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by Chaos Nightmare

Chapter 6: Chapter 6 The end

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Author's Notes:

This is the end of the story I know that there is more to this story and I may write it up someday but for now its done... I may write a non displace story sooner or later but for now I want to focus on Keybearer and Spike the courier.

I would like to thank
atronos for helping me with editing this story and BioQuillFiction for editing this chapter for me when atronosthelast quit on me

Griffionstone: Present Day

I was wrong, so very wrong. Griffonstone was the first place they would look! I ran through the streets of the town using my earthbending to block their paths.. "MY CABBAGES!" A vendor shouted as I created another blocked path through the market. Somehow that made me laugh, pretty sure that’s a new one for me though?

"Stop!" One of them, some purple unicorn, shouted as I went into the air. "Rainbow Dash, after her!" As the blue one went into the air I sound found myself staring at her. Damn she is a fast one!

"Hey stop!" Rainbow Dash said as I used airbending to push her to the ground before diving into the sea to escape while using waterbending to create a hole in the water where I could hide under the sea and breath.


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Earlier: Twilight Pov

"Rainbow, are you sure that our griffon will be here?" I asked as we finished our climb up the mountain side.

"For the last time Twilight! Yes! Even if the griffon isn't here we can be sure she is in the country." Rainbow replied as we walked through the harsh winds.

"Why are you sure about that darling?" Rarity asked.

"Simple, the guards are looking for her In Equestria so she might as well be hiding here." Rainbow said.

"Ah, am not even gonna begin with what is wrong with that sentence sugarcube." Applejack said as we finished climbing the mountain, looking over the village.

"Is this..." I began to say in a sad tone. I know Rainbow and Pinkie said it was bad here, but this…

"...Griffonstone, yep. And it looks a little better than last time." Rainbow said before noticing Gilda off in the distance "Hey G!" Rainbow said as Gilda turned around, smiling at us to my surprise.

""Hey Dash, what are you doing out here?"

"We are looking for a griffon, one in particular." Rainbow handed her the sketch of the griffon that attacked Celestia.

"Well the only Griffon I know that matches this description Is the amnesiac." She said as I tilted my head.

"Amnesiac?" I asked as she took a second to answer.

"Oh yeah, but it can't be her. She was in Equestria to see if somepony could help her cure her amnesia, but I guess she couldn't find somepony who could do that. Come on, I’ll show you to her." We all followed her to this abandoned looking temple. This is where she lives?

"Are you sure this is where your friend lives?" I asked as I saw the stat the temple was in.

"Yeah, this temple has been here forever and she decided to live there as it was pretty cheap to live there... Oh there she is now!" She waved at the griffon. "Hey Greta, I want you to meet a friend of mine and her friends." She said pointing to us. As soon as she saw me Greta started backing up.

"Yeah GIlda I would love to meet your friends... but I have somewhere to be right now." She said as she kept backing up.

"Well can you at least answer a few questions for us?" I asked as she sighed, muttering something before slamming her talons on the floor, causing a rock to emerge from it, knocking Pinkie Pie away and running. "After her!"

I shouted as we chased her through the marketplace. She kept making rocks to block our path and we had to move passed it "MY CABBAGES!" A griffon shouted as a rock formed out the ground smashing his stand. Why was that funny?

She flew into the air as Rainbow Dash flew after, before being knocked down with a torrent of air she moved with that strange magic Celestia warned us about. We quickly made it to the cliffs where I flew up into the air to talk to her but she dived into the nearby ocean, she moved her talons and created a hole in the water which she flew right into the hole. "How long do you think she can stay down there?" I asked as the rest of the girls showed up.


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An hour passed as I floated up for air as My air bubble had collapsed due to the physical and mental exhaustion of bending that long. This reincarnation is not that physically suited for this extremes.

"Are you ready to surrender now?" A voice said. I turned around it was the lavender Alicorn.
"Yes." I was to tired to fight back and I could try to escape later anyway.

"Great." She said as she lifted me with her magic. "Now let’s go meet Celestia."

"Twilight are you sure that we should bring her? Last time she saw the princess she tried to kill her." The white unicorn asked.

"Well, Celestia wants to see her." Twilight said as I realized that she wants to execute me personally. Again.


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It was a week before we arrived in Canterlot where I was greeted by Princess Celestia "Hello Greta." She said as I wondered how she learned my name.

"Lets just get to the point." I said as I looked to the ground getting ready for the end and the start of a new life.

"I was expecting to have a conversation with you, but I can see your in no mood to talk." She said as I prepared for the end. "I'm going to have you sent to Ponyville to be reformed." I looked up at her.

"What?" I asked surprisingly angry for not being executed as I began to laugh. "You more of an idiot that I thought" I laughed as she looked confused as I slammed my talons down and launched a bolder I bent out of the ground at her, launching her out of the room through another window.

"Hey!" One of the six ponies said as I launched a fireball at the one that spoke. I went outside to see the princess in the rain. Perfect weather for bloodshed.

"Why?" She asked as I stopped caring about my life. I want to end this one way or another. I used waterbending to gather the nearby water droplets falling down onto my fist and turn them into a ice gauntlet and used It to smash her face until the ice shattered on her face. "I was trying to help you!" she pleaded as tears went through her face and blood trailed down from under her mane.

"YOU CAN"T! I"M THE DARK AVATAR! AND YOU MADE ME INTO THIS!" I screamed as I launch her into the air as two more alicorns showed up. The one that I didn't know about and the one that came to get me in Griffonstone. I launched an ice shard at one of them as Celestia launched me into a puddle with her magic.

"We were trying to help you why! You can change!" Celestia said in a sad tone as I merely chuckled.

"You can't help me. Hatred and revenge have twisted my soul into a husk of who I once was. I am the spirit of evil now, opposite of light." I said as I moved my tallon to create a spike of ice and stabbed it into my chest, breaking my ribcage and puncturing my lungs.

"NO!" She shouted before realizing I was still alive, but quickly dying and laughing with what life I had left. "Why?" She asked, holding me in her hooves.

"Because I will always be back to kill you, just like you killed me. No mercy, no chance to explain, cold blooded murder." I placed a tallon on her face. “Do yourself a favor, don’t have foals. It would be too easy for me if you did.” I warned as the light faded from my eyes and felt darkness surround me, quickly followed by a warm, tight feeling. Next thing I knew, I was screaming in a baby’s body. Now to wait and repeat.

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