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Canterlot has been invaded, again. The Royal Guard and Wonderbolts are being useless, again. But this time Twilight has a plan, based on friendship. Will it be enough to save the day?
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The My Little Pony Movie was amazing, with wonderful world building and well plotted out adventure and feels. But it ignored a lot of canon. Twilight has check lists for checking her check lists! Do you really think she wouldn't have a plan for an invasion, especially after what happened at Cadence's wedding? Also, Equestria already has friends and allies they could call on. So, here's my version of events.

Edit: Some of the early comments have given me cause to think about revising the second chapter, so I'm pulling it until I have a chance to do so. I may remove it altogether and let the first chapter stand on it's own, as I originally intended. The idea, after all, was to show that Equestria already had allies they could have called on, not to mock the actual film, which I enjoyed thoroughly.

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  1. The Plan [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 22nd, 2017
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  2. The End Game [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 22nd, 2020
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Published Oct 22nd, 2017

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