobles won't leave me alone about dumping you." Daybreak said

"As fuck 'em. Their dumbasses anyway." I said getting up.

"Anyway where's that surprise from you were talking about." Caleb asked.

"It should be here any second." Celestia said as two guardsman brought the statue of Eris here.

"Wait why is Eris the surprise?" Caleb asked getting up.

"With all due respect, Princess Celestia, how could you bring Eris here?!" Twilight asked also shocked from this.

"I'm fully aware that the last time Eris was here, she created serious havoc." Celestia said.

"If by "serious havoc" you mean "turning Ponyville into the chaos capital of the world"..." Rainbow said as Rarity continued.

" ...and tricking us all into being the opposite of our true selves..." Rarity said as Pinkie finished.

"And making yummy delicious chocolate milk rain all over the place without a single dollop of whipped cream to go with it anywhere in sight! Not a single dollop!" Pinkie said.

"Yes, I understand. But I have use for Eris' magic if it can be reformed to serve good instead of evil. This is why I've brought Eris here, because I believe that you are the ones who can help her do just that." Celestia said.

"Sure. And I'm guessing you want me and Fluttershy to deal with it?" I said smirking.

"Yes actually. This something I want the two of you to do. And with that bet she made before you turned her to stone. I'm also giving you all the Elements of Harmony to you Twilight so you can use them at anytime." Celestia said as Daybreak handed her a box containing the elements.

"We're here. Sorry we're late." Fluttershy said walking towards us with Applejack behind her.

"Good timing. Celestia wants to reform Eris." I said.

"I realize that this is a tall order, but I wouldn't ask if I weren't confident you could get her to use magic obediently of her own free will." Celestia said.

"So you were taking a gamble on this?" I asked a smug smile on my face.

"Keshaun, have you ever wanted to go to the moon?" Celestia asked her eyes shadowed as an aura surrounded her.

"I'll be quiet now." I said cowering in fear.

"Aside from that. Now that mostly everyone is here. Shall we release Eris?" Celestia asked as we all nodded.

"Ready girls?" Twilight asked as the rest of the mane six nodded and joined hands while Caleb, Justice, Spike, and I began to charge chaos buster.

Then the girls began to float as the power of Elements of Harmony began to glow bright. Soon after their eyes also began to glow white.
Then the girls fired a beam of magic at the statue.

"NOW! CHAOS BUSTER QUARTET! FIRE!" I yelled as Caleb Justice Spike and I fired our beam of magic as it combined with the girls hitting the statue head on as it begins to crack.

Then the statue just explodes releasing Eris as the attack ends.

"Oh finally. A whole year in that state can give you such a kink in the neck. Anyone know a good massage therapist? I really need to loosen up." Eris said stretching out her bones.

"Yeah. It's passed Twilight's library, why the fuck are you acting like this?" Justice asked glaring at Eris.

"What? I was in the same position for a thousand years plus the few months when put me in her.. I'm stiff as a board." Eris said turning into a piece of driftwood.

"Only if you promise not to trick anyone." I said walking towards her.

"Oh hey red boy. I thought you were going to treat me like chopped liver." Eris said snapping her fingers making a massage table.

(One massage later)

"Oh that felt good. Anyway who am I staying with?" Eris asked.

"Not it." Everyone except for Fluttershy and I said.

"Sorry, but I'm pretty sure you two are the only ones patient enough to deal with Eris for more than a day." Justice said as everyone else nodded.

"I guess I'm sleeping over with you Fluttershy. I hope you like it to." I said blushing.

"I don't mind. In fact I think it'll be fun." Fluttershy said smiling.

"Aww. Well isn't this sweet. You two are so adorable I'm having heart problems from the sweetness." Eris said.

"Anyway we should get going." I said.

"You're right. Anyway I have another meeting today. So I'll see you all in three days." Celestia said flying back to Canterlot with Daybreak following behind.

A new day come to Ponyvile as we see Keshaun sleeping on Fluttershy's couch with Eris and Fluttershy in his arms.


"Fluttershy, Eris. It's time to get up." I whispered waking them up.

"Five more hours." Eris groaned trying to back to sleep.

"I'll give you another massage." I said as Eris jumped up ready for the day.

"Let's get ready for today gang. I need to show how much I changed in a day." Eris said excited.

"Wow. That was quick." I said as Fluttershy started getting up.

"Yeah. Anyway want me to make breakfast?" I asked rubbing my eyes.

"Oh no I can make it. You don't have to overwhelm yourself." Fluttershy said hands in front of her.

"How about we both make it?" I asked smiling.

"That sounds good." Fluttershy said quietly.

(Intermission brought by a chibi Keshaun and Fluttershy cooking)

After making breakfast. I decided to go for a walk in the everfree forest.

"It's always nice to walk in a forest. No matter what's the point." I mentally said smiling as creatures of the forest cower in fear of my strength.

After seven hours or so of walking I went back to Fluttershy's cottage to see everyone outside.

"Hey guys what up?" I asked.

"Fluttershy wanted to show how reformed Eris is. So she invited us for dinner to show. I'm just in it for the food." Keith said not caring.

"Oh come on at least give her a chance." I said as I was about to open it only for the door to open on it's own.

As we walk inside I saw that there was a table long enough for everyone. Animals playing fancy music. And Fluttershy in a green blouse with the element of kindness off her neck.

"Oh, our guests! [upper class voice] We're so delighted that you've come here." Eris said giddy walking into the room.

I looked to see something different. I looked and saw Eris in a maid's outfit but also had Butler pants and sleeves.

"May I take your... [clears throat] hats, ladies and gentlemen?" Eris asked as a bunch of hats appeared on our heads as Eris put them on a hat rack.

"This gonna be a bumpy night." Caleb said as we took our seats.

We began to eat the food Eris or Fluttershy made. I noticed everyone else was skeptical about it.

"Pinkie Pie, Gilda, care for some gravy?" Fluttershy asked as was about to grab the gravy boat Eris stopped her.

"Allow me." Eris said snapping her fingers making the gravy boat come alive and acting like a dog.

"Now that's a good trick." I said as the gravy boat licked me.

"Oh, what a cute little gravy boat you are! Yes you are! Yes you are!" Pinkie said picking the gravy boat and hugging it.

"Cool." Ash, Flare, and Tora said looking at the gravy boat.

"That's one creepy little gravy boat if you ask me." Rainbow said as the gravy boat poured some gravy on Rainbow.

"Hey! Crap that's hot!" Rainbow yelped from the gravy.

"Hehehe. Sorry about that." Eris said giggling.

"Calm down Rainbow. It was probably a little joke." I said trying to make sure Rainbow doesn't kill Eris.

"She did that on purpose!" Rainbow said pointing at Eris.


"Oh, well, I don't know about that. Mistakes happen. Oh look, everyone, dancing candles!" Eris said making the candles dance before Rainbow blew them out.

"That's it! Eris is just trying to distract us from–" Rainbow said before the candles began to hit her.

"Is that your mistake?" Caleb asked glaring at her.

"No, I think you just made them mad." Eris said.

"There's something fishy going on." Twilight and Michael said as the soup tureen sprayed soup at them.

"Eris." I said looking at her.

"Well, it's hardly my fault if the soup tureen finds the term "something fishy" to be offensive." Eris said as the soup tureen sprayed Rarity.

Rainbow grabbed a dish cover and covered the tureen. Pissed off beyond belief.

"All right everyone. Let's just calm down. Most of those couldn't have been Eris' fault." Fluttershy and I said.

"Fluttershy! Keshaun! Can't you see what she's doing? She's playing innocent with you so you'll never agree to use the Elements of Harmony against her!" Rainbow said.

"Oh, well, that's a bit harsh, isn't it?" Eris asked.


"I don't believe that. She may be far from perfect but we forgave a lot of people. I forgave King Black Beak, Cain, and Chrysalis. Now their apart of the alliance. So why can't we do the same with Eris? She just wants a friend. And Fluttershy and I are her friends." I said hugging her.

"We're friends?" Eris asked as Fluttershy and I nodded.

"Oh... Well, I've... never really had a friend before." Eris said as Angle opened the window coming in shocked.

"

" I asked as Angle began to play charades.

"Apple. Applejack. Sweet Apple Acres!" I said getting what he was trying to say.

"There's a flooding at Sweet apple acres!" Rainbow said when Angle knocked a cup over.

When we got there it looked like if had rained here for several days with heavy rain. I saw some beavers with red eyes making dams.

"Whoa this is pretty dam bad." I said making a bad pun.

"Keshaun my home is being flooded." Applejack said with a deadpan expression.

"I had to." I said regretting nothing.

"I got this." Justice said as he was about to use water bending I stopped him.

"Eris has this. If she is a friend." I said smiling.

"Fine." Eris said snapping her fingers making the water ice.

"There, much better! I do prefer ice skating to water skiing! Don't you?" Eris said wearing a winter outfit and ice skating as three Eris clones gave her perfect tens.

"Eris! That's not fixing it! Why, I oughta..." Fluttershy said walking towards Eris before sliding away.

"Where are you going? What's wrong, pals?" Eris asked teleporting to me and Fluttershy.

"Here you go, Fluttershy! Game on!" Spike said throwing Fluttershy's element of harmony to her.

"She fixes this or she goes back to being stone! Princess Celestia will understand!" Twilight said as Caleb and Justice began to charge up chaos buster.

"I made a promise not to use my element against her, and I'm going to keep it." Fluttershy said firmly.

"Hahah! You see? She wants to have fun with me because we're friends. She can't use the elements against me because we're friends. I'm free forever! [laughs]" Eris said as Fluttershy snapped.

"Future Force version 2.0 activate." Fluttershy said quietly.

"What?" Eris asked confused.

"Oh shit." I said mentally as I began to back up.

"Future Force version 2.0 online." Data said activating it.

"I summon Armorknight Black Drake and equip Boulder Piecing spear." Fluttershy said her eyes shadowed.

"Eris you better apologize and the farm back the way it was." I said.

"Okay I'll make everything better. Just please don't use that." Eris said snapping her fingers making the ice fade away and making the beavers act normal.

"Good. See it takes a friend to show that you care." Fluttershy said petting Black Drake like a dog and deactivating Future Force and smiling.

Two days have passed and Eris has gotten better and during it she asked to join my harem. I said yes and she was bouncing around with glee.

"Yes, Princess, I'm ready to use my magic for good instead of evil. [under her breath] Most of the time." Eris said before Fluttershy glared at her.

"Congratulations on your success, everyone. I definitely sense a big change in Eris." Celestia said smiling.

"Don't worry Celestia. Fluttershy and I will make sure she behaves. Unless she wants the future force." I said scaring Eris.

"Seems like you two really got under Eris' fur. What did you do?" Daybreak asked.

"Nothing much. Just used future force to scare her." I said shocking everyone.

"Wait you two planned that?" Justice asked.

"Yep. Before Fluttershy and I went to sleep. Eris was fast asleep. So I decided to fake her out by using future force, but Fluttershy said 'Why don't I do it. She wouldn't except it from me.' and the plan was formed." I said smiling.

"Fluttershy's a master manipulator? Never thought I say that." Gilda said putting her hands on her hips.

"Well she has been learning from someone." I said smiling.

"Can I just say the thing now?" Eris asked getting agitated.

"Yes." Fluttershy and I said.

"Friendship is magic. There happy sunbutts?" Eris asked.

"Very much so." Celestia and Daybreaker said as everyone began to laugh.

(Outro but Eris joins in the picture and the Keshaun bit)
(Post-credit scene:

"So Keshaun. I wanted to asked something?" Eris asked walking with him.

"Yeah?" Keshaun asked stopping for second.

"You have my magic, so why didn't you, Caleb, or Justice use it?" Eris asked making a good point.

"We didn't use it because we wanted to challenge ourselves. It would be lazy to use that magic to fix everything." Keshaun said.

"Sounds like a cop out." Eris said.

"It's not a cop out!" Keshaun and the author yelled before covering their mouths.)


Author's Note

Hey everyone this is Keshaunthesilverwolf here with chapter 44. Now I sure some of you all are wondering why is there a persona intro in a Buddyfight story. Well the answer is that there isn't that many songs I could use in Buddyfight.

So sorry I had to use this. Though I still hope you like it anyway. Anyway from a howl at the Moon from the silver wolf see you all soon and have a great day or night

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