Princess Luna is tired of living in her sister's shadow. She petitions Starswirl for help, and what she receives is far from what anypony expected. The real question is whether Equestria will survive her mistake.
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Princess Luna is supposed to be her sister's equal. She watches over 12 of every 24 hours, after all. But she isn't, and everybody knows it. Equestria adores the one who brings warm, sunny days, and ponies sleep through her nights. Even her sister sometimes seems to forget that she's supposed to be one of Equestria's ruling diarchs.
Luna seeks help from the only pony she thinks can make a difference: Star Swirl the Bearded. He provides a spell, one she can use to change herself into the pony she wants to be.
Unfortunately for her (and the rest of Equestria), things don't go quite as expected.
Updates Wednesdays, though it may update a little quicker at first as the Fimfiction version of this story catches up to the one posted on Patreon. Cover by Zutcha, as always. These just keep getting better, don't they?
This is a Patreon-sponsored story, written for Aurora Gleam. So tremendous thanks to them for making this adventure possible.
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59 Chapters:
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Prologue: Goetia [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 31st, 2017
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Chapter 1: Demonic Meeting [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 17th, 2018
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Chapter 2: Nightbreeze [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 4th, 2017
2,158
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Chapter 3: Star [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 9th, 2017
2,047
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Chapter 4: Settling In [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 16th, 2017
3,116
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Chapter 5: Contractor [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 23rd, 2017
2,431
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Chapter 6: Celestia [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 30th, 2017
2,436
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Chapter 7: Court [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 7th, 2017
2,277
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Chapter 8: Pieces on the Board [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 13th, 2017
2,810
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Chapter 9: Opening Move [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 20th, 2017
2,235
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Chapter 10: The Glow [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 27th, 2017
2,656
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Chapter 11: Full Bat Consequences [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 4th, 2017
2,456
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Chapter 12: Doing it Better [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 11th, 2017
2,732
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Chapter 13: Defiance [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 18th, 2017
2,796
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Chapter 14: Unified Standard [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 25th, 2017
3,137
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Chapter 15: Shaking the Firmament [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 1st, 2017
3,032
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Chapter 16: Bats! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 8th, 2017
2,065
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Chapter 17: Icefalls by Night [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 15th, 2017
2,138
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Chapter 18: New Terms [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 22nd, 2017
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Chapter 19: General in the North [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 29th, 2017
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Chapter 20: Bats to You [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Dec 6th, 2017
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Chapter 21: Transfer of Power [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Dec 13th, 2017
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Chapter 22: Organized Chaos [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Dec 20th, 2017
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Chapter 23: Avalon [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Dec 27th, 2017
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Chapter 24: Midnight Hunger [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 10th, 2018
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Chapter 25: Deliverables [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 10th, 2018
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Chapter 26: Landing [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 17th, 2018
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Chapter 27: Gold [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 24th, 2018
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Chapter 28: Midwinter [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 31st, 2018
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Chapter 29: Polestar [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 8th, 2018
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Chapter 30: Inspection [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 14th, 2018
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Chapter 31: Probe [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 22nd, 2018
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Chapter 32: Luna's City [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 21st, 2018
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Chapter 33: Officer of the Watch [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 9th, 2018
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Chapter 34: Move, Countermove [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 15th, 2018
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Chapter 35: Departure Protocol [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 21st, 2018
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Chapter 36: Reinforcements [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 28th, 2018
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Chapter 37: Siege and Spellfire [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 4th, 2018
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Chapter 38: Parlay [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 11th, 2018
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Chapter 39: Celestial [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 18th, 2018
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Chapter 40: Stratagem [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 25th, 2018
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Chapter 41: Impact Purity [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 2nd, 2018
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Chapter 42: Homecoming [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 9th, 2018
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Chapter 43: Negotiation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 16th, 2018
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Chapter 44: Open War [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 23rd, 2018
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Chapter 45: Salvo [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 31st, 2018
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Chapter 46: New Moon [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jun 6th, 2018
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Chapter 47: One Last Night [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jun 14th, 2018
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Chapter 48: Arrival Equation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jun 20th, 2018
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Chapter 49: Ritual [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jun 28th, 2018
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Chapter 50: One Last Stand [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 4th, 2018
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Chapter 51: Payment Due [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 12th, 2018
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Chapter 52: The Moon Decides [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 18th, 2018
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Chapter 53: Within Reach [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 25th, 2018
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Chapter 54: Accord [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 2nd, 2018
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Chapter 55: Survivors [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 8th, 2018
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Chapter 56: Castle of Harmony [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 16th, 2018
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Chapter 57: Nightmare at Last [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 23rd, 2018
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Epilogue: Excellus [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 29th, 2018
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