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Rarity X

by Pinkamena666

Chapter 8: Pinkamena Visits The Boutique

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Rarity --- NightSoul
Sweetie Belle / Diamond Tiara --- Pinkamena666

Pinkamena and Rarity soon arived at the Boutique. "Sweetie, I'm back!"

The foal ran in. "Hey, sis! You brought Pinkie Pie? Are we gonna make her pretty, too?" Pinks grinned.

"No no. She's just here to see our dollies," Rarity said with a smile.

"Oh... Wait... Y-You're gonna sh-show her? What if she tells?" she whispered loudly.

"Oh, Pinkie won't tell on us. She can keep a secret."

"Oh, uh... O-Okay..." said the foal uncertainly.

"Now, where are our dollies?"

"Where you last saw them. They're having tea right now."

Pinks smiled as she noticed the cuts on Sweetie's face. "Mmm... Did you do that?"

Sweetie shook her head. "No. My sis did."

The pink mare looked at Rarity. "Nice work."

"Yes, but Sweetie picked them out. She wanted to look like a doll," she said, heading to her inspiration room where her dolls were.

"Still... The cuts are straight and clean. Not an easy thing to do."

"Well, I don't like mistakes... Oh, there you are!" Rarity squealed, pointing at Diamond and Twist.

Pinkamena looked and chuckled. "Ho-ly shit. You weren't kidding." Diamond gasped. "Pinkie? Help!"

Rarity glared at the filly but kept silent to see what Pinkie would do.

The pink mare knelt down in front of the foal. "You cut her, too, huh? I must say when I cut some pony, I make a mess."

Diamond gasped and went wide-eyed.

"Yes, well, she's not moving anywhere so it was easy... Now, Dolly, did you just try to get Pinkie to help you escape?" she asked, picking the filly up and holding her so Pinkie could see every inch of her.

Diamond teared up. "I'm sorry..." she whimpered.

"Oh, no, sorry won't cut it, Dolly. What do you think your punishment should be?" Rarity asked with a dark smile.

"No... Please..." cried the foal. "I'm sorry."

Pinkamena stared at the foal before turning and heading towards the exit. "I'll be in the kitchen," she said, sounding bored.

"Okay, Pinkie... Now, Diamond, think of a good punishment or I will" Rarity said in a warning tone.

"N-No pain... Please..." begged the foal.

"Then think of something!"

Diamond just sobbed. "Please..."

"Well, if you won't pick, I guess I will," Rarity said, putting the filly on her back and going into the back room where she kept all the unclean things like her laundry and trash.

"Wh-What're you going to do?"

"Well, two things; One is I'm going to cut more details into the heart I gave you..." Rarity said, pulling a knife out of her mane.

"No! Please! No more cuts! I beg you!"

Rarity put the blade on Diamond's lips. "Who was a bad dolly?"

"M... M-Me?" whimpered the foal, tears filling her eyes.

"That's right. And if you're good and stay quite while I work, I won't put you in a trash can for a week... and not clean you up," Rarity said as she put the knife on Diamond's chest, making the first of many cuts.

The foal winced and whimpered, sniffling.

Nearly 3 hours passed as Rarity carved and cut the filly's chest into a piece of art. The large heart was now filled with an intricate design. "There. All done!"

"C... C-Can I... make noises now?"

"Yes, Dolly. You were very good..." Rarity said, taking the bleeding filly into the kitchen.

Pinks was sitting at the table, twirling her knife. Diamond then burst out sobbing, finally able to let it all out. Rarity set her doll on the table, facing Pinkie as she went to get a washcloth. The pink mare stared at the foal as she whimpered. Soon, Rarity was back and started cleaning the filly off.

The foal sniffled. "I'm sorry..."

"I know you are. You're never going to try that again, right?"

"N-No..."

"That's my dolly, Though, I wonder...."

"W-Wonder what?"

"Tell me, Dolly... What's your favorite color?"

"P... Pink... Why?"

"And your second favorite?"

"Purple?"

"Hmmm... I'll dye your mane pink and your coat purple!" Rarity said, clapping her hooves together. "No one will know it's you!"

The foal whimpered and sniffled.

"Oh, you'll look so cute. And I can dye Twist white and blue! What do you think pinkie?"

The pink mare had her head resting on her hoof, with her elbow on the table. "I think you should do it."

"Oh, I knew you would agree," Rarity chimed as she popped the mane and coat dyes. "Shall I get started?"

Diamond whimpered as Pinkamena slowly nodded. Rarity got to work, humming happily as she dyed the filly's mane a hot pink.

"Mmm... Pink," said Pinks. "Looks good."

"Yes, and now for the purple coat!" Rarity said as she started on the fillys cut chest.

Diamond watched the best she could. "Are you gonna always have it so she can't move?" asked Pinks.

"Oh, I don't know... If she can be a good dolly, I may let her move on her own," the unicorn said as she worked the dye into the filly's coat and cuts.

"Because... you know... they're a lot more fun to torment if they can cower," said the pink mare, grinning as she leaned in close to Diamond. The foal gulped and began whimpering.

"But, I don't want this dolly to cower... I just want to snuggle her as she stays limp and quiet!" Rarity said, finishing with Diamond's coat. "Hmmm... I think my dolly needs something..." she said, wiping away the extra dye.

"Well, that's your choice. I just like to watch my victims squirm."

"Well, maybe for the others... but not my dolly, okay?" Rarity said as she pulled the limp filly into a hug, cuddling her.

The pink mare nodded. "You know, Shy, Twi, and I all have helpers AND pets. Perhaps you should have a pet. One that can help, uh... you know... satisfy you when you get stressed out. That's what Derpy does."

"Well, that's what dolly's for!" Rarity said, nuzzling Diamond's head.

"That's not what I mean by... satisfy, Rarity."

"I don't think I'll need something like that for quite some time..." Rarity said, gently rubbing her doll's belly.

"You have no idea what you're missing, sweet thing."

"Oh, I'm sure I'll find out later..."

"Then, uh... A few tips... Don't be alone in a room with Derpy. Shy likes to do... things. She's scared of you now but may not be later. Also, careful around Fluttershy. She's not horny like Derpy but is unpredictable. And Twilight... She gets cravings for pony meat every now and then so watch yourself."

"Oh, my. We're just a big old group now, aren't we?"

"All but Rainbow Dash and Applejack." She paused. "And... if at all possible... if you get the chance... give Applejack some of whatever you gave Diamond, here. Only a smaller dose, okay?"

"Oh, well, here," Rarity said, holding out a bottle she had in her mane. "One drop to feel like you came back from the spa. Two to weaken a pony. Three will make them like my dolly for a day. And 4 leaves you exactly like dolly here," Rarity explained with a smile and another nuzzle of the filly.

Pinks took it and smiled. "Hmm... Thanks. Where would somepony like you get something like this?"

"The spa, darling. For when I have really stressful days and didn't want to go to the spa, the twins give it to me... It may not be completely legal in Equestria... because 6 drops lets you die slowly from heart failure," Rarity said, looking away.

Pinkamena stared at her. "You're shitting me."

"I had to go to the spa a lot... And the girls said they had a way to help... It's not cheep. Nearly 1,000 bits a bottle!"

"Well, I'll... make it count then."

"You better. I'll have to buy me another bottle."

"Is there an antidote if you take 6 drops? Please, say yes."

"Well... Yes. Poison Joke."

"Poison Joke cures this?" asked Pinkie. "This is perfect. I already know exactly how I'm gonna turn Applejack." She stuffed the vial into her mane. "Now, I just need that book from Twilight with the cure for Poison Joke and I am all set."

"Oh, well. Don't let me keep you."

Pinkamena got up. "Oh... One more thing. How long will it take for one to die from heart failure with 6 drops?"

"An hour."

"Good. Well... See ya, sweet flanks," said Pinks, heading for the door.

"Bye, dearie!" Rarity called, picking up her doll and heading to her room. "How's your first day been, Dolly?" Rarity asked, smiling back at her.

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