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Equestria Girls: Sunset Awakening

by FourShadow


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Prologue

The atmosphere of Canterlot High School was somber. Most recently, a week ago, a battle began in the dimension of Equestria. The battle was waged against the returning forces of the maniacal Queen Chrysalis who returned from a long exile. The only people who could help save Equestria were Sunset Shimmer, her friends the Rainbooms, the Shadowbolts of Crystal Prep, and the Rainboom's newest student, Smokestack.

The girls had won, but at the cost of one of their friends. Smokestack, who was CHS’s most recent student, had sacrificed himself in order to save their world and Equestria. All that was left of him was a letter, the remains of a glass eye, and a stolen artifact from Equestria, known as the Alicorn Amulet.

Students and faculty from both Canterlot High and Crystal Prep were gathered in the gymnasium to give their respects. Principal Celestia gave her speech, praising Smokestack for his efforts when he saved many students from a fire that broke out from an accident. Even Abacus Cinch said some words. She didn’t say a lot, but it was meaningful nonetheless, expressing her shame for everything that happened to him while he attended Crystal Prep.

The last person with a speech was none other than Sunset Shimmer, arguably the one who was closest to him. She walked up to the podium, clenching the amulet being worn around her neck. The stolen amulet; a token of his memory.

She arrived at the podium, and took a deep breath as she gazed out into the audience.

“Today, we mourn the loss of a dear friend. He wasn’t with us for very long, but the impact he had on us all was anything but little. He gave his life to save us and our entire world. Smokestack wasn’t just a friend, he was a hero. Anyone willing to pay the ultimate price to keep their friends safe is someone to be respected. But in his wake, he left us a relic. A letter containing his final wishes in case he didn’t survive. And his final wish wasn’t for us to mourn over him, but rather celebrate our victory and what we gained, rather than focus on… what we lost…” Sunset could feel the tears threatening to push out behind her eyes. She took a moment to compose herself, not wanting to cry in front of everyone. A few sniffles escaped, and with a deep breath, she continued. “So let’s not mourn. Let’s honor his final wish, and celebrate our victory. Focus on the good, rather than dwell on the bad. He may be gone, but his memory is still alive. In our hearts, he’s immortal. So… let’s celebrate, everyone. For Smokestack!”

“For Smokestack!” the audience replied. Sunset could see she did a good job at raising their morale, judging by all the smiles she saw. With her speech over, everyone started mingling with each other, or grabbing some food set up on various tables around the gym.

But despite the collective morale of the room, Sunset couldn’t find it within herself to be optimistic. She stepped down from the stage, and just stood still. She looked down at her necklace, holding the pendant in her hand. One of the few things to remember him by…

“Sugarcube?” a voice beside her said. Sunset looked to see Applejack and Rarity standing next to her.

“Are you alright, darling?” Rarity asked.

“Sorry, girls. I just… I just need a moment,” Sunset said. Before her friends could question her further, she excused herself outside.

She sat down on the entrance stairs, letting out a heavy sigh. She took her necklace off, and held it in her hand. Just the sight of it was enough to trigger memories. Memories of… Smokie.

“I know you don’t want me to mourn, but… I can’t help it,” Sunset said, finally allowing a tear to fall.

“Why did you have to die? Why did it have to be you?” Sunset cooed, allowing more tears to fall. “You didn’t deserve this, Smokie. We won, but… now you’re gone…”

Her tears could no longer be kept at bay. Gripping the amulet tightly, she buried her face in her arms, crying her eyes out.

“I… I miss you so much, Smokie. Was there really no other way?” Sunset pleaded, continuing to bawl.

Sunset knew she wasn’t honoring Smoke's last wish by crying over him, but she couldn’t help it. She would’ve loved to make him happy. Give him the love he deserves, and show him how amazing he is. But now she can’t. He’s gone, and there was nothing anyone could do about it.

What she wouldn’t give to hear him call her Shimmer-cakes again…

She lifted her head to look at the amulet again. The Alicorn Amulet. The amulet worn by Smokestack to enable him to use magic in this world, and entrusted to her by him. A reminder that he’s always with her. A reminder that he… loves her…

Another tear fell at the memory of her first kiss with Smokestack. Such a sudden display of love, and amidst the most dire of situations. Sunset has never felt such pleasure and joy in her life. She could still feel his tender lips on hers.

Her first… and final kiss with him. A bittersweet memory, but Sunset couldn’t deny the love she felt from his kiss.

“I… I love you too, Smokie,” Sunset said. She would give anything to kiss him again.

The sound of something scraping the pavement nearby broke Sunset’s mourning. Her jolted senses pointed her head in the direction of the broken Wondercolt statue. In the darkness, she could barely make out a dark silhouette.

Before she could question it, the figure moved suddenly, accompanied with a pained grunt. Sunset stood up in surprise.

“Hello?” Sunset called out. “Is someone there?”

The figure didn’t reply. In fact, they did the exact opposite. They ran away, bolting towards the street.

“Hey, you! Wait!” Sunset called out, running in the figure’s direction.

The hooded figure didn’t yield. They continued running, not even sparing a glance.

In the darkness of the night, Sunset failed to notice a black car on the side of the street. The figure got in the car, started it up, and in the blink of an eye, speeding away, screeching their tires in the process.

Sunset stood where the car once was, watching as the mystery figure drove away into the night.

She scratched her head in utter confusion. Were they… watching her? They seemed to bolt as soon as she noticed them. But… why? Was it someone stalking the school? Was someone stalking Sunset? Was it someone in the wrong place at the wrong time?

She couldn’t even get a good look at their face, or the license plate of the car. The car looked black, but it could’ve been any dark color that could be concealed by the night. She had no definitive way of identifying this potential stalker.

Left with no other choice, she walked back inside to join everyone else at the party.

But… who was that?


A dark-colored car pulled up to a very big, mansion-like house. The driver parked the car in the driveway, and got out to enter the house. After closing the door, the hooded figure retreated to a downstairs room, surrounded by high-tech devices and electronics.

“You were right,” the figure said, taking their hood off, letting her long, red-and-yellow hair flow. “I found her. My equivalent. As soon as I learn how this ‘magic’ of theirs works, only one Sunset Shimmer will remain... and all will finally be right with this upside down world...”

Concealed by darkness, the only thing visible to her was a pair of menacing, glowing green eyes...

Chapter 1: Old Flames

The party was going rather smoothly, in spite of the circumstances. Both CHS and CPA were getting along nicely, brought together by this tragic event. Bittersweet, but neither of the student bodies could remember their schools being this friendly to one another. And as the party went on, some of the bands of Canterlot High sang on stage.

Unfortunately, the same couldn’t be said for all of the students.

Some of the CPA kids didn’t show any form of sympathy for someone who had just died. Jet Set, Upper Crust, Fleur De Lis, Suri Polomare, Royal Pin, and their bighead, Neon Lights.

Even an event as tragic as this wasn’t enough to move their thick heads. To them, Smokestack was still a sworn enemy, and were unwilling to give even a single ounce of sympathy.

“I can’t believe CPA’s wasting time by giving this douche a party.” Neon said. “Especially for everything he’s pulled on us.”

“Trust me, Neon, I know the emotion. The inhumanity…” Jet Set replied.

“Oh did any of you hear? Those five girls who made it to the finals at the Friendship Games? They’re attending Canterlot High now just because they wanted to ‘make it up to them’.” Royal stated.

“Really?” Neon snapped. “They’re leaving Crystal Prep to come to this stupid place?”

“Yeah, they are.” Royal replied. “I don’t get it.”

“Those girls are idiots. They aren’t gonna gain anything by going here,” Neon said.

“Exactly,” Jet Set said. “What sort of things would they ever–” he paused when he noticed something. Or rather… someone…

“Jet? You okay dude?” Neon asked.

Jet pointed to the table in front of him, and they looked to see Coppermane and Fluttershy sitting at a table with some of his friends.

“Maybe we could have a little… fun with them?” Jet offered.

“I like your thinking, Jet.” Neon replied with a devious smirk.


Over at another table, Coppermane (Fluttershy's boyfriend), Fluttershy, Flash, Twilight, Pinkie, Rainbow, Applejack, and Rarity were all sitting together, talking amongst themselves. Coppermane had been kept out of the loop this entire time, and was curious as to exactly what happened. More importantly, who Smokestack really was.

“Any chance you can explain to me who he was?” Coppermane asked.

Pinkie immediately started pulling out still screens showing Coppermane exactly what had happened.

“Of course! He was a new student but he was disabled with a horrible depth perception since he wore a glass eye because he was bullied! He’s also from Crystal Prep, and had the exact same bullies as you, but after a series of coincidences he met the Dazzlings and we found out the only reason he was able to use Equestrian magic was because he had an artifact from Equestria and it turned out he's actually Equestrian! So we all spent time with him to see if he was gonna do something like TAKE OVER THE WORLD, MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!... and it turns out he wasn’t... anyways, we got him to make up with five Shadowbolt girls, the same ones that competed against us in the final round of the Friendship Games, But unfortunately we ended up getting kidnapped by a scary bug queen and her bug army, called 'changelings', ooooh.... But thanks to Smokie, Flash, the Shadowbolts, they all followed us to Equestria and rescued us! We battled with them, and the end result is we won the war, and we blew up in entire city from our fight! And this all happened in the span of a few weeks!"

Pinkie stopped and took a few heavy breaths just from the overload of exposition that she had yelled at her friend. Coppermane was silent for a moment, trying to process the onslaught of information that was thrown at him like a basketball.

“Wow… that’s a lot,” Coppermane said. “Sounds like a really awesome guy, though.”

“Yeah… he was,” Pinkie said, sounding more solemn. Before everyone’s eyes, Pinkie’s hair went from lively and energetic to flat and limp. Her face went sorrow.

“Um… if that's not too much to ask… how exactly did he die?” Coppermane asked.

The everyone at the table sighed, looking at one another to see who was going to be the one to tell him. Eventually, Twilight spoke up.

“He… he sacrificed himself,” Twilight said. “He used the amulet to try and absorb the queen’s magic. But… it was too much, and... he didn't even know it. It caused an explosion, and he… he got caught in it.”

“All we found of him was just a glass eye and that necklace... thing.” Rainbow said.

“Wow…” Coppermane said. “Well, at least he died a hero, right? That's pretty honorable.”

He didn’t get a response, but saw some small, yet genuine smiles on some of their faces.

“How’s Sunset doing?” Coppermane asked. “Didn't she had a crush on the guy?”

The girls nodded.

“A big crush,” Pinkie cooed.

“She excused herself outside not too long ago,” Applejack said. “She didn’t look so good. I don’t think she’s gonna forget this for a long time.”

“Poor darling…” Rarity said.

“She’s strong. I know she’ll make it,” Coppermane said. He gave Fluttershy, who sat in his lap, a light squeeze, and kiss on the cheek. “I’m just happy you’re safe.”

“Thanks. I wish I can say the same for Smokie though.” Fluttershy cooed.

Coppermane held Fluttershy in a tight embrace, giving her a kiss on the cheek.

Fluttershy leaned her head on Coppermane’s shoulder as he held her. At least he was here to help comfort her. Suddenly, Fluttershy heard Coppermane gasp, and felt his arms tighten around her. She looked up and saw a worried expression on his face.

“Coppermane?” Fluttershy said. “What’s wrong?”

“Look,” Coppermane said, his head to the side gesturing to Neon, Royal and Jet all standing together talking with one another.

Fluttershy looked in the direction Coppermane was facing, and gasped. To the side was Neon Lights, Royal Pin, and Jet Set talking in their own little cluster.

“Oh no,” Fluttershy cooed. “I forgot they would be here.”

“Don’t worry, sugarcube,” Applejack said. “Ah’m sure if we ignore them, they’ll leave us alone.”

“Um… they just saw us,” Coppermane said, biting his lip. “Oh no, they’re walking this way.”

“Don’t worry, darling,” Rarity said. “We’re here for you.”

In mere moments, Neon, Royal, and Jet were at their table, with less-than-friendly expressions.

“Well, well, well, if it isn’t the old gang again. Enjoying the party?” Neon asked with a devious smirk.

“Yep. It’s just fine, Neon. Can you please leave us be?” Coppermane asked.

“Coppermane, been a long time since I’ve seen you. How’ve you been holding up since you got expelled from Crystal Prep, like you should have been?”

Coppermane sighed. He did not want to deal with these three right now.

He felt something grip his hand. He looked to see Fluttershy’s hand over his. She had the sweetest smile on her face, reassuring him that she was there for him. He interlaced his fingers with hers, and gave Neon a sneer.

“I’ve been doing really well, actually,” Coppermane said. “No thanks to you.”

“Why don’t you three go mingle with everyone else?” Rarity said. “I’m sure they’d be interested in what you’d have to say.”

“Oh, we would, but no one else is of any delight here. You girls and boys on the other hand seem to be a lot more… interesting to talk to. And congrats to your Sunset friend for singing the most awful farewell song I had ever had come across." Jet insulted.

Had Sunset been there, she would have been very angry. Sunset put her heart and soul into singing a farewell song for Smokie, and they treated her own feelings and well being as it if was nothing.

“So, how are you all holding up with Smokestack now dead? I mean, I think we all can agree that freak should have been gone a long time ago.” Neon smirked.

Nobody said a word. They weren’t going to give Neon the satisfaction. But to their annoyance, he just snickered.

“You miss that freak?” Neon said. “Really?”

“He wasn’t a freak, Neon.” Rarity sneered. “I’m appalled you have the audacity to call him that after everything you ruffians have done to him.”

“Oh come on, that twerp should never have come to CPA in the first place,” Royal said. “And maybe we wouldn’t have had to mess with him if he didn’t constantly bother us. Just like Coppermane over here.”

It took everything in Coppermane’s power to not get in Neon’s face, but he held back. Those three jerks were lucky Fluttershy was here.

But before anything else could be said…

“Girls, Flash, Coppermane,” said Sunset Shimmer, walking briskly into the room. “Music room, now.”

With absolutely no hesitancy whatsoever, the main group followed Sunset to one of the practice rooms. Thank goodness. Any longer in front of those jerks, and Coppermane would’ve lost his mind. Quickly, they made their way to the practice room.


They arrived at the practice room, and Sunset closed the door, locking it behind them.

“What’s this about?” Twilight asked.

“And why do y’all look so worried?” Applejack asked. “Did something happen?”

“We may have a problem. I think someone’s been watching me.” Sunset explained.

“Why do you say that?” Fluttershy asked.

“I was sitting on the steps, and I heard someone fall down. It was right by the Wondercolt statue,” Sunset said. “I got up to get a closer look, and whoever it was just ran away. I tried chasing after them to see what was up, but they drove off before I could talk to him or her.”

Everyone looked intrigued… yet worried. Was someone outside of Crystal Prep getting suspicious about anomalous events at CHS? It wouldn’t be good at all if someone else discovered the presence of their magic. It could also just be a stalker, but even that wasn’t anything to brush off.

“Well, did you get a good look at them at all? Any defining features?” Twilight asked.

“It was too dark to see much of anything,” Sunset said. “I did hear a grunt when they slipped though, and it sounded pretty feminine. I’m almost certain it’s a girl, but I have no idea who she might be.”

“Is someone curious about the magic?” Rarity asked.

“Your guess is as good as mine,” Sunset said. “But I just wanted to let you know so you can be on your guard. Be careful with your magic, and keep an eye out.”

Everyone nodded, making Sunset smile. With that, everyone returned to the party. At least most of them did.

“Fluttershy?” Coppermane said.

“Yes?” Fluttershy said.

“Can I talk to you alone for a moment?” Coppermane asked.

“Of course,” Fluttershy said, smiling. She waited before everyone left the room, and closed the door before walking back over to Coppermane. “What is it?”

“Listen, you already know about Neon and I, right?” Coppermane asked.

Fluttershy offered a sympathetic smile, and placed her hand on his heart. “How could I forget? You poor thing…”

“Here’s the thing… I didn’t know they hated Smokestack. And, while I never knew him, I thought I already knew how bad Neon and his friends were. But if they're bad enough to give him a glass eye... I guess I was wrong. Just… please keep your guard up,” Coppermane said, lifting his hand to stroke her cheek. “I can’t bear the thought of that pretty face getting hurt.”

Fluttershy felt her face heat up at his words. She lifted her hand to touch his.

“I will,” Fluttershy said. “And don’t worry. You have friends now, remember? We won’t let those meanies hurt you. You can be sure of that.”

Coppermane smiled, and pulled Fluttershy closer, wrapping his arms around her waist. She wrapped his arms around his neck as he gazed into her deep, teal eyes. It didn’t take long before their lips met in a passionate kiss.

They pulled away, and shared a loving embrace. There were very few things Coppermane loved more than holding his princess in his arms. The feeling of holding her close and keeping her safe was amazing.

"Want a ride back to the party?" Coppermane asked.

"What?" Fluttershy asked, stifling a giggle. "It's only in the gym."

"I know," Coppermane said. "Just say yes."

Fluttershy didn't know what was going on in his head, but how could she reject an offer from her prince?

"Okay... y-yes?" Fluttershy cooed.

A devious smile came over Coppermane's face, and Fluttershy let out a yelp as her prince scooped her up in his arms, carrying her bridal-style. Fluttershy's eyes were wide as she grew a big smile.

"Oh my..." Fluttershy cooed.

Coppermane looked back at her with those big, chocolaty brown eyes, making Fluttershy's heart melt. He always knew how to sweep her off her feet... quite literally.

She gave Coppermane a kiss on the cheek as he carried her back to the gymnasium to join the party.

An admittedly weird night... but very enjoyable at the same time. Smokestack would surely be happy.

Chapter 2: Another?

Neon Lights, Jet Set, Royal Pin, Upper Crust, Fleur De Lis, and Suri Polomare all took a seat at one of their favorite hangout places, a coffee shop named the Hot Kettle Cafe, for the time being until they had to return back to CPA. They never set foot in Sugarcube Corner since CHS students always came to that place.

They all grabbed their regular drinks, and took a seat at their usual table. None of them were looking particularly happy, especially since they all got heavy amounts of repercussions since hard evidence of their bullying was shown to their principal. They’d all gotten various, severe punishments from their parents, but now it was all over for them.

“So guys, what’s new?” Suri asked sipping her coffee.

“Other than the most popular girls in Crystal Prep are now attending Canterlot High?” Royal complained.

“Wait a minute,” Suri said, “Are you talking about–”

“Sugarcoat, Sunny Flare, Sour Sweet, Lemon Zest, and Indigo Zap. Yes, that’s exactly who we’re talking about.” Jet Set said, taking a sip of his tea, while snuggling with his girlfriend, Upper Crust.

“This is terrible news,” Fleur sneered. “What ever made them decide to go to that inferior school?”

“Apparently they beat up old Smokie more than we ever had and wanted to attend just to satisfy his ‘final wish’ or something.” Neon replied. He felt sick just saying that.

“What do you think they’ll learn from there? Maybe learn a little more how to not be a wretch like that Sunset Shimmer is?” Upper Crust asked.

The group giggled slightly at Crust’s comment. Making fun of how awful Canterlot was one of their afterschool time things to do, other than just hang out, go to a local hangout, maybe prank a CHS student or faculty, and even meet up together to work on schoolwork.

“What do you think allows them to use the magic?” Suri asked.

This got all five of them in silence all pausing to think about it. They had never knew how they were able to use magic, and during the times they saw it being used, they really wanted to use some of it against them.

“Oh, sorry, I didn’t mean to--”

“No, it's alright Suri. You didn’t start anything. That’s just… we kind of stopped talking about it since we don’t really have any idea on how it works. And if we don’t have any equipment on how it works, then we have no way of getting back at them.” Royal replied.

What they didn’t know was that someone in a hood had been eavesdropping on their entire conversation.

And now they had just the information she needed…


The end of the school day came at Canterlot High, and the students were leaving to get their things to go home as usual, and live their normal lives. Well, it would be normal, but considering all the magical encounters they’ve dealt with over the past three years, nothing would be normal anymore.

In the practice room where the Rainbooms always worked, Sunset and Pinkie Pie, were busy rumaging through a large box which held some of Smokestack's things. They made an agreement that since he was no more, they would promise to keep his home and his prized possessions safe.

"Hard to believe he had all of this stuff!" Pinkie said as she dug her head into the box, throwing many strange items out of the way.

"Pinkie, please be careful!" Sunset pleaded.

Pinkie stopped the throwing and raised her head back up with an awkward smile. "Hehe, sorry..."

Pinkie, now with a sense of care, slowly moved some of the items out of the box at a steady pace. "Oooh, hey Sunset! Look at this!"

Pinkie Pie pulled out a few VHS tapes she found from the bottom, each with stickers for old movies.

"Smokie did have a thing for old technology." Sunset weakly smiled.

Sunset dig into the box again and pulled out another new item; a strange looking gun. It was chrome all around, with what appeared to have a bright flash light at a end where the barrel would be, and there was a small stick connected to it with a red button to pull the trigger.

"Wait, isn't that--"

"Yeah, it is." Sunset nodded. "I thought all of these things were permanently gone. But I guess not."

At that moment, the door opened, and entered in Coppermane.

“Pinkie told me to come along and–” Coppermane’s eyes were locked onto the weapon they were taking apart. “Whoa… what is that?”

“It's a light cannon.” Pinkie said, smiling.

“A… what?” Coppermane asked, clearly perplexed.

“Its a weapon designed to counteract against magic infestations. Smokestack made these in the event that if some relevance of a creature from Equestria made their way here, he'd at least have something to use to counteract against them." Sunset said.

“But why are you taking them apart?”

“Now that we've won, I'm not sure we'll have a need for these things. And even more so, if they fall into the wrong hands… Oh, I don’t want another war started again.” Sunset’s hand fell on her face just thinking about it.

Coppermane gave a frown.

"Oh, wait a minute..." Sunset dug into the box, and she found a metallic robot arm in the confinements of the box. "I forgot about this."

"Is that a robot limb?"

"Sort of. Its Smokie's prosthetic limb. He built this in the case he lost an arm." Sunset replied.

"That's pretty handy." Coppermane said.

But he then turned his attention onto the light cannons taking a look at them. He sat down on his knees and examined one of the guns.

“Whoa… These are fantastic. I never seen this kind of weaponry before. How did he make these things?” Coppermane asked.

“I'm not entirely sure. I know he used titanium alloy, steel, copper wiring, and lots of parts from other machine guns, car batteries, and computers.” Sunset replied with a light smile. "I could swear he had a similar mindset to Twilight on these."

“I almost wish I was there to help. I would have loved to try and use these things against those bugs.”

“Well maybe you can!” Pinkie grinned.

“Wait… what?” Coppermane said.

“Since we're not battling anyone for a while... and since we've still have some in peak condition, we always take these things out into the fields for target practice! We make a game out of it!” Pinkie said with a big smile.

“I’d love to try and use these things. But are you sure it’s… you know… legal?” Coppermane asked.

“Of course! We just go out into the fields where they can’t hurt anyone. They don’t really shoot that far, anyway. And we had to sign some papers by Principal Celestia on the authority of where and when we’d use them.”

Little did any of them know that someone had been watching through a small crack in the door. Someone with a teal colored eye who found their conversation… interesting.

“And we always take them apart every time we’re–”

Pinkie raised her hand up to silence them. Then putting her finger to her lips, she made a silent shhh tone. She carefully got up on her feet and walked to the door without making so much as a bounce. Then with a quick movement, she kicked the door open. Apparently someone was on the other side, because the next sound was a pained grunt.

“OW! Agh…”

Pinkie made a ninja roll into the hallway looking at the person hiding behind the door, covered in a hoodie. Her eyes were locked onto the person she smacked the door into. Everyone stepped out to see who it was. The hooded girl decided to make a run for it, and Coppermane and Pinkie gave chase after her.

"Get back here! We just wanna talk to you Mr Stalker person!" Pinkie said. With some quick thinking, she pulled out her phone and started making some video, catching their stalker.

"Pinkie, what are you doing?" Coppermane asked.

"I want to get some video! We may want to know who he or she is!"

They ran a left down the hall, and kept on running after her. Soon, Pinkie made a leap and tackled the hooded girl to the ground and she gave out another grunt, and her hood fell off. She got herself up, which gave Pinkie and Coppermane a look at her red and yellow colored hair.

Pinkie gasped so loud, she gave the girl a scare. She turned around with a worried look which made Coppermane and Pinkie Pie just freeze in place.

"Freaky deaky!"

She slipped her hood back on, and started running again, leaving them behind. Soon Sunset came to their direction to check on them.

“Who was that?” Coppermane asked.

“I think that was the same girl who ran from me last night. Were any of you able to see who it was?”

"It was you!" Pinkie pointed Sunset.

"What do you mean it was me, I was trying to run after her!"

"She's dead serious Sunset. That other girl... was you. Well, sort of you. I have a feeling we might have met this world's Sunset Shimmer.

What?” Sunset asked.

Everyone looked at each other. Their faces communicated mutual concern and confusion. Another Sunset Shimmer?

If this Sunset Shimmer had been spying on them here, and on the night before, there could be a chance she heard their entire conversation on the gun they had in their hands, and she could have come across all of the magical anomalies at Canterlot High: The Fall Formal, The Battle of the Bands, the Friendship Games, and maybe every strange magical occurence they've had over the few months.

The very thought of this being exposed terrified them. One thing was for certain. They had to find out more about what this… other Sunset could be planning, and keep her from gaining an understanding on their magic. It would be bad for everyone if she discovered the mechanics of their magic.


Author's Note

Predictions anybody?

Chapter 3: Amends

The next day at CHS, the sun was shining, making for another glorious day. Even so, the former Shadowbolts, Indigo, Lemon, Sunny, Sour, and Sugarcoat were all very nervous. Today was their first official day at CHS and they were hoping to make amends with everyone. They didn’t expect it to be easy, but they’d be damned if they didn’t try.

One immediate perk to attending CHS verses Crystal Prep was not having to wear those uniforms. Now they could dress in anything as long as it was within the school dress code.

Indigo now wore a pink t-shirt with an indigo cloud firing a lightning bolt on it, blue jeans, running boots, her signature goggles on her forehead, and the piercings on her ears.

Lemon now wore a pink shirt with a graphic of a lemon slice with flowers on it, yellow short shorts, and sneakers. Her hair was styled differently, still long, but now looking more punkish and spiked.

Sugarcoat wore a yellow button up shirt, with black jeans. Her belt had an emblem of a colorful stick of dynamite. She also had a bandage over her left knee due to an animal bite.

Sunny Flare now wore a short black jacket with the sleeves tucked up, a purple shirt with a sort of pink “partly cloudy” graphic, a pink skirt, and blue boots.

Sour Sweet wore a pink tank top, a skirt with a heart and diamond graphic on it, and green boots.

The five girls only hoped that how mean they’ve been to CHS in the past wouldn’t ruin their chances of making friends here. Hopefully it wouldn’t be an impossible endeavor.

“I’m a little nervous. You sure this will be okay?” Sunny asked.

“We’ll be fine. Besides we helped save Equest… er… something,” Indigo stammered. “Look we promised Smokie we’d go through with his final wish, so I say we can do it.”

With a collective deep breath, the girls entered into the school and stood near the entrance doors to wait for their tour guide. Eventually, they showed up, and to their surprise, it was their old classmate from Crystal Prep; Twilight Sparkle one of their friends and allies from the war in Equestria.

"Oh, hi girls." Twilight nervously greeted.

"Morning dearie." Sunny answered

"Good to see you Twilight." Sugarcoat nodded.

"So, uh... how are you doing?" Indigo asked.

"I'm doing alright, thank you. What about you girls, are you all doing okay?"

"We're doing cool dude." Lemon Zest nodded.

"How's your leg Sugarcoat?" Twilight asked.

"Its doing much better now, thank you." Sugarcoat nodded.

"Good. Now, how about I give you the grand tour?"

The five of them smiled and nodded. Twilight then led them through the school, leading them to each of the major locations.

"Down here is the science lab... computer lab is in there..." Twilight said, pointing to each room as they walked along.

Soon, they came around a corner, and heard music playing inside one of the practice rooms. Sunny took a peek inside of the room, and saw the Rainbooms… and someone else that made her face go completely white.

“Oh no…” Sunny said.

“What, what is it?” Indigo asked.

Look…” Sunny said, looking like she’d seen a ghost.

Indigo, Lemon, Sour, and Sugar all took a quick look, and their faces turned to similar, but less severe versions of Sunny’s face.

“Coppermane’s in there? Isn’t he the dude who jumped Neon Lights after pushing him too far?” Lemon asked.

“That’s him,” Indigo said. “Oh yeah… he used to have a huge crush on you, didn’t he?” Indigo asked.

“Yeah… he did.” Sunny said, biting her lip.

“Oh, I remember,” Sugarcoat said. “He confessed one day, and then Indigo gave him a fake phone number, and when he tried to talk to you, you shot him down in front of everyone. He brought you flowers and everything. Didn’t you slap him in the face with them?”

“Don’t remind me…” Sunny said, covering her face.

“I mean…” Sour said, “We’re all guilty of bullying him. It was mostly Sunny though.”

“We have to talk to him, don’t we?” Sunny said.

Indigo grunted. “It’s going to be like making up with Smokie all over again.”

“Well at least we didn’t run him over with a car… or hack into his social media accounts... or gone so far that one of his eyes was destroyed."

“And he is a little nicer than Smokestack. He might actually talk instead of holding us in a trapped room while pointing a weapon at us.” Sugarcoat said.

“You saw what he did to Neon, right?” Indigo said. “What if he’s got stored up frustrations with us as well?”

“At least you girls might have a chance for him to forgive you,” Sunny said. “He’ll probably never forgive me.”

“Doesn’t he have a girlfriend now?” Lemon asked.

“Yes and I influenced Neon to try and sabotage their relationship.” Sunny replied.

“Why?” Indigo asked. “Did you become jealous?”

“What? No!” Sunny said. “I never liked him like that. I just… ugh… I don’t know. I just wasn’t thinking.”

“Wow… we were really horrible to him, weren’t we?” Sour said.

“What are we going to do?” Sunny said.

“I think I might have an idea,” Twilight interjected.

“What?” the girls asked.

"Talk to him. Tell him how you feel, I'm sure he would understand." Twilight replied.

“That’s all you have to say?” Sunny asked. “Seriously?”

"Girls... Look, I'm only new at this friendship thing, but the only way you'll get this off your chest is if you talk to him. You'll feel like you've just raised a lot of weight off of you if you do."

The girls were silent, pondering amongst themselves. As much as they didn’t want to admit it, the former siren was right. If there was ever a time to make amends with their former enemy, it was now.

Sunny sighed. “Alright, let's just get it over with.”

Adagio smiled. "I'm sure things will be fine. I'll come back real soon, I just need to get stuff from my locker. Besides, it won't be too bad, won't it?"

“No, it’ll be rough,” Sugarcoat said.

“Wow… thanks, Sugar,” Sour said. “Why are you so blunt?”

“He probably won’t forgive us right away,” Indigo said. “But we can at least try, right?”

Sunny sighed. At least they could get this over with. Twilight walked away, leaving the five girls alone in front of the practice room.

With a collective deep breath, Sunny knocked on the door. It took a moment, but eventually the door opened, and they were greeted by Rarity.

“Oh! It’s you five!” Rarity said. “I forgot it was your first day. Come on in!”

Indigo, Lemon, Sugar, Sunny, and Sour entered into the room, and were greeted by the rest of the Rainbooms, who couldn’t help but notice how nervous the five ex-Shadowbolts looked.

“Um… are you okay, girls?” Twilight asked.

The Rainbooms noticed Sunny’s gaze fixated on something. They followed her eyes and saw Coppermane staring back at her, mirroring Sunny’s face.

“Coppermane… um… hey. It's been a while…” Sunny said, playing with her fingers.

Sunny Flare…” Coppermane said. His eyebrows furled slightly. “What are you girls doing here?”

“Oh… well… we’re Wondercolts now,” Indigo said.

“Yeah,” Lemon said. “We heard such… great things about this place… and…”

“Oh, quit beating around the bush.” Sugarcoat interrupted, then faced Coppermane in the dead eye, “We’re attending because we made a promise to attend for the guy that’s now dead. I believe you know who we’re talking about.”

“No... I do.” Coppermane replied, gritting his teeth.

“Wait, you’ve met before?” Sunset asked.

“Yeah… we have.” Coppermane replied.

“Sunny humiliated him in front of a crowd of people because he had a crush on her back in Crystal Prep.” Sugarcoat said.

Sunny froze after Sugarcoat blabbed, giving her a nasty glare “There’s no beating around the bush with you, is there, Sugarcoat?”

Sugarcoat simply shook her head no, completely oblivious to Sunny’s snarling.

“This is pretty awkward....” Pinkie rubbed her hand on the back of her head.

“It doesn’t matter Sugarcoat. Yes, I used to have a crush on Sunny before, but now I don’t anymore. It's long gone.” Coppermane replied with a sneer, then looking at Flare. “Very… gone.”

Sunny didn’t say a word. Coppermane’s gaze was piercing…

“So…. how have you been doing over here at CHS?” Lemon asked trying to lighten the mood.

Coppermane didn’t say a word, but instead just gave them an icy look. The ex-Shadowbolts just bit their lip. Looks like today was going to be rougher than they thought.


Later that day, the girls were on their way to cafeteria to get lunch, but the minute they stepped in the cafeteria they could tell they weren’t liked among CHS. Everyone was giving them cold stares. They just tried to ignore them, and found an empty table to sit at.

“I’m uncomfortable.” Lemon said.

Well, duh.” replied Sour Sweet as she took a sip of her drink.

“How were classes?” Sunny asked.

“I could barely make it,” Indigo said. “Everyone in gym kept giving me nasty stares and they kept reminding me of what a jerk I was. I don’t think they’re going to forget everything we did for a long time.”

“We were pretty awful.” Sugarcoat replied.

“But all of that stuff was last year. Shouldn’t that be old news?” Indigo asked.

“Sometimes things from the past can work their way into the present.” Flare replied as she saw death eyes from another student walking past them.

Sunny spotted another student out of her peripheral vision with a blue jacket and sparkling skirt walking on by. Maybe she could try and make a friend?

“Excuse me?” Sunny called out. The girl looked in her direction. “Um… hi. What’s your name?”

“The Great and Powerful Trixie doesn’t talk to those who abused us in the past.” Trixie sneered.

“What? What are you talking about?” Sunny asked.

“You know exactly what I’m talking about,” Trixie snapped. “Everyone knows about all the things you have done to us in the past, everyone knows about what you Shadowbolts did to Coppermane, and nobody is giving you any sympathy for what you did to Smokestack either.”

“I agree,” said a voice off to the side. Sunny looked to see Octavia glaring at them, along with her friends Lyra, Bon Bon, and Vinyl Scratch.

“I can’t believe what you did to them,” Lyra said.

“I can’t believe you even have the guts to show your faces here,” Bon Bon said.

Sunny slowly walked back to her table, biting her lip as other students shouted at them.

“Go back to Crystal Prep!”

“You don’t belong here!”

“Get lost, Shadowbolt!”

“You are the worst people ever!”

Sunny’s shoulders drooped and she sat back at her table with the rest of her friends, still getting angry looks and comments from the other students.

“It was over before it even started,” Sunny said, burying her face in her palms.

Indigo sighed, pushing her tray of food away. The hateful atmosphere made her lose her appetite.

“Let’s face it. We deserve this,” Indigo said.

Nobody at the table said another word. It hurt, but it was true. How could they ever recover?


Over at CPA, Neon was getting his backpack and school supplies from his locker to go home for the day, but when he opened up the locker, an envelope with his name appeared.

Neon Lights,

I may have something you’d be interested to hear. Meet me over at one of the tables near the front of CPA. Don’t worry, your friends will have gotten the same letter like this from me. Just meet them near the front.

Signed,
A friend

A little later, he met up where the letter said to, and was shocked to discover he wasn’t alone when he arrived. In fact, all his friends were there.

“Wait, you all got letters too?” Neon asked.

“Yeah.” Royal replied.

“But… why?” Jet asked.

At that moment, a hooded figure walked up towards them, and spoke.

“I believe you all are wondering why you were called here?”

Everyone nodded and gasped when the figure took their hood off, and revealed long red, and yellow hair.

“Sunset Shimmer?” Neon said, earning a nod and a grin from her. “What are you doing here? Don’t you have magic you should be wielding?”

“I would if I was actually from the same world as that other Sunset Shimmer.”

Everyone looked at each other questionably. They didn’t understand a single thing she was talking about, but soon they all came to realization that if they kept asking about another Twilight, then surely there…

“So, wait… you’re…”

“I’m like all of you guys, and I know you’re all interested in all of the magic over at Canterlot High.” Sunset said. “May I sit?”

"Um... sure...?" Neon said, hesitantly.

Sunset just sat down at the table, while everyone else remained standing, waiting for any sign of danger.

“So, I understand you all want to deal with the magic over at Canterlot High, is that correct?”

The group gave a nod.

“Well, what if I told you I can help you?" Sunset asked.

"How so?" Fleur raised a brow.

Sunset smiled with a hint of evil attached.

"I've been keeping tabs on Canterlot High since the magic occurrences began. Ever since a little debacle in 2013, I thought maybe it would be good for me to keep my eyes out." Sunset replied.

“What are you talking about?” Suri asked.

Sunset pulled out her phone, and started a video. All six of them leaned in a little closer to see, and they could see video footage of the other Sunset Shimmer turning into a raging she-demon. Another image revealed three glowing sea-ponies hovering up in the sky, several luminous sound waves. The next file she flipped to wasn't a picture, but instead a video. The video showed Coppermane standing up to Hoops and Score, the two boys who bullied him without end when he first arrived to CHS, and they all gasped at the sight of him being protected by the magical barrier. And then of him levitating while kissing his girlfriend.

“That bastard has magic!?” Neon yelled.

“How does he, have magic!?” Royal angrily replied.

“There’s more than that, Royal Pin.” Sunset replied.

Royal was taken aback. The fact this girl knew his name gave him a shock, but then again, she knew all of their names.

She then changed the video again this time showing evidence of Smokestack in a hallway of Crystal Prep. The first thing they could easily see was the golden amulet around his neck, followed by his arms raised up and pointing at one of the lockers, as if he was forcing it out of the wall through thin air.

“There’s two things you forgot here.” Suri stated. “One, there was the Friendship Games, and two, that last video you showed, he’s dead.”

“Wait, you mean the kid with the--”

“The guy with the gold necklace?” Neon interrupted. “Yeah, he’s dead. So that’s one less person we won’t have to deal with.”

Sunset gave a devious smile after hearing that.

“Perfect…anyways, I wanted to see if maybe we could form somewhat of an… alliance. I want to get rid of that other Sunset Shimmer from this world, and all of you want to get even with CHS. It's a perfect reason to team up. Interested?”

All looked at one another thinking this over. Working with this Sunset Shimmer could get them even with the girls and boys that ‘started’ this whole mess in the first place.

“I think you just made a deal.” Neon then shook hands with the other Sunset Shimmer.

“Perfect.” Sunset said. “Now that we’re all on board with one another, do any of you want to see some of the progress I’ve made in this? I’ve been waiting to unveil what I’ve got in store.”

“Well, what is it, Sunset?” Upper asked.

“Come with me over to my house, and I’ll show you.”


The seven of them all walked over to human Sunset Shimmer’s mansion, and as they entered inside, they were all quite impressed. The entrance was looking something out of a rich and grand millionaire’s house.

“Feel free to take off your coats and put them anywhere.” Sunset said.

“How did you get this decor?” Fleur asked. “This is absolutely fantastic.”

“Well when you’re rich and alone, you basically can choose what you want.” Sunset replied.

The Crystal Prep kids were surprised. She was rich?

“Well if you’re rich, then how come you don’t attend Crystal Prep? I’m sure you’d be perfect for that school.” Upper Crust asked.

“I would, but based on all of the conspiracy surrounding the school, it kind of made me not want to attend. Plus, based on all the things I heard about the students that attend Crystal Prep... it uh... it kind of made me not really feel welcome.”

“Nonsense, darling. You’d be perfect. Besides you’re helping us, there’s not a reason we wouldn’t not make you feel welcome.” Jet replied.

Sunset stopped after hearing that. “You… you really think so?”

“Of course. We both share a same goal, you’re rich, and you have just as much interest in the magic as we do.” Neon said placing an arm around her shoulder. “I believe you would be perfect at CPA. Better than that… ugh… Twilight Sparkle.”

“Well, I don’t know… but I’ll think about it. In the meantime, you want to see the latest project I’ve been working on?” Sunset asked.

They nodded their heads responding to ‘yes’, and they walked downstairs with her into the basement.

There they could see lots of lab equipment. Jars, beakers, chemicals, cryogenic fridge, computer screens, you name it, and she would have it.

“Whoa, someone’s been busy.” Royal replied looking in awe at the sight of all of the equipment.

Their heads turned to a board and saw a bunch of pictures of the magical anomalies at CHS, along with several amounts of strings liking pictures together. Clearly she had been watching them for a long time. Many of the photos were old memories of CHS from the last year, but they were also familiar things to the Crystal Prep students. Some photos showed Coppermane glowing in a bright aura, with pony ears and a long pony-tail hovering in the air, speaking to a crowd of people, while two jocks stood in horror below him. The next photo showed Smokestack in a hallway of Crystal Prep, and right in front of him hovering was a locker that was ripped from its bolts on the wall, highlighted in a purple aura, and the last photo was shown of Midnight Sparkle.

“How long have you been working on this?”

“I’ve had many years to work on it, since I didn’t have much to do outside of my online school, I just kept on searching for more magical anomalies, and soon they would keep coming.” Sunset replied. “In fact, one of them landed in my front lawn and I--”

A loud snarl interrupted the silence, making everyone shiver in fear.

Sunset nearly jumped back in fright from hearing the snarl, but then sighed in relief knowing what it is. She turned her head to face the darkness and yelled.

"Will you just shut up!?”

The Crystal Prep kids were now a little terrified as to what she had been keeping in the darkness.

“What are you keeping in there?” Royal asked with fear.

“Oh, um… Okay, I should probably tell you. I have no idea. Something came and crashed onto the pathway of my mansion, and I don’t know what it is. It was dark, I could barely see a thing. I used a scanner to identify it and I found out it had magic, just like that other Sunset. So I stole his magic, and have been keeping it in this.”

Sunset showed the six of them a giant machine connected to a collection tank where a glowing orb of magic kept spiraling around in the tank, bouncing off the glass.

“After I stole diffused the magic from the... guy, I think, I tried to talk to him, or it. I think it's a person, and I tried to help him because one of his arms was missing. So after identifying the essence from the other deceased creature that had fallen, I tried to infuse him with it. But he kept resisting like if something was bad with it. And he tried to attack me, so I’ve been keeping him locked up in here. So far nothing bad has happened.”

All of them looked a little closer, but even they could identify it. It was covered in darkness, and they only thing that was noticeable were the green, menacing eyes glowing, but concealed by the darkness.

Royal tried to lean in closer but got a snarl from it.

“Did that thing just snarl at me?” Royal asked.

“Yeah… that thing’s kind of an ass.”

“Well why not release this absolutely terrifying creature?” Upper Crust asked.

“Because, Upper Crust, if I do then he’s gonna be tracked, and if they find out who experimented on it, it will lead to me, and they’ll discover everything I’ve worked so hard to build on, and if they find that out, it will destroy any chance of getting rid of the magic at that school because they’ll think we’re crazy. Okay?”

All of them nodded with an understanding. But all flinched at the thing growling some more.

“Say, uh, anyone want a chocolate chip cookie? I could go for a snack. I don’t think I can stay in here anymore.” Sunset offered.

Everyone said yes, and they followed her upstairs. Well, almost everyone.

Neon Lights looked down one more time to see the green eyes staring into his soul.

"I don't know who you are... but I can only hope you don't attack my friends." Neon said to himself.

He shuddered at the sight of it, right before closing the door letting his eyes glow in the darkness.

Just you wait….. Soon I’ll be free, and you’ll have a new problem on your hands….” Came from a demonic, and very distorted voice in the darkness.

And in one moment, a snapping of a metal chain was heard.


Author's Note

What do you think is going to happen? :raritywink:

And if any of you could leave likes, that'd be appreciated. Please. :twilightsheepish:

Chapter 4: The Unidentifiable

The next day, over at Crystal Prep Academy, Lemon Zest and Indigo Zap were walking the hallways. They weren’t taking any classes, rather they were getting supplies they forgot for school.

However, their minds were dominated by their first day at CHS, which was anything but welcoming.

“Ugh, what are we gonna do?” Lemon groaned. “We barely said anything and we’re already the most hated people there.” In frustration she banged her head against the locker and didn’t raise it back up.

“We do kind of deserve it Lemon. It was pretty crappy of us to pull all of those stunts on CHS in the past.” Indigo replied as she entered the combination on her locker.

“But what can we do? We can’t be hated forever, can we?”

“Well…. No, but--”

“Then we got to do something about it.” Lemon finished as she pulled out the last bit of materials from her locker. But just as she was about to slip on her headset listening to more of rock and roll tunes, she froze to see Royal Pin walking on by, looking incredibly suspicious. He stopped and seemed to pan around the room for a second before continuing to walk.

“Hey, did Royal seem a little suspicious to you?” Lemon asked.

“Yeah, he did. Wanna see what’s going on?” Indigo offered.

Lemon nodded, closed her locker, and followed Indigo creeping down the hallway to find Royal with Upper Crust and Suri. She leaned in closer, looking through the cracked open door to listen in.

“Look, how do we know this plan is gonna work?” Royal asked. “Can we even trust this girl?”

“Look, while I don’t know if it's a wise idea to listen, she’s giving us help, so I say we take it, M’kay?” Suri replied.

“I must agree with Suri. Sunset’s offering all the help we can get, and I for one think this is the perfect opportunity for some… revenge as you seem to call it.” Upper replied.

Lemon and Indigo couldn’t believe what they were hearing. Sunset was helping them? But another thought came into their mind, Sunset wouldn’t dare help them. Maybe someone else with her name was helping them?

However they wouldn’t have much else to listen to, for more people were heading for the door. Luckily Indigo and Lemon backed out just in time as they stayed hidden, and watched the three of the exit the room and meet up with Neon, Jet, and Fleur, and they walked down the hallway.

Little did any of them know, that soon Lemon and Indigo would be creeping behind them, following them all the way...


“Indigo, this is crazy!” Lemon said.

“I know,” Indigo said. “But we need to figure out what’s going on. Two Sunset Shimmers?”

Lemon sighed. “Yeah… I guess you’re right.”

Like cops, they tailed the suspicious group to wherever their destination was, via car. Thankfully, none of them saw the two girls following them.

After a while, the two parked the car onto a sidewalk, far from their eyesight. Once they stepped out, they slowly stepped out and skipped up to the front gate, and looked up. They had followed them over to a… mansion?

“What the…?” Indigo said.

“Where are we?” Lemon said.

“We’re gonna find out,” Indigo said. “Now be quiet. We don’t want to get caught.”

After climbing over a fence, and carefully moving along the edges of the brick walls, Indigo and Lemon hid behind some bushes as they watched Neon, Jet, and Fleur enter the mansion. The door closed behind them, making an audible, metallic sound when it shut.

“Alright, let’s go in,” Indigo said, getting out from the bushes.

“Wait!” Lemon said, pulling Indigo back. “We can’t just walk through the front door.”

“Why not?” Indigo asked.

“We could hear the door shut from here,” Lemon said. “Imagine how loud it must be inside the house. We’ll get busted for sure.”

“Ooh… good point,” Indigo said, biting her lip. "Okay. New plan. Go around the back, find a different way."

The two of them held their bodies up against the walls and kept dashed right across the side, making their way to the back. Once they made it to the back, they looked around the backyard area. There was a cobblestone patio all around, with arches holding up balcony ledges, a giant swimming pool, a hot tub, and an outdoor eating table.

"Awww... she's got a pool!? Come on, we can't even afford that!" Lemon whined.

"Lemon! Can we focus, please?" Indigo asked. “Wait… I see something.”

“What?” Lemon said.

Indigo pointed her finger to an open window. “There.”

Lemon’s eyes went wide. “That just might work. And I don’t think the lights are on either.”

“Let’s do it,” Indigo said.

Quietly, they snuck up to the wall of the mansion. Indigo peered in to see if anyone was watching. When the coast seemed clear, she crawled through the window, quickly but quietly followed by Lemon.

Once inside, the two of them found themselves in a big hallway. The carpets were woven with a black diamond pattern, stretching on a shiny wood paneled floor. The walls were painted in shades of tan, while the arches or corners that stood out were in maroon colors. Red curtains covered the windows from every window, and a few lights were set to dim throughout.

"Wow... not a bad place." Lemon gasped.

"Yeah... I really like the carpet as well."

"Yeah, really ties the hall together. Now, where to?"

"I've got this. Follow me." Indigo said, gesturing Lemon to follow after.

They heard voice coming from somewhere in the mansion. Carefully, the turned around, following the sounds to the source. They kept their mouths shut, not wanting to make a single peep and get busted.

They followed the sound downstairs, and came to the only room that existed on the lower level. The door was cracked open, and inside they heard voices. The same voices, and louder than ever. They were here.

Indigo and Lemon peeked into the room, and did their best to muffle their gasps at what they saw.

Machines, electronics, and radars were everywhere. A giant tank was in the corner of the room, emitting a strange aura. Strange… but an aura that seemed oddly familiar. It was hard to make out, but there appeared to be a map of the city with red ball-pins placed in certain places.

“What is all this?” Indigo asked.

“Is that a tank of… magic?” Lemon asked.

“More like a silo,” Indigo said. “It’s huge. I think I can feel it from here.”

“Me too,” Lemon said.

“I think they’re saying something,” Indigo said, shushing Lemon.

“Are you sure about this?” Fleur asked. “We can’t discuss this somewhere else? This place is… ugh… shady…”

“She said to meet her down here,” Jet said. "But she also did tell us to look out. She said whatever she had in here got loose, so keep your eyes and ears open.

Indigo raised an eyebrow. “Her? Do they mean…?”

Ahem,” a voice behind them said, making them jump.

Indigo and Lemon darted their heads to look behind them, and the last thing either of them remembered was a blow to the face before everything went black.


Indigo slowly awoke, her eyes slowly flinching to the light coming into her vision. Distorted shapes appeared in their vision, mainly arches that were around her, covered in a big drape. Once she woke up, she looked underneath her and found herself laying on top of silk sheets, and her head on top of a big pillow.

When did I get back in bed… wait… this isn't my bed. I better, wait... I can’t move… Why can’t I move!?

Indigo realized her feet were now tied together with rope, and her own hands were tied as well, wrapped up tightly in duct tape. She groaned, and soon realized her own mouth had been gagged with duct tape wrapped around her head.

"Mmm! Mmm mm m mm mmm mm!" Indigo tried screaming. No use. But where was Lemon Zest? She wasn't in the same room as her. And she looked to the clock on the nightstand, reading 10:00 in the evening.

Well if she wasn't here, then she would have to find her.

She threw herself side to side, to try and throw her feet off the bed, in attempt to see if maybe she could stand. Once she was straight up, she slowly hopped onto her own feet. It may not have been much, but at least she could walk around. But now she had to find something to cut herself free with.

Looking around, she noticed a desk against the wall, right across from the bed. Maybe if she could slowly get over there, she could get her hands free.

Carefully making small hops across the room, she made it to the desk and looked around on the top. Some pens, random pieces of paper, but wait. A pair of scissors. If she could grip them, she could cut her hands free.

Turning herself around so her hands could get to the desk, she found the handle of the scissors and held them, sighing in relief. Now, adjusting them carefully, she managed to cut through a few of the strips, making it down to the final one. Using all of her might, she ripped her arms hard which tore the tape off. Once her hands were free, she went to her gag and pulled it off as best as she could.

"Agh, oww..." Indigo groaned. "Well, at least I'm out. Hopefully Lemon Zest is still around here."

Indigo pushed herself against the door, listening carefully for any noises. None.

She carefully opened the unlocked door, picking up the dark hallways. With as little movement as possible, she quickly stepped out of the door, and quietly closed the door. But there was just one problem... she was in the hallway, and there were dozens of doors all around the place. Worse... it looked just like the same hallway she had stepped into before.

"Oh come on, not this..."

Well without any other choice, she started to walk. She kept close to the lights that were set to dim, and did her best not to make any audible sounds. She checked behind her as she walked, and sighed. No sign that she was being followed. But if there was any hope of her getting out of this house, she'd need to keep her eyes everywhere.

But as she turned around--

"DAH!" A girl shrieked

"Dah, oh!" Indigo sighed. "Lemon, you got out!"

Standing in front of her was Lemon Zest, still in the same clothes she showed up in the night they arrived at the house. But the most strangest thing that Indigo could notice about her was that seemed really frightened. More frightened than she should be.

Lemon slowly nodded. "Y-Yeah, I did. Apparently our captor didn't think about getting tools that could help us get out, out of our rooms."

"Idiot." Indigo shook her head.

"Come on, lets get out of here, and fast!" Lemon whimpered.

"Whoa, Lemon, calm down. What's got you so spooked?"

"Please, lets just go!" Lemon whined.

"Lemon, what's wrong? Wait... did Sunset, not ours, did she see you?"

"No, it--"

The two of them stopped. They could hear the sounds of footsteps coming down a flight of stairs that were just feet behind them.

"Come on, lets hide!"

Indigo grabbed Lemon and took her down the hall and across into another corridor. The two of darted down the hall, and opened up a door into another room. Closing it behind them, they found themselves in a giant gourmet kitchen.

"I think we might be safe in here. Lets just--"

The two of them listened carefully, and they heard the sounds of footsteps coming right towards the kitchen.

"Hide, now."

Indigo and Lemon quickly looked around, there had to be a place to hide. The closet? Too obvious. The cupboards? How would they know if they could be empty?

Instantly, the two of them just started to open up cabinets, looking for crouching places to hide in. With luck, they found a cabinet big enough for them to hide in. The two of them dove inside and closed the door, making sure they couldn't be seen, but left a tiny bit of cracks open for them to see outside.

The two of them listened very carefully for a sound, any signs of the house-owner's presence... but there wasn't anything. Not a peep, or a sound. Not a single, solitary noise.

With no sounds for about five minutes, the girls nodded in agreement, thinking it was okay to finally leave. But as they were about to leave, they listened to another sound. Only this one was more terrifying than before.

This sound was more of a loud growl and hiss, like a combination of both noises. And worse, it was coming from above them. Like, crawling above them.

Both of them pulled further back into the cupboard, trying their hardest to stay out of sight. Both of them held their hands over their mouths when they saw details of what was crawling from above them. Climbing down was a slender black foot, with sharp toenails. The foot was arched slightly, like the hind leg of a horse or a raptor, but it was accompanied by a knee which held it steady.

Another foot came climbing down, followed by two hands which grabbed onto the ground. The hands were equally slender and black and very... shiny. The fingers looked especially long, long enough to make slices into their guts and rip them from their bodies.

The hissing noise was now more loud and ominous to them, as it was coming from the body. As it slowly stood up on its two legs, it slowly stomped around, away from the cabinet, and out of their sight.

Two more minutes passed by, and the noise had gone away. Maybe it was gone?

"L-Lemon... I have a good feeling that thing was what Jet Set had said was locked in her basement." Indigo gulped.

"Mmmhm..." Lemon slowly nodded.

"Now, I don't hear it... lets slowly get out, and get out of this house."

"O-O-Okay." Lemon stammered.

Slowly, both of them crept from the storage hold, and stood on both of their own feet. Thankfully, not a sight of that... thing was near them.

Both of them sighed in relief

"I know you two were hiding from me..." A scary voice interrupted.

Turning their heads, they saw the monstrosity on its feet, looking at them, hunched over like a raptor. A clearer image of the being entered their eyesight just from seeing its full form.

Its skin was slick and greasy looking, making it shine in the moonlight from the window. A pair of cyan colored eyes were staring straight at them. Its limbs were slender and black with a few holes jotted in a few places. Its chest looked as if a muscular rib cage was on the outside, working as a shield. Sharp fangs ruptured from its mouth, and from what they could see, long hair that was split into a few dreads, long, green and messy were hanging from the back of its head, and drooping over its shoulders. This thing was a walking biped... and they were petrified.

Both of the girls gulped in fear.

"I know you have been prisoner in the hours you were here."

"You aren't going to kill us... a-a-are you?"

I could sever one limb at a time...

The creature stomped towards them, and loosed up from his hunched form, standing completely straight, towering above the two of them. Both of them quivered in fear, and waiting for a movement, while the creature just sniffed them.

"No... killing you two is a waste of my time. And my time is much too precious for simple maneuvers... My strength is saved for the real prize..."

The monster turned itself around and slowly stomped towards one of the stoves, his arms leaning against the countertop, staring down at the burners. Behind, they could see a tail was waving around like a snake, but instead of a rattle it possessed a dagger like tip.

“Wait… what are you?” Lemon asked.

"That's a bit of a dumb question Lemon." Indigo shivered.

To answer your question my green-haired acquaintance... I am what happens when humans think they are superior… they think they are gods when they possess a supernatural power… and their greedy minds up corrupting them… to the point of them turning into a monster from the inside… and turning on all of their friends…. And if you ever tell anyone I’m in this world… “ The creature moved closer towards Indigo’s face with its fangs extended out, all sharpened. “I will tear into your stomach and tear your guts out!!

“No, of course. No, no issues!” Indigo raised her hands in surrender as sweat ran down her forehead.

The creature then led them to a window for them to crawl through, and raised it open.

“You can escape through here... Once you do, tell all your friends about what you’ve seen. Sunset Shimmer will fall… all of them will fall. But when you tell them what you’ve seen... you will forget you ever saw me… or I will find you… and you’ll have surrendered your right to live… and I will slowly… painfully… mutilate you...”

And with that final line, the monster climbed through the window and the girls never saw them again.

“Come on Lemon, we got to get out of here while we can.”

Soon Lemon pulled herself up on the ledge and climbed out of the window, and she helped pull Indigo through and she escaped as well.

The two leaned against the wall listening in for any sounds, and luckily no sounds were heard. But just to check, Indigo poked her head out at both sides to see, and no one was there.

So the two of them took advantage of no one being around them, and ran down the pathway of the giant mansion, climbing over the locked gate, and down back into the open streets, heading straight for their car and not looking back. The feel of the wind hit their faces as they ran down the sidewalks and luckily made it back into the small town. By the time they got back, they were out of breath.

“Okay… please tell me you have some idea, on, WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!?” Indigo shouted at the top of her lungs.

“I don’t know! You don’t think one of those changelings made it here on Earth, do you?” Lemon asked, while still coughing a bit from the long run.

“I hope not, but if one of them did, we have a serious problem on our hands.” Indigo clutched her knees still trying to catch her breath from the hard running. “Okay, right now, we should head home. We’ll tell them what we saw the Shadowbolts doing tomorrow.”

“But what about that… thing we just saw? Shouldn’t we tell them about it? I think we would probably be killed either way.” Lemon replied.

Indigo took in thought of Lemon’s question. She didn’t want to be killed by the monster, but at the same time, she didn’t want to be hiding crucial information from their friends. So, it looked they had a choice. Either let them be hidden in the dark over that info, or be protected by them with that info.

“Okay. We’ll tell them tomorrow. But, keep your guard up. That thing could be anywhere.”

“Of course. Now lets get out of here."

And so the girls walked to the car, and drove away as fast as they could, hoping for tomorrow would be much better.

Little did any of them know, that the creature from the house stood facing down at the small town, on the roof of Canterlot High school, standing tall and slender.

Beware, Canterlot… A new terror has been born...”


Author's Note

okay, from the original story made here, my OC Smokestack was supposed to have a synthetic limb as a part of his character. Do you guys want to see that back on him, or no?

And now that I've given some description of the creature, want me to find someone to do an art piece on it?

Chapter 5: Amending Fences

Good morning, CHS. Welcome back. I hope you all had a great weekend.” said Principal Celestia’s voice over the intercom. “Just another reminder, the last week of October we will be hosting a Halloween Ball. So get your costumes together and mark your calendars. We hope to see you all there. Thank you, and have a great day, everyone.”

Over in the practice room, the former Shadowbolts joined Sunset and her friends to tell them what they had witnessed as of late.

“So, you think this other Sunset is planning on stealing our Equestrian magic?” Twilight asked.

Indigo and Lemon nodded.

“Hm… This could be worse than I thought.” Sunset said, leaning back in her chair.

“If she knows about the events that happened at CHS over the past few years, then she might even know how you girls made it over to Equestria, or even if the other me came through the portal.” Twilight replied.

Everyone looked at each other, seeing mutual concern in their faces. It's bad enough she’s gathered information on all of the magical anomalies, but if she has knowledge of the portal? Things would take a turn for the worse.

“Although I must ask, how exactly did you two even get out of her home?” Rarity asked.

Lemon and Indigo froze.

“Um…” Lemon said. “W-We can’t tell you…”

“What do you mean?” Sunset asked.

“This… thing... it... " Indigo sighed. "We got out on our own, but we saw this monster that threatened to hunt us down and kill us if we ever told anyone.” Indigo replied.

“Aw, don’t worry about that,” Rainbow said. “We’ll make sure it doesn’t happen. That thing is gonna have to get by us!”

Lemon and Indigo shared a look. As paranoid as they were, it would be admittedly selfish for them to keep to themselves. The fate of their entire world could be at stake. On one hand, they could snitch and risk their own lives, or keep quiet and risk everyone’s lives.

Well, the choice was clear.

“Okay, if you say so…” Lemon replied. “This thing… it's hard to describe. It looks like something of a human and those changelings from Equestria. I think it's a hybrid. And I think it probably is, because it said it was the result of when humans believe they’re the gods, or something.”

Sunset rose an eyebrow. How could a changeling, a creature that feeds off of love, creatures bent on manipulation and masters of deception, make their way to this world?

“And whatever it was, it said that Sunset Shimmer and all of Crystal Prep would fall.” Indigo finished.

A chill was sent down everyone’s spine. This monster that was locked in the other Sunset Shimmer’s basement, could possibly be planning the downfall for Crystal Prep, and it might be hunting for their Sunset Shimmer. And while no one knew what to do, one thing came into their minds, they had to keep their eyes peeled and their ears open for any signs.


Later that day, the former Shadowbolts were sitting in the practice room, trying again to see if they could make amends with an old enemy.

“Are you sure this is gonna work? I highly doubt it will.” Sour asked.

“We have to make up with him at some point, and I say now is the time to do so.” Sunny replied.

“I conclusively believe this isn’t going to work.” Sugarcoat replied.

“Well we have to try!” Indigo declared.

At that moment, stepping in with the same black hoodie, was Coppermane. He froze when he made contact with the five girls. His eyebrows furled, clearly less than thrilled to see them.

“What do you want?” Coppermane sneered. “Come to make my life miserable again?”

“No, dearie. Not at all. We… we want to apologize to you,” Sunny said. “You didn’t deserve our harassment back at Crystal Prep and we want to make it up to you.”

Coppermane didn’t look convinced in the slightest. His eyes were ice-cold.

“Coppermane, you have to believe us,” Sunny said.

“Believe you? Why the hell should I believe you?” Coppermane barked, loudly enough to make Sunny back away a little. “You tortured me everyday. You made my live in constant fear for my life! I almost killed myself because of how miserable I was!”

The girls all gasped, their faces going visibly paler.

“Suicide?” Lemon said.

“Are you seriously surprised by this?” Coppermane sneered. “What did I do to deserve any of that? For that matter, what did Smokestack do? What did Twilight do? What did any of us do?! Why are you asking me to believe you after everything you’ve done to me?”

The girls were dumbfounded. What could they say? What could they possibly say?

“And Sunny,” Coppermane scolded. “All I wanted was to make you happy. That’s all I wanted. Did that really warrant humiliating me in front of the entire school?”

Sunny opened her mouth to retort, but no sound came out. Again, what could she say? They took the most understanding guy in the world, and turned him into an impenetrable brick wall.

“Coppermane,” Indigo said. “If you just give us a chance--”

“Stop,” Sunny said.

Sunny’s friends looked at her with shocked expressions.

“What?” they asked.

“Just… just stop,” Sunny said, burying her face in her palm. “He’s right… about everything. What are we doing?”

“Sunny, we promised we’d make amends with everyone,” Sour said. “Coppermane is part of everyone.”

“Well, we just can’t!” Sunny snapped. “Face it, we hurt him too much. We almost drove him to suicide. We can’t undo this!”

“But what about Smokestack?” Lemon interjected. “We made up with him!”

“That wasn’t the same. We hurt him physically, but Coppermane… we hurt him emotionally. And… I hurt him. I broke his heart. I shattered it. I made him cry in front of the whole school, and for what? For having a crush on me? This… this is all my fault.” Sunny couldn’t hold back her tears any longer. She didn’t even care that her friends and Coppermane were watching. It was too much. It was a hopeless endeavor. She looked at Coppermane, but his face was obscured by her own tears. “Coppermane, I don’t expect you to forgive us, and I don’t even expect the benefit of the doubt, but… I’m sorry! I’m so, so sorry! I’ve felt so guilty after what I did to you. I shouldn’t have hurt you, and I have no excuses. It was unforgivable, and… I’m sorry. I’m so, so, so sorry.” She fell to her knees, her face buried in her palms as she bawled.

Minutes passed as Sunny cried her eyes out on the floor, in plain sight of everyone in the room.

Sunny’s friends looked at Coppermane, but his eyes weren’t cold like before. His face conveyed shock… and empathy.

“S-Sunny?” Coppermane said.

“Don’t!” Sunny barked. “Just don’t! We know you hate us, and you have every reason to! I… I… oh gosh, I’m so stupid!”

“Sunny…” Coppermane said.

“I’m so sorry, Coppermane!” Sunny screamed. “I’m… I’m… I’m so sorry!”

Indigo was about to get up and comfort Sunny, but was stopped when Coppermane held his hand out, gesturing her to stop. Indigo and the rest of them were a bit confused, until Coppermane did the unthinkable.

Without saying another word, Coppermane knelt down beside Sunny, and pulled her into a big hug.

Sunny gasped loudly at the sudden embrace, and was even more shocked to see a familiar meadow of coppery hair next to her.

“C-Coppermane?” Sunny cooed. “Wh-What are you doing?”

“What does it look like?” Coppermane asked.

Sunny sighed, and wrapped his arms around him in return, resting her head on his shoulder.

“I… I thought you hated me…” Sunny said.

Coppermane released her from his embrace, and helped her stand back up.

“I didn’t believe you at first,” Coppermane said, “but those tears were honest.”

Sunny lit up. There was no way…

“Y-You believe me?” Sunny asked.

Coppermane nodded. “Look, it’ll take a long time for you to win my trust, Sunny. For all of you. But… I learned from a special someone that everyone deserves a chance. And I’ve learned how powerful and wonderful the benefit of the doubt can be… so I’m willing to give it to you all.”

The girls all gasped, gaining big smiles.

“You won’t regret this, Coppermane!” Indigo said.

“We’ll show you we’ve changed,” Lemon said.

“I’m honestly pretty surprised,” Sugarcoat said, before turning her frown into a smile. “But I’m thankful.”

“This will be great!” Sour said. “How could anyone forgive us for what we’ve done?”

“Coppermane… thank you,” Sunny said. “I promise, we’re serious. You won’t regret this.”

“We’ll see,” Coppermane said. “Now, if you’ll excuse me, I was going to practice for a little bit, so…”

“Say no more!” Indigo said. “C’mon girls.”

With that, the girls began to walk out of the room as Coppermane made his way to the piano.

“Oh, Coppermane?” Sunny said, lingering by the door.

“Hmm?” Coppermane said.

“Who taught you about giving people chances?” Sunny asked.

A big smile grew on Coppermane’s face. “Only the most amazing girl in the world. The one who makes the sun rise and fall in my world.”

“Your girlfriend?” Sunny asked.

Coppermane nodded. “My princess, yep.”

“I’m glad you found someone to make you happy,” Sunny said.

“Thanks,” Coppermane said.

“See you later, then?” Sunny asked.

“I guess so,” Coppermane said. “Bye.”

“Bye, dearie,” Sunny said. “And thanks again.”

With that, Sunny left the room, leaving Coppermane alone to practice his music.


Midnight struck, and the suburban town of Canterlot was in silence amongst the pitch-black night. The streetlights were illuminated the empty streets.

Over in the store/house of Bon Bon’, was sending a text over to best friend, Lyra Heartstrings. She giggled at some of the comments Lyra made over things in the past, and she agreed with her about how the former Bolts shouldn’t have come to their school.

But suddenly a clattering sound was heard downstairs and it gave her the chills. In one quick motion, she dialed for Lyra’s number.

Bonnie, what’s wrong?” Lyra asked.

“I think there’s someone in the store. I’m gonna check it out.” Bon Bon whispered.

But what if it's a criminal? You need me to call someone?” Lyra asked with fear.

“I’m sure it's probably just an animal.”

Bon Bon crept downstairs in her PJs, while also keeping the phone to her ear and holding a flashlight in her other hand, keeping an eye out.

She moved around a corner, keeping her eyes peeled for any signs of danger. After unlocking a door, she moved into the front area of the store to see if anyone had broken in, but there wasn’t anything. The front store door wasn’t opened, the windows weren’t broken, and not even the ceiling or wall vents weren’t opened up.

“Where is that coming from?” Bon Bon whispered to herself.

She heard the clattering again, and this time, she got a clearer sound of where it was coming from. It was coming from… the bakery kitchen?

Bon Bon slowly tip-toed her way into the back kitchen looking for any signs of anyone, but nothing. She saw some of the candy treats she had made for tomorrow were still fresh and sitting on the countertop, but when she turned to the left she saw some of the chocolate chip cookies that were supposed to be freshly made all looked like an animal had broken in and gnawed through them. But what made these stand out from regular bites, was that it looked like it had been devoured by something the size of a person or a lion.

“I hope it's just rats.” Bon Bon quivered.

Bon Bon then jumped slightly at the sound of the radio in the kitchen playing an old song.

Bon Bon pondered as to why the song was playing out of nowhere, but that was the least of her worries right now. She shined a light around some more, and found something else that stood out. She moved toward a cabinet, and found a sticky residue leaking from the open cabinet.

“Ugh…disgusting...”

But a new sound had alarmed her. This one was a little more terrifying. She heard snarling and chewing. She turned the light around and saw a tail slithering from around a corner. She was scared to move a muscle, she didn’t want to get close to whatever it was. But she moved anyway.

She shined the light on the slender and dagger-tipped tail and found the rest of the body it was attached to. The creature was found feasting on some cakes that were freshly made.

She gasped in terror and dropped the flashlight, which got the creature’s attention. It turned around with demonic turquoise eyes and tackled her to the ground, causing Bon Bon to drop her phone.

She breathed heavily trying to stay calm, but it was nearly impossible to with a monster staring at her and having tackled her to the ground, and spoke to her with the demonic and distorted voice.

Are you the one they call... Bon Bon?

“P-Please don’t kill me!” Bon Bon yelled trying to keep herself calm.

“I only need to know one thing. Where is Shimmer?”

But Bon Bon had blacked out, and didn’t wake back up, all while Lyra kept screaming into the phone.

Bonnie!? Bonnie!? Are you there!?”

All the creature did was smash her phone with the dagger tail, while the electricity sparks kept sizzling. As the creature got up from the ground, it looked back around in the kitchen. It didn't pay attention, but there was a blender that was plugged in without the plastic container on top. And without even paying attention, its own hand went right at the blades, accidentally turning it on, and making severe cuts into its skin.

"ARGH!!!" The monster roared before swinging its tail at the blender, ripping it from the plug in the wall.

"Sweet Celestia, that hurts!" The monster roared, holding its wounds. Several drips of green blood fell onto the floor. The monster itself growled and snarled some more, but then it stopped and felt ringing in its head. It held onto his own head, dropping to his knees from the agony, its eyes squinting from the pain.

His eyes opened up, and he gasped when he looked.

"Wait... where am I... what is this place?" The monster spoke in a much clearer voice. But it rattled its head, and the snarling demon voice returned once more. “No matter… You may fear me… but there is only one to fear. Sunset Shimmer will fall. All will fall….

Chapter 6: Entity

Friday Morning

The next day at school, the students were becoming worried. They saw Bon Bon coming to school with Lyra, Octavia, and Vinyl, but she was shaken up so much she didn’t say a word, and kept shivering. The monster she encountered last night sure left its scar on her.

The staff was starting to get worried, and so they tried to get a professional to talk to her, but that didn’t work either. They looked towards the other option, which was get some of the girls who have handled magic before to talk with them.

During the lunch period, Sunset, Coppermane and Fluttershy came down into the counselor's office where Lyra, Octavia, and Vinyl were, and took a seat in two chairs.

“I tried talking to her, but she wouldn’t listen,” Lyra said. “I don’t even know what happened last night.”

“Well, maybe we can,” Sunset said. “We’ve dealt with this kind of thing before, maybe it’d be best if we listen.”

Principal Celestia closed the door.

“Alright, Bon Bon, it's okay.” Celestia assured Bon Bon.

Bon Bon’s attention was brought onto the classmates, sitting in front of her, along with Lyra on her left, and Vinyl and Octavia sitting on her right.

“Any chance you can start from the beginning?” Coppermane asked.

Bon Bon nodded, took a deep breath, and began speaking.

“Okay, um… it was last night. I was in bed, texting with Lyra, having a good time. And, it was around midnight, so late in the evening.”

“Okay.” Sunset replied.

“And everything was alright, but then I heard a clattering noise coming from downstairs in the shop. I thought there might have been some rats making a mess again.”

“So, what happened next?” Fluttershy asked.

“I walked downstairs, and I kept my phone with me. I called Lyra telling her about it, just in case something dangerous was happening. She was worried for my safety and suggested I call the police, but I didn’t.”

“Alright, continue.” Sunset replied.

Bon Bon’s hands were getting a little shaky, and she kept tapping her left foot on the ground.

“I entered the kitchen, and it looked like there may have been somewhat of an infestation. The food I had set up to be sold for the shop were all gnawed through… but… these bites… they weren’t rat bites. They were like something the size of maybe a lion ate through them. I kept looking, and there was also a bit of sticky stuff on my cabinets. I didn’t know what it was. But then I turned around and... “

Bon Bon froze just thinking about what she had witnessed last night.

“That… that thing… the… monster!” she exclaimed, sobbing into her hands at the images.

“Can you tell us what it looked like?” Sunset asked.

Bon Bon took a deep breath, trying to talk through her fearful tears. “It was muscular. It… It looked a little bug-like. There’s no way it was human. There’s no way! I-It had a tail. There were fangs. I… I never seen anything like it. And… It attacked me! Worse… it spoke! It asked where you were, but I blacked out! I don’t know what it wants, but… it left me! What if it comes back?! I… I…”

Bon Bon broke down crying, and Lyra came over to comfort her.

Sunset bit her lip. This thing that Indigo and Lemon had described was now on the prowl. But, one question still bugged her, what is this thing after? Why her? What is it about herself that this thing wanted?


The day was over, and the girls, along with Flash and Coppermane decided to have another sleepover. Something they did on a semi-regular basis. Usually it was to just have fun, and occasionally work on some homework in the company of their friends. However, this time around, the primary focus was on the new updates about this… monster. The place? Pinkie Pie's.

“So this monster that scared Bon Bon, you think is coming after you?” Flash asked.

“Yes, I do,” Sunset said. “If it was asking where I was, it might be after me. But I don’t know why.”

“Maybe it’s not after you! Maybe it's after something you own!” Pinkie said.

“Why would a changeling from Equestria be after something she owned?” Coppermane asked.

“Well changelings are very intelligent. Maybe the person that was fused with the changeling knows something that we don’t,” Twilight replied.

“But why? Why would someone fuse a human being with a changeling?” Rarity asked.

“I don’t know, but that’s something we have to find out.” Twilight replied.

“Whoa, whoa, whoa, are you suggesting we have to get close to that thing?” Rainbow asked. She was not looking to get anywhere near it.

“I’m not saying that, but if the creature gave some vital information every time it encountered someone--” Twilight started.

“It will lead us to who made it, who it is, and what it wants.” Flash finished.

“Exactly.” Twilight replied with a smile.

“Well whatever this creature is, I hope it doesn’t do any harm to us. Heaven knows we’re dealing with enough danger with the Crystal Preppers.” Rarity replied.

“Yeah, we are.” Coppermane replied.

"I agree. But maybe we should do something that won't stress us out for a bit. Should we work on some homework?" Fluttershy asked.

"Sure."

"Okay."

"Sounds good!"

"Actually, I've got to look at something real quick. Can you just give me a few moments?"

"Uh, sure. Go right ahead." Flash said.

"Thanks. Oh, Pinkie, did you by any chance... you know..."

Pinkie was confused for about two seconds, before catching on. "Oh! Yeah, its right upstairs. Its in the guest bedroom."

Sunset gave her thanks and left the group to make her way upstairs. Upon walking up, she made a turn around a corner and walked right into the guest bedroom. On the floor next to the bed was a giant trunk that was sealed up.

She opened it up, her eyes catching the contents inside. There were some of Smokestack's possessions. And one in particular caught her very eye. A small tape player and headphones within the very bottom of the box. Taking it out carefully, she sat on the bed and placed the player on her lap. And attached to the top of the player was a small note, to Sunset.

She looked at the note once again, sighing in sadness. It read 'To my beautiful Sunset, I leave you this should I ever pass away. I know you will take great care of it, and I know you adore the classics, just like I do'.

Sunset looked into the clear plastic of the player, seeing the red cassette tape resting inside with a strip of tape labeling it 'Retro Classics'. Her finger pressed the play button, and music began to slowly wind up and play from the speaker.

Sunset felt tears welling up in her eyes. She frowned as she looked at the cassette player, and sniffled.

Coppermane was returning to the main room after a quick run to the restroom, but stopped when he heard… crying?

He followed the sound, and soon found himself at the foot of the staircase. It was coming from the second floor. He walked up, and at the top he saw a familiar fiery red hairdo out of the corner of his eye. He looked and saw Sunset with her face buried in her hands, the song still continuing to play.

He didn’t waste another second.

“Sunset? Are you okay?”

The puffy cheeks, bloodshot eyes, and tears leaking from her face shown she wasn’t okay.

“No…” She whimpered.

“Oh, Sunset…” Coppermane held Sunset in a hug as she cried onto his shoulder.

“It’s just… he’s... “

Coppermane looked Sunset in the eye.

“You miss Smokestack, don’t you?”

Sunset nodded somberly.

“I’m so sorry Sunset. I wish I could do something to help.”

“Well there isn’t. Unless Smokie just magically comes back from the dead, I don’t know if I’ll ever get over this.”

Coppermane wasn’t sure of what to do, but an idea had popped into his head.

“Hey, what if you told me some stuff about Smokestack. Maybe tell me some sweet things about him. Maybe that could work?” Coppermane asked. “Besides, I don’t really know that much, and I’ve been wanting to know a little more about him.”

Sunset sighed. Her eyes were filled with such heavy amounts of pain, but eventually a small smile appeared.

“Coppermane, where do I even start?” Sunset said. “He was just so… heroic. Saving CHS from a fire, saving our world from the Changelings, being so nice to me… and sweet. And surviving Neon Lights and his group of monsters…”

“Wait, what?” Coppermane asked.

“Smokie was bullied by Neon Lights and his friends when he was at Crystal Prep,” Sunset said. “He’s the reason for the fake eye.”

“Well, we have the same bully then,” Coppermane said.

“Really?” Sunset said.

“Yeah…” Coppermane said. “But this isn’t about me, it’s about you. What else about Smokestack?"
Sunset sighed again, and a tear trickled down her cheek.

“Coppermane, I’d love to go on and on about how amazing Smokie was… but it just hurts to much to talk about right now,” Sunset said, her lips trembling.

“I understand,” Coppermane said, pulling her into another hug. “Just remember that we’re here for you, okay?”

“Thanks,” Sunset said, reciprocating his embrace.

Coppermane patted her back, and he pulled from the embrace. He looked down at the cassette player that Sunset had stopped.

"Is that a cassette player?" Coppermane asked.

"Y-Yeah..." Sunset sniffled. "This actually belonged to Smokie. He... he told me to hang onto this in case he... he..."

"I understand." Coppermane nodded. "I didn't know he had one of those."

"These aren't even made anymore. He bought this because... he told me the older songs from the 80s and back reminded him of home. Reminded him of what he loved, and... of us." Sunset looked back down at the player and sighed. "And now its just sitting here collecting dust."

Coppermane scratched his chin and offered a friendly smile.

"Hey. What if you kept that with you, like you always have a piece of him with you?"

Sunset for the second time, actually smiled.

"That... that's actually not a bad idea. And there's a clip for this to hang onto, so..."

"You'll be able to have a piece of him wherever you go." Coppermane nodded.

Sunset wiped another tear away. "In fact... I think I might take this down with me."

After getting the strength to get back up on her feet, Sunset and Coppermane walked down the stairs to where the rest of their friends were waiting. All of them had concerned looks when Sunset first saw their faces.

"Sunset? Are you okay?"

"I'm fine. Really, I am." Sunset said with a genuine voice. "I just... I know he's gone but... it doesn't mean everything of him is gone."

Sunset showed the cassette player in her hands. "I'll always have a piece of him with me. No matter where I go."

"Is there music in that tape?"

"There is, and that's one of the reasons I brought it down. If you guys don't mind, maybe, we could uh...."

"I don't see any problem with that Sugarcube. Play something from that tape." Applejack grinned.

"Yeah, come on! I want to hear what that guy's always had on those tapes." Rainbow added.

Sunset gave a smile. "Alright. I'll play it."

All of them gathered around a table, sitting down with drinks. Plenty of hot chocolate to go around, and the company of friends to help each other in these dark times.

"This one goes out to you Smokie... may you rest in peace wherever you may go." Sunset said.

"Amen." Everyone spoke.

Sunset's finger pressed play on the cassette player, which began to wind up the tape and play a song.

Watching every motion
In my foolish lover's game
On this endless ocean
Finally lovers know no shame

Sunset smiled, listening to the song. She would have it with her forever, just like the gold necklace around her neck, as tokens of his memory. And she would always treasure it.


As night struck over, everyone had fallen asleep. Well almost everyone…

Coppermane tried getting himself to fall asleep but he just couldn’t sleep. Unable to think of anything else to do, he got up, and snuck his way out of the room without making a creak in the ground which would have awakened Flash.

He moved through the hallway and looked into the girl's bedroom and saw Fluttershy peacefully asleep. He smiled at the sight. His princess was just the cutest thing. He blew her a kiss before proceeding downstairs.

Coppermane felt a little thirsty, so he decided to get some water. After turning off the faucet, he took a seat at the table on the island counter top, and just sat there, drinking, alone in his thoughts. Most of what was going on in his head was the success of making amends with the Bolts, and another successful day with his friends.

“Maybe there’s some hope after all. All we gotta do now is deal with the Shadow… Bolts….”

Copper didn’t finish his sentence, for something had caught his eye. He saw some sticky residue on the floor, gleaming in the small kitchen light. He crouched down to look at it, placed on finger on it, and took a closer look at it.

“What is this?”

A sound had halted his attention. The sound of a music. He stepped up to listen, and heard the sound coming from one of the rooms. He moved towards one of the rooms, getting a clearer indication of where it was coming from. The sound of 80s music and the sound of the pain and groaning of something of a monster. Both sounds alone made him worried.

“Hey, who’s there? Hello?” Coppermane peaked through the cracked door frame and from the moonlight and a bit of light that was turned on, he saw some green liquid spilled on the floor.

“Wait. Is that… blood?”

He moved his eyes up and saw the silhouette of a creature, holding onto his wounded wrist which was cut open, snarling and growling as he tried to hold it together with several towels and bandages within the room. And a very odd distortion of voices mixing throughout.

"I cannot... no, I can't fall apart! She will most certainly want us to find her... She's dead! She'll never return again! That's what you believe..."

“What the…”

And in quick flash, lightning flashed, and thunder clapped making the room dark. Once the light came back on, the figure in the room had vanished, making Coppermane gasp.

“Where...wait… he was...what the hell was that?”

Hoping that was only a figment of his imagination, he walked back over to the kitchen and splashed hot water onto his face, hopefully getting the image out of his head. As the water dripped down his face, he wiped it off with a washcloth.

“That… no. That’s just stupid.” Coppermane talked to himself, praying he was only seeing things.

After considering telling the girls what he saw, he was about to head on upstairs until he stopped to see Fluttershy standing with her back turned in the doorframe on his right.

“Hey, Fluttershy.” Coppermane said with a smile. "You’re up late.”

No reply. She just stood still.

“Fluttershy?” Coppermane coaxed. “Hello?”

And out of nowhere… music. Music just started playing. Coppermane looked around. The stereo system was turned off, and his phone wasn’t playing anything. He looked on the island table and gasped. The same tape player that Sunset brought down was right there, playing a cassette tape. And there were stains of green on some of the plastic.

Take my breath away...
Take my breath away...

“Fluttershy? Babe, did you start that?”

Fluttershy lifted her head up, and turned around to face Coppermane. But that face… that face… it wasn’t Fluttershy’s. Her eyes were black voids, and she was smiling deviously. Coppermane held back a loud shriek at the sight. A quiet giggle bellowed, sending chills down his spine.

The lights sizzled out, becoming dark, and once they flipped on, she was gone. Coppermane’s heart was pounding. He looked everywhere to see where she was, but no signs were available.

Get out…” A whisper erupted, followed by a creepy yet clear voice.

Are you him? Are you the one who turned your back on him when he just wanted your help... Are you the one who needs to die? Well, it really doesn’t matter…

Coppermane tried slowly backing away, but the minute he turned his head around, he got a surprise grab to the throat and was pinned against a wall, up in the air, with his feet not touching the ground.

The creature’s threatening eyes leered at Coppermane. He breathed heavily as he was held to the wall by the black claw of the monster.

“Let… me...go!” Coppermane said, trying to speak with the creature clamped around his throat.

Coppermane tried to get himself free, but he had no luck. The humanoid changeling was too strong, and he could only look into those scary, turquoise eyes.

Where do you think you’re gonna go? There’s nowhere to hide… nowhere to run… so tell me... what are you afraid of? Maybe you fear… isolation? Being all alone with nowhere to go… as the walls close in on you, the silence is deafening…. or maybe you fear… losing a loved one? The only girl meant for you? The only one who ever listened to you? The one that saved you from ending it all?

Coppermane said nothing. His pounding heart rang in his ear like a bell.

No one survives in this world. What was once a world full of joy and friendship is now slowly becoming a void of chaos and anarchy… with the blood of the innocent… man turning on one another, beginning war after war… thanks to you, however, not so innocent blood has been shed...

“I don’t know what you’re talking about!”

The one you call... Neon Lights. His blood has been shed over at Crystal Prep… and now… his new desire is for your blood to be shed… to be splattered at Canterlot High… in front of the girl you love. In front of… FLUTTERSHY! I believe a rather painful death is in order. I believe suffering would do good things. For his soul-- HIS SOUL…. But for now… by setting your eyes on me… you’ve surrendered your right to live. This isn’t your world to rule…. SHE will rise again… now DIE!

In one quick motion, a claw shrieked across Coppermane’s face, and he was tossed onto the kitchen concrete on his back like a sack of potatoes, and he blacked out.

"I... agh, ow..." The monster's voice slowly started to die down to a much normal tone, but it kept on switching from normal to distorted demon. "I... I will be back soon enough, and I will finish you all off!"


Coppermane’s vision was slowly restored as the shapes of his friends came into focus above him. He could hear their voices speaking overhead. His vision returned, and the first thing he saw was the face of his beautiful princess.

“Coppermane, are you okay?” Fluttershy asked, cupping his face. She looked terrified.

“What happened to you man?” Flash asked.

Coppermane pulled himself up, feeling the scratches around his throat and the bit of the scratch across his face.

“Wh-What happened?” Coppermane asked.

“Sunset's amulet has been stolen!” Pinkie exclaimed.

“Wait, what?” Coppermane asked, trying to get up but faltering as soon as a sharp pain rang through his head, bringing him right back down to the floor.

Fluttershy took his hand. “You poor thing. Come with me to the couch.”

Coppermane smiled and allowed Fluttershy to help him up. He leaned on her as she led him to the couch. Everyone else followed.

“Here,” Fluttershy said as he sat down. “I’ll be right back.”

Fluttershy went back to the kitchen as everyone else gathered around.

“Someone came into the house in the middle of the night and stole the amulet around Sunset’s neck.” Applejack replied.

“Hold on, why is bad that the amulet is stolen? I don’t quite understand.” Coppermane asked.

Just then, Fluttershy returned with some hydrogen peroxide and cotton balls. She poured some and applied it on Coppermane’s wounds.

“Thanks,” he said, making Fluttershy smile.

"That's.. that's not good..." Sunset paced. "Wait. Coppermane, how did you get down here? What do you remember? Did you see what happened to it?"

Memories of last night suddenly flooded Coppermane’s mind.

“Wait a minute... I didn't see it last night, but I did see something that's as equally bad.” he said.

“What do you mean?” Flash asked.

“I came down in the middle of the night to get a drink, and I heard a strange noise in the other room. I went to see and it looked like someone was trying to patch up their wound. I thought I was just seeing things, but this creature, thing, pinned me against the wall. I honestly thought I was gonna die. But all he did was just mentally scare me reminding me of what I’m afraid of most, and it said something like Neon Lights was going to die. After that, he scratched my face, tossed me towards the ground and I blacked out.”

Everyone was now concerned. But a new thought emerged into their minds. This creature was hunting for Sunset. And it came into Sunset’s house, yet it didn’t kill her. Was it after the dangerous amulet, or was it after something the other Shimmer possessed?

“That’s not good, that’s very bad! If that changeling took it, then he’s probably causing destruction right about now, and he could be planning to get the changelings over here from Equestria, and that will only escalate our problems even more since we have the Crystal Prep kids and my human equivalent to deal with, and having a changeling army here on Earth will only make things worse than it already is! And I promised Smokie I wouldn't let anything bad happened to it, but now something bad could be happening to it right now!” Sunset yelled.

She buried her face into her hands, trying to keep herself together. But everyone could hear her quietly crying. She was dealing with a major amount of stress. And didn’t help that the situation they were in just got worse….


Author's Note

Predictions?

And please, feel free to comment. I would like to know what you all think of what's going on. :twilightblush: Please.

Chapter 7: Revelations

Lucky for Sunset Shimmer, the amulet didn’t travel very far. For it along with the monster had only gone so far as to fall asleep after a night of chaos and they ended up in an alleyway in the small town of Canterlot.

The changeling hybrid opened his eyes slowly, flinching bright sunlight.

Ugh… my head. Wait… where am I? What… what happened? How did I get here?

The hybrid then felt the side of his left hand, feeling the pain along with a few droplets of green blood. It looked at its palm seeing the green blood dripping down, and gasped slightly.

Green blood… why am I bleeding green… more importantly, why is it coming out of my system…”

After looking around at where he was, it discovered his body was still in its monstrous state. Trying with what little strength it had, it attempted to pull itself up but it lacked the strength to get up.

I must go. I need to go... I need to find... Sunset...

The changeling hybrid started to lose his vision and soon he ended up falling onto the ground face first into the ground blacking out.


Over at a food court, the former Shadow 5 were all with their food awaiting for Coppermane to arrive. He had called them over in a request to talk to them and giving updates.

“Did anyone hear from Sunset?” Sunny asked.

“Sort of. She kept crying and I didn’t understand a single word she said.” Sugarcoat replied.

Everyone nodded in agreement.

“What was she even crying about?” Lemon asked.

“The amulet she was asked to watch was stolen.” a familiar voice said.

Their heads turned to look at who talked and saw Coppermane. Their eyes bulged to see the huge scratch that went down his left cheek and reaching above his eye. There were still some marks showing, but most of it was shown to have healed.

“Dude, did you mess with a baby tiger down at the animal shelter again?” Lemon asked.

“No, I didn’t. I had a run in with that monster that you and Indigo met the night you broke in the other Sunset's house.” Coppermane said as he took a seat next to Sunny.

“You finally saw that changeling hybrid?” Indigo asked.

“Yeah I did. You were right. That thing is scary.” Coppermane shuddered.

“Did it do anything else to you?” Sour asked.

“Yeah, it did. It held me against the wall and taunted me with all my deepest fears, and said that Neon Lights was gonna die and… this last thing that’s actually got me worried the most.”

“What did it say?” Sunny asked.

“This thing said something like ‘This isn’t your world to rule. She will rise again’ or something.” Coppermane replied.

The girls looked at each other concerned, something about that seemed off.

“You don’t think the “she” that thing was referring to is…” Sour began.

“I highly doubt that’s the case. She died from the explosion, remember?” Sugarcoat replied.

“We didn’t see the explosion. For all we know, she could have found a way to make it out alive.” Sour said.

“Who are you talking about?” Coppermane asked.

“Queen Chrysalis.” Indigo replied.

“Wait, is she the changeling queen that kidnapped the girls?”

“Yep,” they all said.

“But I thought she was killed from the explosion in Canterlot.” Coppermane said.

“Well that’s the other thing, we were evacuated from area, and we didn’t see what happened. So… that’s…” Sunny began, but she soon paused, taking a deep thought. What if the Queen didn’t die from the explosion? What if she was still alive? But how?

“Well if she is alive, we’ll take her down. There’s no way we’re letting those things take over.” Indigo smirked. "We beat them before, we can do it again!"

Coppermane smiled in relief and as he looked to the others he noticed something he didn’t see before. All of them had different wounds and cuts on them like if they were recently hurt.

“So… you said you girls made up with Smokestack, right?” Coppermane asked.

“Yeah. We did.” Indigo quietly responded.

“How exactly?” Coppermane raised a brow.

“We got our butts handed to us fighting changelings in Equestria as well as nearly died and got an understanding of how dangerous Canterlot High’s job is of keeping the magic safe.” Sugarcoat bluntly replied.

Coppermane blinked with a deranged look. “So... is that why a bunch of you girls look like you were recently attacked?”

“Yep, pretty much. I got the scar from crawling around in the sewers.” Indigo replied and pointed to the red scar going down her left eye.

“I got the knee bandage from a bite.” Sugarcoat said pulling her pant leg up showing the bandage wrapped around her knee.

“As for why Sour and Lemon don’t really have scratches is because they got chucked into an empty realm and stayed there floating for a majority of our battle time.” Sunny replied.

Awkward silence fell.

“...Oookayyyy?” Coppermane replied hesitantly.

“Why do you ask?” Lemon asked.

“Well, something kind of got me curious with my conversation with Sunset. Our Sunset. She said Neon Lights was the reason he had a fake eye, but she didn't tell me why. Not that I want to know, but...” Coppermane finished.

The table went completely silent and the girls stared at each other.

“Please don’t ask what we did, please don’t ask what we did, please don’t ask what we did…” Lemon whispered to herself.

“I wanted to ask, why did any of you hurt him?”

Indigo paused. She really didn’t want to tell him about what they did, especially after they were about to make up with one another. But they knew he was gonna find out eventually.

“You… you promise you won’t walk away from us when we tell you?” Sunny asked.

“Yeah… why?”

“Well, some of the stuff we did was just… evil. And after you gave us the benefit of the doubt, I… I didn’t want to tell you because we thought you wouldn’t trust us again.”

Coppermane could tell Sunny wasn’t lying. But as much as they were right, he had to know.

“Sunny, I promise I won’t walk away from you girls. Just tell me what you did.” Coppermane replied.

Indigo gave a sigh and said the first response. “Well, first thing we have to tell you. We never wanted... We... We never wanted to hurt Smokie. None of us did, but... we had no choice. We were blackmailed into hurting him.”

Coppermane’s eyes widened a bit. “But, by who?”

Lemon gulped. “Neon Lights.”

Coppermane groaned. “I thought so. Why did he blackmail you?”

“From what we remember, after the Friendship Games, he and his groupies began bullying everyone to doing what they wanted, one of them being Smokestack. They blackmailed us into hurting him with them because if not they’d post some… inappropriate pictures that no one should ever have.”

“Ouch…” Coppermane said.

“Actually, we’re all to blame. Mostly it was Neon though.” Sour said.

“Well, what did they have you guys do?” Coppermane asked.

“All of us were sent at different times to beat him up. Always to catch him off guard when he never saw us. Shower rooms, lockers, empty classrooms with a trap, the usual stuff you know. But... Neon Lights went too far. On one night, he beat him up really hard, and Smokestack's face got slammed into a glass window, breaking it. After that, glass shard hit one of his eyes really bad.” Sugarcoat bluntly replied.

Coppermane’s eyes bulged out of his head and his mouth expressed great amount of terror.

“Good god... that’s terrible!”

The girls nodded.

“We all still regret everything we’ve done. Now he’s dead, and everyone at CHS is still giving us a hard time about what we did to him… and you.” Indigo replied.

Coppermane suddenly became intrigued.

“What do you mean including me?”

“Everyone at CHS hates us for what we did to Smokie and you.” Sunny responded.

“I don’t think they’ll forget what we did for a long time.” Lemon replied.

“Well, I can see why. But how about this? Next week, on Monday, I’ll try and tell everyone to stop picking on you girls and tell them that my disputes with you five are over.” Coppermane offered.

The five of them paused for a moment and all gave each other nods. It seemed like a fair response.

“I think that’s a yes.” Indigo said.

“Perfect.” Coppermane said. "

“Hey, since you’re here, you want lunch?” Sunny offered.

“I don’t see why not. But after this, I need to go shopping for some Halloween supplies. Pinkie Pie needed us to pick up some things since she's pretty busy at the Oldies Diner.” Coppermane said as he took a menu with all of them.

As Coppermane ate with the girls, they were all in deep conversation, mostly discussing their plans for the upcoming Halloween party. But one thing on everyone’s mind was this. The had enough information on what their threats were, they just had to figure out what did human Sunset Shimmer want from this whole deal?


MEANWHILE

A car sat out in the front of the abandoned home that belonged to Smokestack. And in the car were three Crystal Prep boys.

"Alright boys. You ready for this?" Neon asked.

"Yeah. Lets go."

"But be alert. These neighborhoods aren't empty you know." Jet Set nodded.

All three of them stepped out of the car and walked up on the pathway going up to the front door.

"What if someone's home?" Royal asked.

"I doubt anyone's home." Neon replied.

"Can you at least knock?"

Neon sighed. He placed his hand on the door and knocked a few times. But as he knocked, the door just slowly moved open. The door wasn't even locked.

The three boys eyes went down on the door handle as it opened up on its own with nothing supporting it.

"Well how about that, the door's unlocked." Royal grinned.

"So... salvage time?" Neon asked.

Jet grinned at Neon. "Salvage time.


As time went on, the three boys managed to scalpel a good amount of gear that was locked up and hidden away in the dwelling. Not surprisingly, the boys found a huge collection of tech and spare parts that Smokestack had taken with him from a junk yard; probably for creating more gadgets.

“Did we get everything?” Royal asked.

“Well most of the items we were able to access, everything else is just too impossible to break through.” Jet replied.

“Okay, so does that mean we finally let the place burn?” Royal asked.

“Yes, it does.” Neon replied sounding unsure, making his friends concerned.

“Neon are you okay?” Jet asked.

“Ah, no, actually.” Neon replied.

“How come?” Royal asked.

Neon took a deep breath and spoke.

“Is… Is what we’re doing… right?”

Royal and Jet looked at each other with confused faces.

“What do you mean?” Royal asked.

“Is what, we’re doing, right here and right now, right?” Neon asked.

“When did you get so concerned about that? What we are doing is right, we’re putting an end to world destruction.” Jet replied.

“Oh… right.” Neon responded.

Royal and Jet got back to more loading up the car, while Neon looked at the front of the house in ruins. He couldn’t help but just feel a little bit bad that they were stealing things from a dead guy.

“We’re gonna get this stuff over to Sunset. You want the honor of burning the place down?” Royal asked.

“Yeah, I would. Go on ahead, I’ll catch up.” Neon replied.

"I'll go pay a little visit to Coppermane, along with a little friend of mine..." Jet Set said, raising up a silver weapon in his hands.

With that, Jet and Royal drove off in their truck leaving Neon to look back to the house and talk to himself, and supposedly to the spirit of Smokestack.

“Hey, Smokie. How are you doing? Well, I assume you’re doing much better since you’re dead and far away from me.” Neon laughed.

His eyes gazed towards the open door, and the lights that were still sizzling with electricity.

“You know… I remember when we were actually friends. Did... did you have to go? What's so special about CHS that made you decide to leave us? You couldn't tell us why, could you? No of course not… you… you had to go out and die.” Neon said with his voice breaking up.

Neon rubbed his hands over his eyes trying to clear the tears from his face, and then once he opened them he got such a shock of what he saw standing in front of him. He thought he was seeing someone standing right in front of him, but he wasn’t so sure.

He shook his head violently trying to get the image out of his head, and once his eyes opened, it wasn’t there.

“Get a grip on yourself, Neon. You’re just seeing things. He’s dead. He doesn’t matter anymore.” Neon said to himself.

“Neon….. Neon….” A voice whispered.

The voice sent chills down Neon’s spine. There couldn’t have been anyone inside the house, could there? The sound of thunder made him shriek a bit and looked up to see the stormy clouds.

“Oh, right. There’s supposed to be a thunderstorm today.” Neon said.

Neon quickly walked inside just to get out of the storm. But as he looked inside again he groaned. There were giant holes int he top of the house, and so now there was rain dropping on the inside. But he wasn't gonna let a little rain bother him. He began to walk around the house, just to make sure no one else was inside. He walked into the kitchen, nothing. He walked into the living room, nothing. Where was that noise coming from?

He opened a door which led him into Smokestack's bedroom still messy as it was last time he was there. He could see lots of clothes scattered about, bed not made, a few knick-knacks on the floor, and much more. He looked down, and picked one up to take a look. The toy he analyzed was looking like a small white wolf that looked as if it could form a cassette tape.

“Oh, I didn’t know you were a fan of Mighty Morphers.” Neon said before putting it back down.

He continued to look around and found a huge board on the wall with several amounts of push pins and photos attached to it, looking as if all of the pictures were all linked together. This one was just like their Sunset, what with the linking the magical occurrences over at CHS.

“So you were also curious about the magic anomalies too.”

Neon then turned his head and from he saw made him shocked. He picked up a picture frame which had a photo of him and all of their friends including Smokestack all standing with each other making silly faces at a carnival like environment, embezzled with a caption that said “Best Friends Forever”

Neon’s eyes hands were beginning to shake up and he couldn't help but look in shock and awe at the photo.

“You…. you kept that photo. I can’t believe you still kept that photo of after everything we’ve done…”

Unfortunately he quickly became distracted by the sound of clattering which made him put the picture back down. However, he froze to look back at it, and so he opened up the back, folded up the picture and put it in his pocket.

So Neon walked into another room. The garage maybe? He opened the door entering inside and stopped in shock. What he found wasn't a garage. But the room was massive. It was like a giant engineering lab and auto-body shop. There was a car raised up on some jacks for repairs along with the front hood opened up, giant boxes filled with more pieces of spare metal, and a workbench area where tons of tools were set up.

"You seem to have a lot of spare time on your hands huh buddy?" Neon said to himself.

Turning his head to the side, he looked to where he heard the source coming from. But for some reason, no one was in there. Or was there? His eyes gazed to the ground which looked as if some muddy footprints had been traced. Either someone had been recently walking in here, or Royal forgot to wipe his feet again.

Neon walked, following the footsteps and found himself walking through to another part of the lab. He took off his sunglasses to take a better look at the equipment around him. The first thing he noticed was this part of the lab was set like a shooting range. There were target beams across him, and right in front of them was a stand for a weapon to be held on. And on the target beam was a big hand-drawn picture of from what he could see, a strange black horse that had a bug like appearance to it.

"Correction. You have way too much free time on your hands."

He turned his head and almost got a shock. There was someone else in the room with him. But all he was seeing was the back of someone looking down at a desk, and with his arms crossed behind him like he was deep in thought.

From the back he could tell this person had on a black tank top, gray wolf skin color, and two black boots. This figure also had what looked like the tail bottom of a large coat around his waist, and his hair was all ruffled up and messy.

After standing in silence, Neon cleared his throat and spoke.

“Hi. Uh, sorry for intruding in like this, but the door was open.”

No sound or reply came back from the figure. But Neon blinked again and suddenly the details on that figure were becoming a little… familiar...

“Smokie… is… is that you?”

The figure turned himself around giggling quietly which made Neon gasp in fear. This person… it couldn’t have been. He stared right at the face of someone he never would have imagined to show up. But what made him scarier was that his eyes were all dark voids with nothing in them.

Neon slapped his face and winced in pain from how hard he hit himself. He turned his head back and saw the person wasn’t there. It was all visions from his imagination.

“God... No… never… never!” Neon shouted.

He grabbed a sledgehammer from off a wall and started swinging around at random places in the engineering lab. The hammer swung down on the engine of the car, it hit a beam that held the top of the roof up, he slammed into compartments holding more tools and supplies, he swung it everywhere.

Sweat ran down his face swung the sledgehammer towards an operating generator which began to start spewing small sparks of electricity from within. Fearing his life, Neon quickly walked away as best as possible. In seconds, the generator started to catch ablaze, but the flames quickly spread. It spread towards the walls, and then soon they started to be engulfed in the flames. The fire began to spread even more as papers burned, the target cardboard cutouts were burning to ashes and dust, and soon parts of the ceiling began to collapse and fall apart.

"No... what have I done?"

For once in his life, Neon felt sorry. With no other choice and no way to cover up his actions, Neon ran out of the house as quick as he could and jumped into his car, and sped off.

In the rear view mirror, he could only watch as the house burned to the ground, falling apart to ashes and dust….


Author's Note

Any predictions for what will happen next?

Chapter 8: The Impossible Is Possible

It was 6:00 in the evening, and a majority of the city was quiet. Coppermane was walking down the street to his car having gone to the store to get some supplies to help Pinkie set up the Halloween party at CHS.

“Okay, last bit of supplies on the list. This Halloween party’s gonna be awesome.” Coppermane said with excitement.

He put the supplies in his car and turned around and his heart dropped when he was face to face with Jet Set.

“Hello, Coppermane,” Jet Set said.

“Um… hi, Jet Set,” Coppermane said. “What do you want?”

“Oh, nothing… except for this.” Without saying anything else, slipping behind his back was two small silver guns that had yellow and black stripes tagged on them, and the barrels had looks of bright lights.

“Whoa!” Coppermane yelped. “Wh-What the hell?!”

“Now, if you will kindly come with me, I won’t harm you.” Jet replied. “Hands on your head.”

Coppermane complied, and Jet roughly forced him around. Coppermane managed to glimpse the gun in Jet’s hand, and noticed something. It looked suspiciously familiar to one of the light cannons Sunset and Twilight were taking apart.

“Where did you get that?” Coppermane asked.

“And why should I tell you?” Jet asked.

“Um… I don’t know,” Coppermane said. “I-It just looks cool… I guess…”

Jet raised an eyebrow, and sighed with clear frustration.

“Well, if you must know, we found it in your friend’s home,” Jet said. “Not sure why these were laying around without being properly secured, but why am I complaining? It made it easier for us.”

“I’m sure were guarded fine until you decided to pull them out. They’re extremely dangerous you know.” Coppermane snarled.

“No, the only things that are dangerous are you and your friends. And since one of you is already out of the way, it's going to make our job easier. It's kind of funny really, since one of you has already been taken care of for us, it only leaves you nine left.” Jet snarled.

“Are you talking about Smokestack? You’re sick,” Coppermane glared. “Wait… the rest of us? I swear, if you hurt my Fluttershy…”

“You know exactly what I mean. I can’t even believe I was even friends with that wretched little... traitor.” Jet said.

“Wait… friends?” Coppermane sputtered.

“That’s beside the point. He’s dead, and you’re going to come with me. And if you try anything, I will use this. And just to give you a little demonstration...” Jet said as he pointed to his right on into the alleyway completely darkened.

He pulled the trigger and a high powered bright blast fired off into the darkness. However, little did he know by that one shot, he set off a loud groan which scared both Jet and Coppermane.

Both of them froze from hearing the groan and their eyes looked at one another.

"You heard that right? I'm not the only one who heard that."

Jet nodded with a look of fear on his face. Curious, he shot into the alleyway again erupting the same groan, followed by the sight of a glowing demonic red eye.

"Ow..." the voice said.

Coppermane’s eyes widened. He recognized that voice from the night the monster tried to kill him.

Jet, scared out of his mind, fired another shot into the darkness which made him wince again and this time sent something bouncing onto the ground. A metal clanging could be heard and soon something slid across the concrete in front of Coppermane’s shoes.

He bent down to take a look. Gleaming bright gold with a bit of green blood was the same amulet Sunset wore around her neck.

“The amulet...” Coppermane muttered.

He reached out to grab it, but a black, gooey and slender yanked it away in a flash. Coppermane stood back up and stared down into the darkness as eight green eyes stared into their souls.

"Coppermane... I was wondering when I would run into you again..."

Coppermane and Jet slowly backed away, realizing they were facing a mutual threat.

The eyes slowly got closer. Slowly, some defining features emerged from the shadows as it got closer and closer. But Coppermane only realized it was the same gargantuan who haunted him the night before. And in one of his claws was the golden amulet that was clenched tightly.

"What... the heck... is that?" Jet Set gasped.

"That's uh... that's... that's a changeling."

The monster chuckled.

"You're correct Coppermane. Well mostly correct... I am, what you call... an illegal science experiment. I was made in the basement of Sunset Shimmer... simply from her own gain."

You're the thing that was in her basement, Jet Set thought. "So... what do you want?"

The monster snarled and it cracked its neck. "Well... I think you two will know what I want. Your flesh filled bodies left wheezing and suffering!"

The monster sharpened its claws and it got on all fours, ready to attack. Its fangs sharpened as well, and its eyes started to glow.

"Jet. I know you and I have our differences, but maybe for just this once... we work together?"

Jet sighed. "Fine. Only this once. Only because I don't know how unpredictable that thing is, and I'd want to get back to business fast."

The monster rubbed his back foot against the gravel like a bull, ready to make a stomping charge. It got ready to charge, but Jet Set used the gun he had in his hand and shot several beams from the barrel. The beams shot high amounts of power onto the creature which made it scream and cry in agony and pain. The beams kept on coming, and Jet Set wouldn't let up.

After five minutes of shooting endlessly, the creature finally fell to the ground, its pain slowly letting up and a quiet sound of breathing coming from its nostrils.

"Oookkkkaaay... now that he's out, I'm just gonna--" Coppermane tried to step away, but Jet pointed the gun right up at Coppermane.

"You aren't going anywhere. Now if you want to receive the same pain, I suggest you come with me."

Coppermane wouldn't move. Jet Set's sneer turned more furious.

"That's it! I'll take you by force!"

Coppermane braced himself for what would happen. He heard shots fired, but didn’t feel the impact. He opened his eyes and looked down. A trash can was thrown, and it took the blast.

He glanced to the alleyway, along with Jet Set and saw the creature was standing once again. But something was off. On the ground were several cracked pieces of blackened shell. And they could clearly see a normal hand in the moonlight.

"You're no changeling, are you?"

The figure in the shadows just continued to stare.

"If you're you... then show me."

The figure stomped forward, exposing himself full in the moonlight. They could see more of the body had been shelled out, and Coppermane could get a full view of inside the head. Through a crack of the right side of the head, were not the four eyes before. But inside he could see a person with gray bright gray skin within, and a purple eye.

He looked down in his hand, and he discovered that a small switchblade was clasped in his palm. Using the sharp blade, he dug into the changeling skin which didn't bleed. But instead, more pieces of shell began to hollow out and fall apart, cracking into more pieces like an egg.

The arms started to reveal itself, and more shells removed.

The entire body of shell finally removed, and all that was left was the face. The gray hands grabbed the head, and ripped it apart, revealing the face of a normal boy underneath. One of his eyes was purple, but the other eye was... it wasn't there. There was nothing there. It was just nothing but a void of emptiness. His hair was messy, with a color of snow white.

He appeared to be skinny, much like Coppermane's figure. But his clothes were shredded and heavily disheveled. His shirt had lost the sleeves, and his track shorts were very much showing loose pieces that were falling apart. And his own feet were barefoot.

But the details that Coppermane observed the most was the big cut on his arm which showed some blood stains, a mix of green and red blended together. And the missing eye.

Coppermane just stared in disbelief.

“Did... did you just save me?” Coppermane asked

He held the side of his stomach as he tried to stand up, while some blood leaked onto his hand. He had dark green skin, shredded short black pants, a ruffled-up tank top, a prosthetic, skeletal-like arm, and a similar looking prosthetic right foot.

He was demonized, weakened, and somehow still alive.

“No... it can't be! That's... that's not true!” Jet beckoned.

The teenager sneered at Jet Set, as he tried to walk forward and stepped on some pieces. He shards made him wince and moan in pain, feeling the sharp ends digging into his skin.

Jet Set smirked. "Well, if you aren't traveling that far..."

He pointed the gun once again, towards Coppermane. He pulled the trigger, but he received a shock. The teenager had made it in time, and he jumped in the way, taking the shot right into his stomach. The heat made him scream, and he fell to the ground, holding onto his wound.

Jet's attention was no longer on Coppermane, now it was on the other teenager. He looked up at Jet with a look of fear and whimpered.

"No... Jet, please... You wouldn't shoot someone in pain, would you?"

“That's not what I see. What I see is someone who turned his back on myself and my friends... and you spat in our faces.” Jet sneered. "You left us. You never told us why, why didn't you tell us!?

"I... only wanted.. to save you!" The teenager gasped and wheezed. "

“You didn’t save anyone. You only cared about yourself, and you just tossed aside like we're nothing. You’re pathetic…” Jet uttered. He pulled the trigger, and it shot his working eye making him scream.

“If you can’t see, you can’t fight. And now you know how we felt..." Jet scowled.

Jet reloaded his magazine and pointed the gun back.

“I’m going to enjoy this…” Jet said.

Jet was about to pull the trigger, but froze when he felt cold metal touch his temple.

“Put the gun down,” Coppermane said off to the side. Jet looked to his side to see Coppermane with the other gun that Jet Set had dropped.

“And just what are you doing with that?” Jet remarked smirking.

“You pull the trigger, and I will too,” Coppermane said. “Put the gun down, and leave him alone.”

Jet saw nothing but ice in Coppermane’s eyes. He was serious.

What choice did he have, unless he wanted the streets to be painted with his blood. Jet lowered his gun. But in a quick second, he pointed it again to shoot but nothign happened.

"Wait... wait a minute why isn't it working..."

He felt the top of the gun and he winced. The top of it was overheating. He dropped it, and it fell apart into dozens of pieces upon falling to the ground.

“Leave. Now.” Coppermane snarled. “And don’t try anything. I will use this.”

Jet just simply snarled back and his attention turned to the boy in pain.

“I’ll be back,” Jet said. “And you won’t be so lucky.”

Jet didn’t waste any more time in rushing over to his car and driving away, leaving Coppermane alone with the injured student. Coppermane used his own hands and he helped the boy up on his feet who was still in pain.

"P-Please... help... me..."

“Don’t worry, I’ll get you to a hospital.” Coppermane stammered. "Just hang on."

Without any further question, Coppermane got him into his car and quickly sped off to the hospital.


Coppermane kept pacing back and forth in the waiting room, hoping he was okay. It took a little longer than he would’ve liked, but a doctor eventually came out and approached Coppermane.

“How is he?” Coppermane asked.

“Your friend will be alright. It’s a good thing you got him here quickly.” The doctor said. “We just needed to patch up some wounds. He seems to have sustained a lot of damage throughout his life. He’s blind at the moment, as is bleeding quite a bit. He should be fine by tomorrow, and his other eye will restore back as well.”

“Am I allowed to see him?” Coppermane asked.

“Yes, you are. In fact, he requested that he see you,” the doctor said.

“Really?” Coppermane said. “Can you take me to him, please?”

“Absolutely,” the doctor said. “Right this way.”

Coppermane followed the doctor down to the room where the teenager was taken to. He entered, and was a little surprised at everything he was hooked up to. He had an IV needle in his right arm and a bandage wrapped around his wrist where he was cut. A bandage wrapped around his head, as well as his shoulder. One more bandage was wrapped around his left eye, with the one with no socket exposed. Coppermane had never seen anyone in such bad shape.

“Hey,” Coppermane said. “Y-You alright?”

He turned his head towards Coppermane, who winced a little at seeing his synthetic eye.

“I’m still breathing.” He replied. “You… you are over there right?”

“Yeah,” Coppermane said. “Who are you?”

The boy coughed some more, and with some breath in his lungs he uttered one single sentence.

"I... am Smokestack."


Author's Note

What a twist! What do you guys think? :raritywink:

Chapter 9: Boyfriend Meets New Friend

"I... am Smokestack."

The teen coughed some more, leaving Coppermane to stare at him with wide eyes in pure shock.

"S-Smokestack?"

The teen gave a nod.

"It really is you.”

“Yeah…” Smokestack said awkwardly.

Coppermane couldn’t believe his eyes. Smokestack was laying right here, right in front of his eyes. All of the things he heard about him about how great he was and how he died, he was actually right in front of him and he was alive. He heard from his friends about how amazing he was, and how heroic he was in sacrificing himself to save everyone. He never thought he’d actually meet him.

“Wow…” Coppermane said. “Well, it’s nice to meet you. I’m Coppermane.”

Coppermane then moved forward and shook hands with him. The teen however, unable to see didn't move.

"Oh, uh, I'm trying to... shake your hand."

Smokestack raised his left hand up.

"Other hand."

Smokestack raised the other hand up, allowing himself to shake hands with Coppermane.

“Wait... you said you were Coppermane, right?"

"Yeah, why?"

A smile appeared on Smokestack's face. "Coppermane. I think I've heard about you. You're Fluttershy's boyfriend, aren't you? I’ve heard great things about you. Pleasure to finally meet you.” Smokestack replied weakly, still coughing heavily. “I remember... I remember Fluttershy couldn’t stop talking about you.”

Coppermane felt himself blush. “Really?”

Smokestack nodded. “She goes on and on about you. She sure is a sweetheart.”

“Only the sweetest girl in the world,” Coppermane said.

Smokestack sighed. “I wish I could see... that would make this a lot better. And now I think I'm gonna be blind the rest of my life...”

“The doctor said you should have your vision restored tomorrow,” Coppermane said. “But… wait, something doesn't add up. Everyone told me you were dead.”

“You actually believed I was dead?” Smokestack asked.

Coppermane nodded.

“Not to brag or be rude, but it takes a little more than a power overload to stop me. I know that for a fact.”

“Really?” Coppermane said. “That’s… that’s actually kind of freaky.”

Smokestack just shrugged.

“But… how did you survive?”

“Do you have time for a story?” Smokestack asked.

Coppermane smiled. “I’m not going anywhere.”

Smoketack smiled. After being lost, alone, and abandoned for so long, it was nice to have someone to call a friend by his side once again.

“Very well… I believe I can explain. You know how I supposedly exploded from magic overdose?”

Coppermane nodded, taking a seat in a chair next to Smokestack's bed.

“Well, I’m afraid you don’t know the whole story… And I'd like to ask that you try and listen as best as possible. Because this is where things get a little... complicated..."


"This raises my first question. How much do you truly know about me?" Smokestack asked.

"Well, I know you are actually a unicorn from Equestria, you had an artifact brought here which you used to try and get back at the Shadowbolts, and you took Flash and the Shadowbolts with you to Equestria to fight in a giant battle, and you sacrificed yourself to save those you loved. Am I right?" Coppermane asked.

"Yes, you are. But there's some more details that you need to know..."

Smokestack's body was squirming and writhing from the pain. He felt the magic from the artifact surging through him, and the sheer levels of energy burned him. He could see his limbs starting to deteriorate.

“No… stay strong… hang in there…”

"You see, what I failed to understand is I couldn't handle the power of that artifact. I thought if I could try and possess all of the energy, I could have at least saved everyone even Chrysalis's life from dying. But I didn't take in the fact that I am not a god, and therefore, I am not omnipotent." Smokestack explained.

Smokestack clung onto dear life as the energy seared him. As he watched one of his arms which was suffering from the power overload, he had an idea. With what little control he had, he attempted to raise his arms up to fire beams up into the skies. With a pure amount of luck, beams shot up into the sky, ripping open a portal. Using what waning energy he had left, he removed the artifact from his neck, along with a slip of paper, and let it drop to the ground before debris covered it

Using the energy, he soared up towards the portal in order to keep the explosion away from the town. But Queen Chrysalis was not far behind.

Smokestack crossed the portal, and looked back at Canterlot. He summoned all his strength and fired all his energy into the rift. The beam crossed the gateway into Equestria, and struck the ground with force comparable to a thermonuclear explosion, and the force knocked him out cold.

"I don't know how long I was unconscious. I don't even know what kind of sick, twisted, realm I had shot myself in. But what I did know was, I had trapped myself with the last person I hoped to be trapped with..."

Smokestack awoke, his vision still blurry. Once his sight came into focus, he saw nothing but void, and felt the sensation of weightlessness. Indeed, he was floating in complete darkness. But he wasn’t alone. Looking around, he was able to make out some unconscious changelings, some debris, and…

“Queen Chrysalis,” Smokestack murmured. “Oh no...”

The Queen woke up, and her gaze landed on him. Once she saw him, her eyes flickered with rage.

“You…” Queen Chrysalis snarled. “You and your friends have ruined everything I’ve worked for! And now, you will suffer!”

Smokestack's heart dropped. He didn’t realize until now that he was completely powerless. No artifact, no remaining energy for a fight. He was no match for Queen Chrysalis herself.

Smokestack panicked. Left with no other choice, he swam through the void with what little energy he had.

“You can never escape from me!”

Chrysalis fired green beams at Smokestack, making contact with his chest.

“ARGH!” He held his chest in pain, continuing to flee. “Chrysalis, wait! I-I think I can get us out of here! There might be a way for us to get out! W-We don’t have to stay in this realm! J-Just stop!”

“Not so powerful without your precious necklace, are you? Don’t worry about me. I’ll be fine. But you… the void will be the last thing you see.”

Smokestack felt all hope had been lost. He was about to die by Chrysalis's hooves. No more would he ever see the light of day, or whatever light he had inside. But wait a minute.

He looked up at his cracked horn. It was pumping with energy... the energy from the relic. This could be his one chance to escape!

With some quick thinking, he moved his and the residual energy he absorbed, and fired a beam into the shadows and ripped open another portal. He swam to the rift, closely pursued by Chrysalis. They crossed the boundary, and both began falling from the sky right above Canterlot.

"I barely remember anything outside of Chrysalis and I vanishing through the portal with the unconscious changelings, and me slowly transforming back into this human shell..."

Smokestack opened his eyes to find himself in a grassy field. Lying not too far from him was Queen Chrysalis. She wasn’t moving. Not even a twitch. He couldn’t even see breathing. The last thing he saw was a small portion of light shining his way before he blacked out again.


“Everything else is a blur." Smokestack said. "I don't remember anything that happened after that, where I went, or how I got in an alleyway with you and Jet Set. Though, I can vaguely waking up in an alley with… changeling skin. The doctor said he found a strange green substance in my system, but he said it was nothing harmless. Figured that would be cause for alarm in a hospital, but maybe I’m wrong. The stuff isn’t toxic, but I kind of assumed it would be affecting me somehow more… significantly.”

“I think it has,” Coppermane said.

“What do you mean?”

“This is a little hard to explain. You and I had an encounter last night,” Coppermane said. “You were this changeling, hybrid, monster... thing. That’s probably why you found the skin. From what we know, and what we believe, it was probably cooked up in the basement of… well… now, our new enemy.”

“New enemy?” Smokestack said. “What twisted force of evil has shown up this time?”

Coppermane cleared his throat. “Are you sure you want to know? You’re not going to like it.”

“Just tell me who it is,” Smokestack said. “They’re obviously a big threat. Just tell me.”

Coppermane sighed. “This world’s Sunset Shimmer.”

“What?” Smokestack said. “Why?”

“I wish I could answer that. We have no idea,” Coppermane said. “We’re trying to figure out a way to stop her. But hopefully with you back, you can help us.”

“I'll try my best.” He was silent for a moment before sighing. “Is… Is Shimmercakes okay?”

“You mean Sunset? Our Sunset?” Coppermane asked.

Smokestack smiled. “Yeah. Is she okay? Is she still as adorable as ever?”

Coppermane sighed. “Honestly… no. She took your death really hard.”

Smokestack groaned and scrunched his face. “I should’ve let her help me. I shouldn't have pushed her away when she was trying to help I... I just... I was only trying to keep her safe.”

“I think Sunset knows that,” Coppermane said.

“At least she’s safe,” Smokestack said, resting back on his pillow. "But now, I've left her a broken heart that I can't repair..."

Coppermane frowned. But as he looked at the insufferable amount of wounds on the former unicorn, a thought came to his head.

“Hey, Smokestack? I know we just met, but can I ask you something?” Coppermane asked.

“Ask away,” Smokestack replied.

“Does your voice always sound… raspy?” Coppermane hesitated.

Smokestack had a confused look. "Not... usually. Honestly, I've been hacking up a lot of stuff right now from all the pain. The doctor gave me some medicine that should help clear it up a bit,” Smokestack said.

“Well, hopefully your voice along with the rest of you will be back to health in no time.” Coppermane said with a hopeful smile.

Smokestack had a hopeful smile on his face too; then thought for a moment. “Now, do you mind if I ask you something?”

“Uh… sure.” Coppermane replied.

The temporarily blind teenager sighed. “I need to know something. You said I was the monster who attacked you, right? Aren’t you the least bit scared right now?”

Coppermane shook his head. “Why would I be scared? Should I be?”

“No no, it’s not that,” Smokestack said. “I just know I would be a little paranoid. You're not at all scared that I might possibly turn back into a monster? Or go insane?”

Coppermane took a minute or two to think of a reply. Eventually, he came up with a response.

“I suppose you have a point,” Coppermane said. “But now I know you didn’t have control. And from what everyone’s told me, you seemed like a good guy. I know I’m looking at the real Smokestack now. And they weren’t wrong. You’re pretty cool, Smokie."

Smokestack was silent for a moment, before giving him a small, yet sincere smile. “Thanks.”

“So, do you know when you’re going to be out?” Coppermane asked.

“I do remember being told about tomorrow, since my eyes will be fully restored at this point.” Smokestack said. “But… if it’s not too much to ask… can you bring me some stuff?”

“What do you need?” Coppermane asked.

“I need a set of clothes” Smokestack said. “There should be some at my house. If it’s still standing, that is.”

“Anything in particular?” Coppermane asked.

“I just need track pants, socks, underwear, a t-shirt, and if you can find a jacket, that'd be appreciated,” he said. "I just need something clean.”

“I can bring it up tomorrow morning,” Coppermane said. “Does that work?”

“Perfect,” Smokestack said. “There should be a key under the doormat."

Suddenly, Smoketack's stomach grumbled loudly.

Coppermane chuckled. “Want me to get you some food as well?”

“If it’s not too much trouble, that would be great." Smokestack said with a nervous chuckle.

“Anything specific?” Coppermane asked.

“I don't know, I guess I'm in the mood for something greasy and fat. I know, its not good, but right now I guess I could use a little something to feel a little better. Is there uh... any chance you could order a cheeseburger, some fries, and a chocolate shake?” Smokestack nerviously smiled.

Coppermane smiled back. “I'm not gonna judge you. Besides, I think I know a place that delivers.” Coppermane got his phone out and called for delivery. A few minutes passed as Coppermane talked with them.

“Alright, they said it’ll be about maybe 7 to 10 minutes or so,” Coppermane said. “They said they’ll call when they’re here.”

“Thank you so much,” Smokestack said. “I’ll pay you back.”

“I mean, you don’t have to,” Coppermane said. “But I certainly won’t stop you.”

Smokestack laughed. "I'll pay you back, okay? Its the least I could do."

“Sounds good,” Coppermane said.

“Oh, and… do you think you could stick around?” Smokestack asked. “I could use some company.”

Coppermane smiled. “Smokestack, I promise you, I’m not going anywhere. You need a buddy to talk to, and I am more than willing to provide company.”

A heart-felt smile hit his face. “Thanks.”


“Alright, food’s here,” Coppermane said, walking in with the food.

“Thank goodness,” Smokestack. “I’m starving. This’ll be way better than anything they’d serve here.”

“No kidding,” Coppermane said.

Coppermane pulled out the food and Smokestack instantly dug into the container that had his burger. And like a rabid animal he started gnawing away, admittedly making Coppermane a little worried. But he shrugged it off. It was probably a while since he had any actual food.

After a few minutes of eating, Smokestack cleared his throat to speak.

“So… you and Fluttershy, huh?” Smokestack said.

Coppermane smiled and chuckled. “Yeah…”

“How did that happen?” Smokestack said raising a brow. He couldn't see, but Coppermane could easily identify the face he was making. “Not to be mean, but she seems a little out of your league.”

“Oh, I know she’s out of my league,” Coppermane said. “But that only makes me love her more. Besides, she’s just the cutest thing ever. So sweet and kind, and the prettiest girl I’ve ever met.”

“Sounds just like how I feel about Shimmercakes,” he said.

Coppermane chuckled. “Where did that nickname come from?”

“Well, I don't know, she's... she’s sweet like… like cake,” Smokestack said. “She’s nice, sweet, pretty, and… the light that guides me, she's a shimmering sun. not to mention sunsets are amazing... but back to her, I just... I’ve never met anyone like her.”

Suddenly, the sound of a door opening caught their attention.

“I’m sorry to interrupt, but visiting hours are over, and I’m afraid Smokestack needs his rest,” the doctor said.

He groaned. “You sure he can’t stay for a few more minutes?”

“It’s fine Smokestack.” Coppermane said. “I’ll be back first thing tomorrow. Besides, you’ll have your vision back tomorrow.”

He just sighed. “Alright…”

“Get some rest, alright?” Coppermane said.

Smokestack began stretching his arms and soon yawned. “If you say so. Wait, one more thing.”

“Yeah?” Coppermane asked.

“Can you maybe… not tell anyone that I’m alive?” Smokestack asked. “I just need to stay incognito for a little while.”

Coppermane smiled. “Yeah, sure. My lips are sealed. We should probably say something soon, though.”

“Oh, of course. I’m thinking maybe on Monday?”

“Sounds good,” Coppermane said. “Just be ready for Pinkie Pie to throw a party.”

“I know,” Smokestack said, laughing.

“Good night, Smokie” Coppermane said.

“Goodnight, Coppermane. One last thing…"

Coppermane waited.

Smokestack gave a sincere smile. "Thank you. You saved my life. I don’t know what I would have done if you didn’t stand up for me.”

Coppermane smiled. “Anything for a friend. Goodnight Smokie.”

Smoke watched as Coppermane walked out of the room. The doctor closed the door, leaving him alone. He yawned loudly, realizing he was more tired than he thought. He laid his head back on the pillow, and slowly drifted off to sleep.


Smoke found himself in nothing but pitch-blackness. He had no idea where he was, but he knew something wasn’t right. He looked around as many figured came into view. He was thrilled when he realized it was his friends. Then his happiness came crashing down again when he saw their current state.

They were hanging... all of them... from nooses.

“What?” Smokestack panicked. “No! How?!”

“Because of me…” A voice bellowed from the darkness. A bug-like, equine creature with menacing green eyes emerged from the darkness, and stepped into the light.

“You?!” He cried. “No! That’s not possible! You were dead!”

The entity bellowed a ground-tremoring laugh. “I’m a part of you. You can never defeat me. I’ll always be with you. I AM you…”

“No… no, please!” Smokestack cried. “You’ve left me with nothing! Leave me alone! Get out of my head!”

“Your mind is MINE.”

A green beam of light manifested on her horn, and fired upon Smokestack.


“NO!!!” Smokestack screamed, sitting upright in his bed. He felt the cold air hit his sweat-drenched skin, sending chills through his body.

A dream? A nightmare? A vision? What was this?

He fell back on his pillow, now wide awake. It was impossible. She was dead. He saw her. She couldn’t possibly…

Smokestack's gaze was fixated on the ceiling. Sweat poured down his face as tears welled up in his eyes.

“I’m so sorry, Sunset…” Smokestack cried. “I... I promise I'll never let anyone hurt you... I... I swear...”


Author's Note

Comments? Please? :twilightsheepish:

Chapter 10: Operation: Icognito

Early on Sunday morning, Coppermane drove instantly over to Smokestack's home, given the address he had to stop at. But when he arrived, he found his home in nothing but shambles and wrecks. It was completely burned down, and there was barely anything still standing from the crash.

He salvaged what he could find in the smoldering remains of his home, and then went straight to the hospital to drop off the stuff for him and to pick him up.

“I’m here to visit a Smokestack?” Coppermane asked the person at the front desk.

“Ah yes, they told me you would be coming. Go right on up.”

Coppermane walked up to the floor Smokestack was on, and found his doctor standing outside the room.

“Hello,” Coppermane said. “I’m here to pick up Smokestack.”

“Ah good,” the doctor said. “You should be able to take him soon.”

“Perfect,” Coppermane said. “Oh, and I have some things here that he wanted me to bring. Can I give it to him?”

“Well, I suggest you do it now,” the doctor said. “He’s on his third shower.”

Third shower?” Coppermane asked.

“We kept asking him, and he claims to smell like blood and bugs.” The doctor said. “I asked him if that was true, but all he said was that he wanted to stay clean.”

“Alright then,” Coppermane said. He entered the room, and immediately noticed the shredded up clothes on the bed. No wonder he wanted fresh clothes, these look horrible.

A door opened, and Coppermane saw Smokestack walk out in a bathrobe while drying his hair. He made eye contact with Coppermane, and froze. And even more so, Coppermane noticed a difference in Smokestack's face. He now had another eye placed in the socket that had none, but its shade of purple was a little brighter than the other.

“Um… good morning,” Smokestack blushed with a nervous smile. “Coppermane, I presume?”

“Y-Yep,” Coppermane said. “Morning.”

Smokestack blinked, and focused his vision on Coppermane.

“Huh. You look more handsome than I imagined you'd be.” Smokestack said.

Coppermane gave him a quizzical look. “Um… th-thanks?”

“Sorry for stepping out in a robe. I didn’t have anything else to wear, and those shredded up things are too... what's the word... uncomfortable? Messed up?” Smokestack said.

“Well, it's better than you walking out naked.” Coppermane chuckled. “I did manage to get some clothes for you. And I got your toothbrush and toothpaste.”

Smokestack grabbed them into his hands and grinned. “Yes! Thank you. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I need to suit up.” He walked into the bathroom with his clothes.

“So, I take it you’re able to see to see again?” Coppermane said through the bathroom door.

“Yep,” Smoke replied. “It pretty good to see again. Although... having one eye kind of messes up your depth perception."

"Really?"

"Yeah. I slammed my face into the door a few times just trying to get in here." Smokestack replied.

He stepped out of the bathroom in his fresh clothes that Coppermane brought and stretched his arms. He now wore track pants, with a T-shirt tucked in, and a blue vest that had patches and buttons all over.

“Ah… much better. So, where to next? I think before we do anything, we should go back to my place. I’ll probably need to throw out everything in the fridge. Actually... scratch that. Toss the fridge itself depending on how bad it is…”

“Yeah… um… about that…” Coppermane said.

“What?” Smokestack asked. “What’s wrong?”

“Um… well… I don't know how to tell you this but... there’s not much left of it,” Coppermane said. “It’s just ashes now.”

Smokestack's eyes went wide.

“We’re definitely going there first."


They arrived at the scene, and Smokestack was beside himself. His home was nothing but smoldering, charred ashes. It was all gone. And in the few minutes they were standing there, he said nothing. Not a word. He just stood there, appalled, shocked, taking in the reality of the situation.

He slowly walked forward looking down the rubble of mess, all the while more parts began decaying. He walked over to a pile of rubble, and felt his blood start to boil.

Coppermane could see steaming puffing out of his head.

“ARRGGHH!!!” he screamed, kicking the ashes into the air, followed by a kick of a roof plating. His fists were shaking. His entire home was gone. He was about to kick one of the smoldering wood planks to dust, until he noticed something foreign. A small, metallic star in the debris. He bent down and picked it up. “This looks like a piece of a belt buckle, but... I don’t own any belt buckle like this. But… it looks familiar…”

Coppermane walked up behind Smokestack to take a look.

“Huh… it does look familiar,” Coppermane said.

The boys were silent for a moment, before they both had an epiphany. The only person they knew who had stars on their belt.

“Neon Lights,” they said in unison.

Smokestack dropped the star onto the ground and surveyed the damage again. His fists were still trembling at the sight.

“Smokestack? You okay?” Coppermane asked.

Smokestack raised an arm up. "Can you... please give me a moment?"

Coppermane said nothing and backed away. Smokestack ran inside the remains of his house, and disappeared within. Coppermane just stayed outside and waited for him to come back. Inside, he could hear him screaming and smashing more stuff inside. Glass was breaking, pottery was smashed, and loud crashes of furniture were heard.

A few more seconds had passed and Smokestack slowly walked back out, panting and breathing heavily.

"Smokestack?" Coppermane walked towards him. "You okay buddy?"

Smokestack sighed, and collapsed onto his knees. “No…”

Coppermane got on his knees to look him in the eye.

“I’m really sorry, man,” Coppermane said.

Smoke clenched his fists. “I can understand breaking into my home... maybe stealing some things, but burning it the ground? I never thought Neon would stoop so low as to burn down my house. Now where will I go?”

Coppermane thought for a few seconds, and then like a flick of a switch, he got an idea.

“Hey, how about this,” Coppermane said. “Why don’t you come stay with me until you find somewhere else to go.”

"What? Coppermane, no, I can't. I'd be a horrible roommate, heck I've never actually been a roommate with anyone. Or even shared a house with someone."

"Smokie. Listen to me. You need a place to stay, and I'm more than willing to let you stay with me. Besides, I think there's plenty of space in my house for another person to stay in."

Smokestack wanted to argue, but he felt defeated. “I suppose so. You don’t have to, y’know.”

“It’s fine,” Coppermane said. “Only temporary, but it’ll do for now, right?”

Smokestack gave a nod, along with an appreciative smile. "Thank you. Really, thank you. I can't tell you how much this is appreciated. But, before we go to your place... do you think you could help me salvage anything that survived? There might be something useful in this mess.”

“Gladly.” Coppermane replied.

"So what are we waiting for? Lets get to work!"


After a few hours, Coppermane and Smokestack managed to find plenty of stuff that was salvageable and return it back to Coppermane's. Now they were standing in the living room, near a couple of cardboard boxes and big trunks.

“Okay, I still have plenty of clothes, and my laptop is still functional. I'll need to check it in case any files have been stolen.” Smokestack said. “At least not everything was burned. And apparently, none of them thought to steal any my money... thank god.”

Smokestack slapped an envelope on one of the trunks.

"Hopefully there's some stuff they..." Smokestack opened up one of the trunks and gasped. A smile grew big on his face. "Yes... yes... YES! They didn't take this! Oh this is just perfect!"

"What, what is it?" Coppermane asked.

Smokestack jumped into the box and he started tossing stuff out which flew right past him. "My retro stuff and all of my costume supplies, its all here! I think I can have some use for this stuff!"

"You're into retro?" Coppermane asked.

"Kinda!"

Smokestack dug his head from out of the box. "Thank god this stuff is still here. A lot of this stuff is prized possessions."

"How come?"

Smokestack paused for a moment, but he just looked at the box's contents. "Well, I guess it goes back to when I was a kid. My mom and dad were into oldies and they were always sharing stuff with me that they had from the old days. And so... when I came here, I started collecting old stuff because... it reminded me of home." Smokestack gestured his hands to some of the contents below, showing some old vinyl records for a record player, along with artwork that resembled the 50s.

Coppermane gave Smokestack an empathetic smile. "That's really nice."

"I guess so... but now most of it just sits in these trunks and its barely used." Smokestack closed the trunk. "Now, I can't put my finger on it, but I feel like I'm missing something..."

"What about those dangerous weapons that you made that I'm sure Neon and his friends now have?"

"That's the problem... I didn't make much, but I didn't find any traces of them in my home. Not even in the blueprints for them. Oh.... I hope Neon and his friends don't make more..." Smokestack said nervously.

"Hey, its alright. We can work around it, but I think you need to do something that's not so stressful. Maybe there's something we could do together."

"Like what? And plus, don't you have work to do?"

"Actually, I did all of it yesterday."

Smokestack paused.

"I see."

"So with that out, we can do whatever we want."

“Well, wanna just hang out?” Smokestack said. “I could use a day to just relax. And I'd like to see how much has changed since my supposed departure.”

“Sounds good to me,” Coppermane said. “Where do you want to go?”

“How about the mall?”

“Um… are you sure that’s the best idea?” Coppermane asked. “We might run into people we know there.”

“True, but I need to stock up on stuff.” Smokestack said. “Actually…”

Smokestack opened up another box and pulled out strange items and started attaching them to himself. He tied a bandanna on his head which held his hair back, red tinted glasses, along with a small bandana tied to cover his nose and mouth.

"I'm hidden underneath and no one's the wiser! What do you think?” Smokestack asked.

"Uh... I..." Coppermane stuttered. “Let’s go.”


“So, where are we going again?” Smokestack asked.

“Well, you said you wanted to get some sunglasses to cover your eyes, right?” Coppermane asked.

“Oh yeah, right,” Smokestack said. “I have a feeling my eyes would scare people.”

“But you're wearing tinted glasses that make it hard to see your eyes anyway, right?” Coppermane said.

“I can't wear them all the time Coppermane. Besides..." Smokestack removed the glasses exposing both of his eyes. "My eyes don't exactly match. Even with the doctors finding the closest match, its not great."

Coppermane and Smoke made their way to a stand near a store and found a display holder which held many different sunglasses. Both of the boys began trying on different shades.

“Huh… These are actually pretty cool.” Coppermane said looking into a mirror.

Coppermane then looked back at Smoke judging another pair.

“Ugh, none of these are good.”

“Is there a specific one you’re looking for?”

Smokestack nodded. “Neon Lights’.”

Coppermane’s eyes widened. “Why?”

Smokestack took the pair off his head and looked Coppermane dead into his chocolate colored eyes.

“Because he’s the reason my eyes are completely screwed up now.” Smokestack said. “I'll admit, his glasses look kind of nice... and it'd be the perfect retribution for the loss of one of my own. A trophy, as you will.”

Coppermane just shrugged.

“Also... you mind if I ask you for a favor?"

"Sure."

Smokestack sighed. "If we ever run into him in this place, please try and hold me back because I’ll probably try to hurt him. Or worse, kill him. And I don't want to draw attention to myself.”

“Don’t worry,” Coppermane said. “I’ll have some things to say to him as well. So, is there any place you’d like to stop at first?” Coppermane asked.

“Actually, there is something,” Smokestack said. “I want to get something for Shimmercakes. Just to thank her for everything she’s done for me. But what?”

“Why not win her a stuffed animal from the arcade?” Coppermane suggested, gesturing to the arcade.

Smokestack thought for a moment. “Would that really work?”

“Worked for Fluttershy,” Coppermane said. “It’s not anything big, but it’s the little things that let them know you really care.”

Smokestack smiled under the mask. “That’s good enough for me. I think I know exactly what I’m going to get her.”

They entered the arcade, and Smokestack froze when he noticed a few CHS students inside.

“Crap,” he said. “What if they figure out it’s me? They’ll tell everyone, and then we’re all screwed.”

“Hey, don’t worry,” Coppermane said. “You’re in costume. It’s fine.”

“Okay, but I’ll have to be careful,” Smokestack said. “Now… um… what should I play? I’ve never played any of these before.”

Coppermane grinned. “Follow me.”

Coppermane led Smokestack to a skeeball game in the corner of the arcade.

“This looks easy. I had to play a lot of basketball back at Crystal Prep.” Smokestack replied.

"Did you ever win any of those?"

"Not even one."

Coppermane frowned, but returned a hopeful smile.

“Maybe I can win another stuffed animal for Fluttershy,” Coppermane said.

They began playing the game, but unfortunately, their voices attracted attention. Two of them in particular. One belonged to a girl with indigo hair and white skin, and the other belonged to one with rainbow hair.

“Come on!” Smoke complained. “I almost made it! I just need a few more tickets!”

Coppermane patted his friend's shoulder. “It's okay. We can try another game.”

They turned around, and were face to face with two familiar girls.

“Hey Coppermane, how are you doing?” Rainbow asked.

“Oh… crap,” Smokestack said, muffled under the mask.

“Rainbow! Rarity!” Coppermane said. “Um… h-hi… wh-what are you doing here?”

“Just killing time,” Rainbow replied. Her face turned curious. “Um… who’s he?”

Smoke's heart dropped. He just stood frozen in place, unsure of what to do.

“Him?” Coppermane stammered. “Oh, he’s just… a new friend. I-I met him the other day and we decided to hang out here.” He didn’t even realize he was rubbing his neck and looking away.

“Coppermane, darling, is something wrong?” Rarity asked. “You look… troubled.”

“Is your friend wearing a mask?” Rainbow asked.

Smokestack panicked and stumbled back, and Rainbow unfortunately followed him, pinning him against the wall. Smokestack tried to fight her, but Rainbow had a tighter grip. As much as he'd love to punch his way out, this was a friend, and he wasn't going to be doing any of that.

“Rainbow, what are you doing?” Coppermane said.

“Your friend just seems… sketchy,” Rainbow said.

“Rainbow… I think you’re making him uncomfortable,” Coppermane said.

“Why is he wearing a mask?” Rarity asked.

“Girls, please,” Coppermane said. “Is it really that important?”

“Coppermane, darling, you seem nervous about something,” Rarity said.

“Like you’re hiding something,” Rainbow said. “And I think this mask might have something to do with it.”

“I don’t know what you’re talking about,” Coppermane shrugged.

Rainbow inched closer to Smokestack's face, staring right into his eyes that were hidden behind the tinted glasses. “Why are you wearing a mask, huh? Tell us!”

Smokestack's eyebrows furrowed as he looked at Rainbow, and a small huff escaped his mouth.

"Not going to talk?"

"Rainbow, please, just let him go, he didn't even do anything wrong!"

"Why are you even trying to hide him from us?" Rarity asked.

“Because he’s trying to protect me!”

Rarity and Rainbow went bug-eyed, their jaws dropping.

“That voice…” Rarity said. “Is it really?”

“No… it can’t be,” Rainbow said. “That’s impossible.”

“Look, I’ll show you who I am... if we can do this more private,” Smoke said. “Deal?”

“How do we know we can trust you?” Rainbow asked.

“You can,” Coppermane said. “He’s cool.”

Rainbow and Rarity looked at each other and shared quizzical looks. If Coppermane trusted him, then he must be clean.

“Alright,” Rarity said.

“Don’t try anything, though,” Rainbow said.

Rainbow let him go, and they began walking off.


They found a little alcove with low traffic that would be safe.

“Alright, are you ready?” Smokestack asked.

Rarity and Rainbow nodded. Once they did, Smokestack began unveiling his face. He removed the bandanna which made his hair poof up. The glasses went away, and his eyes slowly opened up, revealing the mismatching shades of purple. The mask went off as well, and it was tucked away around in his shirt.

The girls’ eyes went wide, and their jaws practically hit the floor.

“Darling….” Rarity said.

Smokestack opened his mismatched colored eyes and looked right at them.

“H-Hey, Rainbow. Rarity."

“You… you’re alive?” Rarity stammered.

Smokestack simply nodded and looked away in shame.

“This…. is…. awesome!” Rainbow shouted.

“Smokie! This is wonderful!”

The girls lunged forward and gave Smokestack a big hug. Too big of a hug.

"Darling its so good to see you again!" Rarity squeed.

“G-Girls… you’re collapsing my lungs!” He wheezed.

The girls backed off, but remained just as excited as they were before.

“How are you still alive?!” Rainbow beckoned.

“We saw the explosion!” Rarity said.

Smokestack's hand hit his face. "Great, I have to explain this story again?”

Coppermane interrupted. “Hey, Smoke, it's okay. I’ll explain everything.”


“And that’s basically it.” Coppermane replied.

The four of them were now at a different location, now sitting in a food court in a private area by themselves. And Smoke was finally okay to keep the mask off.

“Wow… dude, I’m so sorry.” Rainbow said.

“It’s okay Rainbow. It’s not your fault.” Smokestack replied.

Rarity suddenly gasped. “I just realized! Sunset! We have to tell her immediately!”

“NO!” Smokestack shouted, followed by silence between the group. He cleared his throat and spoke quietly again. “I mean… not yet. Can you not call her right now? Please?”

“Why shouldn’t we?” Rainbow asked. “She’s missed you so much.”

“As great as it would be to talk to her right now, I don't even know if that's a good idea. I don’t know if I’m completely okay. I just came out of a hospital, and I am only now trying to recover from being a monster that I don't even know how I became it.”

“Why wouldn’t you be okay?” Rainbow asked.

He just glared at Rainbow, clearly unamused.

“Oh… right.”

“Nothing’s happened yet,” Smokestack said. "I don’t think that’ll be the case for long, though. I don’t want to bring any new problems to the table, especially since you girls seem to have enough on your plate, what with Neon and his group striking back. But enough about me. What about you girls? Is there anything interesting or good going on your ends that I should know about?”

“Not really. Sunset’s been really down since you’ve been gone,” Rainbow said. “Those five Crystal Prep girls are Wondercolts now, and we’ve got a big Halloween party coming up in a few weeks. Other than that, not much.”

“How are the former Bolts?”

Rarity bit her lip. “It could be better. The other CHS students aren’t exactly fond of them.”

“Nobody talks to them,” Coppermane said. “They all know about what they did to you and me.”

Smokestack sighed. “I see…”

“Hey, Smokie?” Rainbow asked. “If you don’t mind us asking… are you coming back to CHS?”

Smoke nodded, making the girls smile. “Tomorrow, 8:00 AM sharp. That is, as long as we don't get shot, assaulted, or pounded by Neon and his 'henchmen'.”

Shot?” Rarity beckoned. “Darling, surely they won’t do that.”

“Don’t be too sure,” Coppermane said. “Last night when I was about to leave, Jet was practically pointing a gun at me. Not to mention he was merciless with Smokie.”

“Oh, you poor things,” Rarity cried.

“On a plus side though... I didn't make much advancements with those light cannons.” Smokestack said. “And they're extremely fragile, so one drop and they'll be in pieces. Still, I'm sure all of the guns I made are in their possession now...”

“You still know how to make them right?” Coppermane said. "We could use some brains like that against them.”

“And now that you’re back, we might actually have a chance,” Rainbow said.

“Don’t be too sure,” Smoke sighed, revealing the small artifact he took the night before his return. "As much as I want to use this thing... which I should get back to Sunset, I can't. This thing nearly killed me that last several times I used it, and its too dangerous around here. Even if I didn't have it, I'm useless. Without magic or any weapon, I’m powerless.”

Smokestack's face fell on the table, making a soft bang. But Rainbow offered a cheerful grin.

“Bud, you’re not useless,” Rainbow said. “Rarity and I have seen how you work. You always know what to do and get us out of bad situations. You don’t need magic for that.”

“And you have us again, sweetheart,” Rarity said. “We won’t let any of those despicable boys hurt you.”

He gave the girls a smile, feeling more at ease. “Thanks, girls. I’ll do my best. But at the moment, I have something more important I need to do.”

“What’s that?” Rarity asked.

“I almost have enough tickets to win a teddy bear for Shimmercakes,” Smokestack smirked slyly. “Now, if you’ll excuse me…”

He got up and headed to the arcade, and the rest of them decided to follow him inside.


“C’mon… just a few more…” Smokestack whined, holding the final skeeball. “I just want to make Shimmercakes smile…”

He stood still, holding the skeeball in his hand, planning his throw with precision. This shot had to be perfect. With a deep breath, he brought his arm up behind him, and threw the ball onto the skeeball lane. With nearly flawless trajectory, it landed in the 100 cup.

Smoke cheered as the skeeball console fed out the rest of the tickets he needed for Sunset’s new teddy bear. He walked up to the counter with his tickets, and picked out the biggest one he could afford.

“Perfect! One cute teddy bear for a cute Shimmercakes.” Smokestack grinned.

“Sunset will love this!” Rarity said.

“I hope,” he said. “Hey, Rarity. Are you good with jewelry?”

“I know a thing or two,” Rarity said. “Why, sweetie?”

“I was hoping I could give Sunset a necklace too,” Smokestack said. “I was thinking an aquamarine necklace to match her eyes. Think you could help me?”

“I would love to help,” Rarity said.

“Sweet. Now I—” The one-eyed teen's heart dropped. “Crap! Don’t look!”

“What?” Rainbow asked, turning her head “What’s going—”

“Don’t look!” Smokestack grunted, making sure they were all huddled together.

“What’s going on?” Coppermane asked.

“Neon Lights… he’s here."

“Oh no…” Coppermane groaned.

“What do we do?” Rainbow asked.

“What do you think?” Smokestack said with a hint of panic. “Let’s get the hell out of here.”

“No arguments here,” Coppermane said.

Without wasting another second, the four attempted to sneak off away from Neon and his gang. They managed to find a way through another store to get around Neon and sneak out to the entrance. To be safe, they walked a little ways away from the entrance in case they got spotted. After a while, they turned around and saw that nobody had followed them.

“That was close,” Coppermane said.

“I suppose this place isn’t safe for us anymore,” Rarity said. “Pity. I was hoping we could find some clothes for you, Rainbow.”

“Maybe some other time,” Rainbow said. “But I guess if we have nothing else to do, we could meet up with the others and work on homework or something.”

Rarity sighed. “I guess it couldn’t hurt. Would you boys like to join us?”

“I probably shouldn’t leave Smokestack alone,” Coppermane said. “I’ll just stick with him to make sure he stays alive.”

“Let’s just go home,” Smokestack said. “We’ll be safest there.”

“You sure you can make it back?” Rainbow asked.

“As long as we don’t attract any attention, we should be fine,” Smokestack said.

“Alright. Stay safe you two.” Rarity said.

“We will,” Smokestack said. “Good luck, and I’ll see you and everyone else tomorrow.”

With that, the two groups split up, leaving Smokestack and Coppermane alone. They walked back to their car to go home, and not risk being seen by Neon or anyone else.

Chapter 11: Inner Demons

Smokestack and Coppermane sat across from each other in their home, eating dinner in relative silence. Mostly because they were processing everything that happened today. Eventually, Coppermane broke the silence.

“Hey, Smoke. Can I ask you something?” Coppermane asked.

“Sure. What’s up?”

“I remembered Jet Set saying something really strange when he attacked us last night.” Coppermane said. “He said he was friends with you, or something.”

Coppermane saw Smokestack's eyes go completely wide, and sit completely still.

“Smoke? You alright?” Coppermane asked. “Did I say something?”

He sighed heavily, almost shakily.

“No, you’re fine,” Smoke said.

“Do you know why Jet would say that?” Coppermane asked. “He has to be full of crap. Right?”

Smokestack bit his lip. “Well…”

“Wait… were you really…?”

“...friends with him?” Smokestack finished. “I hate to admit it but… yes. Jet, Upper, Royal, Suri, Fleur, Trenderhoof, and even Neon Lights. We were all friends at one point way back when I was at Crystal Prep.”

Coppermane pursed his lips. “Wow. Well, why do they hate you so much now?”

Smokestack clenched his fists, biting his lip hard. "I’d rather not talk about it.”

“It can’t be that bad,” Coppermane coaxed. “Right?”

“I said I don’t want to talk about it!” Smokestack snapped, slamming his hand on the table. He noticed Coppermane’s shocked face, and took a deep breath to calm himself down. “Sorry. I-I didn’t mean to snap like that. It’s just… it’s a sensitive topic for me.”

Coppermane bit his lip. “I see. Sorry for triggering you.”

“No worries,” Smokestack said. “You didn’t know. I shouldn’t have snapped. But… why does he go after you? What’s his problem with you?”

“I have no idea,” Coppermane said, sighing. “I wish I knew. I mean, he bullied me a lot in the past, and I lashed out one day and beat him up in front of everyone. I regret that every day. I guess he’s been hell-bent on ruining my life since then.”

“So… pretty much just to be a prick?”

“There’s probably more to it,” Coppermane said. “I just wish he wouldn’t try to hurt Fluttershy. I wish I could date her without putting her in danger.”

“Hey, Coppermane?” Smokestack said. “Can we maybe… change the subject? I’d rather not worry about Neon if we don’t have to.”

“Oh, yeah of course,” Coppermane said.

Suddenly, Coppermane’s phone buzzed. He opened up his phone, and Smoke chuckled when he saw a big smile appear on his face.

“Who texted you?” Smokestack asked.

“Fluttershy,” Coppermane said. “She just sent me an ‘I love you’ text with a picture of her blowing a kiss.”

Smokestack chuckled. “She’s a sweetheart.”

“The sweetest sweetheart in the world,” Coppermane said. “We send each other ‘I love you’ texts randomly all the time.”

“That’s really nice,” Smokestack replied.

Coppermane texted Fluttershy back, saying he loved her too, and put his phone back down.

“She’s the best,” Coppermane said. “Oh, that reminds me. Anything planned for Sunset now that you’re back?”

Smoke smiled at the thought of Sunset.

“I did have a few things in mind,” Smokestack said. “Mostly I just want to spend time with her. Play games with her, go on romantic dates, walks, treat her to nice places, go to the movies with her, heck, I never got a chance to cuddle with her. Heck, I never even asked her out. Didn’t you say there’s a Halloween Ball coming up?”

Coppermane nodded. “Maybe you can ask her out to that?”

“You know what? I think I will."

“Do you know what you’re go as?” Coppermane asked.

Smoke bit his lip. “I’m actually not sure. Admittedly, I’ve never actually been to a real Halloween party before. I’ve heard what they’re about, but I think I may have a distorted view from the Crystal Prep parties. They throw poor excuses for parties over there.”

“Because they don’t have Pinkie Pie,” Coppermane said.

Smokestack chuckled. “I just don’t know what I should go as. I don’t want to look stupid. I mean, I just don’t know what to do.”

“What do you mean?” Coppermane asked.

“Well… when you guys do Halloween, what do you do?”

“I don’t know about everyone else, but I know what I do,” Coppermane said. “I go full-on geek. It’s really all based on personal preference.”

“I see... “ Smokestack said. “Well, that’s not my focus now. I need to ask Sunset to the dance first before I do anything. I just don’t know how, though. The moment needs to be perfect.”

“I’m sure it will come eventually.” Coppermane replied.

“I guess you’re right. But… what if Sunset doesn’t want to talk to me?”

“What do you mean?” Coppermane asked. “I’m sure she’ll be thrilled to see you.”

“But I abandoned her,” Smokestack said. "I--

“Smokie, don’t worry,” Coppermane said. “If she’s still mad, just explain what happened. If she really cares about you, she’ll understand.”

Smokestack sighed. “I just hope I haven’t completely lost her.”

“It’ll be fine,” Coppermane said.

“I hope you’re right, Coppermane.

With that, Smokestack and Coppermane continued eating and chatting the night away.


Midnight struck, and the house was sound asleep. And in Smokestack's room, he grunted and gasped as he rolled around in bed. Something within his dreamland stirred him up...

Smokestack ound himself in the void again. But it didn’t last long. Sudden heat radiated from behind him, making his body feel like night and day. He turned around, and gasped.

Canterlot High was ablaze. The structure crumbled under the roaring heat of the flames. Burned bodies were laid out across the front. Some were still alive, groaning with sheer pain as their flesh smoldered.

“No!” Smokestack cried. “How?! How did this happen?!”

An evil laugh from behind answered his question. He turned around, and was faced with bright, demonic green eyes on a chitin, equine body.

“You!” Smokestack said. “Stop this! Why? Leave me alone! Why won’t you leave me alone!?”

“We are of one mind. I course through your veins. I AM you. You and me are one, Smokestack. You can't escape me.”

Smokestack's head suddenly began ringing, pounding against his skull. He screamed, clenching his head and falling to his knees.

“What do you want from me?” Smokestack pleaded. “Make it stop!"

Smokestack managed to open his eyes long enough to see the changeling queen lunge at him with her fangs.

“No!!! Stop!!!” Smokestack cried. The pounding… it stopped. His eyes were wide open. His heart pounded against his chest. He looked around, and realized he was at Coppermane’s still.

Tears began streaming down his face. These nightmares. They were unbearable. Chrysalis was still alive… she had to be. Why else would she continue to cloud his mind? She had to be... within him. As long as he lived, she lived. They were one. She was inescapable… and hidden.

He couldn’t take this anymore.

He got out of bed and wandered downstairs to the kitchen. In the window, he could see his reflection. He looked at himself, and saw a strange green glow in his eyes, prompting him to look away immediately. A tear ran down his cheek.

He reached down and opened a drawer. “I won’t let her,” he said, retrieving something from the drawer. “You can’t have me. I won’t let you hurt my friends. I won’t let you hurt my Shimmercakes. I don't care what it takes... even if it means I have to die to keep you dead forever.”

Out of the drawer, he drew a sharp knife. His hands trembled as tears stained his cheek. He lifted it up, pointing the blade towards him. Directly over his heart.

“I won’t let you…”

Chapter 12: Reconcile

“I won’t let you…” Smokestack raised the blade, shaking in his hand.

“Smokestack! What are you doing?!”

Smokestack's tear stained face turned to see Coppermane.

“Don’t get any closer,” Smokestack said.

“Smokie, put the knife down,” Coppermane said, slowly approaching Smoke.

“She still lives...”

“What are you talking about?” Coppermane beckoned. “Who still lives?”

“Don’t worry, Coppermane,” Smokestack said. “Soon, you won’t have anything to worry about.”

“Smokie, listen to me,” Coppermane pleaded. “Just tell me what’s going on. I don’t know what you’re thinking, but this isn’t the solution.”

“There’s no other way. I have to do this.” He lifted his hand, taking a deep breath. But before he could finish the job, Coppermane lunged forward and pushed his hand up.

“Smokestack stop!”’ Coppermane yelled. “Just talk to me!”

“There’s nothing to tell!”

“I won’t let you do this to yourself,” Coppermane said, struggling against Smokestack. “You have to open up to me. I can help you.”

“I’m doing this to keep everyone safe!” Smokestack yelled. “Why can’t you understand that?!”

“Because you’re my friend, and we need you!” Coppermane shouted. Smokestack didn’t budge, continuing to fight against him. Seeing no other way, he kicked Smokestack's leg, knocking him to the ground and loosening his grip on the knife, dropping it from his hand. Smokestack fell to the ground with a thud, along with the knife, and Coppermane snatched it before Smokestack could.

Smokestack looked up at Coppermane, whom held the knife in his hand.

“I’m sorry, Smoke, but I had no choice,” Coppermane said. “It’s for your own good.”

Smokestack balled his fists in rage as he slowly stood up. Coppermane didn’t seem fazed at all, looking at him sternly. He must’ve learned how to stare like that from Fluttershy.

“Fine…” Smokestack snarled. “You really want to know what’s going on?”

Coppermane nodded. Smokestack stayed silent for a moment, feeling tears welling up in his eyes.

“She’s in me,” Smokestack mumbled.

“What?”

“Chrysalis." Smokestack said. “I don’t know how, but... I think she's inside me. She haunted me in my nightmares the minute I try to sleep, and they’re just getting worse. As long as I’m alive, so is she. I can’t escape her. I keep thinking she's inside my head, and I don't know if she is! I don’t know if she’s growing stronger with time, but I can’t let her kill you all. Not to mention Jet Set has probably told everyone that I’m alive, and now they’ll be hunting me down. I’m only bringing more harm to you all, and I don’t want to be a burden.”

“But I thought you said you killed her?” Coppermane asked. “Once you’re dead, you’re dead, right?”

“I thought so, Coppermane. But she’s still alive. I can feel her,” Smokestack said. “She keeps taunting me in my sleep, saying she’s going to awaken soon. God... why is she doing this to me? I've already had to deal with dead parents, depression, and now sociopathic bullies! I can’t let her take the only friends I have in the world away from me. I don’t know what to do,” he felt his hands shaking and his working eye tearing up, “… I… I…”

“Hey, it’s alright,” Coppermane said, rubbing Smokestack's shoulder. “No wonder you couldn’t sleep.”

“I’m only bringing danger by living,” Smokestack said. “I shouldn't even be here, I... I shouldn’t be alive…”

“Don’t say that,” Coppermane said. “Think about how happy Rarity and Rainbow Dash were to see you. Remember?”

Smokestack sighed. “I suppose…”

“And what about Sunset?” Coppermane asked. “I thought you were excited to see her.”

“I am, but what does someone like Sunset even see in me? I’m just a one-eyed walking danger beacon. How can I even call myself a friend when just my mere existence brings danger to you guys around? Sunset deserves better than this...”

“Smokestack, stop. I know what Sunset sees in you. She wouldn’t stop talking about you for the longest time. In her eyes, you’re a hero. You were willing to sacrifice yourself to save the world. That takes a lot of guts. Besides, I know you’re not totally disabled. You're able to adapt to your one eye, right?”

Smokestack rubbed his hand over the fake eye and felt the little bit of skin that was torn from his face, feeling the appendages.

“I guess…” Smokestack mumbled. “I’m sure she wouldn’t want someone with so much emotional baggage, though.”

“I have a lot of baggage too,” Coppermane said. “It doesn’t make you weak. Sunset likes you because you’re you.”

Smokestack didn’t budge, deep in his own thoughts.

“I know this is hard,” Coppermane said, “But I’m sure the others will help you if you tell them what’s going on.”

“No!” Smokestack flinched

Coppermane flinched. “But, why not? They need to know.”

“It’s only going to raise more problems! Just stay quiet, please? We don’t need any more problems as it is.”

Coppermane shook his head. “This is too important, Smoke. Besides, you’re going to have to tell them at some point. You can’t keep hiding.”

“Coppermane, I’ll figure something out,” Smokestack said sternly. “I don’t want to make them worry right when I see them again, especially Sunset. I just want to enjoy some time with my friends with no worries for a little while. Please?”

Coppermane sighed. “Fine. If that’s what you really want, as selfish as it is, then I guess I won’t make you. I’m just saying that it would benefit us all if you came clean.”

Smokestack sighed. “I know. I just don’t want to create more problems.”

“I understand,” Coppermane said. “I don’t want to be the bad guy Smoke, but I have to be upfront as well, y’know?”

“I get it."

“Your friends are here for you, Smoke,” Coppermane said. “But we can’t help you if you don’t let us. We’ll help you all the way, and we won’t let anything bad happen to you.” Coppermane gave him a pat on the shoulder. “You get me?”

Smokestack looked up at Coppermane and gave him a nod. “Sure.”

“Good,” Coppermane said. “I’m gonna head back to bed, and I suggest you do too. Promise me that I’ll see you in the morning?”

Smokestack sighed and nodded. “I promise.”

“Perfect,” Coppermane said. “And hey, if you need something happy to think about, just try to imagine how big Sunset’s smile will be when you give her that stuffed animal.”

Smokestack pondered, and the thought of Sunset’s smile managed to bring some light to his heart.

“Thanks, Coppermane. You’re right,” Smokestack said. Coppermane stepped up the stairs and didn’t look back to see the look on Smokestack's face.

Smoke's face went from a hopeful smile to a malicious grin along with his eyes both real and fake illuminating with a green highlight.

"Everything will be just fine...”


Smokestack's eyes opened to the bright morning sun. He let out a mighty yawn and stretched his limbs before sitting up to get out of bed. After a quick pit-stop at the bathroom, he walked downstairs, and his mouth began to water when he was greeted with the smell of pancakes.

He reached the bottom of the stairs, and looked to the kitchen to see Coppermane cooking breakfast.

“Morning,” Smokestack called out.

Coppermane turned around and smiled. “Morning, buddy. Sleep alright?”

Smokestack shrugged. “I didn’t have another nightmare, so I suppose I did.” He started walking to the table, and was surprised to see there were more than two people in the house.

“Rarity? Rainbow Dash?” Smokestack asked.

“There’s our favorite retro man,” Rainbow said.

“Um… morning,” Smokestack said. “When did you get here?”

“About fifteen minutes ago,” Rarity said. “Coppermane invited us.”

“Why?” Smokestack asked.

“I thought it might be good to have some more… protection for you on your first day back. Things at Crystal Prep have gotten bad, so I figured it couldn’t hurt,” Coppermane replied.

“Don’t you think this might be overkill?”

“Nonsense, darling,” Rarity said. “The more the merrier. Besides, I finished the necklace you requested for Sunset.”

Rarity handed the necklace to Smokestack, who grinned. “Wow, nice work. I knew I could count on you. Thank you so much. Seriously, thank you, I don't even know how to repay you.”

“I’m always happy to help,” Rarity said. “I know Sunset will just love it!”

Smokestack smiled and took a seat with everyone else. He had a big day to look forward to. Seeing his friends again, and more importantly, seeing his Shimmercakes again.


The group of four all stood at the front entrance of the school and were standing by in preparation.

"Okay bud, you think you're ready yet?"

"I think so. I'm calm, cool, collective... I think I can do this. But why a grand opening like an opening of a game show?"

"Well, I think it'd make your revelation more grand! Why not surprise Sunset with a big entrance?" Rarity smiled.

Smokestack scratched his chin. "I'm not sure. And I'll say the same thing I said this morning; Doesn't this seem a bit of an overkill?"

"Absolutely not. Look, we'll go find the rest of our friends, and then we'll make your big entrance! Come Rainbow, we must find the others!"

"No, Rarity, wait I..."

Rarity and Rainbow were gone before Smokestack could protest any further, making him groan.

"You know... is there anything wrong with just a simple walk in?" Smokestack asked with a hint of whine.

But something in his peripheral vision caught his eye. He looked outside the main entrance, the front stairs and concrete that led to the inside of the school, and his heart dropped. “No... no no no, why now? Of all times, it has to be now?”

“What?” Coppermane asked.

“Neon Lights is packing. And he brought company.”

Coppermane took a look for himself.

“You’ve gotta be kidding me,” Coppermane groaned. “What do we do now?”

Smokestack was in a fit of panic. He didn't make any backup plans in an event like this. But wait... the ventilation shafts. The air ducts above. They'd be right above the lockers, and they'd get a good look at them from above without being caught. Maybe...

Smokestack leaned into Coppermane’s ear, and whispered what he had in mind. “You follow me?”

“I think so,” Coppermane said. “But we have to hurry.”

Smokestack guided Coppermane to a nearby ventilation shaft. He managed to get it open and crawled inside.

"Never let it be said I ripped a piece off of the school out of my own desires." Smokestack said as he gestured Coppermane to crawl inside.

Once inside, Coppermane closed the vent and they watched closely. Smokestack's heart skipped a beat when familiar heeled boots and blue jeans walked on by.

“I’m so sorry, Smokie... I lost it. I’ve failed you…” Sunset cooed as tears fell down her cheek.

She sighed heavily as she turned the combination lock on her locker. She reached into the side of her pants and pulled out the tape player that was clipped to her, allowing her to look at it.

“What are you doing with his tape player, bitch?”

Sunset froze, and slowly turned her head. The second she noticed something amiss, she was pinned against the locker, and was face to face with Neon Lights. A knife punctured her jacket above her shoulder as Neon stared right into her eyes. Behind him was the rest of his posse. And as she was pinned, Neon clutched the tape player out of her hands.

You,” Sunset growled. “What do you want?”

“Information,” Neon sneered. “Where’s your boyfriend?”

“S-Smokie?”

“Who else?!” Neon shouted.

“He's dead! What else do you want!?"

Royal and Jet Set interrupted her by whipping out small light cannons and pointed them at her head.

“Tell us now!” Neon shouted.

Sunset backed away from the gun as best as she could, but she couldn't go far. “I-I don’t know!”

“Hey!”

Neon and his gang turned around to see Sunset’s friends standing firm.

“You’ve got a lot of nerve showing your faces here,” Flash growled.

“Get your filthy hands off our friend,” Rarity sneered.

“Or what?” Neon sneered.

“Or we’ll have to use force,” Rainbow snarled, cracking her knuckles. Applejack and Pinkie Pie cracked their knuckles as well, and moved their necks around which made cracking noises too.

Upper Crust and Suri Polomare drew light cannons from their backs. Fleur did as well, pointing hers at Sunset, making her yelp.

“Come any closer, and the bitch gets it,” Neon growled. “I don't care who answers me, but my patience is running thin. Where is Smokestack?!”

Nobody said a word. Sunset shed a tear as she looked at her friends. Neon glared back at Sunset's quivering lips.

"Why the hell do you have his cassette player?"

"That was a gift to her! And it doesn't belong to you!" Applejack snapped.

"Exactly, it belongs to Smoke. And if any of you cared to respect him enough, you'd leave it where it was."

Pinkie Pie popped up from a locker and she gave a questioning look.

"Wait... hold on a second. You were completely against Smokie-wokie, all willing to attack us, but suddenly now you're suggesting we move his stuff back?" Pinkie asked with her usual pitched voice.

Neon blinked. "Yes."

Pinkie pointed one finger at Neon with a blunt look. "You make no sense."

Pinkie swooped back down on the floor and she popped right back up with the rest of the girls standing with a fighting pose once again.

Neon chuckled as he looked at Sunset's crying eyes. “You fell for Smokestack. I don’t know why. A girl like you deserves someone who can actually defend you. Not some geek with a single eye.” He turned to look at her friends. “I don’t know what any of you saw in that freak. But our Sunset has opened our eyes. You’re all pathetic. I know for a fact ladies don’t like pathetic people.”

“Ladies don’t like you either,” a voice said.

Neon flinched, as did everyone else. They panned around to discern where the sound came from, and jumped when someone jumped down from the ceiling vent. He stood up, and Neon’s eyes filled with rage.

"And Pinkie's right. Your plan makes no sense, and you've got serious issues."

“Coppermane?!” Neon sneered. He was about to walk towards him, but didn’t want Sunset to get away. “Royal, watch the bimbo.” Royal nodded and took Sunset from Neon. He walked towards Coppermane, balling his fists. "You've got it coming now!"

Coppermane smirked and crossed his arms. And just above--

“You insulting, patronizing... asshole!”

The voice came from the vent again. Neon looked up, and in the darkness he saw a pair of ominous glowing green eyes looking at him.

“What the…”

Out of nowhere, Neon was grabbed by two odd hands from up above, hauling him up into the vent, making his friends freak out. Coppermane moved under the vent and stared back up, flinching a bit from the screams and the violence within.

"Coppermane! Catch this!"

Coppermane braced himself, and the tape player fell down the vent and he grabbed it just in time, catching it without dropping it. He looked back up with eyes wide as he realized what was about to happen. He quickly jumped back from the vent.

Silence blanketed the hall before Neon fell back out of the vent, covered in sticky residue, and missing his sunglasses.

“What the hell was that!?” Neon shouted.

“My new friend, Neon.” Coppermane replied, looking smug.

Coppermane looked back up towards the ceiling vent. Two arms were sticking out of the vent holding onto the sides. Smokestack umped out and landed on the ground. He slowly raised his head, icily staring down the Crystal Prep students.

“What the…” Neon asked.

Smokestack growled as he stared at Neon Lights. He ripped the cloth mask off and the bandanna, along with the glasses, making them gasp. “Long time no see, Neon.”

“No! No! That’s impossible!” Neon said.

“I told you he was alive!” Jet yelled.

Neon turned his head back to Smokestack and quivered in fear. He could only imagine how much anger flowed through his veins.

“Uh... Hey, Smoke, old buddy.” Neon nervously said. “It's...been awhile, hasn’t it?”

“Did you miss me?” Smokestack sneered.

“Oh, uh, yes, of course buddy. I’ve missed you. I-I thought you died.”

“Do I look like someone who died, you idiot?” Smokestack replied with his eyes illuminating devilishly. His teeth were daggers and his head was in flames.

Neon could feel the sweat running down his head. “Well, it's great to see you’re back, again. And you’ve...got a new scar, th-that’s, that’s cool. Makes you look like--”

“Like what?”

“Like an action hero!” Neon quickly said.

The halls went dead silent. And no one said anything else. Until Neon spoke up again.

“So, uh, Coppermane said you were his friend, is... is that right?”

Smokestack snarled some more. “Yes.”

“Well..w-why would you make friends with that loser? Why not just come back with us again… b-buddy?” Neon nervously asked.

Smokestack looked back at the rest of Neon’s posse all looking scared out of their minds, and slowly backing away. They knew they were in big trouble. His eyes kept moving side to side, observing their emotions, and then leaned down to Neon.

“Because Coppermane is something you aren’t. Loyal, honest, brave, intelligent, kind… a best friend. A real friend. Something you never were. Real friends don’t go stabbing each other in the back. They give them the support they need. He helped me when I needed it, he saved my own life, he kept me alive from the monsters that you’ve all become. And I’ve heard about everything that you put him through. But as for what you’ve done to me? Well... I think a bigger punishment is in store for what I’ve got planned for you.” Smokestack finished with his eyes slowly becoming empty voids.

Smokestack's eyes just stared down into Neon’s soul. With a quick grab, he pulled him up by the tie and collar, and stared into the pits of his eyes. His right hand quickly rose up close and clamped around his throat, pulling him closer to stare eye to eyes. Neon felt his other hand grabbing onto his other arm and from what he could see, he began loosening the straps that were holding the light cannon onto his arm. Once the final strap was loosened, it fell and hit the ground with a hard metallic bang, splitting into several pieces.

“Not fun when you’re the one getting hurt, is it Neon?”

Neon just shook his head, afraid of what he was going to do.

“You burned my house down, you drilled my eye, you steal my property, beat me up, attempt to assault and kidnap my friends, attacked my girl, steal my technology, and you betrayed me… WHAT DID YOU HAVE TO GAIN BY HURTING ME!?” Smokestack screamed at the top of his lungs.

“You know what we had to do!” Royal yelled back.

“We couldn’t let you make that choice!” Trenderhoof retorted.

"If you cared, you would have let me decide where I'd want to go!" Smokestack snapped.

Coppermane and the others except for Sunset all looked at each other with questionable faces. What is it that they were talking about? What choice did he make? Everyone was left with nothing but confusion.

Smokestack looked back to see Sunset crying, and he felt a tear go down his own face. He couldn’t stand the sight alone of his girl in pain. It was bad enough he left her with a dead friend, but now he had left her with a bunch of pyschopaths who were going to hurt her. And now, he had the head of the attackers in his clutches.

Smokestack slowly turned his eyes back to Neon and snarled.

“You hurt my girl… and now, you’re going to die. Slowly…swiftly….painfully... And trust me Neon, its going to hurt me a lot more than it'll hurt you.”

Neon struggled to get himself freed, and stared at Smokestack's eyes, seeing the fury flowing.

“No… please! Grant me mercy, I beg of you!” Neon pleaded.

“I begged for mercy from you when you assaulted me, but you responded by shoving a spinning drill into my face! It's too late for it now, Neon. Way too late...” Smokestack said with an evil tone, removing his right hand and exchanging it for the other one and readying his left hand.

“You were afraid of Midnight Sparkle, was it? Well how about dealing with someone who's actually Equestrian..."

“Smokestack!” Coppermane shouted.

Smoke's attention turned to Coppermane looking at him sternly.

“You’ve made your point. I think it's time that they just leave.” Coppermane said.

Smokestack then looked back to see the rest of his posse terrified beyond all belief, and then see his own friends scared. The thought of scaring them just hurt inside. Coppermane was right. He couldn’t just kill someone in front of them, not when he made it this far to get back with them.

“Fine. But I’m only letting you go because you said so.”

Smokestack looked back at Neon’s quivering face.

“If I catch you stepping on our school’s property again, I will find you. And unlike this time, I will actually finish what you started… Understand!?” Smokestack said.

Neon nodded quickly, and Smokestack pushed him away from his face, making Neon fall to the floor. He could feel the anger that was growing inside.

“Neon…” Royal said.

“I know,” Neon said. “Let’s get out of here!”

The Crystal Prep students bolted out of the school at the speed of sound, not letting another second pass.

“And stay out!” Smokestack shouted at the top of his lungs.

“Ugh! They got away again!” Rainbow groaned.

“I think that can wait…” Applejack replied, pointing at Smokestack.

Smokestack turned around and collected Neon’s shades, then slowly walked towards Sunset. She was still pinned to the lockers, her face buried in her hands as she cried.

"Is... is it really..." Fluttershy stammered.

"It is." Coppermane smiled, giving Fluttershy a peck on her cheek.

"He's... alive?" Twilight blinked.

"How is that even possible?" Flash asked.

Smokestack slowly approached Sunset, removing the knives from her jacket to free her.

“Shimmercakes?”

Sunset only recoiled more, trembling harder.

“Shimmercakes, I-I got this for you.”

Sunset slowly opened her eyes, and lit up when she saw a beautiful necklace being presented to her. A pendant of bright aquamarine, cut in the shape of her cutie mark. She looked up, and gasped when she saw who it was. Her eyes began to water again, but out of joy instead of fear.

“S-Smokie?”

“Hi, Shimmercakes. Sorry I took so long.”

Silence blanketed the halls again. Were Sunset’s eyes deceiving her? Was this just a dream? No. It wasn’t. Shimmercakes… she’s never heard such music in a long time. A smile graced her face as pure joy took control of her. She cried out as she began bawling, and immediately lunged into Smokestack's arms. He held her tight, never letting go.

"S-Smokie… it… it’s really you…” Sunset whimpered.

“Shh… it’s okay... I’m back, and I’m here for you,” Smokestack said, rubbing her back as she continued to bawl on his shoulder. He couldn’t stop a tear from falling from his own eye too. And even more so started to fall as he held her tight, and resting his head on his shoulder.

“Smokie? Wh-Why are you crying?” Sunset cooed.

“Sunset, I’m sorry. I’m so sorry.” Smoke bawled. “I can’t believe I let them hurt you, and… I hurt you…”

“No, Smokie…” Sunset cleared a tear coming down his face. “It's okay… You’re back. You’re home.”

Sunset’s eyes were so inviting and sweet, and when his eyes panned down to her lips, he couldn’t help himself. He cupped Sunset’s face and surprised her with a passionate kiss. Sunset was stiff for only a split-second before relaxing in Smokestack's embrace, wrapping her arms around his neck. It’s been too long since their first kiss. Smokestack almost forgot how sweet her lips were.

They pulled away, and Smokestack gave Sunset a smirk.

“I’ve wanted to do that for such a long time." Smokestack said.

Sunset blushed. “I guess this means we’re together now?” she said with a smirk.

“I guess so,” Smokestack remarked.

Sunset giggled and leaned in to kiss him again, all while their friends smiled.

“Well I’ll be. It's really him.” Applejack smiled.

“I never thought I’d be glad to see him again.” Flash said.

“But... how!?" Twilight flailed her arms around. "Reanimating from the dead's impossible, unless maybe you were under mad science, but how is--"

Twilight.” Coppermane interrupted. “I'll explain everything I know. But there's nothing to be worried about. As far as I know, that's our guy.”

Twilight took a moment to study Smokestack from afar now that everything was calm, and he didn’t look off at all. He looked… normal.

“Are you sure?”

“I’m positive Twilight.” Coppermane replied.

“Wait, hold on. If you knew he was alive, how come you didn’t tell any of us?” Flash asked.

“He asked me to keep it a secret until today because he wanted to surprise you guys.” Coppermane replied.

“Actually, I kind of knew too.” Rainbow said.

“Me too. We promised we’d keep our lips sealed until today.” Rarity replied.

Everyone gave a simple nod in response, still trying to take everything in.

“Well I’ll admit, you did surprise us.” Applejack replied.

“Is this why you said you were busy yesterday?” Flash asked.

“Yeah. I was helping Smokie here get back in his normal state. Well, mostly normal. He’s got different colored eyes, but really that's all that's different.”

Coppermane’s head turned back to Smokestack whom observed Neon’s sunglasses.

“I may not have gotten back at Neon the way I had wanted... but at least I got my hands on a trophy,” Smokestack said, placing Neon’s shades atop his face. “What do you think?”

Sunset giggled. “I love it. Welcome home, Smokie.”

Smokestack smiled and gave Sunset a big hug. A really big one. He nuzzled her cheek and just held her so close, making Sunset giggle.

“I missed you so much, Shimmercakes.”

“Me too…” Sunset said.

“Group hug!” Pinkie squealed, everyone gathering around in a huge hug around the new couple.

“Great to have you back, bud.” Flash said.

“Welcome home, sugarcube.” Applejack smiled.

“We’ve missed you so much!” Fluttershy cooed.

“We’ve got so much to catch up on!” Pinkie squeed.

“I missed you guys too. It's great to be back again.” Smokestack smiled.


In the Rainbooms’ practice room, everyone was gathered around while Coppermane and Smokestack filled them all in on what they remembered. Smokestack explained his return to the world they're living in, and Coppermane helped fill in the rest of the missing pieces of the puzzle. Including Smokestack being kidnapped, their world's Sunset experimenting on him, and Smokestack's return to reality the night Jet Set attacked. And Smokestack dropped the bomb about his house burned down and now is Coppermane's roommate.

“So… aside from all of that, what else has happened?” Smokestack asked. "Is there anything else I need to know?"

"Well we know from Indigo Zap and Lemon Zest that there was some floating magic held in a collection tank at this world's Sunset's. I'm afraid that the other Sunset may have your magic." Rarity replied.

Smokestack's heart dropped. “You’re kidding.” Everyone shook their heads, making him sigh. “Well, do any of you at least know why she’s doing this?” Everyone shook their heads again, eliciting another groan and Smokestack scrunching his head. “Great. Just great. Magic's gone, my house is burned down... my girlfriend almost dies by a sociopathic guy who should be in jail, just... wonderful."

“Is there anything going on with you that we should know about?” Applejack asked.

Smokestack thought for a brief second, and then nodded.

“There is. That artifact that I used back in Equestria against Chrysalis? That's now staying out of my hands, and it should go back to Equestria where it belongs. Safer in the hooves of somepony there than it is here. As much as I would love to use it against the Crystal Prep students, I don’t want to… um… repeat history, if you know what I mean," Smokestack chuckled nervously, remembering being overtook by the power.

Sunset gave a nod. “I’ll be sure to let Princess Twilight know. Anything else?”

“Um… n-not that I know of. Except… I’ve slowly become weaker and now I’ve just endangered your lives by even showing up.”

Everyone stayed silent for a bit, just thinking of what to do now. What could they do now? Coppermane however, looked at Smokestack with a questioning face.

“Uh, shouldn’t we tell everyone here that he’s not actually dead?” Applejack asked. “I’m sure everyone would be thrilled.”

At that moment the bell rang.

“Oh, sweet! Lunch break. It's the perfect time!” Rainbow said.

“You want to tell everyone you’re back? They’re gonna find out eventually.” Sunset asked.

Smokestack sighed. “I guess. Neon and his friends already know I’m alive, so there’s no point in hiding anymore. Besides, I'll have to catch up with everything at school now that I'm back.”

“Actually, can I talk with you privately first?” Coppermane asked.

“Huh?” Smokestack grunted.

“I just want to talk to you about something real fast,” Coppermane said.

“Uh, okay. I guess that’s fine…” Smokestack said quietly. “You guys okay with that?”

Everyone nodded and stepped outside. Once the door closed, Coppermane spoke up.

“Smoke, you need to tell them what you told me.”

“What? I’m not saying anything!”

“That kind of information is vital to our cause. If you want to help us, tell them what you told me,” Coppermane said.

“We’ve got enough problems as it is. I don’t think panic attacks in my sleep are worth it!” Smoke said.

“This problem is as real as our other issues,” Coppermane said. “You can’t hide it forever.”

“Okay, fine! I will, just… give me some time to think, okay?” Smokestack said. “We have enough to worry about already. Besides… I just got together with Sunset.”

“I know, but I just don’t want it to get out of hand,” Coppermane said.

“I’ll come clean when it feels right." Smokestack said.

Coppermane sighed. “If you say so. C’mon, we shouldn’t keep the others waiting.”


The group arrived at the cafeteria, but were surprised to find some unsettling sounds coming from the doors. They opened the doors, and saw everyone arranged in a circular formation around the middle.

“What the hell is going on in here?” Coppermane asked.

“Oh, thank goodness you all are here,” said a voice. The group looked to see Octavia Melody approaching them, looking worried. “I don’t suppose you could intervene and stop the fighting at all?”

“What?” Fluttershy sputtered. “Who’s fighting?”

“It’s Hoops and Score. They’re fighting our new classmates.” Octavia replied.

“What?!” Coppermane growled.

“Hoops and Score? Who are they?” Smokestack asked.

“They’re the brutes who bullied Coppermane when we met him,” Rarity said.

“Looks like they’ve found some new prey,” Applejack sneered.

“Not on my watch,” Coppermane sneered, stomping over to the commotion. He shoved his way through the crowd to get to the middle, revealing Hoops and Score in a heated fight with Indigo, Lemon, Sunny, Sour, and Sugarcoat; the Crystal Prep transfers.

“We helped save our planet from world domination!” Indigo insulted.

“Go back to Crystal Prep!” Hoops retorted.

Indigo’s fists clenched tightly and tried swinging another punch, but she was quickly blocked and punched back by Score. She winced, tumbling to the floor, hacking up some blood.

“Get up and fight!” Score shouted.

“I think you’ve done enough!” Sunny snarled.

“Go back where you came from!” Hoops remarked.

“Hey!” A voice called out.

The crowd parted to make way for a very angry-looking Coppermane.

“Leave them alone,” Coppermane growled.

“Coppermane, no!” Sunny cried. “Don’t get into this!”

“You five don’t belong here,” Score said.

“You five are the reason Coppermane and Smokestack suffered!”

“YEAH!” Everyone yelled.

“And now because of you five, Smokestack is dead!”

“Stop!” Coppermane shouted, silencing everyone. “Now, leave these girls alone.”

Score chuckled. “Or what?”

“You beat us once, but that was just dumb luck,” Hoops smirked. “We won’t hesitate to kick your ass again.”

“Maybe I can’t… but perhaps my new friend can,” Coppermane said.

Score stifled a laugh. “Yeah, right! I’d like to see what kind of wimp you’ve paid to--”

“He said leave them alone.”

Coppermane smirked and turned around, and so did everyone else. A collective gasp filled the cafeteria as they began backing away. Parting the crowd was a gray-skinned boy with messy hair and a trophy from his last skirmish in the form of shades.

“No… no. No you can’t be!” Indigo cried.

He removed his shades, two purple eyes that clearly didn't match, looking as devious as a cat's eye. It was enough to send shivers down the spines of every CHS student nearby.

“Did you miss me?” Smokestack smirked.

The former Shadowbolts backed away.

“H-How?!” Lemon beckoned. “How is that possible?!”

“No…” Hoops stammered. “Y-You’re dead. Th-There was a funeral and everything!”

“Do I look dead to you?” Smokestack remarked raising a brow. “Hoops and Score… from what I understand, you two are the ones who assaulted Coppermane...”

“You’re friends with that loser?” Score cried.

“You bet I am,” Smokestack said. “And he’s a better person than either of you could ever hope to be. Now, you leave those girls alone, or I’ll have to remind you of what I’m capable of. You heard about the stuff I did back at CPA? I wouldn't want to have to inflict anything on you two...”

“I’d like to see you try you worthless piece of junk,” Score retorted. He threw a punch but Smokestack moved in time and grabbed his incoming fist with his right hand.

“Wha--? Let go!”

“Don’t test me, Score." Smokestack snarled.

But despite his warning, Score delivered a strong blow to Smokestack's cheek with his other hand, forcing him to let go. Everyone went dead silent as Smokestack rubbed his cheek, painting his hand with trace amounts of blood. He looked at Score's hand, and noticed a sharp ring was the source of the blood spill.

“Guess we’ll have to do this the old-fashioned way... again..."

In the blink of an eye, Smokestack grabbed Score’s arm and threw him down on the ground like a wet towel. He let go and put his food on Score’s chest.

“Believe me, I could go on,” Smokestack smirked.

“No, please! I’m sorry! I’ll stop!” Score pleaded.

“Wise decision,” Smokestack said. “Now you listen. These girls have changed, more than you know. If I ever catch you bullying them again, you’ll get a better taste of what I can do. Whether you like it or not. Understand?”

Score nodded, his eyes saturated with fear. Smokestack lifted his foot and allowed Score to get up. He and Hoops wasted no time in getting out of there.

He walked over to Lemon Zest to help her get Indigo back on her feet, and then sneered at everyone around the room.

“Now… it’s obviously true. I’m still alive, thanks to Coppermane's efforts. But that’s trivial compared to how you’re treating these five girls. I understand your anger, believe me. But we’ve put all grudges behind us, and you should too. The hate ends now.”

“They kept attacking CHS!”

“Endless years of pranks and threats!”

“Non-stop gloating!”

Enough!” Smokestack shouted, the entire room going dead silent. “What is the matter with you people?! Y’know, I loved this school because everyone was treated like family, no matter who you were. It didn’t matter if you had different skin, a different nationality, sexuality, interests or disinterests, you were treated like a family member. Compared to that, Crystal Prep is a nightmare. If you stand out even the tiniest amount, you’ll be ridiculed for the rest of your high school life. These girls are on our side now. They’ve changed. Why can’t you all see that? What happened to CHS while I was gone?”

“Smokestack, stop,” Coppermane said. “They’re not the enemy. It’s Neon and his gang. After all, they’re the ones who blackmailed those five girls into hurting you.”

Everyone gasped.

“Yeah… they were blackmailed,” Coppermane said. “Neon sabotaged their friendship. They never wanted to hurt him, but they didn’t have a choice. It’s over now, though. Don’t take your anger out on them, Smoke. It’s not worth it.”

Smokestack sighed. “Fine. But I’m still disappointed in all of you. Bottom line… don’t let me catch you hurting these five again. Get me?”

The look in his eyes were cold… and dead serious. Everyone nodded, not wanting to taste his wrath.

Smokestack suddenly grasped his temples as if he had a headache.

“Whoa…” Smokestack groaned. “Wh-What just happened?” He looked around and noticed some concerned and/or confused looks from everyone around him. “Um... well... g-go back to whatever you were doing... I guess...”

Everyone shrugged and resumed what they were doing before, mostly going back to eating food and talking.

“Smokie… y-you okay?” Indigo asked.

“Um… yeah, I am.”

Indigo gave a friendly smile along with the other girls.

“Well, now that that’s over… you’re alive!” Sunny exclaimed, giving him a big hug. The rest of her friends quickly joined in.

"Aww, come here!" Smokestack grinned as he hugged them.

“Great to see you again, dude,” Lemon said.

“Welcome back. Surprised you aren’t dead yet.” Sour said.

“Welcome home, Smokestack.” Indigo replied.

Smoke looked at some of the bruises on Indigo and winced in concern. “You should probably go to the nurse's office.”

“I’ll get her over there.” Sugarcoat said.

Sugarcoat and the rest of her friends walked off to get Indigo over to the nurse’s office, leaving Smokestack alone with his friends.

“Listen… I’m sorry for getting into another fight. I don’t like doing it, but I had to take action, y’know?”

“We understand, darling,” Rarity said.

“So… what do we do now?” Applejack asked.

“We should probably contact Princess Twilight about the artifact that I've got. I think it’s time I lived without omnipotence. Something like this is just too dangerous in this world. But first… let’s get something to eat."

“We should visit the nurse’s office at some point too,” Sunset said. “Just in case, y’know?”

Smokestack shuddered when he examined the semi-dried blood on it.

“Good idea."

“I agree!” Pinkie blurted out. “We want to make sure you’re good and healthy for the party on Friday!”

“Wait, what?” Smokestack asked. “A party?”

“Of course!” Pinkie said. “How else are we going to celebrate you cheating death???”

Their friends just chuckled.

“Well... I could definitely use something to unwind for a little bit." Smokestack replied.

“Yes! Welcome back party!” Pinkie squealed.

The group clamored as they went to go get some food. Smokestack offered his hand to Sunset, whom gladly took it. She surprised him with a kiss on the cheek and a side-hug.

“I’m so happy you’re back,” Sunset said.

He felt himself blush. He gave her a peck and squeezed her hand.

“And I’m so happy you’re finally mine,” he said, making Sunset’s face go as red as her fiery hair.


“Is the coast clear?” Hoops asked.

“I think so,” Score said. “But just to be safe, let’s stay how we are.”

“Good point,” Hoops said. “But the gray one has what we need. We have to get it!”

“We have to strike when the time’s right,” Score said. “Not when all his friends are around him.”

“I’m aware of that,” Hoops growled. “But once we have it, we’ll be unstoppable, and she will certainly be pleased.”

Score snickered, his eyes glowing slightly green. “Yes… and soon the rising tide of time shall take him.”

Hoops’ eyes shimmered with a similar green color. “Soon, my friend. Soon…”

Chapter 13: Rethinking The Past

Everyone sat in total silence around the dining room table of human Sunset’s mansion. What had they just witnessed? Someone rising from the dead? The reanimation of dead flesh? It was incomprehensible.

“He’s….he’s….” Suri stammered.

“But that’s impossible,” Royal said. “I thought everyone said he died!”

“Well, clearly he’s not,” Jet said, evoking a long sigh from everyone.

The door opened, and in walked human Sunset Shimmer holding a silver tray with several coffee cups and a plate with chocolate chip cookies.

“Hey, guys,” Sunset said, putting the tray down. “Thanks for coming on such short notice. I have something very important to tell you.”

“What is it?” Fleur asked.

“I’ve been doing some thinking…” Sunset said. “…I’d like to register at Crystal Prep Academy.”

Everyone’s eyes went wide, and some broke out in grins.

“Darling, a-are you serious?” Upper Crust asked.

Sunset nodded.

“Sunset, this is wonderful news!” Jet exclaimed.

“What made you change your mind?” Royal asked.

“I decided that I can’t stay alone anymore. Since you all agreed to help me end all of this chaos with the magic, I thought it should only be fair that I’d join you all at your school. Besides, that way I can also keep you all updated constantly on things at my end.” Sunset said.

Trenderhoof grinned, “Well, it’d be amazing to have you there. It's been getting pretty dull without someone like you to help us out.”

“Well, I’m glad you all accepted me as a…a…” Sunset trailed off.

“Friend?” Royal asked.

“Y-Yes,” Sunset nodded, “I-It's great to finally have friends.”

“Wait, what do you mean... finally?” Jet asked.

Sunset bit her lip, looking down at the ground while playing with her hands.

“Sunset, you don’t have to tell us if you don’t wish to,” Fleur said.

“No, it's okay. I… I’ve just never had friends before…” Sunset said. “I think you all should hear this. Back when I was younger, no one really liked me. It’s not that I didn’t try, I just never had any luck. However, my mind immediately stopped trying to make friends when it came to around a few years back… with what happened at CHS, on one particular night...” Sunset trailed off, gritting her teeth. “I saw… her. My other counterpart, supposedly. After I saw what happened, I thought she was going to take over the world. I got all the video and photographic evidence, but nobody believed me. I stuck to my story with an iron grip, but they all assumed I was crazy.”

Sunset paused, looking around the room at her new friends.

“We’re listening,” Fleur said.

“Please, keep going,” Royal said.

Sunset gave a nod. “Later… I saw what happened at the Friendship Games. What I had witnessed… it was too much. That… that thing was about to destroy us all. Tear the threads that hold our world together. From then on… I vowed to rid the world of every magic-infested creature. Eradicate them before they harm the world or put anyone around me in danger.”

Sunset didn’t look up, too lost in her own thoughts. The memory of every magical creature that threatened to destroy everything she knew.

“So, that’s your mission?” Royal asked.

“To rid the world of chaos and magic?” Suri asked. "Just so we all see the light of day?"

Sunset nodded.

“Sunset, we’re all on board,” Jet said. “If it means ending that other Sunset Shimmer and her little magic-infected friends, then we’re in.”

Sunset gave a small, but genuine smile. “Thanks. Everyone… thank you.”

Before she could make another noise, her stomach began to rumble.

“Uh, I’m gonna go use the bathroom real quick, Be right back.”

Sunset walked out of the dining room, leaving the Crystal Prep kids to talk.

“Does anyone think we should tell her about… you-know-who?” Royal said.

Everyone nodded.

“But if no one’s going to say this, then I will. Neon, why didn’t you do anything when he was right in front of you? You never back down from anyone. Neon?” Jet asked.

Suri stopped and saw Neon wasn’t paying attention to any of them. His face was totally frozen.

“Neon?” Fleur asked.

Neon blinked for a moment, looking up to find concerned looks on his friends’ faces.

“You okay?” Royal asked.

“Um… y-yeah,” Neon stammered. “I just… need to clear my head real quick. I-I need a drink.”

Not giving any time to be questioned, Neon bolted out to the kitchen.

“You think he’s alright, what with… you know…?” Fleur gestured.

“I’m not sure he is,” Royal said.

Neon entered the kitchen, going to the sink and splashing his face with some ice-cold water. Standing at the sink, he gathered his thoughts. His head began to pound, swirling with a concoction of remorse and hate.

He wiped his hands dry on his clothes before reaching inside his blazer, pulling out a folded piece of paper. He unfolded it, and just for a moment, the contents brought him peace...


Neon held his rifle, gripped in his hand, ready to pull the trigger.

“Ready… aim…. Fire!”

He pulled the trigger, the recoil delivering a light bump back. After firing, he took his eye away from the scope.

“Ugh, again!?” Neon groaned.

He had missed the target again! He was having the worst luck at this prize corner.

“Hey, no one’s a perfect shot Neon.” Smokestack said, patting his back.

“This entire carnival is rigged,” Neon sighed.

“Better luck next time, huh?” Smokestack grinned, holding a teddy bear in his arms. AKA his prize from this very prize corner.

“The only reason you won was because the targets were set up easy,” Neon glared.

“Hey, now. The only reason I won was because I had years of practice with aiming targets. Practice makes perfect Neon, remember? But... admittedly Sour Sweet also took me out to paintball fields enough times for me to get the idea of how to lock onto a target and never give up.” Smokestack chuckled.

Neon shrugged, “I guess that explains it. Come on, let's find the others.”

After walking for a few minutes, they found the rest of the group standing near what appeared to be a spinning UFO ride.

“Hey guys, how come you’re waiting here?” Smokestack asked.

Royal huffed slightly, “Trenderhoof kind of made a dare on Indigo saying that she couldn’t last a second in that spinning space ship ride.”

“Ooh… big mistake.” Smokestack said.

Once the ride stopped, a door opened up revealing a nauseous Trenderhoof, and a grinning Indigo Zap.

“That was fun, let's do it again!” Indigo pumped her arms in the air.

Smokestack giggled, “Same old Indy.”

Trenderhoof stumbled around, holding his head.

“You don’t look so good Trenderhoof. Need a hand?” Smokestack asked.

Trenderhoof raised an arm up, gesturing a no.

Smokestack just shrugged and slowly stepped away.

“Come on, let's find a spot. I want to get a group photo!” Sunny said.

“Lead the way, Sunny,” Jet said.


A bittersweet memory. Happy, but heavy with shame after everything they’ve done to their past friend. Neon just stood there, the happiness and sadness canceling each other out into a blank, vacant stare as he looked at the photo.

Unfortunately, he had to get back to the group before they began worrying. He folded the picture back up and placed it in his blazer before going back out to join everyone.

Sunset Shimmer walked out of the bathroom, but stopped in her tracks when she noticed something above her living room fireplace. A mantle with some flowers, two silver urns, and a picture in the middle. In the picture, two adults in orange and reddish skin and hair color, in a hospital setting. And one of them held a baby.

Sunset walked up to the picture, placing her hand on the frame. Perfectly synced with her finger running down the frame was a tear on her cheek.

“I’m gonna put an end to this once and for all…” she murmured. “Balance will be restored. This I vow.”

With a sigh, she managed to pull herself away from the picture, rejoining the others.

“So…” Sunset said, “How are things on your end? Did that spectrometer work okay?”

“It worked fine, Sunset,” Royal said. “But you don’t know how much we risked to get the blueprints for the damn thing.”

“It was worth it though... right?” Sunset asked.

Everyone shook their heads.

“Right before we were about to use it, Neon got strangled by your counterpart’s reanimated boyfriend.”

“What? Who’s her boyfriend?” Sunset asked.

“Smokestack… that damn traitor,” Neon snarled.

“Huh?” Sunset said. “Who’s Smokestack?”

“He transferred to CHS at the end of last school year,” Royal growled.

Sunset tilted her head. “Um… still drawing a blank…”

Suri sighed. “Gray skin, bad attitude, highly aggressive, eyes that don't match the same color…?”

Sunset still looked confused.

“Okay, the photo you showed us with that boy? The one with the blue vest that had all the pins and patches?” Jet asked.

Sunset nodded.

“That’s him,” Jet said.

Sunset’s eyes widened, “Wait, hold on a second. Did you say he has two eyes that didn't match the same color? And gray skin?”

Jet nodded.

Sunset bit her lip. “Um… would you excuse me for a moment?”

Sunset dashed out of the room, heading for the basement. She ran down the stairs, almost tripping on her way down. She flipped on the lights, but she didn’t see what she expected.

The chains meant to hold a prisoner were snapped off. All of them were. Every chain hooked to the wall had been snapped off. Some of them were a bit older, while some were recently snapped. The basement was completely vacant.

“No… no….” Sunset pleaded.

Sunset rushed back upstairs and sat back down at the table, practically heaving.

“Okay… do not panic, but I think I’m the reason Smokestack is back,” Sunset said.

“What?” Fleur asked.

“What do you mean?” Trenderhoof asked.

“I’m sorry, I... I should’ve told you earlier,” Sunset said. “Smoke… I found him on my front lawn. It was uncanny. It was like he’d fallen from the sky, like a meteor. I didn’t know who he was at the time, so I took him to my basement to find out. He wouldn’t talk, though. The only thing I got was some magic, but nothing else. And somehow he got out. I-I’m sorry, guys.”

Sunset bit her lip, awaiting the shouting and rage from her friends. But it never happened. Instead, they just smiled at her.

“Well? If you’re gonna yell at me, just do it already!” Sunset pleaded.

They all started chuckling.

“What are you talking about?” Royal asked.

“Wait… you’re not mad?” Sunset asked.

They shook their heads.

“As far as we know, we have a sample or two of magic, a laboratory, and weapons to fight against magic, and of course, you,” Trenderhoof said. “That’s a start, right?”

“So he’s back,” Fleur said. “It’s not that big of a deal.”

Everyone else nodded, still smiling at Sunset.

“We’ll take them down either way,” Jet said. “And with them, the magic too.”

Sunset let out a sigh of relief, smiling back at her friends.

“Yeah… we’ll take the magic down once and for all,” Sunset said. “And if Smokestack is really is my counterpart’s boyfriend, we might be able to use their relationship to our advantage...”


Author's Note

Shorter this time around. Don't worry, we'll be back to our main leads!

Chapter 14: Party

After a long week of school, the main ten agreed that it was overdue for some time to unwind. Just one day at least would be amazing after all the chaos they’ve been going through. To that effect, Pinkie invited everyone to come over for a slumber party. A chance to relax with good friends, and have some fun while they’re at it.

Nobody was really in the mood for anything spectacular tonight. Simply a night of relaxation and friends was all they wanted. That didn’t stop Pinkie from going all out with decorations, though. Many colors of streamers and balloons painted the room, along with a big cake for everyone to enjoy. But for the most part, everyone was content with sitting in the living room and chatting amongst each other.

And of course, Smokestack took this as an opportunity to hold Sunset in his arms. Everyone chatted with each other, but Smokestack found himself getting lost in Sunset’s beautiful turquoise eyes.

“About time we get some time to unwind,” Rainbow said.

“No kiddin’,” Applejack agreed.

“How are you doing, Smokie?” Sunset asked.

Smokestack smiled and nuzzled Sunset's cheek.

“I’m doing great,” Smokestack said. “I somehow cheated death, I have my friends back, I can help against Crystal Prep, and most importantly... Shimmercakes is mine, now.”

Sunset giggled as Smokie kissed her cheek. “Smokie...”

Sunset blushed harshly when all her friends started giggling.

“What did you end up doing with the artifact?” Twilight asked.

“Sunset gave it back to Princess Twilight,” Smokestack replied.

“Did you have to hide in the bushes when Sunset was giving it back to Princess Twilight?” Applejack asked.

Smokestack looked at Applejack with an unamused expression, “Yes.”

“But why?”

“I don’t think they’d like to know that someone who demolished half their city is still alive,” Smokestack said. “Best to remain incognito with them.”

“You know they probably aren’t going to press charges against you for that, right?” Twilight asked.

“I’d rather not test that theory, Twilight,” Smoke said with a nervous look.

“But why would you want to get rid of such a powerful artifact anyway?” Coppermane asked.

Smokestack bit his lip. “Well, there’s something about it that I wish I had known before.”

“Like what?” Coppermane asked.

“Apparently, the more you use it, the more it corrupts you. You are powerful, and you feel powerful. It’s a deadly combination that feeds on your zeal, positive or negative. I got carried away and… well… I almost killed Indigo Zap under my anger and desire for power because of that thing.”

Fluttershy nodded. “That was pretty scary…”

“Yeah,” Smokestack shrugged. “Such great power always comes with its consequences. Word of advice, thoroughly research relics you’re about to steal,” he said, taking a drink.

“Wait, you stole it?” Flash asked.

Smokestack almost choked on his drink.

“Um…”

“Smokie… you stole it?” Sunset asked. “Why?”

He looked down, covering his face in shame. Sunset’s disappointed eyes were like daggers aimed right at his heart. He looked up, and saw everyone else sharing a similar expression to Sunset’s.

“Okay, yes I did, but please hear me out,” Smokestack said. He waited a moment to see if they would ask him to leave or start scolding him, but thankfully they didn’t.

“We’re listening, darling,” Rarity said.

Smokestack took a deep breath. “During one of my trips back to Equestria, I had a map with me that had locations of Equestrian artifacts. I was basically a relic hunter, and so I went hunting for anything I could use with me back in Equestria. You have to understand, though, that this was way back when I was younger. I didn’t know any better. My only means of income were stealing bits, metal, and ancient relics back in Equestria. I’m not proud of it, but what choice did I have?” He looked at Sunset, and immediately filled with cold shame. “I’m sorry, Shimmercakes.”

Sunset didn’t push him away like he expected, or anything of the sort. She gave him a warm smile instead.

“Smokie, we all make mistakes. Remember how awful I used to be? But I’ve moved past that. Old Sunset Shimmer is in the past, and now there’s me. We all know you’ve changed, Smokie. The important thing is the present and future. You’re redeeming yourself, and that’s truly admirable.”

Smokestack felt his face heat up, “So… you’re still with me?”

Sunset smiled, kissing him on the cheek. “Of course I am.”

Smokestack couldn’t help but smile. He interlaced his fingers with hers as he leaned in for a kiss. It was just a peck, but every kiss from Sunset was pure heaven. He squeezed her in his arms, making her giggle… and everyone else too, apparently.

“You two are so adorable!” Pinkie squealed.

Smokestack gave a light chuckle and blushed, “Thanks Pinkie. All of you. One more thing while we have a moment, how are we going to deal with Crystal Prep for the time being? I don’t want them bothering us while we’re trying to get some time off.”

“Don’t worry,” Twilight said. “Indigo and the others talked to us this week. To pay us back for standing up for them and getting CHS to be friendlier to them, they said they’ll take care of Crystal Prep while we just focus on schoolwork.”

“So I can focus on keeping myself healthy and relaxing for a little while,” Smokestack said. “Thank goodness. That means time for us, Shimmercakes.”

Sunset giggled, giving him a kiss on the cheek.

And so, everyone continued to chat the night away.


Everyone stayed up for as long as they possibly could, until everyone’s collective yawning gave them a hint that they should call it quits for the night.

The girls were in Pinkie Pie’s room, and the boys were in the guest room down the hall. Everyone was sound asleep, but a sound in the hallway stirred Smokestack out of his slumber. Rubbing the sleep out of his eyes, he listened closely. It sounded like footsteps, and listening even more intently, it sounded like sniffles as well.

Smokestack couldn’t help himself. He had to investigate. Quietly, he snuck out of the guest room to the stairwell. At the top of the stairs, he heard more than sniffles. The sniffles were accompanied by whimpering. And what’s more, the voice sounded familiar. Familiar enough to tug on his heartstrings more than any other sound.

Slowly but surely, he made his way down the stairs. Peering around the corner, a certain fiery hairdo made his heart skip a beat. She appeared to be at the sink, splashing water in her face. She also appeared to be breathing rather heavily, leaning over the water basin.

“Shimmercakes?”

Sunset flinched, freezing stiff and staying turned away. “S-Smokie?”

“Hi, Shimmercakes,” Smokestack said. “Are you okay?”

Sunset wiped her face, and turned around, revealing her reddened face and tattered hair.

“What are you doing up so late?” Smokestack asked.

“Um… just getting a drink,” Sunset said. “Woke up, and was a little parched. That’s all.”

Smoke rose an eyebrow. “Sunset, talk to me. Your eyes look pretty bloodshot.”

Sunset bit her lip. “S-Smokie… I-I’m fine…”

“Shimmercakes, c’mon. I can see some excess mascara running down your cheek.”

Sunset took a finger and rubbed her cheek, wiping off some excess black powder.

Smokestack grabbed Sunset’s shoulders. “Sunset, you can talk to me about anything. Nothing is too silly or too outrageous that you can’t discuss it with me. I’m here for you. Now…” He lifted her chin with his hand. “...look me in the eye and answer me. Are you okay?”

Smokestack waited, and watched as Sunset’s lips frowned, her eyes losing their light as a tear fell out.

“N-No…” Sunset whimpered, crumbling into tears.

“Whoa, whoa, whoa… it’s okay, Sunset,” he said, giving her a big hug as she cried on his shoulder. “Shh… it’s okay. I’ve got you.”

He held Sunset tightly as she soaked his shoulder with her tears. It took a few minutes, but she eventually began to calm down.

“Here, let’s go over to the couch,” Smokestack said. Sunset didn’t say anything, still whimpering and crying, but she gave him a nod instead in response.

Smokestack slowly led Sunset over to the couch, sitting down next to each other. Sunset leaned on Smokestack's shoulder as he held her.

“Now talk to me, babe,” Smokestack said. “What’s making that pretty face so sad?”

Sunset stayed quiet for a moment before letting out a long, shaky sigh.

“I… I’m worried,” Sunset said.

“Worried? About what?”

Sunset sighed. “Gosh… I’m not usually like this,” she said, wiping more tears off her cheeks.

“It’s okay, Shimmercakes,” Smokestack said. “What are you so worried about?”

Sunset looked up at Smokestack and placed her hand on his heart. “I’ve been thinking about what Neon and his friends did to you in the past. I… I’m just scared it’ll happen again... but worse. The ambush on Monday… it was just too close. I can’t bear the thought of them harming you, or any of our friends. It… it’s just too much…”

Sunset began to bawl, breaking down and lying on his legs.

“Oh no, Sunset. Please, don’t cry,” Smokestack pleaded, wrapping his arms around her. “C’mere… it’s okay. I’m here for you.”

“Smokestack… I’ve lost you once… I can’t lose you again,” Sunset cried.

“Don’t think about that, Shimmercakes,” Smokestack said. “Shh… shh… it’s alright…”

Sunset cried for a good few minutes, unrelenting. He stayed right by her side, holding her tight and rubbing her back. He never saw Sunset so distressed before.

When she started calming down, she pulled away, rubbing her cheeks. Her face was red and tear-stained, and her hair was ragged.

“I-I’m sorry, Smokestack. I’m usually not like this,” Sunset said. “Gosh, my hair’s a mess.”

Smokestack chuckled. “It’s perfect, babe.”

Sunset blushed, smiling for the first time tonight. “Don’t lie, Smokie. I look like a total wreck,” she said, feeling through her tattered hair.

“Shimmercakes, look at me,” he said, lifting Sunset’s chin. “I’m not lying. Your hair is perfect, just like everything else about you. No matter what, you will always be gorgeous to me, Sunset.”

Sunset’s face went as red as red velvet cake. And she was smiling. At this moment, Sunset’s smile was the most beautiful thing in the world to Smokestack. He lifted his hand and stroked her cheek, making her giggle. The way she leaned into his hand was adorable.

“And Sunset, I will never leave you again,” Smokestack said. “I finally have you, and not even Princess Celestia herself can make me let you go.” He took her hand. “You’re my Shimmercakes, and I’m your Smokie. Nothing will change that. I promise.”

Sunset gave Smokestack the warmest of smiles, mimicking the feeling in her heart. She leaned in and gave Smokestack a kiss on the cheek, followed by a big hug.

“Together… no matter what,” Sunset said.

“That’s right,” Smokestack said, giving Sunset a peck. “You’ll always be my beautiful Shimmercakes.”

Sunset giggled, her face as red as her hair. “Thanks, Smokie. I really needed this.”

“You’re very welcome,” Smokestack said, nuzzling her cheek. “I’m glad I could get some alone time with you.”

Sunset gave Smokestack a peck. “Me too.”

“Actually, I just remembered. I have something for you."

“What? Really?” Sunset said.

“Really,” Smokestack said. “Wait here. I’ll be right back.”

“Okay!” Sunset said.

Sunset waited patiently as Smokestack went upstairs. What did he have for her? Especially so late at night, and seemingly spur-of-the-moment. It didn’t take long for him to come back downstairs.

“I almost forgot about this with everything that’s been going on,” Smokestack said, returning with his hands behind his back. “So… soon after I returned and Coppermane helped me, we decided to hang out at the arcade. And the first thing I thought of was you.”

Sunset blushed. “Really?”

Smokestack nodded. “I wanted to give you something when we saw each other again. Even if it was small, I wanted to give you a present.”

Sunset smiled. “So… what is it?”

“Well, it’s not much, but after many rounds of skeeball, I was able to get you this,” Smokestack said, revealing what was behind his back.

Sunset gasped when she saw her present. A white teddy bear.

“Aww, Smokie!” Sunset squeaked.

Smokestack blushed. “You like it?”

“It’s adorable!” Sunset squealed, accepting it as he handed it to her. She gave it a big hug. “This is so thoughtful of you, Smokie!" She gave him a big kiss, followed by a hug. “Thank you so much!”

“You’re welcome, Shimmercakes,” he said, holding her. “I’m glad you like it.”

They shared another kiss, this one much more passionate than the rest. Sunset’s lips were somehow sweet and spicy at the same time. Such a wonderful sensation.

“Hopefully the teddy bear will help you sleep tonight,” Smoke said.

Sunset giggled. “You know what else would help me sleep?”

“What?”

Sunset gave him a flirty smile. “You.”

His eyes went wide. “Really?”

Sunset nodded. “Nothing would help me more to sleep than knowing you’re next to me.”

Smokestack smiled. “Of course, Shimmercakes.”

He leaned forward, giving Sunset a kiss before lying down on the couch. He scooted over to make room for Sunset, and pat the spot in front of him. Sunset blushed and laid down in front of him. She held her teddy bear like a hand pillow, and Smokestack wrapped his arms around her waist, holding her close to keep her safe as she slept.

Smokestack gave Sunset a kiss on the cheek. “I’m right here for you, Shimmercakes. Sweet dreams, beautiful.”

Sunset looked behind her, using her hand to bring Smokestack in for a goodnight kiss.

“Thanks, Smokestack.” Sunset whispered. “Goodnight.”

Smokestack gave Sunset one more kiss on the cheek before she fell back asleep. He took a moment to just watch her sleep. It was perhaps the most adorable thing he’s ever seen. She looked so at peace. The sweet scent of her hair enraptured his senses. The moonlight shined through the window, contouring her perfect complexion and figure. It was like she was glowing, and she was beautiful. Then again, she always is.

“I’ll never let anyone hurt you, Shimmercakes,” Smokestack whispered. He kissed her cheek again. “Goodnight, my beautiful Sunset.”

Smoke relaxed, and eventually let the clutches of sleep take him, and Sunset’s body provided all the warmth he needed.


Author's Note

Some happy fluff for now! :rainbowkiss::rainbowwild:

Chapter 15: Date Night!

“Thank you ever so much for offering to make breakfast for us, Pinkie,” Rarity said, walking downstairs, followed by everyone else.

“No problem!” Pinkie said. “I love cooking!”

“Lemme help ya out some, Pinkie,” Applejack said. “Should make things a mite quick--”

“Oh! Shh!” Rarity exclaimed.

“What?” Rainbow asked. “We’re all awake!”

“Keep it down!” Rarity said. “Look… on the couch.”

Everyone filed down the stairs and gathered around the couch to see what Rarity was so excited about. It was Sunset and Smokestack sleeping together. Smokestack had his arms wrapped around Sunset’s waist, and Sunset held a teddy bear close to her.

“Aww!” the girls went.

“But, where did the teddy bear come from?” Applejack asked.

“Oh, when Smoke was finally out of the hospital, I took him out to the arcade and he won a teddy bear for Sunset,” Coppermane said.

“Aw, that’s so sweet of him,” Fluttershy said.

Applejack let out another chuckle, “I don’t think I’ve ever seen Sunset so happy. I think she’s found her guy.”

Everyone nodded in agreement. The smile on Sunset’s face as she slept was undeniable. Unexpected snickering could be heard behind the group, and they turned around to see Rainbow Dash with what appeared to be a small air horn.

“Rainbow, no,” Coppermane said.

“Come on, it’ll be funny,” Rainbow said.

“Don't make me take that from you, Rainbow,” a voice said from the couch.

Rainbow looked down to see Smokestack with his eyes open.

“Smoke? I-I thought you were--”

“--asleep? You girls aren’t exactly quiet, so you woke me up,” Smoke whispered. “But I’m certainly not waking my Shimmercakes up. When she wakes up, so will I.” Smokestack gave Sunset a kiss on the cheek before snuggling back up with her and closing his eyes.

Rainbow groaned. “Party pooper…”

The girls giggled and quickly got started on breakfast. The scent of food stirred Sunset’s senses, waking her up. She looked behind to see who, or what, was holding her, and she was met with Smokestack's smile.

“Morning, Shimmercakes,” Smokestack said.

Sunset giggled, “Morning Smokie.”

Smokestack gave Sunset a kiss on the cheek, “You sleep okay?”

“Sure did,” Sunset said.

Smokestack released Sunset and they sat up next to each other. Smokestack wrapped his arm around Sunset’s waist and pulled her in for a passionate kiss. After gazing into each other’s eyes for a moment, Sunset got up to tidy herself up in the bathroom, whilst Smoke made his way to the kitchen.

“Morning… again."

“Morning!” everyone replied.

“Hey, Smoke, why were you and Sunset on the couch?” Coppermane asked. “I got a little worried when I woke up and didn’t see you in the room.”

“Oh, Sunset came down here in the middle of the night, and she said she couldn’t sleep. I stayed down here with her to help.”

“Oh, how sweet!” Rarity said.

He blushed. “I just want her to be happy. And… speaking of which… can I ask you girls for some… advice?”

“Sure!” Pinkie said, answering for everyone. “If it’s baking, you’ve come to the right place!

“Not baking advice,” Smokestack said, making Pinkie frown a little. “Um… I need some dating advice. You see… it dawned on me that Sunset and I haven’t gone on our official first date yet. I want to rectify that today, but I’m not sure what to do. My last relationship with Indy… it didn’t go so well. I just don’t want to mess up, because I really, really, really like Sunset. A girl that perfect deserves nothing but the best I can offer. I just have no clue what to do.”

“Darling, you’re putting too much pressure on yourself,” Rarity said. “I’m sure whatever you do, Sunset will love it.”

“No, that’s not good enough,” Smokestack said. “It needs to be perfect. As perfect as Sunset herself.”

“Well, for starters, that 50s diner in the mall has Sunset’s favorite food,” Twilight said.

“Gotcha,” Smokestack said, typing notes into his phone. “What else?”

“Don’t bring up anything involving the Fall Formal,” Applejack said.

“Yeah,” Rainbow said. “She’s really sensitive about her past.”

“Can’t blame her for that,” Smokestack said. “Next?”

“Well… we can’t really give you an exact equation for a perfect date,” Twilight said. “I mean… I don’t think we can. Maybe if I study for long enough…”

“No, Twilight. You’re absolutely right,” Rarity said. “Smokie, sweetheart, you shouldn’t overthink it. If you’re distressed, Sunset will be too, and then neither of you will be able to enjoy yourselves. I think the biggest thing here is to remember that Sunset will just love spending quality time with you. Treat her like a lady, and remember why you’re going out with her: to spend quality time with her, and to make her happy. That’s the ‘equation’ for a perfect date.”

Everyone was speechless, but their smiles all spelled agreement.

“Well said. Thanks a lot.”

“Anytime, darling!” Rarity said.

“Ah… much better.”

Smokestack looked to see Sunset walking out of the bathroom towards the group, and he found himself captivated by the sight. She tossed her fiery hair from side to side, straightening it out afterwards as she walked. It was like watching a supermodel strutting her stuff as she walked down the runway. Her gaze landed on him, and her gorgeous eyes seemed to sparkle. Her smile melted his heart like ice cream.

“Smokie? Are you okay?”

It took a moment for him to realize that Sunset was right in front of him, and he’d been ogling her that whole time in front of her friends.

“Um… yeah”, Smokestack stammered, rubbing his eyes. “It’s just… um… y-you look really pretty.”

Sunset blushed majorly. “Gosh… I mean… I don’t have any makeup on.”

“Shimmercakes, you need no makeup at all to be beautiful,” Smokestack said.

As if it was possible, Sunset’s face went redder. She started twirling her hair. “Smokie…”

“I don’t think I’ve ever seen Sunset blush so much!” Rainbow teased.

“You two are so cute!” Pinkie squealed.

“Um… I need to use the bathroom now,” Smokestack said, practically on fire from how much he was blushing right now. Sunset gave him a quick kiss on the cheek before he rushed off.


Smokestack washed his hands in the bathroom with a big smile on his face, unable to stop thinking about Sunset. He splashed some water in his face to jolt his senses and help wake him up. Maybe now he won’t be so flustered by Sunset’s mere presence. Then again, how could he not be flustered by such a perfect creature?

Soon…

Smokestack froze, the water drenching his face keeping his eyes closed. He waved his arms behind him, and his heart began to pound when he felt nothing. His eyes were still shut, but the room seemed to get darker… and colder. He rubbed the water out of his eyes and looked up.

In the mirror, the walls were replaced by warping green flames. The radiating heat distorted the image of Smokestack with skin of black chitin and translucent green orbs for eyes.

Soon…

A figure rose behind his tainted reflection, resembling a mutated equine creature.

The clock’s ticking. Tick tock. I grow closer. Tick tock. Ever closer…

Smokestack found himself frozen as the sounds of a grandfather clock pierced the air. A swinging pendulum appeared to be swinging behind the figure.

“Go away…”Smokestack pleaded. “Go away…”

Slow and steady… patient… unstoppable… tick tock…

“Go away!” Smokestack shouted, quickly turning around to face the entity… only to find the same, normal bathroom wall. He examined his hands, and they were as they should be. He felt around his face. Skin; not chitin.

“Do I dare look back at the mirror?”

Smokestack summoned his strength and turned back to the mirror, and the reflection was normal. A perfect, sane reflection of the bathroom. He leaned on the countertop to collect himself, breathing heavily.

Tick tock… tick tock… tick tock…

A grandfather clock pendulum echoed in his head. A hallucination, perhaps? Or was it… her?

Soon…

Smokestack looked up, staring intently at himself. Nothing out of the ordinary now.

“No… get yourself together. We worry about this another day,” he said. “Today is about Shimmercakes, and nothing else. Get it? Got it? Good.”

He took a deep breath before drying his hands off and walking out to meet with everyone else. Being with Sunset and his friends would definitely help calm him down.

Stepping back out he got back with the others who were talking.

"You okay Smokie?" Sunset asked.

"Yeah, I'm alright babe." Smokestack smiled, moving his hands around her waist and kissing her cheek, making her blush.

"So, you done being flustered over her beauty?" Applejack asked.

"Yes, I am."

"Then I guess we're not gonna play that romance song that's on Sunset's cassette player?"

Smokestack's eyes widened. "No wait, don't--"

Pinkie zipped up and pushed the play button, much to Smokestack's pleads.

Take my breath away...

Smokestack's arms drooped and he hung his head. Everyone just gave sly smirks. Sunset gave a sexy grin and she kissed his cheek.

"Smokie, its fine. Its a great song, and its quite beautiful actually." Sunset smiled, hugging him. "And Smokie?"

"Yeah?" Smokestack asked, looking into Sunset's beautiful eyes.

Sunset grabbed the tape player and she hit her finger on the stop button. "I think this should go back to the person it belongs to."

"No, Sunset, I gave that to you as a reminder of me, I--"

"Smokestack. I insist, you need your music more than me. Besides, I've already got something that reminds me of you."

"What?"

Sunset giggled. She held up the necklace that was worn around her neck, and she gestured to the teddy bear that was on the couch.

"And I've got you. Its okay Smokie. I want you to have your music back. You deserve it back."

Smokestack gave a small smile before hugging her. "Well, if you insist..."

Smokestack smiled back and he just held Sunset close as Pinkie was finishing putting breakfast together. At least she was enjoying the gift he passed to her.


Everyone hung out for a little while longer before the early afternoon came along. Soon they all started to get ready to go their separate ways for the day. But Smokestack was quick about getting his things ready. Once he was done, he went to find Sunset.

“Hey, Shimmercakes. Can I talk to you for a moment? Alone?”

“Yeah, of course,” Sunset said. “What’s up, Smokie?”

“Listen…” Smokestack said. “I was really happy that we were able to talk last night. Finally had some quality alone time with you, y’know?”

Sunset smiled. “I liked it too.”

“Well, it got me thinking…” Smokestack said. “I realized something. We haven’t actually… like… gone out together yet. Officially, I mean.”

Sunset’s eyebrows rose. “Oh… I never thought about that. You’re right.”

He chuckled. “Yeah… so… are you free tonight?”

Sunset slowly smirked. “Yes. Yes I am.”

Smokestack suddenly felt his hand start shaking. “Cool. So… um… d-do you… um…”

“Smokie, do you want to go out with me tonight?” Sunset asked.

Smokestack's heart dropped. “Whoa… wh-what?”

Sunset laughed. “You heard what I said.”

Smokestack pursed his lips, rubbing the back of his neck. “Jumping the gun, huh?”

“You looked nervous, so I wanted to help out.”

Smoke blushed. “Sorry.”

“Don’t be sorry,” Sunset said. “Just say yes.”

Smokestack noticed the gleam in Sunset’s eyes, nearly taking his breath away. How could he possibly say no to such a pretty face?

“Sunset… it would be an honor,” Smokestack said.

Sunset cheered and gave Smokestack a big hug. “Oh, we’re gonna have so much fun!”

Sunset pulled her head back a little, giving him a prime opportunity to give Sunset a big kiss. Sunset melted in his arms, along with his own heart. Knowing he could kiss Sunset whenever he wanted to filled him with joy. He pulled back, and gazed into her gorgeous turquoise eyes. It was unfair that one girl could be so beautiful.

“Y’know, we’re already dating, Smokie,” Sunset said. “Why were you so nervous before?”

Smokestack blushed. “Well, it’s been a long time. I might as well have never done it. Sorry.”

Sunset giggled. “Don’t worry about it, Smokestack. Wanna know something? I think it’s really cute when you’re shy.”

Smokestack's face only went redder. “Really?”

“It’s the cutest thing ever,” Sunset said, kissing his burning cheek.

“Um… I-I don’t know what to say…” Smokestack stammered.

“Just c’mere,” Sunset said, giving Smokestack a kiss. Smokestack didn’t mind one bit. Her lips were as sweet as candy, if not sweeter. They pulled away, and just held each other for a moment.

“Alright, I need to get going,” Sunset said. “I need to pick out my outfit for tonight.”

“I’d be perfectly fine if you just wore what you’re wearing now,” Smokestack said.

“Are you dressing up?” Sunset asked.

“Of course,” Smokestack said. “I have to. You don’t.”

“I’m dressing up, Smokie, and you’re just gonna have to deal with it,” Sunset said, giving him a sassy smile.

Smokie laughed. “I guess if I have to…”

Sunset laughed and gave Smokie a peck. “Give me a hand with my things?”

Smokestack nodded, helping pack up some things. But the entire time, his mind was pondering what Sunset might wear. A dress? Something even better? What kind of makeup would she wear? Would she do her hair? The possibilities were endless for how Sunset would manage to make herself even prettier than she already is. Whatever would happen, he knew he would love it.

Tonight’s gonna be amazing.


The afternoon turned to dusk, and Smokestack date with Sunset was growing near. Too near. He was starting to lose his mind. She would be here any minute. He didn’t have his roommate here to help him calm down, as he was on his own date. All he could do was try taking deep breaths as he stood in front of the mirror adjusting his suit and tie.

“Okay… calm down,” Smokestack said. “It’s just Sunset. You already know she likes you. You’ll be fine.”

Suddenly the sound of the doorbell echoed through the home, making him jump five feet into the air. Once he collected himself, he examined himself in the mirror one last time. It wasn’t ideal, but Sunset was out there waiting for him. Whether he liked it or not, he had to be ready right now.

He looked through the peephole first, and immediately felt happier when he saw the familiar fiery hairdo of Sunset Shimmer. He opened the door, and his happiness skyrocketed when he laid his eyes on beauty incarnate standing before him. Sunset’s hair was no different than it was normally, but the dress she wore was breathtaking. A sleeveless dress of sparkling magenta with a red neck-piece and red bracelet, brought out by her flowing hair. She seemed to be wearing mascara too, because her eyes were somehow more gorgeous than they usually are. Smokestack was standing before a goddess, and was wondering if he should be dropping to his knees or not.

“Sunset… y-you look amazing,” Smokestack said.

Sunset giggled. “Thanks! You look pretty sharp yourself.”

Smokestack blushed, rubbing the back of his neck. “Really? Thanks. So… may I take your hand?”

Sunset giggled again. “You certainly may,” she said, holding it out.

Right before he took her hand, he had a thought, making him look up at Sunset with a smirk. He took Sunset’s hand and pulled her in, dipping her back slightly and kissing her hand, staring intently into her eyes.

“Smokie…” Sunset said, her eyes wide. “Suave.”

Smokestack smirked again before pulling Sunset into a passionate kiss, holding her tight.

“I know just where to go tonight,” Smokestack said.

“Oh? Where?” Sunset asked.

“You’ll see,” Smokestack said.

Smokestack led Sunset to her car and kindly opened up the door for her. She stepped inside and she closed the door. Smokestack moved over to the other side and sat in the driver seat. His hands gripped the steering wheel as he looked ahead.

“Do you mind being my co-pilot? I only have one eye working and my depth perceptions a bit… you know,” Smokestack said.

“No of course,” Sunset smiled.

Smokestack grinned back and he started the engine. The car began to start up and he pulled the vehicle out of the parking spot and out onto the open road heading to the restaurant for their date.


Smokestack and Sunset arrived, and purposely parked a little further away than necessary so he could walk with Sunset more while holding her hand. It felt amazing to show everyone who walked past them that Sunset was his.

They arrived at the diner, and Sunset gasped.

“Smokie… I love this place! How did you know?” Sunset asked.

Smokestack shrugged, “Call it a hunch.”

Sunset smiled and eagerly walked inside, followed by Smokestack. They were quickly seated and helped by the waitstaff. After ordering their drinks, they took a moment to just marvel at their significant other.

“Sunset, can I ask you something?” Smokestack asked.

“Sure Smokestack, what is it?”

Smokestack sighed. “Well, forgive me for sounding selfish, but… why do you like me?”

Sunset looked at him quizzically, but with a smile. “What do you mean?”

“I mean… why did you choose me?” Smokestack asked. “How did I win you over? I-I’m just curious.”

Sunset giggled, running her hand up his arm with a sexy smile. “Well, I like you because I think you’re very sweet, smart, brave, and strong. I think all the work you’ve made is amazing, and it’s amazing that you’ve been able to overcome so much in your life. Plus… I think it’s very cute when you’re shy.”

“Y-You really think that?” Smokestack asked.

“I really do,” Sunset said. “Why are you asking?”

Smokestack sighed, “You sure you want to know?”

Sunset’s smile seemed to dwindle, probably from Smokestack's frown.

“Smokie, is everything okay?” Sunset asked. “If you want to talk about something, I’m right here. You can talk to me about anything.”

Smokestack pursed his lips. “I’ve done some bad things in my life, Shimmercakes. Some really horrible things. When I look in the mirror, I don’t see what you and your friends see. I don’t see a friend. I see a monster. Honestly, if you had seen half of the things I had done, you’d see what I see.”

“Smokestack, no. You’re not a monster.”

“Sunset, just look at me,” Smokestack said. “I look like an abandoned science experiment! My eyes, they're.. they're deformed! I’m barely put together, I've got scratches everywhere! What do you think goes through people’s heads when they see me? Look me dead in the eye and tell me that I’m not the stuff of nightmares.”

“Smokestack, stop,” Sunset said sternly. “Smokestack, look at me.” She lifted his chin up, forcing him to look at her. He blinked, and a tear was forced out. She used her hands to wipe his cheeks dry before offering a tender smile; the warmest she could muster. “I understand how you feel. I totally get it. But believe me when I say that no matter what you did, no matter how bad it was, it doesn’t affect who you are today. I know from personal experience. I don’t see a monster when I look at you. I see the sweetest guy I’ve ever met, who’s made mistakes in the past and his doing everything in his power to rectify his transgressions. You care about us. You defend us. You would do anything to save us, even sacrifice yourself. Smokie… you’re my hero.”

Smookestack's eyes went wide. More tears fell, but he was anything but sad.

“R-Really?”

Sunset nodded, leaning over to give him a peck. “Most importantly… you’re mine, Smokie. And I wouldn’t have it any other way.”

He couldn’t believe what he was hearing. “Shimmercakes, if we weren’t in the middle of a restaurant right now, I would be giving you the biggest kiss ever.”

Sunset laughed, her face going bright red. She took his hand, looking deeply into his eyes. “I know you’re dealing with a lot of stress right now, but there’s no need to worry. We won’t let Neon or any of his friends hurt you. If Neon wants to tangle with you, he has to go through me first.”

Smokestack gave a warm smile, “You really would do that for me?”

Sunset grinned and gave a nod, “Of course. You mess with my Smokie, you mess with me. And that goes for all of us. If it’s a fight they want, it’s a fight they’ll get.”

Smokestack chuckled, “I love your enthusiasm.”

Sunset blushed a bit.

The waiter soon came by and gave them their drinks. Then once they received their drinks, the waiter walked away with their orders.

“Well… I guess while we’re on the subject… can I tell you a secret?”

“What kind of secret?” Sunset asked.

“Well… um…” Smokestack paused and sighed. “Shimmercakes, I have to be honest. I haven’t told you everything. Remember how I said I’ve done some horrible things?”

“Mmmhmm,” Sunset said.

“I told you about running away from home… but you didn’t hear the whole story. I ran as far as I could with the loot I took, after getting traumatized by Chrysalis, but I didn’t run away from Equestria. Instead, I ran to the one place I know I could be accepted. I went to the city of Canterlot and I found my Aunt and Uncle’s home. They took me in for a bit. But I couldn’t stay…”

Sunset interrupted, “Did they ever find out about your mom and dad?”

Smokestack nodded, “I told them everything I knew. Afterwards, I ended up breaking down, and they calmed me down. They opened up their home to me, and I stayed for a few weeks. But it wasn’t the same to me. And I still kept thinking Chrysalis was going to come back to finish me off. So… without saying a word, I snuck out one night with all the loot I stole, and I ran off sneaking through Princess Celestia’s castle. But during my visit, I found myself stuck trying to find a place to hide. I hid in a closet, and that’s when I discovered… you.”

Sunset’s eyes widened, “M-Me?”

“Yes. I remember seeing you talking with Princess Celestia, and she showed you a mirror that she said could transport someone into another dimension but it opened only every 30 moons. Once you two were gone, I took my chance and I disappeared through the portal. I never came back to Equestria unless I was going to see how the world was looking while I was here, or if there was anything of value I could take back here.”

Sunset didn’t say a word. She only looked straight forward with a face that spelled deep thought, twirling her hair. Smokestack covered his face with his hand.

“Sunset, I’m so sorry,” Smokestack said. “This is the worst date ever.”

“Smokie, don’t say that,” Sunset said.

“It’s true, though."

“No,” Sunset said. “No it isn’t.”

Smokestack looked back, “It isn’t?”

Sunset shook her head, still smiling. “Trust me, I’ve been on much worse.”

“So… that means this date is bad, then,” Smokestack said.

“Smokie, this is not a bad date,” Sunset said. “Believe it or not, I’m having a really nice time.”

“B-But… I lied to you. I lied to you about being homeless, I--”

“Smokie,” Sunset said. “What did I say before? I said that your past doesn’t matter. I used to rule the school with an iron fist, and was mean to everyone around me. Princess Twilight opened my eyes, and sure, I was hated for a while, but that time is past. Now I have the greatest friends I could ever ask for, and an amazing boyfriend,” she said with a wink. “If that’s taught me anything, it’s that the past doesn’t matter. What matters is who you are now. I won’t say the things you did aren’t horrible, but that’s all over with. There’s no fixing what’s already happened. The best you can do is march forward and try to be a better person. And Smokestack… I think you’re doing a fantastic job.”

Smokestack was left speechless again. He found himself contemplating again whether or not he should drop to his knees in front of Sunset. After everything she’s said, her beauty radiated like Celestia’s sun. Inner beauty and outer beauty. Sunset really was a goddess.

“Shimmercakes… I don’t know what to say…” he said.

Sunset giggled. “Don’t worry about it. Just remember that you have friends now, and you have me. And we’ll always be here for you.”

Smokestack couldn’t help himself from leaning over to give Sunset a kiss. It was meant to be a peck, but it went on for much longer.

Ahem!

The couple was jolted out of their trance by their waiter standing next to them with their food. They blushed profusely, but the waiter just laughed before handing them their respective dishes. And the evening carried on, with Smokestack trying some things including feeding Sunset some of his food. Just a simple evening of smiles, flirting, and laughing with Sunset Shimmer. What could be better?


Night had fallen by the time Smokestack and Sunset arrived at Coppermane's home. The couple stood by Sunset’s car before saying farewell for the night, holding each other and looking into their significant other’s eyes.

“Smokestack, I had an amazing time tonight,” Sunset said.

“I did too,” Smokestack said. “Thanks for everything you said. Like… I seriously can’t thank you enough. I really needed to hear that.”

“No problem,” Sunset said. “Remember, we’re always here for you, no matter what.”

Sunset let out a mighty yawn, causing Smokestack to yawn as well.

“It’s getting late. I should get going,” Sunset said.

“Same,” Smokestack said. “Good night, Shimmercakes.”

“Good night, Smokie,” Sunset said.

Before they let each other go, they shared a long, passionate kiss. At the end of it, Sunset gave him a sexy wink before getting into her car. Smokestack walked up to the front door, but turned back to take one more look at Sunset. He might have to ask Sunset to wear that dress again on a future date. Her car went out of sight, and he immediately missed her a little.

One thing was for sure after tonight: Smokestack hasn’t felt this happy in a long time.


Author's Note

I know this is long overdue, I'm sorry for it being late. But I'll admit, I feel as if this story isn't really getting much attention.

But in the end, I want to keep on trucking so I'm gonna do the best I can. Any legit criticisms you may have that you wish to bring up, please do. I am listening. Anything you like, anything you dislike?

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