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The Adventures of Smelly Rainbow Dash

by The Dark Wolf

Chapter 16: Smelly Fluttershy

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Author's Notes:

I RP'd this concept with OtakuBrony47 as well (again on a different site of course), but I mostly wrote this version from scratch.

This chapter contains a bath scene.

"Guess what Rainbow Dash?" said Fluttershy.

"What?"

"I won a week's camping trip at a spot in the wilderness where so many animals are. All friendly animals, of course."

"That's great news, Fluttershy."

"Of course, I was the only one to put my name in the draw."

"Why?"

"Because, aside from a very dirty pond, there are no bodies of water or showers. There's a really small stream for the animals to drink, but it's not enough to wash in."

"That sounds like fun! Mind if I come with you? I don't have any races or games scheduled for the whole week."

"Of course you can."

...

They drove to the spot marked on the map, which was in a dirt parking lot at a dirt road about ten minutes outside of the city. Rainbow Dash packed a lot of food, water, and cider, and said she'd go back and get more if they ran out before the week was over. They kept a bottle of water each for brushing their teeth, and sanitary napkins for washing their hands before dinner. There was a garbage can in the area, which was almost empty.

"There's no outhouse," said Fluttershy. "If I go behind a bush... do you promise not to walk in on me?"

"Of course," said Rainbow Dash.

Fluttershy had a lot of fun spending time with the animals, which included rabbits, squirrels, chipmunks, raccoons, deer, and birds. There were also frogs at the dirty pond, but Fluttershy didn't want to go into the water. It looked disgusting.

Rainbow Dash spent her time exercising, and running around the pond. Sometimes Fluttershy would race Rainbow Dash for fun. Sometimes some of the animals would even join in.

Fluttershy was able to go behind the bushes without worrying about anyone seeing her.

At dinner, they made a campfire, and cooked a can of beans on a disposable aluminum plate.

Fluttershy had tried beans once and liked them, but she didn't like how gassy they made her if she was going to go near anyone else afterwards. But, here it wouldn't make a difference any more than if she was home alone, because the only other person here was Rainbow Dash, and she smelled really bad, plus she'd be farting a lot too, and Fluttershy always farted silently.

After dinner, Rainbow Dash let loose with a series of wet farts. As soon as she did, Fluttershy let out a silent fart. She almost sighed in relief, and knew there was no way Rainbow Dash could smell it over her own stench, with or without farts. Fluttershy farted silently again while Rainbow continued to chuckle at the sound of her own farts. Fluttershy loved the feeling of relief. This was a night she could have fun with her gassiness without anyone finding out.

...

Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy set up separate tents. Rainbow Dash slept in a sleeping bag in one tent, which quickly became filled with her smell. Fluttershy set up the other tent in a section of dirt near where lots of the animals slept. She didn't even bring a sleeping bag. She slept on the dirt. Occasionally some of the smaller animals would sleep next to her.

...

The first two days were very fun for Fluttershy. The third didn't start out so well.

Fluttershy awoke to the sound of thunder. She looked outside her tent. It was raining hard, and every ten seconds or less there was a flash of lightning. It was also nighttime.

The dirt she was laying on was still dry, as the tent kept the water out. But Fluttershy had to pee really badly. She sat upright and crossed her legs, fidgeting with a pained expression on her face. She really needed to go but she didn't want to go out in this thunderstorm.

There was another crash of thunder, and Fluttershy whimpered, nearly losing it right there. She stopped fidgeting and started trembling with fright, her arms bent in front of her chest up to her chin, and sitting with her knees bent upward.

Then there was a bright flash of lightning, and, at exactly the same time, the loudest clap of thunder yet. Fluttershy let out a squeak as she started to pee uncontrollably.

...

Once the storm blew over, it was morning, and the sun was out. Fluttershy walked out of her tent and found Rainbow Dash eating a cardboard bowl of cereal for breakfast. Rainbow was soaking wet.

"Good morning Rainbow Dash," said Fluttershy.

"Good morning Fluttershy." She looked at her wet skirt. "Let me guess. Thunderstorm?"

Fluttershy nodded, blushing lightly, but no longer feeling overly embarrassed, since she wet herself in front of her friends more times than she could count.

"I had to pee really bad when I woke up too. But I walked outside in the rain for it. I didn't even have to pull my shorts down." She chuckled.

Fluttershy giggled.

Rainbow sniffed her armpit. "And it didn't get rid of the smell, so no worries there!"

By the end of the day, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy had dried off, though Fluttershy's dress still smelled a little.

...

Before they knew it, the week was over, and Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy returned to the city.

"Want me to stop you off at your house first?" said Rainbow Dash as she drove.

"No, I'd like to walk from your house to mine."

"Mind if I join you?"

"Of course not."

Once they arrived at Rainbow's house, they made their way to Fluttershy's house. Halfway there they ran into Rarity, who was also going for a walk.

"Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, how was the camping trip?" said Rarity.

"It was nice," said Fluttershy. "Except for the third morning, but the rest was pretty fun."

"I know, it was a dreadful thunderstorm." Rarity suddenly noticed how dirty Fluttershy was. She had dirt all over her dress, arms, legs, and hair, and bits of grass and leaves stuck in her hair. "Fluttershy, darling, are you all right?"

"Of course. Why wouldn't I be?" She tilted her head slightly.

"I'm sorry, I'm just not used to seeing you so... filthy." Rarity gave Fluttershy a hug anyway, and as she did she picked up a very unpleasant odor.

"Good heavens, darling! Did they not have any showers or lakes at that camp?"

"No. Why?"

"How do I put this delicately... You smell very bad."

"Oh. I'm sorry." Fluttershy sniffed her armpit. "Yes, I do." She blushed.

"Would you like me to give you a bath?"

"Um... All right. If it'll make you happy, and make me smell better."

"Can I help?" said Rainbow Dash, who had enjoyed giving Rarity and Indigo a bath.

"Of course you can, darling."

They walked to Rarity's house, and once inside, Rarity sprayed air freshener in the room so she wouldn't have to smell Rainbow Dash. Then she filled the tub with warm, soapy water.

"Um..." Fluttershy blushed a little. "Do I have to take my dress off?" She'd be dreadfully embarrassed for Rarity to wash her naked, or even in her underwear.

"No, you can wear them in the tub. I know you'd prefer it that way, and besides," she chuckled, "your dress really needs to be washed too. But I'd take your shoes and socks off."

Fluttershy did so while Rarity turned off the tap. Fluttershy climbed into the tub and sat down, submerging her dirty, smelly skirt. She sighed at the relaxing, warm feeling of the water.

"I'll wash her hair," said Rarity. "You can wash the rest of her for now."

"On it!" Rainbow Dash took a bath sponge and poured some soap onto it. "She's gonna need a lot."

Rarity gently submerged Fluttershy's head under the water, soaking her top half. Then she put a large dollop of shampoo on her hand and started to lather Fluttershy's hair.

Rainbow Dash scrubbed Fluttershy's left armpit, creating suds. She scrubbed as hard as she could, but Fluttershy didn't seem to mind.

"I hope you don't mind me asking," said Rarity, "but... did you... go to the bathroom in your dress?"

"Once." Fluttershy blushed lightly. "During the thunderstorm."

"How ironic, that's the only night all week that I didn't wet my pajamas. The thunder woke me up, and even once it got quieter, I had to go so badly I couldn't get back to sleep."

"Why didn't you just pee right there?" said Rainbow Dash.

"Because then the wetness would make it hard to get back to sleep. That, or how much I enjoy it. I feel so dirty. You should give ME a bath."

"Maybe some night we can have a sleepover," said Fluttershy. "And, when you wet the bed, I can give you a bath in your pajamas."

"That sounds lovely." Rarity giggled at how weird she and all her friends were.

Once Fluttershy's hair was covered in shampoo suds, she took a second bath sponge and scrubbed Fluttershy's right armpit.

Rainbow finished scrubbing Fluttershy's left armpit and started on her back. Then Rarity started on her sides. They scrubbed for about a minute before deciding her top half was clean. Fluttershy really enjoyed this.

"Now, can you lift your feet up?" said Rarity.

Fluttershy lifted her legs up so her feet were resting on the side of the tub. Rainbow Dash and Rarity each washed one foot, scrubbing between the toes. Fluttershy giggled a bit, as it tickled slightly. Then they scrubbed her legs.

"There, all done," said Rainbow Dash.

"Well, mostly," said Rarity.

Fluttershy blushed. "Do you have to?"

"I think we do," said Rarity.

Fluttershy got on all fours, and Rainbow Dash and Rarity scrubbed her butt, along with the rest of her soaking wet skirt, which still smelled of dirt, sweat, and urine.

Once they were done, Rarity turned on the shower head to rinse Fluttershy off.

"There, now we're done."

Fluttershy stepped out of the tub, soaking wet, and Rarity patted her dry with towels. She sniffed her. "You smell wonderful."

Fluttershy blushed.

"How would you like a makeover?"

"I'd love one."

...

The next day, Fluttershy wore a white tank top and a short pair of skintight green shorts. She had really enjoyed Rarity giving her a bath. She wanted her to do it again.

Fluttershy walked into her backyard and sat in a section of dirt, scooping it up in her hands and covering herself with it. She considered wetting herself, but that might go too far. Besides, like Pinkie Pie she wasn't sure she'd be able to voluntarily pee herself. She washed her hands, picked up her cell phone, and called Rarity.

"Hello?"

"Hi Rarity. I'm really dirty right now, and I was wondering, if you don't mind, would you like to come over and give me another bath?"

"Of course, darling."

Fluttershy took a round wooden tub and filled it with soapy water, gathering more soap, shampoo, and sponges before Rarity arrived.

"Fluttershy, what happened to you?" Rarity asked upon seeing Fluttershy's state.

"I just got really dirty so you'd give me another bath."

"Darling, you didn't have to do that. If you wanted me to give you a bath, I'd do it even if you were squeaky clean!"

"Oh." Fluttershy blushed a little, then climbed into the tub and sat down. Rarity submerged Fluttershy's head under the water and commenced scrubbing her hair.

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