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Troubled. Disturbed. Stabbed. Entombed. Sometimes, when you're playing a word game with a magical princess from another world, the words you choose aren't just words.
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Troubled. Disturbed. Stabbed. Entombed.

Sometimes, when you're playing a word game with a magical princess from another world, the words you choose aren't just words.


Dramatic reading by Scribbler and Neighrator Pony!

Now has an authorized sequel, written by Cynewulf!


This is a brief "Humanized Pony Visits Earth" tale, based on a minific I wrote for (but was unable to submit to) the July 2017 "TBD" Writeoff.

Rated "Recommended" by Titanium Dragon! "While the Pony On Earth thing might put some people off, here I felt like it made excellent use of the idea … This is a short and punchy piece, and I think a lot of folks will find it worth their while."

Reviewed by Chris! "It's refreshing to read a story with a clear, explicit moral that nevertheless doesn't beat you over the head."

Reviewed by Present Perfect! "Peering into the darkness of one's own heart is difficult and painful. But this is also about the nature of goodness, and true to the story's own description, it doesn't bash you over the head."

Thanks to Morning Sun for prereading/copy-editing changes, and to Titanium Dragon for the story description.

Teen
Complete
Drama

2,373 words: Estimated 10 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. The Medium Is The Message [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 25th, 2019
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Published Jul 31st, 2017

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