The Adventures of Smelly Rainbow Dash
Chapter 28: Enclosed Space Contest
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Done by request, kind of. I wanted to give this person one more of his favorite kinds of chapters for this story.
This chapter might have been a bit rushed, I'm not sure I like how it turned out. This will probably be my last chapter of this story. I've gotten rusty at writing these, but he doesn't mind.
Also contains a bath scene, but not described in detail, so it might not be that great.
It was Sunday, August 21st, 15 days since the bus incident. The girls were all having a picnic at Applejack's farm.
Sunset smelled bad, for she had not washed in two weeks, though she had told Flash Sentry to give her a bath today. She was wearing her pajamas just like last time, which she had peed in a few nights.
"Hey, ever wonder how long one of you could spend in an enclosed space with all of us smelly girls?" said Rainbow Dash.
Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Twilight, Wallflower, Sonata, and Aria looked at each other.
"It would certainly be interesting to see who could last the longest," said Twilight.
"And fun!" said Pinkie. "Up for a contest?"
"I most certainly am not," said Rarity.
"Come on, you smelled as bad as me once," said Rainbow Dash.
"That was then, and I was used to my own smell. Besides, Indigo smells twice as bad as I did."
"At least you'll have a nice bath to look forward to," said Fluttershy. "I know I'll want one after this. It'll be a good reason for you to get one too."
Rarity thought of how much she loved Fluttershy giving her a bath.
"All right, I'll do it."
Wallflower, Sonata, and Aria made sounds of agreement.
"Then once a winner is decided," said Rainbow Dash, "the rest of us smelly girls see who can stay in here with Indigo the longest."
Indigo chuckled. "Try not to faint."
"Now all we need is an enclosed space," said Rainbow Dash.
"I got a spare closet in my barn that should be big enough for all of us," said Applejack. "And if you gotta go to the bathroom, do it right there, or go outside and lose the contest."
They each drank a glass of water, and then entered the barn and walked into a spare closet. Indigo stood in the corner, with the smelly girls farthest from the door. Twilight closed the door, and the contest began.
"One more thing," said Rainbow Dash. "None of us who smelled bad before coming in here can leave until those who didn't have left. And if we stay in here for an hour after that, any of us who are left win."
Within a minute, the closet already started to smell bad. The non-smelly girls were disgusted, but put up with it in the hopes of winning the contest.
"I had better get a very long and relaxing bath," said Rarity.
"I'll make sure of it," said Applejack. Since the smelly girls weren't getting baths, they'd be giving the others the baths. Except Sunset, she'd be getting a bath from Flash.
About fifteen minutes into the contest, Rainbow Dash farted loudly.
PPPPRRRRRRRT!
Rainbow Dash chuckled as the fart smell was added to the stench in the room. Though Indigo still smelled worse than farts.
Pinkie Pie and Sonata laughed and wet themselves.
The sight of them peeing made Wallflower realize she needed to pee. So as usual, she just let it out in her jeans. She took great pleasure in this despite the smell in the room.
Sunset let out a loud fart that was longer and deeper-pitched than Rainbow's.
BBBBBBBRRRRRRRRRRRT!
"It's one of those times," said Sunset.
Rarity felt nauseated, but wanted her bath.
Sunny let out a higher-pitched fart. She and Sunset pressed their butts against each other, farting several times. Flash didn't mind when Sunset did this.
By now Lightning Dust was farting as well, and Indigo was peeing.
15 minutes later, Fluttershy needed to pee, and fidgeted, but she stayed in the closet. The smellier she got, the longer her bath would be, and if she wet herself, more reason for a bath!
Wallflower was sitting in her puddle, feeling nauseated from the stench. Pinkie and Sonata barely noticed it as they were laughing at Rainbow Dash, Sunset, Sunny, and Lightning Dust's farts, although their farts were becoming less frequent, and the smell was starting to be more noticeable to them.
Then Adagio farted loudly in the middle of peeing herself. She blushed a little, despite feeling no shame of wetting her pants. Wallflower took one whiff and ran out of the closet, closing the door as soon as possible.
"One down," said Rainbow Dash.
Pinkie and Sonata were used to the smell of farts, but after a while the smell was starting to get overpowering.
Sunset tried to hold it in, but five minutes after Wallflower left she released an explosive wet fart in her stinky pajamas.
Twilight, Aria, and Rarity gagged, and Rarity wet herself.
Only a few minutes later, Aria couldn't stand it anymore and ran out, coughing.
45 minutes in, the room was smelling worse than ever, although Rainbow Dash, Sunset, Sunny, and Lightning Dust had stopped farting.
"Anyone else gotta go to the bathroom?" said Applejack.
"I do," said Twilight and Sunny.
"And me," said Fluttershy quietly, holding herself.
Applejack sighed as she started to pee in her shorts. Twilight and Sunny giggled and did the same.
Only four minutes later, Fluttershy couldn't hold it anymore, and also wet herself. She couldn't help but sigh in relief, and she was looking forward to her bath.
If anything the addition of the pee smell was making it easier for Rarity, though the stench of the smelly girls and their farts was still noticeable. Especially Indigo.
An hour in, Twilight couldn't take it anymore, and walked out before she could throw up.
"This smells WAY worse than our farting contests!" Pinkie said to Sonata.
"I know," said Sonata. She took another whiff, her face turned green, and she also ran outside.
"Only Rarity, Pinkie, and Fluttershy are left," said Rainbow Dash. The first three of these girls she had become friends with.
Ten minutes went by. Rarity, Pinkie, and Fluttershy endured the smell as long as they could.
Unexpectedly, it was Pinkie who walked out of the room next, throwing up behind the hay as soon as she shut the door.
"I'm sure we're both getting a very long bath at this point," said Rarity.
Fluttershy nodded. Neither of them were sure how much longer they could be here for.
After another eight minutes, during which Sunset wet her pajamas, Applejack let out a loud, sloppy, wet fart. Fluttershy sniffed again and walked out of the room.
"Rarity wins!" said Rainbow Dash.
"I didn't expect that," said Rarity as she walked out the door after Fluttershy.
"Now for the rest of us!" said Rainbow Dash.
Applejack quickly ran out of the room, jumping at her chance to get away from the smell several times worse than her.
Six minutes later, Adagio ran out of the room, and a minute later, so did Sunny, taking deep breaths of fresh air and enjoying the only smell near her being her own.
This left Rainbow, Sunset, and Lightning Dust in the closet with Indigo. It was hardly surprising these three lasted the longest, for they smelled twice as bad as Applejack, Adagio, and Sunny.
Half an hour into the smelly girls' contest, during which Rainbow wet her shorts, Sunset couldn't stand Indigo's smell any longer and ran out.
Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust sat in the room for as long as they could, feeling competitive.
Then, 50 minutes in, Indigo let out a long, boisterous fart.
Though Lightning Dust farted a lot, this was too much for her. She ran out of the room seconds after she started peeing.
"Yeah! I win!" said Rainbow Dash.
"Congratulations," said Indigo.
Rainbow and Indigo walked out of the closet.
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Applejack set up baths in wooden tubs outside, for the non-smelly girls now smelled about as bad as Applejack did, plus all of them except Aria had wet themselves. Sunset called Flash over to give her a bath.
"I'd probably better not wash anyone," said Indigo.
"Wait," said Twilight. "Counting Sunset, there's eight of us getting a bath, and with Flash giving Sunset a bath, and Indigo not, the odds are uneven."
"I'll give Sonata a bath!" said Pinkie. "I can stand smelling like this for a few days, and then Rarity can give me a bath."
Rarity giggled.
Rarity, Fluttershy, Sunset, Twilight, Wallflower, Aria, and Sonata each stepped into a bathtub, taking off only their shoes, and in Twilight's case, her glasses, and sat down. Applejack poured a bucket of water over Rarity's hair and started to rub it with shampoo. Rainbow Dash was doing the same for Fluttershy, Adagio for Aria, Lightning Dust for Wallflower, Sunny for Twilight, Pinkie for Sonata, and of course, Flash for Sunset.
Sunset farted in the tub, much to her and Flash's amusement. Fluttershy and Rarity enjoyed their baths the most.
After a lot of scrubbing of the armpits, sides, back, butt, and feet, Rarity, Fluttershy, Sunset, Twilight, Aria, Sonata, and Wallflower were clean and smelled only of soap.
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