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The Dragons of Metal, Sun, and Thunder

by Keshaunthesilverwolf

Chapter 20: Tour guide

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Tour guide

Today we find our heroes inside the airship interior of Ragnarok. It also seems that a chat with everyone is happening let's listen in shall we.

Pov: Keshaun

During the ride home we been telling stories about our time in Equestria.

"So you three have been living in Equestria for 12 years?" Michael asked.

"Yep. Ever since then we've been living with Twilight and her parents and older brother before moving to Ponyvile." I said with a smile on my face.

"Well I for one am glad to move somewhere warmer." Keshia said putting her arms behind her head.

"I'm glad you're going to enjoy Ponyvile Mom. It's a good place to live." I said as a holomenu showed a few pictures of Ponyvile to her.

"Yeah. Ponyvile is a great town to just chill out. Sure there may be a monster attack but Keshaun Caleb Justice and all of us can take those meanie pants down." Pinkie said bouncing around.

"Oh um. Sure I'll take your word for it. Keshaun I don't think you introduce us to your friends." Michael said.

"Oh right. Well she's Pinkie Pie. She's Rarity. She's Fluttershy. She's Applejack. She's Rainbow Dash. She's Twilight Sparkle. He's Spike. She's Gilda. She's Applebloom. She's Scootaloo. She's Sweetie Belle. He's Flare. She's Ash. And He's Tora." I said pointing at them when I said their names.

"Hello." They said waving.

"Well now that introductions are out of the way. Let's go home for real." Justice said as I pressed the boost button.

(Intro sequence

Nine cards surround an orb containing the Elements of Harmony.

Each one shows Drum Bunker Dragon. Drum Bunker Dragon "Father". Dragowizard Quinus Aixa. Three Bal Dragon cards. And three Demon Lord Dragon Batzz cards before the last card covers the screen.

Then the scene changes to show Spike next to Keshaun, Caleb, and Justice holding a giant sword. Next the three Dragons pull out their weapons as all of them leaped in the air and strike the sky.

Then it changes to the show a red background as different letters blurred over the screen. Then the figure of a dragon slammed on the background as the title appeared.

The Dragons of Metal, Sun, and Thunder!

The scene changes to show Michael in a mountain range with guardian soul on fire practicing a few attacks with the sword before getting into a stance.

Then it changes to Keshia holding a sniper rifle in a forest before it shows one of her eyes in the scope as she took the shot.

Then it changes again to show Marcus Huges near a volcano as he used a katana in Iaijutsu slicing two targets before putting the katana back in the sheath.

Then to Alice Huges sending a flurry of attacks with a spear in a field as a burst of wind booked from her last jab.

Then to Yuki Jones holding a staff in the air as ice blew around her.

Then to Keith Jones bringing down a hammer as another volcano erupted.

Then it changes to Shining Armor walking away from the royal guard before holding his Trident up as the tips shined.

Then a shadowy figure fired a beam of darkness as another figure created a shield as the beam clashed with the shield.

Then it changes to Spike and everyone else fighting shadow like ghost before four giant figures obscure by a darkness roared.

As it changed to Keshaun, Caleb, and Justice standing together, as the trio, Michael, Keshia, Marcus, Alice, Yuki, Keith, the Princesses, the main 6, Ash, Flare, Tora, the cutie mark crusaders, Spike, Gilda, Shining Armor, and Cain stand before the camera.)

We cut to Ragnarok flying towards the field of flowers next to the waterfall heading through said waterfall going through the return gates.

When Ragnarok landed everyone was heading down to basically the back door.

"I can't wait to see Ponyvile. From what you all said it's supposed to be a great place." Michael said as we were walking from the garage.

"Don't worry. You won't be disappointed. Ponyvile is a great place Dad." I said with a smile.

"I'm just glad to stop wearing this coat. It's nice but it gets too hot in it." Keshia said taking off her coat. She was wearing a white shirt underneath the coat.

"Well I hope to have a tour of the town. Do you think you can show us around boys?" Yuki asked.

"Sure. I know a good bit about Ponyvile." I said with pride.

"Yeah we can show you all around Ponyvile and give you an awesome welcome party." Pinkie said bouncing around with excitement.

"Well aren't you certainly full of energy. I think I like that idea of yours." Keith said bored.

"Thanks Mr. Justice's Dad." Pinkie said walking in front of him.

"Call me Keith. I don't care about that whole Mr. or Ms. crap." Keith said arms behind his head.

"Okay. Thanks Keith." Pinkie said with a smile on her face.

"No problem Pinkie." Keith said with a smirk on his face.

While walking upstairs I saw that My dad was looking at the tech Twilight was using in the basement.

"Well here is our first part of the tour. The Golden Oak Library." I said as we made it to the foyer of the library.

"So you all have been living in a library for three months?" Keshia asked.

"Yep. Well Spike, Twilight, and us have. Gilda moved in a month ago. Ash, Flare and Tora lived with us for a few weeks and the others have their own houses." Justice said.

"Oh right speaking of house we should be getting to our houses. See you all later darlings." Rarity said as Fluttershy, Applebloom, Applejack, Sweetie Belle, Rarity, Rainbow and Scootaloo left.

"Well they go at the beat of their drums. Don't they?" Michael asked.

"I think it's more because they have jobs at their houses." I said as I took off my jacket.

"What do they do?" Keshia asked.

"Applebloom and Applejack work an apple farm with their family. Rarity is a fashion designer and Sweetie Belle helps out sometimes. Pinkie Pie work as a party planning in Ponyvile and as a baker. Rainbow is weather manager for Ponyvile. Fluttershy is an animal caretaker and animal trainer. While Twilight works here in the library. Gilda has a bunch of part time jobs at with the girls so she helps out with everyone. Spike, Justice, Caleb and I keep this place clean and cook for Twilight when she forgets to eat." I explained.

"Hey." Twilight said annoyed.

"You know I'm right." I said with a deadpan expression.

"Anyway. When are we going to do this tour of Ponyvile?" My Mom asked with excitement.

"We can go in an hour or so. We can show you the house right now if you want." I said with a smile on my face.


"That sounds good." Keith said with a smirk on his face.

After showing the house and the HTC. I had to explain it for an hour and a half. During the explanation of HTC Ash, Flare, and Tora fell asleep.

"So anything else you want to know about the HTC?" I asked.

"No./Naw./Nothing in particular./I'm good." They said understanding the chamber and the explanation.

"Good let's go do our tour now." I said heading towards the front door.

"Wait. Shouldn't we transform into SD form? We might not attract more attention to ourselves." Justice said thinking for a second.

"They already saw us in our true forms. Why hide something if they already know it exists?" I said reminding of the times we transformed.

"I guess that true. Well ignore what I said. Let's get going." Justice said as we head out. It was around the afternoon so allot of ponies were out and having fun.

"So where should we go first?" I asked everyone.

"Maybe sugarcube corner? We didn't have lunch yet." Gilda said as her stomach growled blushing a little.

"Sounds good to me. I need some grub." Keith said with a smile on his face as we were walking towards the gingerbread bakery.

"Welcome to Sugarcube corner. What can we get you all today?" An older female and male voice said as we were walking inside.

"Oh hello there. My son is showing me around. My name is Keshia." Keshia said giving the head bakers a handshake.

"Oh well it's nice to meet you. Your son is a very nice young man. Anyway what would you like?" Mrs. Cake asked giving a responsing to the handshake.

"Oh right. I'll have a chocolate muffin. And a cup of coffee with it." Keshia said placing the order.

"I'll have a chocolate cupcake." Michael said making his order.

"Got any alcohol? If not I'll have some macaroons." Keith asked.

"We don't have any alcohol but we do have macaroons." Mr cake said.

"I'll have a blueberry muffin with some tea." Yuki said placing the order.

"I'll take a blueberry pie and some milk." Marcus said.

"I'll have the same thing Marcus is having but with lemonade instead." Alice said.

"I'll take a strawberry milkshake and a brownie." I said.

"I'll take a slice of chocolate cake and some milk." Justice said.

"I'll have some pound cake." Caleb said.

"I'll take a vanilla cupcake." Spike said.

"I'll have a strawberry cupcake." Twilight said

"And I'll take an apple fritter." Gilda said.

"Okay. We have:Three cupcakes. A slice of chocolate cake with milk. A chocolate muffin with coffee. Blueberry pie with lemonade and milk. An apple fritter. A blueberry muffin with tea. A strawberry milkshake and a brownie. Pound cake. A plate of macaroons. And a kiss for my boyfriend." Pinkie said giving us our things and kissing me on the cheek.

"Thanks for that Pinkie. Now that will be 8 bits." Mr cake said.

"Here I'll pay." I said taking out the 8 pieces of gold from my wallet.

"Thank you for coming." Mrs cake said waving as we left.

We decided to eat outside to enjoy the sunny day. I noticed someone else was walking towards us.

"Well doesn't this fill my heart with joy. Hello there boys." A familiar female voice said.

"Oh hey Zecora. How are you doing today? Also you don't have to rhyme remember." I said taking a bite of my brownie.

"Oh right sorry. Anyway I am doing well. I just got finished with my shopping for my potions." Zecora said with a small smile.

"That's good. Do you want some help with it? I'm sure Caleb would like that." I said as Caleb punched me in the arm with a blush.

"I would most certainly like that. Thank you Caleb." Zecora said hugging him.

"I'll have to do it later. I'm giving my parents a tour of Ponyvile." Caleb said blushing.

"So another friend of yours Caleb?" Alice asked with her eyes shadowed.

"Yes just a friend. Not my girlfriend in anyway Mom." Caleb said sweating a storm releasing the hug.

"Hey anyone want to continue the tour? We still have allot of Ponyvile to get through." I said trying to get the tension to stop.

"Fine. But we are not done with this conversation young man." Alice said putting a finger on his chest.

"How about we go to Sweet apple acres? It might be a way for Caleb's Mom to calm down." Twilight whispered to me.

"Yeah that's a good idea. She has a bit of a temper that you think she's Justice's Mom." I whispered as we all started to walk.

"So where are we going this time?" Keshia asked curious.

"We're going to Ponyvile's very own apple farm. Sweet apple acres. Also Applejack and Applebloom's house." I said while we were walking towards the farm.

"Well howdy everyone. How are y'all doing?" Applejack said waving at us carrying a bucket of apples.

"We just got done with Sugarcube corner. So we were coming to see how the farm is doing." Twilight said.

"Well ain't that mighty fine. Why don't I introduce you to my other family members. Big Mac! Granny Smith! We have guests!" Applejack said as Big Mac and Granny Smith walked over.

"Huh? Guests? Well how do you do? I'm Granny Smith and this my grandson Big Mac." Granny Smith said pointing at the red stallion.

"Yep." Big Mac said.

"He doesn't like to say much. Don't mind him." Applejack said.

"It's okay. I don't like to talk sometimes too." Caleb said knowing that feeling.

"Anyway are you staying for lunch or did you came to just check out the farm?" Applejack asked.

"Sorry we just ate at sugarcube corner so we can't join yo-" "I finished with my chores. Can I leave now you dirt farming mongrels?" A voice I know but wish I didn't said.

I turned to see Blueblood carrying a bag of feces and a bag of chicken feed. He gasped and dropped the bags.

"You!" Blueblood said with menacing intent.

"Oh hey Blueblood fancy running into you. I see you haven't learned anything from your punishment." I said with my arms crossed.

"Shut up you ignorant insufferable lizard! You are going to get it one of these days! I swear it!" Blueblood yelled pointing at me.

"Yeah don't care, see ya everyone." I said as we left from the farm.

"Get back here and take me seriously. Or are you a coward." Blueblood said as I stopped walking.

"I don't think you know what you are doing. Maybe the heat is getting to you. I think that is the only thing wrong here. See ya at the gala Bluebitch." I said continuing walking.

"Well he wasn't very friendly." Marcus said stating the obvious.

"Yeah. Well the nobles of Equestria are completely full of them selves and are incredibly racist. Their are only a few good nobles in that group." Caleb said.

"They aren't as bad as the Griffon kingdom. We had been ruled by a crule tyrant for years." Gilda said adding a bit of truth.

"Well we need to get you all some new clothes. So our destination is Carousel Boutique." I said as we were walking from the farm.

Short intermission brought by a chibi Keshaun, Caleb, Justice, Spike, Twilight, Alice, Yuki, Keith, Keshia, Marcus, and Michael walking towards the boutique.

When we got to the boutique. I knocked on the door. After a few minutes Rarity came down and opened the door wearing a white dress that went to her knees.

"Oh hello darlings. What can I do for you?" Rarity asked.

"I was wondering if you could make some casual wear for our parents." I said.

"Of course. It will take an hour because I need their measurements. And after that I will be able to make them in another hour. Now come in." Rarity said welcoming us in.

"Thanks Rares." I said as we head inside.

After waiting for two hours. Rarity told us that our clothes are done. It was mainly jeans, shorts, and sundresses. I decided to pay for the clothes but Rarity said "There on the house." So we left to see Rainbow's house.

"Hey guys. What's up?" Rainbow said flying towards us.

"Hey RD. Just giving our parents a tour of Ponyvile." I said.

"Oh cool. I was just flying around when I saw you guys." Rainbow said stretching her wings.

"Nice. Anyway we're going to Fluttershy's house right now. You know where it is?" I asked.

"Oh sure. It's near the entrance of the everfree forrest." Rainbow said shuddering a little.

"Thanks for the directions RD. See ya at the party." I said as we walked from the cloud house of Rainbow Dash.

"See ya." Rainbow said.

After walking towards the forrest entrance. I saw a cottage near the entrance. I decided to think that is Fluttershy's. I knocked on the door. The door opened to reveal Fluttershy's pet assho- I mean pet bunny Angel. Giving us a look of "what do you want?" Fluttershy came to the door in a clumsy way.

"Hello. Oh everyone, I'm sorry. I was in the middle of feeding the animals I'm taking care of. Sorry I didn't answer." Fluttershy apologized.

"It's okay Fluttershy. It's your job to take care of animals. Would you mind if we come in?" I said with a small smile.

"Of course you can. Come in. I'll start some tea." Fluttershy said as we walked inside.

Inside the cottage it was a bit simple with a forrest color scheme and wooden furniture. After that different animals live or visit the cottage. Ranging from rabbits to a bear.

"So what kind of tea would you all like?" Fluttershy asked heading to her kitchen.

"Oh we actually already ate sorry about that Fluttershy." I said rubbing the back of my head.

"Oh it's ok. I guess I won't be making tea." Fluttershy said quietly.

"Hey. Don't be so sorry for yourself." Keith said trying to help.

"Thank you so much Keith." Fluttershy said quietly and with a small smile.

"Hey don't mention it." Keith said waving his hand and leaving the cottage.

"Well anyway I guess we'll see each other later at the party. See ya there babe." I said pecking her with a small kiss on the cheek.

"Of course. See you there." Fluttershy said with a blush.

We walked a bit till we made it to the town hall.

"Oh hello there boys. What can I do for you?" Mayor Mare asked walking towards us.

"Just showing our parents Ponyvile. Other than that nothing really." I said shrugging my shoulders.

"Well then I as Mayor. I welcome you to Ponyvile with open arms and with kindness." Mayor Mare said with a smile.

We exited the out the Mayor's meeting place and went back to the library.

"So did you like the tour?" I asked as we went inside.

"It was fun." Keshia and Michael said with a smile.

"It was nice to check out some of the town." Keith said bored.

"Well I enjoyed the tour." Yuki said.

"Well I thought it was a good afternoon spending time together." Marcus said.

"Yep. It was. Though we still going to talk about that whole having more than one girlfriend thing." Alice said as Caleb, Justice, and I were sweating a little.

"We'll talk about that later. Anyway I say we party." I said flicking the light switch on.

"Surprise!" Everyone in Ponyvile said as we see everyone was waiting for us.

"Do you like the party? I got it ready while you all were eating lunch and talking to Zecora. So were you surprised? Were you?" Pinkie said bouncing with a huge smile.

"A little surprised. But it's going to take something more than that Pinkie." I said tousling her hair making her pout her cheeks.


"I will get you one day. I will surprise you." Pinkie said with a joking glare.

"Sure you will. Anyway it's party time." I said excited.

(this part is mainly third person)


A montage of everyone partying and having fun. Keshaun and Blueblood doing an eating contest with Keshaun winning. Then to Justice and Big Mac arm wrestling. Then a dance competition against boys and girls with the boys winning. The to Keith, Marcus, and Michael having a drinking contest with Keith winning.

After a few hours of party and other stuff. (Not sexual stuff. Get your minds out of the gutter.) Everyone started to leave.

"Well I guess it's time to hit the hay. Later everyone. I gotta get everyone who's drunk to bed. That's gonna be fun." I said sarcastically as everyone was heading home. Pinkie and Fluttershy gave me a kiss on the cheek before leaving.

"Should we" "Let's take care of this in the morning." I said before being interrupted by Caleb.

(ending sequence

Nine cards appeared when drum started.

The first card turned around and swirl in fire before becoming Keshaun. Then two more cards turn around and became Caleb, and Justice. Then three more cards turned and became Keshia, Michael, and Keith. Then the last cards turned and became Yuki, Marcus, and Alice.

The scene changes to Keshaun, Caleb, Justice, and Spike playing a game of Buddyfight by shuffling each others decks.

Then it changed to Spike holding the Dragon world flag. With Gilda banging on a drum (mind out of the gutter) showing Keshaun, Caleb, Justice, Keith, Michael, Marcus, and Alice in their SD forms.

Then it changes back to card game with Twilight being referee and Pinkie and Gilda helping with the life points.

Each player we're looking at their hands. Keshaun's hand had a few monsters and a few spells. Caleb's was filled with spells. Justice's was filled with item cards and one monster. And Spike's was filled with spells.

Then it changes to Twilight next to the magic world flag and Spike on a Piano. With Keshia and Yuki in their SD forms.

Back to the match the four players raised their flags as the battle started. It was a good game.

After a few turns Keshaun called his final phase and won the game.

Everyone was laughing when the game ended)

(Post credit scene

At Canterlot in the royal garden.

A black cloaked figure was near a statue and began to laugh quietly as a very small few cracks appeared.)


Author's Note

Hello everyone this is Keshaunthesilverwolf here with chapter 20. This chapter is the first time I do my first intro for the book. I hope I did a good job on it. Also I going to refer to the parents to their first names. Also Zecora will be somewhat out of character but will rhyme sometimes. Anyway from a howl at the Moon from the silver wolf see you all soon and have a great day or night. Also sorry this took me so long to get out. I was having trouble with what to put down and I just a bit of creative block.

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