First, let's talk about the title. Originally the title was going to be ""True Fact" (Is Redundant)" and the fic was never going to get featured. Then DbzOrDie had school that day, so he couldn't get around to editing it, and he didn't like the title. So I changed my mind, made that the subtitle/alternate title, and the rest is history.

On subtitles/alternate titles, having a title for the only chapter of a one shot, I always like to think of them in that classic lit way, "A Fact for Twilight, or "True Fact" Is Redundant." But I'm weird like that.

Twilight smiled and closed the book in front of her, an index she had made of the information in her astronomy notes. She was proud of it, feeling that a good index was one of the joys of life. She set her quill down on the desk, then heard a knock on the door. Spike had said he was making dinner, so Twilight went to answer it.

I don't really like this paragraph. As usual it was the last thing I wrote, and I just wanted to get the story finished.

On the doorstep she found Applejack, who greeted her with a smile. “Heya, Twilight. How are you doin' this evenin'?”

“Great! I just finished a project I've been working on. What about you? How are you?”

“Can't complain. I gotta get home for dinner, but I wanted to stop by and ask ya' somethin'. . .” Applejack hesitated, then added,  “If ya' don't mind, that is.”

“Ask me anything, Applejack! I love to try to help.” Twilight smiled. There really was nothing she liked better than answering questions for other ponies.

Applejack took a deep breath. “Okay, well, would ya' like to go out with me sometime? On a date, I mean.”

There are approximately a billion ship fics where ponies seem to be incapable of asking another pony on a date without running away to the Everfree forest, or having any number of comic misunderstandings. This is not one of those fics. It's not easy for Applejack, but she manages to get the words out without bodily harm.

Twilight froze with the smile on her face, trying to process the new and completely unexpected question.

A concerned look crossed Applejack's face. “I kinda figured ya' might need some time to think it over, or think of how to tell me you don't wanna.”

Twilight blinked, the only sign that she could move at all. She had no idea how to even start answering Applejack. Scenarios were compiled and played out behind her eyes as she furiously calculated the likelihood of each.

“You take all the time ya' need.” Applejack said cautiously. “Don't you worry 'bout tellin' me you'd rather not, if that's how ya' feel. I'm a big pony, I can take it and I'll still be your friend, just like always.”

Finally, Twilight broke through the fog of firing synapses. “I- I need some time to think about this.”

Applejack laughed. “Now we're caught up. You just let me know, either way.”

“Okay.” Twilight nodded. Then she grinned nervously. “Yes, I'll let you know! Um, do you mind if I go do that now? Think, I mean, not let you know, because I'd have to think before I let you know, or I might be letting you know the wrong thing!”

I wanted Twlight to giggle at the end of that line, but I couldn't figure out how to write it. She doesn't use the "heh" that Dash and AJ use, her nervous laugh is more a "hehehe." That looked stupid to me, so I gave up.

“I don't mind a bit, sugarcube, as long as ya' try and relax some.” Applejack smiled gently. “You're wound up like a fancy watch right now, and this ain't worth all that. The way I see it, either you'll wanna go out with me or ya' won't. Either way Princess Celestia'll keep on raisin' the sun, and I'll still be your friend. So you just decide what ya' think is best.”

“Decide what I think is best. I can do that.” Twilight nodded.

“I know ya' can. I'll see ya' later.” Applejack turned to go.

“Um. . . yes! I'll see you later!”

Applejack stopped, and looked over her shoulder. “Oh yeah. Twilight?”

“Yes?”

Applejack blushed a little. “I just wanted to remind ya'. . . I might not be the smartest pony in Equestria, but I generally ain't foolish. Ya' know your heart'd be safe with me, and I'd never let nothin' get in the way of our friendship.”

Twilight stared at her.

“I- uh- just figured you're gonna make a list or somethin' about why ya' might wanna go out with me. Wanted to make sure you remembered that one.”

The whole scene, starting from Twilight freezing, is trying to show that if AJ had been planning to ask Twilight out she certainly would have thought about ways Twilight might react, and maybe even talked it over with Dash. And they certainly know each other well enough that AJ would be able to figure out how to handle the most likely things that Twilight might have done.

“Okay. I'll keep that in mind.” Twilight said quietly.

“Thanks.” Applejack started to walk away again.

Twilight watched her leave, then turned around and closed the door. She had a lot to think about, and absolutely had no experience with this subject. She needed help, she needed guidance.

“Spike! Spiiike! I need every book we have on the subject of dating!” Twilight yelled. Spike came hurrying in from the kitchen.

“Dating? Who's dating?” A look of fear crossed Spike's face. “It's not Rarity, is it?”

“No, it's me! Or it might be me!”

Spike looked skeptical. “You're going out with somepony? Who?”

“Applejack. And I don't know if I'm going out with her, she asked me and I said I need to think. And by that I mean I need to read. And by that I mean I need a book!”

“Woah! Okay, here, hold a cookbook while I find a book on dating.” Spike said, holding up a book defensively. Twilight took it in her magic and opened it, staring at the page.

She sighed with relief. “I feel better. Now, I need to find out if I should go on a date with Applejack.”

“Applejack, huh? Weird.” Spike observed as he climbed up a ladder to one of the higher shelves.

“Weird? What does that mean?”

“Just, why would AJ ask you out? You guys don't have much in common, you don't really seem like her type.”

Twilight looked up from the page in front of her. Why would Applejack ask her out? There were ponies in town who were prettier and cooler and nicer. She might be the smartest pony in town, but why would that impress an apple farmer who rolled her eyes when Twilight tried to explain that second pony plural was still “you”?

I love the phrase "second pony plural." I think grammar would be much cooler if we talked about ponies instead of persons.

There must be a simple explanation. With Applejack, there was always a simple explanation.

“Here you go, 'Details of Dating: A Step by Step Guide to Romantic Interactions.'” Spike said, holding up a book. Twilight dropped the cookbook and pulled the relevant book toward her.

“Thanks! This looks like a perfect place to start!” Twilight said happily, opening the book and starting in on the first chapter.

She studied the rest of the evening, but found very little helpful information in her books. The dating books she went through first were vague on the subject of what kinds of ponies one should go out with, except to say that she should like and trust the pony. They had interesting and, to Twilight, slightly terrifying sections on asking out another pony, making Twilight very glad that she wasn't the one who did the asking.

Once she had realized the dating books weren't helpful she moved on to the history of romance, and nearly got lost in the complicated romantic intrigues of the Roanman Empire. After a few hours, she realized that as interesting as it was that Eagleium married eight ponies, two of whom were his own siblings, it had absolutely nothing to do with the matter at hoof.

DbzOrDie said I should explain why she jumped from dating books to history. I didn't, but I will here: There aren't a lot of ways to research romance. Science on romance is pretty hit or miss, so you end up with history as being the next most likely place. I would think that Twilight would save fiction as a last resort, because as she notes later they often don't resemble real life.

As a last resort she turned to fictional romance novels, but only got through a half of one. She wasn't sure either she or Applejack were comparable to “Torrid Fire” and “Raven Knight,” and the idea of AJ having a smoldering gaze made her giggle. Finding nothing really relevant to her situation, she stacked the books neatly and tried to formulate another plan.

Her questions were too specific. The authors of her books didn't know her or Applejack, so they couldn't offer advice on whether Twilight should accept this invitation, or why Applejack might have asked her out. She needed information from ponies who knew both of them, who understood why this might be a good or bad idea.

Twilight smiled and climbed into her bed late that night. Tomorrow she would talk to her friends, and figure out the right answer.

***

So one of the things a few vocal people didn't like was Rarity's characterization coming up. When they mentioned that, I thought about these scenes, and realized that I had no idea why I wrote them. But I did, and I think Dash gets a few good lines out of the deal.

Twilight left the library the next morning in search of Rainbow Dash. Being Applejack's closest friend, Twilight hoped Dash could tell her why Applejack had decided to ask her out. She also planned to see Rarity for romantic advice, but since finding Dash was more of a challenge Twilight decided to start there.

She scanned the skies over the park and all of Dash's favorite training spots, and levitated a mirror to check all of the clouds around town, but couldn't find Dash anywhere. Dash could be hanging out at Sweet Apple Acres, but that wouldn't help because she couldn't very well ask Dash what Applejack was thinking in front of Applejack.

After looking all morning Twilight was about to give up and go to the Carousel Boutique to talk to Rarity, when she was surprised to see a rainbow tail sticking out behind a large cloud moving across the sky towards the edge of town.

“Rainbow Dash!” she called.

The cloud stopped and Dash's face popped up. “Hey, Twilight! What's up?”

Twilight smiled up at her. “What are you doing? I've been looking for you all morning.”

“Um, work? I do that sometimes so that they keep giving me bits. I've been back and forth to Cloudsdale all morning.” Dash said, rolling her eyes.

“Oh!” Twilight said, slightly surprised to find Dash actually patrolling the weather. “Well don't let me interrupt you, but when you get a break could you-”

That was actually a nod to fanfic. If you went by fanfic, you'd think Dash never actually works. So there she is, working.  

Dash was on the ground at her side in a second. “I heard somepony say 'break.'”

“But, I can't tell you when-”

“Definitely heard it, so it must be time for a break!” Dash leaned against the wall of a building. “So what'd you need me to do on my break?”

“I needed to talk to you,” Twilight said. “You see, Applejack asked me out, and I was wondering if you knew why.”

Dash grinned. “Applejack asked you out? Finally!”

“Finally? She wanted to ask me on a date before this?”

“Sure. It took her a while to work up the guts. Not a problem I have, of course. If I wanted to ask a pony out, I'd just fly up to them and be like, 'Hey, good lookin'. I must be psychic, 'cause I see a date with Rainbow Dash in your future.'” Dash said with a toss of her mane.

I love the idea that Dash would claim she was going to use a cheesy pick up line, then totally chicken out when it came down to it.

“Right. That's sure to work.” Twilight said dryly. “But we weren't talking about you, we were talking about Applejack. I need to know why she asked me out!”

“Because she likes you, duh,” Dash said, rolling her eyes. “I thought you were supposed to be smart.”

“But why does she like me?” Twilight was getting frustrated. “I am smart, but why would Applejack care about that?”

“Beats me.” Dash shrugged. “I know she thinks you have awesome flanks. . .”

“What?” Twilight's eyes went wide. She had never considered that anypony, let alone Applejack, had been looking at her flanks.

“We were just talking about flanks the other day.” Dash said with a wave of her hoof.

In answer to jokerpony's question, I think it would be hilarious to have Twilight tease AJ about this, but by the time Twilight is comfortable enough to do that at the end, it would kind of break the mood. But on the second date I'd imagine AJ would hear all about this.

“Is that it? She just finds me attractive?” Twilight felt a little let down.

Dash noticed and shook her head. “Twilight. I seriously doubt she's been one of your best friends for years because of your flanks. I don't know what she thinks is so special that she wants to be more than friends, we don't really talk about all that mushy feelings stuff. But AJ is a special pony, and you should totally give her a chance.”

“Maybe I should. . .”

“And she has really great flanks too.” Dash grinned.

Twilight though for a moment about Applejack's toned, muscular body, a blush rising to her cheeks. “She does, doesn't she?”

Dash just winked. “You crazy kids have fun, okay? Don't do anything I wouldn't do, 'cause whatever it is, it would be really boring anyway.”

Twilight giggled. “Thanks, Dash.”

“No prob! Seeya!” Dash said as she trotted off.

As Twilight walked to the Carousel Boutique, she thought about the new information she had. If a pony was one of your best friends and you thought she had nice flanks, that seemed like enough of a reason to ask her on a date. But Twilight couldn't help but feel a little disappointed. She'd hoped that there was more, that maybe Dash would tell her that Applejack admired her taste in literature, or her athletic prowess. Well, athletic competence.

The more Twilight thought about it, the less she could imagine Applejack and Rainbow Dash talking about things like why they liked somepony. That didn't mean that there wasn't a reason, Twilight just wasn't going to find it out from Rainbow Dash.

On the other hoof, now she knew that Applejack thought she had nice flanks, which gave her a proud smile and the tiniest sway in her step as she walked into the Carousel Boutique.

Oh boy, this scene coming up. Some people thought it was OOC for Rarity, some people didn't. I think this comes down to two things:

1) I will fully admit that I could have improved it by giving more care to tagging the dialogue. I think Rarity comes off as harsher than I intended her. For the record: what I meant for her was to be sure that Twilight and Applejack wouldn't work out, but genuinely concerned for Applejack at the same time. I'm not sure how that came across.

2) If that did come across and it still seemed OOC or too harsh, I think it's a matter of character interpretation. Specifically, the question comes down to how much she took away from her interaction with Prince Blueblood. There she seems to have a pretty narrow view of what would be the perfect pony for her, and I'd imagine that she would have narrow views for her friends (different for each, but it would not include AJ/Twilight). If you think she learned her lesson there and did a complete flip, then she should be more supportive. But I don't think she changed that much, more likely chalking it up to one bad stallion rather then canning her personal views on romance.  

Rarity looked up from the dress she was pinning and smiled. “Hello, Twilight. You look like you're having a nice day.”

“I am!” Twilight walked over to Rarity. “But I need your help. I need an expert on romance.”

“Well you've certainly come to the right place, darling!” Rarity's smile widened to a grin. “Who is the lucky pony?”

“I don't really know yet. I mean, Applejack asked me out, and I haven't figured out what to say.” Twilight said with a slight frown.

“Applejack?” Rarity pursed her lips, then sighed. “Oh dear, how to let a friend down gently. . .”

“No, the problem is that I don't know if I want to let her down.” Twilight explained. “I've been doing some research and I think I might want to give her a chance.”

Rarity raised her eyebrows. “We are speaking of the same Applejack, correct? Applejack the farmer, with the constantly messy mane and muddy hooves?”

“Do you know another Applejack?” Twilight asked.

“I simply don't understand why there's a question. She's a dear friend, but not exactly date material.” Rarity said with a toss of her mane.

“What makes somepony date material? My books just said that it should be somepony who you respect, trust, enjoy being around. That's kind of vague, but it certainly applies to Applejack.” Twilight noted.

“Well. . .” Rarity considered for a moment. “What is your ideal special somepony like?”

Twilight frowned and sighed. “A slender unicorn between four and five feet tall, with an excellent education who likes daffodils, the smell of chalk, and long evenings of calculus. They would have light eyes, a rumpled mane, and laugh at inappropriate times in the conversation but be embarrassed about it. They would know the history of-”

Rarity raised her eyebrows and said carefully, “That. . . may be a bit too detailed, darling. One doesn't usually get to order a special somepony from a catalog. But do any of those things describe Applejack?”

“Um. . . no.” Twilight admitted, looking down.

“That was my point. If she can't compare in any way to what you want in a special somepony, she isn't the right pony for you to date.”

This is actually a good point. If AJ doesn't seem like Twilight's ideal pony in any way, it's fair to question her reasons for wanting to date her. And since Twilight doesn't actually know herself yet, I don't think Rarity is unfair in her advice.

“But. . .” Twilight tried to put her thoughts together. “I like Applejack.”

“Of course you do.” Rarity gave Twilight a comforting nuzzle. “This is why it's so important to find a way to let her down gently.”

“No, I mean. . . I've never met anypony like my ideal pony that I actually liked. I met a few ponies like that, but there was always something wrong. Applejack isn't my dream pony, but I really do like being around her. And I respect her, and I trust her. And there's something else, but I can't put my hoof on it.” The thought was tugging at the back of her mind, something simple she was forgetting or not noticing.

“It seems unlikely to work out.” Rarity said skeptically. “But I suppose there's no harm in a single date, and perhaps that will get it out of your system.”

“That a good idea!” Twilight smiled. “I can go out with her once, and if it doesn't work then I can figure out how to let her know.”

“Come and see me when that comes to pass, dear. I'll think of something to tell her. I do want for all of my friends to be happy.” Rarity said sympathetically.

“I know. Thanks Rarity! I'll head over to Sweet Apple Acres right now.”

Twilight left the Boutique and started down the road to Sweet Apple Acres, trying to figure out what that something else that she felt about Applejack was. It was something more than liking her, but it certainly wasn't love, at least not the way that the romance novel had described it. Whatever it was didn't involve yearning, passionate hunger, or burning desire. She was kind of glad, because those sounded uncomfortable.

She tried to analyze what she'd always thought about Applejack, and realized that she never had thought much about Applejack. That was a little confusing, Twilight had thought a lot about her friends. Not as dates, of course, but just trying to find out what made them tick. They all seemed to have so many unexpected twists; Fluttershy's commanding presence when pushed into a corner, Rainbow Dash's paralyzing fear of failure, Rarity's shrewd understanding of how ponies think, and Pinkie. . . Twilight could write several books, a thesis, and a play for the Canterlot stage from the amount of time she spent trying to figure out Pinkie. But Applejack was just. . . Applejack. She was friendly and dependable, stubborn and proud, but anypony could guess those things if they spent any time with her.

Twilight grinned as she solved the puzzle of why there was no puzzle. Applejack was honest about who she was. She didn't try to pretend to be anything she wasn't, so Twilight never had to try to figure it out.  That was refreshing, in a way. There was a basic fact to start from: Applejack was Applejack, exactly as she seemed.

This is an interesting thing, and is either the reason there aren't more Applejack episodes, or the reason we should see more. Most of the other characters, including Twilight, have had episodes that showed some unexpected deeper layer. Applejack's episodes are pretty predictable for her character. This might be a sign that she needs more depth, but I've never felt that she was a shallow character, and you have to admit that it kind of makes sense for the element of honesty.

So what did Twilight think about Applejack? She worked hard. She loved her family and her friends. She was usually a little messy, and stubborn, and some of the things she should have learned in the Ponyville school house didn't seem to have stuck, but Applejack would be the first to admit those things.

She felt safe around Applejack. Not that she didn't feel safe most of the time, but she felt extra safe around her strong, dependable friend. From the day she came to Ponyville, Applejack had been looking out for her. Even if Twilight could take care of herself, when Applejack was around there was always another set of eyes and ears watching for problems, and another brain analyzing what was going on. If Twilight had to pick a pony to take care of an issue when she couldn't be there, chances were it would be Applejack.

There are people, and ponies in the world who are born to be second in command. Applejack is one of those ponies. She usually the second most logical after Twilight, sometimes the most logical when Twilight starts going crazy. She's not a leader, but she gets things done and doesn't need to be told what needs doing.

That seemed like a good thing in somepony to date. She remembered what Applejack had said to her, that she'd be careful with her heart and she'd never let anything ruin their friendship. Twilight knew that she could count on that, if Applejack said it then she meant it. As Twilight approached Sweet Apple Acres, she felt confidant in her decision. Going on a date with Applejack was the right thing to do.

She found Applejack carrying a load of apples to the barn. Twilight caught up with her, and grinned. “Hi! I wanted to let you know I made my decision, and I'd like to go out with you.”

“Well now, that sure is good news!” Applejack grinned. “How 'bout we go right now? It'll just take me a minute to get finished up here and pick up a few things.”

The smile fell from Twilight's face. “Now? But- but- I only got to skim the chapters on actually going on a date!”

“If you got more studyin' to do, we can do it another time.” Applejack said, sounding a tiny bit disappointed. “But I got somethin' special in mind and this looks like a good day for it. So if you're willin' to trust me I'll make it real easy for ya', and I bet you're smart enough to figure what to do.”

I admit it: I didn't want to write a getting ready for a date scene, I just wanted to get to the cute sunset. Sometimes writers cheat.

“But what if I go home afterward and study and realize that I could have done something better?”

“Then we'll haveta go on another date.” Applejack smiled and nudged her. “But just havin' you there's gonna be treat enough for me, you got my word.”

Twilight smiled. “Okay. We'll go on a date right now.”

“That's the spirit. Just lemme take care of some things.” Applejack grinned.

Applejack dropped off her apples in the barn, then went into the farmhouse. She returned a few minutes later with a picnic basket on her back.

“All set. You don't mind a bit of a walk, do ya?”

“No, no not at all! It's a beautiful day.”

“This way then, sugarcube.” Applejack started walking through the orchards, away from Ponyville. Twilight walked next to her and tried to think of something to say.

“So, um. . . what do you think about?”

This is always an interesting question to ask someone. Also: "What are you thinking?" is a good conversation starter with friends/significant others. Warning, the first few times they will react like AJ does here.

“What do I think about what?” Applejack knitted her brow.

“In general.” Twilight said with a shrug. “When you aren't thinking about work and the farm.”

“That's a strange kinda question.”

Twilight signed and looked down. “Well you didn't give me time to study, so I don't know the right kind of questions to ask.”

“It ain't wrong, sugarcube.” Applejack said quickly. “It just ain't somethin' anypony's ever asked before. I guess I think some 'bout rodeo, and some 'bout plans for things to do. Mostly I think 'bout ponies in town, 'bout our friends. Sometimes I try and figure 'em out. I dunno if ya' noticed, but they can be kinda weird sometimes.”

“I do the same thing!” Twilight smiled and relaxed a little. “I was just thinking about that on the way here, and how I don't think about- um, I mean, so why do you think Fluttershy is so scared of everypony? She's certainly tough enough when she has to be.”

“I reckon Fluttershy just don't like tryin' to work things out, it makes her nervous. Ponies ain't always what they seem to be, and she gets all worried tryin' to figure out just what she's supposed to say. But you take that bunny of hers. Ornery little cuss, I'd buck 'im in the head after a day or so, but he lets Fluttershy know exactly what he wants. He don't pretend to be nice to her, or try to hide when he's mad. She likes knowin' just where she stands, and the critters give that to her more than anypony can.”

Twilight nodded. “That makes perfect sense. And since most ponies aren't entirely honest most of the time, she has no way of figuring out which ponies are being honest with her, so she has to worry that every pony might be hiding something. But she can open up with us to some extent, because we've proven ourselves to be generally honest in our intentions.”

There are times in my life where I've been as shy as Fluttershy (I've also hidden behind my hair a lot) and this was the reason. It makes sense for Fluttershy, too. Her uncertainty and constant questioning of whether it's okay for her to have said  or suggested something fit with the idea that she just can't tell how other ponies are reacting to her, and that makes her anxious.

“Right. So she loves us like she loves her critters. And with how she cares 'bout those critters, we're some darn lucky ponies.” Applejack smiled. “So, if you been thinkin' 'bout this too, think ya' can tell me why Rarity's really tough as nails, but likes to play at swoonin' and carryin' on? I never could figure that one out.”

Twilight smiled and explained her thoughts on Rarity and each of their other friends as they walked together. Applejack explained her thoughts as well, and it turned out that they both had some insights that surprised the other. Twilight hardly noticed how far they'd come until Applejack stopped.

“This is the spot. Why don't I lay out a blanket, and we can have some supper?”

“That sounds nice.” Twilight said, looking around.

They had walked a long ways, to the far edge of the orchard. The end of the neat rows of trees marked the edge of Sweet Apple Acres, and the edge of Ponyville in fact. Past that point was an unclaimed meadow, overgrown with grass and wildflowers, and beyond that trees seemed to indicate a forest.

Applejack spread the blanket on the ground, and unpacked the picnic basket, pulling out cornbread and a covered dish of fried squash, and two bottles of apple juice.

“Here we are, Granny's best. And there's apples too, of course, but I didn't see no reason to carry 'em all the way when they're growin' right here. I'll get ya' one if ya' want.”

“This looks delicious.” Twilight sat down on the blanket. “Maybe I'll eat an apple later for dessert.”

Twilight heard a strange noise and looked up. Applejack was trying very hard not to laugh, and Twilight thought over what she said. Her eyes went wide, then she cringed and covered her face with a hoof.

“Not what I meant! Not what I meant!”

“Aw, sugarcube, I know that. It just came out funny, is all.” Applejack said, chuckling as she sat across the blanket from Twilight. “Just relax and enjoy your supper.”

Twilight smiled gratefully, and magically lifted some squash to her mouth.

Over dinner they had a winding conversation about things going on in town, Ponyville history, the magic behind zap apples, the Everfree forest, and the adventure where they'd first met. Twilight found it all fascinating, and Applejack seemed just as engaged, and before Twilight knew it the sun was going down.

That would be an interesting conversation to write out. Maybe I will someday, it makes sense as a conversation between them, and I'd love to think of Twilight's thoughts on Zap apples.

Anyway, this is a good place for me to talk about me and TwiJack. I'm an AppleDash shipper, first and foremost. But there are a few big things about TwiJack I love. To me, TwiJack is a stable, quiet ship. Both of them are fairly sensible, and not prone to jumping to conclusions. I've also gotten the sense though the series that Applejack is looking out for Twilight and a little more protective of her than she is of anypony else, even Fluttershy. Combined with what I said before, about seeing AJ as Twilight's second in command (AJ is where Twilight went first to un-discord the ponies, for example,) I can totally see this ship. Not in a passionate, "I want your flank" kind of way, but starting as a partnership that other ships have to build towards through a fanfic.

I'll also disclose that this ship is the closest to the main couple in my novel, so there's that too.

She glanced in the direction of the sunset and gasped. “Oh wow, Applejack, look!”

The meadow in the shade of the trees was already dark, and tens of thousands of fireflies hovered over it, mirroring the stars beginning to show in the deep blue sky. The sunset shone through the upper branches of the trees like the flame on a candle lighting the whole world in a warm, rosy light.

Applejack smiled. “That right there's what I wanted to show ya' on our first date. What it looks like way out here, with the sun just gone down.”

Twilight was entranced, so much so that she didn't notice that Applejack had moved until she sat down beside Twilight.

“First time I heard your name, I thought of this.” Applejack said quietly. “Lotta folks would think Twilight Sparkle sounds like a fancy name, all magic and stuff. But it can be simple too, just the settin' sun and the fireflies dancin' and the stars peekin' though. I been meanin' to show ya' for some time but. . . I was scared it's a little too home grown for you. I thought you might take it wrong.”

That right there was the first thing I wrote, and more or less the basis for the whole fic.

“It's beautiful, Applejack.” Twilight said. Then she blushed. “I- I remind you of this? How could I take it wrong? It's one of the nicest things anypony has ever said about me.”

“Well that ain't right. I can think of a whole barn full of nice things to say 'bout ya'.” Applejack leaned against Twilight and gave her a gentle nuzzle.

Twilight smiled and returned the nuzzle. “I've been thinking a lot of nice things about you, too. Should I say them?”

“I reckon there ain't much nice to say 'bout me.” Applejack blushed and looked down. “But you can always tell me what you're thinkin'.”

“Well, I was thinking that. . . sometimes I think too much.” Twilight said sheepishly.

Applejack gave an amused snort, but there was a tender smile on her face.

“I know.” Twilight nodded. “But I was thinking that there's somepony that I don't think too much about. She's just there, exactly what she seems to be, honest and dependable and beautiful- um, er, I mean. . .”

Applejack smiled softly. “Go on, sugarcube.”

Twilight relaxed against Applejack's warm body, laying her head on her shoulder. “Well, it's nice to not think, sometimes. It's nice to just know somepony, to not worry that I'm missing something, or that I'm not understanding you. You're just something that's true. Princess Celestia raises the sun each day, spring comes after winter wrap-up, and Applejack is just who she is. . . and she'll always be there for me.”

“You know that's the truth.” Applejack whispered.

“I like that. A lot. And. . .” Twilight hesitated, and looked into those big green eyes. “I like you a lot.”

I don't like to have ponies talking about love right off the bat. Especially not sensible ponies like AJ and Twilight.

“I like you a lot too, Twilight.” Applejack said meeting her gaze. “Uh, would ya' mind if I kissed ya'?”

Twilight didn't answer, she just leaned over and kissed Applejack tenderly on the lips.

As they parted, Twilight grinned. “See, I didn't even have to think about that! I'm with a beautiful pony whom I like very much, in a perfectly romantic setting. It was just natural.”

Applejack smiled. “Then I reckon ya' won't mind if I return the favor.”

Applejack kissed Twilight just as tenderly, but pressed the kiss slightly deeper. It felt loving and strong and gentle, Twilight decided it was a kiss only Applejack could give.

They parted slowly, their faces just inches apart. Applejack whispered, “Twilight Sparkle, you're the prettiest, sweetest, smartest pony I know.”

Twilight blushed and answered breathlessly, “Then will you believe me that you don't need the 'all' part of 'you all'? And when you use it for singular it doesn't even make sense.”

I love the idea that Twilight has no concept that sharing her more intellectual thoughts will break the mood.

Applejack looked confused for a second, then leaned back and chuckled. “I reckon that ain't gonna happen, sugarcube. But that ain't why I think you're so smart, anyway. It ain't 'cause ya' remember all that fancy stuff 'bout words and big ol' math thingies and barrels of spells. What makes ya' so smart is that behind all that stuff you're just lookin' for what's real and true, all the time. That's what all that's for, right?”

“Well . . . yeah. Yes it is.”

It's easy to get lost in intellectualism, but nice to have somepony remind you the purpose of all of that. Folks out there who are in school should remember that- every now and then you need to figure out what the basic purpose behind the stuff you're learning actually is.

Applejack smiled at her, “Now that's a job I can respect, even if I'll never understand half of what you're thinkin'.”

Twilight's eyes lit up as pieces fit together. “The whole idea of study is to find the things in the world that are always true. I mean, it's really the dream of any scholar to discover a new fact, a new law of the universe.”

She glanced over and Applejack was smiling at her. Twilight smiled back at the pony who was always true and constant, dependable to the end.

“Applejack, will you be my fact?”

I wish I had more to say about that line, but it kind of came out of nowhere.

“Sure as sugar.” Applejack gave Twilight a nuzzle on the cheek and pulled her close.

Twilight watched the glow fading from the horizon, feeling Applejack's strong body against her, and whispered, “You know, that phrase doesn't really make sense. . .”

Applejack chuckled and smiled at her. “Just kiss me, Twilight.”

“That one makes perfect sense.” Twilight said happily, and she did.

Okay, I'll hide this here at the end. I write oneshots fast. My rule is two days or it goes in the folder of WIP doom, probaby never to be heard from again. You'll notice my one shots are rarely longer than 3000 words, for that reason. This one is just shy of 5000.

That's because every now and then, a story just hits me and I plow through it, working on it every spare minute. These are always my best stories. I wish I knew what did it, and how to do it on command, but I don't.

So anyway, this story was written Monday and Tuesday, sent to DbzOrDie early Wednesday, proofread Thursday, and posted  Friday. Now it's Saturday and the story has been sitting in the feature box all day. I would probably be a better writer if I sat on my stories longer, and sent them for more pre-reading, but I'm happy with my stories in general and I think this is one I'll love to reread.

If you have any questions or comments, feel free to put them in the comments here!