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After an accident involving Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash, a confused mare wakes up in an Equestria she doesn't recognize. Set on finding out what happened after the failed experiment, she plunges herself into the grim streets of Canterlot.
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<div class="bbcode-indent-1"><div class="bbcode-pre-line"><p><span style="font-style:italic;font-size:0.75em">A broken echo that no longer belongs</span><br/><span style="font-style:italic;font-size:0.75em">To a city dying in the grasp of icy throngs,</span><br/><span style="font-style:italic;font-size:0.75em">Heart and veins of plastic and steel,</span><br/><span style="font-style:italic;font-size:0.75em">Blind reflexes, no emotions to feel,</span><br/><span style="font-style:italic;font-size:0.75em">Only cold zeros and ones fill her head</span><br/><span style="font-style:italic;font-size:0.75em">In a rusted world of never-ending dread</span></p></div></div><p>A mare wakes up in a place she doesn’t recognise, her mind and body feeling wrong, memories and senses all distorted. Outside a half-ruined building she had found herself in, a city straight out of a nightmare leers at her, demanding a question—who is she?</p><p>Set on finding the answer, she plunges herself into the unwelcoming streets of the mysterious city, bound to discover the horrible reality of how far ponykind has fallen and what sad truths stand behind it.</p><p><b>Warning: the comment section may contain spoilers!</b></p><hr/><div class="bbcode-center" style="text-align:center"><p><b>Disclaimer</b></p></div><p>The story has undergone a substantial rework as of 2021. For the details see <a href="/blog/970440/aftersound-20-resonance-eta-and-my-other-plans" rel="nofollow">here</a>.<br/>English is not my native language and this is my first story—even after the rewrite it still possesses certain flaws. Proceed with no high expectations but caution. </p><hr/><p>This story is written in close collaboration with my friend <a href="/user/324559/gekasso" rel="nofollow">Geka</a>, without whom it wouldn't be possible.</p><p>Special thanks to <a href="/user/301992/Jay+Tarrant" rel="nofollow">Jay Tarrant</a>.</p><p>Prereaders and editors: <a href="/user/301992/Jay+Tarrant" rel="nofollow">Jay Tarrant</a>, <a href="/user/233417/IAmApe" rel="nofollow">IAmApe</a>, <a href="/user/210341/DuvetofReason" rel="nofollow">DuvetofReason</a>, <a href="/user/214113/Typoglyphic" rel="nofollow">Typoglyphic</a>, <a href="/user/38553/mikemeiers" rel="nofollow">Mike Meiers</a>, <a href="/user/5839/Steel+Resolve" rel="nofollow">Steel Resolve</a>, <a href="/user/77554/Damajics" rel="nofollow">Damajics</a>, QU4DZILLA, FairySlayer.</p>

Mature
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Adventure
Dark
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Sci-Fi
Profanity
Violence
Death

122,726 words: Estimated 8 Hours, 11 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

23 Chapters:

  1. Prologue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
    3,212
  2. Chapter 1 – Enchanting voice [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  3. Chapter 2 – On the verge [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
    3,897
  4. Chapter 3 – From the frypan [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
    4,299
  5. Chapter 4 – On their own [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
    7,288
  6. Chapter 5 – Beauty and the beast [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  7. Chapter 6 – A horse with no name [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  8. Chapter 7 – Tombstone [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  9. Chapter 8 – Twilight Sparkle [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  10. Chapter 9 – Profane light, hallowed twilight [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  11. Chapter 10 – canterlot:\tr.exe [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  12. Chapter 11 – Where it all began [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  13. Chapter 12 – Do equinoids dream of electric sheep? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  14. Chapter 13 – Good intentions [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  15. Chapter 14 – To dodge the Junction [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  16. Chapter 15 – Lunacy [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  17. Chapter 16 – Trial [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  18. Chapter 17 – Mother [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  19. Chapter 18 – Responsible [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  20. Chapter 19 – Betrayal [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
    6,908
  21. Chapter 20 – Assumption [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  22. Chapter 21 – Machine Goddess [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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  23. Epilogue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2018
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Published Mar 17th, 2018
Last Update Feb 8th, 2023
Aftersound

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