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The ultimate surprise

by shadowshild612

Chapter 5: chapter 4 edited

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chapter 4 edited

Deep in the bowels of space a long and large ship with glowing blue parts and a pincer-like front end that has electricity passing between the two. Far within the depths of the ship a tall bipedal squid like being with small muscles and a blue hue stood at the helm of the ship, watching his robotic minions as one approached him.

“Sir, we have detected an anomaly.” The robot said.

"What sort of anomaly?" The bipedal figure said, not looking at the robot.

“We have detected an abnormally high level of technology on a lone planet.” The robot said and showed the being a tablet. “The strange thing is it's just one location that is going off. it is at least level twenty technology.”

"And what level is the planet's technology?" The being asked looking at the tablet.

“When last checked…” The robot checked the tablet. “Level one.”

"Level one?" The being asked. "I've only heard of one technology that high, and I was imprisoned in this sector of space for trying to obtain it… intriguing. Set course for the planet."

“Yes sir, shall I send a probe ahead of us to scout out the planet?” The robot asked.

"Yes, but engage the cloaking device on the ship as well so we are not detected." The being said.

“Yes sir.” The robot goes over to a control panel and presses a few buttons.

"Soon whatever this level twenty Teck is I shall have it or else my name is not Vilgax the intellectual!" The being said as a blue orb detached from the ship and flew off to the planet that was detected.

With Dillan

Dillan smiles as he sat at a table with a plate of food in front of him, the elements of Harmony, princesses, and cutie mark crusaders sitting around the same table as multiple ponies talk and dance thanks to the party Pinkie had set up for Dillan. THANKS FOR SAVING THE CRUSADES AND WELCOME TO PONYVILLE PARTY.

"So, tell us more about your world." Rainbow dash said. "Ya got any good book like daring doo?"

"Wow, I'm surprised Twilight didn't ask me that." Dillan said with a chuckle, as he pulled out a book with a dark shade of purple with an alicorn on the front with her head hung down and her wings spread out in front of her. "This is past Sins, it's actually a fan made story about your world that became so popular it got a hard cover. It's actually mostly about you Twilight."

“Me?” Twilight asked, shocked.

Dillan nods, smirking a little. "Well, you and er… your daughter."

“Daughter!?” Everyone yelled in shock.

Dillan's smirk widened. "Adopted daughter, but yeah"

Twilight faints and Spike fans her with a paper plate spilling crumbs and frosting all over her.

Dillan covers his mouth. "Good thing I didn't tell her who it is."

“Who was her daughter?” Luna asked.

"Read the book or use a spell to instantly read it." He said eating a cupcake, after he looked at her.

Luna picks up the book and starts to read it. “I do hope it won’t make my sister faint as well.” Celestia said with a giggle.

"Possibly…" Dillan said with a serious tone as Luna gasped.

"Twilight was kidnapped!?" She asked as she kept reading.

Everyone looked between Luna and Twilight before going back to the party. “How do you like the party?” Pinkie asked.

"It's fun." Dillan said smiling. "The best I've ever been to."

“Yay!” Pinkie cheered before pushing a cupcake into Dillan’s mouth, then she rushed off.

Dillan blinked a couple of times, before swallowing the cupcake. "It's Pinkie, don't question it." Dillan and Rainbow said at the same time, one to himself and the other to him from another.

All the mares giggle at that, aside from Rainbow and Luna. "S-sir Dillan… the filly Twilight adopts in this book…"

"Is Nightmare moon reborn. Yes." He said, smiling softly.

“How? Why? Surely, she would know of the danger.” Luna said as she kept reading, getting absorbed in the book.

"Two reasons, the spell didn't finish so Nightmare does have all her memories and two she didn't want a filly to be sent to the moon." Dillan said as Celestia began reading over Luna's shoulder.

Spike chuckles as he speaks. “I think we lost them both.”

"Just wait until they get near the middle, the Celestia in the story does something… very messed up." Dillan said, shaking his head.

"Tia what did you do?" Luna asked her sister with a glare.

Celestia pulls her head back. “I wouldn’t…well…maybe.”

Dillan chuckles. "Just keep reading." Dillan chuckles,
before the two instantly looked back into the book.

"Wow, I'm surprised Twily isn't the one doing that." A voice said from behind them, as the group turned to see a pony with a white coat and blue mane standing next to a pink alicorn with equally pink hair, a small foal wrapped in a blue star coat giggling on the mare's back.

“Howdy Shining, Cadence, what brings y’all to Ponyville?” Applejack asked.

"We came to surprise Twilight and heard of a new species having just moved here." Cadence said with a smile before her daughter vanished in a poof of magic.

She reappeared on top of Dillan’s head giggling, a cupcake already in her face since Dillan held it up to his head before she teleported. "How'd you know she was going to do that?" Shining armor asked, smiling softly as his daughter licked the frosting off the cupcake.

"She's a baby with magic and I'm something she's never seen before, curiosity is strong." Dillan said with a smile.

“So, you are the new species I take it.” Cadence said walking up to Dillan with a smile.

"In this dimension, yes." Dillan said with a smile. "My name's Dillan, it's nice to meet you princess Mia mora cadenza."

Candace smiles and giggles as she lifts her daughter off him. “It is nice to meet you too.”

The small infant whimpers and reaches out to Dillan, tears in her eyes since she didn't want to leave yet. Dillan smiles and gently tickles her neck, making her laugh and squirm away from him as Shining armor chuckles. "She loves getting tickled."

“I just had the weirdest dream.” Twilight said as she sat up. “Something about adopting a daughter.”

Dillan chuckles and points to the book Luna and Celestia were reading. "Not a dream, just information about that book."

Twilight blinks before walking over to the punch bowl and drinking a whole cup. “Nope.”

Dillan chuckles, shaking his head as Luna gasps and smacks Celestia's shoulder making Dillan burst out laughing knowing what part of the story the fast-reading sisters were at as Flurry heart teleports into his lap giggling along with the laughter.

“What's so funny? And why did Luna just hit Celestia?” Shining asked.

Dillan whipped his tears. "Sorry, long story short, that's a fanfiction about Twilight from where I come from. Where she adopts a small filly, she found in the ever-free forest she named Nyx… I'm laughing because I warned these guys about what Luna would do when she got to a curtain part, and she just did."

Cadence raised an eyebrow. “What part would that be?”

"Celestia just kidnapped the foal Twilight adopted!" Luna said angrily.

The mares look at Celestia who hotels her hooves up. “I would not have done that.”

"Really?" Dillan asked. "Even if you were afraid, she was Nightmare moon and was scared she'd take Luna away again?"

Celestia’s ears fold back. “Well…maybe.” she admitted.

Dillan smiles softly. "It's ok, you were worried about your sister… the Twilight in the story however probably won't forgive you… maybe."

Flurry heart giggled and played with Dillan's little patch of beard hair, as he gently bounced her in his lap.

“Well, while the princesses enjoy that…story, why don’t we learn more about you?” Rarity asked

"Sure, ask away." Dillan said, smiling as Flurry's heart got in his face, and looked him in the eye. "Hi." He said, making her giggle more.

"W-what's your um… favorite animal?" Fluttershy asked, in her timid voice.

"Giraffes." He said simply as he held Flurry's heart, while her parents went to get food.

“Can you fly?” Rainbow asked.

"In a transformation, one of them can fly at the speed of light." Dillan said, looking at his ultimatrix.

“Oh yeah? I bet I am faster.” Rainbow said with a smirk.

Dillan and Twilight look at her as if she was crazy. "Do you know what the speed of light even is?"

“Slower than me.” Rainbow said with a smirk and flaps her wings to get into the air.

"The speed of light is faster than sound." Dillan said to her. "Using that transformation, I could get from one side of Equestria to the other in a second."

Rainbow's eyes widen before she looks around and waves it off. “Pfff yeah right.”

Dillan rolls his eyes with a smirk. "Whatever, believe what you want… slowpoke."

Rainbow bolts into Dillan’s face. “What did you call me?!”

"Slowpoke, got a problem with that?" Dillan asked with a challenging smirk not moving away from her.

“You, me, outside, now!” Rainbow said before flying out the doors.

Dillan chuckles. "She reminds me of my fiance." He said, slowly giving Flurry heart to Cadence before heading outside.

“Darling, are you really going to race her?” Rarity asked as most of the mares follow him.

"Not for real." Dillan said with a smile, before whispering. "I know how bad her ego is and what would happen if I beat her."

The girls nod their heads as they get outside where Rainbow is doing small rings in the air.

Dillan smiles as he watches her for a moment, before popping up his Ultimatrix and transforming into a large blue tinted mantuary like being. "You ready?" He asked Rainbow.

“What the buck is that thing?” Rainbow asked shocked.

"This is Jet ray, the alien I was telling you about." Dillan said, taking off into the air and circling her. "So are Ya ready?"

“Oh, it is on!” Rainbow said, narrowing her eyes.

Dillan smirks and blasts off in the direction of the mountain near Ponyville, faster than Rainbow could process. “What the buck!?” She shouts before she tries to follow him.

Dillan flies around and slides next to her. "So, where do you want to race to?"

Rainbow frowns before pointing a hoof at her home. “From here to my home, then back to Twilight’s castle.”

"Got it, Ya ready?" He asked, smiling a bit at her.

“Whenever you are!” She said before getting in a runners pose on a cloud.

Dillan smiles and lands next to her before also getting in a stance, before the two take off racing quickly to Rainbow's house. The two get to her house at the exact same time before racing back to Twilight's castle, before Dillan glanced at Rainbow and slowed down ever so slightly so Rainbow beat him to the castle making her ecstatic.

“Ha! I knew I could win!” Rainbow yells as she begins panting and lands on the ground.

Dillan smiles a bit as he turns back, chuckling. "Looks like I'm beat, good race."

“I knew I was faster!” Rainbow boasts before she collapses to the ground panting.

Dillan kneels down to her. "You, ok?"

She waves a hoof. “I…I’m fine.”

"You really pushed yourself, come on." He said helping her to stand up and walking her inside.

“I can…walk on…my own.” Rainbow said, weakly wiggling her hooves.

"Yeah ok… you clearly overexerted yourself." He said, chuckling as he sat her in her throne once they got inside.

“My goodness, I think Rainbow is overheating.” Rarity said.

Dillan nods a bit, as Rainbow glares at them weakly. "I-i am n-not…"

Twilight walks up and starts looking over Rainbow. “Rainbow this is serious, if you're overheating you would hurt yourself without treatment.”

Dillan looked at her. "Can't she just drink some water?"

Twilight shakes her head. “While that would help, if a pony is overheating that means their internal body temperature is reaching a dangerous level and we can't just release the heat that easily. We need to cool her down quickly.”

Dillan pops up his Ultimatrix and flips through the scans, before transforming into a large moth-like being. "Big chill!" He said before shooting some cold air out of his mouth around Rainbow dash

Rainbow sighs and relaxes as she is cooled down fast. “That feels good.”

"Woah, Nelly. That watch sure is useful." Applejack said as Dillan nodded but kept the cool air blowing into Rainbow dash.

Twilight scans Rainbow with her magic. “Ok, Rainbow is at a safe temperature now. But she will need to rest.”

Dillan returned to normal, nodding a bit. "You didn't have to go so hard against me, you know." Dillan said to Rainbow.

She frowns and looks away with a blush. “Whatever.”

Dillan raises an eyebrow but shrugs with a smile. "Well anyway it was an amazing race, we should do it again sometime."

“Yeah…sometime.” Rainbow muttered.

“Dillan dear, I have noticed that you wear clothes. Who designed them?” Rarity asked.

"No clue, I just bought them." Dillan said, before blushing a bit. "H-humans don't um… have anything to uh cover… things so we all wear clothes."

All the mares blushed at that. “Oh my.” Fluttershy whispered.

"U-um would you mind making me some more clothes, Rarity? I only have one pair…" he said looking away.

“Of course, darling but I will need your measurements, as well as any specific designs that you want.” Rarity told him.

"I'm ok with just black and blue, it's my favorite color pattern aside from orange and black. And uh… I have no clue about measurements." He shrugged.

“Just come to my Boutique when you are free, and I will take your measurements.” Rarity said. Then they heard sniffing from Luna and Celestia.

"You're near the end, aren't you?" Dillan asked the two princesses.

Luna nods and sniffles. “Poor Nyx, sister, remind us to check the castle for any remnants of n
Nightmare.”

"Luna… are you going to try and?" Dillan asked, his eyes widening.

She shakes her head. “N-no I would not risk accidentally bringing Nightmare back trying to make Nyx real. I just want to make sure that there are no pieces left behind where a cult could attempt to bring her back.”

Dillan hums. "Well… making Nyx real would be interesting. But yeah, that makes sense…"

Luna and Celestia go back to reading the book. “I am worried about reading that book.” Twilight said.

"It's very good." Dillan said. "But it is sad at points."

“But it would feel strange reading a story about…me.” Twilight said, rubbing her leg.

"Imagine how Ak yearling feels then." Dillan said with a smile.

Twilight blinks before thinking about it. “Huh, I guess that's true.”

"Just read it, it's very good… look at them." Dillan said pointing at Celestia and Luna.

Twilight looks at them and smiles a bit. “It feels good to see them acting like sisters, enjoying something together.”

A guard rushes into the room, getting everyone's attention “Princesses there's some strange object floating around town!”

"What kind of object?" Celestia asked, looking up from the book.

“We don’t know, it looks to be made of metal with blue glowing eyes and its limbs to shine a blue light on anypony it grabs.” The guard said.

"Wait… say that again?" Dillan asked, going over to the guard quickly.

“Uh, a strange orange flying metal thing is scaring ponies by shining a blue light over them when it can grab them.” The guard said backing up from Dillan.

Dillan pulled out his phone much to the confusion on everyone before showing the guard a picture.

"This but blue?" He asked worry in his voice.

“Um yes, but it doesn’t have legs or at least it is somehow using its legs to fly.” The guard said.

Dillan gulped a bit before going into his phone again and showing the guard another picture. "This one?"

The guard shook his head. “The first one was closer.”

"Oh no." Dillan said, gulping before rushing out the castle.

Everyone follows him out of the castle, with Twilight asking. “What is it? Do you know what it is?”

Dillan looked around frantically. "A drone, a drone we need to get rid of fast!"

“Why? What is it doing?” Applejack asked as she ran alongside him.

"Nothing good, if it is like the picture I showed the guard, it belongs to an intergalactic war lord!" Dillan said, screeching to a halt as ponies ran if fear of a large blue robot flying around before it suddenly stopped, and its helicopter blades turned into legs.

It turns to spot Dillan and its eyes light up a bright blue as a beam of light scans him but goes over a second time on his watch. “Anomaly found.” It said before reaching for him.

Dillan backs away, not letting the robot grab him as he kept his distance. "Not good."

“Capture anomaly.” It said before two more robots were shot out of its shoulders.

Dillan ran away from the robot, as the two smaller machines flew after him. "It appears to be after Dillan." Cadence said, walking up to the group with her husband and Foal.

The robots all follow Dillan but only try to capture him, not attack him yet. “Capture anomaly.” The larger robot repeats.

Dillan jumps and grabs a flagpole flipping around the robots and kicking one into the dirt, making the ponies' mouths drop. "Should we help?" Celestia asked.

“Hostile detected, engaging.” The large robot said before aiming its arm at Dillan and fired a laser out of its palm.

“Th-that thing is s-scary.” Fluttershy said while hiding behind Rarity.

"Well ah ain't gonna stand around and let Dillan get hurt, he saved mah sis. And I'm not gonna let something hurt em!" Applejack said, charging at the Robot.

Dillan yells in pain as the blast strikes him and sends him flying through the air slamming him into a building before the other two robots started shooting at him as well.

The lasers burn the ground and walls around him as he barely manages to roll out, then one of the smaller robots flies up to Dillan grabbing his arm. It was about to fly up into the air with him, but Applejack ran up, pivoting on her front hooves, turning around and giving it a powerful buck, denting it. “Buck! Those things are stronger than old Betsy.”

"Applejack, get out of here now, these things are dangerous." Dillan said weakly as Rainbow dash slammed into one of the robots.

"Buck that, you saved our sisters and helped me! No way we're going to leave Ya hanging!" Rainbow yelled.

Celestia and Luna step up next to each other before blasting the large robot with their magic, pushing it back. “Mana manipulation detected, deploying countermeasures.” The large robot said before a blue energy field appears around it and the sister's magic stops affecting it.

"What is this!?" Celestia asked in shock as Dillan slowly stood up.

"They have counters for magic?!" Dillan asked in shock, as a Lazer blasted his shoulder.

The large robot walks forward to grab Dillan while the girls try to stop it. Applejack uses her rope to lasso its other arm and pull on it, but it just drags her along the dirt. Rarity tries throwing whatever her magic can grab onto, but nothing is hard enough to do more than scratch it. Fluttershy rushes to Dillan to help him up. Rainbow dash flies into the soy and grabs a cloud before slamming it onto the robot’s head trying to blind it. Pinkie uses her party cannon on the robot but that also does nothing. Lastly Twilight, Luna, and Celestia all combine their magic and attempt to get past the anti-magic shield.

Dillan breathes heavily as Fluttershy helps him up, before the robot blasted a house behind Dillan while trying to hit him, making him look back at the flaming building with shock and fear as his mind goes back to the night his own home blew up. The human's head slowly looks back to the robot, his eyes darting slowly between each of the girls before he grits his teeth in rage.

In a flash Dillan slammed down his Ultimatrix, making a bright blue aura flood the town center where they had ended up. When it vanished, their human friend had been replaced with a large skeleton-like being with a single eye with two skeletal wing-like appendages on its back and a boney tail. "That's it!" He said with a raspy voice, before he jumped into the air and shot sharp bone projectiles into each of the smaller robots causing them to explode.

“Extreme hostility detected.” The large robot said before using both hands to fire a beam at Dillan.

Dillan's body suddenly fell apart into a pile shocking the group as the blasts went past him, before he reassembled himself and shot multiple bones into the robot's body.

“Error, unknown life form detected. Requesting…requesting…reques….ting…” The large robot said before it fell onto a nearby house, shutting down.

Dillan's breath was heavy with anger as he returned to normal and fell on his butt, turning to look at the ponies who watched him with various expressions Ranging from surprise to fear. "That… was the coolest thing I've ever done."

The robot lights up once more. “S-s-s-self d-d-d-destruct a-a-a-activated.”

"What!?" Dillan shouted.

"That doesn't sound good." Pinkie pie said as Dillan turned to Celestia and Luna.

"Teleport it away from the town now!" He yelled in panic.

The three alicorns focus their magic together and teleport the robot high into the sky, before there was a massive explosion. “Wh-why would it kill itself?” Fluttershy asked.

"Because it failed it's objective. It was a machine, like the train, it didn't have feelings or anything." Dillan said, looking up at the sky.

Small pieces of scrap metal fall around the town. “You seem to know what that…thing was.” Celestia said.

"Yeah…" Dillan signed, showing them the picture, he showed the guard. "It's a robot by someone named Vilgax… he's an intergalactic war lord."

“That doesn’t sound good.” Pinkie said frowning.

“Indeed not, why would he send this robot here?” Celestia asked.

Dillan looks down at his ultimatrix, getting Twilight's attention. “Was it here for your watch?” Twilight asked, worried of the chaos that device could do in the wrong hands.

Dillan sighed as everyone looked at him. "Most likely, either that or me being a human here is an anomaly like the robot was saying."

“Um…d-did anypony notice the big thing didn’t attack till Dillan did?” Fluttershy asked quietly.

Dillan blinked a few times. "Huh, you're right… but it still tried to steal my Ultimatrix and if that robot was sent by who I think it's a good thing we stopped it."

“Perhaps this…Vilgax can be reasoned with.” Celestia suggested.

"He's killed thousands and stolen the powers of superheroes from ten planets." Dillan said, shaking his head.

“How do you know that? Is it like, that show of us?” Luna asked.

"Yes, there's a show called Ben ten where a ten-year-old got a watch like mine called the Omnitrix and Vilgax has tried to kill him and steal the Omnitrix for nearly ten years when the show finally ended." Dillan said, nodding.

Twilight thought for a moment. “Didn’t you say something about this world being different somehow? Maybe this Vilgax isn’t evil in this world.”

Dillan blinks and thinks for a moment. "Maybe… but I'd rather not take that chance, if someone here got hurt because of me I wouldn't forgive myself."

“We can take care of ourselves darling.” Rarity said with a soft giggle.

"I know you can…. But what about them?" He asked, looking at the crowd of ponies that had gathered. "You have your shop, Applejack has her farm, Twilight has her princess duties, Pinkie has her parties and sugar cube corner, Rainbow has the weather agency and Fluttershy has her animals and animal sanctuary. Someone has to protect them when you're all busy."

The mares all look at each other, admitting he has a point until Celestia walks up and smiles at him. “Then I would like to make you a job offer. Protect Equestria from otherworldly threats and we will make sure that you have enough funding to do so.”

Dillan blushes a bit and rubs his head. "I mean I honestly just need a paycheck, and probably medical care…" he said holding his arm, as Fluttershy from Dillan's left side noticed his burnt and bloody shoulder from where the robot hit him.

Fluttershy gasps and flies off to get medical supplies. “Still, defending our whole world from a villain such as the one you described will take a lot of work and that takes money. Take it from this old mare, better to have it and not need it than need it and not have it.” Celestia said with a wink.

Dillan chuckles and nods, "alright, I understand."

“Then it is settled.” Celestia said with a smile and a nod.

Dillan smiles a bit, yelping as Fluttershy puts some peroxide on his burn. “Oh dear, I am sorry, but I need to make sure this doesn't get infected.” She spoke.

"I-its alright, could have warned me though." Dillan chucked as the ponies saw the burn.

"Oh man, that looks nasty." Rainbow said, backing away slowly.

“What kind of magic could leave burns like these?” Twilight said as she tried to get a closer look before Fluttershy surprisingly pushed her back as she worked on bandaging Dillan.

"It's not magic Twilight." Dillan said, wincing as Fluttershy put a bit of pressure on his burn to make sure the bandages were on. "The technology that machine represents is something Equestria is nowhere near yet… the galaxy ranks tech, and that thing was at least level Ten."

“Oh yeah? Well mister smart guy, what is our level then?” Rainbow asked, a smirk of confidence on her face.

Dillan looked at Rainbow for a second before looking around the town and held his chin in thought. "I'd say… one."

“One!?” Everyone said in shock, though Rainbow said it in anger.

"Sorry, but it depends on how much technology there is. And earth my home in the show my watch is from, which has technology everywhere…" Dillan said, rubbing his shoulder. "Is only level two."

“What? But surely there can’t be that large of a gap between our technology.” Twilight said.

"Twilight, we have lights inside that aren't powered by candles or magic and giant metal machines called airplanes that fly in the sky without balloons." Dillan said, standing up. "Even one of my transformations is technically made out of millions of tiny machines."

“What? How is that possible?” Twilight asked.

"No idea, all I know is it works." Dillan said standing up.

“You should get some rest to heal faster.” Fluttershy said.

"Isn't that what you guys said to Rainbow?" Dillan asked with a smile, making Rainbow blush a bit.

"H-hey! I'm too awesome for resting!" She challenged.

Her friends roll their eyes. “Be that as it may, both of you need to rest.” Rarity said.

Dillan signs and nods with a salute. "Ma'am's yes Ma'am's!"

Everyone starts to laugh.

Dillan chuckles a bit, before looking at the white-tailed woods. "How… how long will it take for a house to get built?" He asked Luna, glancing at the settings sun.

Luna taps her chin. “I admit I am a bit out of touch with today's contractors, but I would say no more than a few days.”

Dillan slumped forward a bit. "Right…"

“What's with the sad expression? That's pretty fast, not as fast as I was making my house, but still pretty fast.” Rainbow said.

"Because that means I'm basically homeless for the next few days." Dillan commented, sighing.

“No you're not.” Luna said with a smile. “You can stay in our castle till the house is finished.”

Dillan stared at Luna for a moment. "You just want to finish reading past Sins, don't you?"

Luna looks away, trying to act innocent. “We do not know what you're talking about, we have already finished that book. But if you have a squeal, we would love to read it.”

Dillan laughs a little. "I don't know of any sequels, but I have a few other hard cover fans made books about mostly these girls." He said pointing at the main six. "One of my favorites is called my little Dashy."

Rainbow blushes a little. “What's that one about?” Celestia asked.

“It sounds like a story about Rainbow’s foalhood.” Pinkie said with a giggle.

"Actually yes." Dillan said. "Except it's about when Rainbow dash ends up getting sucked through a portal and ending up in the human world. But because of time differences she ends up a foal again and the story is of a human man taking her in and raising her as a daughter."

Rainbow blushes more as all the mares ‘Awww’ at that. “That sounds like an adorable story, you wouldn't mind if I borrow that book, do you?” Rarity asked.

“No way! That book isn’t going anywhere. I need to make sure it captures my awesomeness.” Rainbow said as she got between Dillan and her friends.

Dillan laughs a bit. "You still can perform your sonic rainboom, and the ending is a bit sad though… luckily there's a sequel."

“Well…I guess that's ok.” Rainbow said with a frown.

Dillan chuckles and pulls out a hardcover book, with the picture of a filly Rainbow dash before passing it to the adult Rainbow dash. "Here."

Rainbow looks at it then tucks it under a wing. “I will read it first and take note of any mistakes in my character.”

Dillan laughs. "You're acting like I wrote it."

“Well, I can’t exactly find the real author, so you'll do.” Rainbow retorts with a blush.

Dillan chuckles and gives her a friendly smile. "Considering I'm the only one in this world who's read it, I guess that makes sense."

Rainbow smiles and is about to say something when she sees the time. “Oh, buck I got to get to work.” She takes off into the sky as the others watch.

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