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Twilight's Struggle: Equestria In the Cold War

by Christopher Massoud Bush

Chapter 53: Questions for the readers

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Sorry for they delay in updating the story, I’m still editing the next chapter. In lieu of that, I thought it would be a good idea to ask the readers of this fic some questions about the story.

1.) Which parts of the story have you found enjoyable (i.e. the dialouge, character development, etc.)? Which parts have you found unenjoyable/in need of improvement?

2.) The pacing of the story? Is it moving to fast or too slow through this time period?

3.) Do you believe that the story should focus more on Equestrian politics and its interactions with the human world in the Cold War, or should it focus more on “slice of life” updates that show our little ponies growing up in this alternate timeline.

4.) Should the fic focus on Canon character’s or OCs? Thus far there are almost no OC’s, something that will change in the coming chapters. Should I put an emphasis on developing these characters (i.e. Diamond Mistrial, the soon to be revealed spy cheif of Equestria, and Twilight Glimmer, Starlight’s future daughter) or should I put an emphasis on the show’s characters (i.e. the Mane 6 and the CMC) and developing their stories in this TL.

Thank you for reading this. Your feedback will help play a big role going forward in this TL.

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