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A Twisting Tale

by Damaged

Chapter 9: Examination

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Patched examined the cells under her microscope for a moment and then took some more notes. Before her, she had samples of her own cells, each taken from around her body where plant and pony seemed merged. Beside her notes on continued observations of the cells was her new log book, which she was hoping to use to fully document her own changes.

The book had four pages fully filled already, started at "Day -2" and progressed to "Day 1," today. She gave a little squirm as an odd sensation spread through her body, and glancing down between her back lags she looked directly at the bulging sheath. "I still can't believe all this. But it is so exciting to be here as it happens."

Trying to keep her thoughts off what she was about to do, Patched Scrape picked up a special little cup from the bench in her magic. "Come on Patch, just like college. Remember that big hunk Shining Armor?" A smile curled Patched's lips up at the corners, and she quickly set about closing the curtains. Holding the cup, she reached under her belly with her magic and started to coax and tease at the new addition to her anatomy.

She rubbed, and thought of Shining Armor—just like she did when she was a young mare. Closing her eyes, Patched focused on how well defined his muscles were, and how much she wanted to climb on his back and slam her hips into him. Startlement at her turn of thoughts almost derailed Patched, but she stayed the course. After nearly ten minutes of trying, however, she stared down at her completely flaccid and withdrawn shaft. "I am just not getting into this."

A knock at her front door tore Patched back to the present. "Uh, coming!" Her raised voice was quickly followed by a groan. "Whatever Sugar and Tight have, I really have it now. I can't believe that was the first thing I thought…" Clomping her way to the door, the doctor opened it with her magic and froze.

"Hi doc. I need help!" Double Diamond was draped with a blanket still, and rushed in and closed the door in a hurry. "No matter what I do it won't go down. I just took two cold showers and… and…" Double realized he was staring into Patched's eyes, but no matter what he did he couldn't look away from the beautiful depths.

All her problems were gone in an instant, and Patched felt the traitorous penis under her belly practically shoot out and go rock hard. "D-D-D-Double, what is the mating… I mean 'matter'!"

"After we were in that cave, I am horny all the time." Fighting his urges, Double nonetheless advanced on Patched and wuffed his breath out at her. The smell that his sharp nostrils caught told him everything he needed. "Then Night helped me… and now she seems like a sex-crazed zombie…"

Patched's blood was pumping white hot, and she felt her new addition jutting out like a lance underneath her. "You… you can't stop thinking about sex?" With little warning on the matter, Patched was the same way, her body practically vibrating in need. She wanted to climb his back, or have him climb hers—either way would suit her.

Double found himself walking up beside the doctor and turning his head. Sticking his nose under her arched tail, he inhaled her arousal and gave a deep groan.

When Double bit down on her dock, all thoughts of mounting him fled Patched's head. She wanted him on, in and all over her as quickly as possible. "This… this isn't very scientific…" She used what little sense she had left to fetch not just the cup she had prepared, but a second. "Don't be gentle, please."

The words shoved deep into Double Diamond's head, like his shaft was about to shove into Patched, and biting her dock one more time, he mounted her. Everything felt so very right, and without hesitating for a moment Double shoved forward, kicking with his powerful back legs.

Patched's eyes flew wide open, and for a moment her magic wavered. Leaning her head down, the doctor gazed at her own rock-hard shaft. In her head, Shining Armor was atop her for real, and Patched had no trouble stimulating herself now. Every stroke seemed in time with Double's, and when he sped up and grew erratic, so too did her own milking. A bite on the back of her neck pushed Patched over the edge. She screamed her orgasm and started milking at Double's shaft, and unloading her throbbing shaft.

Slumping weakly, unused to dealing with such an orgasm, Patched collapsed to the floor as Double pumped her body full of his seed. Patched lifted her little cup away from herself, and unable to hide her deliriously happy smile, she screwed the lid on. Three times she tried to get words out, while the blossoming warmth inside grew, and on the last she managed to groan and whimper softly. "DD, can you… can you pull out and fill this for me?" She floated the little cup over her shoulder.

Double stared at the cup, his brain not having gotten far past the amazing sex he had just had. "Uh, what?" Or at least he tried to say that, but first he needed to let go of Patched's neck. Then everything started to come back to him. He was meant to be avoiding getting horny by being away from Night, Tight, and Sugar, but instead he had completely lost himself and had sex with the town doctor. He pulled back and off Patched, and out of her as well. "I-I-I'm sorry!"

"Hold on there!" Patched used her magic to reach out and grab Double Diamond, hefting him a few inches off the ground. She took a deep breath. "I don't hold this against you, we didn't do anything two adult ponies can't do together. But I really need you to fill this up." She shoved the cup at Double again.

"But I…" Double stared at the little cup floating before his eyes. "What am I meant to fill it with?" When the doctor rolled her eyes and advanced, Double Diamond reached out and grabbed her head.

Patched had barely a moment before her face was propelled at Double's shaft, and with little choice she opened her mouth and let the still-hard length shove into her mouth. Her magic winked out, and Double landed on the floor with a thump.

"I'm sorry, doc, I don't… I don't…" Words failed double for a few moments, as the apparently talented Patched worked her tongue around his very sensitive length. "I don't think we should be…" His voice was lost for good this time, and all Double could do was buck his hips weakly. The moment of bliss came like a freight train, and Double Diamond arched his back and whinnied like a wild stallion, as his body gave up another load of his seed.

Pulling her head back, Patched caught the first shot on her nose, then the second across her face. The third landed in her mane, but finally the doctor got some of Double's seed into the cup and screwed the lid on. With a still-erupting Double Diamond before her, Patched gave a little shrug and sank her mouth back down around him. It might not have been completely scientific, but she got the samples.

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"So it's all because of the plant?" Night Glider was slumped on a chair, her mane and tail wrapped in warm towels. "It's crazy is what it is, and if I hadn't been so crazy to buck him I wouldn't believe it." She lifted her snout up, and spotted Sugar. Night Glider's nose twitched, and her eyes were drawn to the other mare's belly. Quickly she dropped her eyes again.

"Seems that way, at least it is wearing off dear. Would you like another cupcake?" Sugar Belle had gone into full-on baking mode, but lacking her magic she used more mundane methods for handling the stove and plates. "It is doing all kinds of strange things, but I can honestly say that it hasn't really hurt us, or done anything…" Her mind brought back the times she and Tight had talked about the plant, and how each time it had mostly been either neutral, or enjoying some of its modifications. "Well, it has done things, but they are fun, sometimes."

"Could I see it?" Night saw Sugar's head snap up. "What?" The conversation was keeping her nicely distracted, she sure didn't need to think about Sugar Belle's hard, stiff shaft grinding into her body. "Stupid brain, stop that!" At Sugar's surprised look, Night Glider knew she had to explain. "I can't stop thinking about sex still. It isn't as bad as before, but just looking at you reminds me that you have a…" Night blushed, "a penis, and now that I have said it I really can't stop thinking about it!"

Double Diamond would normally have knocked, but after another cold shower, he didn't want to risk another round of "Pin the doctor to the floor" while they waited for either Sugar or Tight to open the door. The moment he was inside, and seeing that he was surrounded by mares, Double panicked and rushed to the corner, shoving his face against the wood.

Night's lust doubled, and more than doubled. She couldn't pull her eyes away from her coltfriend. The smell of musk was weak, but still on him… and the doctor. At that moment—while her brain put together the fact that Double Diamond had just had sex with Patched Scrape—she found herself sliding from her chair and advancing on Double. "DD… I want you…"

"No you don't!" Sugar Belle grabbed Night Glider with her magic—her magic that was normally barely strong enough to lift a pony off the ground—and nearly flung her to the other side of the room.

"Whoa!" Patched caught the pegasus before she hit the wall. "Let go, Sugar. What are you doing?" She trotted over to Night, and before she knew what was happening she had the dark pegasus' lips pressed to her own in an intimate kiss. Heat filled Patched, and she gave a soft groan of need.

Double stared at the doctor making out with Night. His own arousal flared bright, and all the good work of three cold showers did nothing when it came to a recent "conquest" and his fillyfriend making out.

"Tight! Get your plot down here but keep to the wall, and… and don't go near your friends!" Sugar was still in shock of how easy it had been to lift Night, but trusted her magic enough to soak two dishtowels in water. Tying one over her own snout, she tossed the second to Tight when he entered. "Put this on, fast."

Sugar Belle's voice carried the same tone she used when giving Tight orders in the kitchen, and just as quickly as he would then, he followed the command. At last he spotted Double Diamond and Night Glider in the corner, making out while Patched Scrape climbed on top of Night's back. "Should we stop them?"

"If I use my magic I am liable to rip the house apart by using them as wrecking balls. And if either of us goes close… well, I like keeping you to myself, Tight." Sugar watched the moment the doctor found her mark, as both Night and Patched pulled the silliest faces she had ever seen. "I think this 'attraction' effect might be a bit stronger than we thought."

"You think?" Tight watched as Double mounted Patched, while the doctor kept her thrusting up on Night's back. "Sexy though. Look at them go…" He thought of how much fun it was to be ridden by Sugar, and felt the stirrings of arousal. "Did Night start making anymore sense?"

As she passed a cupcake to Tight, Sugar Belle nodded. "She was talking almost normally, so long as she wasn't looking at me. I think we should take her to the cave—to the plant." She froze, her own words surprising her. "It really wouldn't hurt any of us, I… I have a feeling it doesn't want to, that it wants to be friends."

"Really friendly, if you ask me." Tight Squeeze's mouth salivated at the amazing cake-treat. Chewing slowly, he let the towel fall back down over his mouth when he had popped the last of it in. "So when?"

"When they are done. When she comes to and can think straight." Sugar munched on her own cupcake, and watched as positions changed, and now Double was on Patched's back, while Night sucked the mare's shaft. "How long do you think they will be at it for?" She turned a hungry look to her husband that had nothing to do with food.

"Long enough, that is for sure." Tight walked to the back door and slid the bolt closed. Stepping carefully around the three ponies enjoying each other, he joined Sugar as they headed for their bedroom.

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"Where is Night Glider?" Double Diamond had stuck his head into Sugar and Tight's bedroom, finally too panicked to use any manners. He had woken up expecting to have his fillyfriend at his side, only to find her missing.

"Huh?" Tight yawned, and suddenly wondered how he always managed to end up on the bottom. "She was with you and Patched, wasn't she?" With a groggy head, he gently jostled Sugar to wake her up.

"She's gone! I don't know where she is, c'mon, we have to find her!" Double's hooves pounded as he charged for the back door of the house.

"What's going on? Why are you shouting?" Patched woke up squished in a corner, on the floor, but felt better than she had before in her whole life. Her memories were filled with all sorts of naughty things, and she found herself loving absolutely all of them.

"Night Glider is missing!" Double barely slowed down for the back door, his earth pony might rendering it to kindling. "Night?!"

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Unsure what was going on, Night knew one thing. She needed space to think. Her wings were weak, an odd lethargy in them making them useless, but that didn't worry her, and she attributed it to more of the drug in her lovers' fluids. The word made her grin. Lovers. Two. "I don't know why I am smiling, this is the strangest time of my—" She cut off at the sound of a yapping howl.

Orange glowing eyes watched Night Glider. The cactus 'yote hadn't sunk its roots into real food for a while, and the lone pony looked just right for it. Giving another yap, it watched the mare start to run. It loved to run too. Built leaner than its distant kin, the timber wolves, the cactus coyote was mostly a flat green in color. The creature's hide might have been soft, but it was covered with spines.

"Oh buck. Oh buck. Oh buck!" Night Glider cursed her useless wings, and ran as fast as she could for town. Turning her head to look back at the wooden monster behind her, she said even worse things; she wasn't going to make it to town before it caught up to her.

Easily able to judge that its hunt would be a success, the cactus 'yote kept up its long-limbed lope, eyes never leaving the mare's hindquarters. When its target turned sharply and ran into a cave, it gave a yap of excitement.

"I'm smaller than it… a little. I need to find a crack or a hole to hide in until it gets bored…" Night Glider squinted in the gloom, her night vision hampered by the sunlight she had just left. A dull glow to one side caught her attention, and she turned and didn't think. She charged into the den of the plant.

Turning, Night looked around at the chamber and gasped in surprise. "Is this… is this the plant Double talked about?" She stared at the vines and the bulbs. She screamed as one of the vines shot towards her, the hand-like flower on the end opening as if to grab her.

When the cactus coyote was plunged into darkness, it didn't know what had happened. It yapped into the thing clamped around its head, and felt relaxation already starting to seep into it.

"You… you protected me?" Night was shocked, the plant had grabbed the pouncing cactus 'yote out of mid air, and by the look of the pink gas leaking out around the hand-flower it was drugging it. "Are you… are you going to do that to me, too?" She stepped closer, excitement building. She wanted to be here so much, to fit in with Double and Patched. Just thinking about her new relationship with the town's doctor made Night smile. Then everything went dark.

She didn't panic. Night stood still, and could feel herself growing light-headed. She smiled inside the hand-flower and simply lay down. Something folded over her, closing around her, squeezing and gripping her. Realizing she could feel the body of the coyote pressed to her side—oddly without the pain its sharp spines should cause, Night wondered what the plant was doing, as consciousness fled.

Author's Notes:

Tight: "What is it like having a body of flesh and a tail made of plant?"

"That's not the worst part." Tight Squeeze gestured back at his odd new tail with a hoof. "It isn't even my tail! If I could control it, it would better. But the only pony it seems to listen to is Sugar Belle."

"It listens just nicely, and is adorable." Sugar reached out a hoof and stroked the tail-tip—which had started to form a black-green flower bud—with a hoof.

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