Sunset's Welcoming

Twilight walked up to the front door of Zecora's hut and knocked politely. After a few moments, she heard the rustle of movement inside the hut that signaled the zebra inside was making her way to the door. As the door opened, she saw a smile spread across the muzzle of the huts inhabitant as she recognized her guest.

"Ah, Princess Twilight! Please come in!"

It was only when the door had fully opened that Zecora realized there were other three ponies on her doorstep. A quick glance showed that two of them were wearing the collars Twilight had asked her to make while the third was a pony she’d never seen before.

"Oh, so these are the two mares that devote themselves to you. Seeing how happy they are at your heels, it has kindled my jealousy anew!" Zecora said with a teasing grin.

Twilight chuckled at the zebra's comment. "Yes, these three are my lovely pets. I need a collar for my newest pet here and I was hoping you could help."

Zecora smiled as she watched Twilight drap a foreleg around the orange unicorn, who quickly started to nuzzle her mistress. "So, another pony has submitted herself to you? That's just great, now I'm jealous of her too! I'll start working on her collar right away. And while I have made the other two for free, this time I hope that you could pay." Zecora said with her teasing grin never leaving her muzzle. Twilight nodded in her agreement to the zebra's request.

"Of course, Zecora. I'd be happy to pay you for this. How many bits do you need?" Twilight asked. The zebra then laughed at the Alicorn's eagerness.

"Oh come now, Princess Twilight, I was joking with you, I wouldn't dare sully my reputation with such blight. You are my friend and Princess, I wouldn't dream of charging you, my princess." Zecora confessed after a few minutes of laughter.

"Are you sure. Zecora? I have no problem with paying you." Twilight tried to insist, but the zebra would have none of it.

"Yes, Twilight, I am quite sure. Being able to do something so important for you is quite enough payment for me, to you I ensure." Zecora told the princess, leaving no room for an argument.

"Alright. If you insist, Zecora." Twilight conceded. Zecora then went further inside the hut to make the princess's third pet her collar.

A couple of hours have passed with Sunset having the pleasure of being the sole pony to please her Mistress for those couple of hours. It was Trixie's idea for the newest pet to spend the most of her first day pleasing their Mistress. Starlight agreed with her sister pet and they both let their newest sister have their Mistress all to herself until either Sunset or their Mistress said it was time to share. Sunset was a little apprehensive at first, not wanting to make her new sisters jealous, but they quickly assured her that they wanted her to do this. After she was certain that her actions wouldn't cause any problems between her and her new sister pets, Sunset was all to eager to have the pleasure of pleasing her Mistress to herself. After awhile, Zecora came out of the room with another collar identical to the ones around Trixie and Starlight's necks in her hoof. Twilight nudged her newest pet, causing the orange unicorn to reluctantly pull herself off of Twilight's delicious cock. Sunset looked up at her Mistress, who was sat upon a comfy chair, awaiting her next order.

"Arise, my pet. Zecora is finished with making your collar." Twilight told the orange mare beneath her. Sunset was quick to obey her Mistress.

"I put the same enchantments on this collar as I have with the other ones, Sunset, I believe you'll find them quite benefactory. And as always Princess Twilight, I hope you find my services quite satisfactory." The zebra said with a smile as she hoofed over the collar to the purple Alicorn. Zecora inwardly groans in a fit of jealousy, upset that she didn't get to call Twilight her Mistress like the three unicorns present in her home. Still, she held out hope that she would one day be able to call Twilight Sparkle her Mistress.

"Thank you, Zecora. You always do the tasks I ask of you outstandingly." Twilight thanked her zebra friend for the trouble. "Well, we'll get out of your mane now. Let's go girls." Twilight said, her trio of pets letting out a chorus of,

"Yes, Mistress." The four mares then exited the hut.

Only Twilight with her better senses, heard the pleasured moans of the zebra as they got farther way from her hut. The purple Alicorn grinned to herself.

As soon as Twilight and her pets got inside the castle they all called home, she turned and stood in front of Sunset. After a quick glance towards Trixie and Starlight, which showed her two pets standing to the side, looks of eager anticipation written across their faces as they stared at her and her newest pet, she turned her attention to the orange mare standing in front of her.

"Sunset Shimmer, you are now officially my pet, and as such we welcome you into our loving family with open hooves." She told Sunset lovingly, fastening the collar around her throat. Once she was finished, it glowed as it sealed itself around the neck of orange mare permanently, just as the other two collars had around their respective pet’s necks.

As Sunset felt the collar fasten into place around her neck, she couldn't help the tears of joy that trickled down her cheek as she felt the welcoming presence of three other minds brush lightly against her consciousness. Her joy only intensified as she felt the clasp of the collar dissolve and fuse with the rest of it, becoming a single unbroken band around her neck, an official and permanent symbol of her devotion to Twilight. Pushing her head forward, she lovingly nuzzled her Mistress's hooves, eager to show her submissive, love and absolute devotion for the Alicorn, an eagerness that was quickly rewarded as Twilight started to softly pat her.

"Thank you so, so, so, much for claiming me Mistress! I will always be loyal to you." Sunset cried from underneath her owner's hoof, looking up at her with love and adoration shining in her eyes.

Twilight smiled at her newest pet and motioned for her to rise from the floor. Sunset was quick to obey and shot up almost instantaneously, immediately looking towards her Mistress for further direction. Twilight touched her right hoof to the right cheek of the smaller mare and just stood there, gazing at her newest pet lovingly for a few moments, before pecking the fiery orange unicorn's horn with a quick kiss, sending bolts of ecstasy through the orange mare.

"I'm glad you wanted to be my pet, Sunset. Although I wish you weren't forced to come here through such horrible circumstances."

Sunset shook her head, offering Twilight a wide smile. "It's fine Mistress. It's definitely for the best, I get to be with you and my new sisters now! Getting to be a pet-"

Twilight’s eye’s widened with concern as Sunset’s words broke off and her smile faltered. "Sunset, what's wrong?"

"I-I forgot about my own pet! My gecko, Ray, I left him in the other world." Sunset said, barely able to stop herself from crying. "Please, Mistress! Please let me go look for him!"

“He means a lot to you, doesn’t he?" Twilight asked her pet, receiving a nod as an answer. "Then of course we can look for him!”

"Mistress, do we have to worry about the inhabitants of that world?" Starlight asked as she approached her mistress.

"Normally we would, but I've found a spell that allows us to keep our magic when we cross through the portal."

"So, when do we leave?" Trixie asked, following her sister pet to their Mistress.

"We leave immediately."

Even as she spoke, Twilight turned and led the way towards the mirror chamber, her loyal pets following close behind. As she pushed the door open however, the sight that greeted her almost caused her jaw to drop. Inside the room Spike was sitting on the floor, and across from him was another baby dragon, one she’d never seen before. The pair were deep in conversation, but it ended abruptly when Spike saw her.

"Mom! You're back! This is my new friend, Ray! He's from that world through the mirror portal thingy!"

"R-Ray?" Sunset asked, hope clear in her voice.

The dragon shot up when he heard his mother's voice coming from behind him. He turned around and his turquoise eyes searched for the source of the voice before finally landing on the unicorn that bore a striking resemblance to his caretaker. Running over to the shocked mare, he threw his arms around her foreleg.

"MOMMY! I WAS SO SCARED, I THOUGHT I WAS NEVER GOING TO SEE YOU AGAIN!!!" Ray wailed into her fur.

While Ray’s sudden reappearance and form of address, combined with the fact he was able to address her at all, shocked her for a moment, she quickly returned his hug.

"Ray, I'm so happy to see you, but how did you even get here?"

"W-When you had to leave the house with everyone chasing after you, that nice lady with the animals saw me and took me in. When she saw you jump into the portal, she told me; 'Little guy go after her, you should be with your real mommy'."

Sunset smiled at the black spotted yellow baby dragon, then nuzzled him. "That makes sense, she was the only one that looked upset when everyone turned against me. I guess she cared about me, at least a little bit. Still, none of that matters at this point, this is our home now, Ray."

"Uh-Huh!" Ray nodded happily, his rapid stream of words barely pausing long enough for Sunset to speak. "Have you met Spike? He's really cool! His Mommy's a Princess!"

Sunset chuckled softly at the yellow dragon's antics, but paused when spike piped up. "Mom? Does this mean that Ray is my new brother?"

Ray's body tensed up and he let go of Sunset to zoom over to Twilight. "Does it Miss Twilight? Please Please Please?! I would love to have a big brother!"

"You’re Sunset's adopted son, right? Of course, you’re more than welcome!"

Ray flashed a huge grin up at the Alicorn as he thanked her, then rushed back to Sunset.

As soon as ray was once again pressed up against sunset, Spike trotted towards the yellow dragon and wrapped him in a hug. "Welcome home, little brother."

"Thank you big brother!"

As Ray returned the older baby dragon's hug, he barely registering the four mares cooing at the sight before a yawn escaped him. “I'm really tired all of a sudden, can I go to sleep, Mo-?"

Sunset’s eye’s widened as her adopted son started to collapse before he even finished the question. Sharing down and supporting him with a quickly placed hoof, she couldn’t stop the expression of intense worry that spread across her muzzle.

"R-Ray? Are you okay? Ray? Ray?..."

Sunset trailed off when the baby dragon didn't respond and tears started to well up in her eyes as a whole list of horrible things that could be wrong with him occurred to her. Before she could start to truly panic the comforting presence of her mistress trotting up beside her drew her attention.

"Sunset. Sunset look at me. He's alright. He's just really tired from his trip from the other world."

"B-But-" The orange unicorn’s reply was interrupted by a small plume of smoke flying into her face as Ray snorted quietly in his sleep.

"From what you told me, Ray was a gecko in the other world. His body is probably exhausted from not just changing species but also growing many times larger than he was before. Not to mention the adjusting Equestrian magic entering his system. He just needs a little rest and he’ll be fine." Twilight reassured her pet, as she gently rubbed her orange mane.

As Sunset relaxed, Spike picked up the yellow dragon and moved towards the door, then paused and looked towards his own mother. "I'll let him sleep in my bed while he gets over this. I can share my room with him can’t I mom?"

"If he wants to, you may." Twilight confirmed, only turning her head slightly to nod at the dragon’s thanks, most of her attention focused on her still nervous pet.

"Ray will be just fine, Sunset. He just needs to rest for a while." Twilight murmured gently to the orange mare.

Wiping a few tears off her muzzle, Sunset nodded. "I understand. Thank You, Mistress. Thank you for calming down and thank you for adopting Ray into our family. I hadn't realized just how much he meant to me until he called me Mommy."

After a few more minutes of petting, her mistress helped Sunset clamber back onto her hooves. As she rose, she paused for a moment to rest the top of her head submissively on her Mistress's chest. As soon as she was standing upright, she felt her Mistress lay her muzzle gently on top of her head. The action truly drove her difference in their size and she started to purr happily. She loved how much taller Mistress was, there was just something so reassuring about looking up at the large mare and knowing she belonged to her.

Twilight smiled down at her newest pet. "Now come with me, Sunset. Trixie, Starlight, I plan on having only Sunset please me for today as I want to celebrate her becoming my pet. You two may play with each other, however."

Trixie nodded even as she saw her sister pet do the same. They’d both predicted that their Mistress would want to play with their new sister alone for the first day and while she wasn’t exactly looking forward to a night spent without her Mistress, she was happy for her newest sister. Bowing to her Mistress she followed the other mares out, then trotted after Starlight, glancing back only once to see Twilight leading Sunset into her bedroom.

Sunset was laid in a submissive position before her Mistress on the massive bed of her goddess's personal chambers. Twilight sat on her haunches with her hind-legs spread, her cock splayed out in all of it's ginormous glory. Sunset licked her lips in eager anticipation, having a taste of her Mistress's divine essence earlier in the day and craved it so much more now. Twilight reached her hind-hoof to the orange mare's muzzle and she instantly started to nuzzle it. Twilight's already insane size seemed to grow a bit more in her domination of the orange mare. Sunset had to do her absolute best to keep herself from cumming from the sheer pleasure she was brought in submitting to her Mistress.

"Mistress, may I lick your hooves?" Sunset asked. Twilight's pleased grin only grew with her pet's words. She gave her permission with a nod. Sunset immediately set about performing her new task. No, she shouldn't think of anything involving her Mistress as a mere task or a chore. Sunset immediately set about performing the honor she was bestowed upon by her Mistress. Her mission simple; please her Goddess without fail. She switched between each of her Mistress's hooves every few minutes, Never once moving much from her submissive position. Her right hoof started to move down towards her pussy, but the frown on Mistress's muzzled made it freeze in it's tracks. Her smile returned and Sunset doubled her efforts in order to keep her Mistress happy and pleased.

"You may move to my cock now, pet." Twilight told the orange mare, who was all to eager to obey the command from her Mistress. She placed her head underneath the humongous cock and relished in the scent of her owner's heady musk. She moved to place her Mistress's cock in her mouth, once she got the tip inside, she felt the Alicorn's hoof on the back of her poll. She let herself be pushed along the shaft of the cock by her Mistress, sucking to the best of her abilities the whole time. Her heart swelled with joy and pride when she heard her Mistress moan in pleasure. Twilight pressed her pet's muzzle against her pubic mound and let out another small moan of content.

"Mmm. Good girl." Twilight praised, causing her newest pet to moan around her cock from the pleasure of the praise, happy beyond words that she was able to please her Mistress. Twilight looks down out her pet who stared back at her. The purple Alicorn's smile grew a little wider when she saw the devotion and love in her pet's eyes. She caressed the orange mare behind her left ear, causing it to twitch.

"I'm going to throat fuck you now, my pet. I want you to tap me twice on my stomach if you need to stop, alright?" Twilight told her pet.

"Yemph Misphtrph." Sunset spoke, her voice muffled, around her owner's cock. Twilight chuckled at this before beginning to throat fuck the orange mare, moaning at how Sunset clenched her throat around the cock in tandem with her thrusts for as long as she can keep up, which sadly wasn't as long as the unicorn had hoped. Twilight soon reached her insane jackhammer-esque speed and was moaning loudly in pleasure. Sunset felt her heart flutter in joy at the fact that her Mistress was pleased with her services. After a solid ten minutes of pounding away at her pet's throat, Twilight finally shot her cum down the orange mare's throat. She eagerly slurped up her treat, although not able to swallow it all. She pulled her cock out of Sunset's throat, the action causing her pet to whimper at the loss of her cock. Sunset then spots the cum she failed to swallow and licked it up like the good pet she is before cleaning her owner's cock. Something in her head telling her that this was the right thing to do. Once she was finished, she looked up at her Mistress, waiting for more instruction.

"You are doing very good, my pet." Twilight informed her orange pet, who shuddered in happiness at her Mistress's praise. Twilight motioned for her pet to move closer to her. Sunset obeyed her Mistress and happily nestled herself in her Mistress's embrace. Twilight grabs Sunset by her rump and eases her onto her cock. Sunset moaned in pleasure as she was wonderfully filled by Alicorn cock. She stared at her owner's muzzle and as if one cue, Twilight pulled her into a kiss. She felt Sunset clenched deliciously around her cock as she pushed herself all the way in to her, hitting all of the orange mare's special spots.

"Mmm, so wonderfully tight." Twilight moaned.

"Aahhn! T-Thank you, Mistress." Sunset replied with her own moans over pleasure. Twilight then began to thrust once again with her insane pace.

"ThAAAHnK you, f-foAAhn-or l-le-letting me p-please you M-AAAhn-Mistress." Sunset eventually got out.

"Of course, my pet." Twilight responded, as composed as ever. The purple Alicorn only let out small moans and sighs of pleasure during her escapades with her pets, while said pets moan at the top of their lungs. Sunset was no different and that was just perfect for the pair of mares. After around twenty minutes of constant thrusts, Sunset felt her Mistress's cock twitch as she came inside of her. She couldn't stop herself from cumming with her as it felt so good to be filled with her owner's cum. After she came down from her pleasure high, she realized she came without her Mistress's permission. As fear gripped her heart she looked up at her Mistress expecting to see a look of disappointment on her muzzle, only to be filled with confusion and hope as there wasn't a speck of disappointment on her Mistress's perfect body.

"It's okay my pet, you've been a good girl so far and since this is your first time with me, I was expecting you to be overtaken by pleasure." Twilight reassured whilst affectionately caressing her pet's head.

"Thank you, Mistress for being so merciful. I promise to never go out of line again." Sunset said with determination as she nuzzled her Mistress before yawning.

"Would you like to take a nap in my embrace, pet?" Twilight asked, receiving a nod in response. Twilight held her pet as she leaned down into the bed, keeping her cock inside of the orange mare. Sunset snuggled into her Mistress with a content smile on her face as she felt the cock inside of her shift about.

"Sweet dreams, my pet."

"Sweet dreams, Mistress."

Twilight felt her ears twitch as her eyes fluttered open some hours later. A noise had pulled her from sleep;s embrace, but it had been a soft, nonthreatening thing so she simply looked down at the sleeping form of her pet. Leaning down, she softly kissed Sunset's forehead, causing the mare to sigh contentedly in her sleep and press herself closer to her.

"Mistress?"

The quiet voice pulled her attention away from her sleeping pet she looked over to the door. Both of her other pets stood there, faces downcast. Putting her hoof to her muzzle she pointed to the sleeping form of Sunset. As her pets nodded in understanding she focused on their mental link.

"What's wrong, girls?" Twilight thought in concern, her pets looked on the verge of tears.

"M-Mistress we came without your permission while playing with each other." Trixie confessed.

"We're sorry! Please don't hate us!" Starlight continued.

She could feel their desperate desire to throw themselves at her hooves and beg her forgiveness, but the fear they might have truly disappointed her kept them rooted to the spot.

"Oh you two, come here."

Her pets were quick to obey and climbed into the bed, stopping in front of their Mistress and while being careful not to wake their sister.

"I am so proud of both of you, my pets."

Her thoughts caused both pets to shoot up in shock. While the action caused Sunset to shift, they were glad to see it didn’t wake the sleeping mare.

"Y-You are?!"

Twilight nodded, smiling at her pets. "You both came to tell me about how you made a mistake when you could have easily pretended that it never happened. You've proved your loyalty to me yet again by owning up to your errors. I forgive you."

Both pets launched themselves at her, intent on wrapping her in a hug. Having expected this, she braced herself and caught both her suddenly happy pets in a wing hug, softening the impact just enough that her sleeping pet didn’t wake.

"MISTRESS!! You're so great to us! Thank you for taking us in!"

Trixie quickly pushed forward, nuzzling into her Mistress's neck. "My life was horrible before you took me in Mistress! I can never thank you enough!"

Starlight nodded in agreement with sister.

"I love all of you, my pets. No matter what happens, that will never change. But, I do expect you two to not break the rules again. I really don't want to punish any of you."

Feeling both her conscious pets nod in obedience, she wrapped her wing around all her pets before settling back down to sleep some more.

Twilight squinted as the morning sunlight stabbed at her eyes. Her pained squint soon turned to a contented grin as she felt her pets cuddled up to her side, their newest sister still filled with her cock. She spent a minute simply looking at her pets and thinking about just how much she loved them all, then stretched and let out a yawned. Her movement jostled her pets awake and all three looked up at her, a matching love in their eyes.

"Good morning, Mistress."

All three spoke in unison and she smiled down at them lovingly. "Good morning, my pets."

Trixie and Starlight although reluctant to leave her embrace, moved aside as she started to get up. Sunset on the other hoof let out a whimper of sadness as the motion began to empty the orange mare. After how Trixie and Starlight had reacted the first time she’d pulled out of them, she’d expected the reaction and started caressing her pet's mane soothingly before the whimper had even properly started, whispering gentle words into her pet’s ear. Even with all the comfort she could offer Sunset was practically bawling once she’d pulled out of her completely. The orange mare clung to her desperately as she began to beg.

"Mistress -hic- please! I feel so empty... I hate it! Please Mistress, put it back! This emptiness is horrible!!"

As Sunset wept into her Mistress’s fur, Twilight continued to caress her pet's mane, leaning down to kiss her forehead.

"I'm sorry for this, Sunset. I love you very much and I assure you that I will fill you later, but we have to get up now."

Even as she spoke, she didn’t stop caressing her distraught pet. Sunset's sobbing calmed some and she nodded in acceptance, but she still clung to her Mistress. After a few more minutes Sunset seemed to have calmed down, but Twilight could tell she was still felt sad and horribly empty. Only once she was sure her pet was truly calm did she get out of bed. Sunset quickly followed her out of bed, only to be immediately tackled by Trixie and Starlight.

"It's okay, Sunset. This is a perfectly normal feeling for all of us. We all hate being filled with such emptiness after being blessed with Mistress's cock. I'm sad to say that the feeling doesn't go away." Trixie told the orange mare as Starlight nodded in agreement.

Twilight wrapped her wings around the three mares and pulled them close to her. "I could try to find a way to make it go away if you three want."

Her eyes widened as Trixie shook her head.

"We are incredibly grateful for your offer Mistress, but the empty feeling, while horrible, is a great reminder to us that we belong to you in every way. We love you, Mistress and this emptiness constantly reminds us that we are yours and that you love us."

As Sunset and Starlight nodded in agreement, Twilight wrapped herself around her pets even more thoroughly.

"I love you all so much, my lovely, lovely pets."

The huge smile on her face only widened as her pets started nuzzle her happily. She spent the next few moments simply enjoying the lovely embrace. A scream from the direction of Spike’s room shattered the tender moment and even has her head whipped up the noise was followed by a loud thump and by a familiar voice shouting in anger.

Author's Notes:

Zecora is like, really hard to write. It took me hours, HOURS I TELL YOU, to think of her rhymes and they STILL aren't very good. Anyways I hope you all enjoyed this chapter! A huge thanks to rooks_fanfiction for beta reading and editing it as always. Stay tuned for the next chapter

Edit: This is the raw version of chapter fourteen, I will update it when I get sent the edited version

Edit: MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMONTHS LATER!

THE EDITED VERSION IS HERE FINALLY!
also does replacing the * with - make it less jarring?