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Ring eyed Shinobi

by Seeker Of Knowledge

Chapter 1: Prologue: Worlds Overlap

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Author's Notes:

I’m never going to fix the formatting errors that the earlier chapters have, I think of it as a reminder that I didn’t start off as good as I managed to get

(Hidden Sand Village)

(Two teenagers are having a no holds barred sparring match, both of which hold significant power)

Fire style: Phoenix flower jutsu!”, yelled the larger combatant, a tall fair skinned boy with a blue and white top missing a sleeve and baggy pants.

Well that’s not good, Earth style: Mud wall jutsu!”, said the smaller combatant. A wall of mud and stone erupted from the ground and defended its caster from the barrage of fire.

“Geez Kotetsu, it’s almost like you want to kill me sometimes.” said the shorter boy,

“Well maybe you should get serious instead of waiting for a ‘right moment’.” the one known as Kotetsu responded.

“Well if you want to be serious should we try the eyes today?”, the shorter one replied.

“If we do that Zeko you better not try and cheat with Samehada”, Kotetsu spat.

“Just because I can drain your chakra doesn’t mean it’s all I wanna do, I just wanted to see if I have more control over mine. It isn’t fair that I got something so strong but can barely use it without getting exhausted”, Zeko whined.

“Fine we’ll see what happens but if you send yourself to the moon don’t expect me to bring you back... or anyone for that matter.” Kotetsu said as he shut his eyes, Zeko did the same and when they both opened them they had changed. Kotetsu’s left eye was now red with a black spiral within. “Mangekyo Sharingan”. Zeko has changed his right eye to one of a purplish blue.

“Alright Rinnegan lets see if I can do better.” The two fighters stood in silence and then lunges at each other clashing with their blades.

“You know Zeko I could always just use Kamui again and see if you get out, it helped last time.” Zeko dropped his Samehada and lunged over it to axe kick Kotetsu in the side, “Agh, damnit.” Kotetsu cried.

“Don’t say stupid things and expect no repercussions” Zeko said calmly, “Samehada, back to me.”, the living blade rustles then propels to its masters hand.

“You know Zeko I hate that sword so much, the thing shouldn’t be able to just come back. But I said I’d do something so here goes... Kamui!” Kotetsu said before his eye flashed a deep red and a portal appeared next to his blade.

“NO, I hate going in there you bastard!”, Zeko’s cries were useless as the portal had warped and taken him and his blade within it.

“Well he should be back in a couple hours at most, I wonder what my mom made for dinner.” Kotetsu said to himself walking off.

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(Ponyville Library)

“I should be able to make a gateway to Canterlot after this spell is done.”, the librarian mare thought to herself,

“Uh, Twilight...a-are you sure this spell is safe?” Spike the Drake asked from behind a basket and pillow wall.

“Well I’m 95 percent sure it won’t blow anything up... at least not anything important.” Twilight answered sheepishly while channeling the spell through her hands.

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(Kamui Dimension)

“I may need to find new friends if this is what my best one is willing to do to me.”the sand ninja complained, “Maybe if I channel my chakra to the Rinnegan and try and almighty push I can get out quicker.”, Zeko then gathered his energy and stuck his hands in front of himself to attempt escape. “Ok here goes, Almighty Push!” A chakra infused wave pushed away from Zeko and began to make a small tear in the dimension. “Well it’s a start”, the teen thought. Suddenly the tear began to grow and swirl a violet purple. “That’s kinda weird, it never usually turned purple, but then again this isn’t even the true Kamui realm, Kotetsu just copied it so there’s no rules.” Zeko said while picking up Samehada and walking to the portal, but the portal becomes unstable and starts pulling Zeko to it. “Woah, wait this definitely isn’t righ-.” Zeko was cut off as Samehada swallowed him as it sensed there was danger and the two were sucked into the portal before it closed, leaving an empty realm.

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(Ponyville: Outside of Sugarcube Corner)


Pinkie Pie bounced out of Sugarcube Corner to bring cupcakes to her best friend Rainbow Dash. “I can’t wait to have some delicious cupcakes with Rain-.” Pinkie stops abruptly as her body begins to shake violently. “ Uh oh that’s never happened, what should I call it? Ooh I know, EVERYONE, DOOZY.” After hearing this the townspeople rush into their homes knowing that a Pinkie prediction that they’ve never heard could be dangerous.

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(Ponyville Library)


“Well that didn’t go as I expected”, looking around the library Twilight saw that the worst was the scorch mark on the floor, “Spike are you ok?”. There was rustling under a pile of books and a basket pops out with a drake underneath.

“Yeah, I’m fine... I think.” Twilight sighed in relief knowing her assistant was ok. “Well we should start cleaning up, I’ll pick up the-“.

“EVERYONE, DOOZY!” She was cut off by Pinkie Pie screaming and teleported to Sugarcube Corner to find the streets empty of Everypony excepts Pinkie.
“Pinkie what happened out here?”

“IdontknowiwasgoingtobringRainbowsomecupcakesandallofasuddenijuststartedtoshakeandthatneverhappenedbeforesoIcalleditaDoozyandwarnedeveryponybeforethedisastercould-“ Pinkie got interrupted by the sky opening in a purple hole and dropping a large dark object into the Everfree.

“What was that thing!?” Twilight frantically said trying to stay calm.

“I think that’s the doozy Twilight.”.

“Ok then, Pinkie go find Fluttershy, and Applejack, I’ll get Rarity and Rainbow Dash then I’ll write to Princess Celestia.”

“Okie dokie lokie.” Was Pinkie’s response before zooming off towards sweet apple acres.

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(Everfree Forest)

After hitting what he thought was the ground Samehada decided to let Zeko out. “Man that hurt my back so much, so where am I? This looks like the hidden Leaf.” I walked around for a bit and came across a river. ”A river, perfect time to test one of my favorite Jutsu”

“Water Style: Shark Bomb.” he said and quickly a large shark made of water erupted from the river surface. “So my chakra isn’t depleted yet, here I thought I’d have to rest for a week before I could break Kotetsu’s arm.” the shinobi started walking downstream to find the village and come to a clearing where he sensed a presence stronger than the other wildlife behind him “Not bad getting this close to a person with a Rinnegan.” he said before turning around and extending a hand, “Almighty push!” the creature stalking him was one he’d never seen but it did look impressive, a large lion with wings. “Well damn are you some new species?” his only response was a roar to the face. ”Well if it’s even remotely new I can’t kill it, I’ll just incapacitate it and report it to the Hokage”I thought before jumping back to avoid a slash from its large claws. He decided to drop Samehada as to not risk killing the lion. “Ok then after you.” Almost as if it understood the beast charged but a swift roundhouse to the forehead stopped it there. Zeko jumped back to avoid a crushing bite. “Well that rattled you I can tell, but how tough are you really?” Zeko said trying to agitate the beast, prompting another swipe of its claws, faster than Zeko expected causing him to be thrown back by the shockwave.

“Alright tougher than I thought, but not good enough.” The teen said before rushing back and dodging another swipe for his head.

“Sorry big guy but I need to end this and find the village, almighty push.” He said causing winds to push the lion into a tree headfirst and knock it unconscious, and brought the tree down with it.“Alright lets get to the village and let them know about this... thing.” The shinobi said before picking up his blade and walking off...

Next Chapter: Arc 1 Chapter 1: An unusual being in an unusual forest Estimated time remaining: 11 Hours, 14 Minutes
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