Off The Mark

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Mark Wells only bought an old mirror, so why did he now have hooves, wings and green fur? And where was he? Maybe this great and powerful princess could tell him?

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Mark Wells was a klutz, but even he could not imagine stumbling into a mirror that he had just bought at an antique store and ending up in a world of colorful equines, not to mention gaining hooves and wings at the same time. And whoever heard of green fur on a horse? Perhaps the great and powerful Princess that the guard was taking him to would have some answers because he sure didn't!

An alternative version of canon events with humorous twists. Written in collaboration with Airy Words.

Cover art by Mix-up and their DeviantArt account is Amalgamzaku.

Book One: Chapters 1–33
Book Two: "Further Off The Mark": Chapters 34–69
Book Three: "On The Mark": Chapters 70–100

Sex tag added as of chapter 32 but it's mostly due to talk. Actual sex takes place "off camera".

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100 Chapters:

Chapter 1 - A Stumble Too Far [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
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Chapter 2 - Right Place, Right Time [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
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Chapter 3 - It's As Easy As Falling Off A Log [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
2,961
Chapter 4 - First Impressions [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
3,342
Chapter 5 - Crash Course [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
2,252
Chapter 6 - Class is In [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
3,619
Chapter 7 - Testing Time [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
8,303
Chapter 8 - Errands [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,524
Chapter 9 - Competitions [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,189
Chapter 10 - Nothing Exceeds Like Excess [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,839
Chapter 11 - For What Ails Thee [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,610
Chapter 12 - Royal Command Performance [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
9,768
Chapter 13 - Tardy [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,267
Chapter 14 - Challenge [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
7,319
Chapter 15 - Challenges [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,014
Chapter 16 - Ominous Visions [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,673
Chapter 17 - Elemental Magic [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
9,478
Chapter 18 - Duties and Distractions [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,172
Chapter 19 - Discoveries [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,653
Chapter 20 - Games [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,556
Chapter 21 - Secrets [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,725
Chapter 22 - Centaur Crisis [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,458
Chapter 23 - Homes [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
9,534
Chapter 24 - Books [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,049
Chapter 25 - Strange Visit [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
9,700
Chapter 26 - Surprises [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
9,893
Chapter 27 - Cult of Equality [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,038
Chapter 28 - New Acquaintances [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,906
Chapter 29 - Change of Attitude [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,403
Chapter 30 - A Dark and Stormy Night [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,806
Chapter 31 - Learning About You [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,054
Chapter 32 - 'Tis The Season [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
8,838
Chapter 33 - Repercussions [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,120
Chapter 34 - New Associates [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,718
Chapter 35 - Status Change [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
7,760
Chapter 36 - Looking Back, Looking Forward [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
7,608
Chapter 37 - Time Trap [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,259
Chapter 38 - Impasse [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
8,288
Chapter 39 - Breaking Up Is Hard To Do [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
3,877
Chapter 40 - Bad Dreams [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
3,759
Chapter 41 - Positive Changes [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
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Chapter 42 - Chaos and Kinks [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,636
Chapter 43 - Extremes [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,007
Chapter 44 - Final Confrontation [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
8,663
Chapter 45 - Court Affairs [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,771
Chapter 46 - Wedding Wells [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,070
Chapter 47 - Conversations [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,013
Chapter 48 - Honeymoon Hijinks [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,374
Chapter 49 - New Alliances [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,507
Chapter 50 - Are You Being Served? [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
12,734
Chapter 51 - Secrets and Changes [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
7,637
Chapter 52 - Can Starlight Glimmer Stand The Heat? [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
2,927
Chapter 53 - Games Ponies Play [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,353
Chapter 54 - A Change For The Worse [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,218
Chapter 55 - Hidden Ally [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
9,223
Chapter 56 - Invading The Hive [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
8,531
Chapter 57 - Rewards and Revelations [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
8,032
Chapter 58 - Dragon Deal [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,529
Chapter 59 - There's Something Different About You [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,135
Chapter 60 - An Interesting Week [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
9,695
Chapter 61 - Treasure Hunt [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
12,733
Chapter 62 - Intriguing Discoveries [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
7,276
Chapter 63 - Chasing Shadows [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,832
Chapter 64 - The Light of Truth [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,330
Chapter 65 - Got the Blues [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,636
Chapter 66 - Filly Point of View [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,516
Chapter 67 - Stormed [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,771
Chapter 68 - A Clash of Lightning [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
11,559
Chapter 69 - A New Dawn [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,472
Chapter 70 - New Generation [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,798
Chapter 71 - Evolving Relationships [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
2,605
Chapter 72 - Targets and Victims [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,894
Chapter 73 - Assassin's Revenge [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,547
Chapter 74 - School Dazed [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,185
Chapter 75 - Surf And Turf [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,346
Chapter 76 - New Careers [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,589
Chapter 77 - Compromises [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
8,227
Chapter 78 - And Now For Something Completely Different [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
11,013
Chapter 79 - Hearth's Warming [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,308
Chapter 80 - Families [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
8,841
Chapter 81 - Learning Their Place [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
7,973
Chapter 82 - Crisis [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
7,356
Chapter 83 - The Greatest Showmare [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,351
Chapter 84 - Responsibilities And Repercussions [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
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Chapter 85 - Critical Developments [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,958
Chapter 86 - Crystal City Conflict [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
7,117
Chapter 87 - Catching Up [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,324
Chapter 88 - Questions and Challenges [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
7,701
Chapter 89 - Royal Command Performance #2 [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,629
Chapter 90 - Look Who's Back! [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
8,254
Chapter 91 - So Long! I Must Be Going! [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
6,823
Chapter 92 - Anyone For Tea? [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,342
Chapter 93 - Circumventing Surveillance [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
4,619
Chapter 94 - Fateful Campaign [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
12,735
Chapter 95 - After the Battle [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
10,369
Chapter 96 - Getting Back To Normal [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
5,947
Chapter 97 - Mates and Foals [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
7,215
Chapter 98 - Relationships New and Old [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
9,058
Chapter 99 - Friends And Family [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
17,753
Chapter 100 - Mark's World [Cache] Jul 30th, 2018
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