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The Dragons of Metal, Sun, and Thunder

by Keshaunthesilverwolf

Chapter 4: Friendship is magic part one (updated)

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Friendship is magic part one (updated)

Narrator:Let me tell you a tale of two sisters. Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria, there were two regal sisters who ruled together and created harmony for all the land. To do this, the eldest used her Alicorn powers to raise the sun at dawn; the younger brought out the moon to begin the night. Thus, the two sisters maintained balance for their kingdom and their subjects, all the different types of ponies. But as time went on, the younger sister became resentful. The ponies relished and played in the day her elder sister brought forth, but shunned and slept through her beautiful night. One fateful day, the younger Alicorn refused to lower the moon to make way for the dawn. The elder sister tried to reason with her, but the bitterness in the young one's heart had transformed her into a wicked mare of darkness: Nightmare Moon.

She vowed that she would shroud the land in eternal night. Reluctantly, the elder sister harnessed the most powerful magic known to ponydom: the Elements of Harmony. Using the magic of the Elements of Harmony, she defeated her younger sister, and banished her permanently in the moon. The elder sister took on responsibility for both sun and moon and harmony has been maintained in Equestria for generations since.

Switch of Pov: Twilight Sparkle Timeskip:12 years

"Hmm... Elements of Harmony. I know I've heard of those before... but where?" I asked before running towards the library.

As I was running towards the library I ran into Twinkleshine and her friends. "There you are, Twilight! Moon Dancer is having a little get-together in the west castle courtyard. You wanna come with us?" She asked.

"Oh, sorry, girls... I've got a lot of studying to catch up on. Maybe next time." I said.


As I was heading to the library Twinkleshine said."[sigh] Does that pony do anything except study? You know I think she's more interested in books than friends."

I was running towards the library. I opened the door and looked for books about the Elements of Harmony. "I know I've heard of the Elements of Harmony. Spike! Spi-ike! Spike?"I called him.

He groaned a bit in pain. He was holding his head. Shaking his head to stop the pain and it worked he was up.

"There you are. Quick, find me that old copy of Predictions and Prophecies. What's that for?"

(You can end this song at anytime.)

Spike is now a young and healthy 12 year old dragon. He has a somewhat athletic build to him. He is somewhat short for a dragon standing at about 5'4". He had healthy purple scales and green spines. He was wearing a purple Hoodie, with a green short sleeve shirt, and blue jeans with a pair of black fingerless gloves.

"Well it was a gift for Moondancer but..." [Squeak] he said squeezing the box.

"Oh Spike, you know we don't have time for that sort of things." I said.

"But aren't we on a break?" He asked before starting to look for the book.

"No, no, no... no, no, no! [grunts] Spike!" I shouted in frustration.

"I got it! It's over here!" He said as I grabbed the book with magic.

"Elements, Elements, E, E, E... Aha! Elements of Harmony, see: Mare in the Moon?"

"The Mare in the Moon. That's just an old ponies' tale." Spike said putting books back.

"Mare, mare... aha! The Mare in the Moon, myth from olden pony times. A powerful pony who wanted to rule Equestria, defeated by the Elements of Harmony and imprisoned in the moon. Legend has it that on the longest day of the thousandth year, the stars will aid in her escape, and she will bring about nighttime eternal! [gasp] Spike! Do you know what this means?" I asked him.

"Um no- whoa!" He exclaimed before falling from the ladder using some magic I stopped his fall and brought him down gently.

"Thanks Twilight." He said a bit scared.

"Be more careful Spike. Also take a note please, to the Princess." I said.

"Okay. He said taking out a piece of paper and a quill.

"My dearest teacher, my continuing studies of pony magic have led me to discover that we are on the precipice of disaster!"

"Preci...preci." He tried to spell. "Um threshold." " Thresh..."

"Brink. Ugh that something really bad is about to happen! For you see, the mythical Mare in the Moon is in fact Nightmare Moon, and she's about to return to Equestria, and bring with her eternal night! Something must be done to make sure this terrible prophecy does not come true. I await your quick response. Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle."

"Twi... light Spar... kle. Okay got it!" he said finished with the note.

"Good send it." I said.

"Wait like right now?" He asked.

"Yes Spike. Right now." I said.

"Uh, I dunno, Twilight, Princess Celestia's going to busy getting ready for the Summer Sun Celebration. And it's like, the day after tomorrow." Spike said.

"That's just it, Spike. The day after tomorrow is the thousandth year of the Summer Sun Celebration! It's imperative that the Princess is told right away!" I yelled.

"Impera...impera..." He tried to spell.

"Important!" I yelled.

"Whoa." Spike said before falling into a pile of books.

"Okay, okay! I'll send it. [Inhales and breaths fire on the note] There, it's on its way. But I wouldn't hold your breath Twi." He said sarcastically.

"Oh, I'm not worried, Spike. The Princess trusts me completely. In all the years she's been my mentor she's never once doubted me. I know she'll trust me on this." I said with a lot of pride.

Spike burped out a scroll and started to read the letter Celestia wrote. "My dearest, most faithful student Twilight. You know that I value your diligence and that I trust you completely." Spike read.

"Told you so." I said.

"but you simply must stop reading those dusty old books!

"[Gasp] What?" I said surprised. Spike just continued were he was before.

"My dear Twilight, there is more to a young pony's life than studying, so I'm sending you to supervise the preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration in this year's location: Ponyville. And, I have an even more essential task for you to complete: make some friends!" He finished.

"Fun." I said with despair in my voice.

"Look on the bright side of this. Keshaun, Caleb, and Justice are coming with us." Spike said happily.

"Speaking of them where are they? I don't see them in the library?" I asked.

"Oh they're in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. They were doing weapon testing." He said.

"Oh I guess we will have to wait for another hour." I said.

"Why Twilight?" Spike asked.

"Those three will be sparing each other for hours. They should be done in half an hour."

Switch of Pov: Keshaun. Time: 8:03 am.

Me Caleb and Justice have been here in Equestria for 12 years. All of the time we have been watching Twilight and Spike grow up. We made so many memories that that it would be it's own story. "But enough about that sentimental shit. Let's blow stuff up" I said breaking the fourth wall.

We have gotten a hold of the powers Cosmo gave us. We all had the same powers in every way possible. There were differences between us and our fighting styles. Justice is slow at attacking but hits really hard. I am an all around fighter, jack of all trades, master of all. While Caleb was a very fast fighter, he attacks with quick strikes.

We also got really good with magic. We found out allot more about magic. The different types of magic seem to have different effects.

We tried a lot with Ki. How to summon it. How to use it. That kind of stuff.

Right now we were doing Charkra exercises. Trying make shadow clones. Trying to walk on trees and water. All of that stuff.

Right now we're about to have a friendly spar. "All right. Here the rules. Fist only. Last one standing wins. That good?" I asked.

"Yeah that's a good ruleset." Caleb said.

"Sounds good to me." Justice said cracking his knuckles.

"Okay. Ready, go." A shadow clone of Caleb said.

We began to rush at each other. I went for Justice with swift axe kick to head. Only for him to dodge and attacking my back. " You gotta allot faster. I'm proud dude." I said with a small smile.

"I told you I can keep up with you two." He said before getting hit by a punch from Caleb.

"I see you gotten stronger than the last time we sparred. Good job Caleb you now hit as hard as me when we first came to Equestria." Justice said.

We have been fighting for a few hours we all were getting tried. "Hey guys, how about a bet?" I suggested.

"What's the bet?" Caleb and Justice asked.

"Who falls first has to kiss the person they love." I said with a small teasing grin.

"Keshaun, go and fuck yourself." Justice said.

"I'm joking. Let's get out of the chamber. Twilight's probably looking for us." I said. Before we leave the Chamber we each chew on half of a Senzu bean.

As we exited the library we saw a waiting Twilight and Spike. "Sorry about that babe." Justice said. Justice and Twilight were dating for 3 years. While I was dating Celestia in secret. Caleb was the only one who doesn't have a girlfriend. Which is kinda ironic cause he was the heart throb

"It's okay. Just don't make me wait that much." Twilight said a bit annoyed.

"Hey Spike what's up with Twi?" I asked and he just gave me a scroll. I read a bit of it before doing what any person would do. Laugh uncontrollably before them.

"You making friends with anyone else. Oh God Celestia tells the best j- " That was all I could get out before Justice punched me into a window.

"When do we leave?" I strained to say.

"We leave in 2 minutes." Twilight said. After two minutes we got the chariot. Justice, Caleb, and I were going to fly in SD mode Twilight asked me "Why are you three in SD mode?"

"So we don't scare anypony and so you can make friends." Justice said.

"Look on the bright side, Twilight. The Princess arranged for you to stay in a library. Doesn't that make you happy?" Spike said trying to cheer her up.

"Yes, yes it does. You know why? Because I'm right! I'll check on the preparations as fast as I can, then get to the library to find some proof of Nightmare Moon's return." Twilight said.

"But what about Celestia asked about making friends?" I asked

"She said to check on preparations. I am her student, and I'll do my royal duty, but the fate of Equestria does not rest on me making friends." She said as we were landing. The royal knights saluted.

"Thank you." Twilight said.

"Maybe the ponies in Ponyville have interesting things to talk about. Come on, Twilight, just try!" Spike said as we were walking.

"Yeah you need more friends besides us." I said. We looked around and saw a bubblegum Pink pony.

"Um....hello?" She said. The pink pony gave a long gasp before running somewhere else.

"Well, that was interesting all right." She said.

"This is going to be a long day." I said pinching the bridge of my nose.

"Summer Sun Celebration official overseer's checklist. Number one, banquet preparations: Sweet Apple Acres." After bit of walking we made it the acres. It looks like the ultimate bathroom for a dog. As we looked for Applejack we heard a "yeehaw!" from out of nowhere. We saw a girl with orange fur was running towards a tree before turning to kick it making the apples fall.

She had bright orange fur. Had long sunny blonde hair that went to mid back. She was wearing a green and white short sleeve shirt. Blue jeans. And cowboy boots. She's tall at 6'4". Her cutie mark was there apples on her left shoulder. She also had a brown cowboy hat on.

This is the outfit.

"Let's get this over with... Good afternoon. My name is Twilight Sparkle—" was all she could get out before receiving a hand crushing handshake.

"Well, howdy-doo, Miss Twilight, a pleasure makin' your acquaintance. I'm Applejack. We here at Sweet Apple Acres sure do like makin' new friends!" Applejack said. While we were watching this I noticed Caleb was looking very greatly at Applejack.

"Do you like Applejack Caleb?" I asked.

"Yes." He said very quietly.

"Friends? Actually, I—" we heard Twilight say that and I began to snicker a little.

"So, what can I do you all for?" Applejack asked.

"Well, I am in fact here to supervise preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration. And you're in charge of the food?" Twilight said.

"We sure as sugar are! Would you all care to sample some?" Applejack asked us.

"Sure, I hadn't have lunch yet." I said.

"Of course miss Applejack." Caleb said.

"Yeah I'll have some." Justice said. A triangle was sounded.

"Soup's on, everypony!" Applejack yelled as a lot of ponies came from somewhere. "Now, why don't I introduce y'all to the Apple family?" Applejack asked.

"Thanks, but I really need to hurry—" Twilight was then interrupted.

"This here's Apple Fritter. Apple Bumpkin. Red Gala. Red Delicious, Golden Delicious, Caramel Apple, Apple Strudel, Apple Tart, Baked Apples, Apple Brioche, Apple Cinnamon Crisp... [deep breath] Big Macintosh, Apple Bloom, and Granny Smith. Up'n'attem, Granny Smith, we got guests." She said to her granny who looks like she could drop dead at any second.

"[snort] Wha..? Soup's on? I'm up, here I come, ahm comin'." She said trying to walk to us but is having a hard time doing so.

"Wait Ms. Smith. Let me help you out." Caleb said.

"Oh don't worry young man. I still have kick in me." Granny Smith said.

"At least let me help you. I have been getting good in healing magic." He said.

"Oh fine young man." Granny Smith said giving in.

"Thank you so much Ms. Smith." Caleb said.

"Oh well aren't you a charming fellow. Applejack I think you should go for this one." Applejack blushed a bit from comment.

"[nervous laughter] Okay, well, I can see the food situation is handled, so we'll be on our way." Twilight said breaking the tension.

"Aren't you gonna stay for brunch?" Applebloom asked giving a look that could make the devil's heart melt. Justice, Caleb, and I all said "Aww."

"Sorry, but we have an awful lot to do so we can't stay for long." Twilight said unknowingly hurting their feelings.

The Apple family all gave a disappointed sigh while Caleb was healing Granny Smith. "...Fine." Twilight said defeated. The Apple family gave a cheer.

Intermission from a chibi Keshaun Caleb and Justice eating.

1 hour later

"Food's all taken care of, next is weather." Spike said checking the list off.

"Ugh... I ate too much pie." Twilight said in pain.

"You gonna be okay Twi?" Justice asked.

"I'm fine Justice." She said.

"Hmm, there's supposed to be a Pegasus pony named Rainbow Dash clearing the clouds. But I don't see her." Spike said looking around for them.

"Maybe she's on break." Justice asked. As he said that a streak of a rainbow crashed into Twilight and some mud.

"[sheepish laughter] Uh, 'scuse me? [more sheepish laughter]" she said. Twilight just growled trying to move.

As the two get up. I noticed her a bit better.

"[laughter] Lemme help you out with that." She went and grabbed a cloud kicking it sending rain on Twilight. Getting her mane wet. "[more sheepish laughter] Oops, I guess I overdid it. Um, uh, how about this? My very own patented Rain-Blow Dry! No no. Don't thank me. You're quite welcome."

Her Rain-Blow-Dry was her spinning in place drying out the water inside. As she end the Rain-Blow-Dry, Twilight's mane was the definition of bed hair. Rainbow Dash started to flat out laugh. Spike was giggling, and Me, and Caleb were snickering.

"Let me guess. You're Rainbow Dash?" Twilight asked a bit annoyed.

"The one and only. Why, you heard of me?" She asked with pride.

"I heard you were supposed to be keeping the sky clear. [sigh] I'm Twilight Sparkle, and the Princess sent me to check on the weather." She said.

"Yeah, yeah, that'll be a snap. I'll do it in a jiffy. Just as soon as I'm done practicing." Rainbow said stretching.

"Practicing for what?" I said.

"The Wonderbolts. The greatest flying team in all of Equestria." She said. "They're gonna perform at the Celebration tomorrow, and I'm gonna show 'em my stuff!" She said.

"The Wonderbolts?" Twilight asked.

"Twi, what are you doing?" I asked.

"Yep." Rainbow said.

"The most talented flyers in all of Equestria?" Twilight asked.

"That's them!" Rainbow said.

"Pfft! Please. They'd never accept a Pegasus who can't even keep the sky clear for one measly day." Twilight said with a smug face.

"Hey, I could clear this sky in ten seconds flat." Rainbow said getting mad at Twilight.

"Prove it then." Twilight said with a small smile on her face.

She then flew into a bunch of cloud and started kicking them. "Loop-de-loop around, and wham! What'd I say? Ten. Seconds. Flat. I'd never leave Ponyville hanging." She said landing towards us putting her sunglasses on. We all just had gaping mouth from what we saw. Caleb even had a blush on his face.


"You should see the look on your face. Ha! You're a laugh, Twilight Sparkle. I can't wait to hang out some more." Rainbow said flying off.

After meeting that we went to find who was doing the decorations. We went to were the celebration was taking place. In Ponyvile town hall.
"Let's see decorations. Beautiful." Spike said looking around.

"Yeah, they are." I said.

"Yes, the decor is coming along nicely. This ought'a be quick. I'll be at the library in no time. Beautiful indeed." Twilight said trying to rush.

"Yeah,no." Justice said stopping her. "You're talking to her." Justice said firmly.

"No, no, no, oh! Goodness no." The mare in white said looking at some ribbons.

"Good afternoon I I'm-" "Just a moment, please! I'm 'in the zone', as it were. Oh, yes! Sparkle always does the trick, does it not? Why, Rarity, you are a talent. Now, um, how can I help yo— [yelp] Oh my stars, darling! Whatever happened to your coiffure?!" The Mare now named Rarity asked.

She is wearing this, she is also at 5'11" without the heels.

"Oh, you mean my mane? Well, it's a long story. I'm just here to check on the decorations, and then I'll be out of your hair!" Twilight said.

"Out of my hair? What about your hair?!" Rarity said taking Twilight somewhere. We decided to follow them. We were watching Twilight wear dresses.

"No, no, uh-uh. Too green. Too yellow. Too poofy. Not poofy enough. Too frilly. Too... shiny. Now go on, my dear. You were telling me where you're from." Rarity said pulling a gurdle on Twilight.

"I've... been sent... from Canterlot... to—" Rarity lets go of the gurdle.

"Huh? Canterlot?! Oh, I am so envious! The glamour, the sophistication! I have always dreamed of living there! I can't wait to hear all about it! We are gonna be the best of friends, you and I... Emeralds?! What was I thinking? Let me get you some rubies!" Rarity said.

"Quick! Before she decides to dye my coat a new color!" Twilight said running towards the exit.

"Aw come I was having fun." I said.

"Oh, I also got some ideas for tuxedos for the your little dragon friends." Rarity said in the other room.

"Fuck this shit I'm out!" I said running behind Twilight. The others followed behind. As we ran out I noticed that Caleb had a blush on his face. I choose to ignore it.

After that kerfuffle we went to find who does the music for The Summer Sun celebration. We heard what sounded like birds singing. After walking a little to towards the music. We found this girl orchestrating the birds. She was wearing a green sweater and blue jeans. She had yellow fur and pink hair. Her boobs were h-cups. She was at 6'2". Her cutie mark were three butterflies on her right arm.

She is wearing this.

"Oh my. Um, stop please, everyone, umm. Excuse me, sir? I mean no offense, but your rhythm is just a teeny-tiny bit off. Now, follow me, please. A-one, a-two, a-one two three-"She said to the Blue Jay before starting again.

"Hello!" Twilight said scarring both the birds and the girl. "Oh my, I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to frighten your birds. I'm just here to check up on the music and it's sounding beautiful. I'm Twilight Sparkle. What's your name?" Twilight asked scarring the girl.

"Um... I'm Fluttershy." The Mare now named Fluttershy said quietly.

"I'm sorry, what was that?" Twilight asked.

"Um... My name is Fluttershy." Fluttershy said even quieter.

"I didn't quite catch that." Twilight said getting a little closer to hear her.

"[Squeaking]" Fluttershy said hiding in her hair.

"[pause] Well, um, it looks like your birds are back, so I guess everything's in order. Keep up the good work!" Twilight said walking away. "Well that was easy. Time to head to the-." Twilight said before being tackled by Fluttershy.

"Oh my goodness. 4 baby dragons. Sooo cute!" She said squealing a bit.

"Well, well, well...!" Spike said with some pride his voice.

"Oh my, they talk. I didn't know dragons could talk. That's just so incredibly wonderful I, I just don't even know what to say!" Fluttershy said very excited.

"What do you want to know?" I asked with a small blush.

"Absolutely everything." Fluttershy said close to exploding with excitement.

"Well then I'll tell you everything starting from the beginning." Spike said telling his entire life story.

After walking a bit we made it to the library. "...And that's how I learned about how to use magic, and that's the story of my whole entire life! Well, up until today. Do you wanna hear about today?" Spike finished.

"Oh, yes, please!" Fluttershy asked.

"Sorry to bother you but. It's getting late and Spike needs sleep." Twilight said.

"No I don't." Spike interjected.

"Of course. A young dragon must get their rest." Fluttershy said.

"Yes, yes, we'll get right on that. Well, g'night!" Twilight said pushing us into the library.

"Little rude much Twi?" I asked her.

"Sorry, guys, but I have to convince the Princess that Nightmare Moon is coming, and we're running out of time! I just need to be alone so I can study without a bunch of crazy ponies trying to make friends all the time. Now, where's the light?" Twilight said trying to find a light switch.

As soon as she did "Surprise!" was yelled in the library.

"Hi, I'm Pinkie Pie, and I threw this party just for you! Were you surprised? Were ya? Were ya? Huh huh huh?" The Bubblegum Pink Pony now named Pinkie Pie asked excitedly.

(she is 5'9" I forgot to mention that)

"Very surprised. Libraries are supposed to be you know quiet." Twilight said annoyed.

"What? Well, that's silly! What kind of welcome party would this be if it were quiet? I mean, duh, bo-ring! Y'see, I saw you when you first got here, remember? You were all "hello" and I was all [deep gasp], remember? Y'see I've never saw you before and if I've never saw you before that means you're new, 'cause I know everypony, and I mean everypony in Ponyville!" She said sugar-rushed off her ass.

"And if you five were new, that meant you haven't met anyone yet, and if you haven't met anyone yet, you must not have any friends, and if you don't have any friends then you must be lonely, and that made me so sad, then I had an idea, and that's why I went [deep gasp]! I must throw a great big ginormous super-duper spectacular welcome party and invite everyone in Ponyville! See? And now you have lots and lots of friends!" Pinkie said bouncing around. Twilight screamed running towards her room looking a bit red.

"What was that about?" Caleb asked.

"I think this was the snapping point." I said holding a small bottle.

"Hot sauce?" Spike asked.

"She must've accidentally drank a little of the hot sauce." I deducted. Pinkie then grabbed the hot sauce bottle from my hand and pour some on a cupcake and ate the whole thing.

"What? It's good!" Pinkie said with her mouth full.

"I'll go talk with her." Justice said.

"You sure? She looked like she wants to be alone." I said.

"It's okay Keshaun. I'll be fine." Justice reassured me.

"Okay. I've always trusted you." I said knowing he's going to be okay.

Switch of Pov: Justice.
Time: 11:27 pm.

I went to Twilight's room and saw she was on her bed with her buried under her pillow. "Twilight are you okay?" I asked her.


"Okay? Why would I be okay? This town is crazy. I mean do they know what time it is?" Twilight ranted.

"You really should lighten up, Twilight. It's just a party!" I said trying to calm her down. "Oh, it's just a party." Twilight mocked.

"Okay. Come down if your going to join us." I said a bit mad as dark purple lightning jumped over my body.

"Sorry." She said as I closed the door.

"Ugh, here I thought I'd have time to learn about the Elements of Harmony but, silly me, all this ridiculous friend-making has kept me from it! "Legend has it that on the longest day of the thousandth year, the stars will aid in her escape, and she will bring about everlasting night." I hope the Princess was right... I hope it really is just an old pony tale." Twilight said muffled from the door.

"Did it go well with Twi?" Keshaun asked.

"She's coming to the celebration and I don't know about the rest." I said.

"Don't worry she'll be ok. She's strong in her own way. Remember: May your heart be your guiding Key." Keshaun quoted.

Time: 11:50 pm.

It was ten minutes before Celestia was about to rise the sun. "I hope this plan goes right." I thought.

"It will. I sure this plan Celestia and Daybreak made will work." Keshaun said through telepathy.

"We just have to keep acting dumb. Go with the girls and save Nightmare Moon and Luna." Caleb said through telepathy too.

"Isn't this exciting? Are you excited, 'cause I'm excited, I've never been so excited— well, except for the time that I saw you walking into town and I went [deep gasp] but I mean really, who can top that?" Pinkie said excited.

"Does that girl ever have a sugar-crash?" I asked.

"Nope." Pinkie said.

After waiting for 7 minutes the fanfare began to chirp. Get it cause there birds. It's funny.

The mayor of Ponyvile started her speech. I tuned out most of the speech. "It is my great honor to introduce to you the ruler of our land, the very pony who gives us the sun and the moon each and every day, the good, the wise, the bringer of harmony to all of Equestria.." She said.

"Ready?" Fluttershy asked the bird as they all nodded yes.

"Princess Celestia!" Mayor Mare said.

"Huh?" Rarity said pulling the curtains to reveal Celestia wasn't there.

"Get ready guys." Keshaun said cracking his knuckles. Caleb is stretching his arms. I just got into a fighting stance.

Smoke started to appear from nowhere. Becoming a cone of smoke revealing an pitch black Alicorn.

She is 8'7". She is wearing blue armor. Her hair was a like looking into the night sky. Her eyes were like a dragon's. The Scalera is teal. She was Nightmare Moon.

"Hahahahahahahaha. Oh, my beloved subjects. It's been so long since I've seen your precious little sun-loving faces." Nightmare Moon said venom in her voice when she said sun.

"What did you do with our Princess?!" Rainbow Dash said trying to rush at the alicorn.

"Don't even think it." Keshaun said grabbing rainbow's tail.

"Why, am I not royal enough for you? Don't you know who I am?" Nightmare Moon asked sarcastically.

"Ooh, ooh, guessing games. Um, Hokey Smokes! How about... Queen Meanie! No! Black Snooty, Black Snooty—" Pinkie said before a cupcake was stuffed in her mouth.

"Does my crown no longer count now that I have been imprisoned for a thousand years? Did you not recall the legend? Have you not see the signs?" Moon asked angered.

"I did. And I know who you are. You're the Mare in the Moon – Nightmare Moon!" Twilight said.

"The Mare who lost her heart to darkness." Keshaun said posing like Phoenix Wright.

"Well well well, somepony and somedragon remembers me. Then you also know why I'm here." Moon rebuttaled.

"You're here to... to... [gulp]" Twilight tried to say.

"Remember this day, little ponies, for it was your last. From this moment forth, the night will last forever!" Nightmare Moon said as she began to let loose an evil laugh as thunder sound and lighting clashed in her night sky of her hair.

Too be continued


Author's Note

Hello everyone this is Keshaunthesilverwolf here with chapter 4. This is the first time I'm using music in the story . The song Luminze will be the intro and the song Shiny Up will be the outro. With that from a howl at the Moon from the silver wolf see you all soon. Also for a bit of confusion Twilight knows about the time chamber but hasn't gone in.

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