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3000 years ago, the Tree of Harmony was destroyed, the Elements were lost, and almost all of the Alicorns were converted into either Earth Ponies, Unicorns, or Pegasi. Now, Alicorns are the masters, normal ponies the slaves. Can freedom be achieved?
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Three thousand years ago, Equestria was ruled solely by Alicorns. However, when an unknown foe in the form of a black cloud attacked and began to cover the entire world, destroying everything it touched, the Alicorns were powerless to stop it. It is only when the Tree of Harmony sacrificed itself that the monstrosity was stopped, but it left the once peaceful land in ruins and all but a handful of Alicorns as either earth ponies, pegasi, or unicorns. Without the Elements of Harmony to repair the land, each Alicorn took some of the depowered ponies into their care as they themselves began to try and repair Equestria.

While some Alicorns still treat their ponies with care and respect, just as their ancestors did three thousand years ago, many now treat normal ponies as nothing more than slaves. The life of these ponies is hard and sometimes brutal as they are looked down on and treated as dirt by those above them. Equestria remains broken due to the toxic magic still infecting the land and the only hope to remove it is to find the Element of Magic, the only Element not to be found over the last three thousand years.

It is into this world that Twilight Sparkle is born, a powerful unicorn training under Lady Celestia and Lady Luna. She lives as a Keeper, someone responsible for maintaining the knowledge from before the destruction of the Tree of Harmony. But unknown to her, her destiny is about be revealed as a prophecy predicted by Celestia's mother begins to come to fruition.

When the Element of Magic is found, the child of magic shall ascend. This child shall liberate the ponies of Equestria, and bring an end to the tyranny of the alicorns. When the Elements are liberated, Freedom Shall Ring.



Cover art belongs to southparktaoist on deviant art.

My first big, multi-act story. Advice and feedback is appreciated, but please be nice.

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170,551 words: Estimated 11 Hours, 23 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

25 Chapters:

  1. Prologue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
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  2. Act 1 Begins: Chapter 1: A Normal Day [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    4,555
  3. Chapter 2: A Very Abnormal Day [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    3,286
  4. Chapter 3: Imprisonment and Escape [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    6,461
  5. Chapter 4: The Resistance [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    5,064
  6. Chapter 5: Flight Training and Mishaps [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    4,543
  7. Chapter 6: Blind Leading the Blind [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    5,164
  8. Chapter 7: Trust [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    6,157
  9. Chapter 8: Stories [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    4,789
  10. Chapter 9: Getting to Know Your Neighbors [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    6,169
  11. Chapter 10: Sacrifice [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    5,329
  12. Chapter 11: End of act 1: Igniting the Fires of Hope [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    9,599
  13. Act 1 Interlude [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    2,357
  14. Act 2 Prologue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    418
  15. Act 2 Chapter 12: Next Steps [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    5,247
  16. Act 2 Chapter 13: What Judgement Truly Means [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    6,032
  17. Act 2 Chapter 14: Planning [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    7,183
  18. Act 2 Chapter 15: Setting the Stage [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    7,304
  19. Act 2 Chapter 16: Disguises [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    5,684
  20. Act 2 Chapter 17: Rocks [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    6,565
  21. Act 2: Chapter 18: I Don’t Think This Distraction is Big Enough… [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    12,599
  22. Bonus Chapter: Act 1 BLOOPERS [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
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  23. Act 2: Chapter 19: Trial 1, Laughter [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
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  24. Act 2: Chapter 20: The Journey Home [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
    6,158
  25. Act 2: Chapter 21: Arriving Home Part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 31st, 2017
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Published May 31st, 2017
Last Update Sep 28th, 2023
Freedom Shall Ring

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