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Thank You, Mistress

by Ablegabriel

Chapter 17: Fang

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Fang

It was now the following day and Trixie decided to go out into town on her own (With her Mistress's permission of course,). She wanted to look for showpony supplies as she wanted to put on a show for her new family. She wasn't worried about ponies attacking her, because of how much stronger she was now, both magically and physically. She noticed something strange however, all the ponies she ran into seemed to look like they were confused and only sent her cautious glances, nopony seemed to hold the hatred they had for her just a week prior. She had turned down an alley that was a shortcut to the store she knew would have fireworks, when she felt somepony grab her from behind and put something on her horn. Something was injected into her neck just above her collar. She pulled out of the grip of the pony and jumped away and looked back to see six masked ponies standing in behind her. She turned to confront them before she began to feel dizzy.

"Well Miss Lulamoon, you'll be coming with us now." The one who was seemingly the leader said smugly. Trixie tried to contact her Mistress, but she couldn't. She then realized that the thing on her horn was a magic inhibitor. She ran out of the alley through the way that wasn't blocked off. She heard the hooves of the six ponies following her. When she made it out of the alley she let out a shout for help, but to her dismay, this was the one time that nopony was around. She continued to run as fast as she could, but whatever was injected into her was starting to take it's effect. She made it to the entrance of the shopping district and let out one more shout for help before she collapsed. She saw the six ponies approach as they caught up to her.

"P-Please, Somepony Help!" Trixie cried one last time before the masked ponies stood before her.

"Well Miss Lulamoon, as I said before, you will becoming with us." The lead pony said much more irritated than he was before.

"Now that you've done all this, you will need to be-" He never finished his sentence as he was promptly kicked directly in the face by a random mare. He flew into the wall with a resounding smash. She then punched two more of the masked ponies before sliding underneath one of them before bucking him into all four of his companions and sent them flying into the same wall that their leader was sent careening into. The mare than approached the downed form of Trixie. Trixie's eyes widened as she realized who her impromptu savior was.

"Applejack?" She said in disbelief. The orange cowpony picked her up and pulled her foreleg over neck as she began to carry Trixie.

"Oh Stars, Trixie! What the hay happened?!" Applejack demanded in worry.

"Please take Trixie to Mistress." Trixie begged. "Trixie want's to be with her Mistress!"

"Alright, I hear ya, Trixie." Applejack agreed softly. "Give me a minute, though." She said before gently putting down Trixie. Trixie was skeptical at first, but was relieved when she saw Applejack quickly detain the six ponies with rope that they happened to be carrying. She then came back to Trixie and reached to take off the inhibitor ring, but her hoof was batted away by Trixie.

"NO!" Trixie screamed.

"Wha? What are ya doin?" Applejack asked.

"Trixie heard Mistress mention that forcefully removing a magic inhibitor by hoof could be very painful and She doesn't want to take any chances." Trixie explained.

"Alright, Sugarcube. I'll take ya to Twilight right away." Applejack told the blue mare reassuringly.

"Thank you, Applejack." Trixie said gratefully. It was this moment when there was a flash of purple light in front of the two mares. Applejack stood defensively in front of Trixie, ready to defend her again if need be. Her stance relaxed as she realized it was Twilight and Tempest.

"MISTRESS!!" Trixie screamed as she tackled the lavender Alicorn, her body finally responding to her commands.

"I'm so sorry! I should never have pestered you to let me go out by myself!!! I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry!" She exclaimed into her Mistress's fur.

"Shh Shh, it's okay, Trixie. I should never have given you permission. I'm to blame for this, not you. It was stupid to allow you into town by yourself just a day after we were infiltrated, please forgive me." Twilight whispered into Trixie's ear.

"Mistress, you don't have to seek forgiveness from Trixie, she will never hold any negativity towards you. Ever." Trixie said. Twilight kissed her pet's forehead before tightening her hold on the showmare. She then looked up to Applejack.

"AJ, from the bottom of my heart, thank you so much for saving her." Twilight said as she soothingly ran her hooves along the shaken unicorn.

"Of course, Twi. I have to ask one thing, though. How did y'all know what was happenin?" The orange cowpony asked.

"One of the enchantments on the collars are to alert me if one of my pets are in danger. When one of them are in danger, their collars send a message to me, it's sort of like a buzz in my brain. The greater the danger, the more intense the buzz is." Twilight explained. While her Mistress comforted her Sister, Tempest approached the six ponies that were tied up and unconscious. They all had the same masks as the mercenary ponies that they confronted yesterday. However, one pony had a different mask then all the others. Instead of it just being pure charcoal black, there was a symbol of a wolf barring it's fangs. She took off all of their masks, before punching the leader pony in the face, effectively jolting him awake. He looked around frantically for a second before he seemed to realize just what was happening.

"Oh, fuck." He said to himself as he met the extremely scary, extremely pissed of glare of Tempest Shadow and Twilight Sparkle.

"Tempest, you are free to do whatever you want to them, don't be afraid to cross lines." She said from her spot against Trixie.

"You will be rewarded greatly if you pour corrosive fluids either down their tiny dicks or up their asses. Just make sure it isn't enough to kill them until AFTER at least on of them talks." Twilight communicated to the byzantium unicorn through their link.

"Sweet Celestia I fucking love you, Mistress!" Tempest thought back to her Mistress. The leader stallion gulped audibly as he watched Tempest grow the most sadistic smile he will ever see in his potentially soon to ended life. Tempest Teleported herself and the six ponies into the dungeon once again, she brought all of their stuff, including their masks. She strung everypony up before making sure they were all awake, by violently bucking them in their dicks.

"AAAAAGGGH!!!" A chorus of six pained screams sounded through out the dungeon.

"YOU BITCH WHAT THE FU-" This particular cry of pain was met with another, even more violent kick to the balls. This time, he didn't cry out in pain, he only whimpered out.

"Oooh, I think I heard something crack in there. So sorry!" Tempest teased with her trademark maniacal grin. This little session was interrupted moments later by the sounds of hooves coming down the stairs.

"Hello? Who's down here?" The voice of Vinyl Scratch sounded from out in the hall. Tempest exited the room she had strung up her new victims and went to retrieve the alabaster unicorn that had managed to find her way into the castle's dungeons.

"Greetings, Miss Vinyl." Tempest said as she approached the snooping mare, causing her to jump.

"Oh! Sorry, uh..Tempest! Right?" She inquired. Tempest simply nodded in response.

"I didn't meant to snoop around, I was just walking around when I heard somepony scream from down here. What is this place, anyway?"

"The castle dungeons/torture chambers." The byzantium unicorn said simply, intending to be straightforward with this mare.

"Oh. Were you, uh, torturing somepony?" She asked a little nervously.

"Yep. They're from the same group of ponies that set your home on fire." Tempest informed Vinyl.

"Can I help?" Vinyl said, completely forgetting her nervousness of being in a torture chamber.

"Well that was a one-eighty turn." Tempest teased.

"Those fuckers destroyed my home, Tavi's cello, my turntables, and most importantly, my fucking engagement rings. I am happy to bring these assholes pain and suffering." Vinyl said as she slowly grew a sadistic grin.

"I like you, Vinyl." Tempest said with her own sadistic grin. She then lead the smaller unicorn to the room where the soon to be very scarred, both mentally and physically, ponies were strung up. When they entered the room, two of the six ponies gulped when they saw Vinyl and whispered to each other. This did not go unnoticed by the two unicorns.

"Oh, so you two were the fucks that made my fiancee cry!" She said before punching the one closest to her. She then proceeded to beat the shit out of him for a good five minutes before doing the same to the guy's partner.

"Fuggyu, Bish." One of them spat. Vinyl reared to punch him again, and punched him she did. Hard. So hard in fact, she snapped off the bastard's horn.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" He Screamed before passing out from the sheer pain.

"Damn." Tempest whistled. Frankly, she was pretty impressed with the white unicorn. Vinyl backed away from the unconscious and badly bleeding stallion. But not before she sent his partner the nastiest death glare he's ever seen. No really, he actually passed out from it's intensity. The bastard was now unconscious and foaming at the mouth from Vinyl's intense red gaze.

"I stand by what I said earlier, I like you, Vinyl." Tempest said with a deep grin on her muzzle. "But please refrain from doing whatever you did again, we do need to get information out them you know." Tempest teased.

"Sorry, but that felt good." Vinyl said.

I wont go into detail about just what transpired throughout the next hour or so, just know it was very brutal, and very effective, and very bonding for Tempest and Vinyl.


"We were able to find out quite the useful information from those ponies, Mistress." Tempest informed Twilight as everypony present in the castle was sat around a table in a meeting Twilight had called for. Trixie was huddled next to her Mistress and Twilight had wing protectively wrapped around her favorite pet. Applejack was present too, everypony was grateful for what she's done for Trixie. Twilight had magically removed Trixie's magic inhibitor as soon as Tempest left them in the market area with Applejack. Twilight will never let her out of her sight again, a fact that Trixie was perfectly fine with.

"Well, go on then." Twilight told Tempest.

"Vinyl was very helpful with the interrogation, you've got yourself a real keeper, Octavia." She said as she glanced over to the pair of musical ponies.

"I know that, I have for awhile now." She said as she kissed Vinyl's cheek.

"Anyways, we were able to find out a LOT of stuff. They're the reason why everypony was so uncharacteristically hateful to Trixie. They had made some sort of device that altered ponies' emotions and used Trixie and Ponyville as their test subjects." Tempest informed everypony present.

"THEY WERE THE REASON WHY MY TRIXIE WAS TREATED SO POORLY?!?!" Twilight screamed. Tempest nodded in conformation.

"We were able to identify who this 'Onyx' Character really is, as well as the name of their organization of mercenaries as well as who Onyx worked for." Tempest stated seriously.

Everypony in Ponyville and Canterlot stopped and turned to Twilight's castle as they heard her scream in an insanely loud, extremely pissed off voice.

"BLUEBLOOD!!!!! I'M GOING TO FUCKING KILL YOU!!!!"

Author's Notes:

I spent three days writing this and I was up till 3 am one day, This still may not get posted before I go to sleep for good for the night. I liked what I did with this chapter and hope everybody likes this chapter too. I apologize for how short this was. Please don't get too mad at me :twilightblush:

Next Chapter: Fang part II Estimated time remaining: 3 Hours, 10 Minutes
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