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The Nine Worlds Of Omega

by James Cribb

Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Canterlot Falls

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Chapter 28 Canterlot Falls

The trains and ships that left Manehattan last night Luna tried to get a little bit of sleep after a day like today. The next thing she knows that she somewhere that she has never seen before in the dream world. Instand of doors or orbs showing ponies dreams. It was like the time when she did the shared dream with everypony in Ponyville to stop the tantibus from escaping to the real world. “What is going on here?” She tells herself. Looking like the city Manehattan, but a lot bigger with a blue planet in night ski. “Welcome Luna, to my dream world.” Someone sound out loud shocking Luna from the voice. “That voice, you were flying that machine that saved us from those other machines that were trying to kill us.” She tells me. “It wasn’t easy trying to get you into one of my dreams.” The unknown person tells her. “I remember that. I was helping somepony else with a nightmare when your voice came out of nowhere scaring me and the pony I was helping. Before you disappeared back into the unknown.” She tells the person. “That was the first but not the last time and it toke some time to get you in here.” The unknown person tells her. “Then why don’t you show yourself to me?” Luna orders the unknown person.

“Every well.” The person said out loud showing his face to her, a human male with a brown hair and beard turning gray on both of them wearing a blue suit. “What are you?” Luna asks the person. “I’m not from your world at first and it would be a long story to tell you.” The old man told her. “Why not?” She asks the old man. “Because it is time to wake up.” The old man said out loud before everything around Luna turn white.

“Luna, Luna are you are alright?” Chrysalis getting Luna attention waking up from the crazy dream she had. “I think I just mate whoever saved you from dying and gave you that message.” She tells her making question herself after just happen to her in the dream. “Really what did it look like?” She asks her. “I can tell from what he looks like those walking machines that attack the station instead of metal it was made out of flash brown hair and beard turning gray wearing a blue suit. But it feels like I should know more about him.” Luna tells Chrysalis shocking her a little from what Luna told her. “Ponyville coming up.” Said the driver out loud, slowing the train down so it can stop at the station.

Elsewhere I just was waking up from my dream. “Did she get the message?” Pinky asks me. “No I couldn’t give her the message because of time, but I reveal myself to her.” I told her getting up. “This time travel sure is a messy to keep very thing right the way it exposes to happen.” She tells me getting up. “As long we don’t change things too much. By the time go back to our time very thing should be as we left it.” I told Pinky. “Another day of disasters coming.” I thought to myself getting dress for today head.

The news crew just got off the ship in Filly Delphia. “The train with the gear should be pulling to the station here by now.” The director said out loud to the crew. Some of the crew when to pick up the gear from the train station waiting for them. “Alright, ponies we only have a few hours to be up and ready for the morning news broadcast.” He tells the remaining crew before running to the studio in the city.

The team went to get the gear quickly made their way to the train station seeing the train from Manehattan pulled into the station only moments ago. Ponies and cargo is getting off the train. The team gets on the cargo cart to get there gear. “You’re from the news station?” The worker asks the crew unloading the crates. “Yes, we are and be careful there that gear cost more than you think.” One of the ponies tells him as he levitating the crates on a platform. “I got this; I’ve been doing this for ten years now.” He tells the news team unloading the last of the crates onto the platform.

“I hope that they sent somepony with a cart or getting all this gear back to the studio will be near next to impossible.” One of the crew members said out loud pushing the platform to the exit. Just as they reach outside the station there were three carts from the studio to transport the gear to the studio in the city.

Moments later at the studio the team are already there is getting ready for the broadcast. “I never thought that we be using this place again; after moving the studio to Manehattan three months ago.” The director thinking out loud, seeing the old studio floor with years of EEN news broadcasting ever scents the beginning. The gear that is still there still work not being used in 3 months of abandonment and neglected. Once the cart with the gear and the others coming from the station, the team get their tail into gear getting everything ready for the broadcast.

Back in Ponyville everypony just got off the train. “This old steamer sure has been through a lot today.” The driver tells his fire pony that been with him through this journey. “I know what you mean. It feels like I’m going to need a week vacation after today.” The fire pony tells the driver.

Both Luna and Chrysalis made their way to the hospital to see if Celestia will be release today. “I hope she is doing alright?” Luna thought to herself. When they got there Celestia is in a wheelchair outside the hospital overlooking the remains of Ponyville. “It good to see you moving around a little.” Luna tells her sister. “I know after what happened. It feels good to be moving around in stand being in bed all day.” Celestia tells the both of them. “Sister, there is something you need to know.” Luna said out loud. “Well then tell me.” Celestia asks the both of them. “It started after the golden landed in the courtyard. I was helped somepony with their nightmares until I heard a voice scaring me and the pony I was helping. The voice kelp coming back to find me every night after that each time the voice came in more clear every night. Yesterday I ask Chrysalis why she is helping us at our hour of need. She said that something saved her from starvation and gave her note with introductions on it with yesterday date and the time frame to come.” Luna tells her sister Chrysalis shows her the note. “Last night I was attacked by something made of metal and it walks on two legs in Manehattan. Lucky there was something to save me that night or I don’t want to know night happen.” Luna tells her sister looking shocked from the story. “Did this hero show itself?” Celestia asks her sister.

“Yes, it did once after I was attacked and in the dream world. It looked one of those mythical creatures of old when we were fillies.” Luna tells her. “That is impassable they died long ago?” Celestia tells her.

“What mythical creatures?” Chrysalis asks the both of them. “We were told stories of a species of creatures that walks on two legs dress in clothes. They had technology that can send them to the moon.” Celestia tells her. “Trust me I know I have seen things of their world from long ago.” Luna tells her.

“But the things that attack us as we were leaving the station back in Manehattan, was not those old creatures of old.” Chrysalis tells both of them. “Sister it best for me to show you what I saw back there.” Luna tells her sister before lighting up her horn, taking both of them to her dreamscape.

“Luna where are we?” Celestia asks her sister. “We’re in my dreamscape. This where I go when I’m trying to some rest. I want to show you is this.” Luna tells her sister in a quick flash both of them where on the street corner at the Manhattan train station before she gets attack by that metal beast.

Luna shows the events from her memories showing Celestia the metal beast on wheels and the one that walks on two feet that attack her earlier. Celestia gets closer to the machine that attacked her sister to get a better look at it. Then out of blue something calls out to them. “HEY YOU!” Makes the machine to turn its head to whatever called out to the metal beast. A dark blue flying machine comes from the darken ski flying to them shooting something at it making the metal beast into pieces of what it used to be.

The flying machine asks Luna; “Are you alright princess?” “Yes, I’m alright May I ask who are you?” She asks the flying machine that saved her from the beast. “You will find out soon enough.” The machine tells her before taking off into the darken clouds above her.

“Sister?” Celestia asks her sister looking at some of the remains of the machine that attacked her. “Yes, that wasn’t the last time this flying machine saved us from these things.” Luna tells her sister changing the dreamscape to later that night at the inside the train station. Everypony use got on the train and it was getting it way out of the station when more of those metal beast started attacking the station and coming from the mouth of the station is the blue flying machine from earlier come to save them from the beast that making their way inside of the building. Sending those things back to where they came with fire and something that sounds like fireworks going off.

Luna changes the dreamscape again to the bridge seeing another flying machine coming to the towards them it shows a red light before getting destroyed by an something else something else making it into a fireball.

Celestia is surprised about from what Luna has shown her. “There is one more thing I need to show you.” Changing the dreamscape one more time to the Luna dream she had earlier, showing Celestia the city with the blue planet in the ski. “That time when Starlight our cutie marks for one day. I never have seen anything like this when I was in the dream world.” Celestia tells Luna looking at the blue planet. “I also never seen anything like this ether threw out the years.” Luna said out loud then in a flash the person in the blue suit shows his face again.

“Is the person that been following you in the dreamscape?” Celestia asks her sister. “Yes, it as. It started out with just a voice until he showed me his face last night.” Luna tells her sister with Celestia looking at the man in the blue suit.

“It good to see you again Luna and I can see that you have brought your sister here as well.” A voice said in the background. “I have something to give you before you woke up last time and there is no time is time.” The voice tells both of them in a flash a letter with a symbol on it floating down to both of them. Once they a have the letter the dreamscape faded into black waking both of them seeing the note from the dream world.

Celestia opens the letter and begins to read it. From what she read shock her dropping the letter to the ground.

Dear Celestia and Luna

If you get this letter then the first day of disasters has already happened and the next day of disasters is coming. These disasters are base on environments in my world where your friends are being helped by my younger self. If you want to find out more about this come to this location two days from now. If you try to come earlier the disaster will be unthinkable.

Your friend

JC

A royal guard comes running to the three of them. “Princess there is something that you should see.” Telling the three of them, taking the three them to a nearby TV tune to EEN showing footage of what happened last night in Manehattan after everything when dark.

Everypony from Vanhoover to Filly Delphia and as far north to the Crystal Empire can see the broadcast; Even some areas the Griffin Kingdom. Meanwhile, at the bunker the TV showing the EEN morning broadcast. The Agent is running down the hall to my and Pinky’s bedroom, knocking on the door. Pinky answers the door seeing him at the door. “James it’s for you.” Pinky tells me while I dress luckily I had my pants on. “What is it agent?” I ask him putting on a shirt.

“We are on the news.” He tells me making me turn on the TV in the bedroom showing the footage of the Reds Sweepers, attack drones and R.F.A.D. that I shout down last night. Then showing footage of the new buildings and one of the MRPD cars that ended up in the on this world. “That would explain the news stories from my world that when missing building from the New York.” I thought to myself. “Sir, I have Dr. Galaxy Overwatch on line 2.” The Agent tells me.

“Put him through.” I told him. “We have a situation in the lab.” He tells me looking shocked about it what he sees in front of him. “I’m on my way.” I told him before hanging up and quickly making my way to the lab. When I got there the cast where the chips are glowing again, this time it’s brown. I open the case seeing the Mountain chip glowing and I know that the next one is coming next.

“Agent, are the others up yet?” I asked him. “Everyone, but Cheese Sandwich. Why do ask?” He tells me. “Get the blimp ready to go.” I tell him. “Yes, sir.” He tells me giving me a salute.

“Honey is everything alright?” Pinky asks me. “We going Canterlot to save as many ponies we can before the earthquake happens.” I tell her. “I know you like to save ponies but there nothing we do because of the timeline.” She tells me. “I know an old friend that told me that time can change a little bit help other from death.” I told her. “James what if you’re wrong about this?” She asks me. “I sure hope that not this one.” I told her. “Just let me and Destiny come with you to save them?” She asks me. “I do love both you and I know both of you would do anything to help anyone or pony out of the mud.” I told her heading to the hanger where the others are waiting for me.

“Well, are you coming?” I ask her making her smile running to next to me. When we got to the hanger the blimp is getting the final preparations done. “Dad, what is happening?” Destiny asks me looking confused from what is happening. “Des the ponies are going to help to get everypony out of Canterlot when the earthquake hits.” I told her clearing things up with her. “That we’re doing and I thought that the time can’t be changed from causing major changes to the timeline?” She asks me. “I remember what I said but I can’t just stand on the sidelines seeing people that are need of help.” I told her holding back tears. “Dad I know you're still hurting from what to you years ago.” Destiny tells me giving me a hug to felt my spirits making me shed a tear.

Vinyl and Octavia sees me and Destiny next to blimp. “Vinyl I know we don’t know much about them and future Pinky. But from what he showed us and what he knows about what is going on, it just feels like we should trust him.” She tells her friend. “I feel the same way about them.” Vinyl said out loud getting on broad.

Lyra and Bon Bon are already on broad seeing me and Destiny hugging out there through a window. “Bonnie it feels like that James a lot of guilt on his shoulders.” Lyra tells her friend. “How can you tell?” She asks her. “It not like he is not showing on the surface. But underneath the surface, it’s clear as day.” Lyra tells Bon Bon.

“Dad before we travel back in time. I was seeing somepony and I told him that I would like to marry him someday.” Destiny tells me. “What?” I said out loud looking shock from what she just told me. “I’ve been seeing somepony back home for some time now.” She tells me. “Do I know whoever you been seeing?” I ask her. “No, we meet when I was in college before all of this.” She tells me. “Destiny, I know you have the right to do as you will these days. Both me and Pinky did are jobs to raise you the best we could. There is one thing that would say is whatever makes you happy no matter what anyone said.” I told her seeing Pinky coming to the blimp.

“About what now?” Pinky asks the both of us. “I’ll tell you later.” I told Pinky before getting on broad. With everypony on board, the hanger doors open and the blimp slowly gets out through the double doors. “Right we clear time to show this thing what it could.” I said out loud hitting a button on the control panel. Doors on the bottom of the blimp open up letting 12 curricle panels, once they were in their stations around the airship. Electricity starts running through the panels. I hit another button making the ship jolt at releasing the hot air balloon, letting it run with the wind.

“What was that?” Octavia said out loud feeling the jolt seeing the balloon being let go. “Octy are you seeing what I'm seeing?” Vinyl asks Octavia looking over the side of the ship seeing one of the panels underneath the ship. “How is that even possible?” Octavia asks herself seeing the panel that Vinyl is seeing. “Your guess is good as my?” Vinyl said out loud looking shock from how is this ship is flying still.

“Best to get below unless you want end hitting a wall.” I said out loud over the intercom.

“What does he mean?” Octavia asks Vinyl. “I don’t know or I want to find out.” She tells her opening a door with her magic to the inside of the ship. The others are already below when both of them found them in the room below the control room where. Then in a jolt, the ship sent faster than any other airship before.

“We’ll be there no more than five minutes.” I said over the intercom.

“Five minutes? Even the fastest airship would take a few hours.” Lyra said out loud questioning herself on how is that even possible. “I don’t know Lyra whatever he did would make Star Swirl mind question on how all of this work and he would never find out how is that even possible.” Bon Bon tells Lyra.

“I meet Star Swirl and other legends of old.” Pinky said out loud. “You mean the pillars of Equestria?” Lyra asks her. “Yes, and it a long story and we don’t have a lot of time to tell you so here is the cleft notes version. We found Star Swirl journal and sent to see if we can bring them back from limbo and we did borough them back and we borough the Pony of Shadows as well.” Pinky tells them. “So everything about them was true from the stories about their disappearances?” Lyra asks her from the details of the stories of old from what Pinky is telling them.

“Pretty much yes and back to the story. Me and my friends were trying to find the Pony of Shadows threw out Equestria. Come to find out we had to use the Elements to send him back to limbo. Once we found him in an old town in the middle of nowhere. Twilight was dead on sending him back to limbo but the elements would disappear with him as well. Until Starlight, Twilight student talk to her about patching up the past and release the pony that was inside the Shadow Pony. After a long story, the pony was release from the hold of the Pony of Shadows and the darkest back to where it came without losing the elements.” Pinky tells the rest of the story to them.

“So where are they now?” Vinyl asks her. “I don’t know from what I can remember they when looking around before settling back down. I guess being in limbo for over a thousand years would be a strange place after being away for so long.” Pinky answers her question.

“Canterlot coming up.” I said into the intercom slowing down the ship. From what is happening shock everyone onboard.

Earlier that day in Canterlot Sassy Saddles is just opening the Canterlot Boutique. Seeing the store with a small staff that Rarity hired a month ago when things were busier than that Sassy has never seen before. “I guessing things are going to be good as far I know.” She thought to herself. Turning on a small TV tune on EEN broadcast showing the footage of what happened in Manhattan last night.

“If Rarity sees the city of Manhattan she would have a panic attack about the store if she was there.” I tell herself seeing a staff member from the Manhattan store to see if Rarity is there. “Sassy is Rarity here?” She asks her. “No did you did you check the store in Ponyville?” She asks her. “Yes, I did. She isn’t there either I did found her sister there with her friends.” She tells her. “What did she tell you?” Sassy asks her. “Yes she did, she told me that Rarity and her friends when missing over a week ago. It was on the news yesterday.” She tells Sassy looking shocked at the news of her employer.

Then she sees the news is now showing the second sun moving again to somewhere back west. “Whatever going to happen I don’t want to have a bad day today.” Sassy thought to herself.

Back at the Ponyville hospital the news showing the same thing that threw out the country. Celestia knows the next disaster is coming next but where is a good question. Luna takes a closer look at the letter seeing something on it. She uses her magic on it showing a map of Equestria showing the symbols where the golden ball has been, showing a new symbol at outside Canterlot. “Sister take a look at the letter is showing now.” Luna tells Celestia showing the map on the letter with the symbols where the golden ball has been. Luna shows her the news symbol outside Canterlot. This shock Celestia from what she is seeing from the map.

“Luna get to Canterlot and get everypony out there before what kind of disaster comes to the city.” Celestia tells her sister and Chrysalis before bolting out of the hospital running to the train station. When they got there the driver and the fire pony seeing both of them running to the train getting ready for the next round of recuse missions.

“Where are we heading?” The driver asks the both of them. “Canterlot.” Luna tells him before getting onboard the train. The light of the second sun glows to the east coming fast towards them. The train gets going slowly off the platform heading to Canterlot caves to the capital of the country and the only city on a side of a mountain.

Sassy Saddle was busy dealing with a customer he order a month ago. “Sir I understand your problem right now you been trying to get your suit for a refit for your wedding.” She tells him. “I know this short note ness but my fiancé doesn’t like the suit that I would be wearing to the wedding. So want me to come here for a refit my one of the best that she knows in the whole city.” He tells her. “Well sir, just follow me to the fitting room to get your measurements for your new suit.” Sassy tells him leading to another pony that can do that for him. After that, she returns to the front desk seeing something is going on out there on the streets of the city. She looks out of the window seeing something bright as the sun just outside of the city.

Luna train is just reaching the each of the city when the golden ball outside of the city glowing brightly again like it did above Ponyville yesterday morning. Everypony from the train and inside the city seeing a symbol shooting from the glowing sun in the darken ski glowing brown. Showing everypony in and around the city, Ponies from Ponyville can see the glowing symbol in the ski. The symbol stops glowing and fires a beam of light down into the ground.

Ponies inside the city thought nothing would happen until the land starting shake than one big jolt building around shake violently some Sassy gets everypony out of the building before collapsing in on itself with other building next to it. “To the airships!” Somepony said out loud to the other ponies. The castle of the two sisters begins to fall apart from the shaking. Sassy runs as she could get to the docks where the airships are. While others when to the train station.

The train that Luna and Chrysalis are on can feel the shaking that is hitting the city. Luna sees one of the towers falling of going to the land far below. The train tries to cross the only bridge for trains to get in and out of the city. In the destine a airship with electricity coming from the bottom of it comes out of the blue. All four of them sees this airship bigger than that were used at the docks. The bridge gives way from the violence shakes. The airship quickly gets under the collapsing bridge the driver hits the brakes on the train. But it was too short going off the rails landing on the airship that appeared out of nowhere.

There was a big jolt on the ship it exposes out electricity from the dicks hold the extra weight now. “What was that?” Lyra said out loud after feeling the jolt. Everypony get to the surface seeing a train on a deck of the ship. The passengers get off the train seeing what landing on. “What is this place?” The train said out loud before seeing the falling city of Canterlot next to them.

The train station begins to break apart sending off the mountain to the land below with more areas of the city.

Sassy gets to the docks when she sees the strange airship catching the train in midair. Airships begin to leave the docks with ponies that didn’t go to the train station.

The last of the airships takes off leaving more ponies that were still on the docks. The strange airship that saved the train parks at the docks lower in ramps to let the ponies that were left behind to die to come aboard the strange airship that trying to save them from the collapsing city.

Ones everypony in aboard the ramps is recalled back to the ship. Sassy sees Princess Luna and mighty other ponies that she knows. The airship takes off firing lots of electricity to get it off the docks. The rest of the city that is still standing begins to slide down the mountain to the valley below.

Lyra and Bon Bon were on the surface seeing if any of her friends made on broad or one of the others airships that already left. “Moon Dancer?” Lyra calls out seeing one of them making her turn her head. “Lyra what in the name of Equestria are you doing here?” Giving her a hug seeing her again after what just happen to her. “Did any of the other made it?” Lyra asks her friend. “I do know that Colgate made it on a airship but I don’t know about the others. I sure hope that they weren’t at the train station when it sided off the mountain.” Moon Dancers tells both of them. “There is only one way to find out.” Lyra tells her before moving to another part of the ship.

Elsewhere on the ship both Luna and Chrysalis when to see the Captain for saving them from falling into the depths below. When they got there they were in for a shock when they open the door to bridge seeing the mythical creature in person.

“You?” Luna said out loud seeing me at the controls. “Good to see you too.” I told the both of them.

“Princess Luna it very good to see you again after all these years.” Pinky said out loud making both of them turn to the doorway seeing an older version of Pinky Pie then seeing a pony that almost looks like the man in the blue suit.

“Dad is everything alright?” Destiny asks me seeing the both Luna and Chrysalis looking shocked by what is going on right in front of them.

“Dad? Alright, what in the name of Equestria is going here?” Luna asks the three of us. “Ok, here the thing we are from the future to make sure that things go the way should and give you a fighting chance when an old enemy of my shows up in this world.” I told them the story.

“From what I’m getting at is that Twilight and her friends ended up on your world through this Piece of Omega you called it and your younger selves are trying to back by getting these elements from your world and the disasters are caused by a leak that this the device to make the link stable for a safe crossing between worlds.” Luna tries to make scene out of what I just told them. “Yes, that is pretty much it.” I told them both.

“We never got your name by the way?” Chrysalis asks me. “James Cribb. Why do you ask?” I ask the both them. “First I like to know the person that saved me from starvation a month ago.” She tells me. “You’re welcome for that. If I wasn’t for me would have died before morning.” I told her. “I haven’t fest on love for a month now. What did you do to me?” She asks me. “Well, I change your DNA so you won't have to fest on love as a main food force.” I told her. “That means I still feed on love if I want to. What can I normally source for food?” She asks me. “The same as every other pony out there in this world.” I told her. “You mean normal food that everyone else eats.” She tells me. “Yes to a point.” I tell her.

The strange airship as well 25 others airships of different sizes made their way to a nearby town of Ponyville. The shockwaves of the falling city of the country capital city as it falls into the valley at the bottom of the mountain where the city used to be.

Starlight and Trixie see the city falling off the side of the mountain. Then they see airships coming from the once great city of Canterlot. They weren’t the only ponies that seen the dissertation, Celestia tries to hold back tears from losing her home and many ponies that didn’t make it out of there. “I shouldn’t have sent my sister.” She thought to herself as she walks away from other ponies that sees the news broadcast before the single when out showing the bars.

Elsewhere back the Filly Delphia the EEN lost the single during the city collapsed “What just happen?” The director asks his team seeing the colors on the screen. “I don’t know but I think the tower is dead.” Somepony tells him answering his question. “This there a way to get us back on online?” He asks his team. “I’m not too sure on that because that tower was put up there for the best place to reach everywhere from that point.” The same pony tells him. “So as far we can tell we are in the dark?” He asks him. “Yes, I’m afraid so.”One of the ponies said out loud.

Back in Ponyville airships filled with ponies begin to land next to Ponyville. The ponies that just get off and those in town seeing the strange airship coming in for a landing shooting electricity as it comes in lowering what looks like metal feet from the bottom of the ship. Some of the panels changing its direction shooting electricity that the grown slowing it down landing on its metal feet holding up its weight. The electricity when away after it landed everypony on the ground sees the airship lowering its ramps letting ponies that were saved by the captain and his larger than life airship.

“Are you coming?” Luna asks the three of us. “No it best for us to get moving back to where we need to be. But it would not be the last time we will meet.” I told them both as they were leaving the room. “Before I forget.” I said out loud making my hand glow making the train left itself of the airship making fly in the air to the tracks nearly by.

Luna and Chrysies see the flying train getting off the train landing on tracks, once everypony but the ponies that came with me for this mission were off the ship. Sassy and Moon Dancer seeing something that doesn’t look like a pony before the ramps are rise back up and electricity firing from the panels making to left itself off the ground. Making ponies shocks from the strange airship as it flies over them. Celestia sees the airship leaving the city shocking her from is happening right in front of her before disappearing.

Starlight and Trixie see the airship as well until the journal begins to glow to the page where it glowing at and begins to read.

Dear Starlight

Thanks for telling me about Twilight disappearance and like to help you find her and what going on there. I told the others about this and they want to help out as well on who want to take Twilight and her friends. So have the portal ready.

Your friend

Sunset Slimmer

Starlight begins writing back to her.

It’s good to hear from you. Things are not good here ponies from all over Equestria are being displaced and hurt by what just happened. Manehattan abandoned and just now Canterlot as side off the side of the mountain. There is a strange ship that just flies over Ponyville before disappearing. I'll be ready for you and the others arrival.

Your friend

Starlight

“So what now?” Trixie asks her. “I’m guessing back to the castle as far I can tell and I think it’s the safest place in the city right now.” She tells her friend walking to the castle.


Author's Note

Here is the 28th Chapter of the story so far. This is an interesting chapter because Luna and Celestia see who is trying to help them and the whole time travel business. But there are still unanswered a few questions.

Like how did James knows if saving those ponies wouldn't change the timeline?

How did a blimp that was used in Equestria can change into something that looks like something from the Matrix films?

Or why didn't the EEN news as only one tower and they put it there and did put any more of them?

Or how did James can get into dreams like Luna can?

If you want to answer them be my guess. If you want too. I will be doing some artwork for the storyline so keep an eye out on that.

The story is halfway through this journey

This James Cribb Signing out.

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