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A Twisting Tale

by Damaged

Chapter 1: Prologue

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Looking down over the rise, I couldn't help but smile. "What was the name of this place again? Our Town?" Pulling out my map, I studied it closely. "Far enough from everything that nopony will miss it. Perfect." I shifted my back and started walking, pulling my little cart along.

"Well, hello there!" The white stallion grabbed my attention with the greeting, as I came around the corner of the first building in the two rows of houses. "Welcome to Our Town. My name's Double Diamond." Looking him over, I couldn't help but marvel at the white-on-white color scheme, or that his cutie mark was three snowflakes wrapped in tiny vines. Well, I could fix that.

"Hi," I paused a moment, noticing the odd glint in his eyes, "I was wondering if your town might have room for one more? I am a keen librarian, and very good with magic." I watched him send his eyes over me, felt them trace every line, every curve—I could use this. "I could even start a school, if you need one?"

"We don't have any foals in town, but from what I hear a few mares are workin' on 'em." He gave an insufferable wink that had me almost cringe. Just relax Starlight, he will be eating out of your hoof in no time.

"Oh, well, I can't say I am looking for a foal of my own, but a mare does like to keep herself busy." It was time to give a little more of a hint, so I turned a little, gave him my best eyelash-batting. "I guess I need to find a bed to… sleep in, tonight."

To say the stallion was more interested was an understatement. Double Diamond actually wriggled his rump a little, I was almost sick at the thought. "Well, if you need a place for the night, I have some room at my place!" He looked back at the town, presumably one of the two rows of houses was his. "Only problem is, if we are up late… talking… these places all have thin walls. We could spend the night in the old cave, it is nice and comfortable."

All alone, away from the other townsfolk, this was getting better and better. Maybe I would let him have a ride before I took away his flawed cutie mark. "Oh? A cool, dark cave, just you and me? I can't wait." More eyelashes, not even a lie this time. "Got somewhere a mare can park her cart?"

"Miss…" He looked a touch lost for a moment, I gave my most innocent look I could. "I missed your name?"

"Starlight Glimmer." I beamed and followed him as he started walking toward the main street of town. My cart was mostly things that would make the town better, nicer… mine. "I am pleased to meet you, Double."

Friendly ponies were everywhere, even as close to night-fall as it was. It seemed like everypony wanted to see and wave to the newcomer, me. "Everypony sure is friendly here." I unhitched myself from my wagon, put some stones under a wheel to chock it. "Where is this cave? I really want to see it…" And of course I did, but not as much as I wanted to see Double Diamond on his own, at my service… I almost purred.

"Just down this way a little." Double pointed just out of town, leading the way. I followed him, still waving to all the friendly faces. The urge to just cast one big mind-control spell was always the strongest like this, with all those eager ponies just wanting to offer themselves to me.

As he walked right up to the rock-face, I wondered what he was about, but sure enough, there was a cave there. The closer we got the more visible it was, but with the sun going down I was sure it should be darker. Stepping inside, there was an odd scent of water and minerals in the air, but something else too, some kind of plant matter.

"What is that smell? Are there plants down here?" I followed him, the darkness of the cave getting deeper the further we went, until I could barely even make out his white fur. A soft blue glow got my attention, coming from the side I couldn't resist heading for it. Just as I reached the strange luminescence, I remembered my magic. "Oh, silly me." I created a basic light spell, just on the tip of my horn.

"Well," Double Diamond's voice broke my focus for a moment, "that is one way to get its attention." My head was half turned toward the stallion, but then something lashed out toward my face. I cried out, expecting whatever it was to go for my mouth, or nose. Instead, my light snuffed out and my legs trembled as something coiled around my horn tightly, squeezing and holding on tightly. "There you go, just relax, it won't take too long. Then I can get you home and tucked into my spare bed. You just wait and see Starlight, this will be the best town ever for you." His words were almost as mesmerizing as the thing squeezing my horn, pulling my horn.

I tried to shake my head, then resorted to a good, loud, scream. "Get this thing off me! Help!" I braced all four hooves and shoved backwards, fighting the pull on my horn. The grip, the strength, was proving too much. "Okay, now you will get it, you over-grown bean-sprout!" I charged my magic and pushed it into my horn, for what should have been a huge bolt of energy. All it did was fizzle, though. "Oh come on, magic immune?"

"No, not immune, but that tendril is like a null-stone, or so a unicorn described." I really wished I could look around at him, but even the desire to curse at Double Diamond wasn't going to distract me from getting free. Then I saw it. The vine wrapped around my horn was retreating into a big green pod, the petals of it looking like they are pursed together.

"Don't just stand there, help me!" I ground my eyes shut and pulled for all I was worth, giving up inches at a time as it reeled me in. Then the soft petals of the flower-thing kissed against my forehead. My eyes snapped open in horror, only to see my horn already inside the bud. The worst part was, it hadn't stopped pulling. "Please?"

"Why do you think I lured you here? New to town, but don't worry, Starlight, you will be just like everypony else soon." I wanted to spit at him, I wanted to scream at him, but if the vine made turning my head hard before, it was impossible now. A sharp jerk on my horn had my head pushing against the petals, shoving them, until I started to push into it. My vision went truly dark when, with a sharp tug, my whole head worked inside the pod, the petals snugging down around my neck.

"What is this thing? What is it do… do…" I yawned inside the plant's pod, it was only barely big enough for my head, but apparently that was enough for it. Trapped in the dark, I could smell something flowery, but each inhale had my head growing heavier, thicker. My legs folded under me and I felt the cool stone floor under my belly.

The touch to my vulva was almost a lightning strike by then. My drooping eyes snapped open as it didn't stop, certainly wasn't an accident—it started to push inside. "N-N-No…" I tried to get my legs under me, I tried to lash out with flesh or magic, but the plant had apparently taken care of both, with equal effect. I was helpless.

It should have been painfully dry, rasping, but as the thing breached my vulva I couldn't help but cry out. It felt huge, but was somehow unbelievably slick, too. The deeper it pushed, the better it felt, and I found I couldn't stop rocking back against it. As if sensing my complicity, another shape touched my lips, and yet more my nostrils. While I could stop it intruding on my mouth, I couldn't even shake my head to dissuade it from sinking the thinner—but still thick enough to cause friction—tendrils from claiming my nose. The flowery smell stopped, halted dead as those two things in my nasal cavity were apparently working air in and out, tainted air. I shouldn't be this horny, not with the plan effectively raping me, it had to be pumping something in.

The squirming from my nose didn't stop until those tendrils made it all the way down to my lungs, or so it felt. It tickled and felt strange a moment, and I couldn't keep back a cough—which was all the bigger tendril needed. Shoving into my mouth, it spread a horribly-sweet taste over my palate before shoving in deeper. Force-fed air, I tried to cough, tried to gag, but those two tendrils were working independently of my diaphragm now, inflating and deflating my lungs.

Darkness came to my mind, I couldn't fight it anymore. The thing seemed to be urging me to sleep, and there was nothing I could do to stop it.

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Pressure woke me up. Pressure in my bladder, pressure in my… I shook my head, or tried to. I was still trapped inside the pod-thing. There was more than just the tentacle-thing in my vagina now, keeping my back-end busy. I struggled to move, to get up, but the vines were locked inside… inside everywhere.

Trying to keep calm, I focused on what the thing was doing. My body felt… okay, I was full, but it wasn't doing anything painful. The sudden loss of pressure in my bladder made my eyes cross in the dark, but it wasn't me in control of my own waste, the plant was literally sucking me dry through a tiny tendril threading my urethra. I didn't care, a moment later my body was empty of waste and I knew a little more peace.

A pressure grew in my lower belly, but it was from the inside-out. It pushed, and throbbed. I tried to accommodate the things inside me, but in the end it was going to do what it wanted, and seemed well-practiced at keeping me subdued. The pressure grew stronger still, then it was like when it first pushed into me, the strain stopped and I felt something push… push out and under me.

I struggled as best I could, my legs twitched, my body half-turned. It felt like the plant-thing understood what I wanted, it let me lean to my side and lay a bit more comfortably. My legs still felt like wet noodles, I tried to bring one forehoof back, to ascertain what had pushed out of me, and from where, but I couldn't move it an inch.

The tentacle in my mouth suddenly bulged, causing me to worry about my breathing, except the other two little tentacles had that covered. The bulging thing wasn't just swelling for the fun of it, I could feel stuff pouring into my belly. It is feeding me. I wanted to scream, to thrash, to kick and buck and show how much I hated what was happening, but something pressed through all the anger and frustration, and I felt my thoughts calm down.

I blinked in the dark of the pod encapsulating my head. It was like all the anger and agony just drained out. One of the tentacles, the one deep in my vagina, squirmed a little then, and I felt something large press against my vulva. The only thing my brain could think of was egg, or seed. I tried to clench against it, but with my body so relaxed, it was only a matter of time until the pressure parted my lips and pushed it inside.

The passage of the thick shape followed a strange path. I expected it to shove the thing deep, down into my womb. But it wasn't going there. The thick thing was pressed down to my belly and behind… behind the thing that was jutting out through there. As it settled, I felt my world melt away again, darkness encroaching all around.

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When I could feel the world coming back into my head, I felt an odd kind of relief. It took a few moments to realize that my body was mostly empty of the… the things that had been in it. My head was still trapped, but an odd pressure in my throat warned me that even that wasn't going to last much longer. I gagged and gasped as the long tendril that had been feeding me pulled free. I tried to shout and protest, but the horrid taste in my mouth had me coughing and spitting, but more importantly, still the air was forced in and out through the tendrils in my nose. I expected those to pull free of me too, and they did. Sneezing and coughing more, the long and thin tendrils plucked free and I found myself gasping for air.

The last thing keeping me anchored surprised me by uncoiling, unwrapping from my horn and releasing my head. I slumped down into the big bud, resting my head there a moment and simply worked at regaining my senses. I couldn't help but grumble, the air smelled lovely and flowery, I realized that if I stayed in here I would never get up the energy to get away. Jerking on my head, pulling as hard as I could, a lewd popping sound echoed through the cave as I got free of it.

"Happy birthday!" I was not prepared for nearly twenty ponies shouting at me. Nor were they for my attempt to shut them up. My magic flared and although I wanted to seal their lips and bind their minds to my will, the worst I could really bring myself to do was shove a big cork in everyponies' mouth.

"What the buck did that do to—" My voice stopped, my brain stopped. I stared between my back legs at the bulging green sheath, the sheath of a stallion. It was thick and well-packed, by the look of it. I had seen stallions as big, but not many. I felt a slight urge to make use of it, but nothing strange; it just felt so… normal.

"Welcome to Our Town, Starlight." Double Diamond was standing above me, looking down. He reached a hoof out, offering me help to get up. I wanted to feel anger at him, I wanted to do things to him that would make him regret luring me into the cave. I reached to his hoof and smiled wearily.

"What the… what the horse-apples was that?" I looked down at my body again, noticed little green tendrils coiling around my cutie mark, looking like they were part of it. My body felt strange inside, like there was more to me now than merely unicorn. Whatever it was, it squirmed. Double pulled me up, waited for me to get steady on my hooves, a feat I was fairly sure I could never do again.

"That is your rebirth!" Double Diamond sounded so smug I wanted to blast his brain into limbo forever. I knew the spell, just the right one. I charged my magic and… calmed down. I blinked at him. "Now you fit-in here. You are one of us."

His forelegs closed around my neck, hugging me. The soothing pressure inside welled up and I couldn't stop myself hugging back. "I still want to destroy you all for this… but it can wait. What… what did it put in me? Something big."

"You will find out, trust me on that, Starlight." Double was insufferable, but if the thing was making me feel so relaxed, I was surprised the obliging stallion wasn't in a coma. I hated how nice the hug felt, how good it was to be… to be accepted.

Author's Notes:

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