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The Humble Prince

by Lighting Ace
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A man wakes up to find he's inhabiting the body of a cartoon horse who wasn't exactly Mister Popular, judging from how shocked the locals are when he says things like 'please' and 'thank you'.
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The daily lives of the royal princesses, often times is pretty simple. Wake up, raise or lower their celestial bodies, hold court, meetings, sleep, and repeat. Oh, and dealing with their infuriating nephew! Overall, things aren't all that easy for them but it's manageable and mundane.

But when an innocent wish came true, both sisters are now facing a new Blueblood. One that can be considered better, yet for some reason, this version seems to have forgotten how magic works and keeps looking at the world like a newborn baby.

So what happens now? Did their wish actually come true? Is it some sort of act? Has he been replaced by a changeling? And what does this new Blueblood mean for Equestria?

Only one thing is for sure, shenanigans will appear and a lot of ponies are about to spit their coffee. Look out Equestria! There is a new Blueblood on the loose, and this one might actually be worthy of the title 'Prince'.

The 'Romance' tag is for events that happen later on the chapters

Commission by: https://www.deviantart.com/estefanoida/art/Masked-Man-Rotation-781069129

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Link: https://ficbook.net/readfic/8253964
By: Mariness

I made this out of curiosity and intrigue, so there is no need to take too seriously. This takes place during season 8 before Spike got his wings.

Rated ‘Teen’ for language, mild violence, and graphic depiction of cuddling. Ratings could change at any moment depending on how the story progresses.

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Slice of Life
Mystery
Violence

539,826 words: Estimated 2 Days, 8 Hours to read: [Cache]

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134 Chapters:

  1. Hellish Monday (Edited by CC, YB And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,792
  2. A Blue Dawn (Edited by CC, YB And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,117
  3. The First Steps (Edited By YB, CC And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,436
  4. A Spoon Of Love (Edited By CC, YB And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,453
  5. A Blue Sunset (Edited By YB, CC And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,657
  6. A Princess Wish Come True (Edited By YB, CC And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,842
  7. To Ponyville (AP, W-SS, CC, GT4 and YB) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,829
  8. Fear and Guilt (AP, YB, CC, W-SS And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,376
  9. Meet The Elements (Edited By AP, FS, W-SS, CC, GT4 And YB) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,810
  10. First Lessons (AP, FS, W-SS, CC, LS, YB And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,722
  11. Rumors and Raindrop (Mr. W, CC, YB, W-SS And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,492
  12. The Meaning Of The Star (Mr. W, CC, GT4, YB And W-SS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,560
  13. The School of Friendship (Edited By Mr. W, GT4 And CC) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,114
  14. Secret Agenda (Edited by TS, GT4 And CC) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,360
  15. Luna, The Guardian Night Princess (Edited by RB, GT4 And CC) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,362
  16. Royal White Lies (Edited By RB, GT4 And CC) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,695
  17. Nursing Mistakes (Edited By RB, GT4 And CC) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,260
  18. Midnight Chats (Edited by RB, CC, GT4 And TS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,455
  19. Meeting With An Endless (Edited By RB, GT4 And CC) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,451
  20. To Begin Again (Edited By RB, GT4 And CC) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,056
  21. New Arrangements, Old Laws (Edite By RB, CC And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,327
  22. A Tale Of Heroism (Edited By RB, CC And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,500
  23. Prices and Values (Edited By RB And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    5,365
  24. The Corrupting Greed (Edited By RB And GT4) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    8,158
  25. Report And Reconciliation (RB, GT4 And BF) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    2,976
  26. Tectonic Scale News (RB, GT4 And BF) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,801
  27. Royal Jester (SL 96) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,477
  28. A Moment Of Peace (BF) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,219
  29. The Royal 'Talk' (RB and AP) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,460
  30. Traitors Season (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,408
  31. Plans At Sunset (BS, RB and FS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,133
  32. Clash Of The Party Planners (BS and RB) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,234
  33. Royal Masquerade Act 1. (BS and RB) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,323
  34. The Waltz Of The Butterflies (BS and RB) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,976
  35. Act 2. The Five Deadly Nobles (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,189
  36. A Flickery Flame Of Fun (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,937
  37. Final Act. The Noble Fool (RB, SC and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    9,882
  38. Aftershock (BS and RB) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,733
  39. Expose Betrayal, Hidden Support (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,747
  40. An Endless Teaching (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,226
  41. The 3 Founders Of Equestria (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,608
  42. To My Dear Aunts (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,138
  43. Royal Training Session (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,246
  44. A Warrior's Best Friend (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,583
  45. Stepping Into The Unknown (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,899
  46. Blueblood, A Joke Prince Or The Real Deal? (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    5,985
  47. The Gloating Vanity (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    11,627
  48. E.D.P (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,466
  49. A Stallion Word (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,329
  50. Verdict (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,491
  51. Scarlet Revenge (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,351
  52. Royal Lineage (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    2,976
  53. Of Bites And Might (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,908
  54. The Concerns Of Friends (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,435
  55. Change of Guards (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,031
  56. Honor And Chances (RB And BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,750
  57. Tricks, Witz And Charms (RB And BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,426
  58. Our Place In The Game Board (RB And BS ) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,978
  59. Nifi Offer (RB And BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,976
  60. Daily Family Drama (RB And BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,769
  61. The A,B,C’s Of Emotions (RB And BS ) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,033
  62. Sin Of A Singer (RB, KTK And BS ) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,845
  63. Amber's Core (RB, KTK And BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    5,687
  64. Sharp Shoot Proposal (RB, KTK And BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,265
  65. Respect For The Departed (BS, RB AND KTK ) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,899
  66. Tempo's Plan (RB and BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,556
  67. Neither Blood Nor Moon... (RB, Pheti And BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,962
  68. ...Just Nightmares (Edited by BS and Pheti) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,256
  69. Journey To The Subconscious Part 1 (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,736
  70. The Six Interpretations (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,908
  71. Journey To The Subconscious Part 2 (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,108
  72. Journey to The Subconscious Part 3 (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,323
  73. The Scheming Envy (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    10,609
  74. A Chat Under The Stars (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    2,149
  75. Pinky Pie Proposal (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    2,686
  76. Luna The Teacher (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,402
  77. My Promise To The Sun (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,211
  78. A City Of Clouds (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,090
  79. Lock Memory (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,045
  80. Warning Vision (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,768
  81. Flight 101 (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    2,916
  82. Subtle Push (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,193
  83. Veterans Ideology (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,773
  84. Prelude To Atonements (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,819
  85. List Of Atonements (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,561
  86. Retrospective Chats (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,751
  87. Noble Proposal (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,381
  88. Blueblood's Reply (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,645
  89. Allegro (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,375
  90. The Empathic Arrows (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,935
  91. An Honest Earning (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,880
  92. First Invite (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,283
  93. Kind Yet Stern Approach (Edited By BS And NS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,236
  94. Second Invite (Edited By NS And BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,773
  95. Surprise Sleepover! (Edited By NS And BS ) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    2,930
  96. The Golden Mirage (Edited By NS And BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,183
  97. Dazzling Sleep Over (Edited By BS And NS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,678
  98. Glimmering Lesson (Edited By NS And BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,133
  99. Tying Undesirable Loose Ends (Edited By NS And ) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,778
  100. Meeting Of The Heirs (Edited By Brave Stomp) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,837
  101. The Society Of Heirs (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,765
  102. Six Conditions (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    5,999
  103. The Alluring Lust (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    10,906
  104. Destiny's Plea (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,525
  105. Pressing Matters (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,719
  106. Clearing The Air (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    2,892
  107. Love, Friendship, And Duties (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,110
  108. Dear Prince Blueblood (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    2,667
  109. Heir's Strike Plan (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,161
  110. Desired Condition (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,378
  111. A Penny For A Friend? (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,523
  112. Recount Of Evils (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    2,702
  113. First Team, Return, Reunion And Recaps (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,226
  114. Second Team, A Heart To Heart Over a Freezing Road (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,597
  115. Secret Pink Mission, The Land Of Slumber And Wants (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,467
  116. Third Team, Enter The Sandmen (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,148
  117. Preparation For Departure (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,131
  118. School In Shambles High (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,440
  119. Will Of Stubborn Crowns (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,295
  120. The Good, The Bad And The Bratty (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,018
  121. School Of Fish (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,223
  122. Bluebloods Strategy (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,581
  123. Angelic Solo (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,679
  124. Drowsy Encounters. (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,493
  125. Meeting The Survivors (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,343
  126. Team B Strategy (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,448
  127. Tales Of Tears and Love (Edited by BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,025
  128. Celestia Great Solo (Edited By BS) (With Special Guest!) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,499
  129. The Stubborn Sloth (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    10,363
  130. After The Sandstorm Part 1 Of 3 (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    4,092
  131. After The Sandstorm Part 2 Of 3 (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,735
  132. After The Sandstorm Part 3 Of 3 (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,428
  133. A Sharp Plan (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,733
  134. Ruins Of Alicornia (Edited By BS) [Cache] Jul 3rd, 2018
    3,035
Published Jul 3rd, 2018
Last Update Apr 30th, 2024

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