Knights of Equestria - Book 1: Rise of the Dark Queen (Old Version)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Load Full Story Next ChapterLong ago, deep in the heart of the Planet Harmonia itself, there lied an extraordinary land, one of which the whole world had ever seen before. It was vast, far from the barren deserted wastelands that populated many parts of the environment. Not only that, it was a magical land, so much so that it was practically mythical to anyone who happened to see it with their very own eyes. One that was left untouched by nothing but the creatures that lived there, so much so that no other being knew of its inhabitants. Besides the other creatures put in it before the one that would dominate over them all, no other living being was able to find it. In fact, in all of the time this extraordinary land existed, no other creature was known to inhabit it. Leaving the only the creatures that were living in it to populate it, adapt, thrive, civilize and eventually, rule over…and form a united nation of peace and harmony.
The beautiful magical land…of Equestria.
Equestria wasn’t just inhabited by just any types of creatures they were magical ones, that inhabited every part of the land that could be thought of. Some would think that it was normal for animals like ponies to inhabit a land like Equestria. This would be true in most circumstances, if they were normal ponies that is. Alas, the ponies that inhabited this land were not normal, put very magical, both inside and out in every possible way.
These ponies, along with the many other equines and creatures in the land, did not just appear by themselves by mere coincidence, but rather, they were made the way that they are now, with powerful abilities to match. Before Equines inhabited and dominated the land, before life even begun to exist in Planet Earth, the very planet itself didn’t even exist. The whole universe was barren and vast, filled with nothing but the tinkling of the many cosmos, stars, and twilight specimens that painted ebony universe and the entire milky way galaxy. There were many planets that were filled in the endless void, but not a single sign of life could be seen in many of them for millions of light years. All was silent, with not a single sound but the endless gleaming and twinkling of space. The stars and the cosmos showed no sign of any living breathing creatures, no matter how far searched. That is until the very creator of the ponies, and all of Harmonia herself had arrived.
No one knows where they both or she came from, or how many million and billions of light years they had traveled to get to where they were. Only one thing was known for sure, this being would be the very first to be known by all creatures in the very world she created. The very first equine that would ever walk the face of the very planet that was created by creator of all life…and the one that would soon give the start of a new Era.
Lauren Faust, goddess of the ponies, and the mother of all pony kind.
Lauren was the very first creature to have come to life and roam the very essence of outer space and the Milky Way Galaxy. She held the magic of equines that she would soon bless the very planet that they created with. She had a coat that looked like it could've only been made from the purest and most untainted of white. It shined so bright that it practically glowed like the very Sun that she moved each and every day. Her flowing mane and tail were made from the finest and richest of red color. Both of them were so long that they seem to go on in an endless stream of sparkling ethereal beauty, always leaving a scarlet trail behind her. She had an absolutely magnificent pair of wings, both of them so large, so wide, so long and so vast that they seemed to go on in an endless span. Each and every feather was groomed to the very definition of perfection, giving her the appearance of an angel. The final piece of her appearance was a regal horn that would make even the longest and sharpest of swords look like tiny daggers in comparison.
Out of all of these features that Faust had, the most striking one were her eyes. They were the brightest, vibrant and most beautiful color of blue any creature would ever see. When anypony or anyone looked into them, they would find themselves looking into an endless cyan sky of warmth, kindness, and love. As well as being reminded that as long as she was here, as long as she roamed...everything would be just fine. To top each and everyone of her astonishing features off, on each of her flanks was a blue and green sphere of the very planet of Harmonia. It gave all who saw it the belief and notion that she specialized in doing was protecting the land and all life within it.
Lauren were both known as the loyalist, optimistic, generous, honest, kindest and most magically powerful being that had ever come into existence. The very protector of the ponies and all other creatures that she had put upon the land along with the rest of her kind. Any of these creatures that she blessed would have unique magical abilities of their own, making each of them special in their own way. All the creatures living in the land of Harmonia had magical powers and abilities that made all of them worthy of respect. Out of all of these creatures, there was one species of creatures that soared above them all.
The Earth Ponies, Unicorns, and Pegasus Ponies; the members of the Three Pony Tribes.
First, there were the Earth Ponies, one of the three, yet last ponies to ascend from the three legendary species. By physical appearance, they would look like your normal everyday equines. However, if one where to analyze them more closely, they could see that they were anything but. For millennia years, when the ponies began to populate Equestria, Earth Ponies have had a special connection to the very ground that laid flat beneath their hooves. They had a very special and unique ability to grow acres of food from the ground, such as plants, fruits, and vegetables, even large trees, all having been made with their bare hooves. The reason for this is because they, like their other two pony counterparts, have magic running through their hooves that enabled them to grab objects the same way that the other creatures that could, except ponies didn’t have anything like claws or talons. They were also known for their almost endless endurance and incredible strength when it came to work in the fields or running. When fighting, they can deliver powerful blows to their opponents and inflict serious injuries with blunt force impact attacks. Earth Ponies are so connected to the earth, that and even use tactics that most creatures wouldn’t expect. Because of this, Earth Ponies were the most respected out of all the Three Pony Tribes, providing foods of all kinds for all other fellow ponies.
Next of the three Pony Tribes were the Pegasus Ponies. Unlike the Earth Ponies, Pegasus Ponies did not have a connection to the ground. At least not as strong as a connection to it as the Earth Ponies did. They had beautiful, massive, majestic pairs of bird-like wings that made it easy to identify them and make them stand out from their other fellow ponies. They had a special connection the sky as well as the amazing ability to walk on clouds and even control the weather, which was good, especially when it came to for growing planted food. They also had the power to control two of the five elements of nature, which was wind and lightning, both mainly used for fights, whether it was to protect their kind against a threat, or to help the very ponies that protected them prevail against any potential enemy.
The Pegasus ponies were not only known for their magical ability to control weather and walk in clouds, they were also known for their incredible speed and agility, especially when it came to escape. With their wings, they have better chances at saving their fellow ponies, and preventing as much casualties as possible when involving things like out of control weather. Their wings were also useful for delivering stunning blows, along with attacks that involved both lightning, wind, and even fire and ice. Although they could also use it in their hooves, they preferred to use magic in their wings, since their easier in providing impact and magical power. If there’s one thing that Pegasi are known for the most, its their incredibly sharp senses, thanks to how much they like to be in the air.
Finally, and last put most certainly not least, were the Unicorns. Unlike the Pegasus Ponies and the Earth Ponies, they did not have strong connections to the sky or to the earth. Rather, they have a connection when it came to magic itself that they were given. After all, the regal horns on their heads were not just for show. They were known for actually being able to cast magic that was completely visible to the naked eye. Normally, Unicorn magic was used for basic things like lifting or levitating objects in the air, big or small, depending on how powerful their magic actually was, in mid-air without having to pick it up with their teeth, or their hooves. If they had a certain amount of control over their magic, and if their magic even lifting many other objects all at once.
Unicorns were also known for casting powerful spells, which was very useful, especially in battle. For they could shoot blasts of magic form their horns, cast giant shield to protect themselves from fatal impact…even use it to levitate themselves to fly into their air, much like a Pegasus could. Unicorns were also known for being very smart when it came to things like politics, formulating plans, or solving problems like many other ponies would. Unfortunately, there were some Unicorns that took this wonderful gift to a darker level, practicing in magic that has zero tolerance in pony society. This had led to more than a few drastic measures needing to be taken, and even resorted in some tough decision making. While a majority of Unicorns have been kept from using dark magic in Equestria, there are still those that manage to get their hooves on them. Thus the ones that aren’t to deal with them accordingly for the safety of their land and the ponies in it.
These three tribes, along with the many species that inhabited the land of Equestria, with Galaxia and Cosmo ruling over and protecting them, worked together to make the land more prospering and welcoming for all other Equines alike and spreading happiness and joy wherever they could. Though there were some dark corners that Equestria was known to have. In fact, before it was even founded, it was nothing like it was now. It was a land that was the very definition of darkness, without a single shred of light and hope for anypony to grasp onto.
Before Equestria was founded and Faust became its ruler, it was set in a land full of absolute and utter chaos. All around, there were ponies that lied through their teeth, stole valuable and important items and greedily kept everything to themselves and sharing with no one, betrayed anypony that was naïve enough to trust them, inflicted pain and suffering others for their sick amusement, and ponies that didn’t even have the tiniest shred of compassion in their hearts. It was a land and a world or complete and utter darkness, with no light or warmth coming down on anypony anywhere. Some would even go so far as to take the lives of another pony, regardless of whether they were innocent or not. They would even do things to them so vile that it would leave the victim practically begging for death to take them in its cold dark embrace. They didn’t do this by their own choice though, for it was caused by the one being who created by it all. One that was as every bit as insane, mad, abominable as ponies say he is today.
Discord Konton, the Spirit of Chaos and Disharmony, and the leader of the Konton Clan.
Discord inhabited Equestria in its time of darkness, created by the negative feelings of the ponies inhabiting the land, making life absolutely horrible for all ponies alike. The Chaos God put the ponies and all other creatures though endless amounts of pain and suffering all around for his own needs. He was a being that feed of the negative emotions and the darkness in pony’s hearts. A being that was of every bit discorded as his name, in looks, in personality, and in his abilities as well. He was so physically and magically powerful that he was on par with Faust herself, and could easily go against the Pony Goddess in a one on one battle. This went on for hundreds of years, if not millennia, with nothing to stop his reign of terror on the equines of Harmonia. Nothing to protect the ponies and give them even the slightest beckon of hope or salvation. No one that is, except for Faust and the ponies that would soon be known as the new rulers of Equestria for endless centuries to come.
Queen Celestia Daybringer and Queen Luna Nightwalker; the Goddesses of the Sun and Moon, and daughters of Faust herself.
Like their mother, Celestia and Luna were the two sisters that were not part of the Three Equine Tribes. At least not in the same way that they were. In fact, they were unlike any Earth Pony, Unicorn, or Pegasus that was born anywhere in Equestria. They were also known as Alicorns, the most powerful, rare, and the majestic species of ponies that ever lived as well as the rarest. They had the combined powers of all three of the Pony Tribes and were stronger, faster, and more capable of magic than any other Earth pony, Pegasus or Unicorn alive. It was easy to see why they were so gifted; since there were only ones, besides their mother, who could inherit such power, especially since they were one of the children of Faust that descended from the very heavens themselves. Nevertheless, it did not stop the two sisters, their mother, and the whole Alicorn race at the time, from confronting Discord, engaging him in a battle that would've shaked even the gods. It took countless lives being sacrificed from all four tribes of the ponies, and destruction being left in both party’s wake, but in the end, the chaos go was defeated. To ensure that he’d harm anypony ever again, Faust and her daughters turned Discord into stone, thus locking him in a frozen prison for all eternity.
Not long after the defeat of the Chaos Spirit, Celestia and Luna were crowned as the new Queens of Equestria, and shortly after, Faust disappeared from the face of the earth, as if she was never there in the first place. The two sisters and the rest of their family searched endlessly, every nook, cranny, forest, desert, jungle, and ocean in search of their beloved ruler, but sadly, not a single trace of her was found. The day that they had finally gave up the search was the day that they and the whole Alicorn race mourned the loss of the Pony Goddess. It was on that day that Celestia and Luna knew what they needed to do, and what they could do to make the memory of their dear mother to live on. It was on that day that the Royal Sisters vowed to do everything in their power to live up to their mother’s legacy. That no matter what, they’d do all they could to protect the ponies in her absence, until their time came to join their mother once again.
From then on, her daughters began the task of replenishing the land that Discord had so horribly destroyed, and bringing light, hope, and joy for all ponies alike. It took many centuries, many grueling battles, and many tears, but soon enough, they became rulers of Equestria and Harmonia. Celestia watched over the ponies during the day, and Luna watching them by night, as well as forming a guard of all three Pony Tribes, along with some families that were not of the main three pony tribes. This guard worked together with both princesses, eliminating all threats that came to them and to the ponies that they swore to protect, putting in the blood, sweat, and tears to do so. For a time, all was peaceful and calm in this beautiful land, but alas, as the saying goes peace never lasts forever, and it was only a matter of time before another evil being came to rise.
Like Discord, there was another being of darkness that threatened to shred the land into darkness and chaos, only this being was a pony. Not only that, but unlike Discord, he did not want to rule over Equestria, for he ruled over a land himself. He wanted to see the harmonious land obliterated, so he could expand his land, and rule over all as Celestia and Luna did.
Not long after the defeat of Discord, there was a land far outside that of Equestria that was far up into the Frozen North, a land that was covered in nothing but mountains of ice and snow, but somehow, through an incredible source of magic was able to thrive. This land was known as the Crystal Empire, a kingdom similar to that of Equestria but smaller, though it was by no means any less important or amazing. For example, the ponies that lived there were not of the ponies that were found in Equestria, at least not in appearance, for their bodies looked as if they were made of the very crystal mountains themselves, found deep in the snowy mountain terrain.
The reason for this is because each and every single one of the ponies that inhabited this land was known for spreading as much love and hope as they could throughout the empire in, thanks to them powering the Crystal Heart that Inhabited the kingdom. It was the one known way that the empire was protected by any outside dangers, and it was very efficient against any types of dangers. Alas, no amount of protective magic will be able to withstand everything, and soon enough, the Crystal Ponies would face another evil. One that came in a place and form that they never would’ve expected or would’ve even imagined.
As time passed on, a Unicorn named Sombra Doragonraion, who was the ruler of the Crystal Empire, had slowly began to succumb to the hatred that had begun to take hold of him ever since he was crowned king by his parents, or mainly his mother. Despite the fact that he was born in a family of royalty, it was anything but pleasant. Sombra had endured seemingly endless abuse and berated from his father, not getting one word or gesture of love and praise from him in any way, instead giving him the cold, harsh words of a judgmental pony. That was a job that was left to his mother, who protected him from his father as best she could, and gave him twice the love and praise that he seeked from both his parents.
Sombra did not know why his father was treating him the way that he was. It was possibly from his past failures, or because Sombra didn’t want to be the Emperor that his father wanted him to be. Which was a pony that ruled over all with an iron hoof, instead of love and wisdom. He feared that nothing he did would ever please his father, and was only thanks to his mother that he was able to keep going forward. It was however, not enough to keep him from his father’s wrath, and thus, the abuse continued well into Sombra’s adult years. Eventually, both his parents stepped down from their throne and crowned him as the new ruler and King of the Crystal Empire.
Unfortunately, even after his parents passing, he never forgot about the terror and fear that he endured his entire life up until this moment. Each time his mind wandered back to all those horrible memories, a piece of his heart would break, and a part of his soul would become darker, and darker. He began to become consumed by hatred and an unforeseen dark power, causing to him to lash out at others, even the one mare who loved him with all of her heart. This in turn had made the subjects of the Crystal Empire fear him, even his own wife and child, much to the Crystal King’s utter sorrow. He did his very best to try to keep himself from the brink of insanity and try to reconnect with the ones he adored.
Alas, the damage was too great, and soon enough, not even his own new family wanted anything to do with him. That was the final straw that broke the camel’s back, and Sombra finally snapped, unable to keep the insanity clawing at him any longer. Without any warning, he unleashed his rage on all of the Crystal Empire, and the ones he was supposed to love and cherish. Before long, he went from the strong, kind and wise ruler, to a pony with unrelenting hatred and unquenchable thirst for power and a dark heart. A heart that was blacker than the very night sky itself, and an anger that would frighten even that of the mightiest of dragons.
Soon, Emperor Sombra Doragonraion was no longer just the Ruler of the Crystal Empire and Husband of the Goddess of Love. He was also the Bringer of Hatred and Fear, and the infamous Black Lion of the North.
After the fateful day of his new transformation, Sombra became the Emperor that his father was known to be in his time of ruling the Crystal Empire. However, the way that Sombra ruled the Crystal Empire and treated his subjects was even worse than the way his father had done it. At a level that even his father would’ve found barbaric in nature. It was at such degree, that the only thing the Crystal Ponies felt during that time was endless agony, pain and depression and endless fear. His reign did not last long however, as the two royal sisters had discovered his twisted cruel misdeeds and put an end to his reign of terror once and for all. The battle as great and brutal, and there were a few times where they were nearly defeated, and taken over by Sombra. In the end, the sisters prevailed leaving Celestia’s niece, Cadence, Empress of Love, to watch over the Crystal Empire.
After the defeat of King Sombra, Celestia and Luna once again went back to their respective roles of watching over their precious ponies, day and night. In the wake of their defeat against their foes however, they realized that they in order to protect their land, they needed powerful allies. Ones that could go up against villains that were just as, if not; more powerful than they were themselves. Luckily for them, in the battle against the God of Chaos, the were given a helping hoof by groups of ponies that came from lands far beyond that of Equestria. From then one, they worked together to make Equestria a better place for all ponies; even the very ponies that helped them create the land into it was it was now.
Speaking of said ponies, after the fall of the God of Chaos, they had decided to settle down in different parts of Equestria, even ones that ponies have never been to before. Form the mountains of the Frozen North, to the sands of the Bony Dry Desert, to the forests of the Undiscovered West, to the destiny of the Forbidden Jungle. Even after settling down and building their own lives, they still played their part in helping the Queens in defending Equestria from all manners of evil, though they found it rather hard to with the lives they wanted to live. So they decided to form organizations that were dedicated to protecting where they lived and all that live in it, along with helping other groups that had the same problem, and come together to fight mighty forms of evil.
The Equestrian Guilds.
The Guilds of Equestria were not just any ordinary places for anypony to meet at, they were places made specifically for anypony to come together and learn all types of magic. Equestria was a land that was filled with magic, so it only made since for ponies that allied themselves with the Royal Sisters to create places where they could learn all types. Following after the guilds were the ponies that joined them, called the Magic Mages, all of them from all the Pony Tribes, besides the Unicorns, who learned different types of magic and used it however they chose. There were those who used dark magic, but it was mainly those that were born with it, so nopony really complained or were bothered by it. There were however, the Dark Guilds that constantly went at war with the Light Guilds, the former having risen after getting note of the latter, so there was another daily occurrence that continuously happened. The Royal Sisters were never bothered by it, since they usually managed to take care of it themselves, though there were a few occasions where they had to step in and settle the matters themselves.
As the centuries passed, life seemed to be flourishing, exhilarating, and absolutely perfect for the ponies of Equestria, with their Queens watching over them and protecting them from danger. Unfortunately, as the centuries passed the younger sister, Luna, began to grow sadden and depressed, for she had seen a change in most of the ponies. The Lunar Queen began to notice who they really respected, looked up to, and went to for guidance. Who they really worshiped and loved and depended on for leadership This only grew worse when she saw which of their two cycles that the ponies loved most. The very same cycles that Luna and Celestia both ruled over.
While everypony flourished in Celestia’s bright and gorgeous day, they shunned and slept through Luna’s calm, quiet, cool, peaceful, and beautiful night. Despite Celestia’s many reassurances that Luna was loved, she was not convinced, for she could see what was really happening. The Solar Queen was either naively oblivious to her sister’s pain or just brushing it off as mere jealously. Over time, the Queen of the Night’s sadness grew, to the point where she had shut out everypony out who tried to help her. Her friends, her family, even that of her elder sister, who finally began see just how much pain the younger Alicorn was in.
Slowly, but surely, Celestia had come to realized that her sister was not as loved as she had so naively thought. Not only that, but even she didn’t truly love her sister or care for her as much as she had originally believed. A small part of the Sun Goddess actually feared her sister, and of what she could be because of the powers that she held. Ones that exceeded even that of Celestia’s own in many unseen ways, something that brought her great shame. Unfortunately, by the time she had realized what she had done, it was far too late. The Queen of the Night did not want anything to do with her, having seen how little her sister cared about her. The Lunar Queen had even come to believe that her sister was taking all the love of their subjects for herself. A thought that was as every bit as true as Luna believed, creating an even bigger rift between her and her sister.
Soon, the Lunar Queen’s sadness and depression began to grow into anger and resentment, until the Goddess of the Moon finally snapped. One fateful day, Luna refused to lower the Moon so that her elder sister could make the Sun rise for the dawn. Celestia pleaded with her younger sister to stand down, to do her duty as the Queen of the Night, but Luna’s anger, jealousy, and hatred were too deep, too bitter, and far, far to consuming. She was so hurt, so damaged, and so emotionally and mental unstable that she became another entirely different being. And a final unforgivable act by her Celestia’s hand lead to Luna becoming known as one of the most common villains in all of Equestrian history.
Nightmare Moon, the Mare of Nightmares, the Goddess of the Black Moon and the Queen of Darkness.
In her new terrifying state, Nightmare moon vowed to her elder sister that she would shroud all of Equestria and the whole world in Eternal Night, the dawn would never again rise and her reign would last forever. Celestia once again tried to plead with her sister to surrender and lower the Moon, but the only answer Nightmare Moon gave was one with brute force and violence. At that moment, Celestia realized that the one sister she knew, the one sister she loved more than anything else in the world, was gone. Only the monster remained, the monster that she created…and there was only on way to stop it.
With no other option, Celestia finally went hoof to hoof against her younger sister. The battle that transpired afterward could only be described as a battle between gods. Mountains and forests cracked and tore from the ground from the magical blasts emitted from their sword-like horns. Hurricanes and wind currents sliced through the air, tearing through the land from powerful flaps of their majestic wings. Craters that were the size of giant space asteroids, were left in the earth from the powerful strikes of their hooves, and through it all, every single one of their subjects from servant lord, guard, and civilian, were there to witness it. It was a battle unlike anything Equestria had ever seen, second only to the battle with Discord. It was one that would forever be known throughout the history of Equestria and many future generations, as the Battle of the Two Sisters.
Seeing that the battle was not getting her anywhere, and she was losing fast, Celestia was forced to take drastic measures to save herself, the land, and all the ones in it. She turned to the greatest source of power Equestria had ever known. The one given to her and her sister by their beloved mother after she vanished form the face of the planet.
The Elements of Harmony; the most powerful sources of magic to ever exist in Harmonia.
With their combined power, and a heart heavier than the weight of even the biggest and heaviest mountain in the snowy lands of the Frozen North, Celestia rose up against her sister, defeating the mare with the elements. Try as she might, the Dark Queen was unable to withstand the power, and was permanently banished to the Moon she raised. From then on, and for the next one thousand years, Celestia ruled Equestria alone, taking the task of raising both the Sun and the Moon without her dear sister by her side. As time went on however, ponies began to take notice of the black unicorn head on the moon, and before long, Luna came to be known throughout history as, ‘The Mare on the Moon.’
Queen Celestia may have succeeded in defeating her younger sister and saving Equestria from Eternal Night, but even she knew that the peace would not last forever. One day, her sister would return, and all of Equestria would soon be in danger once again. When it did, not even she would be able to stop it, not without the help of the Elements of harmony, now that she was no longer connected to them. Luckily for her, on the thousandth day of the thousand year, when her sister was due to return a group of ponies, would soon rise up to face the Mare of Darkness. Her, along with many other foes, led by a pony more special that any of them combined. It would be a pony that would forge down a path that would change the lives of them, their friends, families, and the very history of Equestria forever.
For that pony herself, her path will be more adventurous, more wondrous, and more thrilling then even she herself could’ve ever imagined.
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Now, before anyone says anything or leave any comment on the story, I would just like to point out, for those who have not read this story yet, I just want to say that this is going through a rewrite of practically all of the chapters, and that each one is going to be going through some special editing. Some parts of this story will be remaining the same, while some parts of it are going to be different, depending on how much editing the chapters will be needing. I have definitely noticed some run on sentences and grammatical errors that really need to be sorted out, along with some battles and adventure scenes that most definitely needed to be extended, shortened, and included, both before and after the Main Seven reach Nightmare Moon. During said adventure, I'm also going to be sure not to add to much description to the environment and try to make sure there's plenty of interaction and conversion between the characters, be it as a pair or in an entire group. I'm also may more pay not add the part 1-2-3-4-5 titles to the story and repeat them so often like I did the last time, cause I can see that some of the people viewing this were really not impressed with that. So that is totally something that is going to be changing in the new addition of this story, along with the adventure in the Everfree and the Point of View from the other mane characters and background ponies; looking back, I feel that could've been done a lot differently that what it was now
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