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The Nine Worlds Of Omega

by James Cribb

Chapter 1: Chapter 1 An Unknow Guest

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Chapter 1 An Unknow Guest

I was minding my own business working on the Ford Custom 500 in my garage. When I heard a loud noise coming from outside and I when to check it out come to find out there was a rift in space and time. Looking like something, you see in movies and right in front of me. I put my hand next to the riff and there was a reaction coming from the riff. Before I could get out of the way outcomes six multi-color horses.

"My sweet celesta, what happened?" Said one of them an orange fur with blond hair wearing a brown hat. "I don't know, let's ask him." Said the one with pink fur with pink hair that looks like cotton candy.

"Your right Pinky." said one of them with purple fur and purple hair with some highlights. "Excuse me and my friends; May I ask where are we?" She asked me close to my face on the ground.

"You're here in the lower regions of the City-Planet of the Nine Worlds of Omega. We best us move before they show up." I told them getting up from the ground. "Who's they?" Said one with light blue fur and a rainbow hair using her wings to hover a few feet off the ground. "The Reds." I said out loud scaring them.

"The Reds?" The purple one asks me. "But first I need to close these rift before they find out what just happened here." I said out load moving closer to the riff. Pulling a small device reaching out with it to close it with before someone else came through the riff is a small purple and green dragon.

"Spike?" Ask the purple horse towards him confused."Twilight I was worry about you and I had to come with." Said Spike.

"Stand back now!" I shouted to the dragon shuffling my hand towards his horse friends. I reach my hand again and finally close the riff.

"Can you get us back home?" The orange horse asks me. "I can, It not going to be easy." I quickly answer her question.

"Why is that?" white horse with purple hair ask me looking confused from what I just said. "I can get you home with this, but there a problem with that; because the riff will become unstable and end up destroying both our worlds in the process." I explain it to them.

"So you're saying is that we need to find a way to make the riff you call it to work to get us home?" The orange horse asks me. "That right and best for us to get moving; My shop isn't too far from here." I answer her and told the rest of them quickly making our way towards the shop.

"Twilight I'm scared." Spike tells her getting closer to her. "I know we all are." Said Twilight.

"I have no idea how I'm going to help them. But I'm going to my best." As I thought to myself.


We made it to my shop which was a big gray building. The white horse said out loud. " Did ever think of putting some color here?" "Just wait for the tile you see the inside." I said sliding a big door leading into darkness.

This made the yellow horse scared. The eight of us made their way in. "Let me get the lights." I said flipping a which on the wall and the whole beginning to light up.

The 7 of them see something they have never seen before. A big dark blue cart made of metal. "I'm guessing you never seen a car before." I tell them making my way to the side of the car.

"What a car?" The orange horse asks me. "You meed this thing." The blue horse mocking what I just said hovering a few feet from the hood of the car.

"I don't need to be rude. But I never got your names?" I asked them. The purple horse spoke. "My name is Twilight Sparkle. This little dragon is Spike. The others are Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinky Pie." Pointing at them with her hoof.

"What about you?" Rainbow asks me. "James Cribb, is my name." I tell them.

"Nice to meet you James." said Rarity. "I have to plan a party for him before we get back." Pinky said out loud with excitement.

"Do you think it's a good time to plan a party?!" Applejack angry shouting that Pinky. "I think we need to calm down." Twilight tells everypony.

"Clam down, CLAM DOWN, We are in another world that we have no idea and right being here!" Applejack shouted back to Twilight. "Your right. We have no idea what out there and we are all scared out of our minds. James is trying to find a way to get us back home." Twilight tells Applejack. "Your right. There no reason for me to act like to Pinky Pie, and I'm sorry." Applejack telling both her friend across the room.

"Alright, it going to take some time to find the parts and miserable to get the riff to stabilize and get you folks back home." I tell them."So it like we are going to be here for a while." Applejack said out loud trying to calm herself.

"At else the party can be moved up." Said Pinky Pie excided jumping off the walls and disappearing and reappearing in my jacket; Shocking me in the process. "Is she normally this rolled up?" I ask them.

"Yes, she. Yes, she is." Said Fluttershy to me.

"So you mention the Reds earlier; What are they?" Ask Rainbow.


"Well, it a long story and it going to take some time get it all out. Please have a seat." I tell them. While I when to a nearby shelf and pull an old shape device that looks like a pyramid. I went back to them a place the device on the table and turn it on.

"What is that?" Spike asked as I turned it on. "If you want to find out then you then have to be patient with him." Twilight tells him.

"Thank you, Twilight." I tell her. "To answer your question Spinke. This is a holographic projection." I tell to the rest of them.

"A holo-what?" Applejack with a questioning the whole thing. At that, the device fires up and projected a system of a planet with nine moons orbiting around it.

"This is the world you landed in. We are on this planet here." I said out loud. Highlighting one of the moons going around the planet. "The planet of Omega is a racing planet made up different environments to test the driver and their car to the limits." I continued to say when Rainbow asks me. "So what does this have to with the Reds?"

"I'm getting to that." I tell her. The hologram change from the planet into something else that looks more like an army. "This is them." I said tell them while the others look in shock.

"It's a good thing we ran into you when we did." Applejack tells me. "They don't look that tough." Schmuck Rainbow.

"You have no idea what you are mucking. Do you?" I ask Rainbow, which made her pull back a little.

"As I was saying; The leader is the most roofless person you ever come across." I told to them, changing the hologram again to the leader. "He looks just like you?" Rarity asks me looking at the hologram of their leader wearing an officer uniform looking more like general having 5 stars on each side of his shoulders, clean shaven and wearing a hat with the 5 stars on it as well.

"He is me. But not me. He as the looks of me but he is a machine that made a long time ago. When he got jealous and turn on me joined the Reds using this army taking over everything. I was fighting him with my own team called the Silencers. It wasn't until the Reds found us and killed the whole team. I was the only one that could get away." I said to them.

The others were still in shock from what I said I shut off the device. "I'm sorry about what happen to you and to your team." Fluttershy tells me putting her hoof on my shoulder.

"It best not to drill with the past. Now let's find a way to get you back home." I tell them getting ready for the long journey ahead of us. "There no time to waste; Let's get started." Applejack said to everypony and me.


Author's Note

This is just first of many chapters to come. Also, it's my first story on here.

I fix the problems with this chapter.

[1/27/1018 update]

That should be it for this go around on the editing, maybe.

[8/25/2018]

I redid the chapter to make more scent out of whats going on. So hopefully there shouldn't be any more problems out of this chapter. Maybe.

Next Chapter: Chapter 2 The New Beginning Estimated time remaining: 16 Hours, 7 Minutes
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