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Diclonius Queen of Equestria

by Garnet Naturea

Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Tokens and Lesson Zero (Edited)

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It was the next day that the princess held a large celebration and award ceremony for the main six and I for our efforts against Discord. We all had dresses made by Rarity for the occasion and the speech from the princess was pretty much the same but with me and Sora in it as well. Celestia lit up her horn and showed a new stain glass window. It showed the girls at the bottom sending the rainbow beam at Discord, who had several Swordfish and sharp candy canes around him as he faced me and the image had several translucent arms behind me, showing my Vectors.

The crowd cheered for us, Sora taking over and having a victorious smile on her face. After going outside I summoned Selene and Topaz who used Shadow Ball and Fairy Wind to cause their own fireworks. The ponies were amazed by the Pokémon’s attack made fireworks. Afterwards there was a big party for all of us, the nobles even accepting Selene and Topaz into the party.

The next day, Celestia had sent a few flying carriages to send us back to Ponyville. We had decided that me and my team would live with Twilight so that we could learn what we can about Equestria and she can learn what she can from us about the Dicloni and Pokemon.

Twilight had been giving me and the girls small pop quizzes on Equestria every now and then and has even been testing Selene and Topaz’s abilities. We learned that Selene’s Shadow Ball is about on par with one of Twilight mid strength kinetic blasts, and that Topaz had a bite force of almost a ton with her other mouth.

When I am not with Twilight and my Pokemon, me and Sora are walking around town, introducing ourselves to some of the local populace. Like Mayor Mare, she was really nice. Kinda reminded me of Adam’s grandma. Also Cheerilee, and the Spa twins during a trip with Rarity. So far, things have been pretty good for us here in Equestria.

Right now I am just wandering around town with Selene on my shoulder and Topaz by my side. After we arrived back in town we had commissioned Rarity to make some more clothes for us, mainly clothes Nyu wore in Elfen Lied. Right now I am in the outfit Yuka gave Nyu. A red dress with yellow frilled skirt reaching my knees and the red being held by frilly white straps, a pale pink t-shirt underneath and purple boots. I decided to forgo the green hat as there is no need for me to hide my horns here in Equestria.


(Who knew the outfits for Nyu were so hard to find on google)

We were walking around on our way to see the girls for a picnic, and for the life of us, me and Sora could not remember just what this reminded us of.

”Are you sure you’ve seen this somewhere before?” Selene asks us. I continue to think but I cannot remember. I groan out loud.

“This is going to be bugging me all day if we can’t figure it out. What is reminding me of today?” I ask myself and Sora.

As we are walking around, Topaz looks a bit past us to a tree and sees what looks like a tooth. Curious she walks over and picks it up, seeing it is a large (for her) fang.

“Topaz? What is it?” I say, noticing she had wandered off somewhat.

”I am not sure. It looks a bit like a Feraligatr tooth but not serrated. Do you recognize it?” she asks, handing me the tooth. Looking closer it is almost as big as my hand in length and rather smooth. Suddenly we get a headache and hear a voice.

I am Loki, Master of Chaos and Defender of Balance. If you fight for Balance, for Freedom, and for Good, know that I will come to your aid! But know this...if you fight for imbalance or for the forces of evil....be aware that there are many fates worse then Death!

I yelp and jump back, dropping the tooth.

‘Sora, please tell me you heard that!’ I think to her.

”Kinda hard to miss that! But guessing from the expressions on Topaz and Selene’s faces, it was some kind of telepathic message.” she says back an I see the two Pokemon looking at me with concern and worry.

“Ok, this is going to sound crazy, but it seemed this tooth had some sort of encoded telepathic message attached to it.” I tell them, Topaz tilting her head to the side.

”But if that is the case, why didn’t the message play for me?” she asks. I pick the tooth back up and the message doesn’t go off again.

“I am not sure but I think we should test this out. Hang on.” I tell them before wrapping a Vector around each and then launching us into the air. The girls do as I say and hold on to their respective Vectors for dear life as I bound us out of town and towards the castle of the two sisters. If this thing is dangerous, I want it to activated as far away from town as possible.

Getting the the ruins of the old castle I put Selene and Topaz down, quickly getting hit by a Tackle from the Zorua and an Astonish from the Mawile. The look to me with annoyed and shaken expressions. I take out the tooth and think for a moment.

‘Any ideas how to use it?’ I question Sorano, hearing her hum in thought as well.

”Maybe if we focus our ‘energy’ into the tooth it would do something?’ Sora suggests. I think for a moment on how to do this, then close my eyes and focus solely on the fang in my hand.

‘Loki if you here me, please come forth.’

Suddenly the tooth begins to glow and go out of my hand before bursting into light. Me and the others have to cover our eyes. Once our sight comes back we look to the room before us and see three new beings have appeared. One is a familiar unicorn with head of red and yellow hair and....wings? Another looks just like a certain spirit of hatred and ice but bigger, and the last is in a black cloak, but I can see a eagle talon, lions paw and familiar looking tail.

“Discord!” I yell after seeing the last one and jump back summoning a few Vectors around me. The girls quickly gather next to me and gets ready for a fight. The windego sees us and....barks?

“What is it boy?” The girl I can tell is Sunset Shimmer asks. She sees me and my Pokemon and gets a confused expression.

“Oh man. That was a doozy. Been a while since we were summoned.” He muttered to himself. Getting up, I can see he looks exactly like Discord but somehow looking a little younger and obviously the cloak over his mismatched body. Sunset looks to him and just shrugs while the windego goes up to him like a dog would its master.

He looks around and spots us, before sighing after seeing us all tensed and ready for a fight. “Let me guess, you just had a run in with Discord?” He asks in exasperation. I just nod.

“Of course they did! It is never easy for us is it?” I blink in shock as a transparent Discord pops in next to this other one.

“Because where is the fun in that?” An astral form of a Twilight said. I could tell just looking at her, this one is not very nice.

“Well, time for introductions! I am Loki, Master of Chaos, God of Balance and Void Dweller. This is my companion Sunset Shimmer and pet/proxy Freiza the Windego Dragon. ” He says, clapping his hands and suddenly plastering a smiling face on his face. I raise a brow in confusion.

“My name is Natali Basatin, ‘Queen’ of the Dicloni and up and coming Pokemon trainer. These two are Selene the Zorua and Topaz the Mawile.” I say introducing us all. He and the projections look to us all before starring at me in our eyes.

“And who is the other one?” He asks. My eyes widen as he sees what most cannot. Sora takes control and gets defensive.

”My name is Sorano. Little sister to Natali and former mental defence mechanism.” she says. Sunset does a double take and Loki leans back a bit and smile at us.

“I see. In spite of the fact you two share a body, and you are both very different, you are family.” He says to us and suddenly a light bulb goes off above his head, literally. Before we can react he shoots a rainbow and grey blast at me. It feels weird, like I am getting a rough message before it stops. We pant from the surprise and adrenaline, Selene and Topaz checking us over.

“Loki! What the buck!?” Sunset yells at him.

“What was that?” Sorano and I say together. Sunset looks to us and her eyes widen. I raise a brow at her. “What?” She just motions for me to look next to me. Looking left, I am greeted by a pair of dull rose eyes and pink hair. I am staring at a transparent Lucy.

”What the what?” Sora says, starring back at me. We just stay there then turn to this new draconequus.

“I figure you two must be a little sick of having to switch control whenever the other wants to talk.” He says, summoning a few chairs for us and a table and tea set ala Bill Cipher. I carefully sit in the chair, Sora, Selene and Topaz following suit.

“Well perhaps we should begin with some explanations. I can tell just looking at you, I am the first Displacer you have met aren’t I?” He asks.

“Displaced? As in dimensionally misplaced?” I ask, taking a sip of my tea and finding it is strawberry tea for me.

“Oh! So you have heard of us?”

“Not exactly. My friend, Adam, is a huge internet nerd so he has heard about all sorts of things online. He told me about something about a trio of brothers being sent to another world, but at that point I stopped listening as I was driving him to Judo practice.” I explain.

He hums in thought and nods. “I see. Well to explain, you had a run in with The Merchant, didn’t you?” I nod, pointing to my horns and then to Topaz mega stone. “Well, your friend is right. Every one of us had a run in with him and then were sent to alternate versions of Equestria.” He closes his eyes and his chest glows before what looks like a darker version of the Elements of Harmony that circle slowly around him.

“I was dressed as Discord and bought these little beauties; the Elements of Disharmony. After that I appeared in my Equestria, chose to keep the balance, made my daughter Nyx out of the remnants of Nightmare Moons magic, saved the Crystal Empire and ended up marrying my Twi after dying from Tirek.” He gains a melancholy expression. “Unfortunately, I was forced to leave my timeline to fight an evil version of Twilight that was hell bet on destroying every alternate version of me. We fought with all we both had and in the end I was sent to the other side of the multiverse.” The astral Twilight flinches and looks down in shame. “I have been trying to get home to my wife and daughter ever since.”

“I am actually the same Sunset as from his universe and I ended up tagging along after some other Void Dweller named Eris took Twilight after she turned into a dark form named Midnight at the friendship games. We are both looking for them and to see if we can get him home.” Sunset adds, idley petting Frieza.

Me and the girls look to them in pity. Selene gets up and nuzzles the draconequus cheek in comfort while Topaz gets up and hugs Sunset. They just smile at the attempts of comfort.

“I am sorry to hear that Loki and Sunset. I can’t imagine how that must have been like.” I say to them. “I was separated from my friends Adam and Lex as we each bought something. Those two were more like an older sister and little brother than friends. I have been trying to not think about it but I am worried about them.”

“Well, we can’t really help that, but if we end up seeing them during my world hopping, I’ll be sure to tell them that you miss them. If you want, it has been a while since I have been summoned by another Displacer so how about you tell me what you have been up to as of late.” He says, turning his cloud into a marshmallow recliner and summoning some bags of popcorn, one each of them.

I smile to them and look to the astral Sorano. Me and Sora begin to tell our tale, from buying my horns, fighting the Timberwolves and fighting Discord. Loki was very interested by the mention of the rings in Discord’s eyes. The girls are listening intently about what happened before they showed up, before they take their turns and tell Loki, Sunset and each other about how they ended up here.

Afterwards the astral forms of Discord and Twilight ask about Sorano and they are all shocked to learn of her creation.

“I must say, for your short stay here so far, you have made a very big impact. Being able to help the elements get back together and even having the stain glass depict you as well...color me impressed.” He says with a smile.

“I am really surprised about how you two ended up being sisters. Never would have seen that coming.” Sunset says with a smile. The girls get up from their chairs and stretch from their stiff positions.

”This has been really interesting! Who knew there were so many multiple versions of the same world!” Selene says.

”You said it! I wonder, did The Merchant take something from the Garchomps hoard? Was he the one who let me come here from finding my mega stone?” Topaz questions with a laugh. Me and others just smile at the two as they go back and forth.

”Anyways, we should be getting back to town so we can get to the picnic and...Oh my Celestia that’s it!” Sora says in realization. The we all look to her questioningly.

“What? What is it?” I ask Sora.

“The want-it-need-it spell! That is what has been in the back of our mind! Twilight hasn’t sent a friendship lesson to Celestia for a week! It’s ‘Lesson Zero’ day!” she says in panic. Immediately both me, Loki and Discord realize what is going on.

“Selene, Topaz, I need to keep you two in your pokeballs for a while. This is serious.” I tell them. The two Pokemon look to each other then nod. I quickly return them and look to Loki.

“Loki, can you get us to town?” I ask him, getting a serious nod and a snap of the talons. We immediately teleport to the edge of town, in the back of Fluttershy’s cottage, startling some of her animals. Before I can say anything, Loki begins to glow and turns to a brown furred and white maned unicorn stallion with a pair of jeans and his cloak. Sunset also returns to looking like a unicorn but anthro with her clothes still on and Frieza turns to what looks like a German Shepherd. I raise a brow.

“My pony-sona Best Seller. I showed up in my Equestria just as Discord was released so I needed a disguise. Plus I don’t think a random Alicorn and Windego is very subtle.” He explains quickly. Our group quickly runs into town to find the purple unicorn. We look for a few minutes and find her with crazy eyes, her hair frayed and looking around quickly.

“Twilight!” I call out to her as we run up to her. She looks to us with her mad smile, but gains a confused expression when she sees Loki/ Best Seller, Sunset and Frieza. She shakes it off and looks to us with her mad look and twitch eye.

“Ah! Nat and Sora! Perfect timing, do you have something you need? Sisterly banter? New friend drama? Worrying about Lex and Adam?” She asks quickly. I look to Loki with a worried expression and he shakes his head and sighs.

“She’s gone.” He says. I just nod and sigh. Before she can react I hit her in the back of the head with a Vector, knocking her out. I catch her from falling and put her over my shoulder before walking back to the library. Some of the townsfolk see us and come to check on her. Loki waves them off by saying Twilight was having a bit of a panic attack. They nod and Big Mac, who came by to check on her, took her off my shoulder and carried her bridle style, Sunset saying that she didn’t expect Twilight to be carried like that for a few years. We all smile at this little joke.

The nine of us arrive to the library with Loki keeping the door open as Big Mac carries Twilight up to her bedroom. He leaves and says he will come back with some of ‘Granny’s calming applesauce’. That is a thing?

Spike runs in to the library in a panic.

“Nat! The flower trio told me Twilight was having a panic attack! Where is she?” He asks worried. I sigh and rub the drakes frill on her head.

“Relax Spike. I knocked her out before she could do anything overboard. But I need you to send a letter to the princess and the girls.” I tell her.

“But I can’t send letters to others aside from the princesses yet. I don’t have the best contol over my magical fire yet.” He says. Before I can respond Loki steps up with a smile.

“No worries little drake. I can take care of that part.” He says, pointing to his horn. I smile to the disguised unicorn.

“Thanks Best Seller. I owe you.” He smile to me and Spike grabs six scrolls, one for him to write in, one for Loki to write in and the rest levitating around Loki via his magic.

Dear Princess Celestia/RD/AJ/Pinkie/Fluttershy/Rarity,

I have been forced to interject in a very serious problem. Today Twilight was going through a major panic attack for not being able to send a friendship lesson every week. She went to her friends/you guys to ask for help and they/you shrugged her off.

I met a pony by the name of Best Seller and his friend, who said he used some tarot cards and discovered that Twilight would be using a very dangerous spell to cause problems so she could fix it and then send a letter to you/the princess. This would end badly so I was forced to knock her out and keep her and the town safe.

I am very disappointed in the girls/you girls and would like for you to come to Twilight’s house so I can talk to you all.

Sincerely yours,
Natali Basatin.

The boys nod and Spike send his letter via his fire while Loki teleports his letters to the girls. They both nod and Spike goes to get some tea ready while Loki just lounges on the couch and Sunset looks through the library for a good book. I walk up the stairs to check on Twilight. I enter her room and find her beginning to stir from her forced nap. I walk up and crouch next to her.

“Urrg...what happened?” She groans.

“I had to knock you out before you did something stupid and dangerous in your panic induced hysteria.” I say to her. She quickly looks to the side and sees me. She slowly sits up and rubs her head.

“You...knocked me out?”

“A firm hit to the back of the head will knock out almost everyone.” I tell her before sitting by the side of her bed. “Twilight. Are you ok?” I ask with worry. Unnoticed to us a certain astral unicorn was watching.

“Umm, maybe?” She says unsure. She instantly sits up with her panicked face. “Oh no! I need to get out there and find a problem to solve!” She moves to get up only to find she can’t. I look to her with sadness, my vector holding her spine and keeping her nerves to her limbs frozen.

“Twilight, you need to stop.” I tell her, pushing her back into her bed. She still looks panicked. “Twilight, you need to realize that this is stupid. You will not get in trouble for not sending a report every week. You will get in trouble for not taking care of yourself.” I tell her compassionately. She looks to me with sadness, a few tears in her eyes. I go down to her and giver her a hug, releasing my Vector, letting her hug back.

“I-I’m sorry. I j-just don’t want to disappoint the princess. If I do then who know how she will react!” She says, crying a bit. The astral unicorn looks to the side in thought. I pull back and look to her in the face.

“Do you really have that little faith in the princess?” I ask her, getting a shocked look and a rapidly shaking head. “Twilight, Celestia is kind, loving and protective. She is like a second mother to almost all her subjects. You most of all as her student. Any parent would not be disappointed for a child not completing a personal trial, they get disappointed that their child would not take care of themselves and may harm themselves and others.”

Twilight lays back and turns her head in with sadness. I hear a knocking at the door downstairs and Loki opening the door.

“Do you want to talk to the others, or do you want me to?” I ask her. She looks to me and sighs.

“Can y-you do it. I am really tired and could use a nap.” She says. I nod to her and lean up and give her a small kiss on the head like my mother would when we have a nightmare. Getting up and turning to the door, I don’t notice the blush on her face. But the astral one does.

“Oh yeah. Just letting you know, Big Mac will be stopping by later to deliver some of Granny’s calming applesauce for you.” I tell her and leave her room. Walking down the stairs I see the rest of the main six and Celestia sitting in the living room, the girls having worried expressions on their faces. They notice me and RD is the first to react and flies in my face.

“Where is Twi?!? Is she ok?!” She says quickly. I take a Vector and place her back on the couch.

“She is fine now. I talked her down. She is in her room and is going to be taking a nap so please don’t be too loud.” I say to them, the girls sighing in relief before doing a double take and tense seeing Sora appear with a serious expression.

”However, we are both very disappointed in all of you. You included Celestia.” she says to them, the girls flinching and Celestia raising a brow. We look to newcomers. ”Loki, maybe you should introduce yourself and the others first.” she says. Loki nods and he and Frieza begin to glow. The group of mares jump back and Celestia lights up her horn seeing Loki’s mismatched pieces and the feeling the rooms temperature drop a bit.

“Dis-“ “Loki.” I interrupt Celestia before she can begin as I wrap a Vector around her horn. They look to me and Loki in shock and confusion, Celestia with a bit of rage. Before she can say anything though, Sunset walks next to us and lowers her hood and spreads her wings. Everyone, especially Celestia is frozen in shock at the new Alicorn in the room.

“Mares and drake, meet Loki, Master of Chaos, God of Balance and Void Dweller and his companion Sunset Shimmer and pet Frieza. Loki was like me. He bought something from The Merchant and became a draconequus in his own version of Equestria.” I tell them calmly, the group looking to the new trio in shock. Celestia looks to me, Loki and Sunset then to AppleJack.

“She’s tellin the truth.” She says. I unwrap my Vector from her horn and walked to a cotton candy chair Loki summoned, he and Sunset taking their own. I release Selene and Topaz and send Selene to Twilight to keep an eye on her and give her the comfort of a fluffy pet.

“Sooo, long story short I am from a diffrent version of Equestria where I saw what Twilight would be doing today. Nat didn’t want that to happen so I told her what was going on and then helped her get Twi home. After that she had me and Spike send you girls the letters.” Loki explains. The girls all listening intently, Spike having brought in the tea for us.

“Also, we wanted to be at least a little discreet so we chose to take these forms.” Astral Discord says, appearing alongside astral Twilight. The gathered ponies look like they are about to have a few aneurisms from the gathered group before them.

“Ok, but how did you guys get here in the first place?” Spike asks. I answer by taking out the tooth I had with me, seeing it is the same as Loki’s singular fang.

“That my friends, is my token. Basically any displaced like me and Nat here can make something that represents us and send it into the void to be found by any number of other Displacers. Speaking of, you don’t have a token yet, do you?” Loki explains and asks. I look to him and shake my head before thinking about what my token could be.

”Why don’t you use the Aura Reader? It represent you as mine and Selene’s trainer.” Topaz suggests, sipping her tea. I look to her and shug. Taking the AR off me and Sora immediately think of a message to send.

We are the Queen Dicloni. Should you need protection of the Vectors, or that of our team, know that we will be there. However, know that should you follow the path of evil, of destruction or devastation, we will not hesitate to tear you to shreds.

After thinking my creed a small black portal appears before me and I drop my AR into it, only for it to come back a second later. A similar portal appears by Loki and a copy of my AR appears in his claws.

“Nice creed.” He says with a smirk. I just smile back to him as he and Sunset get up. “Well, it appears our work is done here. Nat if you could, take out my token and say ‘our contract is finished’ and we can get back to our journey.” I nod to him and take out the tooth.

“Good luck Loki. I hope you get home to your wife and daughter soon. And Sunset, good luck with your Twilight. Our contract is finished.” I say with a smile as a multicoloured portal appears behind them and they walks in with smiles.

Author's Notes:

Polls done!
Flaffy: 4
Luxio: 5
Helioptile: 1
Charjabug: 2
So there it is, Nat/Sora and their team are now sent into the multiverse!
The crossover was with story https://www.fimfiction.net/story/260101/chaos-is-displaced-the-tale-of-loki and its sequel https://www.fimfiction.net/story/283826/tale-of-loki-2-into-the-void by Mega SevenWays. Very much recommend a read through.

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