Back to the earth Ch.1

Doc had built a time machine powered by Nuclear fission . It propelled us and the delorain into a different time. It works. Yes it dose but today But something was messed up. Big time. Way to much power with the new flux compassitor and time citrus these were upgraded untested version.they were rebuilt by doc when the delorain appeared out of nowhere when he was visiting he built them to prevent any incidents. Until we found something that messed everything up . also my names Marty heres how it started

Come on Marty! Doc yelled Hay doc I'm driving driving I said Ok let's go doc I said as I jumped in the drivers seat. Doc in and said remember Marty These are new citrus so go easy on them. Ok ok it's not my first time doing this gees I said. I started the engine and the car went up 5 feet and zipped into the sky. I got a good feel on the steering wheel but felt something odd really odd. I pulled the horn cover off and saw a flip switch. Hay doc what's this I said. I have no idea Marty I didn't put it there doc said. Hay wait theres two of them I said as I flipped one of them the glove box dropped and their was a Ruby sitting there attached to the ruby were 4 gold wires that were attached to the flux compositor. Uh doc what's that I said. Thats a priceless ruby! I worked as a juler for a month in the old west doc exclaimed. Well what's it doing here I said. Marty he said you have just found something not Evan the creator of this time car could could find. So should I see what it dose I said. Doc grabbed my face and aligned it with his. Marty he said your crazy if you flip that switch. Well call me crazy I said as I flipped the switch. Marty nooooooo! It was two seconds before a huge flash of light from the flux compasserder and then the time cruets started sparking. The numbers flickered to 1885. Oh grate I said. Then they lit up to 1002. Oh no! I said as I went to recalabrate the time but it was to late the delorain Started to fall the cone of light formed around the front and the jets lit up and sped us up to 88mph then the delorian disappeared.

Feeling a sudden crash I knew we were on land. I looked back and saw a herd of cows charging at us. Then I herd doc yell GO!. Ok I yelled turning the flux compassiter on......nothing happened another try.........nothing happened.ok doc looks like were out running them I said. I hit the gear shift and we took off. About 8 feet behind us the heard of cows charged doc sat there in awe as I was trying to out run the cows. the delorain charged into a town that had buildings on fire and apparently did not mean for cars to drive on. As I was dodging houses fountains things like that. I soon found my self approaching a huge living object. That shot.......energy!?...... Grate scott! Yelled doc as we were closing In on it. Doc! I yelled. what he yelled. Let's fly I said as we stopped. The delorain lifted up as the wheels took there places. We went up a good bit and stopped. The creature took a swing at us but didn't hit us ok i said now he's in for it. I went to shift but I was stopped by doc. He looked at me and said Marty we have no idea what this where we are at. This thing could be a dinosaur of some sort what would happen if dinosaurs didn't Rome the earth. Well doc you do have a point but what if this thing kills us that will alter the time line too I said. Marty I think we better kill it doc said. Yep I said. I grabbed a tire iron out of the em toolbox doc I yelled take the wheel I said as I traded him spots. I opened the gull-wing door and looked for a week point. The eye I tough as I aimed I threw the tire iron it struck the creature causing it to look at me. I shut the door and doc took off. Crap I'm going to need a gun for this I said. Wait a second I said I forgot. After saving doc from kid tannen I still have his revolver in the back.i spun around and grabbed the revolver.ok doc keep us going I got this I said as I opened the door. I took 3 shots the thing fell to the ground. Wow I a good shot I said. Hay Marty maybe you should git in so we can land! Ok ok gee doc I said as I shut the door. ok doc i said when are we. i looked at the time curicts the showed oct 22 1002! hay doc i said. yes he said. can the delorain go back this far? i said in fear. he looked at the time curits GRATE SCOTT! he yelled. he looked at me with panic marty i dont think were in hill vally anymore he said in fear and awe. d...doc w...what are you talking about i said in a grate deal of fear. but doc was to busy going over equaions and checking things. this is going to be a long day i said in half fear as I look around. Hay doc do you see what I see I said. What he said. look!!! I said there was an enormous tree 20 feet and closeing. We both. Screamed as we crashed and blacked out.

I awoke to a.......pony......well purple pony....... With a horn.... WOHA horn!?! Thats odd. Then It said are you ok. I screamed again as it said its ok my name is twilight sparkle and I mean you no harm. I take one last look before passing out.

Authors note:
[Dun dun dun] and ch.1 bites the dust. Any way this is my first fic and I would kill for constructive criticism. This has no proof reading so there's a lot of flaws. I was going to send this to my editor but he is on vacation for the week so I don't want to bug him. Plus if you have a iPod or a iPad get back to the future episode 1 and you will see who kid tannen is.